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sjoy
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sjoy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年5月24日 at 12:04:06

Artist: 3L
Title: Endless night
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou NJK Record TOHO EURO FLASH Vol.2 Yumejikuu Th03 Kana Anaberal Yume Shoushitsu ~ Lost Dream Sun Rainbow
BPM: 148
Filesize: 9985kb
Play Time: 05:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Eternal (4.29 stars, 1366 notes)
Download: 3L - Endless night
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Last edited by sjoy , edited 34 times in total.
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
还真开了啊_(:з」∠)_pending数吓尿
Starbreeze
34 posts
Joined August 2009
Starbreeze
好好好 此等神曲果然还是做了啊
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
则呢又是app 唉老司机带我啊
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
原来你叫老司机啊~

喜欢这个~看了几遍没什么问题 打着也顺 就说一些自己的想法 可以无视


那个“3,2,1” enable countdown 不取消吗？
00:02:203 (2,3,4,1) - 这几个或许可以弄正方形
00:05:649 (5) - 觉得用个长到后面蓝线的滑条也不错 不过要改排列就算了
00:21:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里觉得可以跟音乐放XOXX的拍子用clap或者drum whistle
00:29:162 (1,2) - 在滑条中间加上whistle感觉也不错
00:42:946 (5) - 和00:43:554 (6,7,1) - 的位置对调也不错 （要改排列 无视
00:48:419 (5,6,1) - 看到都是这种NC方式 跟白线不错 但是2notes+滑条重叠滑条NC觉得看着还是有点奇怪 因为打击感觉上5,6是和1连在一起的所以用一个颜色
01:51:865 (1,3) - 觉得头可以加soft finish之后类似的地方也是
01:36:865 (7) - 是没叠好吗
03:20:446 (6,2) - 移到x192 y176如何 然后03:21:662 (3) - 到x352 y184左右


先这样啦~ :D
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
sjoy

CET 6 wrote:

原来你叫老司机啊~

喜欢这个~看了几遍没什么问题 打着也顺 就说一些自己的想法 可以无视


那个“3,2,1” enable countdown 不取消吗？ 忘了
00:02:203 (2,3,4,1) - 这几个或许可以弄正方形 改了点
00:05:649 (5) - 觉得用个长到后面蓝线的滑条也不错 不过要改排列就算了 想想
00:21:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里觉得可以跟音乐放XOXX的拍子用clap或者drum
加了点WHIS
00:29:162 (1,2) - 在滑条中间加上whistle感觉也不错 我觉得就尾巴音比较干脆点
00:42:946 (5) - 和00:43:554 (6,7,1) - 的位置对调也不错 （要改排列 无视 .
00:48:419 (5,6,1) - 看到都是这种NC方式 跟白线不错 但是2notes+滑条重叠滑条NC觉得看着还是有点奇怪 因为打击感觉上5,6是和1连在一起的所以用一个颜色 额，习惯就好
01:51:865 (1,3) - 觉得头可以加soft finish之后类似的地方也是 好 都加了
01:36:865 (7) - 是没叠好吗 叠好了
03:20:446 (6,2) - 移到x192 y176如何 然后03:21:662 (3) - 到x352 y184左右 感觉好远阿

先这样啦~ :D
好谢谢了 :D
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
接了 有没有歌词
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨,ＢＵＴ.

[General]

None.

[Eternal]

00:55:108 (1) - 我怎感覺尾端放在1/6還比較好? 后面slider藍線尾也是。
01:16:392 (2) - 看前面那一個有stack ，所以我想這可以stack 01:16:392 (2) - 頭?
01:23:689 (5) - 或許能移到(403|292)左右位置，保持間距一定的1/4滑條jump?
01:31:797 (6) - 尾端stack稍微調一下吧。
02:10:513 (4,5) - 這邊聽音樂我覺得可以來個小跳，或許這兩個可以對換下。
02:12:541 (7) - 再挑個沒疊好
02:43:351 (6) - 或許也可以疊在前一個note。
03:00:987 (5) - 是不是忘了ctrl+g?
03:07:473 (6) - 有點不太喜歡跟前面overlap到，移到(420|260)?
04:19:433 (1) - 忘了finish? (雖然有點聽不太出來)
04:50:244 (1) - ^
04:51:865 (1) - ^
04:56:730 (1) - ^
04:58:960 (3,4) - 我覺得兩個互換還比較flow.
05:11:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - 就只有這幾個是疊同一個note，或許能跟前面一樣做點排列?

