as requested, hitsound volume crusade pending edition
you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence
there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat
pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo
00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:
00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:
01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column
I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you
01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice
01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV)
01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo
01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:
rest is fine by me
you're using soft sampleset for a rather energetic song, hence the hitnormals are not audible, just change the sampleset to normal and see the diffrence
there's also some severe lack of sample placements, for example from 00:05:627 - onwards you could put whistles on the main beat and just layer those whistles for the same beat
pattern suggestions since it didn't feel completely how it should be imo
00:19:928 - I think to make that it would be more fitting and way more interesting for this sort of trilly sound to have actual trills here, here's my suggestion:
00:42:000 - to avoid a pretty unnatural shield on 2nd column I suggest doing this, which still follows the pitch and flows a bit better:
01:00:446 - Missed a note here, not jacked with the next note since doesn't fit but it should be there, you could for example reverse columns of 01:00:187 (60187|3,60342|2) - and then put the 1/3 on 3rd column
I feel like the 1/3s in this section have a lot of impact and could be a small jumpjack section but that's up to you
01:05:005 (65005|3,65109|3,65213|3,65316|3) - this 4 note jack being the transition in to another LN section seems not good, I would personally switch LN patterns around so that 01:05:316 (65316|3) - would be on 3rd column, but I didn't play the map yet so your choice
01:09:669 - I see your intention here on making the hard hits more emphasized with SV and chords but are you 100% sure you want to completely ignore the synth burst you have here? It would be interesting imo (ofc without SV)
01:15:653 - a bunch of missed 1/4s in this section, featuring the highlighted timestamp, it's not good to miss them consistency wise imo
01:21:016 (81016|2,81171|2,81327|2,81482|2) - Two shields, easily mindblockable, suggesting something similar to the shield I mentioned before:
rest is fine by me