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sakuzyo - AXION [OsuMania]

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ljqandylee
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-08-15 at 12:29:49 AM

Artist: sakuzyo
Title: AXION
Source: BMS
Tags: cytus c82 pocket gao expew
BPM: 160
Filesize: 10190kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ex-ray - 7Key (6.48 stars, 1903 notes)
  2. Hard - 7Key (3.44 stars, 995 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (1.98 stars, 552 notes)
  4. Pew's Insane - 7Key (4.61 stars, 1388 notes)
Download: sakuzyo - AXION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A word of congrats, a feedback of enjoyed, that's enough for me, thank you for giving.
不求荣华富贵,但求问心无愧(shenmegui

Normal & Hard collab with Gao
MX by Lolipew

All diffs complete~
BG changed size 02/24/2015
[Emiria]
太神了 【X】
Spy
屌屌屌,卡位
ExPew
i gonna be Castle's leg
pocket-Gao
最早关注却忘了占位置了 :o
richardfeder
Excavator Which is stronger in the end?
asd123iii
diao
前排圍觀神圖
ExPew
MX done.... sorry i cant make over 5.00~5.15 as you promised

http://puu.sh/cAuiM/0e539069db.osu
Kamikaze

About goddamn time I see this song on o!m hueeee. Coming for M4M o/

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

This BG is kinda meh :/ I could try to make one, but I'm not too sure about my PS skills and I don't have that much time on my hands xD

[Normal]
00:04:337 (4337|2,4525|3,4712|3) - Move all 1 to left, should be easier to read/hit
00:44:650 (44650|0,44837|0) - Move to 2nd (same finger as LN on right hand, should be easier to understand)
00:41:650 (41650|2,41837|2) - vs 00:42:025 (42025|0) - Reverse positions
00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - vs 00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - ^
00:47:650 (47650|2,47837|2,48025|4) - Move 2 to the left
01:15:400 - I find this section quite hard for Normal since newbies have massive problems with LN+notes let alone at this pace. Just an observation tho, it's technically fine

[Hard]
OD/HP 7,5~7,8 //7 is just too low :v

00:41:650 (41650|1) - Move 1/2 earlier, you should stick to mapping one sound, not avioding that sound here and mapping it on 00:41:837 - // Applies to this whole section
00:54:962 - Missing note
00:55:150 - ^ broken flow :V
00:59:837 (59837|2,59931|0) - Move those to 67 maybe? (Stair-like pattern)
01:38:650 - This is too hard for Hard diff. I barerly combo it lmao
01:51:025 (111025|2,111118|2) - If you want to jack/shield it (I'm counting both notes as one here) it'd be more accurate to do it on 6th

I see some inconsistencies here, but I judged them as justified, because it'd be dangerously close to insane if you'd fix them. And flow is already very good

[LoliPew's Insane]
00:16:712 (16712|5) - Shouldn't this start at 00:16:900 - ? Ignore if notes on 1st and 7th represent that sound
00:16:712 (16712|2,16806|3) - Ctrl+G beause it's a bit too cramped on spacebar
00:19:337 (19337|3) - Delete
00:37:525 (37525|6) - Suggesting turning this note into 1/1 LN for the whoosh
00:40:056 - Add on 6th and move 00:40:150 (40150|5) - on 5th (suggestion)
00:41:181 - Add note
00:42:681 - Add note
00:44:181 - Add note
00:44:462 - Add note
01:01:993 - Add note (I can't even tell if that's bass or kick, that's how bad I am at naming things. I THINK it's a kick tho)
01:02:181 - Add note
01:07:150 (67150|6) - Start this LN 1/4 later and add note before it just like you did with other shields (btw neat idea of having shields instead of jacks)
01:07:900 - Why'd you skip this tho? (not counting LN ends as expressing the sound, dosen't feel good imho)
01:33:150 (93150|2,93150|1,93275|2,93275|3) - I think it plays better as 12 -> 34 -> 56 //That's just my opinion
01:39:775 (99775|1) - Ghost note, or at least I can't hear anything other than fading out sound (I always check on 25%)
01:40:712 (100712|2) - ^ If it's the tiny piano sound, add on 01:40:525 - same sound here
01:43:900 - Move one of those notes by 1 column, guitar pitch change


[Ex-ray]
Holy shit I keep thinking that it's Pew's diff lmao, talk about unfortunate word usage change it to Loli-ray please
Got a testplay for that too

http://puu.sh/cLpkT/dcdfba01db.osr


HP 8,2, won't hurt and will make spam plays less possible

00:01:337 (1337|4) - Hitsound volume on 5% and those two LN's are still loud as hell at least on my end lol, Consider starting that LN at 00:01:525 - because that sound abruptly gets louder around here
00:10:900 - Add note (some wierd sound alongside piano)
00:19:900 (19900|3) - Maybe turn this into 1/2 LN?
00:20:181 - Add note
00:20:368 - ^
00:21:400 (21400|1,21493|0,21587|1) - Make those 121 instead of 212
00:28:150 - Delete one, 00:28:056 - feels much stronger and it's also a 3-chord/Conflicts with 00:28:431 -
00:31:150 - Remove one, similar reason
00:55:993 - Add on 1st (chordjack for that strong sound seems appropiate)
00:56:650 - Consider adding 1/4 LN on 1st for that strong sound (idk if that's violin or something else, anyway same sound as above)
01:09:775 - Maybe 2 LN's instead of 1 for this entire section? It'll still be a rest setion, but not not too relaxing xD Also feels nice with those sounds
01:30:775 - 01:33:400 - Try adding little SV jumps for more excitement
01:52:150 - Add one
01:52:900 - Remove one
01:53:650 - Add one
01:58:525 - Where's dat baby sound ;A; BMS GUYS WILL UNDERSTAND

