red = unrankable/need to fix
orange = highly recommend changing
black = suggestions

[Insane]
00:01:162 (4,5,1,2,3) - what about double triplet instead?
00:12:731 (6,1,2,3) - would avoid stacking like this, maybe use sliders instead idk
00:19:194 (1,2,3,4) - this 1/2 stacking is confusing come out of the stream and I don't like it at all sorry, i wouldn't stack; maybe do something like this
00:23:502 (2,3,4) - this looks a little messy, maybe not use anchor points on slider and just have it straight
00:24:619 (2,3) - imo, reverse 2 & 3 position on the timeline
00:37:066 (1,2,3) - flow a little questionable here
00:56:215 - hitsounds a little loud once the kiai starts, maybe use 70%
01:05:949 (5) - this slider looks kind of funny lol, that anchor point makes it curve weirdly
01:28:290 (5) - honestly, i think two sliders instead of one would convey the pitch change better as captin did in his diff

streams orzs, solid map~!

[captin's Insane]
00:01:481 (2,3) - make a triangle with 00:01:641 (3) - on the end of 00:01:002 (6) - ?
00:01:800 (4) - lol
00:06:109 (4,2) - bad overlapping imo
Some of your hitsounds are a bit loud in the beginning, I'd leave 70% volume for the kiai part but idk
00:19:194 (1,1,1,1) - Don't think these NC are needed; please don't spam ;w;
00:56:215 - As with Azer's I feel 80% is a bit loud in these kiai sections, but your call
01:05:470 (2) - don't like this, feels weird; I get you don't have a lot of room so maybe stack both of them and the NC will make it work i guess ;w;
01:24:939 (4) - NC? would be consistent with your comboing pattern i think

good, mmm

[Tari's Hard]
00:39:619 (3,1) - wouldn't stack this imo, but other than that I got nothing
00:52:066 (1,2) - oh, and bad stack here too coming out of the repeating sliders i feel there should be a bit more movement

this hard is very well designed

[Trust's Normal]
00:57:173 (2,3,4,5,1) - and 01:07:385 (2,3,4,5,1) - spacing here could be a bit better to help differentiate the 1/2 rhythm from the 1/1 more

other than that I don't really know a whole lot about normals sorry

good luck, relatively shorter mod for a good mapset