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Duca - COLD BUTTERFLY

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Zweib
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Zweib
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, January 01, 2015 at 1:26:42 AM

Artist: Duca
Title: COLD BUTTERFLY
Tags: Melt opening Frill eroge Sei Shoujo ~Seido Ikusei Gakuen~
BPM: 190
Filesize: 6471kb
Play Time: 04:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.44 stars, 200 notes)
  2. Hard (3.54 stars, 581 notes)
  3. Insane (5.08 stars, 841 notes)
  4. Melt's Insane (4.53 stars, 738 notes)
  5. Normal (2.23 stars, 324 notes)
Download: Duca - COLD BUTTERFLY
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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+18 lyrics/theme warning

Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane by me
Light Insane by Melt

Ｔｈａｎｋ　ａｌｌ　ｍｏｄｄｅｒｓ　ｆｏｒ　ｓｔａｒｓ　ａｎｄ　ｈｅｌｐ，　ａｎｄ
<span style='color:#FF0000'>wcx19911123</span>
<span style='color:#FF0000'>Cherry Blossom</span>

Lyric
冷たい月明りの下
白い兎も迎えに来なくて
まだら模様のアスファルト
一匹の蝶が　凍え死んだ
そっと髪をなでて
呪縛のような悪意　囁かれて
もう何も聞こえないよ
救いの神の声　それすら届かない
穢れた血が　子宮を溶かす
百合の花が揺れてる
無垢な子供のような　夢を求めて
愛を求め焼け落ちれば　
真っ白で綺麗な灰になれるの
教えてよ
くすぶる雨空を見上げ
太陽が要らないことに気付いた
注射器入りの白昼夢
茨の香り　たちこめてた
声にならない声
今日は16歳の　誕生日で
もう何も逆らえずに
かぼそい腕に　醜い傷刻まれる
罪の重さ　無様なタトゥー
百合の花が落ちてく
光無き盲目の　少女の性（さが）
ネオン仕掛けの神様に
美しさの代償を捧げる
犯してよ
箱庭の楽園を求めていたおとぎばなし
鉄格子のケージでも　羽を気高く
穢れた血が　子宮を溶かす
百合の花が揺れてる
無垢な子供のような　夢を求めて
愛を求め　焼け落ちれば　
真っ白で綺麗な　灰になれるの
罪の重さ　無様なタトゥー
百合の花が落ちてく
光無き盲目の少女の性（さが）
ネオン仕掛けの神様に
美しさの代償を捧げる
真冬の蝶のように
どうか艶やかに
Last edited by Zweib , edited 174 times in total.
Pururut
488 posts
Joined March 2012
Pururut
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Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

XiaoP_GJ wrote:

...
完了我要美丽
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fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
wocao
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
...
- KaTZ -
- KaTZ -
這Source...
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
won't mod incomplete mapsets. By right you should've put this in IRC.

PM me when all mods are in
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
一个是我觉得break放在01:39:560比较好
还有就是感觉你那个bg粉色的combo colour可以换一下0.0
Zweib's Insane
02:34:665 (4) - 这个whistle声音感觉有点大
03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 其实我觉得这段这里用了这个，后面不妨再放一组

0star不能忍
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
hi o/
M4M via in-game PM
my modding amount is depends on drain time, 3:40 - so 3 diffs

and it's hard to find mistakes, too nazi you may ignore

[Easy]
00:51:086 (5) - head (88, 308); tail (33, 250)
01:00:560 (1) - red point (412, 324)
02:02:297 (1) - red point (472, 156)
02:49:192 (1) - head (16, 232); tail (40, 350)
03:04:192 (2) - 2nd red point (344, 44); tail (301, 44)
03:09:244 (5) - center white point (208, 112); red point (144, 52); tail (189, 52)
04:12:402 (2) - center (420, 176); tail (448 328)

[Normal]
03:10:349 (1) - 254, 118

[Hard]
03:51:559 (2) - nearly thought of the tail of (2) is like a next object (5) when using HD lol

[Insane]
why the name is not Melt's Insane? because the mapper is Zweib

[Zweib's Insane]
as usual, your Insane style can't made me FC / pass with nice acc lol
naming stuffs, Zweib is the mapper so no need to add your own name to your diff

good luck, nice song :3
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

Setsurei wrote:

hi o/
M4M via in-game PM
my modding amount is depends on drain time, 3:40 - so 3 diffs

and it's hard to find mistakes, too nazi you may ignore

[Easy]
00:51:086 (5) - head (88, 308); tail (33, 250)
01:00:560 (1) - red point (412, 324) fixed
02:02:297 (1) - red point (472, 156) fixed
02:49:192 (1) - head (16, 232); tail (40, 350) fixed
03:04:192 (2) - 2nd red point (344, 44); tail (301, 44) fixed
03:09:244 (5) - center white point (208, 112); red point (144, 52); tail (189, 52) fixed
04:12:402 (2) - center (420, 176); tail (448 328) fixed

[Normal]
03:10:349 (1) - 254, 118 fixed

[Hard]
03:51:559 (2) - nearly thought of the tail of (2) is like a next object (5) when using HD lol I moved (4) closer to the tail of (2), it might be better now

[Insane]
why the name is not Melt's Insane? because the mapper is Zweib because melt don't like Melt's Insane as diff name lol

[Zweib's Insane]
as usual, your Insane style can't made me FC / pass with nice acc lol orz
naming stuffs, Zweib is the mapper so no need to add your own name to your diff hmm if so I don't know how to distinguish my diff to his

good luck, nice song :3[/color]
Thanks for modding~!

