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SCREEN mode - LOVEST(TV Size Ver.)

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Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 18 June, 2015 at 10:31:05

Artist: SCREEN mode
Title: LOVEST(TV Size Ver.)
Source: LOVE STAGE!!
Tags: opening yaoi BL Boys Love
BPM: 180
Filesize: 8108kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 87 notes)
  2. Hard (3.07 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Insane (4.19 stars, 319 notes)
  4. Normal (2.09 stars, 163 notes)
Download: SCREEN mode - LOVEST(TV Size Ver.)
Download: SCREEN mode - LOVEST(TV Size Ver.) (no video)
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fangirling time

special thanks to all modders, love you all >w</
Last edited by Yasora , edited 23 times in total.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
wwwww
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
Hi, R3 ticket used here >_>

First one to mod this? o.o
[> General <]
  1. - Check AiMod for the preview time confliction.
[> Easy <]
  1. 00:02:919 (3) - Flow is good, but a little more curving here for a better one.
  2. 00:16:253 (2,3,1) - Make a Triangle formation here, it'd fit the rhythm.
  3. 00:21:753 (4) - Remove this unused Inherit point.
  4. 00:23:586 (3,3) - Almost an overlap, or on purpose? if not, make blanket on circle (2)
  5. 00:38:253 (1,2,3) - How about a double-blanket here? also curve more on slider (1)
  6. 00:40:919 (1,1) - Stack?
  7. 00:43:586 (1,4) - Almost an overlap, you just broke a symmetry here.
  8. 00:48:919 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond formation here?
  9. 00:58:253 (3,4,1) - Oh my... The FlowBreaker, Make a triangle here, or move slider (1) downgrid to keep it running.
  10. 01:18:253 (1,1) - Stack?
  11. - Nice diff anyway, no suggestions~
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:00:919 (1) - Nazi, just rotate this slider clockwise by +5 for better pattern.
  2. 00:03:586 (4) - ^, -5
  3. 00:10:086 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing between circle (5), or is it just me?
  4. 00:13:252 (4,1,2,3) - You would've made a square or diamond here.
  5. 00:22:252 (1) - Unsharp slider? It's between the curved ones.
  6. 00:30:252 (1,2,3) - FlowBreaker here, Try moving the circle (2) on the slider tail's position? That'll make a triangle form.
  7. 00:33:586 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make this pattern a Polygon or a Hexagon formation, it might look nicer.
  8. 00:46:253 (1) - Curve a bit like the next slider, for a better Cycle form.
  9. 00:52:253 (2,3) - Make a blanket here?
  10. 00:58:919 (5,1) - ^, it looks like a flatted blanket here.
  11. 01:08:919 (4,5) - Curve or Uncurve one of these sliders for better flow.
  12. - Same here.
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:01:252 (2) - Curve like the previous slider?
  2. 00:03:586 (1) - ^, for symmetry flowing.
  3. 00:05:752 (4) - What does this repeating slider follow? i don't hear any 1/4 beat on the song track. Or you're making it on your own way?
  4. 00:20:919 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack as square or something??
  5. 00:25:919 (3,1) - Blanket here?
  6. 00:26:252 (1,2,3) - Same reason as the previous diff, fix spacing. Or it's still me?
  7. 00:29:919 (4) - Same as 00:01:252 (2) -
  8. 00:30:252 (1,2,3) - Fix distance and make a blanket.
  9. 00:44:086 (1) - Remove NC, Still on the same track. Even if you're following the vocals, it's will the song track as well.
  10. 00:49:419 (1) - ^
  11. 01:05:586 (3) - Curve like the next one?
  12. 01:07:086 (1) - Same as 00:05:752 (4) -, also, remove NC? Same reason
  13. 01:18:169 (2) - Remove this circle, you never did a triplet like this one on other part or song tracks.
  14. - Pretty much challenging when i played this, i like the little jumps you made. #BestDiff2014 :3

If i mod your Insane, you would get mad when i break something you need (/_<) sorry~
Great song anyway, gggggg Yasora \8D/
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, R3 ticket used here >_>