GL。
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
sjoy

smallboat wrote:

嗨,ＢＵＴ.

[General]

None.

[Eternal]

00:55:108 (1) - 我怎感覺尾端放在1/6還比較好? 后面slider藍線尾也是。听起来很奇怪
01:16:392 (2) - 看前面那一個有stack ，所以我想這可以stack 01:16:392 (2) - 頭?
01:23:689 (5) - 或許能移到(403|292)左右位置，保持間距一定的1/4滑條jump?
01:31:797 (6) - 尾端stack稍微調一下吧。
02:10:513 (4,5) - 這邊聽音樂我覺得可以來個小跳，或許這兩個可以對換下。
02:12:541 (7) - 再挑個沒疊好
02:43:351 (6) - 或許也可以疊在前一個note。
03:00:987 (5) - 是不是忘了ctrl+g? 没有忘记
03:07:473 (6) - 有點不太喜歡跟前面overlap到，移到(420|260)? 改了就破坏梗了
04:19:433 (1) - 忘了finish? (雖然有點聽不太出來) FINISH感觉没什么必要
04:50:244 (1) - ^
04:51:865 (1) - ^
04:56:730 (1) - ^
04:58:960 (3,4) - 我覺得兩個互換還比較flow. 没感觉
05:11:730 (2,3,4,5,6) - 就只有這幾個是疊同一個note，或許能跟前面一樣做點排列? 这个我再想想

GL。
感谢
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao


Request by Forum PM. This song is amazing <3


  1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
  2. Comment/Minor

General
  1. Maybe it's just my personal preference but I'd darken Color2 more to have a bigger difference between Color4 and 3.
  2. Consider to add the Epilepsy Warning. The SB has got some bright color flashes. I'm still quite unsure, maybe you should ask around a bit first.
  3. 500ms Audio Lead-in would be nice but no requirement though.
  4. If the SB is still WIP just ignore but I still wanted to mention that there are unused files in case there's something messed up ;b

