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Basslovers United - A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)

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rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on vendredi 1 juillet 2016 at 23:11:54

Artist: Basslovers United
Title: A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: Hands Up Edit Kin plus aplus Techno
BPM: 172,82
Filesize: 3682kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,58 stars, 172 notes)
  2. Hard (3,41 stars, 478 notes)
  3. Kin's Normal (2,06 stars, 229 notes)
  4. Superstar (4,57 stars, 640 notes)
Download: Basslovers United - A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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(map #22)
Unfortunaltely, because of divergence of opinion with some BATs i'm unable to rank it. I'm sorry for all the people who wanted to see my map ranked but i used some pattern that are way too "exotic" and therefore my map can't be ranked because of that... Even if it saddens me i respect the descision of BATs that don't want to rank this kind of map in 2014.
Thank you for everybody who helped him with this map and i'm deeply sorry that i couldn't get it ranked.
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Thank you Kin for your guest diff.
Thank you Yales for being an awesome (but unknown) mapper who showed me that 1/8 could make some really cool pattern when well used!
And thank you to Bakari for being awesome and showing a big support toward this map and being the only reason i tried so hard to rank this.
Last edited by rezoons , edited 82 times in total.
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
This is awesome.
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons
You are awesome <3
Diagram_old
Diagram_old
You should add the tag "Nightcore"
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons

Diagram wrote:

You should add the tag "Nightcore"
No need for the tag. It's in the title.
Neil Watts
osu! Alumni
1,843 posts
Joined July 2013
Neil Watts
Hey Rezoons!

Voilà mon mod (un peu faible, désolé, je n'ai pas un niveau très élevé) :

-Easy-
Je trouve que cette diff manque de drums pour marquer le rythme.
Un hitsound comme celui-ci (ou un peu moins "violent") à placer sur tous les upbeats pourrait rendre ta beatmap plus agréable à jouer.
- 00:43:079 (3) - divise par deux la taille du slider ?
Je ne trouve pas grand chose à part quelques parties un peu undermapped, mais ça n'a pas d'importance sur une easy diff.

-Kin's Normal-
- Preview point et tags différents des autres difficultés
- Même commentaire que pour la Easy concernant les hitsounds, on ne les entend presque pas (monter le volume ?) et vous devriez trouver un hitsound pour marquer le rythme
- 01:15:193 (3) - slider trop long ?
- 02:10:221 - le début du Kiai time n'est pas marqué, c'est dommage. Réduire la taille du spinner pour ajouter un élément à l'emplacement ciblé pourrait résoudre ce problème.

-Hard-
Un peu trop difficile pour une Hard diff.
- 00:10:617 (5) - supprime ce cercle
- 00:17:387 (1) - réduis ce slider jusqu'au tick rouge
- 00:20:165 (1) - ^
- 01:50:953 (1,2,3) - stack
- 01:57:028 (2,3,4) - ^
- 02:02:930 (6,7,8) - ^
- 02:15:428 (6,7,8) - ^
- 02:20:983 (5,6,7) - ^
Dommage, le distance snap manque de temps à autre, mais les histounds sont bien mappés.

-Insane-
00:10:791 (1) - Ça fait mal aux oreilles
- 00:21:900 (3) - ^
- 01:33:941 - Il manque quelque chose ici, non ?
- 01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - trop d'éléments entassés. Améliore la visibilité
J'ai du mal à modder ça, c'est un peu trop Insane pour moi. :o

Voilà, c'est tout ce que j'ai trouvé :D Bonne chance pour la suite !
pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
HI~ from my queue

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:111 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? the flow will be better imo
  2. 00:06:972 (2,3) - (nazi) try to make the head of (2) totally overlapped by (3). See the following picture: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771300
    Picture
  3. 00:23:289 (1,2) - wow, it is so tricky XD, but I prefer Ctrl+G
  4. 00:46:550 (1,2) - I think you can increase the speed of the two sliders. It feels much better if you also increase the spacing between 00:46:203 (10,11,12,13) - these notes. See the following picture: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771310
    Picture
  5. 01:11:200 (5,1) - I suggest that the spacing should be larger due to the spacing 01:10:506 (1,2,3,4) - here.
  6. 01:51:473 (1) - This slider's color is similar to the background, which makes it difficult to read...
  7. This is awesome


[Hard]
  1. 00:25:025 (1,2) - stack them better, although it makes no difference when playing
  2. 01:04:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771331
    Picture


[Kin's Normal]
  1. Check the tags and preview time carefully. They conflict with other diffs.
  2. 01:15:193 (3) - Separating it into a slider and a circle feels much more awesome: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771340
    Picture


[Easy]
  1. 00:05:583 (1) - I think the spinner here is tooooo short for an easy (auto gets 4,000). So I advise you to change it to a long slider.

This map is nice. Have my star~
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi Neil ^^

Neil Watts wrote:

Hey Rezoons!

Voilà mon mod (un peu faible, désolé, je n'ai pas un niveau très élevé) :

-Easy-
Je trouve que cette diff manque de drums pour marquer le rythme.
Un hitsound comme celui-ci (ou un peu moins "violent") à placer sur tous les upbeats pourrait rendre ta beatmap plus agréable à jouer. Je sais pas trop... J'ai déja utilisé 2 différents claps sur les upbeats de 50% de la map dans les moments les plus intense. J'ai peur que ça fasse un peu trop. Je verais ce qu'en pensent les autres.
- 00:43:079 (3) - divise par deux la taille du slider ? Je vais plutôt éviter. Même si ça suivrait mieux la rythme ça créerait un gros problème de polarité (ça ferait un trou de3/2 beat a éviter dans les easy). Je fais ça assez souvent d'ailleurs dans la map, ça n'endommage pas trop le rythme et ça évite tout les trous de 3/2 beat.
Je ne trouve pas grand chose à part quelques parties un peu undermapped, mais ça n'a pas d'importance sur une easy diff. Surtout que ma easy a déjà une difficulté de 1.6 stars, ce qui est légèrement trop élevé.

