This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月21日 星期六 at 16:50:47

Artist: Gero
Title: BELOVEDxSURVIVAL
Source: Brothers Conflict
Tags: TV Size op opening HoneyWorks darknessangel
BPM: 190
Filesize: 19550kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. D.N.Angel's Insane (4.6 stars, 328 notes)
2. Easy (1.18 stars, 64 notes)
3. Hard (3.22 stars, 214 notes)
4. Normal (2.04 stars, 131 notes)

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”BROTHERS CONFLICT“ Opening *BELOVED×SURVIVAL*
2013/07/14 add D.N Angel (Insane) diff
2014/06/08 change D.N Angel to D.N.Angel's Insane
2014/06/21 change title re-download plz~
My 9th beatmap
Finally..... _(:3」∠)_
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Nearly 1 year to rank a TV Size!
How delightful...


Easy by me done~
Normal by me done~
Hard by me done~
D.N.Angel's Insane by DarknessAngel done~

=-= 呕吐物w






Finish~

Megurine Luka wrote:

=-= 呕吐物w lol

[General]

1. tags are not consistency. fix~
2. add "HoneyWorks" in tags since he is the one who wrote this song and also he is very famous on niconico as a Vocaloid composer.fix~
3. Your Normal clap 1 sounds too loud for me compare to the other hitsound. Maybe you can turn down this sound file a little bit. So does Especially the tick sound you fulfilled as clap. fix~

[E]

1. 00:20:966 (1) - any other choices? cuz firstly it is kinda hard for new players to have a spinner directly after a very short slider. It is too hurry for them. And also 00:23:019 (1) - this first note after spinner is too close to the spinner and not very suitable to be appeared in an Easy diff. So I would recommend you change to sliders instead of a spinner. no idea atm....
2. 00:42:598 (2) - the clap on tail sounds really strange for me. remove~
3. 01:07:861 (2,3) - Basically I would recommend you not to stack in Easy I think It's fine
4. 01:09:124 (4) - hmmmmmmmmm... try to make something like this ↓ nice!
   
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[N]

1. 00:28:703 (1) - hmm try this kind of placement? no
   
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2. 00:33:756 (1) - I think this would be more fluent: no
   
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3. 00:42:598 (3) - add a fin on head. Otherwise the sudden silence seems strange fix~

[H]

1. 00:59:335 (5,6) - I would like no
   
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Finish~

Thanks Luka~

Update......done

finally done \0.0/
http://puu.sh/3CDfA.rar

久等了>< 感覺足夠簡單~ 前部分re了4次wahaha
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DarknessAngel wrote:

finally done \0.0/
http://puu.sh/3CDfA.rar

久等了>< 感覺足夠簡單~ 前部分re了4次wahaha
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Update......done
Ready for mod~ Go!

Hi~
[D.N.Angel]
音效:
00:07:229 (1) - 加finish
00:09:756 (1) - normal音比较好
00:10:545 (4) - 改成soft-whistle可能更好
00:42:598 (1,2,3,4) - sampleset normal, additions soft
00:43:861 (1) - 尾去掉drum
00:59:808 (1,2,3) - soft音,1,2加whistle
01:28:229 (1,2,3) - 加whistle

排列:
00:00:914 (1,2,3) - 前面可以调整下拉头速度，0.75差不多
01:14:966 , 01:15:598 - 可以加note 我觉得x:248 y:236可以


[Hard]
音效:
00:19:861 (1) - 头finish
排列:
01:11:966 - 可以加note
01:28:387 (1,2,3) - 间距可以拉大些


[Normal]
AR+1

[Easy]
00:27:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的note感觉移到第二拍更好……
01:27:440 (1) - 不折返,去掉2,01:28:229 加一个与1等长的拉条

下午头有点晕啊写不出什么来…………
总体感觉挺好,祝早日rank

yf_bmp wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
音效:
00:19:861 (1) - 头finish 略吵
排列:
01:11:966 - 可以加note 加了
01:28:387 (1,2,3) - 间距可以拉大些 不用