Eternal
  1. Not sure if I'm supposed to like Patterns like 00:43:757 (1) - as the white tick following this has a drum on it. Even though you're following vocals, having a Circle there would also be a nice variation for the intenser half starting at 00:55:108 - .
  2. 00:06:459 (1) - I don't really know what to think about this Slidershape. First of all it looks kinda uneven due to the first line being a curve. The main problem for me though is that the music is so calm and smooth that such a "harsh" Slider doesn't emphasize it well imo. I'd rather go for a curvy shape like 00:03:216 (1) - to complement the music better.
  3. 00:11:932 (3) - The Paino Note at 00:12:135 - is very loud and strong which makes it feel weird for me to be ignored. I'd at least map it with a slider tail to have an object there for the emphasis. That might be just my understanding of the music here though. (: Example
  4. 00:27:540 (5) - Having this somewhere like 35|35 would be pretty cool to continue that zigzag pattern introduced by the previous sliders and would therefore improve the flow here imo :3
  5. 00:39:703 (4,6) - Maybe it's just me but the still visible overlap here feels a bit out of the pattern's structure which makes it appear slightly untidy in my eyes. This works much better if you ask me (:
  6. 01:38:689 (5) - The Flow into the next Object doesn't really work for me here as aiming this feels pretty harsh. Aim for something like this to provide a fluent movement into 1.
  7. 01:46:189 (4,5,6,7) - Hm, these overmaps. I don't know if I really like them as the Music has more of this triplet rhythm. Nevertheless, if you want to keep the overmaps please arrange them in a more consistent way as everything feels kinda connected here. Example
  8. 02:08:487 (2) - /Comment/ - I guess this relies on personal preference, nevertheless I still want to mention it that this would flow much nice somewhere like 380|310 as it would give the player a wider range to aim the object.
  9. 02:23:791 (5) - Are you sure you want such a low DS here? o-o You've used 1,60 for the other 3/4 ones so this might be confusing. Please use 1,60 DS here as well D:
  10. 02:26:527 (2,3,4) - Similiar issue here, try to use a higher Spacing. With such a low one it can be very easily be mistaken for 1/2 :V
  11. 02:47:405 (3,4) - These feel kinda untidy due to them almost touching 02:47:000 (1,2) - which isn't that appealing for me. Therefore try to lower them a bit. Example
  12. 03:14:568 (1) - The stream would flow much smoother into this if it would be located higher since the stream's curve actually passes over into the slider giving it a smooth transition into the turn downwards.
  13. 03:30:784 (1) - I'd rather go for N:C1 with a soft finish for consistency with the other kiais (:
  14. 03:47:000 (1) - Huh, why's there such a drastical volume decrease? It doesn't really make sense with the music here imo as there's no decrease audible within the music. Therefore please use a higher Volume (+20% or so).
  15. 04:00:682 (4) - Is it just me or is there barely a sound in the music? The fairly loud circle doesn't really fit imo so consider to remove it >:
  16. 04:35:851 (2,4) - No good idea to stack a Circle with a Slider's Repeat as it's invisble for people with solid hitbursts which causes unreadability for these people. It should be unrankable as well.
  17. 05:08:081 (1) - It feels pretty weird to me to see this rather strong drum note on the red tick being ignored. This sounds and plays much more intuitive imo :3
  18. Nice Map and Flow. It needs some overall general tidying and polishing though. Nevertheless, good job! :3

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
sjoy

Mao wrote:



Request by Forum PM. This song is amazing <3


  1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
  2. Comment/Minor

General
  1. Maybe it's just my personal preference but I'd darken Color2 more to have a bigger difference between Color4 and 3.ok
  2. Consider to add the Epilepsy Warning. The SB has got some bright color flashes. I'm still quite unsure, maybe you should ask around a bit first.SB is remaking orz
  3. 500ms Audio Lead-in would be nice but no requirement though.ok
  4. If the SB is still WIP just ignore but I still wanted to mention that there are unused files in case there's something messed up ;b

