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Aoi Yuki, Ai Matayoshi & Momoko Saito - Taisetsu na Basho

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samsam2233
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月4日 at 17:19:20

Artist: Aoi Yuki, Ai Matayoshi & Momoko Saito
Title: Taisetsu na Basho
Source: A-channel
Tags: Taisetsu na Basho love girls a-channel Hard
BPM: 136
Filesize: 13327kb
Play Time: 05:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Seasons (3.28 stars, 804 notes)
Download: Aoi Yuki, Ai Matayoshi & Momoko Saito - Taisetsu na Basho
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虽然这歌很静但是全程5%也太过了点吧._. 建议30~40 副歌部分再提高一点
huu
Hi.
From #modreqs.

Metadata & general stuff:
Romanised Artist is "Yuuki Aoi, Matayoshi Ai & Saitou Momoko".

You should replace the MP3, because the current one you have is too large, according to AIMod.

Keep in mind that these mods are my opinion. You don't have to agree with everything. Make your own judgement on what is right & what is wrong.

Insane:

00:04:430 (2) - You shouldn't hide this note under the slider end. Makes it confusing to read. Move it to x:456 y:216, so it'd overlaps the previous "6" note.
00:04:651 (3,4) - Move 4 away from 3. Also confusing to read.
00:06:415 (4,5) - Separate these from 1, 2 and 3. Something like this would be better.
00:11:489 (2) - Again, don't hide notes under sliders.
00:16:342 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
00:22:739 (5,6,7) - Spread these out, them being stacked like this makes it confusing to read, especially if it's under the slider end.
00:31:783 (9) - Add New Combo here.
01:11:048 - Kiai time should start here.
01:49:871 - Kiai time should end here.
01:48:107 (1,2) - Remove New Combo from 1, add New Combo at 2.
01:56:489 (1,2) - ^
01:58:254 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
02:02:224 (1) - Change this to this.
02:11:048 (1,1,2,3) - Overmapped in my opinion. I recommend changing it to this.
02:11:930 (1) - Slider end doesn't match note 2. Then again, I'd recommend moving it away from 2 entirely. Like I said, don't hide notes under slider ends, it's confusing to read like that.
02:14:357 (3) - Doesn't fit the song. You should probably change this. My suggestion.
02:15:901 (2,4,6) - Once again, don't hide notes under sliders.
02:32:224 - Second Kiai time should start here.
02:44:908 (5) - This doesn't fit the song at all. You should change this to something else.
02:56:930 (2) - This repeat slider also doesn't fit the song. The timing should be like this, but definitely not the way you made it.
02:59:798 (1) - Replace this with a circle.
03:11:048 - Second Kiai time should end here.
04:08:401 - One of the inherited points here should be removed.
04:11:048 - Remove this inherited point and make it so both sliders are the same velocity.
04:14:577 - Third Kiai time should start here.
04:51:415 - Why is this not mapped?
04:53:401 - Third Kiai time should end here.
04:56:930 (2) - Yup, as previously, don't hide this note under the slider end.
AllieBork
[Insane]
00:04:430 (2,3) - deceptive spacing, but it fits the song. can keep based on preference
00:05:092 (4,1,2) - spacing doesn't fit the song here, though. There's several more places where this happens.
00:10:827 (4,1) - Random jump
00:11:489 (2,3,4) - same spacing, despite different timing
00:16:121 (1) - move this so the spacing becomes even
00:17:004 (3,1) - again a random jump
00:19:651 (4,5) - underspaced
00:20:754 (1,2,1) - nearly same spacing despite different timing
00:23:180 (7,1) - random jump
00:24:724 (1,2) - ctrl + g these two notes
00:27:151 (2) - this note has no counterpart in the song. This makes for the entire pattern here to be a bit weird and off. I'd remap it completely.

I can go on, but it's mostly these same type of patterns that occur again and again, and they disrupt the flow, so I won't go into the specifics, since you should have a good idea of what they are based on what I have posted.

Now, some inconsistencies with the song.
firstly:
01:11:048 (1,2,3) - I like how the spacing picks up here, which perfectly reflects how the song changes. I recommend applying kiai here too, for the chorus. However, this should be continued. Keep the spacing higher for the part following. At
01:18:107 (1,2,3,4) - and later
01:19:430 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing basically goes down again, even though it shouldn't.

