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wakaG - Yozora ni Saita Hana

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Awaken
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Topic Starter
Awaken
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月7日 at 23:53:00

Artist: wakaG
Title: Yozora ni Saita Hana
Tags: Hatsune Miku Kawaiwkyik flower night vocaloid 天響ノ和樂2
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5234kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beginner (1.48 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Extra (5.51 stars, 443 notes)
  3. Hyper (3.67 stars, 298 notes)
  4. Standard (2.02 stars, 156 notes)
  5. wkyik's Another (4.64 stars, 361 notes)
Download: wakaG - Yozora ni Saita Hana
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#4 For Ranked
「夜空に咲いた花」

Beginner - 100%
Standard - 100%
Hyper - 100%
Another - 100% by my wife Kawaiwkyik
Extra - 100%

Ranked!
SPOILER
Four diffs by me and spend 10 hours to finish the whloe map lol

Changed MP3 by Autumn
Last edited by Awaken , edited 143 times in total.
pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
这是什么流


233

Awaken wrote:

BPM: -300
BPM=-300 蜡烛
discussed 00:25:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jumps in irc
sodarose
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Joined July 2011
sodarose
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[Another]
感觉offset晚了一点;w; 不知我有没有听错
00:02:958 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉这里的音效声音有点大

渣摸见谅orz
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Awaken

sodarose wrote:

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[Another]
感觉offset晚了一点;w; 不知我有没有听错 队 改了
00:02:958 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉这里的音效声音有点大 好 下完音效看看

渣摸见谅orz
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
IRC Discussion
17:54 Awaken: Hi Asph ~ so are you free to testplay for now? owo
17:54 Asphyxia: sure
17:54 *Awaken is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/479518 NyakuG - Yozora Niza Itake]
17:54 Awaken: >w<
17:58 Asphyxia: hmm
17:58 Asphyxia: I didn't like it
17:59 Awaken: D:
17:59 Awaken: sad ;w;
17:59 Asphyxia: It seemed like you cared only about big spacing and not the fitness
18:00 Asphyxia: I think you should think more about what would fit the song better instead of going way too harsh with jumps
18:01 Asphyxia: 00:13:594 (1) - Your spacing was questionable here but it was playable
18:01 Asphyxia: which was fine
18:01 Asphyxia: 00:22:927 (1) - Then you have this 5.0x jump which doesn't make any sense imho
18:02 Asphyxia: there isn't such a strong beat to support it, which makes it play bad
18:02 Asphyxia: and just because it's that huge, it's a definitely no
18:02 Asphyxia: like I would've get the idea if it was near 3,5 but 5? hell no
18:03 Awaken: ur right
18:03 Asphyxia: 00:24:261 (1) - After this part the spacing started to get really weird, you seemed to increase it but the song is way more calm than it was 00:13:594 (1) - here
18:03 Awaken: I'll make them closer
18:03 Asphyxia: so it makes 0 sense
18:04 Awaken: ok I increase the distance between 00:12:927 (1,1) -
18:04 Asphyxia: 00:37:761 (2,3) - Jumps like these are also a bit questionable, I know that you want a hard map but please consider what spacing would actually fit better
18:04 Asphyxia: instead of putting these kind of jumps
18:04 Asphyxia: that are near 3x
18:05 Awaken: I play this comfortably..let me think
18:05 Asphyxia: 01:06:927 (1) - The spacing gets better here but it's still questionable
18:05 Asphyxia: also, the gap between [Another] and [Hyper] was too big from what I played
18:05 Asphyxia: I wouldn't accept that difficulty gap between those two
18:06 Asphyxia: Better yet, I would rename this to Extra / Extreme (whatever you want to call it) and then map a difficulty between them that fills the gap between this and Hyper
18:06 Awaken: 0,0 another insane may be necessary
18:06 Asphyxia: that way you can keep your spacing without me complaining like a maniac
18:07 Awaken: okay I'll try
18:07 Asphyxia: you might want to ask for a GD unless you want to map it yourself, of course
18:08 Asphyxia: also I think the BG is really unfitting, it doesn't have anything to do with the actual song, it doesn't look like it's related or anything
18:08 Asphyxia: I'd search something related to calm background, maybe something that has sakuras on it
18:08 Asphyxia: I feel like that would fit the actual song a lot better
18:09 Awaken: really? thanks very much :D!
18:09 Asphyxia: I can help with the BG a bit later if you want to
18:09 Asphyxia: also, for Hyper
18:09 Awaken: tbh I am really not good at searching BG x.x
18:09 Asphyxia: 00:09:261 (4,5) - Spacing such as these
18:09 Asphyxia: 7np
18:09 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/479476 NyakuG - Yozora Niza Itake [Hyper]]
18:09 Asphyxia: Isn't really what I would call appropriate
18:09 Asphyxia: 00:16:927 (3,4) - same here
18:10 Asphyxia: and so on.... I think you need to be a bit more careful next time (or now, what the heck) with your spacing usage, maybe listen to the song more and see what spacing would fit better than going for the 3x jumps
18:11 Asphyxia: I might be wrong here, but I think that's what players enjoy too
18:11 Awaken: maybe spacing changes sometimes are interesting I think...o.o
18:12 Asphyxia: also there was few (or more, can't remember) patterns in Hyper that were a bit awkward to play
18:12 Asphyxia: mostly because of the high distance snap, though
18:13 Asphyxia: but if you really think your BG fits, keep it, it's only my opinion
18:13 Awaken: yeah maybe..I'll think more
18:13 Awaken: no I hope you can help me find a new BG ><
18:14 Asphyxia: I think some BG's would fit
18:14 Asphyxia: you can decide from what I found quickly
18:14 Asphyxia: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1497002
18:14 Asphyxia: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1221452
18:14 Asphyxia: http://wallbase.cc/wallpaper/1265995
18:15 Asphyxia: if you like one of those, great! it'd be better if you would find a BG yourself that you would like because that has effect too

We discussed about the spacing of Another and Hyper along with the gap between them and agreed (I hope) that there needs to be a difficulty between them OR nerf Another's spacing. Either way works for me. We also talked about the BG, I tried to help the mapper to find a better one but I think Awaken can find a lot better one in no time! There was few awkwardly playing patterns in Hyper but I think that was mostly due to the overly high spacing it had.
pandorawindy
312 posts
Joined December 2013
pandorawindy
m4m : link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201666

Hi..


