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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly

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alacat
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月18日 at 21:35:42

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Graceful Anomaly
Source: Magical Charming!
Tags: visual novel opening lump of sugar kosiga Melophobia hentai eroge
BPM: 164
Filesize: 16420kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5 stars, 273 notes)
  2. kosiga's Normal (3.11 stars, 111 notes)
  3. Melo's Hard (4.92 stars, 212 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#20
まじかる　ちゃ～みんぐ！ OP.

special Normal : kosiga
special Hard : Melophobia
Insane : me
Last edited by alacat , edited 38 times in total.
CakiP
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CakiP
頑張ってー！ :)
alacat
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alacat
ありがとう :)
MiLu
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MiLu
こりえりこ
alacat
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alacat
みるちゃそ :oops:
Melophobia
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Melophobia
DLできないんだけど！！
alacat
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alacat
たぶんバグっぽい :o

でももう大丈夫です！もう一度お願します＼(^o^)／
scanter
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scanter
hentai >< /me runs
alacat
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alacat
Thank youuuuuuu !! not hentai

add new video and hit sound :3
Satellite
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Satellite
hi~

[Insane]
01:10:258 - いらない緑線?　あっても無くても良いと思うけど一応(´・ω・｀)
00:15:563 (4,5) - 配置の提案～～
00:16:294 (2) - 頭にwhistleあったほうが良い感じ？
00:22:148 (2) - こちらにもwhistle同じように
00:23:063 (4) - move x300 y220　お試しください
00:26:172 - ここにもnoteを置いてからスピンのほうが良いがします。歌詞も強いので　( 01:36:416 (4) - ここもそうなってるので)
00:31:477 - add note?　多分わざと抜いてるんだと思いますが、置いたほうが叩きやすいような・・
00:34:404 (4,5,6,7) - 凄くやりづらいと思うけど歌詞をフォローするなら1/3リズムでこのように配置するべきです、曲調にも合います

01:01:294 (5) - remove Finish?なんかずれてるきがする 01:01:477 (1) - 変わりにこっちの頭につけたほうがいいかも？
01:11:722 (2) - 頭にwhistle?
01:13:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - 配置の提案　(４は 01:11:172 (4) - ココに重ねてます　)
01:14:648 (1) - move x392 y192で綺麗になる？
01:21:782 - add note　同様の理由
01:25:989 (5) - move x136 y72　このあたりにもってくると流れが綺麗になると思います

相変わらず綺麗なmap :) :)

[Normal]
00:32:209 (1) - なーんかあってない気がします　改善案はなし
00:59:831 - add note?
01:11:538 - ^
01:20:319 (5) - 後ろにFinish忘れだと思います

Nice Normalです :D :D

good luckです～ Hardのmodが必要な際はまたお声かけください、リチェックにきます_(:3 」∠)_
まあmeloさんのHardなら言うことなくて呼ばれても困るんですけど！！！
alacat
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Satellite wrote:

hi~ hi :3

[Insane]
01:10:258 - いらない緑線?　あっても無くても良いと思うけど一応(´・ω・｀) ok!
00:15:563 (4,5) - 配置の提案～～ (5)で飛ばしたいのでこのままで~
00:16:294 (2) - 頭にwhistleあったほうが良い感じ？ ok!
00:22:148 (2) - こちらにもwhistle同じように ok!
00:23:063 (4) - move x300 y220　お試しください no change ~
00:26:172 - ここにもnoteを置いてからスピンのほうが良いがします。歌詞も強いので　( 01:36:416 (4) - ここもそうなってるので) 最後だけ強調しています lol
00:31:477 - add note?　多分わざと抜いてるんだと思いますが、置いたほうが叩きやすいような・・ 静かなパート and 歌詞フォローで統一したいのであけています :3
00:34:404 (4,5,6,7) - 凄くやりづらいと思うけど歌詞をフォローするなら1/3リズムでこのように配置するべきです、曲調にも合います
フォローしている音はわかりますが、やりにくいです :o
01:01:294 (5) - remove Finish?なんかずれてるきがする 01:01:477 (1) - 変わりにこっちの頭につけたほうがいいかも？ ok!
01:11:722 (2) - 頭にwhistle? ok!
01:13:002 (1,2,3,4,5) - 配置の提案　(４は 01:11:172 (4) - ココに重ねてます　) no change~
01:14:648 (1) - move x392 y192で綺麗になる？ このままで！
01:21:782 - add note　同様の理由 same
01:25:989 (5) - move x136 y72　このあたりにもってくると流れが綺麗になると思います 前の(2)に重ねています >_<

相変わらず綺麗なmap :) :) 8-)
Thanks atellite ;)
Melophobia
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http://puu.sh/30qXb.osu
osokunatte sumimasen ;;;;
ato de custom hitsounds tuika suru kamo desu
alacat
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arigatou gozaimasu :D

Meloさんのcustom sound が届いたらmod集めようと思います:3

Edit : 了解です!
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Rare
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alacat
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scanter
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Dx too pro mapset !

