doykyoto wrote:

dipaksa mod... kay

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19:39 *doykyoto is listening to Tia - Nirvana
19:39 doykyoto: eh salah
19:40 *Rinzler is away: Please Try Again Later
19:40 *doykyoto is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
19:40 doykyoto: shi
19:40 Rinzler: gobloo
19:40 *doykyoto is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
19:40 doykyoto: si bangke ternyata bikin ini juga lo
19:40 Rinzler: bruh
19:40 Rinzler: gw dari desember 2015
19:40 Rinzler: mau gw rank
19:41 doykyoto: bruh
19:41 doykyoto: yauda
19:41 doykyoto: habis w mod lgsg rank
19:41 Rinzler: lo donlotnya kapan dot ?
19:41 doykyoto: 00:22:650 dari sini ada suara lagi.. gamau ngasih beberapa  not?
19:41 doykyoto: 00:22:650 -
19:41 Rinzler: ada HS yang gw tambahin soalnya
19:41 doykyoto: ow
19:41 doykyoto: w apdet ntar
19:41 doykyoto: dah uptodate
19:41 Rinzler: suara apaan ?
19:42 doykyoto: hs 
19:42 doykyoto: dah update
19:42 doykyoto: ini kan w donlot kmrn pas mabar
19:42 doykyoto: btw
19:42 doykyoto: itu 00:22:650 ada synth lagi to
19:42 doykyoto: 00:22:650 -
19:42 doykyoto: AAA
19:42 doykyoto: slalu lupa kasih -
19:43 doykyoto: di lanjutanya 00:22:650 - ituloo
19:43 doykyoto: ah kamu gapeka banget si
19:43 Rinzler: oh
19:43 doykyoto: headset w nyetrum gabisa maksimal modding --
19:43 Rinzler: OH
19:43 Rinzler: ga ah dot
19:43 doykyoto: iya mala mess nt
19:43 Rinzler: ignore part situ aja ya
19:43 Rinzler: 00:43:340 - dari sini aja
19:44 Rinzler: mau gw remap tadinya
19:45 doykyoto: 00:45:150 dari sini sampe lanjut kalo pake playback 25% kan ada suara piano tuh
19:45 doykyoto: 00:45:150 -
19:45 doykyoto: ah lupa kasih - zzz
19:45 doykyoto: bisa ditambahin ... tp sepertinya krg menonjol si
19:45 doykyoto: lagian ni kan maraton
19:46 doykyoto: 00:45:495 - 00:45:668 - bisa jadi stair
19:46 Rinzler: 00:45:150 - wat
19:46 Rinzler: i don't even map piano
19:46 doykyoto: gatau itu suara apaan 
19:46 doykyoto: synth?
19:46 doykyoto: au ah
19:46 Rinzler: keep it for consistency tho
19:46 doykyoto: pokoknya ada yg ngikutin sblm drum
19:46 doykyoto: okla
19:47 doykyoto: 00:59:892 di sini ada drum knapa ga dobel/
19:47 doykyoto: 00:59:892 -
19:47 Rinzler: lu itu ketik manual dot ?
19:48 Rinzler: timestampnya
19:48 doykyoto: gak la
19:48 doykyoto: copas
19:48 doykyoto: cuma heranya kdg gaada - kdg ada
19:48 doykyoto: sial kan
19:48 Rinzler: kok cacat
19:48 Rinzler: drum
19:48 Rinzler: wat
