18:26 SuperMICrophone: start with insane?
18:26 SuperMICrophone: also sorry im just gonna playtest it first
18:26 ztrot: feel free
18:26 ztrot: :3
18:29 SuperMICrophone: just a preface, sorry my modding style is a bt nitpicky \:D/
18:29 ztrot: I'm not, to worried
18:30 SuperMICrophone: 00:31:904 (5) - uhh ok weird idea but maybe ctrl+g this, it plays cool and kind of stresses the rise of tone in the lyrics
18:31 ztrot: hmm lemme test
18:31 ztrot: I like
18:31 SuperMICrophone: huzzah
18:32 SuperMICrophone: 00:37:380 (8) - position nazi, but looks a bit messy. consider moving this one grid up then respacing (9)
18:33 SuperMICrophone: 00:52:857 (11,12,1,2,3,4,5) - also any reason why this little section doesnt have the hi-hat hitsound?
18:33 ztrot:
http://puu.sh/6RrQA.jpg this look good?
18:33 SuperMICrophone: yes
18:34 ztrot: lol must of missed it
18:34 ztrot: thanks
18:34 SuperMICrophone: huehue
18:34 ztrot: adjusted
18:35 SuperMICrophone: 01:10:476 (7,8,9) -
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1325865 consider a pattern like this, itll look neater and also again stress the vocals
18:36 SuperMICrophone: 01:21:904 (7) - better flow if you ctrl+g here
18:36 ztrot: adjusted
18:37 SuperMICrophone: 01:23:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and i think you missed some whistles again
18:39 ztrot: gotem
18:39 SuperMICrophone: gonna recommend some whistle placements again: 01:48:333 (7) - 01:49:761 (9) - 01:54:761 (2) - 01:55:714 (4) - 01:56:666 (7) - 01:57:857 (2) -
18:41 ztrot: adeded
18:41 ztrot: added*
18:42 SuperMICrophone: 02:12:619 (4,5,6) - hmm, this triplet doesn't make a perfect blanket anyway... i feel itd play better if you spaced them normally
http://puu.sh/6RsqU.jpg18:42 SuperMICrophone: 02:27:857 (4,5,6) - and here because copypaste
18:42 SuperMICrophone: my dads just gonna change our router and i gotta grab dinner so ill be back in like 5 or so minutes
18:42 SuperMICrophone: sorry!
18:42 SuperMICrophone: brb
18:46 ztrot: alright
19:05 SuperMICrophone: well ive returned
19:05 ztrot: nice
19:05 SuperMICrophone: well thats it for insane, onto hard
19:07 SuperMICrophone: 00:41:190 (5,1) - thats a big jump for a map that's been relatively easy so far o_o
19:07 SuperMICrophone: hold on lemme test this diff
19:10 SuperMICrophone: well the jump isnt terribly terrible
19:10 SuperMICrophone: but id recommend making the beginning of the map harder
19:10 SuperMICrophone: or at least not just 1/1 for a while
19:10 ztrot: the map gets harder as it goes
19:10 SuperMICrophone: indeed
19:10 ztrot: and at the final chrous it goes full hard
19:11 SuperMICrophone: 01:07:857 (6) - to avoid overlap consider making a triangle to the right of (5) and (7)?
19:12 SuperMICrophone: 01:11:904 (1,2,3,4) - uehuhe i can tell this was free placed, can you make a perfect circle with the polygon circle tool thing? :3
19:12 ztrot: like this for the start?
19:12 ztrot:
http://puu.sh/6RuCh.jpg19:13 SuperMICrophone: yes
19:14 SuperMICrophone: 00:34:761 (2) -
http://puu.sh/6RuHK.jpg consider adding a (3) here to
19:15 ztrot: adjusted
19:15 SuperMICrophone: okok still about that giant jump but just hear me out
19:16 SuperMICrophone:
http://puu.sh/6RuPI.jpg i moved the pattern so (5) was on (2), making a shorter jump then
http://puu.sh/6RuRd.jpg i moved (1) and (3) just a bit to make some nice stacks
19:16 SuperMICrophone: just an idea
19:17 ztrot: I don't get it
19:17 ztrot: you overlapped 5 to 2's place?
19:18 SuperMICrophone: 01:25:237 (3,4,5,6) - i like this pattern here much better than the one 00:54:761 (3,4,5,6) - here. im pretty sure you just repositioned (4) but still consider changing the first one
19:18 SuperMICrophone: uhhhh
19:18 SuperMICrophone: yes
19:18 SuperMICrophone: yes i did
19:19 ztrot: so it would only look like this?
19:19 ztrot:
http://puu.sh/6Rv3u.jpg19:19 SuperMICrophone: uhhh
19:19 SuperMICrophone: nonno (2) and (5) still exist
19:19 SuperMICrophone: i moved the trapezoid pattern, all of it, so that (5) was on the blue (2)
19:20 ztrot: but it overlaps in a triangle patter?
19:20 SuperMICrophone:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1325937 here
19:20 ztrot: pattern*
19:20 SuperMICrophone: kind of i suppose
19:20 SuperMICrophone:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132593919:21 ztrot: ohhhh
19:21 SuperMICrophone: 00:41:904 (3) - ooh theres a little cymbal here you could stress with a finish but up to you
19:21 ztrot: okay
19:22 ztrot: Adjusted
19:22 SuperMICrophone: woo
19:22 SuperMICrophone: 01:41:190 (6) - down a grid for a perfect blanket :3
19:23 SuperMICrophone: 01:53:333 (1) - i think a notes missing here
19:23 SuperMICrophone: not the one osu! selects but like the space two beats before
19:25 ztrot: Got it
19:25 SuperMICrophone: 02:09:523 (1) - consider a finish here on the start of the slider
19:25 SuperMICrophone: idk if there wasnt one there in the insane but if there wasnt i suggest one there too
19:26 ztrot: I got it on the other slider so i just missed it
19:26 SuperMICrophone: kkkkk
19:27 SuperMICrophone: 02:18:095 (5) - 1 grid up just for perfection
02:33:333 (5) - then 1 grid down here
19:28 ztrot: gotem
19:28 ztrot:
19:28 SuperMICrophone: finally, it plays fine as is but it would make me happy if you put a note here at 02:24:523 (-) -
19:30 SuperMICrophone: aaand thats it or hard o3o
19:33 ztrot: alrighty
19:34 SuperMICrophone: 00:33:809 (5,1) - more of just a warning but ooo dat jump :s
19:34 SuperMICrophone: 00:45:714 (1) - you missed a finish on the start of this slider
19:34 ztrot: my normal has large jumps
19:35 ztrot: it was to bump it to close to 3 stars
19:35 ztrot: notice my spread on the website is NHI
19:35 SuperMICrophone: oooh
19:36 SuperMICrophone: 01:29:999 (4) - could you shove this up a grid? :3 01:30:476 (5) - also this, but editors telling me that 2 grids will make it perfect
19:36 ztrot: but I assure the note density is so low thew jumps aren't as harsh
19:36 SuperMICrophone: yeah i understand
19:36 SuperMICrophone: 1 or 2 make your choice
19:37 ztrot: adjusted
19:38 SuperMICrophone: well i can confidently say thats it
19:38 SuperMICrophone: ill savelog and post :3