First one to mod this? o.o
[> General <]
  1. - Check AiMod for the preview time confliction.
[> Easy <]
  1. 00:02:919 (3) - Flow is good, but a little more curving here for a better one.
  2. 00:16:253 (2,3,1) - Make a Triangle formation here, it'd fit the rhythm. wanna keep it since imo the flow is more nice if like that
  3. 00:21:753 (4) - Remove this unused Inherit point. I changed volume in here ;w;
  4. 00:23:586 (3,3) - Almost an overlap, or on purpose? if not, make blanket on circle (2)
  5. 00:38:253 (1,2,3) - How about a double-blanket here? also curve more on slider (1) just improving curve on slider (1)
  6. 00:40:919 (1,1) - Stack?
  7. 00:43:586 (1,4) - Almost an overlap, you just broke a symmetry here.
  8. 00:48:919 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond formation here? nope
  9. 00:58:253 (3,4,1) - Oh my... The FlowBreaker, Make a triangle here, or move slider (1) downgrid to keep it running. lowering (1) o.o
  10. 01:18:253 (1,1) - Stack? nah
  11. - Nice diff anyway, no suggestions~
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:00:919 (1) - Nazi, just rotate this slider clockwise by +5 for better pattern.
  2. 00:03:586 (4) - ^, -5
  3. 00:10:086 (4,5,6) - Fix the spacing between circle (5), or is it just me? already 1.0x :''
  4. 00:13:252 (4,1,2,3) - You would've made a square or diamond here.
  5. 00:22:252 (1) - Unsharp slider? It's between the curved ones. umm no change, parallel with 00:23:252 (3) -
  6. 00:30:252 (1,2,3) - FlowBreaker here, Try moving the circle (2) on the slider tail's position? That'll make a triangle form. changed (1) a bit >.<
  7. 00:33:586 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Make this pattern a Polygon or a Hexagon formation, it might look nicer.
  8. 00:46:253 (1) - Curve a bit like the next slider, for a better Cycle form.
  9. 00:52:253 (2,3) - Make a blanket here? not aim to blanket thing here
  10. 00:58:919 (5,1) - ^, it looks like a flatted blanket here. wat
  11. 01:08:919 (4,5) - Curve or Uncurve one of these sliders for better flow. imo it's fine
  12. - Same here.
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:01:252 (2) - Curve like the previous slider? nah wanna keep it like-mirroring with (3)
  2. 00:03:586 (1) - ^, for symmetry flowing. no
  3. 00:05:752 (4) - What does this repeating slider follow? i don't hear any 1/4 beat on the song track. Or you're making it on your own way? it's drum sake in song omg
  4. 00:20:919 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack as square or something?? nope
  5. 00:25:919 (3,1) - Blanket here? no
  6. 00:26:252 (1,2,3) - Same reason as the previous diff, fix spacing. Or it's still me? um yeah (1) is too far i guess
  7. 00:29:919 (4) - Same as 00:01:252 (2) -
  8. 00:30:252 (1,2,3) - Fix distance and make a blanket. jump on purpose
  9. 00:44:086 (1) - Remove NC, Still on the same track. Even if you're following the vocals, it's will the song track as well.
  10. 00:49:419 (1) - ^
  11. 01:05:586 (3) - Curve like the next one? nah
  12. 01:07:086 (1) - Same as 00:05:752 (4) -, also, remove NC? Same reason drum sound and to notice that repeat slider is much
  13. 01:18:169 (2) - Remove this circle, you never did a triplet like this one on other part or song tracks. for drum again
  14. - Pretty much challenging when i played this, i like the little jumps you made. #BestDiff2014 :3 *flying*

If i mod your Insane, you would get mad when i break something you need (/_<) sorry~ waattt
Great song anyway, gggggg Yasora \8D/
thanks a lot :3!
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
A quick irc mod from beatmap test? :roll:

SPOILER
23:19 Yasora: btw tes map aku juga boleh ga? >3<
23:20 Miya: sok o.o
23:20 Miya: kasih miya linknya
23:21 Yasora: tapi gapapa ya mapnya bl x9
23:21 *Yasora is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/481419 SCREEN mode - LOVEST]
23:21 Miya: ga pake video ya :3
23:21 Yasora: iya gapapa lol
23:22 Yasora: padahal videonya unyu 8(
23:22 Miya: wih jumpnya
23:23 Yasora: wih
23:23 Miya: kejauhan lol yang itu
23:23 Miya: 3x?
23:23 Yasora: muter muter nih map 8(
23:23 Yasora: apaan 3x
23:24 Miya: jaraknya lol
23:24 Miya: ga bisa, harus pake no fail lol
23:24 Yasora: lololo
23:26 Miya: hmm, ada beberap jump yang ga enak kt miya
23:26 Yasora: huehue
23:28 Yasora: 0.0
23:28 Miya: hardnya bagus, tapi ada beberapa bagian yang flownya kurang mantap xD
23:30 Miya: udah bagus normalnya, no comment xD
23:30 Yasora: awas easynya aneh 8(
23:32 Miya: easynya ada rhythm yg kurang mantep
23:32 Yasora: di tengah2 ya 8(
23:32 Yasora: yang ada circle -> slider panjang
23:32 Miya: 00:04:919 (3) - kurangi 1/2 panjang slidernya
23:33 Miya: terus kasih clap di belakangnya
23:33 Miya: 00:17:586 (2) - ini juga sama kurangi 1/2 panjang slidernya
23:34 Yasora: yang (3) keknya enak di white tick deh e_e sama pengen biar keliatan panjangnya sama kek (1)
23:35 Miya: ga ah, ga sync sama clap di depannya
23:35 Miya: enakanya dikurangi 1/2
23:35 Miya: soal pattern mah pikirin lagi donk lol
23:35 Yasora: mau gitu aja dulu deh e_e ntar dipikir lagi
23:36 Yasora: yang (2) itu kurangi 1/1 lebih enak >.<?
23:36 Miya: maksudnya tengahnya sentuh disini 00:18:086
23:37 Yasora: ya itu .3.
23:37 Miya: iya maksud miya itu xD
23:37 Miya: repeatnya biar disitu
23:38 Yasora: okee
23:38 Miya: sisanya uda bagus sih
23:38 Miya: kalo mau nazi sih kayaknya ada, tapi males ah xD
23:39 Yasora: lol okie
23:39 Yasora: makasih yah >w<
23:39 Miya: buat hard ar -1 kayaknya lebih enak deh
23:40 Miya: terus gap sama normalnya biar dikurangi
23:40 Miya: 00:20:919 (1,2,3,4) - ini ga enak bgt serius
23:40 Miya: mending dikasih repeat slider aja
23:41 Miya: daripada circle stack flownya stopnya ga enak
23:42 Yasora: ho huuh enak ar-1
23:42 Yasora: hngg oke
23:42 Yasora: ada yang protes juga sih disitu lol
23:42 Miya: lol
23:44 Miya: 00:43:586 (1,2,3,4) - kalo disini jump
23:44 Miya: 00:44:586 (1,2,3) - kenapa disininya g jump?
23:44 Miya: 00:49:919 (1,2,3) - ini juga sama
23:45 Miya: 01:06:252 (1,2,3,4) - daripada normal space lebih mantep dikasih jump disini
23:45 Yasora: bukannya sama ya spacingnya @@
23:45 Miya: yang mana yang sama? o.o
23:46 Yasora: 00:43:586 (1,2,3,4) -
23:46 Yasora: 00:48:919 (1,2,3,4) -
23:46 Yasora: @@
23:46 Miya: maksundya disini ngejump 00:43:586 (1,2,3,4) -
23:46 Miya: tapi disini melodinya sama, kq g ngejump 00:44:586 (1,2,3) -
23:46 Miya: spacenya 1.2
23:46 Miya: tapi yang sebelumnya 1.5
23:47 Miya: segitu aja sih buat yang hard
23:48 Yasora: biarlah lol yang penting masih enak
23:48 Miya: terserah sih saran aja
23:49 Miya: di insane
23:49 Miya: 00:11:586 (3,4) - killer jump bgt, terlalu ngagetin jumpnya
23:49 Yasora: oke
23:50 Yasora: disitu pernah jumpnya kecil tapi flownya jadi ga enak..
23:50 Miya: bikin pattern baru xD
23:50 Miya: 00:31:586 (1,2) - ini nc buat apa lol
23:51 Miya: aneh bgt nc disitu, hapus aja lol
23:51 Yasora: abis 1/1 tapi spacing kecil 8(
23:51 Yasora: bisi bingungen yg maen wkwwk
23:52 Miya: ini loh maksudnya miya 00:43:586 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) -
23:52 Miya: disini konsisten jumpnya,
23:52 Miya: tapi di hard ga konsisten xD
23:52 Miya: 00:48:919 (1,2,3) - flow killer bgt
23:52 Miya: dari jump ga jump jump lagi
23:53 Yasora: lol oke aku juga suka miss disitu >3<
23:54 Miya: 01:12:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ini stream ga masuk sama lagunya deh, terlalu overmap
23:54 Miya: 01:13:086 (5,6,7) - dari sini ga usah stream
23:54 Miya: sisanya stream boleh
23:54 Miya: 01:14:419 (5,6,7) - sama disini jg
23:55 Yasora: lah justru kedengeran drumnya disitu e_e
23:55 Miya: ga ah, drumnya ga 1/4 disitu xD
23:55 Miya: 01:16:419 (1,2,3) - disini juga flownya ga enak, dari ngejump ujug2 spacenya g jump
23:56 Yasora: iya gitu e_e ntar deh dipikirin lagi lol
23:56 Yasora: yang 1,2,3 diubah keknya
23:57 Miya: iya, ga enak bgt, boleh deh pikirin lagi patternnya
23:57 Miya: saran miya sih yang 123 jadiin jump lagi aja
23:57 Miya: kayaknya segitu aja sih xD
23:59 Miya: boleh pasang forum? lol
23:59 Yasora: boleh dums

