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Silver Forest - Marisa ~ Spark

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Topic Starter
Alice
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 17 octobre 2009 at 15:21:04

Artist: Silver Forest
Title: Marisa Spark
Source: Touhou Soutenka
Tags: Imperishable Night Kirisame NYO
BPM: 168
Filesize: 1686kb
Play Time: 00:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,1 stars, 23 notes)
  2. Hard (4,99 stars, 65 notes)
  3. Lunatic (5 stars, 112 notes)
  4. Normal (4,3 stars, 38 notes)
Download: Silver Forest - Marisa Spark
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi.
Here's a lovely but (very) short song by Silver Forest. Hope you'll like it.
09/11 : Added storyboarded translated lyrics, thanks a lot to Inozuma who storyboarded them <33!
Update list
(thanks A LOT to people who took a look, modded or/and starred this map!)
SPOILER
07/31 Followed James2250's advices
08/01 Followed tieff's advices
08/16 Followed Mafiamaster's advices.
08/17 Followed minyeob's advices
08/18 Followed Breeze's advices
08/20 Followed Yes' advices
08/21 Followed bmin11's advices
08/21 Followed Inozuma's advices
08/22 Followed Mystearica's advices
08/24 Followed Inozuma's advices again
08/28 Followed SteRRuM's advices
08/29 Followed Alace's advices
08/29 Changed Hard's name. (thanks tieff)
09/03 Followed whymeman's advices.
09/04 Followed roxkyuubiforever's advices.
09/04 Added hard. Set previous harder diff to [Lunatic].
09/08 Fixed/changed somethings in normal, hard and lunatic. (own decisions)
09/08 Followed Bassmaster's spacing fixes on [Hard]
09/09 (lolwut) Followed xxheroxx's suggestions (slider shape, [Normal])
09/22 Followed Gabi's advice
09/22 Followed Larto's advices
09/26 Followed peppy's advices
09/28 Thanks to kino77 let me see there was a small spacing error on normal.
10/2 Modified Lunatic.
10/11 Followed Sushi971's advices on easy&normal. <3
10/16 Followed jamesleao's advice on normal.
10/17 Changed normal to get it way easier (under lots of people's request, principally under Gens's advice.)
10/17 Followed JarJarJacob's advices on normal's new combo.
James2250
general: I wouldnt have notes before offset but ok..

easy:
00:13:91 (1) - extend 1/4
00:15:51 (2) - extend to white tick
00:17:12 (3) - extend 1/2
00:21:67 (1) - start on 00:21:32 (then end when u want)

normal:
00:15:60 (1) - move 1/2 forward then extend by 1/2

hard:
00:01:94 (3) - align with the 1
00:04:98 (2) - ^
00:14:98 (5) - align directly under the slider *turn off grid snap*

need more hitsounds and veryyyy short song
but have a star :)
Topic Starter
Alice
Thanks a lot. All has been fixed&reuploaded, &another thanks for the star ^w^
About the offset, it means I must change it? Cause I'd like to keep those notes...
I'm not good at timing :(
EDIT: oh also, I know for song's shortness, but apparently there's no longer versions :?
James2250
no I doubt you will have to change the offset......unless a bat complains :P
tieff
[Easy]
00:10:78 (1) - Let's spinner start here 00:10:69 and end here 00:13:197!
00:24:536 - Remove volume.

[Normal]
All cool.
00:23:911 - Remove volume.

[Hard]
It's Insane, I think.
00:11:41 (1) - Try to place note on the timeline like in screenshot.

Then add claps:
00:11:50 (2)
00:11:76 (4)
00:12:03 (6)
00:12:30 (8)
00:12:48 (9)

Star.
Topic Starter
Alice
All's fixed. Thanks again a lot Tieff. :D
I know about insanity of Hard difficulty, but I think for now it's better like that. I though about do a real hard diff and then make this one Insane, but at least for a short map it's not too bad.. If it is really (so if lots of people complains) I'll just set it as insane, but there's lot of map like that so I think it isn't so much a pain. :o
Mafiamaster
Wow, very short song. :P

All difficulties~
Change main offset to 1,412. Timing sections shouldn't be overlapping like that in Easy
Resnap afterwards to make sure everything is on the ticks.

Easy~
Just a suggestion: 00:07:84 (1,2,3) - Maybe have these notes not obscured by the slider. Of course, you don't have to do this.~
00:21:32 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick back.

Normal~
00:22:30 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 of a tick back? Don't forget to lengthen to the white tick if you decide to do this.

Hard~
Yeah, this is more like an Insane than a Hard.
00:12:66 (9) - Move farther from 8, then make a new combo out of it
00:13:28 (1) - Spinner is too short
00:25:96 (1) - This spinner is... no good. ;_;
GabrielRKF
Haha short but fun =]
One question: Going for aproved?
*Star*
Topic Starter
Alice

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wow, very short song. :P Hah, sure. I was surprised first time I listened the album, I was thinking of a long song but it stopped so suddently! But I liked it anyway.