Eternal
  1. Not sure if I'm supposed to like Patterns like 00:43:757 (1) - as the white tick following this has a drum on it. Even though you're following vocals, having a Circle there would also be a nice variation for the intenser half starting at 00:55:108 - .
    u r right . I decide remap these part
  2. 00:06:459 (1) - I don't really know what to think about this Slidershape. First of all it looks kinda uneven due to the first line being a curve. The main problem for me though is that the music is so calm and smooth that such a "harsh" Slider doesn't emphasize it well imo. I'd rather go for a curvy shape like 00:03:216 (1) - to complement the music better.;w; changed it
  3. 00:11:932 (3) - The Paino Note at 00:12:135 - is very loud and strong which makes it feel weird for me to be ignored. I'd at least map it with a slider tail to have an object there for the emphasis. That might be just my understanding of the music here though. (: Examplenice ! :3
  4. 00:27:540 (5) - Having this somewhere like 35|35 would be pretty cool to continue that zigzag pattern introduced by the previous sliders and would therefore improve the flow here imo :3changed
  5. 00:39:703 (4,6) - Maybe it's just me but the still visible overlap here feels a bit out of the pattern's structure which makes it appear slightly untidy in my eyes. This works much better if you ask me (:ok
  6. 01:38:689 (5) - The Flow into the next Object doesn't really work for me here as aiming this feels pretty harsh. Aim for something like this to provide a fluent movement into 1.fine for me :3
  7. 01:46:189 (4,5,6,7) - Hm, these overmaps. I don't know if I really like them as the Music has more of this triplet rhythm. Nevertheless, if you want to keep the overmaps please arrange them in a more consistent way as everything feels kinda connected here. Examplefine!
  8. 02:08:487 (2) - /Comment/ - I guess this relies on personal preference, nevertheless I still want to mention it that this would flow much nice somewhere like 380|310 as it would give the player a wider range to aim the object.
    in fact . I don't know why you hate this flow? I use mouse hit it easily ;w;
  9. 02:23:791 (5) - Are you sure you want such a low DS here? o-o You've used 1,60 for the other 3/4 ones so this might be confusing. Please use 1,60 DS here as well D:changed
  10. 02:26:527 (2,3,4) - Similiar issue here, try to use a higher Spacing. With such a low one it can be very easily be mistaken for 1/2 :Vchanged it
  11. 02:47:405 (3,4) - These feel kinda untidy due to them almost touching 02:47:000 (1,2) - which isn't that appealing for me. Therefore try to lower them a bit. Exampleok
  12. 03:14:568 (1) - The stream would flow much smoother into this if it would be located higher since the stream's curve actually passes over into the slider giving it a smooth transition into the turn downwards.changed
  13. 03:30:784 (1) - I'd rather go for N:C1 with a soft finish for consistency with the other kiais (:that's fine~
  14. 03:47:000 (1) - Huh, why's there such a drastical volume decrease? It doesn't really make sense with the music here imo as there's no decrease audible within the music. Therefore please use a higher Volume (+20% or so).in fact .I found there is a falling tone orz... changed it ;w;
  15. 04:00:682 (4) - Is it just me or is there barely a sound in the music? The fairly loud circle doesn't really fit imo so consider to remove it >:ok
  16. 04:35:851 (2,4) - No good idea to stack a Circle with a Slider's Repeat as it's invisble for people with solid hitbursts which causes unreadability for these people. It should be unrankable as well.changed
  17. 05:08:081 (1) - It feels pretty weird to me to see this rather strong drum note on the red tick being ignored. This sounds and plays much more intuitive imo :3fine changed~
  18. Nice Map and Flow. It needs some overall general tidying and polishing though. Nevertheless, good job! :3