Good luck Yasora :)
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thank you :3!
will update soon
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
Good luck
14:06 Yasora: ne shion, can you test my map please? :3
14:06 S h i o n: yes!
14:07 Yasora: yay
14:07 *Yasora is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/480269 SCREEN mode - LOVEST]
14:07 S h i o n: tag: yaoi bl
14:07 S h i o n: lol
14:07 Yasora: do you dislike it? ;w;
14:08 Yasora: sorry orz
14:08 S h i o n: i do like :3
14:08 Yasora: but the song is good >w<
14:08 S h i o n: i like the vocal
14:08 Yasora: oh lol
14:09 S h i o n: go
14:09 Yasora: \:D/
14:11 Yasora: pro omg
14:11 S h i o n: my pc lags..
14:11 Yasora: ;w;
14:12 Yasora: how?
14:13 S h i o n: good
14:13 Yasora: yay >w<
14:13 S h i o n: 8 points
14:13 S h i o n: 9 points is very good map to me
14:13 S h i o n: is this anime ?
14:13 S h i o n: or game
14:14 Yasora: thank you :3
14:14 Yasora: anime :D
14:14 Yasora: cute anime >w<
14:15 S h i o n: i'll go watch, haha
14:15 Yasora: yeah you must watch it x9
14:19 S h i o n: 00:31:419 (4,5,1,2,1) - not good flow
14:19 S h i o n: insane
14:19 S h i o n: diff
14:19 S h i o n: i don't know what to do to make it better..
14:19 Yasora: wee ok will change it >.<
14:19 S h i o n: maybe just stack 00:31:919 (2) - (1)
14:20 Yasora: done 0.0
14:21 Yasora: better I remove nc or not?
14:22 S h i o n: i don't know... i'm bad at NC things...
14:23 Yasora: hue okay
14:24 S h i o n: some sliders are ugly to me... maybe just be
14:24 S h i o n: maybe just me
14:24 S h i o n: 00:40:919 (1) -
14:24 S h i o n: 00:44:752 (2) -
14:25 Yasora: ok, consider to change it..
14:25 S h i o n: 01:17:753 (3,4,5) - and this plays not good ..
14:26 Yasora: change to repeat?
14:27 S h i o n: still sounds weird
14:27 S h i o n: because vocal slows down here
14:28 S h i o n: maybe use 1/1 slider or 3/4slider+note pattern
14:30 Yasora: http://puu.sh/b2REW/83484371de.jpg ?
14:31 S h i o n: yes
14:32 S h i o n: normal diff
14:32 S h i o n: 00:38:919 (2,3,4,5) -
14:32 S h i o n: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1952884
14:32 S h i o n: looks better
14:32 S h i o n: NC
14:33 S h i o n: 00:03:586 (4) - NC
14:35 S h i o n: 00:59:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:35 S h i o n: http://puu.sh/b2RTh/ec6dbe76b4.jpg
14:36 S h i o n: consider change the rhythm here, follow musci better
14:36 S h i o n: if you agree, do the same here 01:10:253 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:37 Yasora: 00:38:919 seems I'm more like mine lol
14:37 Yasora: o-o
14:37 S h i o n: that's fine
14:39 S h i o n: 00:43:586 (1) - let it end on 00:43:836, just advice
14:40 S h i o n: 00:52:753 (x) - why nothing here, may confuses player
14:42 S h i o n: 01:06:252 (1,2,3,4) - maybe use some jumps to get better flow, it's a bit boring now considering the music
14:42 S h i o n: 01:09:252 (2,3,4) - this is strange imo
14:43 S h i o n: you have a good job on 00:56:919 (1,2,3,4,1) -
14:43 S h i o n: same rhythm
14:44 Yasora: 52:753 - wanna keep 1/1 in there >.<
14:46 S h i o n: 01:17:419 (x) - a stop is needed here due to vocal, maybe like this http://puu.sh/b2Spj/b5f6b071a0.jpg
14:47 Yasora: wait is this still normal diff? @@
14:49 S h i o n: ..ahh sorry
14:49 S h i o n: hard diff
14:49 S h i o n: from the time 14:39
14:50 Yasora: okay lol
14:50 Yasora: wait, still fix normal diff >.<
14:50 S h i o n: sorry T.T
14:53 Yasora: it's fine lol
14:53 Yasora: in normal: 00:59 I fix it
14:54 S h i o n: ok
14:54 S h i o n: these are all suggestions, and feel free to ignore them
14:54 Yasora: 00:43 I don't really like to end slider in blue tick orz
14:54 S h i o n: yes~
14:55 Yasora: 00:52:753 wanna give pause >w<
14:59 Yasora: 01:06:252 (1) - make spacing a bit bigger
14:59 Yasora: 01:09:253 (2) - changed
15:04 Yasora: 01:17:419 - done
15:05 Yasora: thank you >w< you can post for kudos if you want..
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora
thanks a lot >w<!!
-Tochi
Elite Storyboarder
1,444 posts
Joined November 2013
-Tochi
Insane Mod:

00:31:586 (1) - Press Q.
00:38:252 (1) - Press Q.
00:38:586 (2) - Press Q.
01:06:586 (3) - Move it to the start of this 01:06:752 (1) - slider. I prefer that.

End Comment:

Nice Map! Please continue your mapping syle!
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Otaku-kun123 wrote:

Insane Mod:

00:31:586 (1) - Press Q. sure
00:38:252 (1) - Press Q. no, it will break combo consistency
00:38:586 (2) - Press Q. ^
01:06:586 (3) - Move it to the start of this 01:06:752 (1) - slider. I prefer that. I want make triangle in here :''

End Comment:

Nice Map! Please continue your mapping syle!
thank you!
aigoh
398 posts
Joined February 2014
aigoh
from mod queue~
[Normal]
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - timing is hard for normal difficulty. It would also follow the song if you changed the end point for slider (1) to 01:15:919

[Hard]
00:50:086 (2) - rotate 10 degree anticlockwise
01:00:753 (1) - move up to around 412, 280

[Insane]
I liked this map. I also learned from this map :D
00:03:253 (5) - move down to somewhere like 448, 276
00:04:919 (1) - Ctrl + G
00:13:086 (1,2,3) - move to right a bit. makes jump easier.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
yo yasora o/

[General]
  1. boys love to tags? www
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:753 - I can hear a triplet sound here, why not just follow it? It's able to put something before the first red line (if you're caring that). You can put two notes that overlaps with 00:00:919 (1) -
  2. 00:02:252 (1,2,3) - This will be looked more like a curve I think.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:27:919 (2) - This doesn't really flow I think, at least it's not really flow between (2,3). Perhaps you can do something like this, it's plays like a circle you know, which is much more flow.
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:086 (1,2,3) - Ahh, you know that. Same reason as ^^.
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/b4Kdx/b8b6078dce.jpg
  5. 00:51:919 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have to say this is really hard to beat correctly (if you play std hard, you'll know that). It might be flow, but it's hard to click all the notes in the correct way. I'd suggest you to not use it anymore :<
[Hard]
  1. 00:54:752 (1,2) - Move these two notes to x:64, y:260 to make the distance between 00:54:419 (2,1) - and 00:54:919 (2,1) - the same.
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:419 (3,4) - I can't hear anything at 00:05:586 -, so it could be weird to put a sliderend there. Try the rhythm in the following example picture? This follows the vocal more.
  2. 00:14:586 (2,3,4) - Since the music here goes much more intense, I'll suggest you to just follow the vocal here.
  3. 00:33:253 - I don't see any reason for adding a finish here, you add claps here at the other difficulty. Remove finish hitsound and add clap here instead.
  4. 01:00:419 (3) - Remove that clap sound please, that sounds weird since there's no clap sound in the music here. (Also to 01:11:086 (3) - )
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:919 (3,1) - Really tiny spacing issue. Even it's really near 1.10x, it's still a bit obvious to find the difference from the other objects.
Good luck!
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