I hope it'll make it to be the last Boss Map of 2014, Good luck~! o/ I tried
Topic Starter
ljqandylee

-Kamikaze- wrote:


About goddamn time I see this song on o!m hueeee. Coming for M4M o/

General outline of what my mods contain:
>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
>Harsh opinions about map if I feel like it needs more work
>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
>Funny maymay arrows
>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

Columns are: |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

This BG is kinda meh :/ I could try to make one, but I'm not too sure about my PS skills and I don't have that much time on my hands xD I don't care about BG too much, but I'm glad to change it if anyone gives me a better image, though it's just a hope XD

[Normal]
00:04:337 (4337|2,4525|3,4712|3) - Move all 1 to left, should be easier to read/hit Done
00:44:650 (44650|0,44837|0) - Move to 2nd (same finger as LN on right hand, should be easier to understand) Done
00:41:650 (41650|2,41837|2) - vs 00:42:025 (42025|0) - Reverse positions Done
00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - vs 00:40:150 (40150|4,40337|4) - ^ Done(you chose the same notes to vs XD)
00:47:650 (47650|2,47837|2,48025|4) - Move 2 to the left Done
01:15:400 - I find this section quite hard for Normal since newbies have massive problems with LN+notes let alone at this pace. Just an observation tho, it's technically fine It is intended to make it harder for a better spread, I mean the gap between Normal and Hard ;_;

[Hard]
OD/HP 7,5~7,8 //7 is just too low :v Changed to 7.5

00:41:650 (41650|1) - Move 1/2 earlier, you should stick to mapping one sound, not avioding that sound here and mapping it on 00:41:837 - // Applies to this whole section All rearranged
00:54:962 - Missing note Added
00:55:150 - ^ broken flow :V Added
00:59:837 (59837|2,59931|0) - Move those to 67 maybe? (Stair-like pattern) Done
01:38:650 - This is too hard for Hard diff. I barerly combo it lmao The music here is also complex and climax XD
01:51:025 (111025|2,111118|2) - If you want to jack/shield it (I'm counting both notes as one here) it'd be more accurate to do it on 6th Moved to 5 for balance of two fingers

I see some inconsistencies here, but I judged them as justified, because it'd be dangerously close to insane if you'd fix them. And flow is already very good

[Ex-ray]
Holy shit I keep thinking that it's Pew's diff lmao, talk about unfortunate word usage change it to Loli-ray please wwwwwww
Got a testplay for that too

http://puu.sh/cLpkT/dcdfba01db.osr


HP 8,2, won't hurt and will make spam plays less possible Done, but I wonder the influence by the difference of 0.2 >_>

00:01:337 (1337|4) - Hitsound volume on 5% and those two LN's are still loud as hell at least on my end lol, Consider starting that LN at 00:01:525 - because that sound abruptly gets louder around here Done
00:10:900 - Add note (some wierd sound alongside piano) Done
00:19:900 (19900|3) - Maybe turn this into 1/2 LN? Reasonable, but rearranged in another way
00:20:181 - Add note Didn't find any new sound here, just the former sound continues
00:20:368 - ^ ^
00:21:400 (21400|1,21493|0,21587|1) - Make those 121 instead of 212 Done
00:28:150 - Delete one, 00:28:056 - feels much stronger and it's also a 3-chord/Conflicts with 00:28:431 - Done
00:31:150 - Remove one, similar reason Done
00:55:993 - Add on 1st (chordjack for that strong sound seems appropiate) appropiate for sound, but inappropriate for playing bcz it makes worse sense ;_;
00:56:650 - Consider adding 1/4 LN on 1st for that strong sound (idk if that's violin or something else, anyway same sound as above) Added a single note
01:09:775 - Maybe 2 LN's instead of 1 for this entire section? It'll still be a rest setion, but not not too relaxing xD Also feels nice with those sounds Done
01:30:775 - 01:33:400 - Try adding little SV jumps for more excitement Done
01:52:150 - Add one Done
01:52:900 - Remove one Keep same as 01:51:400
01:53:650 - Add one Done
01:58:525 - Where's dat baby sound ;A; BMS GUYS WILL UNDERSTAND Done

I hope it'll make it to be the last Boss Map of 2014, Good luck~! o/ I tried
Great mod thanks~ after that the Boss EX diff still further increased 0.2 stars ww
Spy
中國上海找堅強