  • [beginner]
  1. 00:08:261 (1,2) - 这两个没包好..1 的尾部可以移动到504 348 就完美了。
  2. 00:30:261 (3,1) - ^ 1的尾部 ---> 164 152
  3. 00:52:261 (1) - ^ 中间的红点 ---> 120 196
  4. 00:53:594 (4) - 中间点 ---> 116 360
  5. 01:09:594 (1,2) - 额 ..大眼一看就没包好O_o
  6. 01:30:927 (1) - 右上方的红点 ---> 260 136
    [standard]
  7. 00:10:261 (2) - 红点 ---> 432 304
  8. 01:07:927 (3,4) - 我建议这两个调换一下位置。一是长白线落在slider头上，二是，比较合曲。
  9. 01:18:927 (4,5,6) - 01:21:594 (3,4) - 这两个 我觉得在一样的节奏下最好下相同的note但不同的摆位。这样比较好..01:34:927 (3,4) - 01:36:927 (3,4) - 这两组就比较好。
  10. 01:30:927 (5) - 重音都在尾部啊。。我的审美观不同？还有一些滑条是尾部重音，我觉得用头或者circle表现重音比较合适。
    [hyper]
  11. 00:10:594 (6) - 这里..hmm..去掉滑条，00:10:927 - 00:11:594 - 两个地方加circle怎么样
  12. 01:10:761 - 在kiai中空一个音 不太好吧。。而且只有这里空了。。
    [another]
  13. 00:22:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 额..这里跳的是不是有点太远了..能近一点估计rank了之后我能少replay几次 O_o
  14. 额..最难diff打不动也摸不动了..good luck! :)
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
騰訊新聞。

[General]

1.Tag 加flower 和 night?

2.不加多的音效組?

3.有些開頭5%再配合sliderslide似乎接近兩者靜音了，有點不太行。(建議5%調到20%最小接受度)

[Beginner] 對音效有點敏感。

00:14:261 (2,3) - 挑個Blanket
00:24:261 (1) - 忘了finish? (下面3個diff也加一下)
00:30:927 (1) - 這段輕聲的音效或許能從我那張新圖的hitnormal copy一下? (聽起來有點類似)
00:45:594 (1) - 也是finish (下面3個diff也加一下)
00:48:261 (1) - ^
00:50:927 (1) - ^
00:53:594 (3) - ^
00:56:261 (1) - ^
01:06:927 (1) - ^
01:17:594 (1) - ^
01:27:927 (4) - ^ (尾端)
01:30:927 (1) - ^
01:41:594 (1) - ^

怎麼感覺後面還能做?

[Standard]

Fine.

[Hyper]

00:03:594 (2) - Ctrl+g?
00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來這個跳似乎是一致的距離 ? 而不是23放遠。

[Another]

00:10:927 (1) - 後面的vocal不加幾個note然後anti-jump?
00:33:594 (4) - NC?
01:04:761 (2,3,4) - 這邊應該是大跳吧?
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Awaken
阿船

smallboat wrote:

騰訊新聞。

[General]

1.Tag 加flower 和 night? 好

2.不加多的音效組? 你这么一说我突然想起来没加音效 hhh

3.有些開頭5%再配合sliderslide似乎接近兩者靜音了，有點不太行。(建議5%調到20%最小接受度) 好

[Beginner] 對音效有點敏感。

00:14:261 (2,3) - 挑個Blanket fixed
00:24:261 (1) - 忘了finish? (下面3個diff也加一下)
00:30:927 (1) - 這段輕聲的音效或許能從我那張新圖的hitnormal copy一下? (聽起來有點類似)
00:45:594 (1) - 也是finish (下面3個diff也加一下)
00:48:261 (1) - ^
00:50:927 (1) - ^
00:53:594 (3) - ^
00:56:261 (1) - ^
01:06:927 (1) - ^
01:17:594 (1) - ^
01:27:927 (4) - ^ (尾端)
01:30:927 (1) - ^
01:41:594 (1) - ^
都加了
怎麼感覺後面還能做? 嘉文给我cut结果剩这么多 要被挑到死hhh

[Standard]

Fine.

[Hyper]

00:03:594 (2) - Ctrl+g? 差不多
00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - 聽起來這個跳似乎是一致的距離 ? 而不是23放遠。 好

[Another]

00:10:927 (1) - 後面的vocal不加幾個note然後anti-jump? 营造气氛为后面铺垫hh
00:33:594 (4) - NC? 好
01:04:761 (2,3,4) - 這邊應該是大跳吧? 不妥 这里放大跳也是可以 不过由于我老是打不到1/1的远距离..
thx for mod
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ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
hi
  • General
  1. vocaloid的歌感觉diff名用easy normal hard insane就好啊
  2. 你就做了百分之七十几我建议剪一下mp3
  3. 音效音量太大了 60%左右感觉就可
  4. 好多重音在滑条尾上感觉不太好

    Beginner
  5. 00:14:927 (3) - 前半段弧度大一点把上个note包好点
  6. 00:28:261 (1,2) - 交换nc 你前后都是8拍一组combo
  7. 00:55:594 (2,2) - 两个滑条尾都是比较重的vocal感觉不太好 我觉得可以改改这里的节奏
  8. 01:02:261 (1) - 可以提前开始?
  9. 01:27:927 (1) - nc?

    Standard
  10. 00:10:927 - 后面加个break?
  11. 00:25:594 (3,4) - 合并成一个滑条就可以吧 感觉没必要跟那么细反而不自然
  12. 01:30:927 (5) - nc

    Hyper
  13. 00:23:261 (3,4) - ctrl+g然后移近一点?打起来感觉不太舒服
  14. 00:52:094 (1) - 去掉nc 前面类似的地方也没有nc啊
  15. 01:30:261 (5,1) - 屏幕偏下方又这么远我觉得在hard难度里不合适 移近一点吧
  16. 01:36:261 - 这里音在滑条尾上感觉非常不好 建议把滑条拆开

    Another
  17. 00:12:261 (1) - 去掉nc
  18. 00:06:927 (1) - 为什么不和前后一样放在五边形上呢
  19. 00:22:761 (4,1) - 跳太大 我觉得应该移近一点
  20. 00:25:594 (7,1) - 交换nc
  21. 00:31:094 - 这里有vocal的啊 为什么要空呢
  22. 00:42:261 (4) - 我觉得应该让4和3的间距和2跟3的间距一样
  23. 01:05:094 (3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这些note适合大一点的间距
  24. 01:32:594 - 既然这里有音就没必要去把这里空着搞二连了吧 感觉这算overmap了
后面琴音你不跟的话放个转盘意思意思也好啊
美丽
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Awaken
阿波