-Kin's Normal-
- Preview point et tags différents des autres difficultés J'ai fix le preview point de Kin et le tag dans les autres difficultés.

-Hard-
Un peu trop difficile pour une Hard diff. Bah, une difficulté de 3.4 c'est bon pour une normal. Et puis, vu la hard que je viens de ranker crois-moi cette diff-là est bien plus facile alors si l'autre est passé celle-là ça ira ;)
- 00:10:617 (5) - supprime ce cercle Yup
- 00:17:387 (1) - réduis ce slider jusqu'au tick rouge En effet, je me souviens même pas de pourquoi j'ai fait ça.
- 00:20:165 (1) - ^ ^
- 01:50:953 (1,2,3) - stack Non, parce que si je stack, à cause du stack leniancy les notes se décalerons quand même sauf que je ne contrôle pas la direction dans laquelle elles se décalent dans ce cas-là. Voilà pourquoi je place mes 1/4 comme ça.
- 01:57:028 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
- 02:02:930 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
- 02:15:428 (6,7,8) - ^ ^
- 02:20:983 (5,6,7) - ^ ^
Dommage, le distance snap manque de temps à autre, mais les histounds sont bien mappés. A vrai dire les hitsounds sont les mêmes sur toutes mes diffs vu que j'utilise un copieur de hitsound ^^'. Mais sinon mise à part pour les 1/4, les 1/1 et les jumps j'ai pas trop souvenir d'avoir lâché le DS....

-Insane-
00:10:791 (1) - Ça fait mal aux oreilles En effet, fixed.
- 00:21:900 (3) - ^ ^
- 01:33:941 - Il manque quelque chose ici, non ? Je préfère mettre en valeur l'instru plutot que la voix dans cette partie-là puisque l'instru y est plus instinctif à jouer. Si je suis là voix je force les joueurs à commencer sur un tick rouge sans aucune aide sonore ce qui est pas génial :(
- 01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - trop d'éléments entassés. Améliore la visibilité Tout ceux avec qui je l'ai fait testé n'ont pas eu de problème de visibilité ici donc je vais pas y toucher.
J'ai du mal à modder ça, c'est un peu trop Insane pour moi. :o Rezoons, c'est plus fort que toi :p

Voilà, c'est tout ce que j'ai trouvé :D Bonne chance pour la suite !
Merci pour ton mod :)

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Hi 384059043,

384059043 wrote:

HI~ from my queue

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[Insane]
  1. 00:02:111 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? the flow will be better imo I fixed the flow differently.
  2. 00:06:972 (2,3) - (nazi) try to make the head of (2) totally overlapped by (3). See the following picture: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771300 Fixed!
    Picture
  3. 00:23:289 (1,2) - wow, it is so tricky XD, but I prefer Ctrl+G It seems even more trickier xD But i agree that the flow is meh... In the end i have changed the whole pattern.
  4. 00:46:550 (1,2) - I think you can increase the speed of the two sliders. It feels much better if you also increase the spacing between 00:46:203 (10,11,12,13) - these notes. See the following picture: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771310 I've never tried this kind of pattern before but i admit that it coulb be cool here. I'll try and see what other think. I'm not sure if i'll keep it but i give it a try.
    Picture
  5. 01:11:200 (5,1) - I suggest that the spacing should be larger due to the spacing 01:10:506 (1,2,3,4) - here. Well, these notes aren't as strong as 01:10:506 (1,2,3,4) for me that's why i don't increase the spacing.
  6. 01:51:473 (1) - This slider's color is similar to the background, which makes it difficult to read... Who plays an insane with the background image???!!!! xD
  7. This is awesome Thank you very much ^^


[Hard]
  1. 00:25:025 (1,2) - stack them better, although it makes no difference when playing The editor always does that, it doesn't change when playing but for some reason the editor slightly unstack them. I try fixing it, i dunno if it will work :(
  2. 01:04:951 (1,2,3,4,5) - what about this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1771331 Actually that was done on purpose. I always put the jump on the first three notes and not on the others like 01:16:061 (1,2,3,4,5) , 02:26:886 (1,2,3,4,5) and 02:37:996 (1,2,3,4,5) .
    Picture

[Kin's Normal]
  1. Check the tags and preview time carefully. They conflict with other diffs.I fixed the preview point for Kin and the tags in the other diffs.

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:583 (1) - I think the spinner here is tooooo short for an easy (auto gets 4,000). So I advise you to change it to a long slider. Yeah, i removed the slider but changed the rythm differently and actually it plays way better! Thanks.

This map is nice. Have my star~ Thank you very much :)
Thank you for your mod and your star :)
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

Neil Watts wrote:

-Kin's Normal-
- Preview point et tags différents des autres difficultés
- Même commentaire que pour la Easy concernant les hitsounds, on ne les entend presque pas (monter le volume ?) et vous devriez trouver un hitsound pour marquer le rythme
- 01:15:193 (3) - slider trop long ? Je sais pas trop ce que j'ai fais sur ce coup la, chang'd
- 02:10:221 - le début du Kiai time n'est pas marqué, c'est dommage. Réduire la taille du spinner pour ajouter un élément à l'emplacement ciblé pourrait résoudre ce problème. Içi, le problème est que on a la possibilité de mettre un spinner içi 02:08:832 - afin de faire un double spin (1st spin drum roll ; 2nd spin "soufflement", j'ai donc préféré faire ça en un spin, étant donné que si le spinner du soufflement est cassé en plein milieu, même si le kiai time est marqué par une note, le soufflement ne l'est plus du tout
lazy to quote Mister number, fix'd on previous mod

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osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 106613
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.4
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.800002

[Metadata]
Title:A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Basslovers United
ArtistUnicode:Basslovers United
Creator:rezoons
Version:Kin's Normal
Source:
Tags:Hands Up Edit Kin
BeatmapID:448044
BeatmapSetID:184078

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OverallDifficulty:4
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40,224,113383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Hey, as promised!