[General]
  1. 音效呢 ?
  2. 這BG其實好像有點模糊
[Normal]
00:03:212 (3212|3,3212|1) - 我想不到要2個note的點
00:04:525 (4525|5,4525|2,4712|6,4712|2,5275|1,5275|3) - 這個也是
00:05:462 (5462|2,5837|2) - 不同音高,後面那個換個排列吧
00:06:212 (6212|3,6400|3) - 這個也是,不過其實這個比較沒關係
00:09:212 (9212|3,9212|1,10900|5,10900|3,11462|4,11462|3) - 跟前面一樣的問題
00:14:837 - 漏音
00:15:400 (15400|1) - 這不是你在抓音的音
00:16:900 (16900|6,17087|6) - 音高問題
00:18:212 (18212|3,18212|1) - 沒必要2note
00:19:337 (19337|1) - 搬到00:19:712
00:19:900 (19900|0,20087|0) - 音高問題
00:21:212 (21212|6,21212|3,22525|3,22525|6) - 沒必要2個note
00:22:900 (22900|6,23087|6) - 也是音高問題
00:27:400 (27400|6,27400|0,27587|2,27775|3,27775|5) - 這裡是鼓+主音,怎麼後面就突然只剩單note了 ?
00:28:150 (28150|6,28337|4,28525|5,28712|3,28900|2) - 我看不懂是要抓主音還是抓鼓了,茫然,看後面應該是想抓鼓 ?
00:32:462 (32462|6,32650|4,32837|2,33025|0,33025|6,33212|4,33400|2) - 理解不能
00:36:400 (36400|2,36587|4,36775|6,36775|0,36962|2,37150|4) - 同上
00:55:712 (55712|6) - 這不是鼓吧 ?
00:55:900 (55900|3,56181|3,56650|5,56931|5) - 理解不能,怎麼鼓抓好好的跳到弦上了
01:15:212 (75212|2) - ?
01:19:900 (79900|6,79900|2) - 沒必要2個
01:38:650 (98650|0,98650|2,98837|3,99025|4,99212|5) - 怎麼看都覺得不搭而且在Normal也不妥
01:43:712 (103712|4) - 這不是琴
01:49:900 (109900|1,109923|2) - 不是很妥,我覺得

[Hard]
00:04:525 (4525|5,4525|2,4712|2,4712|6,4900|4,4900|5,5275|0,5275|3,5462|4,5462|1) - 跟Normal一樣的問題
00:06:212 (6212|5,6212|3,6400|4,6400|3) - 專注抓琴吧
00:09:212 (9212|3,9212|5) - 沒必要2個
00:10:337 (10337|6,10337|4,10900|5,10900|3,11275|3,11275|1,11462|2,11462|4) - 這個也是
00:11:837 (11837|2,11837|0,11837|3,12212|3,12212|6,12212|5) - 改成2個好些,琴+弦
00:13:337 和 00:13:525 跟 00:13:712 - 漏音,琴的部分
00:15:400 (15400|1,15587|1) - 音高問題,跟Normal一樣
00:16:337 (16337|5,16525|5) - ↑
00:24:681 - 00:25:056 - 00:25:243 - 00:25:337 - 00:25:618 - 00:25:806 - 可以加
00:25:525 (25525|6) - 這裡反而沒音
00:33:400 - 前面音抓滿了,這裡又變成只抓鼓點還有只抓一半,怎麼回事 ?
00:34:900 - 跟前面一樣
00:38:743 (38743|0,38743|4,38837|5,38837|1,38931|6,39025|3,39025|0,39118|4,39118|1,39212|2,39212|5,39306|6) - 怎麼想都覺得這裡的音不適合用LN
00:51:400 (51400|3,51400|0,51400|1,51681|1,51681|4,51962|0,51962|3) - 你後面抓弦的話是不是這裡就該開始抓了 ?
00:52:618 (52618|3) - 不要抓這麼細
01:01:900 - 不覺得這裡空的很不正常嗎
01:19:900 (79900|4,79900|1) - 沒必要2條
01:26:650 (86650|6,86650|2,86743|1,86743|5,86837|0,86837|4) - 為何2條,而後面卻1條 ?
01:56:931 (116931|3,117025|3) - 還是別同一軌吧

Good luck with my water mod 233 :D
Topic Starter
ljqandylee

Spy wrote:

中國上海找堅強

[General]
  1. 音效呢 ? 望天
  2. 這BG其實好像有點模糊 接着望天
[Normal]
00:03:212 (3212|3,3212|1) - 我想不到要2個note的點 Fixed
00:04:525 (4525|5,4525|2,4712|6,4712|2,5275|1,5275|3) - 這個也是 Fixed
00:05:462 (5462|2,5837|2) - 不同音高,後面那個換個排列吧 Fixed
00:06:212 (6212|3,6400|3) - 這個也是,不過其實這個比較沒關係 Fixed
00:09:212 (9212|3,9212|1,10900|5,10900|3,11462|4,11462|3) - 跟前面一樣的問題 Fixed
00:14:837 - 漏音 Fixed
00:15:400 (15400|1) - 這不是你在抓音的音 Fixed
00:16:900 (16900|6,17087|6) - 音高問題 Fixed
00:18:212 (18212|3,18212|1) - 沒必要2note Fixed
00:19:337 (19337|1) - 搬到00:19:712 Fixed
00:19:900 (19900|0,20087|0) - 音高問題 Fixed
00:21:212 (21212|6,21212|3,22525|3,22525|6) - 沒必要2個note Fixed
00:22:900 (22900|6,23087|6) - 也是音高問題 Fixed
00:27:400 (27400|6,27400|0,27587|2,27775|3,27775|5) - 這裡是鼓+主音,怎麼後面就突然只剩單note了 ?
00:28:150 (28150|6,28337|4,28525|5,28712|3,28900|2) - 我看不懂是要抓主音還是抓鼓了,茫然,看後面應該是想抓鼓 ?
00:32:462 (32462|6,32650|4,32837|2,33025|0,33025|6,33212|4,33400|2) - 理解不能
00:36:400 (36400|2,36587|4,36775|6,36775|0,36962|2,37150|4) - 同上
好这段我统一解释下,抓的是主音+snare(第一个)+kick,其中主音由于是连续的1/4全抓不合适,所以根据难度基准抽了一个1/2的节奏出来。后面有两个地方有问题修改了下。
00:55:712 (55712|6) - 這不是鼓吧 ? Fixed
00:55:900 (55900|3,56181|3,56650|5,56931|5) - 理解不能,怎麼鼓抓好好的跳到弦上了 因为弦音太明显,这里刻意转换的
01:15:212 (75212|2) - ? 主音
01:19:900 (79900|6,79900|2) - 沒必要2個 Fixed
01:38:650 (98650|0,98650|2,98837|3,99025|4,99212|5) - 怎麼看都覺得不搭而且在Normal也不妥 Fixed
01:43:712 (103712|4) - 這不是琴 移了一下位
01:49:900 (109900|1,109923|2) - 不是很妥,我覺得 嘛>_>

[Hard]
00:04:525 (4525|5,4525|2,4712|2,4712|6,4900|4,4900|5,5275|0,5275|3,5462|4,5462|1) - 跟Normal一樣的問題 Fixed
00:06:212 (6212|5,6212|3,6400|4,6400|3) - 專注抓琴吧 多抓个问题不大,而且也能和normal区分开
00:09:212 (9212|3,9212|5) - 沒必要2個 Fixed
00:10:337 (10337|6,10337|4,10900|5,10900|3,11275|3,11275|1,11462|2,11462|4) - 這個也是 Fixed
00:11:837 (11837|2,11837|0,11837|3,12212|3,12212|6,12212|5) - 改成2個好些,琴+弦 Fixed
00:13:337 和 00:13:525 跟 00:13:712 - 漏音,琴的部分 这个太轻了……
00:15:400 (15400|1,15587|1) - 音高問題,跟Normal一樣 Fixed
00:16:337 (16337|5,16525|5) - ↑ Fixed
00:24:681 - 00:25:056 - 00:25:243 - 00:25:337 - 00:25:618 - 00:25:806 - 可以加 太难了点
00:25:525 (25525|6) - 這裡反而沒音 Fixed
00:33:400 - 前面音抓滿了,這裡又變成只抓鼓點還有只抓一半,怎麼回事 ? 略事休息
00:34:900 - 跟前面一樣 跟前面一样
00:38:743 (38743|0,38743|4,38837|5,38837|1,38931|6,39025|3,39025|0,39118|4,39118|1,39212|2,39212|5,39306|6) - 怎麼想都覺得這裡的音不適合用LN Fixed
00:51:400 (51400|3,51400|0,51400|1,51681|1,51681|4,51962|0,51962|3) - 你後面抓弦的話是不是這裡就該開始抓了 ?抓未必要LN嘛
00:52:618 (52618|3) - 不要抓這麼細 Hard应该没问题
01:01:900 - 不覺得這裡空的很不正常嗎 Fixed
01:19:900 (79900|4,79900|1) - 沒必要2條 Fixed
01:26:650 (86650|6,86650|2,86743|1,86743|5,86837|0,86837|4) - 為何2條,而後面卻1條 ? Fixed
01:56:931 (116931|3,117025|3) - 還是別同一軌吧 好吧
感谢mod~~ :)
ExPew
[LoliPew's Insane]
00:16:712 (16712|5) - Shouldn't this start at 00:16:900 - ? Ignore if notes on 1st and 7th represent that sound - that LN is a piano sound with the 00:16:525 (16525|1) -

00:16:712 (16712|2,16806|3) - Ctrl+G beause it's a bit too cramped on spacebar - doesn't feel look better pattern

00:19:337 (19337|3) - Delete - removed, and rearrange some part on the next
00:37:525 (37525|6) - Suggesting turning this note into 1/1 LN for the whoosh - disagree, i prefer on this part no LNs. its very weird if only 1 LN on that chorus part

00:40:056 - Add on 6th and move 00:40:150 (40150|5) - on 5th (suggestion) - i add 1 kick per note, so if better to remain on my own
00:41:181 - Add note - added, i missed kick hitsounds
00:42:681 - Add note - i checked on BMS, no kick here sorry
00:44:181 - Add note - added, i missed kick hitsounds
00:44:462 - Add note - no
01:01:993 - Add note (I can't even tell if that's bass or kick, that's how bad I am at naming things. I THINK it's a kick tho)yeah a kick i feel i going to stay first ( i will accept this when other modder will get same point ) thanks
01:02:181 - Add note same too ^

01:07:150 (67150|6) - Start this LN 1/4 later and add note before it just like you did with other shields (btw neat idea of having shields instead of jacks) great point, i already did on you suggestion when i mapping, but i feel inconsistent if keep jacking on other side , so better on my note now and i will consider to add if someone will point same thing