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3
really big thanks :)
It's really useful for me to improve
I'm sorry my pending map is fulled now and will update when my pending map is not fulled :o
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
瞎了狮鹫要app了
Him3con
Him3con
01:07:067 (3,4) - 虽然不要求间距一样,,但是总会让人产生错觉 ,, 或者可以nc?
01:36:257 (4,5,6,7) - 这个地方突然跳了..建议加个绿线使clap声音大一些,听起来比较带感,也符合跳的节奏..
个人打图时候的感受
听到了这里我鼠标都是狠狠的摁..原因我也不清楚..反正到这里好爽..但是声音小以及没有快速的slider真是不爽啊.我是1.82的silder 加上1.75的绿线.那叫一个爽~
01:39:703 (6,7) - 没有音啊 .. 而且符合接下来的5.6我感到有点牵强
01:39:297 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 个人感觉这里变成1/6 连打比较符合,如果没点开就当没看到吧 - -...至少我的的那个图是这样
01:46:392 (5,6,7) - 听起来怪怪的...虽然5和6感觉有音但是觉得放上去反而不好打了
为了符合你接下来的1貌似也没什么不对 - -
01:51:459 (5,6,1) - 这三个地方让我觉得又有些怪怪的..前面一个三角 后面的5接的6真是不舒服.还有 1接的2也怪怪的...
自摸?
02:16:189 (1) - 后面这个白线明明有音啊 ...02:16:594就是这里! 当然我看了后面发现了...我的错误..我去改改
02:40:108 (6) - 这个6我感觉要符合02:39:297 (4,5) - 从4上去从5下来的感觉6也要从下上去或者是从右到左...(原谅我的形容 ..随意改啦 - -
02:44:568 (5) - 虽然这个长slider没什么挑剔的地方,
但是!但是! 长划条接了个三连后面又一堆 1/4的slider,,我觉得把5拆成两个note比较好..02:44:568 (5) - 一个02:44:973 一个我是鼠标玩家我打到这里很累了..所以恳求人性化.虽然后面马上就break - -
03:27:541 (1,2) - 间距长.时间间隔小的slider加上周围的那么多连打..
爷爷恳求你在人性一点.03:27:135 (8) - 这里加个1/2slider 听起来更加符合音乐吧 .. 而且人性 - -
03:49:230 (3,4,5) - 似乎3和4的中间可以改变一下方法?3变成03:49:230 (3,4) - 一个二连03:49:432 (5,6) - 两个1/4的slider.接接下来的03:49:838 (7,8,9,10,1) -
05:01:797 (2,3) - 这里似乎没音?当然,,,,自创那就没办法啦 - -
03:43:757 (1,4,1,4) - 往前翻了翻.. 貌似这里可以用绿线调整一下silder的速度然后从拉?虽然没啥问题但是我感觉就是前面有中间两个起伏点.但是到后面就一个点变成上升的感觉.不舒服啊 ..
------------------------------------------------------------------------ -------------------------------------------------------分割线(前面少个-)----------------------
音效听得炒鸡舒服 - -大部分还是在看SB...虽然很单调但是学到了渐变如果做到真~淡化淡出效果..很nice的一张图 ..我可能就是来凑数的?总之我摸出来的基本都是"鸡蛋里面挑骨头啦".. 你大可不必接受或者回答..但是这是我第一个摸..人家的第一次...(突然发现我喜欢上摸图了 ...
祝你rank!~ :)
Sellenite
1,092 posts
Joined September 2013
Sellenite
啊好好听啊

[Eternal]
  1. 00:11:324 (1) - 尾巴加clap
  2. 00:11:730 (2) - 改为whistle
  3. 00:12:338 (4) - 改为clap
  4. 00:12:338 (4,5) - 4放在329,19、5放在305,125 ?这样可以整齐点
  5. 00:12:946 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
  6. 00:13:757 (2) - 头改为finish
  7. 00:14:973 (2) - 尾巴加whistle，跟音乐走吧
  8. 00:18:419 (4) - 加whistle可以来个音乐递进
  9. 00:20:040 (2) - 加whistle，同跟bgm
  10. 00:19:432 (1) - 这个的尾巴的drum finish加上去实在不好听啊。。应该是放在00:20:649 (4) - 这个的头上，那个就取消吧
  11. 00:22:473 (7) - 这个whistle取消听起来比较连贯
  12. 00:32:203 (4) - 加whistle
  13. 00:35:446 (5) - 加whistle
  14. 00:41:527 (6) - 加whistle
  15. 00:49:432 (5,6,1) - 要是我的话这三个我都ctrl+g，超爽
  16. 00:52:676 (4) - 转1/2了，NC一下
  17. 00:53:284 (6) - 放在256,164？我用旋转工具弄的位置
  18. 01:08:892 (5) - 头加whistle
  19. 01:10:513 (4) - 头加whistle
  20. 01:31:189 (4) - 尾巴whistle
  21. 01:34:027 (1) - 尾巴再加whistle
  22. 01:34:635 (2) - 加whistle
  23. 01:38:081 (3) - 头加whistle
  24. 01:38:892 (1) - 头加whistle
  25. 01:39:703 (4) - 头加whistle
  26. 01:39:703 (4,5,6,7) - 4个都各自ctrl+g，然后5和6调转一下，或者不掉转也行，也是很爽的flow
    SPOILER
  27. 01:43:757 (1) - 头加whistle
  28. 01:44:973 (8) - 再加上whistle
  29. 01:45:986 (2) - whistle
  30. 01:46:189 (4) - whistle
  31. 01:47:000 (1) - 尾巴whistle
  32. 01:47:608 (2) - whistle
  33. 01:52:676 (3) - 头whistle
  34. 01:53:283 (6) - 头whistle改为clap
    后面有两段重复的我就不说了。。免得你不喜欢打我啊，我都试过了这样下比较好听，喜欢的话后面也加下吧，我看了看节奏都一样的
  35. 02:23:487 (4,5) - ctrl+g跳跳啊，然后4NC，6可以放在288,290小跳
  36. 04:00:784 (4,5) - 节奏很诡异啊。。04:00:885和04:01:088都有音，我建议改成二连节奏，你试试，比现在的滑条带过去好多了：04:00:784、04:00:885放circle，后面的那个circle带有whistle；04:01:088、04:01:189放circle，后面的那个也是带有circle
  37. 04:07:676 (5) - NC？另一段了
beautiful
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
sjoy

