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Suzuki Konomi - This Game (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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Abyssus-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, October 12, 2014 at 1:24:55 PM

Artist: Suzuki Konomi
Title: This Game (TV Size)
Source: ノーゲーム・ノーライフ
Tags: No Game No Life , Nijigen-kun
BPM: 147
Filesize: 2796kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 2D's EZ - 4Key (1.44 stars, 262 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2.39 stars, 535 notes)
  3. MX - 4Key (3.03 stars, 698 notes)
  4. NM - 4Key (1.79 stars, 357 notes)
Download: Suzuki Konomi - This Game (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status : In Progress
Accept GD & Mods
Dave-_old
Nge mod aah :v

Coloumn: l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

bungkusan isi saran
NM

00:00:645 sampai 00:07:176 Jangan pake LN, mending pake note aja..
buat patternya yg bagus ya >.<

00:23:094 (23094|1) - delete

00:23:298 (23298|1) - add note

00:45:543 (45543|0,45849|2,46155|1) - delete..

00:48:298 (48298|1,48298|0) - move to coloumn 2,3

00:48:604 (48604|1,48604|0) - move to coloumn 1,2

00:51:257 (51257|0,51257|3,51564|0,51564|3,51870|3,51870|0,52074|0,52074|3,52380|0,52380|3) - patternya ganti doong, disini keliatan membosankan :/

00:53:196 (53196|1) - move to coloumn 0

00:53:502 (53502|2) - move to coloumn 1, add note coloumn 3

01:23:910 (83910|2) - ganti pake note biasa

01:25:543 (85543|3) - ganti pake LN, end di 01:27:176


HD

OD --> 8

00:00:645 - add note di coloumn 3

00:02:278 - ^ coloumn 1

00:04:115 (4115|2) - delete, jangan letterbox -_-

00:04:319 (4319|1) - move to 00:04:217

00:05:747 (5747|1) - move to 00:05:849

00:05:951 (5951|0) - delete

00:32:992 (32992|1,33196|1) - delete

00:32:890 - add note coloumn 3

00:33:094 - ^ coloumn 1

01:25:543 - LN end 01:28:808



MX

OD --> 9
HP --> 9

Bener2 rumit, sampe leterboxnya gak kerasa..

00:03:298 (3298|1,3298|2,3298|3,3502|2,3502|1,3706|0,3706|2,3706|1,3910|2,3910|3,4115|0,4319|0,4319|1,4523|2,4523|3) - ini mending samain kaya yg pertama offsetnya.. tapi bedain patternnya

00:04:931 (4931|2,4931|3,5135|1,5135|0,5339|2,5339|3,5543|0,5543|1,5543|2,5747|2,5747|3,5951|0,5951|1,6155|3,6155|1,6155|2) - ^ tapi bedain pattern nya..


00:13:324 (13324|2) - delete

00:28:298 (28298|0) - delete

00:28:400 - add note 1

00:29:931 (29931|0) - delete

00:30:033 - add note 1

00:44:319 - LN nya ganti sama note biasa, patternya kayak zig-zag

00:50:747 (50747|2) - delete

LN end 01:28:808


Pake Hitsound biar bisa ranked.. paternya udh bagus >.<
tapi tak pernah luput dari leterbox :c



SEKIAN ¬¬¬¬¬¬
Topic Starter
Abyssus-

Dave- wrote:

Nge mod aah :v

Coloumn: l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

bungkusan isi saran
NM

00:00:645 sampai 00:07:176 Jangan pake LN, mending pake note aja..
buat patternya yg bagus ya >.<

00:23:094 (23094|1) - delete

00:23:298 (23298|1) - add note

00:45:543 (45543|0,45849|2,46155|1) - delete..