01:07:900 - Why'd you skip this tho? (not counting LN ends as expressing the sound, dosen't feel good imho) ahh how come i didnt add note on this part... fixed ( added normal notes

01:33:150 (93150|2,93150|1,93275|2,93275|3) - I think it plays better as 12 -> 34 -> 56 //That's just my opinion - when playing good on 12 - 34 - 56 but spacing too weird

01:39:775 (99775|1) - Ghost note, or at least I can't hear anything other than fading out sound (I always check on 25%) refer from BMS actually is it piano keysound, i think good to remove this ( consider as ghost note )

01:40:712 (100712|2) - ^ If it's the tiny piano sound, add on 01:40:525 - same sound here - i removed
01:43:900 - Move one of those notes by 1 column, guitar pitch change - fixed

http://puu.sh/cSIn6/a0a3362280.osu fixed

thanks Kamikaze, i will keep eye on those purples
[Emiria]
from your m4m
NM
00:20:837 (20837|2) - 有点轻 不是听的很清楚
00:27:400 - 感觉这里开始只抓鼓点比较好
.
HD
感觉这键位十分难打。
00:17:650 - 这有钢琴
00:19:712 (19712|6) - 感觉是下面白线开始
00:22:150 - 这有钢琴
00:23:650 - ^
00:24:025 (24025|2) - 下面红线开始?
00:28:900 (28900|0,29650|0) - 我不是十分理解这里为什么要double
00:31:900 (31900|1) - ^
00:34:900 (34900|2) - 没听出来
00:58:525 (58525|3,58525|5,58618|6,58618|4) - 好难打啊
01:04:150 - 我感觉这里只抓钢琴就好了..= =
01:17:275 - 加一个note?
01:20:275 - ^
01:21:775 (81775|4,81775|1,81868|1) - 稍微调整下把..不好打
01:29:275 - 加一个note
01:30:212 (90212|4) - del
01:48:962 - 加一个note?
有些双阶梯我有点看不懂 xD(我太翔)
pew's MX
00:28:337 - like 00:28:056 (28056|2,28056|0) -?
00:29:181 - ^
00:32:181 - ^
00:35:181 - ^
00:38:181 - ^
wtf so god
ex
人?
00:03:212 - 加一个note?
01:21:400 - 这段都是三乱4乱 简化点把。。感觉不是特别必要
太湿了 摸不太动
richardfeder
快出来check endless tear 的mod(/me slap
0123456
Normal
00:03:025 (3025|3) - add a note

00:06:025 (6025|4) - add a note and 00:06:212 (6212|3) - move left by one column
Just focus on piano is better imo

00:09:025 (9025|4) - ^

00:12:025 (12025|1) - add a note
00:11:837 (11837|1,12212|1) - delete

00:17:837 (17837|4,18212|3) - ^

00:22:525 (22525|6) - delete

00:24:025 (24025|3) - add a note

00:27:400 - 这里开始好多offbeat...不知道是不是故意的 我觉得这里是不是就跟鼓点就好了有蛮多音不知道踩在哪里orz

00:49:900 (49900|6,49900|3,50087|4,50275|1,50462|5,50650|0,50837|2) - ^

00:52:712 (52712|2) - add a note

00:57:775 (57775|1,57775|3,58337|1,58337|0,58525|6,58525|5) - 我觉得这些完全可以写单note 然后00:57:868 - 啥的听到了就写上去会好些

01:00:775 (60775|6,60962|1,61150|6,61337|2,61525|5,61712|3) - ?

01:08:275 (68275|2) - delete no snare/clap/finish

01:21:212 (81212|4) - delete

这什么情况怎么前后差这么多换了个人做吗喂

HD
gap兼职飞跃 星数怒跨1.5 究竟谁才是罪魁祸首? 1.99星Normal不可避免!
00:03:025 (3025|2) - add

00:06:025 (6025|2) - ^

00:09:962 (9962|3) - add a note这里竖琴也是有的

00:12:025 (12025|2) - add a note

是我的错觉吗 排的好想有点难看...?

00:19:712 (19712|6) - 这个很有点混淆视听 我觉得piano的话有点怎么说呢...我第一眼看过去还以为是挪上来了1/2原本是00:19:525 (19525|6) - 的violin...

00:27:400 - 好多off beat啊eg 00:29:650 (29650|0) - 应该在蓝线上的而且漏了蛮多kick我觉得这整个是不是重新revise下?

00:33:400 (33400|2,34900|2) - ?

01:00:775 (60775|5,60775|3,61150|3,61150|6,61431|0,61431|3) - 这几个double不是很统一有的kick没写有的clap写了还有的01:01:431 (61431|3,61431|0) - 没音也谢了 我觉得统一下好
然后就是有点疑问既然要写1/4为什么不直接01:00:400 (60400|6) - 开始写

01:17:556 (77556|0) - 漏一个

01:19:056 (79056|0) - ^等等
OK 感觉又是后半段基本到1:20后明显比前面好很多

pew
dio. No mod for you

00:07:712 (7712|4) - missing a piano

00:13:712 (13712|3) - ^

00:17:181 - 1/4 didn't stop here
00:17:931 (17931|3) - actually stop lol delete

00:20:931 (20931|6) - ^

00:28:337 (28337|2) - double?