[Normal]
AR+1 改了

[Easy]
00:27:440 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 这里的note感觉移到第二拍更好…… 这样太难了~ 不改
01:27:440 (1) - 不折返,去掉2,01:28:229 加一个与1等长的拉条 总感觉少了东西~ 先这样

下午头有点晕啊写不出什么来………… 辛苦了~ 多谢！
总体感觉挺好,祝早日rank

Update my diff.......done

我哭了啊OAQ好不容易以为有2kd了结果上面的…上面的…呜哇我不干啦！

DNA
00:00:914 - 开头的红线可以改成SC2 然后在你喜欢的地方加几个whistle
00:05:808 (7) - 感觉现在有点空所以觉得……后面白线加个circle吧
00:10:387 (3,4) - 把4的clap挪到3上然后在4上面加个soft finish？
00:22:387 - 音量70？
00:43:861 (1) - 这个故意拉长了有点 误导性 而且恰好还是速度刚开始变慢的地方…好几次打到这里这个滑条都松手松早了=。=因为感觉没有这么长啊……
00:44:177 - 这个好囧=。=有一种早知道就在00:43:861 - 这里用SC2的感觉……
00:52:703 (1,2,3,4) - 只是个人建议 把clap全都换成finish呗 后面还有类似的地方 也是一样的意见
00:53:650 (3) - 起一个1/2 slider？尾巴soft 因为这里音乐里其实有个音挺适合slider的 而且或许可以加速slider
00:53:966 - kiai开始以后…为什么感觉clap错位了…我怎么觉得应该加在00:54:124 - 还有00:54:756 - 这样2条红线一个clap？
00:58:703 (3,4,5) - 把这里的三连打挪到00:59:019 (1) - 这里？啊我是指删掉00:58:782 (4,5) - 然后在00:59:019 (1) - 的位置叠2个circle和它构成3连 感觉这里红线起的3连配合后面1的finish打着比较爽
01:01:861 (4) - 如果是我的话我会选择只加finish不加clap 而且还会给这个finish加音量…因为感觉现在这样的话finish凸显不出来 而且实际上打鼓的话这两个鼓也是不会一起打的…而且突然想到假如你按我上面说的把clap挪到了红线这里自然就没有clap了
01:02:177 (5) - 可以考虑NC
01:24:282 - 这里不加个circle？怕会破坏移动的感觉?

Hard
00:00:914 - 改成SC2然后加几个whistle？
00:05:492 (7) - 这个突然提前了的whistle听起来有点别扭建议删掉
00:10:545 (4) - finish没了
00:19:861 (1,2) - 1尾巴上的whistle挪到2？
00:22:387 - 70音量？
00:28:229 (4) - 高一些？比如（188,48）
00:33:361 (1,2) - 之前test的时候就觉得怪怪的…居然是蓝线=。=6连实在好莫名 感觉就还原音乐 让1不要折返比较好 位置稍微调一下按ds走就行 而且建议把NC从1挪到2 或者挪到后面的3上也好
00:33:598 (2) - 尾巴的finish没了
00:35:019 (1) - ，00:36:282 (1) - ，00:38:492 (3) - 这些类似的地方加whistle好像不错
00:52:861 (1,2) - 3个finish比较合适 或者至少你要在2加个clap吧
00:53:492 (3) - 尾巴好像也是clap比较好
00:53:966 - kiai开始以后…为什么感觉clap错位了…我怎么觉得应该加在00:54:124 - 还有00:54:756 - 这样2条红线一个clap？
00:54:598 - ，00:55:229 - ，00:55:861 - kiai部分这些节奏空当太多了感觉非常缺乏连贯性 即使是出于难度考虑，建议是在这种地方空一次拍 拉一次长滑条 下次再空拍 之后再拉长滑条 感觉会好很多 比如你00:54:598 - 这个地方空了拍之后 把00:55:071 (4) - 这个换成一个1/1 slider 让它不要折返往后挪二分拍 这样 后面类似的地方也是
01:01:703 (3) - 尾巴的finish没了
01:10:861 (8) - finish
01:12:282 (4) - 一个单独的whistle听着有点违和…或许应该多加几个配合一下 比如01:10:861 (8) -
01:15:756 (5,6,7) - 这里还是应该三分拍的
01:27:914 (4,1,2,3) - 考虑4声finish？
01:27:914 (4,1) - 或许交换NC