00:48:298 (48298|1,48298|0) - move to coloumn 2,3

00:48:604 (48604|1,48604|0) - move to coloumn 1,2

00:51:257 (51257|0,51257|3,51564|0,51564|3,51870|3,51870|0,52074|0,52074|3,52380|0,52380|3) - patternya ganti doong, disini keliatan membosankan :/

00:53:196 (53196|1) - move to coloumn 0

00:53:502 (53502|2) - move to coloumn 1, add note coloumn 3

01:23:910 (83910|2) - ganti pake note biasa

01:25:543 (85543|3) - ganti pake LN, end di 01:27:176


HD

OD --> 8

00:00:645 - add note di coloumn 3

00:02:278 - ^ coloumn 1

00:04:115 (4115|2) - delete, jangan letterbox -_-

00:04:319 (4319|1) - move to 00:04:217

00:05:747 (5747|1) - move to 00:05:849

00:05:951 (5951|0) - delete

00:32:992 (32992|1,33196|1) - delete

00:32:890 - add note coloumn 3

00:33:094 - ^ coloumn 1

01:25:543 - LN end 01:28:808



MX

OD --> 9
HP --> 9

Bener2 rumit, sampe leterboxnya gak kerasa..

00:03:298 (3298|1,3298|2,3298|3,3502|2,3502|1,3706|0,3706|2,3706|1,3910|2,3910|3,4115|0,4319|0,4319|1,4523|2,4523|3) - ini mending samain kaya yg pertama offsetnya.. tapi bedain patternnya

00:04:931 (4931|2,4931|3,5135|1,5135|0,5339|2,5339|3,5543|0,5543|1,5543|2,5747|2,5747|3,5951|0,5951|1,6155|3,6155|1,6155|2) - ^ tapi bedain pattern nya..


00:13:324 (13324|2) - delete

00:28:298 (28298|0) - delete

00:28:400 - add note 1

00:29:931 (29931|0) - delete

00:30:033 - add note 1

00:44:319 - LN nya ganti sama note biasa, patternya kayak zig-zag

00:50:747 (50747|2) - delete

LN end 01:28:808


Pake Hitsound biar bisa ranked.. paternya udh bagus >.<
tapi tak pernah luput dari leterbox :c



SEKIAN ¬¬¬¬¬¬
Thanks , updated
Aii-
hi~ aby ^^ Mod request~~~

[Dave-'s EZ]
00:07:176 - add note strong sound

00:08:808 - add note

00:10:441 - add note

00:12:074 - add note

00:12:380 - add note

00:12:686 - add note

00:13:094 - add note col 4

00:13:298 - ^

00:25:135 (25135|1) - delete ? change like next part < just sugesttion

[NM]
00:23:094 - add note col 1

00:23:502 - delete 1 note

00:30:033 (30033|1) - move col 4

00:48:808 (48808|1) - move col 4

00:53:910 - add note

00:54:115 - add note

[HD]
00:10:849 (10849|3) - move col 2

00:11:257 (11257|0) - move col 3

00:20:237 - add note col 4

01:04:829 (64829|2,64931|1,65033|0) - no sound ?

01:05:645 (65645|1,65747|2,65849|1) - ^

[MX]
xxx

Nice chart ^_^ sorry i can't mod MX diff cz now i'm sick (At Hospitalalalala) good luck~
Topic Starter
Abyssus-

Aii- wrote:

hi~ aby ^^ Mod request~~~

[Dave-'s EZ]
00:07:176 - add note strong sound

00:08:808 - add note

00:10:441 - add note

00:12:074 - add note

00:12:380 - add note

00:12:686 - add note

00:13:094 - add note col 4

00:13:298 - ^

00:25:135 (25135|1) - delete ? change like next part < just sugesttion

[NM]
00:23:094 - add note col 1

00:23:502 - delete 1 note

00:30:033 (30033|1) - move col 4

00:48:808 (48808|1) - move col 4

00:53:910 - add note

00:54:115 - add note

[HD]
00:10:849 (10849|3) - move col 2

00:11:257 (11257|0) - move col 3

00:20:237 - add note col 4

01:04:829 (64829|2,64931|1,65033|0) - no sound ?