[General]
  1. Recommended BG dimensions are 1024x768 and 1366x768. I googled your BG and found 1024x768 version, get it here.
  2. Please, disable the widescreen support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled and this thing is made for widescreen storyboards only, after all.
  3. 01:49:390 - this part sounds like dubstep, so, maybe, just maybe, we should add dubstep to the tags. :) Also, plus should be added to the tags in case if someone will look for "a plus superstar".
[Easy]
  1. Are you sure about OD3? I'd go with OD2 due to polarity changes and some tricky 2/1 patterns. It will also match better with the rst of the diffs and help you to keep thespread better balanced, by the way.
  2. 00:02:111 (3) - It feels uncomfortable because the downbeat here is unstressed. So, what I'm suggesting to do is a circle at 00:02:111 - and a circle or an 1/1 slider at 00:02:458. Example
    Note:00:14:610 (1) - one more similar slider, I'd recommnend you to replace it with two circles or something like this / such thing heppen a few more times, I'm sure you arae able to spot them on your own now :)
    Note2: I'm sure you've already read and know the Music Theory but I'm leaving a link here just in case.
  3. 00:07:319 (2,3) - are you sure about such stacks? Beginners may get confused with this kind of stacks, and 2/1 gap between objects makes it even more stressful for them. Try to ask some beginners for testplays and see how they will pass this pattern, if it's posible.
  4. 00:16:346 (1) - and 00:18:776 (1) - comboing here became a bit too intense. I would remove new combos from these two. 1 object long combo is a bit confusing, isn't it?
  5. 00:38:218 (1,3) - minor - the overlap is very minor, but noticeable in-game. Maybe you could get rid of it? Need an example? example
  6. 01:14:325 (1,2) - minor - it could be a good idea to avoid such overlaps. This is the easiest diff and something like this can trouble beginners a bit.
    Note: 02:36:260 (1,2) - same thing?
  7. 01:20:575 (2,2) - minor - kust a friendly reminder that you can make a blanket slider here. 2 / 1

    Everything was pretty nice, and I really liked your CS choice. It may need some more polishing and probably somerhythm improvements, but it's still a great diff!
[Kin's Normal]
  1. 00:57:313 - ghave you missed a circle here? There's a pretty strong beat which shouldn't be ignored, imo + it breaks your consistent rhythm and feels confusing :(
    Note: 01:02:868, 01:08:423, 01:13:978 and 01:19:533 ansd so on, I'm sure you understand it - looks like you do it on purpose, but I still strongly recommend you to place circles on such beats.

    Well, I'm impressed. Seriously, everything except the beats I've mentioned was amazing!
[Hard]
  1. Please, check AiMod, there're some unsnapped objects. Recalculating your sliders and resnapping all the notes will solve the problem.
  2. Please, remove unnecessary SV changes from the diff (00:23:289 - mostly here). Don't confuse modders and keep in mind that it POSSIBLY bug the game. :(
  3. This is a Hard diff and it's meant to be hard. I highly suggest you to pick HP6.
  4. 00:24:678 - try to place a circe here and finish the spinner at 00:24:331 ? I am sure that it will work better with the music and vocals and help you to separate different parts of the song. You did similar thing to 01:45:224 (1,1) - :)
  5. 00:58:875 (6) - minor - the overlap is visible with the default skin and it looks a bit untidy, but since most of the players use custop (and kinda huge) HP Bars, moving this slider down a bit would be a nice idea.
  6. 01:04:951 (1,2,3,4) - just saying, that you can have a great star pattern here. Select 01:04:951 (1,3) - and Ctrl+G them, then move (4) and there you go! Example.
  7. 01:36:024 (3,5,7) - you're amazing. I'm in love with this pattern and I really like the way how it corresponds with the song.
  8. 01:49:043 (2,1) - ask some more players to ttest it. I'm unsure about that 3/4 > 1/2 stack but it feels kinda easy and playable.
  9. 02:16:123 (1,2) - you have an awesome flow, don't stop it here! Please, unstack the circles to keep the movement! The song gets faster and players will expect your map to get faster as well.

    Wow, that's something really cool! I liked the way how it plays a lot. Maybe it needs a bit more mods to make it perfect, but it's awesome even as it is.
[Insane]
Why not rename it to Superstar? Since you're allowed to do so and it would look great.
  1. 00:11:311 - I'm pretty sure that you should break this slider into two sliders, when the singer says "hold you" it feels better if you begin another slider here. Example.
  2. 00:13:221 - do not ignore claps :( This is the hardest dff, after all. Make 00:12:874 (4) - this slider 1/2 shorter and add a circle at 00:13:394 - it will match better with the vocals. I believe.
  3. 00:56:619 (5) - a new combo here may fit quite cool with the bass sound and will make your paatterns a bit more consistent.
  4. 01:10:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about those 1/8 sliders? I'd expand them, to make them 1/4, since 1/8 sounds too fast and kinda off to me.
    Note: same applies for all similar sliders, obviously.
  5. 01:36:024 (3,4,5,6,7) - repetive blanket sliders are my weak spot. I love this pattern so much.
  6. 02:07:965 (1,2) - minor - try making the curve a bit softer, it'd give you more natural flow. Example

    I really liked the dubstep part and everything else was also great. Good job!
I quite liked the mapset and I really enjoyed testing/modding it. Although the Easy diff may need some more work, everything else was awesome!