ZZHBOY wrote:

hi
  • General
  1. vocaloid的歌感觉diff名用easy normal hard insane就好啊 不妥 我还是比较喜欢这个难度分配
  2. 你就做了百分之七十几我建议剪一下mp3 你说的队 好像嘉文跟我说啥意思没明白
  3. 音效音量太大了 60%左右感觉就可 我改改
  4. 好多重音在滑条尾上感觉不太好 感觉还好啊

    Beginner
  5. 00:14:927 (3) - 前半段弧度大一点把上个note包好点 好
  6. 00:28:261 (1,2) - 交换nc 你前后都是8拍一组combo 好
  7. 00:55:594 (2,2) - 两个滑条尾都是比较重的vocal感觉不太好 我觉得可以改改这里的节奏 要改就标不了E啦
  8. 01:02:261 (1) - 可以提前开始? 要善良
  9. 01:27:927 (1) - nc? 好

    Standard
  10. 00:10:927 - 后面加个break? 好
  11. 00:25:594 (3,4) - 合并成一个滑条就可以吧 感觉没必要跟那么细反而不自然 好 我后面加
  12. 01:30:927 (5) - nc 好

    Hyper
  13. 00:23:261 (3,4) - ctrl+g然后移近一点?打起来感觉不太舒服 好
  14. 00:52:094 (1) - 去掉nc 前面类似的地方也没有nc啊 好
  15. 01:30:261 (5,1) - 屏幕偏下方又这么远我觉得在hard难度里不合适 移近一点吧 好
  16. 01:36:261 - 这里音在滑条尾上感觉非常不好 建议把滑条拆开 还好 打起来还不错

    Another
  17. 00:12:261 (1) - 去掉nc 好
  18. 00:06:927 (1) - 为什么不和前后一样放在五边形上呢 为啥一定要放五边形 不是很boring
  19. 00:22:761 (4,1) - 跳太大 我觉得应该移近一点 好
  20. 00:25:594 (7,1) - 交换nc 好
  21. 00:31:094 - 这里有vocal的啊 为什么要空呢 追求美妙的感觉
  22. 00:42:261 (4) - 我觉得应该让4和3的间距和2跟3的间距一样 这里是为了摆梗hh
  23. 01:05:094 (3,4,5,6) - 我觉得这些note适合大一点的间距 不妥
  24. 01:32:594 - 既然这里有音就没必要去把这里空着搞二连了吧 感觉这算overmap了 我听到的是二连..
后面琴音你不跟的话放个转盘意思意思也好啊 爷爷 那得放多长的转盘 手都得转断
美丽
thx for mod
Bungaku Shounen
114 posts
Joined May 2013
Bungaku Shounen
ZZH说的都是错的

[General]
  1. Tags加上VOCALOID
  2. Another难度的artist和title没有填写原文 和其它三个难度不同
[Beginner]
  1. 默认的soft-hitnormal不合曲 建议换
  2. 没有适当的除finish以外的其它音效导致打击感不足 至少可以在kiai24whistle一下
  3. 00:08:261 (1) - 00:14:927 (3) - 01:20:261 (1) - 01:25:594 (1) - 包的地方再弯一点
  4. 00:30:927 (3) - 包的不好 连收尾靠近3的距离都不一样
  5. 00:36:261 (4) - 第一个红点前的部分再拉长一点或第二个红点后的部分拉短一点
  6. 00:57:594 (3) - 滑条首加上finish吧
  7. 01:01:594 (4) - finish
  8. 01:09:594 (1) - 是不是包着下一个？如果是的话再包好一点
  9. 01:10:927 (3) - 01:14:927 (1) - 红点前后的部分不平行
  10. 01:40:261 (2) - 建议直接拉成^倒过来的形状
  11. 01:43:594 (2) - 尾部加个whistle
[Standard]
  1. 基本都是和Beginner中相同的问题 包的不细致和三段式滑条不平行或者收尾长短不一 再check一遍吧 同时在Beginner中提到的音效建议在这个难度中也适用
[Hyper]
  1. 开头这段soft-hitnormal太吵
  2. 完丽 Beginner中有的finish这个难度中都美丽
  3. 00:08:261 (1,2,3,4) - 弯一点
  4. 00:15:594 (3,4) - 包好
  5. 00:26:094 (3) - 弯
  6. 00:32:761 (2) - 01:21:594 (1) - 红点前后长度不一
  7. 00:47:594 (6) - 如果包4的话再弄好一点
  8. 00:50:927 (1) - 还是不平行
  9. 00:53:594 (1) - 包好
  10. 01:07:927 (4,5,6) - 毕竟百恶俗
  11. 01:17:594 (1) - 包
  12. 01:37:594 (1) - ^
[Another]
  1. 啊 摸到这个时候osu出问题了
  2. 所以美丽
Star for luck
[ Oneiroi ]
18 posts
Joined June 2013
[ Oneiroi ]
Mod from request
mod苦手 摸的不好还请原谅><
因为有点懒 就摸高难度好了><
[wkyik's Another]
  1. kiai似乎没有whistle的样子 考虑加一些？
  2. 00:18:927 (1) - 这个我觉得好像拉近一些比较好 现在这个距离很容易接不到头..还有一点是第二个点放的好像可有可无的样子..看起来像个直滑条0.0
  3. 00:50:594 (5) - 我感觉这个完全可以拉成3/4 现在的间距也似乎比较适合3/4
  4. 00:54:761 (4) - 这个似乎可以finish
  5. 01:04:761 (1,3) - 没叠好:D 3应该左移一个grid
  6. 00:26:927 (1,2,3,4) - 因为前面已经持续了很长的1/2slider流 所以这里是不是可以稍微把一些slider变成单点?0.0
[Extra]
  1. 00:24:927 (3,4,5,6) - 这个好像有点难接
  2. 00:29:927 (3) - 不whistle?
  3. 00:30:927 (1) - ^
  4. 00:42:094 (3,4) - 这两个的whistle交换一下比较好
  5. 01:23:427 (3,4) - 要死啦
  6. 01:30:927 (1) - 感觉不如一个spinner ><
  7. 01:37:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这边经常断 建议改一下梗><
Good Luck ~ :)
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
mod for QQ群