01:05:645 (65645|1,65747|2,65849|1) - ^

[MX]
xxx

Nice chart ^_^ sorry i can't mod MX diff cz now i'm sick (At Hospitalalalala) good luck~
Thanks , gonna update it soon
puxtu
ok lif ini mod gw

[general]
check aimod, preview time masih conflict
and taruh nama-nya dave- di tag
sisanya aman.

column: /1/2/3/4/

[Dave-'s EZ]
mungkin ini perlu di ganti jadi 2D's EZ lol
OD+1
00:03:298 (3298|0,3502|1,3706|2,3910|3,3910|0) - copas detected, ctrl+h
00:25:135 - add note?
00:31:666 (31666|2) - hapus ln ini. ganti sama note biasa, ikutin beatnya
00:39:625 - missing note

[NM]
OD+1 HP+1
00:00:645 - ~ 00:07:176 - knp lo malah ngelayer background piano nya? :/
00:25:135 - add note col 4
00:26:359 - ^col 1
01:00:849 - missing note
01:04:319 - ^col 4
01:22:686 - ~ 01:23:910 - sengaja dikosongin?

[HD]
00:08:808 - add note col 1
00:17:176 - missing note
00:23:502 - ^ col 1
00:31:972 - ^ col 2
00:46:972 (46972|2) - remove
00:48:298 (48298|2,48298|3) - ctrl+h
01:22:618 (82618|3,82686|2,82788|1,83026|0,83128|1,83230|2,83434|2,83638|0,83706|1,83774|2,83842|3) - nice layering, but.. 01:23:910 (83910|2) - ini pindah ke 2 trus add note di col 1
01:25:135 - add note

[MX]
kurangin LN nya orz
00:24:931 (24931|2,24931|3,24931|1) - 3 notes for what? hapus salah 1
ps: imo, pemakaian 3 note hanya untuk suara yg bner bner keras, contoh: drum + cymbal, cymbal + vocal dll
kalo cuma drum atau cymbal doang, cukup make 2 note, gitar atau vocal make 1 note. tergantung suara beatnya
overall patternnya udh bagus, cuma butuh remapping dikit lg, ok?
good luck ;)
Topic Starter
Abyssus-

puxtu wrote:

ok lif ini mod gw

[general]
check aimod, preview time masih conflict
and taruh nama-nya dave- di tag
sisanya aman.

column: /1/2/3/4/

[Dave-'s EZ]
mungkin ini perlu di ganti jadi 2D's EZ lol
OD+1
00:03:298 (3298|0,3502|1,3706|2,3910|3,3910|0) - copas detected, ctrl+h
00:25:135 - add note?
00:31:666 (31666|2) - hapus ln ini. ganti sama note biasa, ikutin beatnya
00:39:625 - missing note

[NM]
OD+1 HP+1
00:00:645 - ~ 00:07:176 - knp lo malah ngelayer background piano nya? :/
00:25:135 - add note col 4
00:26:359 - ^col 1
01:00:849 - missing note
01:04:319 - ^col 4
01:22:686 - ~ 01:23:910 - sengaja dikosongin?

[HD]
00:08:808 - add note col 1
00:17:176 - missing note
00:23:502 - ^ col 1
00:31:972 - ^ col 2
00:46:972 (46972|2) - remove
00:48:298 (48298|2,48298|3) - ctrl+h
01:22:618 (82618|3,82686|2,82788|1,83026|0,83128|1,83230|2,83434|2,83638|0,83706|1,83774|2,83842|3) - nice layering, but.. 01:23:910 (83910|2) - ini pindah ke 2 trus add note di col 1
01:25:135 - add note