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Best of luck!
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons
Hi Bakari :),

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey, as promised!

[General]
  1. Recommended BG dimensions are 1024x768 and 1366x768. I googled your BG and found 1024x768 version, get it here. Indeed, thank you very much ^^
  2. Please, disable the widescreen support. It makes no sense to keep it enabled and this thing is made for widescreen storyboards only, after all. Yup, fixed!
  3. 01:49:390 - this part sounds like dubstep, so, maybe, just maybe, we should add dubstep to the tags. :) Also, plus should be added to the tags in case if someone will look for "a plus superstar". Ok for aplus but not for "dubstep". I'm not sure if this part can really be called "dubstep" but what i'm sure of is that, if people search for "dubstep" this is not really the song they are looking for. xD
[Easy]
  1. Are you sure about OD3? I'd go with OD2 due to polarity changes and some tricky 2/1 patterns. It will also match better with the rst of the diffs and help you to keep thespread better balanced, by the way. You're rght, fixed!
  2. 00:02:111 (3) - It feels uncomfortable because the downbeat here is unstressed. So, what I'm suggesting to do is a circle at 00:02:111 - and a circle or an 1/1 slider at 00:02:458. Example
    Note:00:14:610 (1) - one more similar slider, I'd recommnend you to replace it with two circles or something like this / such thing heppen a few more times, I'm sure you arae able to spot them on your own now :) I tried to fix as much as possible!
    Note2: I'm sure you've already read and know the Music Theory but I'm leaving a link here just in case. I tried to read this one day. I got bored xD I always map with my guts. I never like "scientific approach" for this kind of things. AND I'M A SCIENTIST! That's saying a lot.
  3. 00:07:319 (2,3) - are you sure about such stacks? Beginners may get confused with this kind of stacks, and 2/1 gap between objects makes it even more stressful for them. Try to ask some beginners for testplays and see how they will pass this pattern, if it's posible. Well, if they never see stacks they can't learn to play them. Besdies, since it's a 2/1 stack they have time to anticipate it on the contrary.
  4. 00:16:346 (1) - and 00:18:776 (1) - comboing here became a bit too intense. I would remove new combos from these two. 1 object long combo is a bit confusing, isn't it? I remove the first one (it was a mistake) but left the second one. It's on a long slider so it should not be too troublesome imo.
  5. 00:38:218 (1,3) - minor - the overlap is very minor, but noticeable in-game. Maybe you could get rid of it? Need an example? example I had doubts about it but then i saw your example, that actually looks cooler!
  6. 01:14:325 (1,2) - minor - it could be a good idea to avoid such overlaps. This is the easiest diff and something like this can trouble beginners a bit.
    Note: 02:36:260 (1,2) - same thing? Yeah, you're probably right.
  7. 01:20:575 (2,2) - minor - kust a friendly reminder that you can make a blanket slider here. 2 / 1 How can i miss a blanket!!!!!!!!!

    Everything was pretty nice, and I really liked your CS choice. It may need some more polishing and probably somerhythm improvements, but it's still a great diff! I'm starting to work with 0.5. I think there are plenty of cool things we can do with it!
[Hard]
  1. Please, check AiMod, there're some unsnapped objects. Recalculating your sliders and resnapping all the notes will solve the problem. Whooops
  2. Please, remove unnecessary SV changes from the diff (00:23:289 - mostly here). Don't confuse modders and keep in mind that it POSSIBLY bug the game. :( Whooops x2
  3. This is a Hard diff and it's meant to be hard. I highly suggest you to pick HP6. Well, insane is HP7 so it still is a little too high. But i picked HP5.5 (because why not)
  4. 00:24:678 - try to place a circe here and finish the spinner at 00:24:331 ? I am sure that it will work better with the music and vocals and help you to separate different parts of the song. You did similar thing to 01:45:224 (1,1) - :) Yup, good idea!
  5. 00:58:875 (6) - minor - the overlap is visible with the default skin and it looks a bit untidy, but since most of the players use custop (and kinda huge) HP Bars, moving this slider down a bit would be a nice idea. I tried but i couldn't move it much.
  6. 01:04:951 (1,2,3,4) - just saying, that you can have a great star pattern here. Select 01:04:951 (1,3) - and Ctrl+G them, then move (4) and there you go! Example. I know that but that would go against my jump pattern. I always emphasize the first three notes with a jump and not the others because that's how i feel the music. That's why i didn't put any jump here.
  7. 01:36:024 (3,5,7) - you're amazing. I'm in love with this pattern and I really like the way how it corresponds with the song. Thank you <3 <3 <3
  8. 01:49:043 (2,1) - ask some more players to ttest it. I'm unsure about that 3/4 > 1/2 stack but it feels kinda easy and playable. Actually i have doubts about it too. I'll see what other modders think about it.
  9. 02:16:123 (1,2) - you have an awesome flow, don't stop it here! Please, unstack the circles to keep the movement! The song gets faster and players will expect your map to get faster as well. I tried something.