官网抽的厉害……
看前后的mod柑橘压力好大Orz
长话短说了

[EXtra]
前半段从00:24:261 - 开始到00:34:844 - 的hitsound感觉太突出了
00:06:927 (1) - 既然前面扭了一下不妨后面也扭一下？不过节奏上并没有扭的理由 前后保持一致便好
00:06:927 (1) 和00:18:927 (1) 对00:18:594 (7) 的blanket有一点点偏差
00:28:761 (3) 对00:28:594 (2) - ↑
00:44:094 (6) 对00:45:094 (4) - ↑
00:50:594 (7) 对00:49:927 (3) - ↑
01:25:261 (4) - CTRL+G
01:41:594 (1) 对01:41:261 (6) 的blanket有一点点偏差

[wkyik's Another]
00:10:927 - 其实我觉得这里可以放个spin
美丽

[Hyper]
和EX一样 开始到00:13:511 的hitsound 还有从00:24:094 (1) 开始到00:24:094
00:15:594 (3) 对00:16:094 (4) - 的blanket 00:16:094 (4) - 移动到X328 Y384
00:32:261 (1) - 对00:31:927 (5) 的blanket偏差
01:07:594 (3) - CTRL+G再转个角度 flow可能会舒服一点
01:28:261 (3) - 减速的话不来个NC么？相对的01:28:094 (1) - 取消NC
01:38:594 (4) 对01:38:094 (2) 的blanket偏差
01:41:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个slider摆成一上一下的flow会舒服一些也更好看
01:42:927 (1) - 建议在01:43:261 折返


以上都是瞎摸
加油~
Last edited by KaedekaShizuru , edited 1 time in total.
Mafumafu
Beatmap Nominator
3,367 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
Hi! :) Awaken!
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The 0003 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)

General and Song Setup

1. The unicode artist name is different in Hyper.
2. Uncheck widescreen support if you wont add a storyboard.
3. Add your GDer into tags

Beginner

Overall: Nice layout, friendly for newbie players. Solid work indeed.
Rhythm:
1. 01:02:261 (1) - Start at 01:01:677 ?
2. 01:31:594 (1) - ^
Flow and Layout:
Nice.
Hitsounds:
Hitsounds seem not finished.
Other issues:
1. 00:04:594 Remove greenline
2. 00:07:261 ^
3. 00:12:927 ^

Standard

Overall: Nice again, good rhythm and interestingto play.
Rhythm:
Well-done
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:17:594 (3,4) - For a better flow: http://puu.sh/aVGy4/b96d5109e6.jpg
2. 00:21:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - Adjust this so that 00:22:927 (5) - can be in he same position of the end of 00:20:927 (4) -
3. 00:35:594 (2) - End dot of this slider is out of the field.
4. 00:42:261 (4,1) - Better if you fix this blanket.
5. 00:52:927 (3,1) - ^
6. 01:23:594 (3) - A curve slider may be better. http://puu.sh/aVGX6/0dfc36aa83.jpg Also it is flow-friendly.
7. 00:16:261 (1,2) - ^
Hitsounds:
Still unfinshed?
01:16:261 (3,4) - Recommend use 5% volumn for the sliderticks which are not at vocal. the non-vocal sliderticks sound annoying sometimes.
01:42:927 (1,2,3) - Put down the volumn just a little, since the music has changed.
Other issues:
Remove greenlne same as Beginner

Hyper

Overall: Excellent work. Patterns are neat and visual-friendly.
Rhythm:
1. 00:58:094 (2) - The red-line slider seems not very appropriate? Why not place a hitcircle here and then a sider 1/2 after it? If you want to keep current one, make the DS between 1 and 2 and 2 and 3 more consisitent for better read.
2. 01:17:427 (7,1) - A triplet will bring more fun.
3. 01:35:927 (4) - Why not use two stacked 1/1 hitcircles? The instrumental is on the end of the slider, which sounds not very nice just imo.
4. 01:38:594 (4) - Why put finish on the slider end?
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:08:261 (1,2,3,4) - Dont place them in a straight line? Their pitches are different. Try some wave-shapes. http://puu.sh/aVNB7/30687840e9.jpg
2. 01:38:094 (2) - This jump is little large. Consider reducing this.
3. 00:22:094 (2) - ^
Hitsounds:
1. 00:12:261 (1,2) - The sliderticks here is a little noisy.
2. 01:29:594 (4,5) - Add clap on the start of each slider to emphasize the vocal?
Other issues:
1. 00:10:927 (6) - NC because the vocal changes?
2. 01:28:261 (3) - NC coz you changed the slider velocity

wkyik's Another

Overall: Nothing much to say, very nice diff indeed. Various patterns add to the recreational points.
Rhythm:
1. 01:17:261 (4) - Two 1/4 sliders?
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:12:927 (1,2) - Adjust the position a little to avoid slightly overlap. http://puu.sh/aVQvn/5e8e43b531.jpg
2. 00:50:927 (1) - Maybe here you need a jump to emphasize the finish.
3. 01:00:594 (2) - End at 280|264 for perfect stack.
4. 01:01:594 (1) - ^
5. 01:04:761 (1,3) - Check the stack.
6. 01:39:927 (4,1) - Seems that this breaks the oral flow.
7. 01:40:761 (2) - Not stacked well.
Hitsounds:
1. 01:29:594 (1,2,3,4) - Add Clap to emphasize the vocal, and also an extension of the whistles of previos notes.
Other issues:
None

Extra

Overall:Very nice. Couldnt find mny problems, so dont categorize them.
00:06:927 (1) - Why not continue using the same shape and position as 00:04:261 (1) -
00:58:927 (1) - Jump is so large (>5.0x)

•That's all.
•In general, this map is very impressive, especially Another and Extra. Very nice again.
•Finally, good luck on ranking! :)
Last edited by Mafumafu , edited 3 times in total.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
我不唉你
哭哭 则呢摸两个diff更新一次啊

[General]
检查hyper的title和artist
剪一下mp3吧
没cb color? 还有柑橘bg有点不合曲orz

[Beginner]
没下音效吗 至少也下24clap之类的吧
00:24:261 (1) 到 00:34:927 (1) - 这一段建议用默认的soft-hitnormal 还有开头那段也是 其他难度一样
00:42:927 (2) - ez建议note还是别压红线.. 把前面的1延长到2的位置?
00:53:594 (2) - ^
01:18:927 (3) - 这些blanket建议修一下 虽然无关紧要
01:43:594 (2) - 这里音量建议调小一点