[MX]
kurangin LN nya orz
00:24:931 (24931|2,24931|3,24931|1) - 3 notes for what? hapus salah 1
ps: imo, pemakaian 3 note hanya untuk suara yg bner bner keras, contoh: drum + cymbal, cymbal + vocal dll
kalo cuma drum atau cymbal doang, cukup make 2 note, gitar atau vocal make 1 note. tergantung suara beatnya
overall patternnya udh bagus, cuma butuh remapping dikit lg, ok?
good luck ;)
Sip.. Updated
Mysticalia
Hi, random mod~

Mod~
Columns: 0/1/2/3

[Please Read Carefully]
  1. <TimeA> / <TimeB> = TimeA AND TimeB.
  2. + / - 0/1/2/3 refers to COLUMN of the note to add, whereas "add / delete one / two" refers to the NUMBER of notes to add, e.g. +0 = add one note to column 0, and "add two" means add two notes to any two open columns, etc.
[AIMod/BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. 2D's EZ - maybe make OD6/HP6 - too much of a gap between EZ/NM right now.
[2D's EZ]
  1. 00:10:441 - Missing note (add one)? (consistency / music burst)
  2. 00:18:604 to 00:19:829 - Maybe make this follow lyrics so it's consistent with 00:25:135 to 00:26:559:
    1. Add note to 00:18:910 / 00:19:217 / 00:19:625, then
    2. Delete 00:19:012 / 00:19:421?
  3. 00:20:849 - Add LN here ending at 00:21:257 , then delete 00:21:053 (consistency with the pattern at 00:14:319 )?
  4. 00:53:196 / 00;53:502 - Add a note to both since the instrument is the same as 00:52:890 and the sound is quite loud?
  5. 00:54:523 - Can probably add one for emphasis (music burst / start of kiai).
  6. 01:07:584 - Maybe also add one here (music burst / start of new vocal phrase)?
  7. 01:08:808 / 01:10:441 - Maybe move to the previous blue line (01:08:706 / 01:10:339 ) to follow vocal like you did at 00:55:645 / 00:57:278 ?
  8. 01:27:176 - Change into an LN ending at 01:28:094 - all of your difficulties should end in the same position (ranking guidelines)
[NM]
  1. 00:07:176 / 00:12:074 / 00:12:380 / 00:12:686 / 00:13:094 / 00:13:298 - Add one (music burst / strong sound)
  2. 00:14:931 - Add one (instrumental inconsistency)
  3. 00:20:237 - Add one (music burst and consistency with 00:21:870)
  4. 00:25:135 / 00:25:441 / 00:25:747 - Make into doubles for consistency with 00:18:604 / 00:18:910 / 00:19:217?
  5. 00:26:768 - Add a note to make it consistent with 00:28:400?
  6. 00:33:910 - Add one here for consistency with the pattern at 00:35:543 - maybe:
    1. Move 00:33:706 to column 0, then
    2. +2 at 00:33:910?
  7. 00:36:564 - Delete the normal note so it's consistent with 00:34:931 / 00:33:298? (or add a note to 00:34:931 / 00:33:298).
  8. 00:38:502 / 00:38:808 - Maybe add one for consistency with 00:18:910 / 00:19:217 (same rhythm)?
  9. 00:44:727 - Maybe add one (strong beat)?
  10. 00:46:972 - Pattern and consistency break - add one?
  11. 00:52:686 - Maybe delete one since you need some contrast between this and 00:52:890 (louder sound at 00:52:890) - I only hear lyrics here, but there's a loud piano at 00:52:890.
  12. 00:54:523 / 01:07:584 - Add one? (Start of new vocal phrase / instrumental emphasis / music burst)
  13. 01:04:727 - Add one for consistency with 01:05:543 / 01:06:359 / 01:07:176?
  14. 01:19:829 - Add one - instrumental consistency with 01:19:421? (optional)
  15. 01:23:910 to 01:25:135 inclusive - Maybe add one to each note? (Emphasised sounds in music)
  16. 01:27:716 - Change to LN ending at 01:28:094 - difficulties should end at the same position (ranking guidelines).
[HD]
  1. 00:07:176 - Inconsistent with 00:08:808 - add one?
  2. 00:14:931 - Add one for instrumental consistency? (same instrument as 00:14:012)
