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Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver.

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Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 марта 2015 г. at 14:01:43

Artist: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
Title: Crystal Dream TV Size ver.
Source: そにアニ -SUPER SONICO THE ANIMATION-
Tags: soniani nitroplus ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare first astronomical velocity r_a_r_e acceleratorrus project_railgun すーぱーそに子 富士見 鈴 綿抜 フウリ 山本 彩乃 Suzu Fujimi Furi Watanuki
BPM: 144
Filesize: 19800kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 102 notes)
  2. Insane (3,6 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Natsu's Normal (1,77 stars, 128 notes)
  4. Railgun's Normal+ (2,23 stars, 148 notes)
  5. Rare's Hard (3,17 stars, 240 notes)
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver.
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver. (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 Sonico Beatmap
I hope you will enjoy it (○ﾟε＾○)

Mapset:
[Easy] - Finished by me
[Natsu's Normal] - Finished by Natsu
[Railgun's Normal+] - Finished by Project Railgun
[Rare's Hard] - Finished by Rare
[Insane] - Finished by me
Last edited by Sonico Makaron , edited 40 times in total.
Raisa12
330 posts
Joined January 2013
Raisa12
amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~
SPOILER
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Raisa12 wrote:

amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~
SPOILER
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar
все All diffs are already occupied ><
thx for try :3
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
http://puu.sh/7fRcP.rar

sorry for be late, hope you like it :)
Nekonyan
305 posts
Joined October 2013
Nekonyan
well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c:

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
done
http://puu.sh/7iO2H.osu
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

nekoaddict wrote:

well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider nah, i dont like this rhythm
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer ok
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c: ok

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:
thx for suggestion :)
BCslav
19 posts
Joined July 2012
BCslav
I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

BCslav wrote:

I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.
nah, spinner is fine here
anyway thx for mod xD
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Hi~

Wow! I love this song!!

[General]
Move offset to 00:03:133
Edit : actually 00:01:882
I don't think this is needed
SPOILER
Oh well..

[Easy]
00:25:216 (3) - Try moving it to the right a little bit for better flow
00:30:633 (1) - I think this flows better
SPOILER
01:04:800 (2) - move this down for better flow
01:11:050 (2) - possible blanket?
01:16:050 (2) - 188 : 296 seems to provide better flow imo
01:21:883 (1) - end the spinner at 01:23:550 that way you can add hit finish too
01:23:654 (1) - if you fixed the spinner move this too (well it's obvious.. but sometimes people forget)

[Natsu's Normal]
00:46:883 (1) - move the tail to the left for better flow??
01:12:508 (3,1) - spacing?

[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3

[Insane]
00:03:966 (1) - delete NC
00:05:216 (1) - ^
00:07:716 (1) - ^
00:25:633 (5) - try to place this somewhere else? I think it's a bad flow
00:25:008 (4,1) - stack tail?
00:32:925 (4) - stack on 00:31:466 (4) ?
00:33:758 (6) - stack on 00:32:925 (4) head?
00:39:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this flows so much better..
SPOILER


00:41:258 (6) - crtl + g??
00:46:883 (1,2) - I think this is a bad flow. How about stack 00:47:508 (2) on 00:47:716 (3) head?
00:48:550 (1) - Better flow?
SPOILER
00:50:841 (7) - 00:49:800 (4,6) - if this was supposed to be blanket, might as well stack 00:50:841 (7) on 00:49:800 (4)
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - How about increasing DS to emphasize this part
01:06:258 (2) - crtl + g?
01:06:675 (3) - ^
01:07:300 (5) - Try this for better flow
SPOILER
01:12:300 (6,1) - increase DS?
01:12:716 (2) - try stacking on 01:11:675 (5) head