00:29:181 (29181|3) - ^

00:32:181 (32181|2) - ^

00:35:181 (35181|2) - ^

00:38:181 (38181|3) - ^

00:51:962 - ? I think there should be at least one note?

00:53:275 (53275|1) - add a note

01:07:900 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2265380?

01:14:368 (74368|1) - add a note

01:20:087 (80087|2) - add a note
actually 1/4 didn't stop from here till 01:21:775 - but I am not sure if that is the sound you are follow T.T

01:42:775 (102775|4) - ?

really really high quality

GG
00:03:400 (3400|4) - add a note

00:06:400 (6400|6) - 应该是double

00:19:900 - 是不是漏了个条子

00:21:400 - ^

01:09:400 (69400|3) - add a note

01:20:462 (80462|4) - 我觉得这里条子写完自然些

01:27:212 (87212|0) - 这个好像有点多余 感觉

01:37:900 (97900|6,98275|0) - 一根?

说实话完全磨不动这已经超出能力范围了T.T
Good luck~
ExPew

victorica_db wrote:

pew's MX
00:28:337 - like 00:28:056 (28056|2,28056|0) -?
00:29:181 - ^
00:32:181 - ^
00:35:181 - ^
00:38:181 - ^
wtf so god

All Fixed for Kick hitsounds
so god detect missing hitsounds


richardfeder wrote:

dio. No mod for you

00:07:712 (7712|4) - missing a piano - fixed

00:13:712 (13712|3) - ^ ^

00:17:181 - 1/4 didn't stop here added a note, from BMS
00:17:931 (17931|3) - actually stop lol delete deleted

00:20:931 (20931|6) - ^ ^

00:28:337 (28337|2) - double? fixed on victorica mod
00:29:181 (29181|3) - ^ ^
00:32:181 (32181|2) - ^ ^
00:35:181 (35181|2) - ^ ^
00:38:181 (38181|3) - ^ ^

00:51:962 - ? I think there should be at least one note? added a note, from BMS

00:53:275 (53275|1) - add a note - nope

01:07:900 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2265380 ? - fixed and rearranged

01:14:368 (74368|1) - add a note

01:20:087 (80087|2) - add a note
actually 1/4 didn't stop from here till 01:21:775 - but I am not sure if that is the sound you are follow T.T - re-add more harder

01:42:775 (102775|4) - ? - light piano

really really high quality caomap quality 233
thanks

http://puu.sh/d7uiR/b37a7139e8.osu - latest EDIT 2
Topic Starter
ljqandylee
11days not checked yet ;w; ok let's go~

victorica_db wrote:

from your m4m
NM
00:20:837 (20837|2) - 有点轻 不是听的很清楚 还行吧,去掉的话感觉空开时间太长了
00:27:400 - 感觉这里开始只抓鼓点比较好 鼓点好多处前置1/4,作为最简单难度感觉不太合适,现在这样比较折衷了
HD
感觉这键位十分难打。 是有点,这曲子音律比较偏向于楼梯
00:17:650 - 这有钢琴 这个不是钢琴音吧,没跟
00:19:712 (19712|6) - 感觉是下面白线开始 你书得对
00:22:150 - 这有钢琴 同上上
00:23:650 - ^ ^
00:24:025 (24025|2) - 下面红线开始? 改了
00:28:900 (28900|0,29650|0) - 我不是十分理解这里为什么要double
00:31:900 (31900|1) - ^
00:34:900 (34900|2) - 没听出来
这段乱键整个重排了
00:58:525 (58525|3,58525|5,58618|6,58618|4) - 好难打啊 改了
01:04:150 - 我感觉这里只抓钢琴就好了..= = 钢琴就这样的啊;w;
01:17:275 - 加一个note? 算了
01:20:275 - ^ ^
01:21:775 (81775|4,81775|1,81868|1) - 稍微调整下把..不好打有连点在怎么调整都不会很顺手的,这个没办法
01:29:275 - 加一个note 还是算了
01:30:212 (90212|4) - del 有音啊
01:48:962 - 加一个note? 不明白
有些双阶梯我有点看不懂 xD(我太翔) 都是音相对比较重的地方XD
ex
人? 人;w;
00:03:212 - 加一个note? 想来想去还是觉得不合适
01:21:400 - 这段都是三乱4乱 简化点把。。感觉不是特别必要 小鼓点+主音+重鼓点+ci音……好吧稍微去掉了两个
太湿了 摸不太动 摸的我都湿了;w;

richardfeder wrote:

快出来check endless tear 的mod(/me slap 完成了;w;
0123456
Normal
00:03:025 (3025|3) - add a note

00:06:025 (6025|4) - add a note and 00:06:212 (6212|3) - move left by one column
Just focus on piano is better imo

00:09:025 (9025|4) - ^

00:12:025 (12025|1) - add a note
00:11:837 (11837|1,12212|1) - delete

00:17:837 (17837|4,18212|3) - ^

00:22:525 (22525|6) - delete

00:24:025 (24025|3) - add a note

00:27:400 - 这里开始好多offbeat...不知道是不是故意的 我觉得这里是不是就跟鼓点就好了有蛮多音不知道踩在哪里orz

00:49:900 (49900|6,49900|3,50087|4,50275|1,50462|5,50650|0,50837|2) - ^

00:52:712 (52712|2) - add a note

00:57:775 (57775|1,57775|3,58337|1,58337|0,58525|6,58525|5) - 我觉得这些完全可以写单note 然后00:57:868 - 啥的听到了就写上去会好些

01:00:775 (60775|6,60962|1,61150|6,61337|2,61525|5,61712|3) - ?