All difficulties~
Change main offset to 1,412. Timing sections shouldn't be overlapping like that in Easy
Resnap afterwards to make sure everything is on the ticks.
Everything was snapped as before. This offset is right. Thanks!
Easy~
Just a suggestion: 00:07:84 (1,2,3) - Maybe have these notes not obscured by the slider. Of course, you don't have to do this.~ Followed this suggestion. You're right.
00:21:32 (1) - Move 1/4 of a tick back.Fixed

Normal~
00:22:30 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 of a tick back? Don't forget to lengthen to the white tick if you decide to do this. Fixed

Hard~
Yeah, this is more like an Insane than a Hard. I will feel uncompleted if I only do "Easy-Normal-Insane (lunatic?)". It is really a pain if it's an insanish hard? Loads of maps are like that. Or I just do an easier difficulty like I planed to do before? :O
00:12:66 (9) - Move farther from 8, then make a new combo out of it Fixed
00:13:28 (1) - Spinner is too short Replaced by a note.
00:25:96 (1) - This spinner is... no good. ;_; I need to remove it? It was to do the noise at the end of the song..
Anyway, thanks a lot for your mod and for the star :D


roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Haha short but fun =]
One question: Going for aproved?
*Star*
Thanks a lot!
Approval? No, I'd like it to be ranked. Why?
minyeob
[Normal]
00:10:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think these objects are too close from 00:14:26 (1).

[Hard]
00:22:57~ 00:25:96 - Empty part on the short map? Not good
Topic Starter
Alice
Fixed normal.
About the hard, since easy&normal finished where that blank space is, I don't think it is that bad.
.. But I'm maybe just stubborn. :o
Anyway, thank you. :D
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:05:69 (2) - Move 2 Here. Adjust slider to desired length.
00:10:42 (1) - End the spinner on the nearby white tick.

[Normal]
00:08:01 (5) - Add New Combo
00:08:19 (1,1,1) - Remove New Combos

[Hard]
00:14:98 (5) - Add a Clap
00:22:48 (1) - Add a break after this?

The song is short. I'm not sure if songs this short are rankable.
Topic Starter
Alice

animask wrote:

The song is short. I'm not sure if songs this short are rankable.

They are. :?

Thanks for the advices. By the way, I prefer to leave hard's end without any break. :D
Ema Skye
A star for you =) , nice skin, nice map too =D like the hard even if i know i will never be able to achieve it xD
Breeze
hi Alice Margatroid
another short map |o|

maybe I couldn't find anything wrong :

[Easy]

  1. fine
[Normal]

  1. 00:21:947 (1,2) - they seem to unwanted, try delete them and start spinner at 00:21:524
[Hard]

  1. 00:22:572 - 00:25:876 - too empty, add something
funny map
star!
Topic Starter
Alice
Ema Skye: merci.. Et puis tu y arriveras t'en fais pas :D

Breeze: fixed. Thanks a lot! ^^ But about hard, I don't even know what can I add. There's no any true beats during this part, and no mappable noises. :cry:
WanAkira
Nice map, here's a star (^_^)/*
Yes_old
normal
i don't like all the stacks of notes ,_, the song is so short so i think you should be a littleee more creative with note placement so that it doesn't get boring n_n
00:14:26 (1) - too close
00:08:73 (1) - replace the slider with a single note and move slider so that it starts on 00:08:91 and ends 00:09:62
00:16:59 (1) - I think too hard for Normal. maybe move it so that it is in the middle?


hard
00:05:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it sounds so out of place with the song! ><~
00:25:96 (1) - kinda not necessary but if you want to keep it, then add a break before the spinner n_n


easy
00:05:69 (2) - maybe end this slider at 00:07:48 instead
00:15:51 (2) - too close to (1) i think
00:19:98 (1,2,3) - might be too hard for easy. maybee slider with a return instead? i dunno haha.
00:20:69 (4,5,6) - ^


very short song! this is a good start for your map, though. star (:
Topic Starter
Alice

Yes wrote:

hard
00:05:34 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it sounds so out of place with the song! ><~
00:25:96 (1) - kinda not necessary but if you want to keep it, then add a break before the spinner n_n
I didn't change streams: look at many maps, there's lot of useless streamings that doesn't REALLY match with the music, but at least they don't sounds too bad (but if these ones really do I'll change them)
I removed that spinner and then did a x2 speed slider. Didn't add any break. Like I already said I think it sounds more fun to wait couples of seconds without any break. But again if it's really bad I'll add one.

Anyway, I fixed everything. Thanks a lot!! :D (also I love you, you're one of that few people who didn't tell me hard is more insane than hard .◡. ♥ )
bmin11
[Normal]
00:08:55 (4,5) - A sudden jump for normal? maybe...
00:10:69 (x) - It flows better if you add a note here (my opinion, ofcourse)

[Hard]
I suggess changing this into [Insane]
00:22:84 (x) - A break, maybe?

Wow;; A short, but strong song. I like it

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