Some more examples of the earlier inconsistencies:
01:23:842 (2,3,4,5) - make this buildup come at a different angle, so that note (2) doesn't have such a low spacing.
01:30:459 (1) - again spacing.

01:49:871 (2) - should start a new combo here. Throughout the entire map there's some odd new combos, this is an example.

Also, for this entire section of music, lower the spacing and generally have it less intense, because the music is very calm here.
Do that, until here:
01:56:930 (2) - which by the way, also needs a new combo.
Generally, try to make sure your combos start at the start of a "phrase" of music, or on the White ticks, particularly the start of a bar(biggest white tick).

01:58:033 (1,1,1) - this pattern is repeated but the NC pattern isn't, at
01:59:798 (4,5,6) - so change one to fit the other.
02:05:754 (8) - A new combo would fit here because it gets so long

02:44:908 (5) - this little slider seems off.

02:46:342 (3) - again, spacing and mapping should reflect the music. Also consider using kiai here again, it's the chorus.

02:56:489 (1) - spacing off with the timing.
03:23:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - see above.

Hopefully these examples should be enough. I believe there's some more slower sections and maybe another chorus later, just apply what I've said before.
Good luck with your mapping =)
Topic Starter
samsam2233

-Vert- wrote:

Hi.
From #modreqs.

Metadata & general stuff:
Romanised Artist is "Yuuki Aoi, Matayoshi Ai & Saitou Momoko".

You should replace the MP3, because the current one you have is too large, according to AIMod.

Keep in mind that these mods are my opinion. You don't have to agree with everything. Make your own judgement on what is right & what is wrong.

Insane:

00:04:430 (2) - You shouldn't hide this note under the slider end. Makes it confusing to read. Move it to x:456 y:216,

-Vert- wrote:

Hi.
From #modreqs.

[notice]Metadata & general stuff:
Romanised Artist is "Yuuki Aoi, Matayoshi Ai & Saitou Momoko".

You should replace the MP3, because the current one you have is too large, according to AIMod.

Keep in mind that these mods are my opinion. You don't have to agree with everything. Make your own judgement on what is right & what is wrong.

Insane:

00:04:430 (2) - You shouldn't hide this note under the slider end. Makes it confusing to read. Move it to x:456 y:216, so it'd overlaps the previous "6" note.
00:04:651 (3,4) - Move 4 away from 3. Also confusing to read.
00:06:415 (4,5) - Separate these from 1, 2 and 3. Something like this would be better.
00:11:489 (2) - Again, don't hide notes under sliders.
00:16:342 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
00:22:739 (5,6,7) - Spread these out, them being stacked like this makes it confusing to read, especially if it's under the slider end.
00:31:783 (9) - Add New Combo here.
01:11:048 - Kiai time should start here.
01:49:871 - Kiai time should end here.
01:48:107 (1,2) - Remove New Combo from 1, add New Combo at 2.
01:56:489 (1,2) - ^
01:58:254 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
02:02:224 (1) - Change this to this.
02:11:048 (1,1,2,3) - Overmapped in my opinion. I recommend changing it to this.
02:11:930 (1) - Slider end doesn't match note 2. Then again, I'd recommend moving it away from 2 entirely. Like I said, don't hide notes under slider ends, it's confusing to read like that.
02:14:357 (3) - Doesn't fit the song. You should probably change this. My suggestion.
02:15:901 (2,4,6) - Once again, don't hide notes under sliders.
02:32:224 - Second Kiai time should start here.
02:44:908 (5) - This doesn't fit the song at all. You should change this to something else.
02:56:930 (2) - This repeat slider also doesn't fit the song. The timing should be like this, but definitely not the way you made it.
02:59:798 (1) - Replace this with a circle.
03:11:048 - Second Kiai time should end here.
04:08:401 - One of the inherited points here should be removed.
04:11:048 - Remove this inherited point and make it so both sliders are the same velocity.
04:14:577 - Third Kiai time should start here.
04:51:415 - Why is this not mapped?
04:53:401 - Third Kiai time should end here.
04:56:930 (2) - Yup, as previously, don't hide this note under the slider end.
so it'd overlaps the previous "6" note.
00:04:651 (3,4) - Move 4 away from 3. Also confusing to read.
00:06:415 (4,5) - Separate these from 1, 2 and 3. Something like this would be better.
00:11:489 (2) - Again, don't hide notes under sliders.
00:16:342 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
00:22:739 (5,6,7) - Spread these out, them being stacked like this makes it confusing to read, especially if it's under the slider end.
00:31:783 (9) - Add New Combo here.
01:11:048 - Kiai time should start here.
01:49:871 - Kiai time should end here.
01:48:107 (1,2) - Remove New Combo from 1, add New Combo at 2.
01:56:489 (1,2) - ^
01:58:254 (1) - Remove New Combo here.
02:02:224 (1) - Change this to this.
02:11:048 (1,1,2,3) - Overmapped in my opinion. I recommend changing it to this.
02:11:930 (1) - Slider end doesn't match note 2. Then again, I'd recommend moving it away from 2 entirely. Like I said, don't hide notes under slider ends, it's confusing to read like that.
02:14:357 (3) - Doesn't fit the song. You should probably change this. My suggestion.
02:15:901 (2,4,6) - Once again, don't hide notes under sliders.
02:32:224 - Second Kiai time should start here.
02:44:908 (5) - This doesn't fit the song at all. You should change this to something else.
02:56:930 (2) - This repeat slider also doesn't fit the song. The timing should be like this, but definitely not the way you made it.
02:59:798 (1) - Replace this with a circle.
03:11:048 - Second Kiai time should end here.
04:08:401 - One of the inherited points here should be removed.
04:11:048 - Remove this inherited point and make it so both sliders are the same velocity.
04:14:577 - Third Kiai time should start here.
04:51:415 - Why is this not mapped?
04:53:401 - Third Kiai time should end here.
04:56:930 (2) - Yup, as previously, don't hide this note under the slider end.[/notice]



