1. Easy (1,54 stars, 74 notes)
2. Hard (4,64 stars, 184 notes)
3. Normal (3,19 stars, 114 notes)

1. 00:22:660 (3) and 00:42:252 (2) - It's the only time where you use 1/2 in the first 2/3 of the map and it seems weird because if you put 1/2 here there are a lot of other place where you can put one like 00:20:517, 00:18:068 etc.... So i have trouble seeing what you followed here. If it's the voice, well that's weird since most of the voice is 1/2 ad if it's the music well the music repeats itself a lot so there are also a bunch of other place where you could have used 1/2 (The most obvious being at the start 00:01:232 (1,2,3,4)) So, unless you have a good reason for this i suggest to remove them or put more 1/2 in the first 2/3 of your map.

1. 00:35:517 (1,2,1,2) and 00:56:333 (1,2,1,2) - I see the pattern you wanted to make but look at the flow between the first slider and the the note right after. Your whole map is based on smooth curves so having this when you push the player to do a movement like this feels weird and goes to the opposite of your mapping style. Why not doing something more "common" like this:
   
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1. 00:14:701 (1) - Turn it into a 1/2 beat long slider with a reverse? Because the piano plays four notes every 1/2 from 00:14:701 to 00:15:619 and they worth be played imo.
2. 00:30:619 (1,2) - This rythm felt weird while playing. Maybe try this:
   
3. On the contrary 00:35:517 (1,2) makes perfect sense but since the music is different why did you use the same rythm and pattern?

1. 00:11:640 (2) - (nazi) 2nd slider point 2 grid left.
2. 00:25:721 (1) - (nazi but less) Move the 2nd slider point to x=196 y=76 then change 00:26:640 (2) by symmetry:
   
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3. 00:29:395 (3,4,1) - they are nearly aligned so either aligne them perfectly or higher the angle between them.
4. 01:14:089 (1) - Mive it to x=424 y=120? It will improve the flow of 01:14:089 (1,2,3).

1. 00:03:221 - Add a note? You follow all the piano notes except thi one. Why?
2. 00:15:466 - ^
3. 00:25:262 - ^
4. 00:51:435 (1) - Since there are a note at 00:51:742 why not shortening the slide by 1/4 and add a note where the end of the slider was?
   
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5. 01:20:364 (5) - ^

1. 00:17:150 (4) - Move it to x=360 y=316 otherwise the blanket is bad.
2. 00:18:374 (1) - Move the 4th slider point to x=420 y=156 for a smoother curve?
3. 01:09:803 (1) - Why a slowed down slider here? When you slow down a specific slider it's because the music is quiter at this part but here it's the complete opposite. The music gain in intensity during the slider so a slow down doesn't make sense imo.

1. 01:25:721 (1) - If you look at your other diff, the finish should be at the start of the slider and not the end.

1. crop cái BG thành 1024 x 768, hiện giờ nó là 1366 x 768
2. 00:46:538 - offset ở đây tác dụng j o_O không thì tick chọn ô Inherit previous timing settings, để time section bình thường thôi

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zengdaen wrote:

good song~~fine map~~

[general]

excrescent timing in easy&normal，

who can distinguish between 43%Volume and 45%Volume？raise the volume at least 5%，and fix 00:46:538 - 60%Volume，may be more intuitive

[easy]

00:45:925 - an evident voice，add note？

00:46:538 (1,2) - it's beautiful 。but you may need avoid this overlap, considering that this never happened at other parts of your map

[normal]

00:04:905 (3) - move to （424.220）or（502.228），The majority of people like 60°or120°

00:32:456 (3) - （100.192）……^

01:05:517 (4,5,1,2) - why not make a square or prismatic

[hard]

00:04:293 (2,3,4) - Triangle ？ inaccurate……

01:07:354 (3) - why not to make it as 00:18:374 (1) -

good luck

Momochikun wrote:

Sup~

[General]
There's something wrong with the spread here. The gap between Easy and Normal is too big, When Easy have 1,5 stars. Normal allready has 3,5 stars. (The gap is 2 star o.o ), To make the spread more better. I recommend you to create new diff between them that have 2,5 - 3 stars. If you don't want. Maybe you can make the normal easier, atleast reduced it star rating into 3,25 to be nicer spread :3 I tried to make Normal easier, maybe it works

[Hard]

1. 00:03:221 - I can hear pretty loud piano sound here. It'll awkward if you skip this, because you emphasize the next piano. So i recommend you to add note here and rearrange the pattern a bit to be good. Something like this will flow nicely Nice ok,
   
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2. 00:08:578 (1) - This pattern was bear IMO. It's like you want to make blanket but it's not.Instead of this pattern, I recommend you to CTRL H this slider, make the end of this slider target perfectly to the 00:07:354 (3) - So it wil make cool jump from (4). Like this fixed
   
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3. 00:10:415 (5) - Move to 260 156 for better blanket. Don't forget to re-adjust the stack. Fixed
4. 00:14:701 (3) - Maybe move the tail to 256 164 to make blanket with (1) ? It makes slider is so ugly, sorry keep!
5. 00:17:150 (4) - Should be moved to 372 302 . 00:16:538 (2) - 322 240 00:16:844 (3) - 275 182 to be perfect diagonal between them Nope sorry, I think it seems good with current
6. 00:20:823 (1) - IMO it will be nice if this note was placed right pointed with the end of previous 1/2 slider. like 208 200 for example. Then you can make a small jump to the duplet slider. After it is 2 notes, like you know, also i didn't find what it is to have a jump
7. 00:23:272 (1) - You didn't copy it from previous 1/2 slider don't you ? use this code to replace this slider so it will make epic cyclone flow :3 What is your mean , previous slider?
   

   392,92,23272,2,0,P|329:52|242:52,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:

8. 00:24:650 (4) - Add clap at the start and Whistle on the tail of slider ok
9. There's something awkward here :
   00:26:487 - You skipped the vocal here.. Doesn't really good choice IMO. Better reduce this to 1/2 slider and add note at 00:26:640 - Fixed
   00:31:078 (2) - ^If you agree with this, then do the same to this slider. OK
   
   -----If you did not agree.. then let's make this pattern better. Move the middle point of 00:31:078 (2) - to 320 264.
   Then move 00:31:844 (3) - to 372 116, also move the tail point of (3) to 354 193 . It will make good blanket. xD.
   I more recommend you to do the first option though, it's the hardest diff on the mapset after all I made, it means I don't need to fix this, right? D
   
10. 00:34:599 (5) - Add Whistle on the head of slider, you can hear similiar sound at the music here ok
11. 00:37:966 (1) - 1 grid right for better blanket I don't like it is so curved
12. 00:39:191 (3) - If you follow this ^ then 1 grid down to this slider. Don't forget to restack (4) no
13. 00:42:864 (1) - Replace the drum-whistle on tail with soft finish better IMO Nice ><
14. 00:46:232 (2) - Try to hear this part with 25% speed. it will shown that this note have to set at 00:46:232 - (1/16) to follow the vocal properly. I don't understand your mean
15. 00:46:538 (1) - Rotate this slider 30* ? better flow to next note I like it is ---
16. 00:48:986 (1) - Whistle to the tail ok
17. 00:51:435 (1) - Whistle to the tail ^
18. 00:56:027 (7) - Try remove whistle from this note ? it sound weird imo, 00:55:874 (6,8) - is enough to emphasize the vocal I wanna perfect all, I also hear vocal is at it
19. 00:58:476 (6) - Same ^ ^
20. 01:05:517 (1) - Drum clap to the tail So NIce!
21. 01:07:354 (3,4) - Make the slidergap blanketing note 4 ? just move the 3rd point of the slider to 400 320 sorry I keep
22. 01:15:772 (6) - Nazi.. make the spacing consistent between them ok fixed
23. 01:26:129 (1) - Better to start this spinner here 01:26:180 - , Because you can hear guitar sound that pointing the spinner length here. More fit imo ok