[Standard]
没下音效吗+1 开头音量调小一点猴不猴啊
00:10:261 (2) - 头whistle?
00:22:927 (5) - 考虑拉个滑条到00:23:594?
01:30:927 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪(( 从头到尾数第四个白点拉到右边可能会好一些orz

[Hyper]
前面则呢不下点whistle
00:12:261 (1,2) - 建议尾巴消音
00:15:261 (2) - ctrl+g?
00:19:261 (2) - ^
00:19:927 (5) - ctrl+h?
00:24:261 (1) 到 00:34:927 (1) - 这一段建议白线whistle
00:43:427 (2) - 最后一下clap?
00:54:094 (2) - ^
00:48:261 (1) - 头finish
00:55:761 (6) - clap?
00:58:927 (1,1) - 头finish?
01:07:927 (4,5) - 建议拆开 后面的也是
01:33:261 (7,1) - 是不是有点难啊

[wkyik's Another]
00:18:261 (3,4) - 换成曲线可能好一些?
00:22:927 (1,2,3,4) - 间距缩小一些?
00:32:594 (2,3,4) - 试试跟vocal?
00:34:594 (5) - 缩短1/4? 00:34:761这里有一个音
00:38:427 (5,6) - ctrl+g?
01:01:094 (3,4,5) - 改成这样?
01:03:261 (3) - 往上移一些?
01:16:011 (5) - 不明意义
01:18:261 (4,5) - ctrl+g?

[Extra]
00:06:927 (1) - 既然前面的滑条扭了这个也扭一下吧(?
00:09:594 (1,2) - 修一下? 现在感觉有点怪怪的
00:28:761 (3) - 包一下2?
00:44:094 (6) - 感觉形状有点怪..
01:00:761 (4,1) - ctrl+g?
01:05:094 (3) - 有点难读 nc提示一下? 或者2nc

美丽
goodluck~ :)
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~
thx for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Airtist: wakaG
  2. Romanised Title: Yozora ni Saita Hana
  3. tags suggetion:
    天響ノ和樂2
  4. mp3: too long outro. I recommend to cut it
[Beginner]
  1. 00:51:594 (2) - u~m, out of play field? I recommend to move upward a little
  2. 01:00:261 (1) - remove NC?
  3. 01:34:261 (1) - I prefer to move to the center (x:256 y:192)
  4. 289b30ff05a391b06350f5751896ccd9.png: this picture is unnecessarry?
[Standard]
  1. 00:14:927 (1) - end at 00:15:261. 1/1 slider is better, imo
  2. 00:17:594 (3) - ^
  3. 00:20:261 (3) - ^
  4. 01:12:927 (2) - ^
  5. 01:18:927 (4) - ^
  6. 01:21:594 (3) - ^
  7. 01:34:927 (3) - ^
  8. 01:37:594 (4) - ^
  9. 00:50:594 (6) - I prefer to curved slider for good flow
    SPOILER
[Hyper]
  1. 01:06:261 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:06:594
  2. 01:11:927 (5,6) - I feel this jump is very big
  3. 01:27:927 (5,1) - ^
[Extra]
  1. check tags!!! tags conflicts with other diffs
  2. 00:41:927 (2,3,4) - conform DS
[wkyik's Another]
  1. 00:38:427 (5,6) - exchange their positions
  2. 00:55:261 (1,2) - decrease DS. a little hard, imo
~Good Luck~
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
Awaken
pandorawindy

pandorawindy wrote:


  • [beginner]
  1. 00:08:261 (1,2) - 这两个没包好..1 的尾部可以移动到504 348 就完美了。
  2. 00:30:261 (3,1) - ^ 1的尾部 ---> 164 152
  3. 00:52:261 (1) - ^ 中间的红点 ---> 120 196
  4. 00:53:594 (4) - 中间点 ---> 116 360
  5. 01:09:594 (1,2) - 额 ..大眼一看就没包好O_o
  6. 01:30:927 (1) - 右上方的红点 ---> 260 136
    唉 blanket不怎么想改啊 fix some
    [standard]
  7. 00:10:261 (2) - 红点 ---> 432 304 k
  8. 01:07:927 (3,4) - 我建议这两个调换一下位置。一是长白线落在slider头上，二是，比较合曲。 k
  9. 01:18:927 (4,5,6) - 01:21:594 (3,4) - 这两个 我觉得在一样的节奏下最好下相同的note但不同的摆位。这样比较好..01:34:927 (3,4) - 01:36:927 (3,4) - 这两组就比较好。k
  10. 01:30:927 (5) - 重音都在尾部啊。。我的审美观不同？还有一些滑条是尾部重音，我觉得用头或者circle表现重音比较合适。 又不是重音不能在尾巴
    [hyper]
  11. 00:10:594 (6) - 这里..hmm..去掉滑条，00:10:927 - 00:11:594 - 两个地方加circle怎么样 k
  12. 01:10:761 - 在kiai中空一个音 不太好吧。。而且只有这里空了。。 k
    [another]
  13. 00:22:261 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 额..这里跳的是不是有点太远了..能近一点估计rank了之后我能少replay几次 O_o k
  14. 额..最难diff打不动也摸不动了..good luck! :)
thx for mod
白猫

Bungaku Shounen wrote:

ZZH说的都是错的

[General]
  1. Tags加上VOCALOID k
  2. Another难度的artist和title没有填写原文 和其它三个难度不同 k
[Beginner]
  1. 默认的soft-hitnormal不合曲 建议换 k
  2. 没有适当的除finish以外的其它音效导致打击感不足 至少可以在kiai24whistle一下 k
  3. 00:08:261 (1) - 00:14:927 (3) - 01:20:261 (1) - 01:25:594 (1) - 包的地方再弯一点
  4. 00:30:927 (3) - 包的不好 连收尾靠近3的距离都不一样
  5. 00:36:261 (4) - 第一个红点前的部分再拉长一点或第二个红点后的部分拉短一点
  6. 00:57:594 (3) - 滑条首加上finish吧
  7. 01:01:594 (4) - finish
  8. 01:09:594 (1) - 是不是包着下一个？如果是的话再包好一点
  9. 01:10:927 (3) - 01:14:927 (1) - 红点前后的部分不平行
  10. 01:40:261 (2) - 建议直接拉成^倒过来的形状
  11. 01:43:594 (2) - 尾部加个whistle
fix some hitsound x.x 爷爷怎么都是blanket
[Standard]
  1. 基本都是和Beginner中相同的问题 包的不细致和三段式滑条不平行或者收尾长短不一 再check一遍吧 同时在Beginner中提到的音效建议在这个难度中也适用 啊 我低难度没认真做x.x
[Hyper]
  1. 开头这段soft-hitnormal太吵 k
  2. 完丽 Beginner中有的finish这个难度中都美丽 完丽
  3. 00:08:261 (1,2,3,4) - 弯一点 为啥
  4. 00:15:594 (3,4) - 包好 fixed
  5. 00:26:094 (3) - 弯
  6. 00:32:761 (2) - 01:21:594 (1) - 红点前后长度不一 这种就没什么必要改啦
  7. 00:47:594 (6) - 如果包4的话再弄好一点 fixed
  8. 00:50:927 (1) - 还是不平行
  9. 00:53:594 (1) - 包好
  10. 01:07:927 (4,5,6) - 毕竟百恶俗
  11. 01:17:594 (1) - 包
  12. 01:37:594 (1) - ^
fuel
[Another]
  1. 啊 摸到这个时候osu出问题了
  2. 所以美丽
Star for luck
thx for mod
Oneiroi

[ Oneiroi ] wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:24:927 (3,4,5,6) - 这个好像有点难接 移近了
  2. 00:29:927 (3) - 不whistle? 好
  3. 00:30:927 (1) - ^ 好
  4. 00:42:094 (3,4) - 这两个的whistle交换一下比较好 好
  5. 01:23:427 (3,4) - 要死啦 好像真的跳的很大 还好有ex做保护
  6. 01:30:927 (1) - 感觉不如一个spinner >< 好
  7. 01:37:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这边经常断 建议改一下梗><好
thx for mod~
KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[EXtra]
前半段从00:24:261 - 开始到00:34:844 - 的hitsound感觉太突出了 是吗0.0
00:06:927 (1) - 既然前面扭了一下不妨后面也扭一下？不过节奏上并没有扭的理由 前后保持一致便好 k
00:06:927 (1) 和00:18:927 (1) 对00:18:594 (7) 的blanket有一点点偏差
00:28:761 (3) 对00:28:594 (2) - ↑
00:44:094 (6) 对00:45:094 (4) - ↑
00:50:594 (7) 对00:49:927 (3) - ↑
01:25:261 (4) - CTRL+G 不好 后面的跳打不流畅
01:41:594 (1) 对01:41:261 (6) 的blanket有一点点偏差
[Hyper]
和EX一样 开始到00:13:511 的hitsound 还有从00:24:094 (1) 开始到00:24:094 好
00:15:594 (3) 对00:16:094 (4) - 的blanket 00:16:094 (4) - 移动到X328 Y384
00:32:261 (1) - 对00:31:927 (5) 的blanket偏差
01:07:594 (3) - CTRL+G再转个角度 flow可能会舒服一点 好
01:28:261 (3) - 减速的话不来个NC么？相对的01:28:094 (1) - 取消NC 三连NC有点丑
01:38:594 (4) 对01:38:094 (2) 的blanket偏差
01:41:594 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个slider摆成一上一下的flow会舒服一些也更好看 感觉现在的也差不多
01:42:927 (1) - 建议在01:43:261 折返 another way
thx for mod
Regraz

Regraz wrote:

Hi! :) Awaken!
•This is Regraz's mod. Note that I am rather new to modding/mapping, so I am sorry if this cannot provide real help.
•This color means things that I highly suggest. But all the mods are just ideas, feel free to deny these because as to mapping, we need various ideas, right?
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The 0003 map modded since using the new modding framwork. (Dont care about this number , it is just used to remind me the number of maps I've modded.)

General and Song Setup

1. The unicode artist name is different in Hyper. fixed
2. Uncheck widescreen support if you wont add a storyboard. Either is ok x.x
3. Add your GDer into tags lol added

Beginner

Overall: Nice layout, friendly for newbie players. Solid work indeed.
Rhythm:
1. 01:02:261 (1) - Start at 01:01:677 ? kind
2. 01:31:594 (1) - ^
Flow and Layout:
Nice.
Hitsounds:
Hitsounds seem not finished.
Other issues:
1. 00:04:594 Remove greenline
2. 00:07:261 ^
3. 00:12:927 ^ fixed three.

Standard

Overall: Nice again, good rhythm and interestingto play.
Rhythm:
Well-done
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:17:594 (3,4) - For a better flow: http://puu.sh/aVGy4/b96d5109e6.jpg k
2. 00:21:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - Adjust this so that 00:22:927 (5) - can be in he same position of the end of 00:20:927 (4) - k
3. 00:35:594 (2) - End dot of this slider is out of the field. ah k
4. 00:42:261 (4,1) - Better if you fix this blanket.
5. 00:52:927 (3,1) - ^
6. 01:23:594 (3) - A curve slider may be better. http://puu.sh/aVGX6/0dfc36aa83.jpg Also it is flow-friendly. k
7. 00:16:261 (1,2) - ^ k
Hitsounds:
Still unfinshed?
01:16:261 (3,4) - Recommend use 5% volumn for the sliderticks which are not at vocal. the non-vocal sliderticks sound annoying sometimes. I don't really want to make any 5% in kiai x.x
01:42:927 (1,2,3) - Put down the volumn just a little, since the music has changed. k
Other issues:
Remove greenlne same as Beginner removed

Hyper

Overall: Excellent work. Patterns are neat and visual-friendly.
Rhythm:
1. 00:58:094 (2) - The red-line slider seems not very appropriate? Why not place a hitcircle here and then a sider 1/2 after it? If you want to keep current one, make the DS between 1 and 2 and 2 and 3 more consisitent for better read. another way
2. 01:17:427 (7,1) - A triplet will bring more fun. another way
3. 01:35:927 (4) - Why not use two stacked 1/1 hitcircles? The instrumental is on the end of the slider, which sounds not very nice just imo. rhythm sounds empty if as you said
4. 01:38:594 (4) - Why put finish on the slider end? yeah why not
Flow and Layout:
1. 00:08:261 (1,2,3,4) - Dont place them in a straight line? Their pitches are different. Try some wave-shapes. http://puu.sh/aVNB7/30687840e9.jpg another way
2. 01:38:094 (2) - This jump is little large. Consider reducing this. reduced
3. 00:22:094 (2) - ^
Hitsounds:
1. 00:12:261 (1,2) - The sliderticks here is a little noisy. fixed
2. 01:29:594 (4,5) - Add clap on the start of each slider to emphasize the vocal? another way and I added on behind
Other issues:
1. 00:10:927 (6) - NC because the vocal changes? k
2. 01:28:261 (3) - NC coz you changed the slider velocity not very necessary because I've added a NC before
thx for mod~
rinsukir

rinsukir wrote:

我不唉你 爱 你为何不爱我
哭哭 则呢摸两个diff更新一次啊

[General]
检查hyper的title和artist fixed
剪一下mp3吧 我也想 不过感觉怎么剪都不合适hhh
没cb color? 还有柑橘bg有点不合曲orz 好 加了 bg也换了

[Beginner]
没下音效吗 至少也下24clap之类的吧 added
00:24:261 (1) 到 00:34:927 (1) - 这一段建议用默认的soft-hitnormal 还有开头那段也是 其他难度一样 我好像感觉差不多
00:42:927 (2) - ez建议note还是别压红线.. 把前面的1延长到2的位置? 好好好
00:53:594 (2) - ^
01:18:927 (3) - 这些blanket建议修一下 虽然无关紧要
01:43:594 (2) - 这里音量建议调小一点 30还大;w;

[Standard]
没下音效吗+1 开头音量调小一点猴不猴啊 added
00:10:261 (2) - 头whistle? 好
00:22:927 (5) - 考虑拉个滑条到00:23:594? 不好
01:30:927 (1) - 感觉有点奇怪(( 从头到尾数第四个白点拉到右边可能会好一些orz 怎么感觉比我的还丑;w;

[Hyper]
前面则呢不下点whistle
00:12:261 (1,2) - 建议尾巴消音 全消了
00:15:261 (2) - ctrl+g? 差不多
00:19:261 (2) - ^
00:19:927 (5) - ctrl+h? 不好
00:24:261 (1) 到 00:34:927 (1) - 这一段建议白线whistle 现在这样也不错
00:43:427 (2) - 最后一下clap? 好
00:54:094 (2) - ^ 好
00:48:261 (1) - 头finish 好
00:55:761 (6) - clap? 好
00:58:927 (1,1) - 头finish? 好
01:07:927 (4,5) - 建议拆开 后面的也是 前面拆了 后面有点难拆
01:33:261 (7,1) - 是不是有点难啊 不难 就五连
[Extra]
00:06:927 (1) - 既然前面的滑条扭了这个也扭一下吧(? 好
00:09:594 (1,2) - 修一下? 现在感觉有点怪怪的 这怎么修;w;
00:28:761 (3) - 包一下2? 好
00:44:094 (6) - 感觉形状有点怪.. 唔
01:00:761 (4,1) - ctrl+g? 好
01:05:094 (3) - 有点难读 nc提示一下? 或者2nc 好

美丽
goodluck~ :)
thx for mod~
RandomEffect

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thx for M4M!

[General]
  1. Romanised Airtist: wakaG
  2. Romanised Title: Yozora ni Saita Hana
  3. tags suggetion:
    天響ノ和樂2
  4. mp3: too long outro. I recommend to cut it
Fixed all and I'll think about cutting mp3!
[Beginner]
  1. 00:51:594 (2) - u~m, out of play field? I recommend to move upward a littlefixed
  2. 01:00:261 (1) - remove NC?fixed
  3. 01:34:261 (1) - I prefer to move to the center (x:256 y:192)fixed
  4. 289b30ff05a391b06350f5751896ccd9.png: this picture is unnecessarry?
[Standard]
  1. 00:14:927 (1) - end at 00:15:261. 1/1 slider is better, imo
  2. 00:17:594 (3) - ^
  3. 00:20:261 (3) - ^
  4. 01:12:927 (2) - ^
  5. 01:18:927 (4) - ^
  6. 01:21:594 (3) - ^
  7. 01:34:927 (3) - ^
  8. 01:37:594 (4) - ^ ah..I think maybe current is also ok
  9. 00:50:594 (6) - I prefer to curved slider for good flow fixed
    SPOILER
[Hyper]
  1. 01:06:261 (1) - I prefer to end at 01:06:594 fixed
  2. 01:11:927 (5,6) - I feel this jump is very big maybe not very big qwq
  3. 01:27:927 (5,1) - ^ make them closer
[Extra]
  1. check tags!!! tags conflicts with other diffs fixed
  2. 00:41:927 (2,3,4) - conform DS changed
~Good Luck~
thx for mod~
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
#all modder:
fixed all stack and hitsound
432
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 12 - Yozora Niza Itake.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 24094
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 54458
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Yozora ni Saita Hana
TitleUnicode:夜空に咲いた花
Artist:wakaG
ArtistUnicode:若G
Creator:Awaken
Version:wkyik's Another
Source:
Tags:Hatsune Miku Kawaiwkyik flower night vocaloid 天響ノ和樂2
BeatmapID:480648
BeatmapSetID:189529

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"wallpaper-394813.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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356,292,69261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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124,120,73261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,288,73427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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212,372,78094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,228,78261,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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404,280,78594,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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104,184,79761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,52,81594,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,224,81761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,152,82094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,356,85927,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,224,86094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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512,248,86594,2,0,P|444:240|408:236,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,152,86927,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,96,87094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,168,87761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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207,366,93093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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297,351,93343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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NoHitter
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NoHitter
[General]
- You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. All your diffs end at ~76%, so you need to cut it.
- You have an unused image in your song folder. Please remove.
- Why not set preview point to chorus part at around 01:06:594?