For some nazi I didn't fixed them to the places given by you, but I did fixed the blanket and distance nazi of the whole patterns.
Feith
32 posts
Joined May 2013
Feith
hai...haii....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/zwchhpw3c1o5

What is changed :
- keeping the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of object timing
- please fix this late mod : 01:21:244 - disable the whistle :oops:
- many changed on timing & control points but I only finish it at the second Kiai Time :D

my opinion:
@ Nornal diff: - at the first spin, add the object again and then change the slide to circle because the object is not match with the music
@ Easy diff: none :)

That is all from me

thank you for requesting :D

(hey, you got nice music ;) )
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

Feith wrote:

hai...haii....
I am from modding request queue

http://www.tusfiles.net/zwchhpw3c1o5

What is changed :
- keeping the object is inside the grid because it have an impact on standard monitor size
- change little bit of object timing
- please fix this late mod : 01:21:244 - disable the whistle :oops:
- many changed on timing & control points but I only finish it at the second Kiai Time :D

my opinion:
@ Nornal diff: - at the first spin, add the object again and then change the slide to circle because the object is not match with the music
@ Easy diff: none :)

That is all from me

thank you for requesting :D

(hey, you got nice music ;) )
Thanks for modding!
Some of them are fixed.
The main purpose of green line is the usage of "normal-sliderslide.wav", so maybe you misunderstood it lol
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
m4m via Melt's pm

我来骗kd的

歌好棒啊

[General]
我是觉得把Insane改成Melt's Insane 把Zweib's Insane改成Insane比较好 不过看到上面说Melt不喜欢了。。你可以考虑一下在自己diff里多加点东西做个Ex?
在tag里加上source的罗马音? 哦不要问我我不会而且这个Source好;w;啊
总感觉一直听见子宮を溶かす是我太恶俗了吗 听到ゆりの花也想歪了啊啊啊

[Zweib]
00:54:244 (5) - ctrl+g一个?
01:16:823 (1) - ctrl+g了感觉比较好
01:22:507 (4) - ^
01:34:192 (5) - 折返去掉 01:34:349 (6) - 移动到 01:34:349 - 感觉更好点啊 不然觉得拖了半拍?
02:16:823 (3) - ctrl+g了试试?
02:24:244 (1) - 取消NC 在 02:25:034 (3) - 上NC
02:34:665 (4) - 换成一个circle比较好吧 slider的话尾巴上的音挺多余的
02:37:586 (3) - circle删了在 02:37:744 - 加上
02:39:876 (1,2) - NC的位置换一下
02:55:507 (1) - 这个地方也还是snare NC换到下个circle上?
03:05:849 (2,3) - 应该是1/6节奏的三连吧
03:28:349 (1) - spinner在03:29:613 - 这个白线上听着顺耳些
03:39:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 额 这个形状故意的么
03:49:507 (9) - 跟前面kick和snare的对比的话我觉得这两个还是换成circle比较好
03:50:139 (1) - 把这个NC去掉 在03:50:770 (6) - NC 然后再把03:51:086 (1) - NC去掉比较好吧？
04:11:613 (1) - 这个NC也不用了吧 还有的话就是觉得这里用stream来overmap不太合适 试着换成这个节奏?
SPOILER
04:15:876 (7,1) - 这两个NC的位置互换一下也是比较好 7是滑条减速也有理由放NC
04:18:876 - 这和后面两大段最好放上break 不然hr目测掉血死

[Melt]
哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味 就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle?
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的 这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了 不是太爽
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊 要不1和2stack?
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了 还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?)
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress
总觉得这个diff该三连的时候不三连不该三连了却出现了

[Hard]
00:59:297 (1) - 嗯..NC感觉没必要呢 歌词还在同一句里呢
02:24:718 (5) - ctrl+J这样换个方向的弧度感觉比较好呢
02:21:402 (1) - 同第一条
02:25:823 - 从这开始的滑条基本可以算是4个一组的感觉 前面同样的你是三个一组 后面NC接的也不一样..
03:20:613 (1) - 这おとぎ話就是一个词..然后就被分开NC了.. 算了我强迫症;w;
03:28:349 (1) - 用个Soft的sampleset?
04:26:455 (1) - 可以提前到蓝线上开始啊

[Normal]
00:54:244 (2) - 这个往前拉到白线上比较舒服啊感觉OvO 00:56:928 (2) - 同
01:07:507 (6) - 变成1/2?
02:34:033 (3) - 因为后面是静音随意把reverse去了?
03:16:981 (1) - 这一串combo是不是有点长了 03:19:034 (4) - NC?
03:45:560 (5) - 换成个circle比较好?

