pife1 wrote:

Hi:
I hope my coordinates will be useful
In the Hard
00:25:506 (9) - New Combo
00:48:411 (1) - Move to X:200 Y:296
00:48:560 (2) - ^ X:172 Y:277
00:48:709 (3) - ^ X: 148 y: 252
00:48:857 (4) - ^ x: 126 y: 226
00:49:006 (5) - ^ x: 103 y: 199
00:49:155 (6) - ^ x: 108 y: 165
00:49:303 (7) - ^ x: 118 y: 132
00:49:452 (8) - ^ x: 135 y: 100
00:49:601 (9) - ^ x: 154 y: 71
01:07:449 (1) - ^ x: 176 y: 104
01:07:598 (2) - ^ x: 204 y: 83
01:07:747 (3) - ^ x: 235 y: 63
01:07:895 (4) - ^ x: 270 y: 53
01:08:044 (5) - ^ x: 305 y: 57
01:08:193 (6) - ^ x: 337 y: 71
01:08:342 (7) - ^ x: 366 y: 97
01:08:490 (8) - ^ x: 389 y: 124
01:08:639 (9) - ^ x: 413 y: 150

Great song

Dat Leper wrote:

Easy

00:37:107 - The big slider look good, but makes the rythm feels empty, i suggest this | I agree the rhythm is strange, I was trying to follow the vocals properly here because of the delayed voice, but in all honesty, it plays much better like you suggested.
02:18:842 - ^ Same here, big slider lacks rythm, i suggest this | Fixed, but in my own way. thanks.
02:21:222 - Add note ? | Nah, I like the space here. gives the 1/1 spam some breathing room.

Normal

00:26:398 (2,3) - Move a little to the left (just a little, like 1 grid) | sure
00:29:075 (2,3,4) - Remove clap, they sound terrible here | lowered the volume of these
00:31:753 (3) - Make it like this: and add a clap at 00:32:348 - | Not sure what you wanted me to do, but I prefer the long slider here and at the next point, because it fits.
00:34:132 (4) - ^ Same here, it feels better | ^

Hard

Im not really good at modding hards/insanes, since i have not too much experience yet, but heres something i could suggest:

00:48:411 - 00:49:601 - There are too much streams of this type on the map, why dont you change some of them for something like this | I use those reverse sliders later on in the song a couple times, no change at the moment here, thanks though.


That's all I could mod excuse me if im not that useful to you, but im on my way to become a good mapper/mod

Good luck with your map, good song

sekai-san wrote:

Hi! from my queue.

[General]
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 00:11:525 - | These are fine as is, they actually last just under 15 seconds. This is here really just to prevent fountain spamming, but its not an unrankable issue.
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 02:49:779 -
Kiai time is toggled on less than 15 seconds here 03:08:817 -
Audio bit rate is larger than 192kbps or less than 128kbps. yup, I'm using 320kbs to be able to hear the music properly and be able to catch each drum hit as it comes. I will convert this later

[Easy]
Bcause it's easy diff, consider changing some of the sliders shapes. Easy diff is all about crazy and unique sliders though actually
02:04:266 (3) -Like here. I've done minor adjusting to all of these. Should be better
02:00:994 (1) - ^
02:44:424 (4) - ^
01:59:507 (3) - Align this with 2. Changed the sliders around
Consider elevating the volume of some notes. some notes may need minor tweaks, but I'm overall happy with the sound effects as I use full 100% volume 100% effects so it balances out.
Consider adding a break in some place. One break for a second is good enough in the middle. there isn't really anywhere else to break in this song.

[Normal]
AR : -1 I personally like the 454 system for normals since I use 676 for hard and 232 for easy. this just hits the middle point.
00:09:740 (2) - Align with 1. made changes to this area.
00:31:753 (3) - This look weird. 2nd complaint, changed.
02:49:481 - Why isn't here Kiai time? This is to make the fountain burst again, however, I put this 1/4 to far back so I changed
03:08:668 - ^ working as intended here.