Very well made~~ but I thought the Insane could have been a little bit more harder considering Rare's Hard is a bit hard :3
Hope my mod helped and good luck!
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:050 (4) - It should be the same way of that 2 notes like this http://puu.sh/7kGqT.jpg but I don't like 00:06:466 (5) :( because it's break my flow, it should stop move to hit it.
  2. 00:07:508 - add note is better.
  3. 00:20:425 (6,7) - it has 1/1 break before a new set is come so please make this more flow, ex: http://puu.sh/7kGIg.jpg
  4. 00:25:841 (1) - should make it's tail stack with the previous slider's tail. for avoid the overlap.
  5. 00:50:216 (6) - more blanket.
  6. 01:01:258 (2,3,1,2,3) - looks a bit random for me, try to set it more :X
  7. 01:03:550 (7,1) - should be jump on 7 since it's a strong beat.
  8. 01:07:300 (5) - decrease a bit curve to make it looks same as (3)
[Rare]
  1. 00:32:091 (6) - move this a bit up and make (7) perfect stack.
  2. 01:07:300 (6) - can blanket more.
[Nardtzue]
  1. 00:11:883 (4) - would be great if you can make this blanket too.
  2. 00:29:591 (5) - it should be around 217|224 imo, to make it's space from (4) look balance with (3) to (4)
  3. 00:38:966 (5) - feel like distance error here.
  4. 01:13:758 (1) - hmm I don't know about this spacing.
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:133 (2) - kind of force the flow here, fix if possible.
that's all, good luck im headache
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

No Dap wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3
all no change becausei don't care stack for me.
thanks for modding~
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Fixed the spacing issues, dunno how it happen lol

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Super Sonico - Crystal Dream (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare
BeatmapID:379105
BeatmapSetID:149241

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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252,228,69800,2,0,P|288:228|312:220,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,184,70425,6,0,B|468:168|480:132|480:132|480:92,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,124,71675,2,0,B|260:92|192:132|144:108,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,80,72508,2,0,B|52:60|48:24|48:24|-4:24,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,132,73758,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,132,73966,2,0,P|256:160|296:216,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,74800,2,0,P|245:342|298:368,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,368,75425,2,0,P|413:341|450:295,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,176,76258,2,0,P|440:120|452:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,60,77091,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,60,77300,2,0,P|336:119|324:177,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,276,78133,2,0,L|216:324,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,78758,2,0,L|64:336,2,60,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,196,79591,2,0,L|224:148,2,60,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,80425,5,2,0:0:0:0:
104,288,80633,2,0,P|72:232|72:168,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,72,81466,2,0,L|188:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,36,81883,2,0,L|282:73,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,152,82508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,188,82925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,152,83341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,152,83550,6,0,L|76:200,2,60,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84070,12,0,88966,0:0:0:0:
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
fix some things~
thx for mod :3
kintyan
150 posts
Joined September 2010
kintyan
hi~

[General]
00:03:550 - red line move to 00:00:216 or 00:01:883
Letterbox during breaks - remove check

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy
00:54:800 (2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return
01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Natsu's Normal]
00:05:216 (4,5,6) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:05:841 (5) - remove
00:55:216 (3) or 00:56:050 (4) - add nc?

[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack

[Insane]
please see AIbot
SPOILER
00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108
SPOILER
00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc
00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Sheryl wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack
all no change.
thanks for modding~
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Sheryl wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy
00:54:800 (2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return
01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Insane]
please see AIbot
SPOILER
00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108
SPOILER
00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc
00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!
fix some!
thx for mod~
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.
SPOILER
00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.
SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Hard]

Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.

[Normal]
AR+1 ? seem really slow imo

00:26:675 (1) - wow umm.. I think this is stiff, you not need to put like this right? Just put normal slider instead.
00:45:633 - I think this green line is unused, and I don't see why you need to put this clap.
00:48:550 (4) - ^ slider-end

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Mintong wrote:

Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.
SPOILER
00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.
SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!
fix some!
thx for mod :3
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Mintong wrote:

[Hard]
Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.
pls gimme point out to time that you thought.
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