Normal
音效照着上面儿怎么喜欢怎么改吧=。=
00:00:914 (1) - 干啥一上来就大间距……
00:24:914 (4,5) - 不要这样嘛=。=大间距
00:38:177 (6) - 但是漏了finish什么的还是要说出来的
00:43:861 (1) - 这里你把ds变成1.25来摆是可以的 但是不要像00:43:861 (1,2) - ，00:46:387 (5,6) - 这样变间距
00:48:914 (1) - 还有这个地方速度已经回来了之后离前一个note也应该保持1.0的ds
00:48:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也都应该1.0ds的呀
kiai部分…ORZ 也是1.2 0.0 不太建议这样=。=
01:04:071 (1) - 离中心有点远 想办法调一下 如果你决定缩小间距的话会好办一些
01:21:756 (1) - ^
01:27:124 (1) - ^

Easy
00:23:650 (1,2) - spacing
00:38:808 (1) - finish
01:01:545 (3) - 折返finish
01:02:808 (1) - 有点危险
01:09:124 (4) - NC 头上finish

nothing else
Good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

我哭了啊OAQ好不容易以为有2kd了结果上面的…上面的…呜哇我不干啦！

Hard
00:00:914 - 改成SC2然后加几个whistle？开头安静~ 不加了
00:05:492 (7) - 这个突然提前了的whistle听起来有点别扭建议删掉 还行啊~ 没改
00:10:545 (4) - finish没了 加了
00:19:861 (1,2) - 1尾巴上的whistle挪到2？ 改了
00:22:387 - 70音量？ 太吵了
00:28:229 (4) - 高一些？比如（188,48） 好
00:33:361 (1,2) - 之前test的时候就觉得怪怪的…居然是蓝线=。=6连实在好莫名 感觉就还原音乐 让1不要折返比较好 位置稍微调一下按ds走就行 而且建议把NC从1挪到2 或者挪到后面的3上也好 还真是这样 /w\ 这个大好~ 非常感谢！改
00:33:598 (2) - 尾巴的finish没了 加了
00:35:019 (1) - ，00:36:282 (1) - ，00:38:492 (3) - 这些类似的地方加whistle好像不错 唔....不太好的感觉
00:52:861 (1,2) - 3个finish比较合适 或者至少你要在2加个clap吧 加了clap
00:53:492 (3) - 尾巴好像也是clap比较好 可以
00:53:966 - kiai开始以后…为什么感觉clap错位了…我怎么觉得应该加在00:54:124 - 还有00:54:756 - 这样2条红线一个clap？这clap不对了吧 lol
00:54:598 - ，00:55:229 - ，00:55:861 - kiai部分这些节奏空当太多了感觉非常缺乏连贯性 即使是出于难度考虑，建议是在这种地方空一次拍 拉一次长滑条 下次再空拍 之后再拉长滑条 感觉会好很多 比如你00:54:598 - 这个地方空了拍之后 把00:55:071 (4) - 这个换成一个1/1 slider 让它不要折返往后挪二分拍 这样 后面类似的地方也是 好想法~ 改了
01:01:703 (3) - 尾巴的finish没了 加了
01:10:861 (8) - finish 好
01:12:282 (4) - 一个单独的whistle听着有点违和…或许应该多加几个配合一下 比如01:10:861 (8) - 应该没事吧 lol
01:15:756 (5,6,7) - 这里还是应该三分拍的 改了 /.\
01:27:914 (4,1,2,3) - 考虑4声finish？有点吵~
01:27:914 (4,1) - 或许交换NC 不用