19:48 doykyoto: gpp lah ignot
19:48 doykyoto: pake 25%
19:48 Rinzler: entar patternnya malah jelek
19:48 doykyoto: konsistensi suara?
19:48 Rinzler: kalo gw taro note disana, 01:02:650 - disini juga seharusnya ada
19:48 Rinzler: tapi gw ga map
19:49 Rinzler: gw ngerti kok dot
19:49 doykyoto: oh lu fokus sama suara di 01:03:340 -
19:49 doykyoto: wakatta
19:50 doykyoto: 01:26:185 - ini sambungin ama not lain dong.. kasian menjomblo...
19:51 Rinzler: pindah ke 2 gitu ?
19:51 doykyoto: jadi gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5098263 ?? saran aja
19:51 doykyoto: ya direarrange
19:52 doykyoto: 01:35:150 ampun reverse shieldnya 
19:52 doykyoto: 01:35:150 -
19:52 Rinzler: gw rearrange dikit lah
19:52 Rinzler: gw ga suka ada anchor
19:52 doykyoto: sebelumnya dah shield.. jd saran direarrange ;a
19:52 doykyoto: yauda
19:53 Rinzler: ga susah lah dot
19:53 Rinzler: ha
19:53 doykyoto: nvm
19:53 doykyoto: w bdmd sbnrnya
19:53 doykyoto: hdst nyetrum
19:53 doykyoto: mls :v
19:53 Rinzler: nyetrum gimana si
19:53 Rinzler: cabut lah
19:53 doykyoto: gabisa
19:53 doykyoto: berisik
19:53 doykyoto: dpn rumah w jalan rame
19:54 doykyoto: nanggung amat 02:11:530 -
19:54 doykyoto: dobel emang knapa?
19:55 doykyoto: eh mksd w di single knapa emangnya?
19:55 doykyoto: itu kan bunyi drum semua sampe 02:12:306 -
19:55 Rinzler: kenapa gw mulai dobelnya disini 02:11:616 -  gitu ?
19:55 doykyoto: ngga
19:55 Rinzler: iya
19:55 doykyoto: tuh single notenya
19:55 Rinzler: oh di awal single, terus kesana dobel ?
19:55 Rinzler: 2-1-2-1-2-2-2-2-2-2
19:55 Rinzler: begitu ?
19:56 doykyoto: ini lo [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5098300 mas bru]
19:56 doykyoto: kenapa harus single kalo bisa didobel? itu kan ikut ngetrill juga seharusnya
19:56 Rinzler: lah 02:10:840 (130840|1,131185|2,131357|0) - ini kan single juga
19:56 Rinzler: ooh
19:57 Rinzler: suara drumnya gradually increase mulai dari sini 02:11:616 -
19:57 Rinzler: makanya dari sana gw pake 2-2-2-2-2-2
19:57 Rinzler: instead of 2-1-2-1-2
19:58 doykyoto: 02:25:754 ini kok ga dobel?
19:58 doykyoto: 02:25:754 -
19:58 Rinzler: suara drumnya makin kuat maksud gw
19:58 doykyoto: ya tau paham ko
19:59 Rinzler: oh itu
19:59 Rinzler: fixed
19:59 Rinzler: abis remap
20:01 doykyoto: dah
20:01 doykyoto: dah good
20:02 doykyoto: lu minta mod ama w -- 
20:02 doykyoto: ini dah polished
20:02 doykyoto: tinggal minta BN 
20:02 doykyoto: ato kalo gak minta pro mapper lain buat ngemod