mangocurry wrote:

from mod queue~
[Normal]
01:15:586 (1,2,3) - timing is hard for normal difficulty. It would also follow the song if you changed the end point for slider (1) to 01:15:919

[Hard]
00:50:086 (2) - rotate 10 degree anticlockwise too straight..
01:00:753 (1) - move up to around 412, 280 moved but with another way

[Insane]
I liked this map. I also learned from this map :D /w\
00:03:253 (5) - move down to somewhere like 448, 276 moved a bit
00:04:919 (1) - Ctrl + G nah
00:13:086 (1,2,3) - move to right a bit. makes jump easier.

Flask wrote:

yo yasora o/

[General]
  1. boys love to tags? www
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:753 - I can hear a triplet sound here, why not just follow it? It's able to put something before the first red line (if you're caring that). You can put two notes that overlaps with 00:00:919 (1) - not fans adding note before red line.. so no change
  2. 00:02:252 (1,2,3) - This will be looked more like a curve I think.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:27:919 (2) - This doesn't really flow I think, at least it's not really flow between (2,3). Perhaps you can do something like this, it's plays like a circle you know, which is much more flow. umm ok but different a bit :3
    SPOILER
  4. 00:32:086 (1,2,3) - Ahh, you know that. Same reason as ^^.
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/b4Kdx/b8b6078dce.jpg
  5. 00:51:919 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I have to say this is really hard to beat correctly (if you play std hard, you'll know that). It might be flow, but it's hard to click all the notes in the correct way. I'd suggest you to not use it anymore :< make spacing same then..
[Hard]
  1. 00:54:752 (1,2) - Move these two notes to x:64, y:260 to make the distance between 00:54:419 (2,1) - and 00:54:919 (2,1) - the same.
[Normal]
  1. 00:05:419 (3,4) - I can't hear anything at 00:05:586 -, so it could be weird to put a sliderend there. Try the rhythm in the following example picture? This follows the vocal more.
  2. 00:14:586 (2,3,4) - Since the music here goes much more intense, I'll suggest you to just follow the vocal here.
  3. 00:33:253 - I don't see any reason for adding a finish here, you add claps here at the other difficulty. Remove finish hitsound and add clap here instead. I added it in hard diff too also in here 00:27:586 (1) - 00:38:253 (1) - since I heard it similar 8( forgot to add clap lol
  4. 01:00:419 (3) - Remove that clap sound please, that sounds weird since there's no clap sound in the music here. (Also to 01:11:086 (3) - )
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:919 (3,1) - Really tiny spacing issue. Even it's really near 1.10x, it's still a bit obvious to find the difference from the other objects.
Good luck!
thanks a lot both of you :3!
-[Hikari]-
84 posts
Joined February 2014
-[Hikari]-
Hello. Here's the, well, the kudosu star instead of mod from Paper Modding Team.
Really a great beatmap.
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
597 posts
Joined March 2013
TtmnZk
from from Paper Modding Team.
shoot star！ ⌒☆
[Insane]

00:01:086 (2,3) - think move to 3(228,200) 2(264,236)and silder(216,152) better

00:49:836 - ^(88,288)

01:05:752 (4) -^ (416,232)

good map and good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

-[Hikari]- wrote:

Hello. Here's the, well, the kudosu star instead of mod from Paper Modding Team.
Really a great beatmap.
thanks for star!