  3. 00:16:155 - Not much here, delete one?
  4. 00:20:033 / 00:20:135 - This is kinda awkward and can probably flow better:
    1. Move 00:20:033 to column 0, then move 00:20:135 to column 1?
  5. 00:23:502 - This LN is inconsistent with what you used at 00:16:972, so maybe:
    1. Make the LN into a normal note, then add another one to 00:23:502, then
    2. Add one to 00:23:910, then
    3. Add one to 00:24:319, then
    4. Add one to 00:24:727?
  6. 00:27:922 - Add one for instrumental consistency (also layering consistency with 00:29:625) - try +0?
  7. 00:28:400 - Erm................................................... I think the corresponding point for this is 00:30:033 - in which case you just need the two LNs - so delete the two normal notes?
  8. 00:31:257 / 00:31:461 - Maybe add one to both (instrument consistency / layering consistency with 00:29:625 / 00:29:829)?
  9. 00:39:829 - Music burst - add one (maybe +2)?
  10. 00:40:645 / 00:42:278 - Add one (consistency with 00:43:910)?
  11. 00:45:849 / 00:46:359 - Add one for instrumental consistency with 00:45:543? (releasing a LN isn't the same as pressing a note - so you still need 2 notes to represent that instrument, not just one)
  12. 00:48:808 / 00:49:625 - Add one (instrumental consistency)?
  13. 00:49:931 - Just the lyrics here - delete one, then add one to 00:50:237 / 00:50:849 for instrumental consistency?
  14. 00:50:441 - Single note piano stream - probably just one note is enough.
  15. 00:52:890 - Inconsistent with 00:53:196 / 00:53:502 - add one here?
  16. 01:00:747 - Early - move to 01:00:849
  17. 01:05:135 - Add another LN to match 01:04:319? (maybe column 2)
  18. 01:14:115 / 01:22:278 - Music burst - add note?
  19. 01:20:645 - Add note - for instrumental consistency with 01:21:053?
  20. 01:24:217 / 01:24:523 / 01:24:829 - Add note for instrumental consistency with 01:23:910?
  21. 01:27:176 - This sound seems stronger than 01:25:543 - Maybe delete 01:25:543 (85543|3) and have it start at 01:27:176 instead?
[MX]
  1. 00:00:645 - This is actually a really loud piano chord with at least one note held to 00:02:278 - so at least add another note here?
  2. 00:01:257 / 00:02:074 / 00:03:706 / 00:04:523 / 00:05:339 - Only hearing one note from piano - delete one from each? (optional)
  3. 00:06:155 - Overlayered - 2 max, since the piano is kinda quiet at that point.
  4. 00:06:564 - Single note from piano - maybe delete the note on column 0 and just keep the LN?
  5. 00:07:176 / 00:07:788 / 00:08:808 / 00:10:441 / 00:12:380 - Add a note to each for emphasis (strong beat / music burst) - or there's no contrast between this and the quiet section before it?
  6. 00:08:196 / 00:09:829 / 00:10:033 / 00:10:237 - Delete one (wrong emphasis, this is a soft piano chord :S)
  7. 00:13:706 - Quadruples just for a vocal...? What're you going to do when there's a huge music burst? Delete at least two?
  8. 00:14:012 - Delete one?
  9. 01:20:543 - Incorrect emphasis, maybe delete one?
  10. Quickly looked through the rest of the map, the main thing is probably the way you're using triples - especially the start, since they seem really random and inconsistent. Make sure you're listening to the music and representing stuff consistently, since this is 4k you'll run out of space quickly if you start using triples for even the smallest things and it'll lead to layering inconsistencies and stuff like that...
Try to get a few more mods on this, especially MX, you seem to have a lot of inconsistent layering all over the place. The other difficulties seem more or less fine though~