Normal
音效照着上面儿怎么喜欢怎么改吧=。=
00:00:914 (1) - 干啥一上来就大间距…… 改
00:24:914 (4,5) - 不要这样嘛=。=大间距 哦哦~ 没注意到 改了
00:38:177 (6) - 但是漏了finish什么的还是要说出来的 加了
00:43:861 (1) - 这里你把ds变成1.25来摆是可以的 但是不要像00:43:861 (1,2) - ，00:46:387 (5,6) - 这样变间距 Normal 应该没事
00:48:914 (1) - 还有这个地方速度已经回来了之后离前一个note也应该保持1.0的ds 改了
00:48:914 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也都应该1.0ds的呀 啊啊~ 谢谢提醒
kiai部分…ORZ 也是1.2 0.0 不太建议这样=。= 没事=。= 问过一些mapper了
01:04:071 (1) - 离中心有点远 想办法调一下 如果你决定缩小间距的话会好办一些 Normal而已啦~ 问题不大
01:21:756 (1) - ^ ^
01:27:124 (1) - ^ ^

Easy
00:23:650 (1,2) - spacing 没有问题呀 0.0
00:38:808 (1) - finish 加了
01:01:545 (3) - 折返finish 已经有clap了~ 再加略吵
01:02:808 (1) - 有点危险 /w\
01:09:124 (4) - NC 头上finish 好

nothing else
Good luck

好mod~ 大感谢！
Update my diff.....done

Zero__wind wrote:

我哭了啊OAQ好不容易以为有2kd了结果上面的…上面的…呜哇我不干啦！
// (蜡烛

DNA
00:00:914 - 开头的红线可以改成SC2 然后在你喜欢的地方加几个whistle 是觉得这地方安静所以才不加音效的
00:05:808 (7) - 感觉现在有点空所以觉得……后面白线加个circle吧 // 我这边就是跟人声，加上我反而认为不好
00:10:387 (3,4) - 把4的clap挪到3上然后在4上面加个soft finish？ // 挪了clap但是finish非常不合lol，我用了其他替代
002:387 - 音量70？ // 音乐消除后那个clap用50%已经足够明显了，70%很吵=.=
00:43:861 (1) - 这个故意拉长了有点 误导性 而且恰好还是速度刚开始变慢的地方…好几次打到这里这个滑条都松手松早了=。=因为感觉没有这么长啊……
//是拉长了点为了后面衔接人声，而且划条尾部有个drum sound所以才这样放的，我觉得没问题啊/.\
00:44:177 - 这个好囧=。=有一种早知道就在00:43:861 - 这里用SC2的感觉…… // = =，因为有S:C1音效要用到啊，在那边设定S:C2迟早还要在后面加S:C1的线
00:52:703 (1,2,3,4) - 只是个人建议 把clap全都换成finish呗 后面还有类似的地方 也是一样的意见 // ...认真的 ? lol 只有我觉得这样吵死了吗 lol clap那么合的... /.\
00:53:650 (3) - 起一个1/2 slider？尾巴soft 因为这里音乐里其实有个音挺适合slider的 而且或许可以加速slider // 其实我已经有考慮过这处理方式，但是我个人更喜欢故意停下来，有一种"预备，开始！"的感觉，衔接slider之后就没这个效果了，所以我才决定这样处理
00:53:966 - kiai开始以后…为什么感觉clap错位了…我怎么觉得应该加在00:54:124 - 还有00:54:756 - 这样2条红线一个clap？// 其实你说的鼓是全部红线上的那些，但我觉得白线上的音比红线上来的强，跟白线的对我来说比较好
00:58:703 (3,4,5) - 把这里的三连打挪到00:59:019 (1) - 这里？啊我是指删掉00:58:782 (4,5) - 然后在00:59:019 (1) - 的位置叠2个circle和它构成3连 感觉这里红线起的3连配合后面1的finish打着比较爽
// 你那样是overmap啊大哥lol，00:58:940 - 没有音可以跟的
01:01:861 (4) - 如果是我的话我会选择只加finish不加clap 而且还会给这个finish加音量…因为感觉现在这样的话finish凸显不出来 而且实际上打鼓的话这两个鼓也是不会一起打的…而且突然想到假如你按我上面说的把clap挪到了红线这里自然就没有clap了
// 删了clap，但是这段稍微麻烦了点，改了附近其他地方
01:02:177 (5) - 可以考虑NC //嗯，顺带把01:01:545 (1,2,3,4)弄个跳来增加短NC强调性了
01:24:282 (x) - 这里不加个circle？怕会破坏移动的感觉? // OK，这我倒没想到