Fixed Thank you,there is not mapped because it can perform a good atmosphere
Topic Starter
samsam2233

AllieBork wrote:

[Insane]
00:04:430 (2,3) - deceptive spacing, but it fits the song. can keep based on preference
00:05:092 (4,1,2) - spacing doesn't fit the song here, though. There's several more places where this happens.
00:10:827 (4,1) - Random jump
00:11:489 (2,3,4) - same spacing, despite different timing
00:16:121 (1) - move this so the spacing becomes even
00:17:004 (3,1) - again a random jump
00:19:651 (4,5) - underspaced
00:20:754 (1,2,1) - nearly same spacing despite different timing
00:23:180 (7,1) - random jump
00:24:724 (1,2) - ctrl + g these two notes
00:27:151 (2) - this note has no counterpart in the song. This makes for the entire pattern here to be a bit weird and off. I'd remap it completely.

I can go on, but it's mostly these same type of patterns that occur again and again, and they disrupt the flow, so I won't go into the specifics, since you should have a good idea of what they are based on what I have posted.

Now, some inconsistencies with the song.
firstly:
01:11:048 (1,2,3) - I like how the spacing picks up here, which perfectly reflects how the song changes. I recommend applying kiai here too, for the chorus. However, this should be continued. Keep the spacing higher for the part following. At
01:18:107 (1,2,3,4) - and later
01:19:430 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing basically goes down again, even though it shouldn't.

Some more examples of the earlier inconsistencies:
01:23:842 (2,3,4,5) - make this buildup come at a different angle, so that note (2) doesn't have such a low spacing.
01:30:459 (1) - again spacing.

01:49:871 (2) - should start a new combo here. Throughout the entire map there's some odd new combos, this is an example.

Also, for this entire section of music, lower the spacing and generally have it less intense, because the music is very calm here.
Do that, until here:
01:56:930 (2) - which by the way, also needs a new combo.
Generally, try to make sure your combos start at the start of a "phrase" of music, or on the White ticks, particularly the start of a bar(biggest white tick).

01:58:033 (1,1,1) - this pattern is repeated but the NC pattern isn't, at
01:59:798 (4,5,6) - so change one to fit the other.
02:05:754 (8) - A new combo would fit here because it gets so long

02:44:908 (5) - this little slider seems off.

02:46:342 (3) - again, spacing and mapping should reflect the music. Also consider using kiai here again, it's the chorus.

02:56:489 (1) - spacing off with the timing.
03:23:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - see above.

Hopefully these examples should be enough. I believe there's some more slower sections and maybe another chorus later, just apply what I've said before.
Good luck with your mapping =)




Thank you,fixed
Epikem
good map :D
Saten
I don't know why I'm here, halp



http://puu.sh/spTlH/5e8a7959ef.jpg try using this as BG, because the current one looks kinda bad on high resolution screens
Reminder: the Source should be A-Channel, not Ken lol



00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making something more interesting here?

