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Feint ft. Veela - The Journey

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aDiclonius
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Joined August 2012
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aDiclonius
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 24. August 2013 at 14:50:05

Artist: Feint ft. Veela
Title: The Journey
Tags: Clock Time Drum and Bass dnb K Project, Eureka Seven Ao, Little Busters, Sora No Otoshimono, Steins;Gate, The Disappearance of Haruhi Suzumiya (Movie), Hyouka, Tasogare Otome x Amnesia, Black Rock Shooter, Blood C, Dance In The Vampire Bund, K-On, Robotics;Note, Shakugana No Shana, Sword Art Online, Naruto, Mirai Nikki, The Girl Who Leapt Through TIme, Dakara Boku wa H ga Dekinai, Dantalian no Shoka, Oda Nobuna no Yabou.
BPM: 86,01
Filesize: 20725kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3,23 stars, 188 notes)
  2. Hard (4,57 stars, 241 notes)
  3. Normal (3,84 stars, 208 notes)
Download: Feint ft. Veela - The Journey
Download: Feint ft. Veela - The Journey (no video)
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This is my 3rd beatmap and i hope you enjoy it :)
Awesome skin by Katty Pie <3

Source of the AMV : http://akross.ru/index.cgi?act=video;id=3345
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Yo! Just throwing some opinions after testplay and a quick check

General
spam of random animu in tags makes me mad. i'd remove all these animu because it has nothing to do with the song and may disattract people
Ahhhhh, move fyour skin files DIRECTLY <osu/songs/<your_map's_name> to the map's folder.Otherwise Skin won't work properly. :<
Probably, the BPM should be doubled.Find someone to confirm it, but BPM 172,02. However it may be unnecessary to double it. :<

Hard
It's too easy. :< HUGE circles, slow SV. Song is not THAT relaxing! I've expected something harder :<Also, there're no any jumps and it makes the diff pretty boring to be THE HARDEST diff.

As for Easy and Normal they have almost the same Slider Velocity, Diff settings and rhythm. Basically these two diffs are almost the same, and it makes me sad.

Try to work on it more and feel free to call me for mod when you're done
rezoons
rezoons
[General]
  1. You use a AMV? That's weird. I don't know if it's allowed to use an AMV as a vidéo background since the video isn't related to the song. I remember playing a map like this once but the AMV is a joke so i think you should try to confirm that you're allowed to use a AMV.
  2. You should double the BPM because it doesn't sound at all like a <90BPM song. When you have a SV of 1.4 in your Easy. There is a problem.
  3. Too many useless tag. You can remove nearly all of them.
Difficulty
  1. Easy and Normal has the same AR and OD. That's weird and is a serious difficulty spread issue. AR-1 and 0D-1 or more for the Easy and AR+1 or more for the Normal.
  2. And also Ar-1~2 for your Hard because AR8 is too high compared to the difficulty of the map.
Consistency
  1. 02:39:853 to 02:42:643 - There is more notes/sliders in your Easy and Normal than in your Hard. Why? It doesn't make any sense!
[Easy]
  1. I have a big problem here. It's the fact that your Easy looks a lot like a Normal. You should try to make it easier if you want to rank it. 3.23 star is also a little bit too high. Look at all the Ranked Easy and see the difference. Your spacing is too high and there is too many note/slider.
  2. 00:25:915 (1,1) - In an Easy diff the end of the slider should be 2 beat apart from the following note. (But if you double the BPM it will be automatically fixed)
  3. 01:11:956 (1) - This spinner is a little bit short. Besides, you can start it 1/2 beat earlier and it follows the song better.
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 00:11:963 (1) - Move the end point 1 grid right for better blanket.
  2. 00:21:032 (8) - Move the second slider point 2 grid right and 1 grid up for better blanket.
  3. 02:32:877 (3,1) - Try avoiding this ugly overlap.
NC
  1. In an Easy the combo length barely goes higher than 5~6. Here it's the opposite. Why? You should make your combo much shorter. Listen to the song and you'll hear that you can add a combo at 00:09:173 (5) - 00:14:754 (6) - 00:20:334 (6) etc...
Hitsound
  1. There is no hitsounds in the first half of your diff (and at the end) and that's UNRANKABLE!
    Maybe i can help you a little with this. You have only used whistle and put them every beat and... that's it.
    There are a lot of place where you can put finish like: 00:28:705 (1) (the head) 00:34:286 (1) (the head) 00:42:657 (1) or 00:51:028 (6) etc....
    Listen also to every red tick (which should be white tick if you double the BPM) starting from 00:28:705 and you'll hear clap in the music.
    There is also the piano who does some note that you can whistle.
    This is just some suggestion that apply for all diff but you have to do more complete hitsound than what you did.
[Normal]
  1. This diff you like your Easy.... But since your Easy has the difficulty of a normal so it's good. But the difficulty is slightly higher than your easy and that's not enough. But no need to increase the difficulty if the Normal. You should decrease the difficulty of the Easy.
  2. 00:51:028 - This break is actually longer than in your Easy diff. Another thing that makes no sense.
  3. 01:20:327 (4) - Remove this note? The piano don't play here nor did the vocal so it follows nothing.
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 00:25:915 (1) - CTRL+G for a better flow?
  2. 00:43:704 (2,1) - Really non aesthetical. Remove the overlap and if you can do a blanket that's better. (And fix the one at 00:43:704 (2,3) too)
  3. 01:14:747 (3,4) - Spacing issue (x0.7 instead of x1.2)
  4. 01:17:188 (2,1) - Overlap
  5. 01:35:674 (1) - End point 1 grid up for better blanket.
  6. 01:37:070 (4) - End point 1 grid left for better blanket.
  7. 02:00:439 (5,1) - Spacing issue (x1.0 instead of x1.2)
  8. 02:02:183 (3,4) - ^
  9. 02:09:857 (3) - Really bad blanket.
  10. 02:35:319 (2) - 2nd slider point 1 grid up for better blanket.
NC
  1. Here, your NC are exactly what i would expect for an Easy. But in a Normal it's a little bit too short. You can let it like this if you increase the HP drain rate but please do the same thing in the Easy. It makes no sense otherwise.
Hitsound
  1. C.f. Easy diff.
[Hard]
  1. There are a lot of place like 00:09:173 (1,2,3) or 00:20:334 (1,2,3,4) when there is more note in your Easy/Normal diff than in your Hard diff and that weird and not very consistent.
  2. 01:10:561 (1) - Finish it 1 beat later. It fits the song better imo.
Placement/Aesthetic
  1. 00:36:030 (4,1) - No. This overlap doesn't work. Remove it.
  2. 01:14:049 (2,3) - Why is the spacing this low here?
  3. 01:47:534 (2,4) - Stack them properly.
  4. 02:00:788 (1,2,3) - Overlap.
  5. 02:03:578 (1,2,3) - The pattern will be much better looking if 2 is actually at the center of 1 and 3.
NC
  1. Too short for a Hard. In this case you shoud have the NC of your Easy.
Hitsound
  1. C.f. Easy

The placement in all your diff is good (even if some blanket aren't good) but you have a huge problem in the difficulty of your map. Easy is way too Hard and Hard is way too Easy. If i had to judge the difficulty of your map i would said Normal/Normal/Normal+ and this diff spread is unrankable. Sorry :o.
Anyway, good luck!
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