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moph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 10 September 2015 at 9:25:31 a.m.

Artist: cillia
Title: FIRST
Tags: vocaloid niki utau kasane teto cover kyaami fort starforyou
BPM: 190
Filesize: 8548kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.73 stars, 351 notes)
  2. Easy (1.3 stars, 142 notes)
  3. Extra (5.78 stars, 769 notes)
  4. Fort's Finale (6.41 stars, 756 notes)
  5. Hard (3.26 stars, 417 notes)
  6. Insane (4.82 stars, 670 notes)
  7. Normal (2.08 stars, 254 notes)
  8. Starfort's Hyper (3.94 stars, 435 notes)
Download: cillia - FIRST
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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FIRST RANKED MAP






Mapset

Easy
Normal
Advanced
Hard
Hyper by StarForYou & Fort
Insane
Extra
Finale by Fort

Storyboard by me
Old Mapset - Prior to final full remap

♥ Big thank you to everyone here, wouldn't have been possible without you guys ♥

Modders
  1. Dubu
  2. Fort
  3. Yopkyu
  4. Kotonoha
  5. Mana
  6. neonat
  7. Pho
  8. SkinnyJommy
  9. A i k a
  10. hhkkyy
  11. Tsuchimikado
  12. Moo-Chan
  13. CelsiusLK
  14. Ichigaki
  15. Cherry Blossom
  16. Star Stream
  17. Xellie
  18. handsome
  19. Squirrel
  20. Sky Trias
  21. yurunneram
  22. Exote
  23. Artavia
  24. Kocari
  25. Mira-san
  26. Axarious
  27. HelloSCV
  28. guineaQ
  29. Lally
  30. Xgor
  31. Zeonive
  32. -Tochi
  33. Desperate-kun
  34. HorizonYay
  35. MrSergio
  36. vAsfand
  37. HabiHolic
  38. Tess
  39. Yuii-
  40. sheela901
  41. Deadlyneliel
  42. Ipas

Norb
http://puu.sh/8NICS.jpg


This is not meant to be funny, I'm just very tired (0 hours sleep) and I played your map cuz I liked it.

PLS FEEL HONOUR CUZ I NEVER PLAY AR9

Map was sex.
Topic Starter
moph

Dubu wrote:

http://puu.sh/8NICS.jpg


This is not meant to be funny, I'm just very tired (0 hours sleep) and I played your map cuz I liked it.

PLS FEEL HONOUR CUZ I NEVER PLAY AR9

Map was sex.
Thankyou! That means a lot <3
Kenneph
This map is complete garbage ;) why you ask? because you never sent me this before meanie, I found it on my own on accident while going thru the all map section.
Topic Starter
moph

Kenneph wrote:

This map is complete garbage ;) why you ask? because you never sent me this before meanie, I found it on my own on accident while going thru the all map section.
sssorrrrrry ;w;
i thought i already forced everyone to test play it xD
CodeS

This map is Pure Gold <3
so good.
Topic Starter
moph

CodeS wrote:


This map is Pure Gold <3
so good.
Thankyou! :D and nice one :D
laatikko2
möllo
Topic Starter
moph

laatikko2 wrote:

I dont remember hp drain of 7 to be that crazy
I mean like, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AdGTu-DnoEQ
Oh wow didn't realise it was that bad .____.
Time to nerf
Ciyus Miapah
Hello!, Quick mod by Fort

[Mapset]
Please add some Combo colours
some suggestion -> 4 combo colours in Normal, Hard. 6 Combo colours on Insane and Extra (since SV change makes player is confusing use combo colours)

ok done with Mapset.

[Extra]
First Try -> http://puu.sh/9AoEZ/7d1aa513a2.osr
Second try -> http://puu.sh/9AoRu/b208ea3f33.osr

this map is great! but the flow still needs some mods by other i think

00:42:986 (5) - new combo in here
01:12:037 (1,2,3) - add some sound in here please
01:28:142 (5) - new combo in here
01:59:406 (5) - ^same
02:02:563 (1,2,3) - add some sound in here

idk but it's too much random sliders and jumps, and i cant feel it right now. maybe try to sort out the bad slider just for perfect flow
and, pay attention to my replay. i play just 2x try so if i had miss or slider break maybe some mistake in that part or maybe just me cant bear with it :)