00:19:651 (4,5) - there's a pause here, add some space?

00:26:930 (1,2,3,4) - this part is really confusing, it would be easier if the whole part was stacked instead

00:31:342 (7,8,1,2) - same here kinda

01:18:107 (1,2,3,4) - can you make it go from the right to left instead? the back-and-forth pattern makes 01:18:989 (5) - so weird

01:22:959 (1,2) - can you add some more space here? it kinda makes it uncertain whether the entire thing is a stream or not

01:45:901 (2) - these type of wiggly sliders are not allowed

02:01:562 (2,3,4) - why not stack these properly?

02:02:224 (1) - it's awfully close to the next slider. can you make the slider head to the right direction instead?
02:14:357 (3,4) - I think you should at least add some more spacing here

02:23:842 (2,3) - same here, or stack with each-other

03:04:871 (9,1) - stack here if possible

03:08:180 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as I mentioned on 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5) -

03:16:342 (4,5,6,7,8) - same here if you can

03:25:607 (1,2) - can you stack these?

04:00:680 - this is a rather calm part, I suggest moving the Kiai to 04:14:577 - instead

04:16:121 (7,1) - can you stack these as well?

04:55:607 (2,1) - can you add some space here?

05:07:518 (1) - you might wanna mute this spinner since the music is fading away


I guess that's it from me.
There was a lot of weird inconsistent combos throughout the map, but I'll let someone else fix that :P

good luck!
dingding
可以的
Topic Starter
samsam2233

Saten wrote:

I don't know why I'm here, halp



http://puu.sh/spTlH/5e8a7959ef.jpg try using this as BG, because the current one looks kinda bad on high resolution screens
Reminder: the Source should be A-Channel, not Ken lol



00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making something more interesting here?

00:19:651 (4,5) - there's a pause here, add some space?

00:26:930 (1,2,3,4) - this part is really confusing, it would be easier if the whole part was stacked instead

00:31:342 (7,8,1,2) - same here kinda

01:18:107 (1,2,3,4) - can you make it go from the right to left instead? the back-and-forth pattern makes 01:18:989 (5) - so weird

01:22:959 (1,2) - can you add some more space here? it kinda makes it uncertain whether the entire thing is a stream or not

01:45:901 (2) - these type of wiggly sliders are not allowed

02:01:562 (2,3,4) - why not stack these properly?

02:02:224 (1) - it's awfully close to the next slider. can you make the slider head to the right direction instead?
02:14:357 (3,4) - I think you should at least add some more spacing here

02:23:842 (2,3) - same here, or stack with each-other

03:04:871 (9,1) - stack here if possible

03:08:180 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as I mentioned on 00:14:577 (1,2,3,4,5) -

03:16:342 (4,5,6,7,8) - same here if you can

03:25:607 (1,2) - can you stack these?

04:00:680 - this is a rather calm part, I suggest moving the Kiai to 04:14:577 - instead

04:16:121 (7,1) - can you stack these as well?

04:55:607 (2,1) - can you add some space here?

05:07:518 (1) - you might wanna mute this spinner since the music is fading away


I guess that's it from me.
There was a lot of weird inconsistent combos throughout the map, but I'll let someone else fix that :P

good luck!




Thank you saten, i have received your opinions and applied on map. But should i add some hitsounds
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kappaToast
00:19:982 (5) - Remove the random slider please and just extend the (4) slider please.
00:30:680 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - here its pretty weird part, try to just make a bow of circles insted like here: 00:33:548 (6,7,1,2,3,4)
00:36:636 (4,5,6) - snap distance between (5) and (6), becosue it will be much easier to read
00:39:283 (1,2) - Remove these two and replace with a slider, becouse its a preety long vocal note if you know what i mean, and it just sounds better
00:46:783 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as her make some thing different like a bow and make longer distance between (7)
02:56:930 (2) - this slider feels weird? maby try to reduse slider velo and make a not reapeted slider becouse the beat lands on WHITE tick, not the RED tick.
03:10:000 (1) - please reverse this slider other way or just rotate it 90 degree, becouse it ruins the rotation and it feels weird too.
03:28:695 (1) - like the previus slider. lower the slider velo, remove the "repeat" slider and make it that it lands on WHITE tick.
04:06:415 (1) - ok take this (1) slider and make distance shorter between the (prev.2) slider and slider (1)
04:58:695 (1) - undermaped? there is still a bell sound on the red tick, so if you want a slider make a repeat slider insted.