Easy就不摸了吧OvO ←就是懒..
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

Irie Miyuki wrote:

m4m via Melt's pm

我来骗kd的

歌好棒啊 拔作配燃曲我点233个赞

[General]
我是觉得把Insane改成Melt's Insane 把Zweib's Insane改成Insane比较好 不过看到上面说Melt不喜欢了。。你可以考虑一下在自己diff里多加点东西做个Ex? 不加了暂时先保持这样我一般不做EX那么难0 0
在tag里加上source的罗马音? 哦不要问我我不会而且这个Source好;w;啊　ok
总感觉一直听见子宮を溶かす是我太恶俗了吗 听到ゆりの花也想歪了啊啊啊 这歌词写的多好啊我找个完整版贴来w

[Zweib]
00:54:244 (5) - ctrl+g一个? 这样更难打，因为转向没变但ds突然变小了
01:16:823 (1) - ctrl+g了感觉比较好 逆一下好像更带感= =
01:22:507 (4) - ^ 好像太顺了，强调不足
01:34:192 (5) - 折返去掉 01:34:349 (6) - 移动到 01:34:349 - 感觉更好点啊 不然觉得拖了半拍? 好
02:16:823 (3) - ctrl+g了试试? 这个还真没注意到。。。不过这里改了后面就不好接了，所以我只把(2)移近了点
02:24:244 (1) - 取消NC 在 02:25:034 (3) - 上NC 好
02:34:665 (4) - 换成一个circle比较好吧 slider的话尾巴上的音挺多余的 感觉不怎么好看啊。。滑条比较有感觉还能防止节奏跟不准出100。。。于是我把尾巴彻底静音了
02:37:586 (3) - circle删了在 02:37:744 - 加上 这个音听着跟前面比较连贯一点。。。其实我有的三连下法不是压重音而是把1/2slider拆成三连
02:39:876 (1,2) - NC的位置换一下 好
02:55:507 (1) - 这个地方也还是snare NC换到下个circle上?这段一直听不明白
03:05:849 (2,3) - 应该是1/6节奏的三连吧 确实在1/4前有个1/3的吉他音，但改的话感觉有点难打
03:28:349 (1) - spinner在03:29:613 - 这个白线上听着顺耳些 好
03:39:718 (1,2,3,4,5) - 额 这个形状故意的么 orz知道不怎么好看。。这里感觉很难表达出来
03:49:507 (9) - 跟前面kick和snare的对比的话我觉得这两个还是换成circle比较好 跟钢琴音的话还是说的过去的
03:50:139 (1) - 把这个NC去掉 在03:50:770 (6) - NC 然后再把03:51:086 (1) - NC去掉比较好吧？ 好，不过最后的NC不去因为进kiai了
04:11:613 (1) - 这个NC也不用了吧 还有的话就是觉得这里用stream来overmap不太合适 试着换成这个节奏? 去掉了NC
SPOILER
04:15:876 (7,1) - 这两个NC的位置互换一下也是比较好 7是滑条减速也有理由放NC 好
04:18:876 - 这和后面两大段最好放上break 不然hr目测掉血死 我是不信的，然后亲自试下结果第一pc被打脸233。。。不过两段blank也就半管血嘛，我还是挺喜欢这感觉的

[Melt]
哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味 就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle?
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的 这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了 不是太爽
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊 要不1和2stack?
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了 还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?)
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress
总觉得这个diff该三连的时候不三连不该三连了却出现了

[Hard]
00:59:297 (1) - 嗯..NC感觉没必要呢 歌词还在同一句里呢 k
02:24:718 (5) - ctrl+J这样换个方向的弧度感觉比较好呢k
02:21:402 (1) - 同第一条 k
02:25:823 - 从这开始的滑条基本可以算是4个一组的感觉 前面同样的你是三个一组 后面NC接的也不一样.. fixed
03:20:613 (1) - 这おとぎ話就是一个词..然后就被分开NC了.. 算了我强迫症;w; 这个可以有
03:28:349 (1) - 用个Soft的sampleset? fixed
04:26:455 (1) - 可以提前到蓝线上开始啊 好

[Normal]
00:54:244 (2) - 这个往前拉到白线上比较舒服啊感觉OvO 00:56:928 (2) - 同 好
01:07:507 (6) - 变成1/2? 好像意义不是很大，懒了OvQ
02:34:033 (3) - 因为后面是静音随意把reverse去了? k
03:16:981 (1) - 这一串combo是不是有点长了 03:19:034 (4) - NC? (5)NC了
03:45:560 (5) - 换成个circle比较好? 好

Easy就不摸了吧OvO ←就是懒..
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
From 302990838.