good chart
must give a star here

Rizqy wrote:

first bub

peuting peuting

20:28 Rizqy: nirvana
20:28 Rinzler: cek ?
20:28 Rinzler: kuy
20:29 Rizqy: kela multi
20:30 Rinzler: sarua
20:30 Rinzler: WKWKWKWKW
20:30 Rinzler: IEU AING NGAKAK KEUR NGAROASTED
20:30 Rizqy: gandeng
20:30 Rizqy: inv room coba
20:31 Rinzler: Come join my multiplayer match: "[osump://18816/1 James Ong's game]"
20:36 Rinzler: dieu
20:39 Rizqy: np keun
20:40 *Rinzler is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix)]
20:40 Rinzler: eta urang poho baheula teh pernah rek diupdate
20:40 Rinzler: tapi leungit WKWKWKWKWK
20:42 Rizqy: gblk
20:43 Rinzler: ngan HS hungkul asana mah
20:43 Rizqy: tay
20:43 Rinzler: oh inget urang
20:43 Rizqy: sugan geus siap
20:43 Rinzler: enggeus jan
20:44 Rinzler: 01:52:995 (112995|1,113168|2,113340|1,113513|2) -
20:44 Rinzler: ngaleungitkeun suara ieu tah
20:44 Rinzler: eta hungkul
20:44 Rizqy: kela sakali deui
20:44 Rizqy: ngeunah lagu na
20:44 Rinzler: sok
20:44 Rinzler: patternna jan
20:44 Rinzler: rapihkeun
20:46 *Rizqy is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
20:47 *Rinzler is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846927 kors k feat.RIRE - Nirvana(Camellia's "BinaryHeaven" Remix) [Tranquility]]
20:48 Rizqy: 01:30:495 - add di 2, ikutin flow
20:48 Rizqy: 1 2 3 4
20:49 Rinzler: zeeb
20:49 Rizqy: 01:33:254 - add di [3] tapi 01:33:340 (93340|2) - pindahkeun ka [4]
20:50 Rinzler: done
20:50 Rizqy: 01:36:013 - add di [1]
20:50 Rizqy: 01:37:392 - [3]
20:52 Rinzler: done
20:52 Rizqy: 01:50:582 - http://puu.sh/sgMGX/641f5328de.jpg || leuwih karasa
20:53 Rinzler: oh nya
20:53 Rinzler: kade HS na maneh
20:53 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkw
20:54 Rizqy: belakangan hs mah
20:54 Rizqy: 02:01:616 - http://puu.sh/sgMMX/54c35f9260.jpg
20:55 Rinzler: diganti LN jan ?
20:55 Rinzler: done
20:55 Rizqy: LN na tambah
20:55 Rizqy: 02:17:737 (137737|2) - pindah ka 02:17:564 -
20:56 Rinzler: done
20:56 Rizqy: 02:17:823 - http://puu.sh/sgMQX/f60a7aef76.jpg
20:56 Rizqy: 02:17:737 - oh tambah deui di [1]
20:56 Rinzler: done
20:56 Rinzler: naha kudu 2 ?
20:57 Rinzler: oh ngarti
20:57 Rizqy: sora kos mencret na asa alus mun 2 LN
20:58 Rizqy: 02:29:547 (149547|1,149604|2) - ka kiri 1 kolom
20:59 Rizqy: leuwih rapih da sok
20:59 Rizqy: 02:28:857 - oh sebelumna ubah ieu http://puu.sh/sgN0j/5e23860732.jpg
20:59 Rinzler: moal kagok eta ?
21:00 Rizqy: moal ah
21:00 Rinzler: geus
21:00 Rizqy: aing 300 kabeh
21:00 Rinzler: anjir gaya
21:00 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkwkw
21:03 Rizqy: 04:13:857 (253857|3) - ka [4]
21:03 Rizqy: eh [1]
21:03 Rinzler: eta geus di 4 gblk
21:04 Rizqy: nyaeta ralat ka hiji tll
21:04 Rinzler: geus
21:04 Rizqy: geus weh kitu hungkul da
21:04 Rizqy: coba recek hs na
21:04 Rizqy: update hela
21:05 Rinzler: kela atuh
21:05 Rinzler: kedap
21:05 *Rizqy is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/173567 Sakaue Nachi - Crazy Hot [Lunatic]]
21:05 Rizqy: ketagihan bgst
21:07 Rinzler: kela poho aing wkwkwkw
21:09 Rizqy: naon pho
21:09 Rizqy: poho
21:09 Rinzler: revive heula
21:11 Rinzler: geus
21:13 Rizqy: bentar re dl
21:16 Rizqy: anjir hs na teu cocok
21:16 Rizqy: cari hit-normal gih
21:16 Rinzler: hit-normalna urang default nya ?
21:17 Rizqy: heeuh
21:17 Rizqy: garandeng
21:17 Rinzler: wkwkwkwkwkw
21:17 Rinzler: make naon atuh
21:17 Rizqy: nu kick kick weh lah
21:17 Rizqy: teang
21:19 Rinzler: bingung aing
21:20 Rinzler: geus
21:20 Rinzler: update ?>
21:21 Rizqy: sok
21:21 Rinzler: http://puu.sh/sgNPF/fe4c5d0a94.wav
21:21 Rinzler: yeuh
21:21 Rizqy: ke urang re dl weh
21:21 Rinzler: meh teu kudu redl
21:21 Rizqy: bae
21:21 Rinzler: sok
21:21 Rinzler: geus
21:27 Rinzler: Rizqy Fauzan
21:27 Rizqy: aha
21:31 Rizqy: 01:59:030 (119030|1) - beep nya pindahin ke LN
21:32 Rinzler: dah
21:36 Rizqy: geus beres
21:36 Rizqy: gancang pan wkwk