@yf_bmp - 改了前面2个


谢谢你们的mod !

http://puu.sh/3KpKR.rar

Update.....done

Hello, mod as promiced.

[D.N.Angel]

Raise OD by 1 tick to have setting bore balanced

1. 00:01:466 (2,3) - I dont really like rhytm at this part. It not cover lyrics that good as it should and it is not really good to hit, so i suggest you just replace it with with one slider:
   
   
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2. 00:10:545 - this 90%-volume note sounds too loud. Please decrease volume to 80%.
3. 00:28:387 (4) - add finish to the beginning of slider follow music
4. 00:43:861 (1,2) - Since soft-sliderside isnt silenced why you dont silence those sliderticks? They sounds horrible as for me.
5. 00:51:124 (4) - ^
6. 00:53:492 (1,2,3) - Maybe make perfect stack here instead of manual stacking?
7. 01:14:492 (2,3,4,5) - This 1/3 part is awkwardto play. I'd suggest replace this with notes, because right it is very bad to play.

Pretty nice diff, i love whistle usage.

[Hard]

Such low OD makes setting and the whole diff too unbalanced; raise it by 2 ticks.

1. 00:28:229 (4) - Finish to the end of slider
2. 00:31:703 (2) - try replace it with slider? Sounds better imo
   
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3. 00:33:361 (5) - Begin NC here instead of 00:33:598 (1) - follow new part of music
4. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud.
5. 00:58:703 (3) - Add finish to the end of slider
6. 01:09:124 (1) - Add finish
7. 01:19:229 (1) - Forgotten clap at reverse
8. 01:21:756 (5) - You forgot clap at the end of slider
9. 01:22:387 (6) - ^

[Normal]

Raise OD by 1 tick to have diff more balanced

1. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud.
2. 00:53:966 (1,2) - This looks pretty challenging for a Normal diff. How about just unstack them?
3. 01:09:124 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:11:966 (2) - add clap here follow lyrics?
5. 01:16:703 (1,1) - This spinnerspam playes bad, annoying and feels not really good for a normal diff, please map second spinner orz.
6. 01:21:756 (1) - Clap to the end of slider
7. 01:23:019 (3,4) - ^

[Easy]

Change CS and AR to 3. Using very huge circles compare with too low AR makes diff just unreadable for players with any skill level.

1. 00:03:440 (2) - Remove first whistle, i dont think that it really needs here.
2. 00:10:861 (1) - Please change this to slider, spinnerspam here looks horrible.
3. 00:27:440 (4,5) - If you will not change AR please unstack this notes: beginners do not know how to remove hitbursts, so stacked notes will be problem for them.
   
   This diff is full of stacks, i wont mentiore all of them but i keep this suggestion to all of them.
   
4. 01:16:703 (1,1) - same as at 00:10:861 (1)

Good luck

Kodora wrote:

Hello, mod as promiced.

[Hard]

Such low OD makes setting and the whole diff too unbalanced; raise it by 2 ticks. k

1. 00:28:229 (4) - Finish to the end of slider no. too loud
2. 00:31:703 (2) - try replace it with slider? Sounds better imo no. stress the vocal.
   