General

  1. Write down tags on eroge, hentai game? lol

kosiga's Normal

  1. 00:18:855 (4) - A little bit long. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777060
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    140,112,18855,2,0,P|176:254|88:276,1,250,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    12,224,20136,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:22:880 - Add 1 circle? it has outstanding sound. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777003
  3. 00:25:075 (4) - How about NC? 00:25:075 (4,5) this object is hidden a bit seconds. so, players might confuse this.
  4. 00:32:209 (1) - Add more variation slider's shape? just curve is a little boring. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777150
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    396,100,32209,6,0,B|356:80|304:112|304:112|256:96|256:96|224:184|128:160,2,300,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:08:063 (1,2) - A little bad overlap. I recommend this shape. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777089
    This is code.
    SPOILER
    200,240,68063,6,0,P|172:233|148:235,2,50,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,236,68611,2,0,P|276:204|272:124,2,99.9999999999999,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 01:10:258 (1) - Is it intentionally? unless, fit distance like x1.1?
  7. 01:20:319 (5) - How about this? it might fit well vocals more. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777038

Melo's Hard

  1. 00:24:709 (3) - NC? jump is big and sound changed.
  2. 00:34:404 (4,5,6) - Change 1/4 slider? I think, in this song, at stream drum sounds well fit.
  3. 00:49:404 (3) - Ctrl + G? volume suddenly up 00:49:770 (1) this point. makes jump fit well.
  4. 00:50:502 (3,4) - Same. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/777191
  5. 01:34:770 (2) - Is it intentionally jump? unless, reduce it's distance?
  6. 01:36:416 (1) - spinners end 01:40:989 here or fit likes moecat's diff. looks good for me. if so, don't forget decrescendo.

Insane

  1. 00:16:294 (2) - Ctrl + G?
  2. 00:24:709 (4) - NC? sound was changed.
  3. 01:01:294 (5) - Clear finish sound. I don't think fit well.
That's all ;) I can't endure she's moe vocals lol. GL xD
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
so moe
10nya
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10nya
hentai onee-chan ;p
i'm coming via in-game pm request

[General]
  1. add eroge to tags pls
  2. pls add Easy diff? I meant it just feel so empty with N I I diff (or perhaps add taiko nantonaku ne !)
  3. add custom slidertick with clap sound? it'll make claps consistent (specially @easier diff)
  4. white combo is just too bright when kiai time imo, a bit darker?
  5. try offset 13,187 ?
[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:13:184 (1)- : uh add drum clap additions ? x.x
  2. 00:17:575 (1)- : add finish to the head?
  3. 00:32:209 (1)- : try this rhythm?
  4. 00:38:063 (1)- : to follow vocal end the slider at 00:39:160 ?
  5. 00:41:721 (2)- : finish is too loud, change this to whistle? + i don't hear any finish here : O
  6. 00:44:648 (2)- : ^
  7. 00:47:575 (2)- : ^
  8. 00:56:538 (1)- : add finish to the head?
  9. 01:19:038 (1)- : add finsih?
[Melo's Hard]
  1. 00:22:331 (2)- : put this to 372 92 ?
  2. 00:40:624 (1)- : add finish here? also remove finish from 00:40:989 (1) 's slider head?
  3. 00:53:428 (2)- : put this to 184 244 to make same distance as 00:52:514 (4) 's circle?
  4. 01:05:502 (3)- : put this to 244 276 ? oxo
  5. 01:11:538 (3)- : add finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:13:184 (1)- : finish is just too loud for me, change this into drum clap?
  2. 00:34:678 (6,7)- : the sound end at 00:34:587 so delete this notes, add circle on 00:34:495 here instead imoooooooooooooo x.x
  3. 00:52:331 (4)- : put this to 433 132 and ctrl+g it? oxo imoooo
good luck :3
Kitsuneko
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Kitsuneko
背景の子かわいい（小並感）

General



  1. OK

kosiga's Normal


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 00:20:136 - Add whistle.
  2. 00:25:989 - ^
  3. 01:19:038 (1) - Remove whistle, Add finish.
  4. 01:20:867 - Add whistle.
  5. 01:30:380 - ^
Mapping

  1. 00:25:258 (5) - 中央に置くなら直線で置くかなぁ
  2. 00:42:087 (1) - RNC
  3. 00:47:941 (1) - ^
  4. 00:51:233 (4) - NC
  5. 01:01:477 (2) - 01:00:014 (3)を反転して置くとか、縦よりも横向きの流れの方がいい
    img

Melo's Hard


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Fine
Mapping

  1. 00:42:453 (1) - 00:41:721 (3) から1.4xくらいの位置に 00:43:002 (2,3)より距離短いのはちょっと不自然
  2. 01:20:867 (2,3) - 前後みたままのスペーシング同じ距離に
    img
    これくらいでいいんじゃないかな

Insane


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Fine
Mapping

  1. 00:13:916 (3) - もっと角度つけよう
    img
    あとこの画像じゃ直してないけど00:14:648 (1) - と微妙に平行になってないから直してね
  2. 00:39:709 (6) - NC?
  3. 01:33:672 (1) - スライダーのお腹逆の方がよくない？ 01:33:306 (5) と角度も揃うし
    img



Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
Hi moecat!

[General]
  1. Hentai video! /me hides
[kosiga's Normal]
  1. 00:39:343 (2) - It looks a bit strange to overlap this slider with the previous slider body. How about this?
    Image and Code

    396,12,39343,2,0,P|472:104|416:212,1,250,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:58:550 - 01:16:111: If you like, you can add a kiai section here just like in Melo's difficulty.
[Melo's Hard]
  1. 00:21:782 (1,2) - I would probably reverse selection (and maybe readjust) the first slider and move the hit circle to improve flow. Also, be cafeful when overlapping the next note with the previous slider since this isn't insane difficulty.
[Insane]
  1. 00:58:550 - 01:16:111: Same as Easy!
Why so pro? I can't found anything! :(
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