1. Aleks' Note (4.26 stars, 213 notes)
2. cRyo's Note (4.6 stars, 291 notes)
3. Love Note (4.95 stars, 409 notes)
4. Saten's Note (2.68 stars, 161 notes)

Wolf wrote:

Love Note
00:54:433 (4) - Move to x:236 y:244 to match with previous circles? no.. made it looks like a small arc on pattern purpose
02:07:933 (5) - Fix spacing? alright, moved a bit more far instead

1. 01:22:290 - 01:25:290 - Instead of leaving the title text utilization being useless, I suggest you to remove the title from SB here and utilize the title text instead. If you do, call the BATs about this.

1. Why don't you utilize the custom normal-hitwhistle =A= your map now sounds rather empty without it
2. 00:23:576 (1) - Remove whistle from slider start to follow music?
3. 00:25:290 (1) - Same here but on the slider end instead?
4. 00:38:576 (3) - Whistle here?
5. 00:39:005 (1) - Remove whistle on end?
6. 01:15:862 (2) - Use soft-sampleset here instead of normal?
7. 01:17:576 (2) - ^
8. 01:18:005 (3,1) - Overlap =A=
9. 01:22:290 (1) - Remove this slider and add a circle here instead, also to follow consistency among the other diffs.
10. 01:37:505 - A note here won't be bad.
11. 02:17:147 (1) - Not "spiral" enough

1. Is this Normal or Hard?
2. Oh god, so much overused soft-hitwhistle here. why
3. 00:14:362 (2) - Remove whistle on end
4. 00:17:576 (2) - Remove whistle on start
5. 00:25:290 (2) - Remove whistle on end
6. 00:27:433 (1) - ^
7. 00:33:272 (2) - I'm not sure about this :S
8. 00:42:005 (1) - Remove whistle on end
9. 00:46:719 (5) - Remove whistle
10. 00:47:362 (2) - Remove whistle
11. 00:48:005 (1,1) - Remove whistle on both reverse
12. 00:52:719 (2) - Remove whistle on start
13. 00:53:576 (3) - Remove whistle
14. Too much overuses. I'll leave the rest to you but I told you, overused hitsound is not good and breaks song flow
15. 01:08:576 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing

1. 00:16:505 (6) - Remove whistle from start?
2. 00:17:576 (2,4) - Remove whistle?
3. 00:21:647 (2,3) - Unstack will be cooler.
4. 00:51:433 (1) - Remove whistle?
5. 00:53:576 (2) - ^
6. 02:12:005 (3) - I'm not sure about the shape... :S

inverness wrote:

1. 01:22:290 - 01:25:290 - Instead of leaving the title text utilization being useless, I suggest you to remove the title from SB here and utilize the title text instead. If you do, call the BATs about this.

really nice idea, i will think about it

senaya wrote:

ты же знаешь, что я не умею модить. лучше бы кудосов попросил накидать :< ты мне ето каждую мапу говоришь ==

[Love]
you have some questionably-shaped sliders too but not as heavy as cRyo's. cryo sliders is.. cuuuute
also, would be cool if part till 00:40:290 - could get a lower AR but sadly that's impossible :< yeah..

zweiii wrote:

[Love Note]
00:01:719 (5) - NC 00:01:719 (5,1,2,3) - I think this four shuold be in one group yes
maybe your can place them like this four 00:08:576 (1,2,3,4) done
00:03:005 (3) - make the volume low at this note 16%
00:09:862 (4) - ↑ 16%
00:17:576 (1,2,3) - I think this would be better i know i need remap this moment.. i will, when get some inspiration

SPOILER

00:17:147 to 00:27:433 maybe change the volume to 15%? im not sure..
00:20:576 (3) - the shape are strange maybe change it to this? will be remapped

SPOILER

00:34:290 to 00:40:290 maybe change the volume to 15%? actually i think 15% is too low for me here
00:40:290 to 00:46:719 let the volume change from 15% ^
00:52:076 (1) - why NC here? I think NC here should be better 00:52:290 (2) It's four in a group
maybe you can place them like this: yes, didnt like this moment from start, remapped

SPOILER

01:32:147 to 01:39:112 volume down to 15% ^
01:35:576 (1) - NC here 01:36:005 nope, nc is fine here
01:35:147 (3,4,1,2) - this four should be consistent looks like we have different thoughts about this pattern
01:36:862 (5,6,1,2) - ↑ ^
01:43:290 (1,2,1) - add inherit timing points to low down the volume little by little. okay
01:43:719
19% ^
01:44:147
18% ^
01:44:576
16% 17%
01:45:005
15% 16%
01:45:219 to 01:47:576 volume down to 18% okay
01:46:719 (1) - NC here 01:47:594 or here 01:46:290 nope, this combo is fine
01:46:290 (4,1,2) - this three should be consistent why? different pattern - different combo..
01:47:576 volume start change at 20% yup, sounds better

1. Approach Rate - 1 . so fast ><
2. 00:18:005 (3) - try this ? Fix this one, so it prevents the player is going to misread.
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576475
3. 00:21:647 (1) - add whistle to the repeat of the slider , remove it to the head.
   same as here.00:20:147 (1) - , 00:23:576 (1) -
4. 00:44:576 (3) - add new combo . you put some repeats here.
5. 00:48:005 (2) - touch the HP bar >< try to move down here.
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576493
6. 00:51:433 (3) - same as above.00:44:576 (3) -
7. 00:54:862 (1) - try to make curve slider ? looks good imo :3
8. 01:18:005 (3) - hmm... you should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good.
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576633
9. 01:33:647 (3) - same as above.00:21:647 (1) -
10. 02:01:719 (4,5) - try to put a little bit better this blanket.

1. 00:01:719 (1) - I feel these consecutive whistle does not match , remove it to the end of the slider.
2. 00:08:576 (3) - same as here.
3. 00:54:219 (2,3) - try to put 1/2 repeat slider ? there is hard to take a little for beginners.
4. 01:59:361 (2,3) - same as here.
5. 02:13:075 (2) - same as here.
6. 02:18:647 - I want to put sound here . so try to put a slider from here.02:18:433 -

1. 00:00:862 (2) - add whistle to the end of the slider.
2. 00:07:719 (2) - same as here.
3. 02:20:362 (3) - remove whistle to the head of the slider.it is unnecessary here. ><
   ...orz nice (*´∀｀*)♪

1. 00:29:147 (7,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
2. 00:33:004 (5) - I want to put more jump here . I feel there is strong sound same as here.00:32:147 -
3. 00:39:433 (3) - try to put a little bit better this blanket.
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/576834
4. 00:47:576 (3) - more spacing here ? same as 00:48:862 (1,2) - and 00:50:576 (1,2) -
5. 02:10:719 (3,4) - switch these notes for flow.
6. 02:20:362 (2) - same as hard diff.