    Wow, that's something really cool! I liked the way how it plays a lot. Maybe it needs a bit more mods to make it perfect, but it's awesome even as it is. ♥♥♥
[Insane]
Why not rename it to Superstar? Since you're allowed to do so and it would look great. Actually i hesitated to call it "A+" but i didn't thought about "superstar". I must admit it sounds cool!
  1. 00:11:311 - I'm pretty sure that you should break this slider into two sliders, when the singer says "hold you" it feels better if you begin another slider here. Example. I hesitated a lot biut i think i'll follow you!
  2. 00:13:221 - do not ignore claps :( This is the hardest dff, after all. Make 00:12:874 (4) - this slider 1/2 shorter and add a circle at 00:13:394 - it will match better with the vocals. I believe. Yeah, i shortened it but i didn't add any note otherwise it would push me to make a big jump which would play weird.
  3. 00:56:619 (5) - a new combo here may fit quite cool with the bass sound and will make your paatterns a bit more consistent. Fixed
  4. 01:10:506 (1,2,3,4,5) - are you sure about those 1/8 sliders? I'd expand them, to make them 1/4, since 1/8 sounds too fast and kinda off to me.
    Note: same applies for all similar sliders, obviously. Well, i tested it a lot and i really liked how they felt. I think the 1/8 emphasize the "distortion sound" of the music better than 1/4.
  5. 01:36:024 (3,4,5,6,7) - repetive blanket sliders are my weak spot. I love this pattern so much. Touch me again, and again, and again.... I love using repetitive pattern to emphasize repetitiveness of a song. <3
  6. 02:07:965 (1,2) - minor - try making the curve a bit softer, it'd give you more natural flow. Example What's with the skin? xD Anyway, fixed.

    I really liked the dubstep part and everything else was also great. Good job!
I quite liked the mapset and I really enjoyed testing/modding it. Although the Easy diff may need some more work, everything else was awesome! Thank you very much and i know i had a lot of trouble with the rhythm in the easy.

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Best of luck!
Thank you very much for your fantastic mod :) ! It really helped me a lot! You are awesome, man!
Kin
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Joined August 2010
Kin

-Bakari- wrote:

[Kin's Normal]
  1. 00:57:313 - ghave you missed a circle here? There's a pretty strong beat which shouldn't be ignored, imo + it breaks your consistent rhythm and feels confusing :(
    Note: 01:02:868, 01:08:423, 01:13:978 and 01:19:533 ansd so on, I'm sure you understand it - looks like you do it on purpose, but I still strongly recommend you to place circles on such beats. since this part is 100% melody, I really prefer to let it like this, also I changed something on this part, one thing was inconsistent

    Well, I'm impressed. Seriously, everything except the beats I've mentioned was amazing! thanks \o/

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Creator:rezoons
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Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
Kin 4 Elite mapper plz ;)
Kin
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Joined August 2010
Kin
lol why
Nozhomi
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Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Hi~ random mod (non je déconne :D) mais si tu peux m4m je suis pas contre si tu as le temps ofc.

- Superstar :
  1. 00:12:006 (2,1)- Pourquoi ne pas appliquer le même DS qu'entre (1,2) ?
  2. 00:29:886 (3,4)- Je trouve vraiment bizarre de réduire le DS ici.
  3. 00:36:656 (4)- Je sais que ça détruit ton DS, mais ça ce joue bien mieux si tu le CTRL+G.
  4. 00:40:822 (4,5)- Je les placerais plus à x=320/y=236 pour bien l'aligner avec le slider précédent.
  5. 01:31:337 (1,2,3,4,5)- Je ferais pas le stack sur (2,3) mais sur (4,5).
  6. 01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1)- Je trouve ça anti-fun à play. J'aurais mis simplement un stream, mais ensuite c'est comme tu veux.
- Hard :
  1. 00:04:715 (3)- CTRL+G ?
  2. 00:53:841 (1,2,3,4)- Garde un DS constant pour cette partie non ? Il n'y a pas vraiment de raison de placer un jumps ici.
- Kin's Normal :
  1. 00:42:731 (3)- Place le à x=288/y=128 pour bien enchainer avec la suite (ajuste le DS pour les objets suivant ofc).
- Esay :
  1. 01:48:002 (2,1)- Overlap.
  2. 02:04:666 (2,3)- Léger overlap.

Damn j'ai tellement rien à dire ;w;, j'espère que ça vous aidera quand même.
Mukyu
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons

Nozhomi wrote:

Hi~ random mod (non je déconne :D) mais si tu peux m4m je suis pas contre si tu as le temps ofc. Merci beaucoup pour le mod ^^, mais je suis désolé mais je ne pourrais pas te modder. Ce n'est pas un problème de temps (je suis en vac, j'ai tout le temps que je veux!) c'est juste que j'ai décidé d'arrêter complétement, définitivement et irrévocablement le modding. Si tu as des questions, besoin d'aide ou veux que je teste des trucs je serais ravi de t'aider mais je ne peux plus du tout modder. Vraiment désolé :(