But still, I think its still pretty good map :)


GL
Topic Starter
samsam2233

kappaToast wrote:

00:19:982 (5) - Remove the random slider please and just extend the (4) slider please.
00:30:680 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - here its pretty weird part, try to just make a bow of circles insted like here: 00:33:548 (6,7,1,2,3,4)
00:36:636 (4,5,6) - snap distance between (5) and (6), becosue it will be much easier to read
00:39:283 (1,2) - Remove these two and replace with a slider, becouse its a preety long vocal note if you know what i mean, and it just sounds better
00:46:783 (2,3,4,5,6) - same as her make some thing different like a bow and make longer distance between (7)
02:56:930 (2) - this slider feels weird? maby try to reduse slider velo and make a not reapeted slider becouse the beat lands on WHITE tick, not the RED tick.
03:10:000 (1) - please reverse this slider other way or just rotate it 90 degree, becouse it ruins the rotation and it feels weird too.
03:28:695 (1) - like the previus slider. lower the slider velo, remove the "repeat" slider and make it that it lands on WHITE tick.
04:06:415 (1) - ok take this (1) slider and make distance shorter between the (prev.2) slider and slider (1)
04:58:695 (1) - undermaped? there is still a bell sound on the red tick, so if you want a slider make a repeat slider insted.

But still, I think its still pretty good map :)


GL



Thanks your suggestions!, i will look for that
blueloniess
抱歉啦,不会摸hard...

只会摸4星以上的图

orz

Good Luck!

射一个星
Pachiru
Hello samsam!

I come here for a small mod!

I would like to say that the music and the rhythm is pretty nice! So I think you don't have to work back on it. But on mapping things like position, distance snap, sliders, I think you can try to review it again.

There is some times distance snap error. Like this pattern: 02:25:607 (2,3,4,5) - here you have 0,5x on the slider, to the note "3", and then, you have a distance snap 1.1x but there is no reason to change the snap here, because there is no strong beat. And there on the following beats : 02:27:371 (1,2,3) - you have an other distance snap like 1.0x

As Saten said, there is some problems in the distance snap. So I can't give you ALL the patterns where there is distance error, but I think you can rework on it.
If you don't know how to have use the distance snap, you can look on the top-right of your screen, and you will see something like this : https://puu.sh/sxYsJ/0e0a74a7ec.png

Here you have the distance between the last and the next note. So if there are both follow the same distance, then it's okay. But be careful. I'm saying that because the map is slow, and it's chilly, so I guess there is no jump. So try to rework the map with a new distance snap.

Furthermore, try to add more circular sliders! Because there is a lot of same sliders, and sometimes, it's the same, so I guess that you have copied some patterns, and paste them. Don't worry about this, just try to free your imaginations and go on !

Hope this very small mod will help you !!! :3
Topic Starter
samsam2233

Pachiru wrote:

Hello samsam!

I come here for a small mod!

I would like to say that the music and the rhythm is pretty nice! So I think you don't have to work back on it. But on mapping things like position, distance snap, sliders, I think you can try to review it again.

There is some times distance snap error. Like this pattern: 02:25:607 (2,3,4,5) - here you have 0,5x on the slider, to the note "3", and then, you have a distance snap 1.1x but there is no reason to change the snap here, because there is no strong beat. And there on the following beats : 02:27:371 (1,2,3) - you have an other distance snap like 1.0x

As Saten said, there is some problems in the distance snap. So I can't give you ALL the patterns where there is distance error, but I think you can rework on it.
If you don't know how to have use the distance snap, you can look on the top-right of your screen, and you will see something like this : https://puu.sh/sxYsJ/0e0a74a7ec.png

Here you have the distance between the last and the next note. So if there are both follow the same distance, then it's okay. But be careful. I'm saying that because the map is slow, and it's chilly, so I guess there is no jump. So try to rework the map with a new distance snap.

Furthermore, try to add more circular sliders! Because there is a lot of same sliders, and sometimes, it's the same, so I guess that you have copied some patterns, and paste them. Don't worry about this, just try to free your imaginations and go on !