[General]
  1. Zweib's Insane的source跟其他的不一樣
  2. Insane的combo colour跟其他diff不一樣，窩不知道這樣行不行阿
  3. 順便加個opening到tag裡唄
[Zweib's Insane]
  • 我覺得還是讓作GD的改成這種diff name吧
  1. 00:36:402 (1) - 往下移一格讓他身體完全被00:35:770 (3) - 蓋住？
  2. 00:41:613 (3) - NC下在這邊吧，我看你大部分都是下在長白線上的
  3. 00:47:455 (6) - 這裡的話我覺得用0.75x作個3/4的減速slider會很適合音樂
  4. 00:54:244 (5) - 試試頭尾相反，這樣對我來說flow和玩起來更順手些
  5. 00:59:297 (1) - 其實我感覺中間是空的可是卻有鼓聲玩起來有點詭異，osu這東西不像mania一樣可以一次跟很多音軌，所以我覺得你要這樣下的話乾脆就直接把這slider換成別的唄
  6. 01:12:560 (4) - 雖然你這裡是跟鋼琴音，不過我覺得可以跟著拉長一點到紅線或藍線直到人聲結束，紅線的音聽不太清楚就無視惹
  7. 01:14:928 (3) - 我會比較喜歡把這個排成和01:15:718 (1,2,3) - 相似的東西，這樣更順一點
  8. 01:24:086 (8,1,2) - 我的話會跟著人聲把NC下在(8)然後擺個三角形，(1)和(2)的音調差的有點多我覺得疊在一起不是那麼適合
  9. 01:29:928 (2) - 往上移讓尾巴疊在01:29:139 (4) - 吧，壓著(1)不太好看
  10. 01:32:297 (3,4,5) - (3)和(4)疊在一起，(5)擺在他們的下面會比較符合音樂，這一段給我的感覺是這樣你參考一下唄
    SPOILER
  11. 02:07:349 (3) - 考慮加NC不？ 這一段你在每個''燈''的聲音都有加了NC
  12. 02:34:665 (4) - 跟前面一樣，不過這裡鋼琴到白線就停了（題外話，不知道為什麼突然拉出這種東西）
    SPOILER
  13. 02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 基本上因為我比較偏向跟著音樂下節奏的，所以這裡我不太會放東西，不過這沒什麼關係你高興就好
  14. 02:55:507 (1) - 把NC放在(2)吧，這樣才會和02:54:244 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 保持一致
  15. 02:56:297 (6,1) - 如果你下這樣的話建議可以把(6)拉成3/4，這樣好玩些
  16. 03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 這三個我習慣順時針擺個三角形
  17. 03:49:192 (7,9) - 根據這段的規律應該在這加NC會好點
[Insane]
  • 雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
    AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190
  1. 00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音
  2. 00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的
  3. 00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂
  4. 00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的
  5. 01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌
  6. 01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
    SPOILER
  7. 01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死
  8. 01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的
  9. 01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎
  10. 02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的
  11. 02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪
  12. 02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
  13. 02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？ 雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
  14. 04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西
[Hard]
  1. 00:42:876 (1) - 我會順時針轉一點點讓00:42:402 (5,1) - 的夾角的角度大一些
  2. 01:03:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這一大串擺個形狀唄，都是直線轉一點角度感覺有點混
  3. 01:07:192 (3) - 節奏從一大串1/2變了，建議加個NC
  4. 01:13:195 - 這根綠線歪了
  5. 02:10:665 (1) - unsnap
  6. 04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:876 (1) - ～ 00:40:192 (2) - 建議這裡弄個減速唄，這段SV這麼快不太適合阿
[Easy]
  1. 02:56:612 (1) - ～ 03:16:981 (1) - 我覺得可以刪掉放break，畢竟這是easy，給新手多點時間喘口氣唄
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From 302990838.