[Extra]
- 00:06:927 (1) - I was expecting another pentagon formation similar to the previous combo
- 00:10:594 (2,1) - The blanket here feels a bit forced. IMO it's better to follow the flow by doing something like: http://puu.sh/b34Md/1a406fe7ec.jpg
- 00:24:594 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. If you notice, (1) goes down, (2) will go up, (3,4) go down, then (5,6) go up.
- 00:27:261 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:28:261 (1,2,3) - The flow in this combo is odd. (2)'s positioning with respect to (1) is a bit off. May I suggest something like: http://puu.sh/b355e/af5ab3d411.jpg
- 00:31:094 () - TBH, I was expecting a note here since you can hear the vocals.
- 00:33:594 (1,2) - Same comment here about how (1) doesn't quite lead into (2). It makes the flow a bit awkward.
- 00:42:094 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make into perfect pentagon? [a bit nazi]
- 00:45:594 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing here bet. (1,2) and (3,4). Even if (3,4) is a patternmap, look at 00:46:927 (1,2).
- 00:46:261 (3,4) - Incidentally, position here isn't quite good. IMO, use the slider start as your basis for positioning the second slider: http://puu.sh/b35pI/b53b9e1150.jpg
- 00:48:594 (2) - IMO a better flow would be if you reversed this slider, along with
- 00:48:927 (3) - this one. Ctrl+G them separately.
- 01:13:594 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You have lots of pentagons like these which aren't perfectly shaped :(
- 01:17:261 (1) - Reversing this would play better IMO. The slow in one direction, then the fast slider in the other. Also, maybe reposition a bit for better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/b35I5/86bac80340.jpg
- 01:17:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again with the pentagons :(

[Another]
- 00:18:261 (3,4,1) - The spacing of (1) is similar to (3,4). It may be confusing since (1) starts only 1/4 away while (3) and (4) are 1/2 apart.
- 00:34:261 (3) - Spacing in this combo is really confusing. At the very least, move (3) closer to (2).
- 00:55:261 (1,2,3) - This part plays awkwardly. 1/4 slider jumps like that are fine, but they're usually arranged in a more open pattern, and seldom do they use a single repeat slider in them. If you really want to keep this, keep the DS similar for each and keep a similar pattern. An example is: http://puu.sh/b36Hm/ed9978fb94.jpg
- 00:57:594 (1) - Was expecting a finish here.
- 01:04:761 (1,2,3,4) - IMO add hitsound to make emphasis on the strong sounds at the each sliderhead (and the note at the end).
- 01:05:761 (4) - Also, blanket this in (3).http://puu.sh/b36Ql/c4178b457a.jpg
- 01:07:594 (3,4,5) - This pattern will flow better IMO if it went left to right, so it will contrast (2)'s direction.
- 01:11:594 (3,4) - Ctrl+G these notes for better flow IMO. Also maybe reposition them a bit? http://puu.sh/b36Zn/1b31060604.jpg
- 01:20:261 (1,2,3,4) - I was expecting more of a pattern like to complete the three sliders facing opposite directions: http://puu.sh/b374T/62f9a89839.jpg but you would have to readjust your next combo if you fix it like this :(
- 01:28:094 (8) - Ctrl+G this for better flow and play. Also consider, making this face the notes after too.http://puu.sh/b37aY/a98a55b72f.jpg

[Hyper]
- 01:00:261 (5,6,7,8) - This plays much better if you reverse the sliders alternately. http://puu.sh/b37lf/455cfbd4c0.jpg
- 01:11:094 (5) - New combo here for consistency?
- 01:19:594 (3) - Ctrl+G here for better flow?
- 01:32:927 (3,4,5,6,7) - This may be a tad difficult for a Hard.
- 01:38:094 (2,4) - Blanket (2) properly with (4)?
- 01:41:427 (7) - IMO just omit this note. The spacing is a bit awkward atm and it doesn't really follow the music.

The two other diffs check out fine.
Awaken
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Awaken

NoHitter wrote:

[General]
- You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. All your diffs end at ~76%, so you need to cut it. ok cut it already! >^<
- You have an unused image in your song folder. Please remove. fixed
- Why not set preview point to chorus part at around 01:06:594? because I think current sound more fantastic >w<

[Extra]
- 00:06:927 (1) - I was expecting another pentagon formation similar to the previous combo ok but I change a pattern
- 00:10:594 (2,1) - The blanket here feels a bit forced. IMO it's better to follow the flow by doing something like: http://puu.sh/b34Md/1a406fe7ec.jpg changed with another way~!
- 00:24:594 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. If you notice, (1) goes down, (2) will go up, (3,4) go down, then (5,6) go up. I wanna keep this >^< Because I think it's fitter than ctrl+g owo
- 00:27:261 (2) - Same as above.
- 00:28:261 (1,2,3) - The flow in this combo is odd. (2)'s positioning with respect to (1) is a bit off. May I suggest something like: http://puu.sh/b355e/af5ab3d411.jpg ah..that's right..but I also play it well..>.<
- 00:31:094 () - TBH, I was expecting a note here since you can hear the vocals. ok added~
- 00:33:594 (1,2) - Same comment here about how (1) doesn't quite lead into (2). It makes the flow a bit awkward. Yeah maybe..but because it's a new vocal start,so I think maybe cutting the flow is also a good choice >.<
- 00:42:094 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Make into perfect pentagon? [a bit nazi] fixed,should be better now
- 00:45:594 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing here bet. (1,2) and (3,4). Even if (3,4) is a patternmap, look at 00:46:927 (1,2). about this part,I've asked Charles, and he told me I'd better make a 3/4 that's easy to read to tell players these part are 3/4s
- 00:46:261 (3,4) - Incidentally, position here isn't quite good. IMO, use the slider start as your basis for positioning the second slider: http://puu.sh/b35pI/b53b9e1150.jpg changed with another way!should be better now!
- 00:48:594 (2) - IMO a better flow would be if you reversed this slider, along with maybe it would be too far?;w;
- 00:48:927 (3) - this one. Ctrl+G them separately. as above
- 01:13:594 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You have lots of pentagons like these which aren't perfectly shaped :( fixed!should be better now!>.<
- 01:17:261 (1) - Reversing this would play better IMO. The slow in one direction, then the fast slider in the other. Also, maybe reposition a bit for better aesthetics: http://puu.sh/b35I5/86bac80340.jpg umm...I put a flow jumps here, and if I do the jumps as you said,maybe a little hard to read and play ;w;
- 01:17:927 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again with the pentagons :( fixed!

[Hyper]
- 01:00:261 (5,6,7,8) - This plays much better if you reverse the sliders alternately. http://puu.sh/b37lf/455cfbd4c0.jpg fixed
- 01:11:094 (5) - New combo here for consistency? fixed!
- 01:19:594 (3) - Ctrl+G here for better flow? changed!
- 01:32:927 (3,4,5,6,7) - This may be a tad difficult for a Hard. maybe appearing only once is ok >.<
- 01:38:094 (2,4) - Blanket (2) properly with (4)? fixed!
- 01:41:427 (7) - IMO just omit this note. The spacing is a bit awkward atm and it doesn't really follow the music. deleted!

The two other diffs check out fine.
Thanks so much!>W<
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