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3. 00:33:361 (5) - Begin NC here instead of 00:33:598 (1) - follow new part of music k
4. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud. k
5. 00:58:703 (3) - Add finish to the end of slider sure
6. 01:09:124 (1) - Add finish ok
7. 01:19:229 (1) - Forgotten clap at reverse add~
8. 01:21:756 (5) - You forgot clap at the end of slider add~
9. 01:22:387 (6) - ^ ^

[Normal]

Raise OD by 1 tick to have diff more balanced k

1. 00:33:756 - Decrease volume to 60% here. 70% sounds a bit too loud. k
2. 00:53:966 (1,2) - This looks pretty challenging for a Normal diff. How about just unstack them? It's Normal diff. not too difficult.
3. 01:09:124 (1,2) - ^ ^
4. 01:11:966 (2) - add clap here follow lyrics? k
5. 01:16:703 (1,1) - This spinnerspam playes bad, annoying and feels not really good for a normal diff, please map second spinner orz. condider. not bad atm.
6. 01:21:756 (1) - Clap to the end of slider k
7. 01:23:019 (3,4) - ^ ^

[Easy]

Change CS and AR to 3. Using very huge circles compare with too low AR makes diff just unreadable for players with any skill level. sure

1. 00:03:440 (2) - Remove first whistle, i dont think that it really needs here. yep
2. 00:10:861 (1) - Please change this to slider, spinnerspam here looks horrible. alright
3. 00:27:440 (4,5) - If you will not change AR please unstack this notes: beginners do not know how to remove hitbursts, so stacked notes will be problem for them.
   
   This diff is full of stacks, i wont mentiore all of them but i keep this suggestion to all of them. I unstack all the notes in this map~ should be fine now.
   
4. 01:16:703 (1,1) - same as at 00:10:861 (1) consider.

Good luck <3

Thanks~ mod
Update my diff......done

hi~






就这么多了，水平有限找不出其他问题goodluck

as your request

[General]
Nope

[Normal]

1. 00:44:808 (2) 乾脆從00:44:492開始然後兩次折返

[Normal]

1. 00:42:598 (3) 這個跟音樂 00:43:861 (1) 跟鼓點 00:44:808 (2) 跟vocal 我能說不難讀嗎...
   其他倒沒甚麼問題

[Hard]

1. 00:08:492 (5,6) 沒有blanket好
2. 00:10:387 (3,4) 移到x236, y312 變成一個三角形
3. 00:23:177 (4) 往上一格
   00:24:282 (3) 這個也跟著調
   00:24:440 (4) 稍微移到x200, y120
4. 00:29:335 (3) 其實我覺得這個換成slider好點，因為vocal是長音
5. 00:30:440 (4) 往上移到x464, y84
   00:30:756 (5) 移到 x408, y140
6. 00:32:492 (4) 換成slider 00:32:808 這裡也加個，vocal很明顯可是這裡是空的，導致接下來很難接，倒不如加上2個slider還比較好讀
7. 00:33:124 (2) 真心難讀 對hard來說
8. 00:35:335 (2) 這也是同樣的問題，vocal明明有卻斷掉了
9. 00:36:598 (3) ^
   00:46:387 (1,3) 壓到了，稍微調一下吧
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:09:124 (1,2,3,4) 這4個真的是非常凶殘，妳可能沒有發現從kiai開始，1個note以上的地方妳幾乎都是疊起來，到了這裡忽然4個note又加大間距，自然就突然變難了
11. 01:28:545 (2,3) ctrl+G

這個Hard最大的問題在我看下來就是斷的很突然，如果妳決定要跟vocal那就要好好的跟vocal，不要一下跟鼓點一下跟vocal的，而且妳很多地方都重疊，讓player一定得看圈圈才能知道甚麼時候要打，不是說重疊不好，只是慎用

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:02:808 (4) +whistle
2. 00:06:756 (1) 這個drum好怪 ._.
3. 00:52:545 (6) 玩了很多次覺得這個6卡手，所以我稍微換了下位子和後面的跳法，看看就好
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:05:492 (1) 移到 01:04:545 (4) 感覺好點

Good Luck

来骗kd新手mod了

General
没啥说的
tag里加上BL

Easy
00:07:545 (1,1) - 作为easy个人认为有点近了
00:47:650 (1) - 柑橘下一个在nc更好
01:16:703 (1,1) - 弄成一个或者不要两个spinner
吐槽一下为什么那么多spinner，想当初新手时一看见spinner就蛋疼其实我现在还是新手