[General]
  1. Zweib's Insane的source跟其他的不一樣
  2. Insane的combo colour跟其他diff不一樣，窩不知道這樣行不行阿
  3. 順便加個opening到tag裡唄
[Zweib's Insane]
  • 我覺得還是讓作GD的改成這種diff name吧
  1. 00:36:402 (1) - 往下移一格讓他身體完全被00:35:770 (3) - 蓋住？ ok
  2. 00:41:613 (3) - NC下在這邊吧，我看你大部分都是下在長白線上的 音乐这里变了所以。。
  3. 00:47:455 (6) - 這裡的話我覺得用0.75x作個3/4的減速slider會很適合音樂 打起来有点难受还是算了。。
  4. 00:54:244 (5) - 試試頭尾相反，這樣對我來說flow和玩起來更順手些 这边确实是这样的打起来更舒服啊因为(3)不适用甩尾flow
  5. 00:59:297 (1) - 其實我感覺中間是空的可是卻有鼓聲玩起來有點詭異，osu這東西不像mania一樣可以一次跟很多音軌，所以我覺得你要這樣下的話乾脆就直接把這slider換成別的唄 有道理，这边是图做好了加音效时才发现漏鼓。改成了折返slider
  6. 01:12:560 (4) - 雖然你這裡是跟鋼琴音，不過我覺得可以跟著拉長一點到紅線或藍線直到人聲結束，紅線的音聽不太清楚就無視惹 懒惹OvQ长滑条好难拉
  7. 01:14:928 (3) - 我會比較喜歡把這個排成和01:15:718 (1,2,3) - 相似的東西，這樣更順一點 试验过并不会很蹩手的啦，也不好改了，我稍微摆近了些
  8. 01:24:086 (8,1,2) - 我的話會跟著人聲把NC下在(8)然後擺個三角形，(1)和(2)的音調差的有點多我覺得疊在一起不是那麼適合第一次出现我就想摆简单些
  9. 01:29:928 (2) - 往上移讓尾巴疊在01:29:139 (4) - 吧，壓著(1)不太好看 移到下面去了。。其实个人挺喜欢这种半overlap（我这什么毛病orz
  10. 01:32:297 (3,4,5) - (3)和(4)疊在一起，(5)擺在他們的下面會比較符合音樂，這一段給我的感覺是這樣你參考一下唄看了好久没看懂orz。。。。这边听过好多遍感觉鼓本身挺乱的不是我排列的错orz，应该怎么都行吧？
    SPOILER
  11. 02:07:349 (3) - 考慮加NC不？ 這一段你在每個''燈''的聲音都有加了NC 没注意其实我是乱加的www嘛这样再加个的话就又多一个并非NC abuse的理由了
  12. 02:34:665 (4) - 跟前面一樣，不過這裡鋼琴到白線就停了（題外話，不知道為什麼突然拉出這種東西）
    SPOILER
  13. 02:36:086 (1,2,3) - 基本上因為我比較偏向跟著音樂下節奏的，所以這裡我不太會放東西，不過這沒什麼關係你高興就好 唔感觉前面空足够长了所以加了
  14. 02:55:507 (1) - 把NC放在(2)吧，這樣才會和02:54:244 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 保持一致 这段音乐有点乱orz
  15. 02:56:297 (6,1) - 如果你下這樣的話建議可以把(6)拉成3/4，這樣好玩些 这个好像可以有
  16. 03:02:455 (5,6,7) - 這三個我習慣順時針擺個三角形 好主意
  17. 03:49:192 (7,9) - 根據這段的規律應該在這加NC會好點
[Insane]
  • 雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
    AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190
  1. 00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音
  2. 00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的
  3. 00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂
  4. 00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的
  5. 01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌
  6. 01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
    SPOILER
  7. 01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死
  8. 01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的
  9. 01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎
  10. 02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的
  11. 02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪
  12. 02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
  13. 02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？ 雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
  14. 04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西
[Hard]
  1. 00:42:876 (1) - 我會順時針轉一點點讓00:42:402 (5,1) - 的夾角的角度大一些 好
  2. 01:03:718 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這一大串擺個形狀唄，都是直線轉一點角度感覺有點混 懒了=A=临时赶出来的diff orz
  3. 01:07:192 (3) - 節奏從一大串1/2變了，建議加個NC 唔这边好像是根据歌词看不适合NC
  4. 01:13:195 - 這根綠線歪了 fixed
  5. 02:10:665 (1) - unsnap fixed
  6. 04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲 有点难啊先不改吧w
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:876 (1) - ～ 00:40:192 (2) - 建議這裡弄個減速唄，這段SV這麼快不太適合阿诶我好像没怎么见过normal有用绿线变速的。。。先这样吧
[Easy]
  1. 02:56:612 (1) - ～ 03:16:981 (1) - 我覺得可以刪掉放break，畢竟這是easy，給新手多點時間喘口氣唄 好像太长了啊_(:3」∠)_
Thanks for modding :D
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
Irie Miyuki
哭哭哦mapping风格不是太合口味 就简单说两句吧
01:57:876 - 加个circle? 感觉这个音不太明显就没放
02:07:823 (5,1,2,3) - 前面都是跟着钢琴音按zx的 这里突然就变成slider尾是钢琴音了 不是太爽 因为这3个大概跟的是vocal的感觉，如果再有人提就改掉
02:09:086 (1,2,3) - 其实这个会不会很容易误读啊 要不1和2stack? 1拉远了
03:13:192 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同上上感觉击打节奏有点乱了 还有就是每次吉他三连开始就是应该在白线上所以还是白线起比较合适(?) 听鼓的话感觉没什么不对orz
03:28:270 (1) - 结尾用个soft的sampleset比较合适吧 fixed
04:25:349 - 这贝斯音真的不跟啊stress

Evil_Twilight
[Insane]
  • 雖然這歌略長，不過前奏還是作一下比較好
    AR+1會好點，到副歌的地方會覺得太慢，這歌又是190 fixed
  1. 00:37:192 (5) - 我的話會在這放NC去強調00:37:192 (5,6,7) - 這三個音 好
  2. 00:43:192 (2,3,4,5,1) - 考慮把這些擺成星星唄，我對這東西挺有強迫症的 感觉其实想在这样也算对称了
  3. 00:55:823 (6,1) - 感覺這兩個靠太近了，可能會讓player產生混亂 拉远了
  4. 00:58:034 (2) - 把NC下在這吧，鼓聲是從這裡加進來的 前面nc换到这了
  5. 01:13:823 (5) - 試試頭尾相反作個跳在這當作一個過門去接副歌 其实我感觉现在这样还行
  6. 01:17:455 (1,2,1) - 這三個我覺得這樣擺玩起來會順一些
    SPOILER
    我个人不太习惯这种摆法orz
  7. 01:32:139 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 滿滿遮擋人性何在，這裡我肯定會死
  8. 01:34:586 (1) - 後面其實不太需要延長進入break的時間，音樂裡也沒什麼特別的 其实是延长到一个大节开始的位置了
  9. 01:56:613 (2) - 01:58:034 (2) - 忘了clap嗎 这一段本来就没
  10. 02:13:034 (2,3,4) - 直接把(2)移到中間作對稱吧，(2)出現的時候02:11:613 (2) - 已經完全消失其實不太會去注意到他們是疊著的 现在的3,4本来就是根据2做的对称来着
  11. 02:20:455 (2,3,4,5,6) - 考慮也把這些作成對稱唄，這樣看起來也好一些，不然都是一樣的東西可是卻沒在中心感覺有點怪 其实只是为了照顾ds，不过我觉得虽然不在中线上，但是也可以算对称了
  12. 02:34:113 (1) - 我覺得和前面一樣跟著人聲會比放spin好，或著這裡改跟鋼琴也行
  13. 02:42:402 (4) - 中間加clap嗎？ 雖然這樣玩起來會感覺怪怪的
  14. 04:16:428 (1) - 結束在04:18:718 - 然後04:18:876 - 加個note吧，配合鼓聲，然後後面空著的部份有點太長阿，要不要加些東西 后面加了点note