01:08:275 (68275|2) - delete no snare/clap/finish

01:21:212 (81212|4) - delete

这什么情况怎么前后差这么多换了个人做吗喂

嗯,综合大家的意见,对normal做了次大手术,果然还是不能这么人性;w;

HD
gap兼职飞跃 星数怒跨1.5 究竟谁才是罪魁祸首? 1.99星Normal不可避免! 1.96了……
00:03:025 (3025|2) - add 不解

00:06:025 (6025|2) - ^ ^

00:09:962 (9962|3) - add a note这里竖琴也是有的 那个竖琴音实在太轻了

00:12:025 (12025|2) - add a note 没必要

是我的错觉吗 排的好想有点难看...? 呃,适当重排了下

00:19:712 (19712|6) - 这个很有点混淆视听 我觉得piano的话有点怎么说呢...我第一眼看过去还以为是挪上来了1/2原本是00:19:525 (19525|6) - 的violin... 排列问题,改了下

00:27:400 - 好多off beat啊eg 00:29:650 (29650|0) - 应该在蓝线上的而且漏了蛮多kick我觉得这整个是不是重新revise下? 嗯这段全部重置了

00:33:400 (33400|2,34900|2) - ? ^

01:00:775 (60775|5,60775|3,61150|3,61150|6,61431|0,61431|3) - 这几个double不是很统一有的kick没写有的clap写了还有的01:01:431 (61431|3,61431|0) - 没音也谢了 我觉得统一下好 ^
然后就是有点疑问既然要写1/4为什么不直接01:00:400 (60400|6) - 开始写 钢琴没开始啊,加了个1/2的鼓点

01:17:556 (77556|0) - 漏一个

01:19:056 (79056|0) - ^等等 全部已修
OK 感觉又是后半段基本到1:20后明显比前面好很多 →_→

GG
00:03:400 (3400|4) - add a note 不妥

00:06:400 (6400|6) - 应该是double 加了

00:19:900 - 是不是漏了个条子 没位子了

00:21:400 - ^ ^

01:09:400 (69400|3) - add a note 已加

01:20:462 (80462|4) - 我觉得这里条子写完自然些 已写完w

01:27:212 (87212|0) - 这个好像有点多余 感觉 音还挺明显的

01:37:900 (97900|6,98275|0) - 一根? 一根够了……

说实话完全磨不动这已经超出能力范围了T.T 帮助很大了~
Good luck~ thx~~
@pew updated~
asd123iii
這diff spread 堪憂
[Normal]
我太爛了打Normal也會miss

漸強的音應該是從00:07:525 - 開始才對 不過我建議這段還是以鋼琴為主會比較好
建議改成00:07:712 (7712|0) - 一個note然後把後面的排列改下
00:11:837 - 改成這樣? 然後上面LN從00:13:337 - 開始
00:37:525 (37525|4,37712|5) - 改成一個LN?
00:49:150 - 試試看這樣?
00:51:775 - 試試看這樣?

01:00:400 - 試試看這樣?
01:04:525 (64525|6) - 改成note
01:06:025 (66025|6) - ^
01:13:900 (73900|3) - 在01:14:931 - 結束
01:14:931 - add a note
01:15:212 (75212|2) - remove
01:15:400 - 01:21:400 - 這裡我不想吐槽了 自己再想想吧
01:39:400 - 01:27:400 - ^
01:49:923 (109923|2) - remove 這裝飾音不好看
01:50:275 (110275|2) - remove 留鋼琴音就好
01:50:837 (110837|5) - ^
01:54:400 - 試試看這樣?


[Hard]
00:40:150 (40150|4) - 這個沒音吧, 正確來說音在00:39:962 - 跟00:40:056 -
00:41:650 (41650|1) - 同上
00:43:150 (43150|1) - ^
00:44:650 (44650|0) - ^
00:46:150 (46150|4) - 有音不過不是鼓點
00:47:650 (47650|1) - ^
00:53:650 (53650|5) - ^
01:03:868 - add a note
01:05:368 - ^
01:06:868 - ^
01:20:650 (80650|4) - 有音不過不是鼓點
01:28:150 (88150|2) - ^

差不多就這樣...
Topic Starter
ljqandylee

asd123iii wrote:

這diff spread 堪憂 这问题有点纠结,静观事态发展
[Normal]
我太爛了打Normal也會miss

漸強的音應該是從00:07:525 - 開始才對 不過我建議這段還是以鋼琴為主會比較好 改了,但是只抓钢琴未免单调,而且这个渐强的音很重,不抓不太好
建議改成00:07:712 (7712|0) - 一個note然後把後面的排列改下 渐强音用单note不合适
00:11:837 - 改成這樣? 然後上面LN從00:13:337 - 開始 适当改了下,LN没改,音是从00:13:525开始的
00:37:525 (37525|4,37712|5) - 改成一個LN? 已改
00:49:150 - 試試看這樣? kiai前面那里没放LN是为了体现过渡,而且00:49:056 ~ 00:49:900 这段有点难的,正好用单note调整下
00:51:775 - 試試看這樣? 这样的话抓音没抓完整,而且从00:55:900开始不抓鼓点去抓别的音有点突兀,还是鼓点抓到底好了