Sellenite wrote:

啊好好听啊

[Eternal]
  1. 00:11:324 (1) - 尾巴加clap
  2. 00:11:730 (2) - 改为whistle
  3. 00:12:338 (4) - 改为clap
  4. 00:12:338 (4,5) - 4放在329,19、5放在305,125 ?这样可以整齐点
  5. 00:12:946 (1) - 尾巴加whistle
  6. 00:13:757 (2) - 头改为finish
  7. 00:14:973 (2) - 尾巴加whistle，跟音乐走吧
  8. 00:18:419 (4) - 加whistle可以来个音乐递进
  9. 00:20:040 (2) - 加whistle，同跟bgm
  10. 00:19:432 (1) - 这个的尾巴的drum finish加上去实在不好听啊。。应该是放在00:20:649 (4) - 这个的头上，那个就取消吧
  11. 00:22:473 (7) - 这个whistle取消听起来比较连贯 我觉得这里有重音 还是加的好
  12. 00:32:203 (4) - 加whistle
  13. 00:35:446 (5) - 加whistle
  14. 00:41:527 (6) - 加whistle
  15. 00:49:432 (5,6,1) - 要是我的话这三个我都ctrl+g，超爽
  16. 00:52:676 (4) - 转1/2了，NC一下
  17. 00:53:284 (6) - 放在256,164？我用旋转工具弄的位置
  18. 01:08:892 (5) - 头加whistle
  19. 01:10:513 (4) - 头加whistle
  20. 01:31:189 (4) - 尾巴whistle
  21. 01:34:027 (1) - 尾巴再加whistle
  22. 01:34:635 (2) - 加whistle
  23. 01:38:081 (3) - 头加whistle
  24. 01:38:892 (1) - 头加whistle
  25. 01:39:703 (4) - 头加whistle
  26. 01:39:703 (4,5,6,7) - 4个都各自ctrl+g，然后5和6调转一下，或者不掉转也行，也是很爽的flow
    SPOILER
  27. 01:43:757 (1) - 头加whistle
  28. 01:44:973 (8) - 再加上whistle
  29. 01:45:986 (2) - whistle
  30. 01:46:189 (4) - whistle
  31. 01:47:000 (1) - 尾巴whistle
  32. 01:47:608 (2) - whistle
  33. 01:52:676 (3) - 头whistle
  34. 01:53:283 (6) - 头whistle改为clap
    后面有两段重复的我就不说了。。免得你不喜欢打我啊，我都试过了这样下比较好听，喜欢的话后面也加下吧，我看了看节奏都一样的
  35. 02:23:487 (4,5) - ctrl+g跳跳啊，然后4NC，6可以放在288,290小跳
  36. 04:00:784 (4,5) - 节奏很诡异啊。。04:00:885和04:01:088都有音，我建议改成二连节奏，你试试，比现在的滑条带过去好多了：04:00:784、04:00:885放circle，后面的那个circle带有whistle；04:01:088、04:01:189放circle，后面的那个也是带有circle
  37. 04:07:676 (5) - NC？另一段了
beautiful
好像都改了？ 感谢
Princess God
135 posts
Joined June 2010
Princess God
3L啊，怀念。。。
特赦三颗
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
老司机现在都不带我了 苦苦哦