Thanks for modding

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: duca - cold butterfly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 155928
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Cold butterfly
TitleUnicode:Cold butterfly
Artist:Duca
ArtistUnicode:Duca
Creator:Zweib
Version:Insane
Source:Seishoujo Seidoikuseigakuen
Tags:Melt opening
BeatmapID:351973
BeatmapSetID:125380

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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SliderTickRate:1

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HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
from my queue
[Easy]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. you'd better to keep consistency about NC on low diff (01:07:507 (1) - like here and 01:14:455 (1) - here etc.)
  3. 01:05:297 (3) - missed clap
  4. 02:35:928 - useless green line
  5. 03:00:402 - why didn't you add claps on sliderslides? it hears really empty
  6. 03:07:823 (3) - add clap
  7. 03:40:034 (7) - i'd rather using 1/1 slider here, there aren't any reasonable sounds for this red tick imo
  8. 03:40:507 (8,1) - and i don't prefer to add 1/2 beat rhythm as well, since it's Easy diff you'd better to delete this and add a note 03:40:665 - here instead
    example
  9. 04:07:349 (2,3,4) - this rhythm.... isn't it too hard for Easy diff?
[Normal]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. 01:04:349 (4) - delete this clap
  3. 02:16:507 (2) - this slider suddenly snapped on red tick? it's little bit weird, try moving to previouis white tick and 02:17:297 - add a note here instead
    example
  4. 02:19:033 (2) - same as above
  5. 03:04:349 (3,1) - swap NC for consistency and 03:06:560 (3) - add it on here and 03:08:139 (1) - delete this NC
[Hard]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. tick rate 2 fits best on this song
  3. 00:50:770 (1,3) - add claps on those slider starts each to match with the drum sounds in background
  4. 00:55:823 (1) - whistle on end
  5. 01:17:770 (4) - missed clap on end
  6. 01:28:192 (5,6,7) - i don't prefer to use this anti-jump in Hard diff without NC, this might cause confusion imo, try to keep DS like previous notes or just add NC on it
    example
  7. 01:56:139 (4) - add clap on end and 01:57:086 (1) - delete this for conistency
  8. 01:58:034 (4) - add clap on start
  9. 02:22:034 (6) - i think 1/1 fits bette with the vocal compared with current one
    example
  10. 02:36:086 (2) - try soft sampleset here and add NC for consistency
  11. 03:20:613 (5) - NC for consistency
  12. 04:16:349 (1) - shorten the spinner's length by previous red tick like you did on other diffs

[Insane]
  1. you NEED too add your nickname on this diff since it's made by you Melt
  2. tick rate 2 fits best on this song
  3. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  4. 00:40:823 (2) - add whistle on slider end to fit with piano sound
  5. 00:42:876 (1) - try using finish on start? it fits well with the music (and on 02:04:981 (5) - here too)
  6. 00:46:823 - why don't you add a note here? i can hear the drum sounds cleary :P, it feels too empty now
    example
  7. 00:55:981 - same suggestion with above and reason too
    example
  8. 01:00:560 (1,2) - this pattern causes confusion as 1/2 beat seriously, i highly recommed moving to other location
    example
  9. 01:05:928 (2,3,4) - stacking these objects aren't good to play imo, i prefer reversing (4) slider using ctrl g at least, or just putting it somewhere else
    example
    example2
  10. 01:17:455 (1) - delete NC, it's unnecessary
  11. 01:28:507 (1,1,1) - i think there isn't any reason to add many NCs here, since you did't use variable distances and there isn't any rhythmic changes throughout this part, it just looks like spamming NCs orz. But if you really want to keep this, pls delete NCs on 01:28:507 (1,1) - these notes at least, this works as far as you intended
  12. 01:33:718 (1,2,3) - what about moving these objects to somewhere else? following your previous circle pattern would be great
    example
  13. 01:39:560 - um why you delayed the break time? pls delete the delay it's weird
  14. 02:04:981 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency
  15. 02:13:823 (4) - try reversing this slider using ctrl g, it has better flow for playing
  16. 02:26:455 (5,1) - swap NC for consistency
  17. 02:36:086 (1,2,3) - as i said in Zweib's Insane, try soft sampleset here, hears nice
  18. 03:14:455 (1,2) - try giving more jump distances on here? like next notes
  19. 03:45:086 (2) - this part doesn't need clap sound
  20. 04:09:876 (4) - actually i expected reversed slider here :( for better flow, well but since it's kinda hard to fix it and current flow isn't very bad, up to you lol