01:00:400 - 試試看這樣? 还是抓音不全的感觉
01:04:525 (64525|6) - 改成note 已改
01:06:025 (66025|6) - ^ ^
01:13:900 (73900|3) - 在01:14:931 - 結束 我听下来是在01:15:025结束,只不过01:14:931开始有其他音干扰
01:14:931 - add a note 已加
01:15:212 (75212|2) - remove fixed
01:15:400 - 01:21:400 - 這裡我不想吐槽了 自己再想想吧 我明白你的意思,这里直接略去了所有在蓝线上的鼓点note,因为这段LN主音旋律比较复杂,不像前面那么简单,如果在这里也把鼓点note全写上的话作为normal太难了,Hard就都写上了,可以感受一下。顺带一提本来这段是一个鼓点note都不加的,难度是1.7星,后来因为diff spread要求不得不把星数拉高,所以就这么写了,总体而言大部分蓝线处的鼓点都有LN切换,从打击手感上还是可以接受的,个人认为。
01:39:400 - 01:27:400 - ^ ^
01:49:923 (109923|2) - remove 這裝飾音不好看 我觉得还行
01:50:275 (110275|2) - remove 留鋼琴音就好 已改
01:50:837 (110837|5) - ^ ^
01:54:400 - 試試看這樣? 抓3/4?不太明白,后面用1/2连续note感觉比一根LN带过要好


[Hard]
00:40:150 (40150|4) - 這個沒音吧, 正確來說音在00:39:962 - 跟00:40:056 - 有的,比较轻
00:41:650 (41650|1) - 同上 后面都同上
00:43:150 (43150|1) - ^
00:44:650 (44650|0) - ^
00:46:150 (46150|4) - 有音不過不是鼓點
00:47:650 (47650|1) - ^
00:53:650 (53650|5) - ^
01:03:868 - add a note fixed
01:05:368 - ^ ^
01:06:868 - ^ ^
01:20:650 (80650|4) - 有音不過不是鼓點
01:28:150 (88150|2) - ^

差不多就這樣...
感谢asd mod~~ :)
Ichigaki

Mod Requested from QQ :P



Column setup

| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


General

  1. Song Setup :
    1. Metadata : Clear
    2. Other : Uncheck 'Widescreen support' because there's no SB
  2. Music and background :
    1. Music : Just not sure with the last part of song, blank for +- 15 seconds
    2. Background : Background should have 1366x768 or 1024x768 resolution
  3. Kiai and audio preview point :
    1. Kiai : Kiai in Ex-Ray is different with the other
    2. Audio preview point : How about 01:15:025 - ?

Warning

This mod mostly contain suggestion, so feel free to reject it with the reason


Ex-Ray

  1. 00:01:337 (1337|0) - I can't hear anything what you follow here, the synth started from 00:01:525 - right?
  2. 00:27:025 - How about add LN here until 00:27:400 - to follow the synth there?
  3. 00:55:150 - Should be 2-notes, right?
  4. 01:03:118 - Missed rhythm here, maybe add it to 3
  5. 01:03:962 - 01:04:056 - 01:04:337 - Missed rhythm again
  6. 01:12:400 - How about change it into 3-notes since its loud is different with 01:10:900 -
  7. 01:17:650 - Should be 2-notes
  8. 01:27:400 - How about 4-notes because of its loud and move 01:27:493 (87493|2) - to 2?
  9. 01:27:493 (87493|2) - Should be 3-notes, because its loud different with the other near it

Pew's Insane

  1. 00:25:618 - How about add note on 3 because its sound is same with 00:25:337 -
  2. 00:26:837 - 00:27:025 - Should be added by note like the previous
  3. 00:31:900 - Should be 2-notes like the previous (00:28:900 - and 00:30:400 - )
  4. 01:15:775 - 01:17:275 - 01:18:775 - 01:27:775 - 01:29:275 - Should be 3-notes like previous
  5. 01:19:056 - Add a note to 2
  6. 01:19:150 - Add a note
  7. 01:26:650 - Add a note to 5
  8. 01:29:650 - Add a note to 3
  9. 01:35:837 - Add a note for soft drum
  10. 01:57:118 - 01:57:212 - Should be added by a note

Hard

  1. 00:25:993 (25993|4) - How about move this to 7 because it have different sound with 00:26:087 (26087|2,26181|4,26275|2,26368|4,26462|2) - ?
  2. 00:29:837 - Add a note, missed pattern
  3. 01:27:775 - Add a note

Normal

  1. 00:07:900 (7900|1) - Better if changed to normal note.
  2. 00:25:150 (25150|4) - Should be started from 00:25:337 -
  3. 00:25:900 (25900|6,25900|0) - How about change one of both into LN which ended on 00:26:650 - ?
  4. 01:57:025 - Maybe add a note to 5?

Overall

Really, really cool mapset. It's so fit with the song >w<), good luck guys 8-)
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