[Hard]
00:54:063 (3) - Looks weird. I personally like this, it follows the vocals visually here XD
Not big problems found.
Try to split the 10 combo into 5 combo. no combo really goes above 13-14 which is about right for a Hard/insane diff, so unless people have some more suggestions for it. I'll leave as is.


I didn't find big problems.
It's a good song, I haven't listened to to in English. Thanks
Good luck and thanks for the mod I disn't expect that. (:

Heanday wrote:

Hi Tuturn !

General : Awesome work on hitsound è.è, i'll just have one tips for improve it. You never used " Whistle ". I have an idea where you can use it. 00:53:766 (6) - sonds like that came many time in this song.
I found this one who fits http://puu.sh/3TIpu.wav ( He is a bit loud but, well this is an idea, if you can reduce volume of this whistle, it can be funny ! )
Well if you like this idea, just try to found one who fits more, or - loud with me ._. umm.. maybe it'll work.. I'm not 100% sure yet, I'll look into this later.

[Easy]

General :

Maybe break more ? [/color]
Delete useless green line ? :d [/color]

01:03:880 (1) - Spinner ? And end it here 01:08:639 (5) - ( I know you don't like spinner but ... I think it fits, to put spinner before kiai time ) nope.. I don't like the idea of a spinner here
01:44:931 (4) - What about curve this one for symetry between the previous 2 & 3 ? changed some stuff around
01:50:285 (3) - Uhh this slid is ugly imo, can you just creates a better curve ? mk
02:05:754 (1) - remove clap early slid ? nah, I like the clap on this

Nice nice nice !

[Normal]

General : Fine [/color]


01:13:399 (1) - http://puu.sh/3TIZq.jpg and it ends up being the biggest edit to all my maps lol

Well, nothing to say ~~ sounds perfect !

[Hard]

General : I think you must more, when i played it, it was a bit unconfortable to play, here 00:30:265 (8,9) - or here 01:27:380 (8,9,10) - After long stream, i suggest to stack some circle for player recover [/color]


00:31:753 (3,4) - Blanket ! Blanket!
01:45:228 (3,4,5) - Bad flow ! Try to change it ? well.. I can try. I tried something new that I'm not used to doing XD
02:10:216 (1) - End revers finish too loud ! Cover your ears then! reduced volume.
02:25:684 (1) - I'll suggest to NC, more easy to read nah, the song is easy enough as is.
02:46:804 (4) - x92 y364 ? then stack 02:47:399 (1) - with the previous circle 2 ? I like it how it is. but I made a change with the postion of the next slider

That's all AWESOME MAP !

R e d wrote:

Great map and want this ranked
I even had some fun modding it,(watching the video at the background ground is cool) xD

But actually, There is a "no video" link download in the map page. :\ (dunno if its a bug or something but you must have that)

[Easy]

00:06:765 - add circle? Looks like a high note there, also i think helps the flow and makes it less boring. hmm don't see a reason to change this. Plays fine and looks fine.

00:09:145 (1,2) - replace this with a slider? Since voice start 00:10:335 (3) , have some difference in "circles" looks great to me Sure.

01:50:285 (1) - I would put a new combo here just for this slider, same for 02:29:551 (1) , and others diffs. But just my opinion and style. (YOu in hard diff make a NC just for that part..so) Did some NC stuff on my own. I'd rather stick to measure comboing than vocal comboing.

00:51:386 (3) - symetric with 00:50:196 (1) ? eh.. I guess. changed

01:20:241 (3) - make this slider better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1031286 Straightened it out

[Normal]

00:06:468 (3) - move to x:280 y:236 Makes spacing more neat between 00:06:468 (3) and 00:06:765 (1) Whoops.. dunno how that got so off. fixed.

00:25:208 (7) - New combo here?? why? You follow the voice almost everytime, fits better you NC style and makes consistency with the other diffs. As I mentioned in the other NC comment

02:00:994 (2) - Make the NC start here, why? Cuz you dont make that in the others same situations the the whole song. Example: 01:18:158 (1).
Also you have the higher note in 02:00:994 (2) with a whitebig tick. Special thing here, Hard does this as well. just to seperate the triple finish part here from the rest of the song. Leaving as is


[Hard]
Seems really grat to me