TT Mouse wrote:

from from Paper Modding Team.
shoot star！ ⌒☆
[Insane]

00:01:086 (2,3) - think move to 3(228,200) 2(264,236)and silder(216,152) better not really see the different but ok

00:49:836 - ^(88,288) no note in there o.o

01:05:752 (4) -^ (416,232)

good map and good luck
thanks a lot!
Skyhmer
372 posts
Joined November 2013
Skyhmer
Insane
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00:44:086 (1,2) - Move closer together. Feels way too far in comparison to 00:43:586 (1,2) and 00:44:586 (1,2

00:41:586 (3) - Moving this above 00:41:919 (5) so that it lines up and in between 00:41:419 (2,4) would look very neat.

00:33:586 (3) - giving this note a few taps to the left would make it flow better in my opinion

00:26:086 (1,2,3) - would look a lot better to the right

00:52:752 (7,1) - Make it the same spacing as the last 7 notes
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:44:752 (2) - ctrl+g for those anti-jumps patterns before
  2. 00:45:586 (3) - ^
  3. 00:47:586 (1,2) - ctrl+g one by one to follow vocal's emotion
  4. 01:06:419 (2,3,1) - ctrl+g for better jumping pattern
  5. generally very well mapped map, a star for this

Hard

  1. 00:20:586 (3,4) - perfect this blanket (nazi
  2. 01:01:419 (3) - ctrl+g this for emphasis that vocal and drum beat with anti-flow here
  3. wow, this hard diff's really hard

Normal

  1. 00:07:586 (4,5) - perfect this blanket (nazi
  2. fine

Easy

  1. 00:22:253 (1,2) - perfect this blanket (nazi) and so on lolol
b... bl... orz

good luck
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Yasora

Gleipnirx11 wrote:

Insane
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00:44:086 (1,2) - Move closer together. Feels way too far in comparison to 00:43:586 (1,2) and 00:44:586 (1,2

00:41:586 (3) - Moving this above 00:41:919 (5) so that it lines up and in between 00:41:419 (2,4) would look very neat. ye I know but I wanna keep this since in my eyes it's more interesting :3

00:33:586 (3) - giving this note a few taps to the left would make it flow better in my opinion *I try to make it like curve with (4) and (5)

00:26:086 (1,2,3) - would look a lot better to the right really..

00:52:752 (7,1) - Make it the same spacing as the last 7 notes

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:44:752 (2) - ctrl+g for those anti-jumps patterns before but imo more better if that direct to down 8(
  2. 00:45:586 (3) - ^ since (2) direction to right, it's better to right too
  3. 00:47:586 (1,2) - ctrl+g one by one to follow vocal's emotion
  4. 01:06:419 (2,3,1) - ctrl+g for better jumping pattern wanna keep this I guess..
  5. generally very well mapped map, a star for this

Hard

  1. 00:20:586 (3,4) - perfect this blanket (nazi
  2. 01:01:419 (3) - ctrl+g this for emphasis that vocal and drum beat with anti-flow here feels weird when gameplay orz
  3. wow, this hard diff's really hard

Normal

  1. 00:07:586 (4,5) - perfect this blanket (nazi
  2. fine

Easy

  1. 00:22:253 (1,2) - perfect this blanket (nazi) and so on lolol
b... bl... orz XD

good luck
thank you so much both of you :)
ShiraKai
534 posts
Joined September 2010
ShiraKai
hi :3 from queue!

[General]
none!

[Easy]
nice map :)

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:253 (5) - remove whistle and add sampleset normal? As with other diffs
  2. 00:08:919 (1,2,3) - hmm... I think preferable to a unified here(00:06:252 (1,2,3) - ) i have sense of incongruity to play :(
    my suggestion:
  3. 00:16:252 (1) - this NC is not necessary imo :?
  4. 00:56:253 (2) - add whistle on slider end?
[Hard]
SV1.7 is really? 0.8>1.2>1.7>1.8... Balance is a little bad imo :(
I propose SV1.5 and AR+1
  1. 00:01:252 (2) - use same shape as 00:00:919 (1) - ? Appearance will be better.
  2. 00:16:419 (3) - add whistle on slider head? follow the piano sound 8-)
[Insane]
  1. 00:44:752 (2) - ctrl + G? flow will be better :D
  2. 00:56:919 (1,3) - blanket?
  3. 01:16:586 (2) - move to x:151,y:143? easy to AIM prefer this
good luck!
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