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[Koi]
00:10:643 - a bit awkward you only do single LN here, having
http://puu.sh/zgnuE/fd87058c12.png will be much more fit.
00:37:985 (37985|0,37985|1) - kinda awkward this one being at same column with 00:37:225 - , since you didn't do it at other places such as 00:40:263 - , 00:43:301 - , etc. I will suggest
https://puu.sh/zgnym/a42f75f118.png instead.
00:57:732 (57732|5,57921|3) - I will recommend these to be at col 4 and col 6, so that 00:57:921 - being jacked with 00:58:111 - , similar with how you did 00:51:845 (51845|4,52035|4) -
01:10:263 (70263|0,70453|2) - try make these col 3 and col 4 cause of similar reason as above.
01:37:985 (97985|4,98364|2) - I suggest to switch column here, so that the pattern at 01:37:795 (97795|5,97795|4,97890|3) - will connect with the LN, which gives more natural flow
01:40:453 (100453|0,100453|1,100643|3,100643|4) - should be same snap as 01:41:909 (101909|5,101909|3,102035|2,102035|0) -
01:56:023 (116023|3,116118|2) - recommend make these at col 3 and col 4, pattern at 01:56:023 (116023|3,116118|0,116118|2,116213|1) - felt unnatural somehow.
[Bie's Hard]
00:10:833 - Should be double for consistency with 00:10:263 -
00:29:630 - Should be triple for consistency with 00:26:592 -
00:45:959 - add note here, kinda empty without note.
00:47:288 - same as 00:10:833 -
01:17:858 - Should be triple like 01:17:099 - ?
[Normal]
00:23:175 - Add note for ending of the LN is fine here for crash. also for consistency with 00:35:326 -
00:29:820 (29820|0,30010|1) - try move to col 2 and col 3? the minitrill felt awkward as other similar place doesn't use that.