[Zweib's Insane]
  1. i have no idea why you attached your name on diff (it doesn't make sense generaly), some people may think you made two insane diffs, so you'd better to delete your name on this diff, it's your mapset! not other's
  2. tick rate 2 fits best on this song
  3. decrease all of volumes on sliderslide (clap and whistle) by 10% each, it's little bit louder than others
  4. 00:36:402 (1) - this slider seems that you tried hard to make this but since most part of slider is hidden, how about changing the slider shape little for sure?
    example
    [img]]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1289958[/img]
  5. 00:39:560 (4) - since you placed whistles following the piano sounds, try putting it on this slider's end too
  6. 00:40:192 (1) - same suggestion with above, i also have a suggestion about it
    example
  7. 00:40:823 (2) - same whistle suggestion with 00:39:560 (4) - this
  8. 00:43:349 (3) - missed whistle on end?
  9. 00:45:876 (3) - ^
  10. 01:02:613 (5) - i think you placed finishes on all of cymbal sounds, but this part still empty even there is cymbal sound obviously, maybe a mistake?
  11. 01:04:507 (3) - this clap is inappropriate imo, i can't hear any reasonable sounds for clap here
  12. 01:18:718 (3) - add finish on slider start, same reason with before
  13. 01:24:086 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency
  14. 01:32:770 (1) - try arranging NCs like this to match with the music well (not only here, but also other same parts like 02:54:402 (2) - here and 04:13:981 (3) - here)
  15. 02:02:928 (3,4) - it seems that you followed vocal as rhythm, but this part hears kinda awkward to me, try reversing rhythm? it would be much better imo and after this, i'd rather stacking 02:03:243 (4) - this note with next 1/4 slider and delete the NC on slider (i found that there are more rhythmic issues but you don't need to fix them all, i'm just suggesting this to fix the 1/4 slider with NC, it doesn't look really good imo)
    example
  16. 02:11:139 (1) - missed finish on start
  17. 02:13:507 (5) - ^
  18. 02:14:928 (5,6) - need whistles on these?
  19. 02:18:560 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency and 02:18:086 (5) - add NC here too
  20. 02:24:560 (6) - add finish on end
  21. 02:31:664 (4) - too far from previous slider imo even not playable, i also have a suggestion
    example
  22. 02:36:086 (1,2,3) - try soft sampleset? normal hears too rough
  23. 02:40:823 (3) - add finish on start
  24. 02:56:613 (1) - another hidden slider, it's good to pro players but little bit hard to catch on first playing, try to avoid this pattern orz, anyway here's a example for you
    example
  25. 03:03:323 (2) - hmm? why you changed DS suddenly? i'm not sure it's intentional but still thinking keep DS consistently is better
  26. 03:11:613 (5) - add finish on start
  27. 03:15:718 (1) - ^
  28. 03:21:560 (8,9,10) - again orz, same reason with other suggestions
    example
  29. 03:26:613 (6) - what about NC here? for consistency and it feels kinda nice
  30. 03:33:876 (3,4) - this may cause confusion as 1/4 beat for players imo? an anti-jump on this part doesn't really needed imo
  31. 03:39:955 (4,5) - variable Streams are mostly used on long stream patterns, changing DS on short stream isn't good to play, try changing those as 1/4 slider with giving more DS or just keep DS consistently with previous notes
    example
    example2
  32. 03:40:192 (1) - and like above image, delete this NC, it's totally unnecessary
  33. 04:02:928 (3) - add finish on start


will post other diffs too it would be much better if you add some missed finishes because those are on the music, good luck anyway
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib
lol a huge project for me，I'll try to work it out asap
btw，a little bit late but congratz on joining BAT wwww
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Zweib

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue
[Easy]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. you'd better to keep consistency about NC on low diff (01:07:507 (1) - like here and 01:14:455 (1) - here etc.) fixed
  3. 01:05:297 (3) - missed clap fixed
  4. 02:35:928 - useless green line fixed
  5. 03:00:402 - why didn't you add claps on sliderslides? it hears really empty because there are some clap that cannot be followed, anyway fixed
  6. 03:07:823 (3) - add clap fixed
  7. 03:40:034 (7) - i'd rather using 1/1 slider here, there aren't any reasonable sounds for this red tick imo I can hear sound on red tick while not white tick
  8. 03:40:507 (8,1) - and i don't prefer to add 1/2 beat rhythm as well, since it's Easy diff you'd better to delete this and add a note 03:40:665 - here instead
    example
  9. 04:07:349 (2,3,4) - this rhythm.... isn't it too hard for Easy diff? yay I saw that the rhytms may be too hard to follow, thus I mainly use sliders rather than circles, I guess it's not that hard to keep combo at least
[Normal]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. 01:04:349 (4) - delete this clap fixed
  3. 02:16:507 (2) - this slider suddenly snapped on red tick? it's little bit weird, try moving to previouis white tick and 02:17:297 - add a note here instead fixed
    example
  4. 02:19:033 (2) - same as above fixed
  5. 03:04:349 (3,1) - swap NC for consistency and 03:06:560 (3) - add it on here and 03:08:139 (1) - delete this NC fixed
[Hard]
  1. same volume suggestions of the sliderslide with Insane
  2. tick rate 2 fits best on this song
  3. 00:50:770 (1,3) - add claps on those slider starts each to match with the drum sounds in background fixed
  4. 00:55:823 (1) - whistle on end fixed
  5. 01:17:770 (4) - missed clap on end fixed
  6. 01:28:192 (5,6,7) - i don't prefer to use this anti-jump in Hard diff without NC, this might cause confusion imo, try to keep DS like previous notes or just add NC on it fixed NC
    example
  7. 01:56:139 (4) - add clap on end and 01:57:086 (1) - delete this for conistency fixed
  8. 01:58:034 (4) - add clap on start fixed
  9. 02:22:034 (6) - i think 1/1 fits bette with the vocal compared with current one not really lol, I add whistle on the tail
    example
  10. 02:36:086 (2) - try soft sampleset here and add NC for consistency ok
  11. 03:20:613 (5) - NC for consistency fixed
  12. 04:16:349 (1) - shorten the spinner's length by previous red tick like you did on other diffs fixed