- Superstar :
  1. 00:12:006 (2,1)- Pourquoi ne pas appliquer le même DS qu'entre (1,2) ? A cause de la facon dont je veux que le pattern soit joué. Le pattern est fait de la sorte que les joueurs resteront sur la tête des sliders du coup j'ai fait en sorte que la tête de 00:11:832 (1,2,1) aient le même écart. Evidemment ca foire le DS puisque le DS c'est l'écart entre la queue d'un slider et la tete du suivant et pas l'écart entre deux têtes.
  2. 00:29:886 (3,4)- Je trouve vraiment bizarre de réduire le DS ici. J'ai augmenté le DS pour 00:29:538 (1,2,3) afin de mettre en valeur le "A-A-A" de la chanson qui sont des notes puissantes. Sauf que après ce ne sont plus des notes puissantes alors j'ai repris mon DS habituel.
  3. 00:36:656 (4)- Je sais que ça détruit ton DS, mais ça ce joue bien mieux si tu le CTRL+G. c'est même pire car 00:36:656 (4) a sa tête sur une note puissante donc il me faut un jump entre 00:36:308 (3) et 00:36:656 (4) mais c'est vrai que mon pattern ne flow pas génial. Du coup afin de régler le problème de flow sans péter le jump j'ai décider de changer la forme de 00:36:308 (3) à la place.
  4. 00:40:822 (4,5)- Je les placerais plus à x=320/y=236 pour bien l'aligner avec le slider précédent. A vrai dire je déteste les alignements mais par contre c'est vrai que le spacing est un peu bas ici. Du coup j'ai éloigné le stack (mais j'ai pas aligné :P)
  5. 01:31:337 (1,2,3,4,5)- Je ferais pas le stack sur (2,3) mais sur (4,5). Si tu écoutes bien la chanson tu entendra que le chanteur chante la note 01:31:510 (2) et 01:31:684 (3) de facon identique (c'est pas les mêmes paroles mais c'est la même note, musicalement parlant) c'est pour ça que j'ai mis un stack ici. Par contre ce n'est pas le cas pour (4,5) donc pas de stack dessus.
  6. 01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1)- Je trouve ça anti-fun à play. J'aurais mis simplement un stream, mais ensuite c'est comme tu veux. A vrai dire je suis obligé de mettre des 1/8 (par consistancy avec mes pattern similaires) j'ai juste voulu le transformer en stream et a vrai dire je trouve que ça se joue de la même façon qu'un stream normal. Ensuite je n'ai pas fait testé à grand monde donc je reste avec des doutes sur ce pattern. Je vais voir si d'autres personnes pensent comme toi a propos du pattern avant de faire quoi que ce soit.
- Hard :
  1. 00:04:715 (3)- CTRL+G ? a vrai dire c'était fait exprès a la base pour mettre en avant la répétition dans la musique mais c'est vrai qu ça marche quand même avec un CTRL+G donc why not!
  2. 00:53:841 (1,2,3,4)- Garde un DS constant pour cette partie non ? Il n'y a pas vraiment de raison de placer un jumps ici. J'en ai aussi mis un à 01:04:951 (1,2,3,4,5) et 01:16:061 (1,2,3,4,5) et 02:26:886 (1,2,3,4,5) et 02:37:996 (1,2,3,4,5) suivant la même logique. Je trouve ces notes très puissantes et je le met en avant avec des jumps!
- Esay :
  1. 01:48:002 (2,1)- Overlap. Fait exprès. J'ai même fait en sorte que la note soit bien placée sur le slider!
  2. 02:04:666 (2,3)- Léger overlap.^

Damn j'ai tellement rien à dire ;w;, j'espère que ça vous aidera quand même. Mon mapping style est très casse-couille à modder! :P
Mukyu
Merci beaucoup pour ton mod :)
Kin
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Kin
flemme de quote, mais + ou - fix'd

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jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
from my birthday queue

[General]
normal-hitclap2 has a very long extension which is not fit for consecutive use, i made you a compressed one that would sound better: http://puu.sh/aZQyr.wav

[Easy]
00:15:998 (2,1) - i'd try to not have these 2 overlap each other
01:20:575 (2,3,1,2,3) - the way this pattern flows is not quite right, try something like this:
SPOILER
01:43:488 (2) - NC should he here instead of 01:42:099 (1)
01:47:307 (1) - the NC pattern in this section is a little messy, NC should appear only on 01:49:390 (1), 01:52:168 (2) and 01:54:945 (1)
02:03:625 (1) - small spacing inconsistency here
02:07:097 (3) - i would try not to hide this under the slider, it might confuse beginners

[Kin's Normal]
00:24:778 - snap this green line to 00:24:851
00:39:086 (2,2) - add whistles to these repeats? you did it for 00:36:308 (2)
01:52:168 (3) - i would use a rhythm like this instead, feels more fitting to the music imo:
SPOILER
02:07:444 (1) - end this at 02:08:832 and start mapping at 02:10:221, since thats where the build up begins
there feels to be a lack of hitsounds after 01:57:723, mainly because the claps are not being hitsounded. You can try to utilize the whistle patterns used in Hard to make this section sound more interesting

[Hard]
00:21:900 (1) - silence the end on this spinner
00:48:981 (1) - this feels underwhelming to play with a repeat slider, use 3 circles or a slider + circle combination for the build up
01:34:809 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders like 00:05:583 (1,2) to preserve the 1/1 rhythm
02:35:392 (6) - i think you forgot a NC here

[Superstar]
00:12:006 (2,1) - i would give this some more distance, would flow better
00:43:773 (1) - not really a necessary NC here
01:00:438 (1,2) - this doesn't play right; the down beat is at 01:00:785 but you covered it with a repeat slider. try something like this (remember to resnap 01:00:785 (1) since it belonged to a lower sv section):
SPOILER
01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this is simply a trap especially because the faster slider at 01:46:265 (1) can be barely seen given all these sliders that require spamming. I highly recommend you to use repeat sliders here instead, gives more leniency and allows you to place 01:46:265 (1) at a more visible location.
01:46:613 (1,1,2,3,4) - this is rhythmically incorrect; the downbeats in the music are not being reflected in the actual mapping of the 1/3s. you can try something like this which is much more accurate to play (snapping in 1/6):
SPOILER

02:07:965 (1) - this slider should start at 02:08:138, since the vocals are more dominant here. So something like this:
SPOILER
02:41:294 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - try to perfectly center this, you can make it work by moving 02:39:732 (3) and 02:40:773 (1,2,3) more towards the left

well let me know afterwards
rezoons
Topic Starter
rezoons

jonathanlfj wrote:

from my birthday queue

[General]
normal-hitclap2 has a very long extension which is not fit for consecutive use, i made you a compressed one that would sound better: http://puu.sh/aZQyr.wav Oh... I didn't know that! Thank you ^^

[Easy]
00:15:998 (2,1) - i'd try to not have these 2 overlap each other Even if it briefly appears in the editor the overlap never appears while playing the map so it's not an issue.
01:20:575 (2,3,1,2,3) - the way this pattern flows is not quite right, try something like this:hum... Good idea!
SPOILER
01:43:488 (2) - NC should he here instead of 01:42:099 (1) Indeed!
01:47:307 (1) - the NC pattern in this section is a little messy, NC should appear only on 01:49:390 (1), 01:52:168 (2) and 01:54:945 (1) Yeah, NC was kinda random here.
02:03:625 (1) - small spacing inconsistency here It was kinda done on purpose to avoid the overlap ^^' Oh well, fixed.
02:07:097 (3) - i would try not to hide this under the slider, it might confuse beginners I don't think it's confusing because there are 1 whole second between the end of the slider and the moment the note should be hitted which let plenty of time to anticipate it. Moreover the note is in the triangular flow of 1 and 2 so it's position is instictive to play.