[Normal]

1. 00:03:680 (1) - Try 280 272 for middle point ? just my opinion for flow though Wrong position ><
2. 00:27:558 (3) - Better to make this a 1/2 slider, you followed the vocal on 1/1 slider before. So you shouldn't suddenly skip the vocal for consistency ok
3. 00:46:232 (2) - Same problem as Hard xD same
4. 01:05:823 (5) - Whistle to this note where?
5. 01:09:803 (1) - Well.. this spinner was too long even if you followed the vocal. For normal diff it will make more sense if you stop the spinner here
   
6. 01:11:027 - , though i won;t complain if it on easy It is so short, sorry
7. 01:20:211 (4) - Why not make it curved symmetry as (1) to make neater pattern ? Idk, it is like you saw in my sense -w-
8. 01:26:027 - Unused green line here, remove it ok

[Easy]

1. 00:08:578 (3) - Didn't really nice how it play. How about some rainbow pattern ? like this I don't really like this way, So keep!
   
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   If you agree, then use this :3
   

   360,208,8578,2,0,P|340:204|274:220,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:25:721 (1) - Move the tail point to 320 92 for nicer blanket No it is bad balnket
3. 00:45:925 - Unnecessary green line, and many more, I won't pointing this again ok
4. 00:46:538 (1) - Ctrl H maybe ? smoother flow because (1) end will pointing right to the start of the next slider ok

GL Oyabaka :3 ~
Edit : I can't believe my modding 2 months ago was only a coordinate mod.. so suck omg ignore this and deny KD pls

Lissette wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]
00:01:232 (1) - How about if you shorten by 1/2 the slider and add a note at 00:01:691 - to follow the rhythm better (you could also use a slider from 00:01:691 - to 00:02:150 - if you do this) fixed
00:18:374 (1) - If this slider was meant to be curvy, maybe you'd want to fix those edges on the curves? sorry but It is nice in my eyes, I keep =w=
00:25:262 - feels like is missing a note right here yea I fixed previous is a slider and 3 notes afterward
00:31:538 - Same here lol yea :3
00:35:517 (1) - Try using this rhythm here http://puu.sh/6kcF9.jpg or http://puu.sh/6kcI2.jpg adding a finish at 00:35:823 - I fix my own, sorry
00:37:966 (1) - Same as above ^
00:39:803 (4) - how about if you move this note to prev blue tick? sounds a lot better to me sorry I don't follow vocal here, I want to keep perfect hitsound instead
01:20:211 (4,5) - Instead of this, try to follow the music better, doing this http://puu.sh/6kd4x.jpg ok fixed
Really nice diff<3

[Normal]
00:14:089 (4,5,1,2) - Why doing you make this a combo? lol, sorry removed -w-
01:10:415 - useless timing point deleted!
01:20:823 - same ^

[Easy]
01:20:823 - useless timing point ok

Good one~

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

[Hard]
00:24:344 (3) - I've play it many times and I keep finding this slider so awkward to play, I suggest to do this http://puu.sh/6wRJN.jpg ok
01:01:231 (1,2,3) - The layout of this makes it a bit weird to play, I suggest to make the slider 2 notes and unstack the note under the start of the slider I really don't understand your mean, so I will wait this for an example pic. I think it will be better for me :3
01:01:691 (3) - I think this should start 1/4 later so you can add the Clap sound at the start to keep the hitsound pattern (if you do add a note at 01:01:691 - ) yea fixed some parts
01:09:803 (1) - you cant lower the volume to an object until the point is not audible sorry but i think i'm following vocal, if keep normally, it will be over than now

[Normal]
01:09:956 (1) - This spinner plays kinda bad, I suggest this: make this 01:09:497 (2) - a single note and add a slider from here 01:09:803 - to 01:11:027 - and start the spinner after. fixed

[Easy]
Same suggestion as normal, but just remove one repeat to 01:09:191 (4) - and add the slider and the spinner after. ok

Call me back after fixing ~