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[EZ]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning00:14:199 (1) - I think ctrl+j flip on this note looks better going to 00:16:199 (2) -
00:16:866 (1) - maybe move the white node to the right so the curve is more noticeable?
00:26:366 (3) - I think you should extend to 00:26:866 - , might fit the vocal better. also feels more solid as a rhythm
00:55:199 (1) - I think the repeat here is unneeded, just have a slider on the vocal. the rhythm stays on the white tick so it should still be simple to understand
01:10:199 (1) - why not change this shape so the elbow is at 01:10:699 - ? like this
01:55:532 (1) - did you want a triangle here? might want to move to the left if you do
02:11:199 (3,1,2) - I think the flow here from the slider before is odd, try this?
Hitsounding00:27:532 (1) - whistle on the head? seems like a reasonable impact point
00:55:199 (1) - whistle on end? peak in vocal
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[NM]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning00:26:366 (4) - same as EZ, extend 1/2?
00:34:199 (2) - to me, this fits better rotated -10, for flow in the triangle here
00:40:199 (2) - not a fan of the stack here, since it causes an odd motion going outside the flow a bit. but, with this note 00:40:866 (1) - being so close to 00:39:532 (1) - it makes it tricky to find a new placement that works without moving a lot of things. try this, but if you want to move more things around I think you should to smooth out the 00:39:532 (1,2,3) - motion
00:59:199 (1) - move the middle point to the left more so that it has a bit more curve? with a slider this short it's not noticeable at all
01:05:866 (3,1,2,3) - looks a bit sloppy design wise, either fix up the triangles or the blanket (or both heh)
01:56:532 (3) - maybe you could add a red point in here, since the sound changes in the middle of this slider. like this?
HitsoundingD:
[HD]
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning00:26:866 - add a note? I think it fits the vocal better and leaves the rhythm a little more secure on the white tick
00:32:199 (1) - imo this would play nice if you removed repeat and then added a circle, or even another 1/2 slider with the end almost silenced
00:38:032 (3) - I think you should stack this on to 00:38:199 (1) - , since the rhythm is so odd being offbeat, this helps make it a bit easier to read
01:13:199 (2,3) - this didn't play as nice as I hoped, the swing up to 3 doesn't feel natural. I would move it down and to the left a bit
02:01:866 (4) - perhaps remove repeat and then add a circle 02:02:199 - stacked onto 02:02:366 (1) - . it feels more fitting to me
02:17:532 (4) - I really think there should be another note 02:17:866 - here since it's a big impact, so perhaps reduce this slider to 3/4, silence the end, and then add a circle?
Hitsoundingomg
[MX]
one of the best insanes I've ever played
might want to go od+1, od7 ar9 feels too easy
Placement/Rhythm/Nazi Patterning02:07:866 (3,4,5,6,7) - only thing I really have to say, was this was pointed out to me by a testplayer as feeling odd, since the angle is so wide. perhaps something like this could work, up to you though
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