General
  1. 你则呢还用白色color 之前不是有人因为这个美丽 换个颜色吧
  2. offset好像有一丢丢提前了不过好像不明显建议offset+5
map
  1. 00:05:649 (5,6) - 你这个1拍间隔antijump了所以我觉得00:08:081 (1,2) - 这两个也放进点比较统一
  2. 00:12:946 (1,2) - 弧度大一点把包好点?
  3. 01:37:676 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:32:608 - 01:32:811 - 还是感觉在这两个地方加两个圈会好点 类似的地方也是
  5. 02:04:027 (3,1) - 滑条弧度大点包好看点
  6. 02:16:797 (2) - 总感觉这种差3/4拍间隔的好坑啊.-.
  7. 03:43:757 (1,4) - 这种可以把描点拉规则点弄美观些吧...
  8. 04:09:703 (1,4) - 没包好?
  9. 感觉可以把最后那转盘去了因为最后一个圈那音效声音还挺长这样按完最后一下就结束感觉会比较有感觉=.=
美丽
l1mi
285 posts
Joined July 2011
l1mi
Only one thing ^^

01:06:257 (4,1,2) - The distance.
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
sjoy

Elaine wrote:

老司机现在都不带我了 苦苦哦

General
  1. 你则呢还用白色color 之前不是有人因为这个美丽 换个颜色吧
  2. offset好像有一丢丢提前了不过好像不明显建议offset+5
map
  1. 00:05:649 (5,6) - 你这个1拍间隔antijump了所以我觉得00:08:081 (1,2) - 这两个也放进点比较统一
  2. 00:12:946 (1,2) - 弧度大一点把包好点?
  3. 01:37:676 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:32:608 - 01:32:811 - 还是感觉在这两个地方加两个圈会好点 类似的地方也是
  5. 02:04:027 (3,1) - 滑条弧度大点包好看点
  6. 02:16:797 (2) - 总感觉这种差3/4拍间隔的好坑啊.-.
  7. 03:43:757 (1,4) - 这种可以把描点拉规则点弄美观些吧...
  8. 04:09:703 (1,4) - 没包好?
  9. 感觉可以把最后那转盘去了因为最后一个圈那音效声音还挺长这样按完最后一下就结束感觉会比较有感觉=.=
美丽
除了最后一个转圈配合SB其他都改了
thank~

l1mi wrote:

Only one thing ^^

01:06:257 (4,1,2) - The distance.
fixed
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
好听

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  • 00:38:081 (3,4,1) -间距一致，看起来好看
    00:39:500 (3) - 往右一点，这样既不好看，打起来跟前面间距不一样好像也不太舒服
    00:57:946 (5,6,7,8,1) - DS 这样不好看
    01:04:331 (5,6) - 删掉5，然后6往上放，这样听起来好点，滑条尾+四连+二连+滑条 非常蛋疼
    01:33:216 (1) - 这个1跟上下左右的note保持一样的间距
    01:33:824 (5) - 往右一点，躺在滑条里
    01:49:230 (4,6,8,9,1) - 间距，6往上一点
    02:14:973 - 这边滑条删掉，然后02:14:973 - 这里滑条尾加note，02:15:176 - 这里一个note
    02:16:594 (2) - 这个也是，可能是我不喜欢这种吧=。=听起来打起来都不太舒服
    02:28:757 (6,7,8,9) - 歪了吧._.
    03:02:405 (5,6,7,8) - 不平行吧，位置也不太舒服，8往上一点
    03:04:027 (1) - 这个跟上下的5和1保持一样距离
    03:06:460 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这里我觉得做两个四方（旋转的）会很好
    03:49:230 (3) - 尾巴whistle吧
    03:51:865 (7) - NC?
    04:45:784 (2,3,4,5) - 这四个建议这样摆 2在滑条头，3在滑条6的尾巴
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