[Zweib's Insane]
  1. i have no idea why you attached your name on diff (it doesn't make sense generaly), some people may think you made two insane diffs, so you'd better to delete your name on this diff, it's your mapset! not other's lol changed
  2. tick rate 2 fits best on this song It sounds good but may cause combo break easier, I will consider it
  3. decrease all of volumes on sliderslide (clap and whistle) by 10% each, it's little bit louder than others I don't think so but fixed a little lol
  4. 00:36:402 (1) - this slider seems that you tried hard to make this but since most part of slider is hidden, how about changing the slider shape little for sure? I think it's not so hard to catch, and I want to create a sense of mystery xD
    example
    [img]]http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1289958[/img]
  5. 00:39:560 (4) - since you placed whistles following the piano sounds, try putting it on this slider's end too piano here is not so strong like before
  6. 00:40:192 (1) - same suggestion with above, i also have a suggestion about it ^
    example
  7. 00:40:823 (2) - same whistle suggestion with 00:39:560 (4) - this ^
  8. 00:43:349 (3) - missed whistle on end? not really
  9. 00:45:876 (3) - ^ ^
  10. 01:02:613 (5) - i think you placed finishes on all of cymbal sounds, but this part still empty even there is cymbal sound obviously, maybe a mistake? all finishes missed were fixed
  11. 01:04:507 (3) - this clap is inappropriate imo, i can't hear any reasonable sounds for clap here fixed
  12. 01:18:718 (3) - add finish on slider start, same reason with before
  13. 01:24:086 (8,1) - swap NC for consistency The NC in all my diff are consistent, here it is decided by lyric
  14. 01:32:770 (1) - try arranging NCs like this to match with the music well (not only here, but also other same parts like 02:54:402 (2) - here and 04:13:981 (3) - here) I cant get through you jpg lol, I think it's good enough
  15. 02:02:928 (3,4) - it seems that you followed vocal as rhythm, but this part hears kinda awkward to me, try reversing rhythm? it would be much better imo and after this, i'd rather stacking 02:03:243 (4) - this note with next 1/4 slider and delete the NC on slider (i found that there are more rhythmic issues but you don't need to fix them all, i'm just suggesting this to fix the 1/4 slider with NC, it doesn't look really good imo) hmm maybe the colorhax can infer the speed up? lol
    example
  16. 02:11:139 (1) - missed finish on start
  17. 02:13:507 (5) - ^
  18. 02:14:928 (5,6) - need whistles on these? I don't think so
  19. 02:18:560 (1,3) - swap NC for consistency and 02:18:086 (5) - add NC here too same as before
  20. 02:24:560 (6) - add finish on end
  21. 02:31:664 (4) - too far from previous slider imo even not playable, i also have a suggestion I just moved them closer
    example
  22. 02:36:086 (1,2,3) - try soft sampleset? normal hears too rough fixed
  23. 02:40:823 (3) - add finish on start
  24. 02:56:613 (1) - another hidden slider, it's good to pro players but little bit hard to catch on first playing, try to avoid this pattern orz, anyway here's a example for you I guess it's ok lol, it won't cause combo break on first play
    example
  25. 03:03:323 (2) - hmm? why you changed DS suddenly? i'm not sure it's intentional but still thinking keep DS consistently is better It's my mistake ;p fixed
  26. 03:11:613 (5) - add finish on start
  27. 03:15:718 (1) - ^
  28. 03:21:560 (8,9,10) - again orz, same reason with other suggestions same as before
    example
  29. 03:26:613 (6) - what about NC here? for consistency and it feels kinda nice ok
  30. 03:33:876 (3,4) - this may cause confusion as 1/4 beat for players imo? an anti-jump on this part doesn't really needed imo stacked
  31. 03:39:955 (4,5) - variable Streams are mostly used on long stream patterns, changing DS on short stream isn't good to play, try changing those as 1/4 slider with giving more DS or just keep DS consistently with previous notes hmm I want to create a sense of brake, and it's not hard imo because them are quite close
    example
    example2
  32. 03:40:192 (1) - and like above image, delete this NC, it's totally unnecessary ok
  33. 04:02:928 (3) - add finish on start


will post other diffs too it would be much better if you add some missed finishes because those are on the music, good luck anyway
Thank you for modding!~
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