[Hard]
00:21:900 (1) - silence the end on this spinner Yup, fixed!
00:48:981 (1) - this feels underwhelming to play with a repeat slider, use 3 circles or a slider + circle combination for the build up I stacked three notes.
01:34:809 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders like 00:05:583 (1,2) to preserve the 1/1 rhythm Fixed
02:35:392 (6) - i think you forgot a NC here Actually it was on the not beore it but yes, you're right!

[Superstar]
00:12:006 (2,1) - i would give this some more distance, would flow better Fixed.
00:43:773 (1) - not really a necessary NC here whoooops. Fixed!
01:00:438 (1,2) - this doesn't play right; the down beat is at 01:00:785 but you covered it with a repeat slider. try something like this (remember to resnap 01:00:785 (1) since it belonged to a lower sv section): I remapped this part. Fixed!
SPOILER
01:45:224 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this is simply a trap especially because the faster slider at 01:46:265 (1) can be barely seen given all these sliders that require spamming. I highly recommend you to use repeat sliders here instead, gives more leniency and allows you to place 01:46:265 (1) at a more visible location. Yeah, i removed everything, it was a little dumb from me. The difficulty of the pattern doesn't match the overall difficulty of my map at all.
01:46:613 (1,1,2,3,4) - this is rhythmically incorrect; the downbeats in the music are not being reflected in the actual mapping of the 1/3s. you can try something like this which is much more accurate to play (snapping in 1/6): No matter what i tried it always sounds weird so i used a completly different rhythm.
SPOILER
02:07:965 (1) - this slider should start at 02:08:138, since the vocals are more dominant here. So something like this: well, as the stream makes it obvious i'm not following vocals here. The sliders follows the high pitched noise and they seems to make sense for me.
SPOILER
02:41:294 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - try to perfectly center this, you can make it work by moving 02:39:732 (3) and 02:40:773 (1,2,3) more towards the left Why not.

well let me know afterwards I'll PM you as soon as kin apply his mod. Thank you very much :)
Thank you for your mod ^^
Kin
2,618 posts
Joined August 2010
Kin

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Kin's Normal]
00:24:778 - snap this green line to 00:24:851 after checking, I noticed this green line was useless, so deleted
00:39:086 (2,2) - add whistles to these repeats? you did it for 00:36:308 (2) ye, fix'd
01:52:168 (3) - i would use a rhythm like this instead, feels more fitting to the music imo: tbh ; I feel weird by add something here 01:53:036 - ; Also, I changed the pattern, but in other way
SPOILER
02:07:444 (1) - end this at 02:08:832 and start mapping at 02:10:221, since thats where the build up begins
there feels to be a lack of hitsounds after 01:57:723, mainly because the claps are not being hitsounded. You can try to utilize the whistle patterns used in Hard to make this section sound more interesting I didn't really watch'd hard diff, I hit sounded in my way :
----> 01:57:723 - 02:08:832 - whistle used as clap
----> 02:10:221 - 02:19:595 - clap used as clap
----> 02:22:720 - 02:33:830 - whistle used for melody (ok kinda like taiko feziofhid)
----> 02:33:830 - 02:44:939 - whistle for melody, clap and other for drum
SPOILER
osu file format v13