AchsanLovers wrote:

uhh, really nice song also fun pattern, idk why a bn didn't notice this map

Asherz007 wrote:

The snapping concern raised by Maxus are valid, so I'll DQ this mapset for now so that those can be fixed.

As far as I know, if Protastic has enough free time, she has the intention of modding this set, so that might happen at some point as well.

Maxus wrote:

Well kinda unsure about the snap, so will mention it here.

01:28:340 (88340|0) - really sure its supposed to be 1/8 at 01:28:383 - , if the rapid sound between 01:28:340 (88340|0,88426|3) - is faster than the ordinary 1/4 stream, then it proves that the former is supposed to have closer snap. a faster stream doesn't mean it should be 1/8, if you are really strict about snapping you can hear it on 50% or even 25%, it's clearly a 1/6, but whatever i'm gonna fix it
01:28:627 (88627|1) - Supposed to be 1/8 at 01:28:642 -

01:39:547 - Supposed to be 1/8 burst, it's similar sound with 02:22:392 - .

Protastic101 wrote:

00:11:616 - I think it would have been better to start the jumps here with the repeat of the first four measures. The sound doesn't really change that much from 00:14:375 - so it's just a more natural break to increase the layering.

00:38:168 (38168|1,38513|2,38513|0) - I think it'd be ok to be a little inaccurate with pitch relevancy here and control J this so that there's a bigger gap between the note in 00:38:513 (38513|2) - and 00:39:030 (39030|3) - since the pitch goes up 4(?) wholesteps as opposed to the regular 1 (G -> A is the normal, but in this case the pitch jumps from G -> D) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243654

01:28:469 (88469|3) - This is a ghost note. The vocal stutter is only a triplet.
01:28:340 (88340|0,88383|2,88426|1) - If above is accepted, I'd control H this to avoid having these two transitional beats be too left hand heavy.

02:22:823 (142823|3,142823|2) - The vocal here is a different pitch from 02:22:650 (142650|3,142650|2) - , so I might move this to be [23] so that it still has a note stacked with the previous jump at 02:22:650 (142650|2,142650|3) - to show they're the same sound, but also has one note that isn't to represent a different pitch.

03:29:978 - 03:30:064 - 03:30:150 - Think it might be cool to add some single notes here for the synth since it's a rather prominent sound once everything else drops out of the music, and the drop in density will reflect that.

04:03:513 - 04:03:857 - The synth has a delay here which makes it 1/8, and I think it's kind of easy to hear in the music, so adding the burst would be nice and also keep the player alert while playing since they tend to lose focus a bit on the transitional sections https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243705

04:14:087 (254087|1,254145|2,254202|3,254260|1,254317|2) - Snapped incorrectly. Should be 1/6 -> 1/8, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10243713


Regarding hitsounds, you'll probably want to increase the volume at places like 00:44:719 - to 30% or so, and then 01:26:185 - to 50% ish and kiais should be closer to 60% for the hitnormal to be kind of audible. Or just like, increase the volume of the hitnormal.

02:29:892 (149892|0) - Missing clap
02:29:806 (149806|1) - Missing finish

Protastic101 wrote:

Can I have a response? At least to the first point since that seems to not have been applied which I'm fine with, but I'd like to know why.