[Insane]
First try -> http://puu.sh/9ApNj/71746e9ffa.osr
Second try -> http://puu.sh/9ApZg/d5e923a816.osr

i think somebody missing in here
00:35:721 (5) - try this one http://puu.sh/9Aq5A/f52cfd8e38.jpg
00:36:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/9AqbI/65ccb05ea9.jpg + http://puu.sh/9Aqdj/8fcdb6e3f7.jpg
00:42:985 (4) - new combo this one
00:43:616 (8) - ^ same
00:45:827 (7) - ^ same or just ignore it
00:52:774 (7) - Need to be New combo
00:56:090 (6) - slider like this i think ( need some changes to other notes http://puu.sh/9Aqln/6462572502.jpg
01:07:932 (5) - new combo it, it's too long for this pattern
01:23:248 (6,7,8) - seems this slider so random try this pattern (example) http://puu.sh/9Aqv2/1c0960f95d.jpg
01:26:406 (3,4) - try this one (example) http://puu.sh/9Aqzf/f92ecc4ee2.jpg
01:34:142 (7) - new combo it
02:18:195 (7,8,9) - any good idea for this pattern?? try this maybe http://puu.sh/9AqJ4/8208058d93.jpg

ok that's it maybe some part i skipped cause the things is same like my mod, like New combo in many part, or maybe try to New combo in long stream, cause combo numbers is important thing

So, this is the last one, sorry if i had some mistakes by my mod. maybe cause it quick mod, im quickly to mod this map. see ya~
Topic Starter
moph
Fort

Fort wrote:

Hello!, Quick mod by Fort

[Mapset]
Please add some Combo colours
some suggestion -> 4 combo colours in Normal, Hard. 6 Combo colours on Insane and Extra (since SV change makes player is confusing use combo colours)
Done for Insane and Extra, will do for Normal and Hard

ok done with Mapset.

[Extra]
First Try -> http://puu.sh/9AoEZ/7d1aa513a2.osr
Second try -> http://puu.sh/9AoRu/b208ea3f33.osr

this map is great! but the flow still needs some mods by other i think

00:42:986 (5) - new combo in here done
01:12:037 (1,2,3) - add some sound in here please done
01:28:142 (5) - new combo in here done
01:59:406 (5) - ^same done
02:02:563 (1,2,3) - add some sound in here done

idk but it's too much random sliders and jumps, and i cant feel it right now. maybe try to sort out the bad slider just for perfect flow
and, pay attention to my replay. i play just 2x try so if i had miss or slider break maybe some mistake in that part or maybe just me cant bear with it :)
Remapped many part for better flow and less random, hopefully it works

[Insane]
First try -> http://puu.sh/9ApNj/71746e9ffa.osr
Second try -> http://puu.sh/9ApZg/d5e923a816.osr

i think somebody missing in here
00:35:721 (5) - try this one http://puu.sh/9Aq5A/f52cfd8e38.jpg done
00:36:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/9AqbI/65ccb05ea9.jpg + http://puu.sh/9Aqdj/8fcdb6e3f7.jpg done
00:42:985 (4) - new combo this one done
00:43:616 (8) - ^ same done
00:45:827 (7) - ^ same or just ignore it done
00:52:774 (7) - Need to be New combo done
00:56:090 (6) - slider like this i think ( need some changes to other notes http://puu.sh/9Aqln/6462572502.jpg done
01:07:932 (5) - new combo it, it's too long for this pattern done
01:23:248 (6,7,8) - seems this slider so random try this pattern (example) http://puu.sh/9Aqv2/1c0960f95d.jpg done
01:26:406 (3,4) - try this one (example) http://puu.sh/9Aqzf/f92ecc4ee2.jpg done
01:34:142 (7) - new combo it done
02:18:195 (7,8,9) - any good idea for this pattern?? try this maybe http://puu.sh/9AqJ4/8208058d93.jpg done

ok that's it maybe some part i skipped cause the things is same like my mod, like New combo in many part, or maybe try to New combo in long stream, cause combo numbers is important thing
seperated combos more
So, this is the last one, sorry if i had some mistakes by my mod. maybe cause it quick mod, im quickly to mod this map. see ya~
Thankyou :D
wildcookie
The map fits the song well, I enjoy playing this. Great work by the way, this should get ranked in no time!:)
Topic Starter
moph

wildcookie wrote:

The map fits the song well, I enjoy playing this. Great work by the way, this should get ranked in no time!:)
Thankyou! Glad you liked it ^^
Kenneph
Extra <3
Hegatrek
Hi Mate !
Wanted to test the normal map :)

Well here are my thoughs
- First, the 'clap' songs effects are really well made, it fit to the song perfectly, but in general, i feel that the notes are too sticked with other ones, you should work with all the space you got on the grid, that's what disturbed me the most, which don't mean anything else, the notes are good, the song is good, etc., just the space :3

Hope i didn't said something useless xD
Topic Starter
moph

Hegatrek wrote:

Hi Mate !
Wanted to test the normal map :)

Well here are my thoughs
- First, the 'clap' songs effects are really well made, it fit to the song perfectly, but in general, i feel that the notes are too sticked with other ones, you should work with all the space you got on the grid, that's what disturbed me the most, which don't mean anything else, the notes are good, the song is good, etc., just the space :3

Hope i didn't said something useless xD
Heelloo o/
Thankyou for your feedback! I agree with what you said about the notes being too close together, although i don't want to make it too hard since its a normal. I will try spacing things out a little, thanks again.
Yopkyu
Insane:
00:36:353 (7,8,1) -
Even out the spacing, or stack on either one.
01:25:458 (4) -
Use previous slider blanket.
02:00:511 (4) -
NC

Extra:
00:27:038 (4,5) -
Blame OCD.
Suggestion
Just rotate a tiny bit *-*
01:14:407 (1,2,3) -
These seem to look horrible, and the design doesn't feel like it belongs in this map. Needs to be more curved.
You could probably thing of something better but yea.
01:27:986 (4) -
Remove combo
01:28:142 (1) -
NC
01:51:827 (10,1) -
Could trying and make a more cuddly blanket for 10.
02:04:932 (3,4) -
Similar flaw to what was started previously.
02:11:248 (4,5,6,7) -
Have you tried putting these on an angle? (30-40CCW)
02:35:248 (1,1) -
Similar flaw to what was started previously.
02:48:827 (4,1,3) -
Same as before.
02:53:090 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
Slightly diagonal-ize these

Considering the amount of times you've used the sliders you may have already considered this, my point may be moot. I ignored these sliders in insane (I went through Extra first) although it would also seem to look better without the 'tight elbow' sliders, I'd say it stood out more in extra.

Really nice rhythm flow and unique mapping design.
Topic Starter
moph
Thankyou! o/

Yopkyu wrote:

Insane:
00:36:353 (7,8,1) - fixed
Even out the spacing, or stack on either one.
01:25:458 (4) - fixed..i think
Use previous slider blanket.
02:00:511 (4) - added
NC

Extra:
00:27:038 (4,5) - fixed
Blame OCD.
Suggestion
Just rotate a tiny bit *-*
01:14:407 (1,2,3) - fixed, using your sliders :3
These seem to look horrible, and the design doesn't feel like it belongs in this map. Needs to be more curved.
You could probably thing of something better but yea.
01:27:986 (4) - removed
Remove combo
01:28:142 (1) - added
NC
01:51:827 (10,1) - done
Could trying and make a more cuddly blanket for 10.
02:04:932 (3,4) - fixed
Similar flaw to what was started previously.
02:11:248 (4,5,6,7) - rotated by 30
Have you tried putting these on an angle? (30-40CCW)
02:35:248 (1,1) - fixed
Similar flaw to what was started previously.
02:48:827 (4,1,3) - fixed
Same as before.
02:53:090 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - rotated
Slightly diagonal-ize these

Considering the amount of times you've used the sliders you may have already considered this, my point may be moot. I ignored these sliders in insane (I went through Extra first) although it would also seem to look better without the 'tight elbow' sliders, I'd say it stood out more in extra.

Really nice rhythm flow and unique mapping design.
Ciyus Miapah
really i love this fucking map, so eargazm!!!

can i make GD?
Topic Starter
moph

Fort wrote:

really i love this fucking map, so eargazm!!!

can i make GD?
Haha yeah sure, I'll gladly accept it!
PM me what diff and anything else :)
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