Hope this very small mod will help you !!! :3

Thanks for your suggestion!
Topic Starter
samsam2233

S o a p wrote:

虽然这歌很静但是全程5%也太过了点吧._. 建议30~40 副歌部分再提高一点



快現身
Zekks
From my queue.

01:02:886 (3,4) - What happened here?
02:15:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There is no point for these hitcircles to be under these sliderends, and they sound off, try to create a pattern using this:

03:07:077 (1) - No reason to start a NC Here.
03:10:000 (1) - This object isn't snapped correctly.
03:15:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try to put a slider somewhere in all of this.
04:14:577 - KIAI Here?
04:37:077 (1,2) - Move this hitcircle and slider 2 ticks forward, and shorten the slider to this:

04:49:871 - Random KIAI Time here.
Topic Starter
samsam2233

[ - Zekks - ] wrote:

From my queue.

01:02:886 (3,4) - What happened here?
02:15:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - There is no point for these hitcircles to be under these sliderends, and they sound off, try to create a pattern using this:

03:07:077 (1) - No reason to start a NC Here.
03:10:000 (1) - This object isn't snapped correctly.
03:15:901 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Try to put a slider somewhere in all of this.
04:14:577 - KIAI Here?
04:37:077 (1,2) - Move this hitcircle and slider 2 ticks forward, and shorten the slider to this:

04:49:871 - Random KIAI Time here.

thanks :)
-rage
from my queue

Maybe have an explanation to the diff name? should it be Seasons instead? idk

[Season]
  1. 00:14:577 (1,2) - could have a better blanket there.
  2. 00:24:283 (4,1) - jump seems really far for a hard diff, could reduce distance a little bit.
  3. 00:28:695 (3,1) - a blanket here would be nice.
  4. 00:34:871 (1,2,3) - could change these sliders here a bit since they're so straight and on top of eachother, could have nice curves there.
  5. 00:38:401 (1) - no need for NC here.
  6. 00:43:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - make this 1 combo.
  7. 00:47:004 (3,4,5,6) - remove notes that overlap, could have a better patern choice there.
  8. 00:53:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - make this 1 combo.
  9. 00:56:048 (1,2,3,4) - a little flow breaking considering 00:55:165 (1,2) - goes counter clockwise and and these notes go clockwise.
  10. 01:02:445 (1,2,1) - make this 1 combo.
  11. 01:02:665 (2) - make this 1/2 instead of 3/4. the 3/4 doesnt really make much sense.
  12. 01:06:195 (1,2,3) - could maybe space out these notes a little. feels really clustered.
  13. 01:20:533 (5,6) - weird patern and flow breaker, should be revised.
  14. 01:23:842 (2,3,4,5) - only stream in the song, could probably be changed in a 1/4 reverse slider?
  15. 01:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - make this 1 combo.
  16. 01:33:107 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  17. 01:39:283 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
  18. 01:45:018 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  19. 01:52:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 02:00:459 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - ^
  21. 02:02:224 (1,1,2) - ^
  22. 02:05:312 (6,7) - jump seems far, could reduce distance.
  23. 02:07:518 (11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - make this 1 combo.
  24. 02:39:724 (6) - only slider in song that has a weird curve to it, you should probably make it smoother and more curve.
  25. 03:00:018 (5,1) - jump seems far, could reduce distance.
  26. 03:05:312 (1) - this could be changed into a 1/2
  27. 03:10:827 (4,1) - jump is pretty far whoa
  28. 03:13:254 (2) - i would recommend blanket? or just don't overlap maybe.
  29. 03:21:415 (3,1) - reduce distance.
  30. 03:37:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - some more weird overlaps that could be fixed, just maybe make sure the notes dont touch.
  31. 03:40:607 (1,2,3,1) - make this into 1 combo.
  32. 03:42:812 (1,2,1) - ^
  33. 03:45:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - could maybe split the combo in 2.
  34. 03:56:048 (1) - doesn't make much sense that this slider is slower? should be normal speed.
  35. 03:56:930 (2,3) - distance between these 2 notes feel way too far, could reduce distance.
  36. 04:00:680 (4,1) - reduce distance.
  37. 04:09:062 (1,2,3,1) - make this in 1 combo.
  38. 04:11:048 (1,2,3,4) - SV changes there are really weird, either keep them all slow or all normal.
  39. 04:25:165 (1,1,1) - no need to have different NC here, maybe keep it 1 combo.
  40. 04:47:665 (3,1) - reduce distance a little bit.
  41. 04:49:871 (1,1,2,3) - keep it 1 combo.
  42. 04:51:636 - could add something at this place since you hear a distinct noise there.
  43. 04:53:401 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1) - NC at first note selected and keep 1 combo.
  44. 04:58:695 (1) - you can hear the piano noise behind this long slider, could map notes instead to better compliment the piano.
  45. 05:05:754 (4) - ^
  46. 05:06:415 (5) - avoid overlap with previous slider.
really nice song, but has some inconsistency with the combos and flow of paterns. great job!
Topic Starter
samsam2233