Good luck~! :)
Topic Starter
Abyssus-

Mysticalia wrote:

Hi, random mod~

Mod~
Columns: 0/1/2/3

[Please Read Carefully]
  1. <TimeA> / <TimeB> = TimeA AND TimeB.
  2. + / - 0/1/2/3 refers to COLUMN of the note to add, whereas "add / delete one / two" refers to the NUMBER of notes to add, e.g. +0 = add one note to column 0, and "add two" means add two notes to any two open columns, etc.
[AIMod/BPM/Offset/Timing/Setup]
  1. 2D's EZ - maybe make OD6/HP6 - too much of a gap between EZ/NM right now.
[2D's EZ]
  1. 00:10:441 - Missing note (add one)? (consistency / music burst)
  2. 00:18:604 to 00:19:829 - Maybe make this follow lyrics so it's consistent with 00:25:135 to 00:26:559:
    1. Add note to 00:18:910 / 00:19:217 / 00:19:625, then
    2. Delete 00:19:012 / 00:19:421?
  3. 00:20:849 - Add LN here ending at 00:21:257 , then delete 00:21:053 (consistency with the pattern at 00:14:319 )?
  4. 00:53:196 / 00;53:502 - Add a note to both since the instrument is the same as 00:52:890 and the sound is quite loud?
  5. 00:54:523 - Can probably add one for emphasis (music burst / start of kiai).
  6. 01:07:584 - Maybe also add one here (music burst / start of new vocal phrase)?
  7. 01:08:808 / 01:10:441 - Maybe move to the previous blue line (01:08:706 / 01:10:339 ) to follow vocal like you did at 00:55:645 / 00:57:278 ?
  8. 01:27:176 - Change into an LN ending at 01:28:094 - all of your difficulties should end in the same position (ranking guidelines)
[NM]
  1. 00:07:176 / 00:12:074 / 00:12:380 / 00:12:686 / 00:13:094 / 00:13:298 - Add one (music burst / strong sound)
  2. 00:14:931 - Add one (instrumental inconsistency)
  3. 00:20:237 - Add one (music burst and consistency with 00:21:870)
  4. 00:25:135 / 00:25:441 / 00:25:747 - Make into doubles for consistency with 00:18:604 / 00:18:910 / 00:19:217?
  5. 00:26:768 - Add a note to make it consistent with 00:28:400?
  6. 00:33:910 - Add one here for consistency with the pattern at 00:35:543 - maybe:
    1. Move 00:33:706 to column 0, then
    2. +2 at 00:33:910?
  7. 00:36:564 - Delete the normal note so it's consistent with 00:34:931 / 00:33:298? (or add a note to 00:34:931 / 00:33:298).
  8. 00:38:502 / 00:38:808 - Maybe add one for consistency with 00:18:910 / 00:19:217 (same rhythm)?
  9. 00:44:727 - Maybe add one (strong beat)?
  10. 00:46:972 - Pattern and consistency break - add one?
  11. 00:52:686 - Maybe delete one since you need some contrast between this and 00:52:890 (louder sound at 00:52:890) - I only hear lyrics here, but there's a loud piano at 00:52:890.
  12. 00:54:523 / 01:07:584 - Add one? (Start of new vocal phrase / instrumental emphasis / music burst)
  13. 01:04:727 - Add one for consistency with 01:05:543 / 01:06:359 / 01:07:176?
  14. 01:19:829 - Add one - instrumental consistency with 01:19:421? (optional)
  15. 01:23:910 to 01:25:135 inclusive - Maybe add one to each note? (Emphasised sounds in music)
  16. 01:27:716 - Change to LN ending at 01:28:094 - difficulties should end at the same position (ranking guidelines).
[HD]
  1. 00:07:176 - Inconsistent with 00:08:808 - add one?
  2. 00:14:931 - Add one for instrumental consistency? (same instrument as 00:14:012)
  3. 00:16:155 - Not much here, delete one?
  4. 00:20:033 / 00:20:135 - This is kinda awkward and can probably flow better:
    1. Move 00:20:033 to column 0, then move 00:20:135 to column 1?
  5. 00:23:502 - This LN is inconsistent with what you used at 00:16:972, so maybe:
    1. Make the LN into a normal note, then add another one to 00:23:502, then
    2. Add one to 00:23:910, then
    3. Add one to 00:24:319, then
    4. Add one to 00:24:727?
  6. 00:27:922 - Add one for instrumental consistency (also layering consistency with 00:29:625) - try +0?
  7. 00:28:400 - Erm................................................... I think the corresponding point for this is 00:30:033 - in which case you just need the two LNs - so delete the two normal notes?
  8. 00:31:257 / 00:31:461 - Maybe add one to both (instrument consistency / layering consistency with 00:29:625 / 00:29:829)?
  9. 00:39:829 - Music burst - add one (maybe +2)?
  10. 00:40:645 / 00:42:278 - Add one (consistency with 00:43:910)?
  11. 00:45:849 / 00:46:359 - Add one for instrumental consistency with 00:45:543? (releasing a LN isn't the same as pressing a note - so you still need 2 notes to represent that instrument, not just one)
  12. 00:48:808 / 00:49:625 - Add one (instrumental consistency)?
  13. 00:49:931 - Just the lyrics here - delete one, then add one to 00:50:237 / 00:50:849 for instrumental consistency?
  14. 00:50:441 - Single note piano stream - probably just one note is enough.
  15. 00:52:890 - Inconsistent with 00:53:196 / 00:53:502 - add one here?
  16. 01:00:747 - Early - move to 01:00:849
  17. 01:05:135 - Add another LN to match 01:04:319? (maybe column 2)
  18. 01:14:115 / 01:22:278 - Music burst - add note?
  19. 01:20:645 - Add note - for instrumental consistency with 01:21:053?
  20. 01:24:217 / 01:24:523 / 01:24:829 - Add note for instrumental consistency with 01:23:910?
  21. 01:27:176 - This sound seems stronger than 01:25:543 - Maybe delete 01:25:543 (85543|3) and have it start at 01:27:176 instead?
[MX]
  1. 00:00:645 - This is actually a really loud piano chord with at least one note held to 00:02:278 - so at least add another note here?
  2. 00:01:257 / 00:02:074 / 00:03:706 / 00:04:523 / 00:05:339 - Only hearing one note from piano - delete one from each? (optional)
  3. 00:06:155 - Overlayered - 2 max, since the piano is kinda quiet at that point.
  4. 00:06:564 - Single note from piano - maybe delete the note on column 0 and just keep the LN?
  5. 00:07:176 / 00:07:788 / 00:08:808 / 00:10:441 / 00:12:380 - Add a note to each for emphasis (strong beat / music burst) - or there's no contrast between this and the quiet section before it?
  6. 00:08:196 / 00:09:829 / 00:10:033 / 00:10:237 - Delete one (wrong emphasis, this is a soft piano chord :S)
  7. 00:13:706 - Quadruples just for a vocal...? What're you going to do when there's a huge music burst? Delete at least two?
  8. 00:14:012 - Delete one?
  9. 01:20:543 - Incorrect emphasis, maybe delete one?
  10. Quickly looked through the rest of the map, the main thing is probably the way you're using triples - especially the start, since they seem really random and inconsistent. Make sure you're listening to the music and representing stuff consistently, since this is 4k you'll run out of space quickly if you start using triples for even the smallest things and it'll lead to layering inconsistencies and stuff like that...
Try to get a few more mods on this, especially MX, you seem to have a lot of inconsistent layering all over the place. The other difficulties seem more or less fine though~

Good luck~! :)
Nice mod... i'll update it , thanks
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