Normal
00:42:598 (3) - 这个可以拖长一点吧，到白线上
00:46:387 (5) - 这里NC然后00:47:650 (1) - 这里不要nc
挺好的

Hard
190还1.6！
00:04:703 (4,5) - 好远
00:10:071 (2) - clap
00:20:492 (3,4) - 不要叠在一起吧，要不有点坑
00:52:861 (1,2) - 歪了
01:15:124 (3,4) - ^
01:19:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这段有点吵，建议去whistle
其他都很好实在找不出错来

Insane
不会==求原谅
没用就别给我kd，给了我也射回来
GL

Hello,mod in game PM =w=
BG一股浓浓的NTR气息

Easy
00:44:492 - 感觉这个音空着难受，可以吧滑条2移到这里，00:45:440 - 然后这里补个note
._.没了。。


Normal
00:10:387 (1) - 感觉滑条尾也可以加一个clap
01:21:756 (1) - 滑条尾的whistle去掉加到滑条头试试


Hard
00:33:124 (1,2,3,1,2) - 这里有点难读不像hard，可以试试把00:33:598 (3,1) - stack起来



找不出什么问题，射一星好了w

I love this song <3
Good Luck~!

Just some suggestion... (actually only DS i guess LOL)
[Easy]
for DS(distance spacing) i recommend between 0.79~0.80/0.81
make it more neat
like..
00:05:966 (2) - move to x: 92 y: 220
00:06:598 (3) - move to x: 184 y: 308
00:07:229 (1) - move to x: 252 y: 200
00:24:914 (2) - move to x:196 y: 208
.... etc
and the rest is up to you because too many i think

[Normal]
for DS don't make it too far D: like..0.98~1.00/1.01 is enough xD
for spin(beat suggestion becuase too hard for normal):
00:51:124 (1) - it's should be start at 00:51:203 (1) - and end at 00:53:019
01:12:756 (1) - it's should be start at 01:12:835 (1) - and end at 01:13:782
01:16:703 (1) - it's should be start at 01:16:782 (1) - and end at 01:18:835
01:19:229 (1) - it's should be start at 01:19:308 (1) - and end at 01:21:361
01:24:282 (1) - it's should be start at 01:24:361 (1) - and end at 01:26:729

i can't mod hard and insane, really lol
[Hard]
ah.. add some stream please?

[D.N.Angel]
nothing to do with this lol i'm noob at modding insane diff

i hope this wouldl help you because that's all just suggestion, and this is the first time i'm modding ><
i try my best for this map!!
waiting for ranked ><

kuroanchan wrote:

I love this song <3
Good Luck~!

Just some suggestion... (actually only DS i guess LOL)
[Easy]
for DS(distance spacing) i recommend between 0.79~0.80/0.81
make it more neat
like..
00:05:966 (2) - move to x: 92 y: 220
00:06:598 (3) - move to x: 184 y: 308
00:07:229 (1) - move to x: 252 y: 200
00:24:914 (2) - move to x:196 y: 208
.... etc
and the rest is up to you because too many i think

[Normal]
for DS don't make it too far D: like..0.98~1.00/1.01 is enough xD
for spin(beat suggestion becuase too hard for normal):
00:51:124 (1) - it's should be start at 00:51:203 (1) - and end at 00:53:019
01:12:756 (1) - it's should be start at 01:12:835 (1) - and end at 01:13:782
01:16:703 (1) - it's should be start at 01:16:782 (1) - and end at 01:18:835
01:19:229 (1) - it's should be start at 01:19:308 (1) - and end at 01:21:361
01:24:282 (1) - it's should be start at 01:24:361 (1) - and end at 01:26:729

i hope this wouldl help you because that's all just suggestion, and this is the first time i'm modding ><
i try my best for this map!!
waiting for ranked ><

Thanks~ mod
But I don't wanna change anything cuz it doesn't matter for the map I think
no kudosu this time sorry~