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:A+ Superstar (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Basslovers United
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Creator:rezoons
Version:Kin's Normal
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56,88,20338,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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388,268,40475,2,0,P|448:232|448:124,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
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280,140,42731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,216,43079,1,8,0:1:0:0:
372,216,43252,2,0,P|400:280|340:364,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,192,44120,12,0,46898,0:0:0:0:
40,144,49154,6,0,L|104:128,1,60
216,96,49675,6,0,P|288:88|348:104,1,120,4|2,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,156,50369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,156,50543,2,0,P|460:224|392:300,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,312,51237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,312,51411,2,0,L|268:312,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,176,52105,6,0,P|120:166|80:168,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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420,160,53320,2,0,P|432:88|352:16,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,16,54015,2,0,P|272:28|220:32,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,54362,2,0,P|152:52|128:72,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,164,54883,6,0,P|56:204|60:248,1,60
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304,276,55924,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,276,56098,2,0,P|336:184|284:96,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,56792,2,0,L|256:16,2,60,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,192,57660,6,0,L|60:192,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,284,58355,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,284,58702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,284,58875,2,0,P|344:192|304:104,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,84,59570,2,0,L|200:72,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,96,59917,2,0,L|84:84,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,324,60785,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,368,61132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,260,61479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,260,61653,2,0,P|316:228|432:256,1,180
464,304,62347,2,0,P|476:340|476:376,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,128,63215,6,0,P|455:116|491:116,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,63909,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,160,64083,2,0,B|272:108|272:108|260:40,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,212,64951,2,0,P|344:248|336:280,1,60
296,312,65298,2,0,P|259:320|228:311,1,60,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
180,300,65645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,208,65993,6,0,P|88:148|108:72,1,120
196,20,66687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,100,67034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,100,67208,2,0,L|416:92,1,120
464,92,67728,2,0,B|484:148|484:148|480:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,268,68249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,368,68770,6,0,P|272:344|204:344,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,360,69464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,360,69638,2,0,P|48:316|52:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,205,70159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,124,70506,2,0,L|220:116,1,60
260,148,70853,2,0,L|332:140,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,164,71200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,224,71547,6,0,P|492:276|480:340,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,72589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,112,72763,2,0,L|248:92,1,180
192,88,73457,2,0,L|176:16,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,260,74325,6,0,P|292:284|372:276,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,232,75019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,232,75193,2,0,P|472:152|440:100,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,76,75714,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,56,76061,2,0,B|236:76|236:76|172:72,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,112,76582,2,0,P|116:136|104:172,1,60
116,284,77102,6,0,P|184:300|244:284,1,120
316,204,77797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,96,78144,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,78318,2,0,P|340:84|428:156,1,180
448,192,79012,2,0,L|520:192,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,79880,6,0,P|272:320|176:296,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,224,80574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,224,80748,2,0,L|92:96,2,120,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81616,12,0,83004,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94114,12,0,95503,0:0:0:0:
104,192,96197,6,0,P|84:144|100:68,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,276,97239,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,176,97586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,97933,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,192,98280,2,0,P|428:140|364:20,2,180,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,99669,6,0,L|200:292,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,232,100364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,116,100711,2,0,B|132:80|156:52,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,32,101058,2,0,P|264:48|320:44,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,148,101752,2,0,P|312:132|256:136,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,192,102447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,308,102794,2,0,L|64:332,2,60,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,268,103488,5,8,0:0:0:0:
308,172,103835,2,0,P|348:220|352:288,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,140,104877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,105224,12,0,106613,0:0:0:0:
172,116,107307,6,0,L|368:136,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,108002,2,0,P|432:96|420:8,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,340,109390,6,0,L|208:332,1,60
180,288,109737,2,0,L|112:280,1,60
88,232,110085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,60,110779,6,0,P|312:48|364:60,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,88,111473,2,0,B|192:144|192:144|208:212,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,152,112168,2,0,B|328:208|328:208|312:276,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,112689,2,0,P|236:320|208:316,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,113383,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,236,113556,2,0,B|52:223|47:213|47:213|54:194|67:182|67:182|65:164|72:145|72:145|82:140|90:130,1,120
176,48,114251,2,0,P|240:48|288:80,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,114945,6,0,B|404:116|404:116|416:68,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,115640,2,0,L|400:248,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,116334,2,0,P|248:76|264:20,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,352,117723,6,0,P|420:360|492:344,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,118764,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,352,119111,2,0,P|92:360|20:344,2,120,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,120153,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,228,120500,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,124,120847,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,184,121194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,121542,2,0,P|308:320|380:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,219,122236,2,0,P|375:188|316:184,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,122930,2,0,L|120:200,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,196,123278,6,0,P|68:136|84:80,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,308,124319,2,0,B|184:288|184:288|248:292,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,188,125013,2,0,B|252:208|252:208|188:204,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,195,125708,1,2,0:0:0:0:
79,75,126055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,84,126402,5,2,0:0:0:0:
191,204,126749,2,0,B|252:208|252:208|308:188,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127444,12,4,128832,0:2:0:0:
432,192,130221,6,0,P|372:204|304:180,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,84,130916,2,0,P|316:72|384:96,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,136,131957,2,0,P|136:176|136:212,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,252,132304,2,0,B|204:264|204:264|284:264,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,264,132999,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,176,133346,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,88,133693,2,0,P|332:68|264:72,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,134387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,232,134735,2,0,L|144:308,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,352,135082,2,0,P|88:364|16:348,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,300,136123,5,8,0:0:0:0:
148,232,136470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,140,136818,2,0,P|280:124|344:140,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,212,137512,2,0,L|512:212,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,284,138206,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,200,138554,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,284,138901,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,212,139248,2,0,P|52:152|68:92,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139942,12,4,141331,1:2:0:0:
96,272,142720,6,0,P|84:216|96:152,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,143414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,84,143588,2,0,L|384:104,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,128,144282,2,0,P|432:176|428:208,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,244,144629,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,145150,6,0,L|200:368,2,60,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,240,145844,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,240,146018,2,0,P|328:156|304:120,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,146539,2,0,B|200:112|200:112|140:108,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,120,147060,2,0,P|68:152|64:196,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,236,147407,2,0,P|72:268|88:296,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,372,147928,6,0,B|224:340|224:340|292:328,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,316,148622,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,220,148969,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,220,149143,2,0,P|480:140|400:84,1,180
348,76,149837,2,0,L|332:8,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,252,150705,6,0,P|380:312|344:364,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,276,151399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,276,151573,2,0,L|132:256,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,288,152441,2,0,P|364:288|404:272,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,248,152788,2,0,P|436:212|428:176,1,60,8|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,132,153135,1,4,0:2:0:0:
312,60,153482,6,0,P|276:72|248:72,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,64,153830,2,0,P|136:64|84:108,1,120,4|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,154524,1,10,0:0:0:0:
176,180,154698,2,0,P|236:220|344:212,1,180
388,180,155392,2,0,P|392:144|392:104,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,360,156260,6,0,P|416:372|488:356,2,120,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,336,157128,2,0,B|256:316|256:316|192:316,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,316,157649,2,0,P|100:264|100:200,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,152,158169,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,152,158343,2,0,L|40:128,2,60,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,159037,5,10,0:0:0:0:
304,104,159385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,148,159732,2,0,P|436:208|420:268,1,120,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,304,160252,2,0,B|324:296|324:296|264:308|264:308|200:296,1,180
148,284,160947,2,0,P|132:308|124:340,2,60,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,144,161815,6,0,P|276:84|260:24,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,84,162509,1,10,0:0:0:0:
156,84,162683,2,0,P|132:168|152:208,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,163551,6,0,L|280:52,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,80,163898,2,0,L|392:76,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,104,164245,2,0,P|464:160|456:224,2,120,0|2|4,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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