lulu lemon wrote:

from my queue

Maybe have an explanation to the diff name? should it be Seasons instead? idk

[Season]
  1. 00:14:577 (1,2) - could have a better blanket there.
  2. 00:24:283 (4,1) - jump seems really far for a hard diff, could reduce distance a little bit.
  3. 00:28:695 (3,1) - a blanket here would be nice.
  4. 00:34:871 (1,2,3) - could change these sliders here a bit since they're so straight and on top of eachother, could have nice curves there.
  5. 00:38:401 (1) - no need for NC here.
  6. 00:43:695 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - make this 1 combo.
  7. 00:47:004 (3,4,5,6) - remove notes that overlap, could have a better patern choice there.
  8. 00:53:842 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - make this 1 combo.
  9. 00:56:048 (1,2,3,4) - a little flow breaking considering 00:55:165 (1,2) - goes counter clockwise and and these notes go clockwise.
  10. 01:02:445 (1,2,1) - make this 1 combo.
  11. 01:02:665 (2) - make this 1/2 instead of 3/4. the 3/4 doesnt really make much sense.
  12. 01:06:195 (1,2,3) - could maybe space out these notes a little. feels really clustered.
  13. 01:20:533 (5,6) - weird patern and flow breaker, should be revised.
  14. 01:23:842 (2,3,4,5) - only stream in the song, could probably be changed in a 1/4 reverse slider?
  15. 01:28:695 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - make this 1 combo.
  16. 01:33:107 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
  17. 01:39:283 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
  18. 01:45:018 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  19. 01:52:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 02:00:459 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - ^
  21. 02:02:224 (1,1,2) - ^
  22. 02:05:312 (6,7) - jump seems far, could reduce distance.
  23. 02:07:518 (11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - make this 1 combo.
  24. 02:39:724 (6) - only slider in song that has a weird curve to it, you should probably make it smoother and more curve.
  25. 03:00:018 (5,1) - jump seems far, could reduce distance.
  26. 03:05:312 (1) - this could be changed into a 1/2
  27. 03:10:827 (4,1) - jump is pretty far whoa
  28. 03:13:254 (2) - i would recommend blanket? or just don't overlap maybe.
  29. 03:21:415 (3,1) - reduce distance.
  30. 03:37:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - some more weird overlaps that could be fixed, just maybe make sure the notes dont touch.
  31. 03:40:607 (1,2,3,1) - make this into 1 combo.
  32. 03:42:812 (1,2,1) - ^
  33. 03:45:901 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - could maybe split the combo in 2.
  34. 03:56:048 (1) - doesn't make much sense that this slider is slower? should be normal speed.
  35. 03:56:930 (2,3) - distance between these 2 notes feel way too far, could reduce distance.
  36. 04:00:680 (4,1) - reduce distance.
  37. 04:09:062 (1,2,3,1) - make this in 1 combo.
  38. 04:11:048 (1,2,3,4) - SV changes there are really weird, either keep them all slow or all normal.
  39. 04:25:165 (1,1,1) - no need to have different NC here, maybe keep it 1 combo.
  40. 04:47:665 (3,1) - reduce distance a little bit.
  41. 04:49:871 (1,1,2,3) - keep it 1 combo.
  42. 04:51:636 - could add something at this place since you hear a distinct noise there.
  43. 04:53:401 (4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,1) - NC at first note selected and keep 1 combo.
  44. 04:58:695 (1) - you can hear the piano noise behind this long slider, could map notes instead to better compliment the piano.
  45. 05:05:754 (4) - ^
  46. 05:06:415 (5) - avoid overlap with previous slider.
really nice song, but has some inconsistency with the combos and flow of paterns. great job!



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