1. 4K Hard - 4Key (3.06 stars, 841 notes)
2. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.99 stars, 516 notes)
3. 7K Hard - 7Key (3.73 stars, 1001 notes)
4. 7K Normal - 7Key (2.51 stars, 599 notes)
5. Chicken Neko's 4K Insane - 4Key (4.02 stars, 1000 notes)
6. Chicken Neko's 7K Insane - 7Key (4.36 stars, 1127 notes)

Kawawa wrote:

no kudosu, but thanks

listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272251 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out]
23:56 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272251 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out [Normal]]
23:56 Kawawa: 무슨 난이도ㅓ
23:56 Kawawa: 봐줄까오
23:56 R e m u r i n g: 둘다봐주면 좋겡소
23:57 Kawawa: 오프셋이
23:57 Kawawa: 다르네요.
23:57 Kawawa: 앞으로 좀
23:57 Kawawa: 댕겨야할듯
23:57 Kawawa: -10정도
23:57 R e m u r i n g: 다른가요
23:57 Kawawa: 낮춰야할거같은데
23:59 Kawawa: 00:04:057 (4057|0,4213|1,4370|2,4526|3,4682|1,4838|2,4995|3,5151|0) -
23:59 Kawawa: 이거 스냅
23:59 Kawawa: 다르자나
23:59 Kawawa: 비보여ㅑㅁ
00:00 R e m u r i n g: 스냅이 다르다구요?
00:00 R e m u r i n g: 4 아닌가
00:01 Kawawa: 3인듯한데
00:01 Kawawa: 아 잠만요
00:01 Kawawa: 10분만 기다려주소 미안하오
00:01 Kawawa: 잠깐 바쁜일이 생겼오
00:01 Kawawa: ;w;
00:02 R e m u r i n g: 내ㅔ.
00:08 Kawawa: yeah
00:08 R e m u r i n g: yea
00:08 R e m u r i n g: :u
00:08 Kawawa: 어
00:08 Kawawa: 오프셋 움직이지말아보쇼
00:08 R e m u r i n g: dk
00:08 Kawawa: 1/4맞네
00:08 Kawawa: 이거 근데
00:08 Kawawa: 왤케 밀리지 음이
00:09 Kawawa: 00:04:213 (4213|1,4370|2,4526|3,4682|1,4838|2,4995|3) -
00:09 Kawawa: 이거 좀 트릴로 좀 쓰쇼
00:09 R e m u r i n g: 1/4는 맞는데 뭔가 이상하네요
00:09 R e m u r i n g: 내
00:09 Kawawa: 00:04:057 (4057|0,4213|1) - 00:04:370 (4370|2,4526|3) - 00:04:682 (4682|1,4838|2) -
00:09 Kawawa: 이거 3개가
00:09 R e m u r i n g: 아 오프셋 바꾸지말구요?
00:09 Kawawa: 왔다갔다 하는 일렉기타잖아요
00:09 Kawawa: 트릴식으로
00:09 Kawawa: 낮은 음 높은 음
00:09 Kawawa: 반복
00:09 Kawawa: 저런거 같은경우엔 그냥 계단보다는 디테일하게
00:10 Kawawa: 반복높낮이 표현을
00:10 Kawawa: 해주는게 더 바람직합니다
00:10 R e m u r i n g: 요리조리 왓다갓다
00:10 R e m u r i n g: 했슴니다.
00:10 Kawawa: 레드라인이
00:10 Kawawa: 하나 소실됐네요
00:11 Kawawa: 00:07:963 - 여기 오프셋
00:11 Kawawa: 하나 추가하시오
00:11 Kawawa: 빨간거
00:11 R e m u r i n g: 내
00:11 Kawawa: 추가하면
00:11 Kawawa: 맵 마지막에 끝나는부분에서
00:11 Kawawa: 메인타이밍섹션에서 끝나잖아요
00:12 R e m u r i n g: 그러네요
00:12 Kawawa: 00:19:370 (19370|3,19682|2,19682|0) -
00:12 Kawawa: 난 이거 롱놋 이상한듯
00:12 Kawawa: https://puu.sh/w6Doz/b0efaa788e.png
00:12 Kawawa: 그냥 이런식으로
00:12 Kawawa: 메인 일렉기타 쪽으로
00:12 Kawawa: 표현해주면 더 나을듯
00:13 R e m u r i n g: 그냥 단놋으로 표현하ㅓ는게 좋으려나
00:13 Kawawa: 스샷줬짢소
00:13 Kawawa: -ㅅ-
00:13 R e m u r i n g: 내
00:13 R e m u r i n g: 이제 왓구만
00:13 Kawawa: 00:28:119 - ~ 00:30:463 -
00:13 Kawawa: 요기 갑자기 노트가 확 줄는데
00:14 Kawawa: 근데 이건 어쩔수 없네
00:14 Kawawa: 걍 유지하쇼
00:15 R e m u r i n g: 이대로 냅두겟스민다
00:15 Kawawa: 01:09:838 (69838|1,70151|2) -
00:15 Kawawa: 이거 지워도 댑니다
00:15 Kawawa: 01:11:088 (71088|2,71401|1) - 이거도오
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 지웟스비낟
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 저거 굳이
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 저렇게 드럼표현안해도되남
00:16 Kawawa: 예.
00:16 Kawawa: 노말은 이게끝
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 내.
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 빠르군
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 난이도가 내려갓네요
00:16 R e m u r i n g: 간사합니다
00:17 Kawawa: 아 잠만요
00:17 Kawawa: 동좀
00:17 Kawawa: 한바가지 사고 올게요
00:17 R e m u r i n g: 동좀 그만사요
00:24 *Kawawa is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272249 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out [Hard]]
00:24 R e m u r i n g: 내 들어왓어오
00:25 Kawawa: 00:25:463 - 여기도 노트도 좀
00:25 Kawawa: 추가해주고
00:25 Kawawa: 하란말이얌
00:26 R e m u r i n g: 추가 해주었습니다 'w'
00:26 Kawawa: 00:30:463 - 요기도
00:26 Kawawa: 말이야
00:27 R e m u r i n g: 고녀석도 추가했습니다
00:28 Kawawa: 00:47:495 - 3놋 일관성 00:46:713 -
00:28 R e m u r i n g: 고녀석도 했습니다
00:29 Kawawa: 솔직히
00:29 Kawawa: 변경해야할만한게
00:29 Kawawa: ㅇ벗다
00:29 Kawawa: 없다
00:29 Kawawa: 이게끝
00:29 Kawawa: 쿠도 필요없소
00:29 R e m u r i n g: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:29 R e m u r i n g: 진짜 이걸 동탁이
00:29 R e m u r i n g: 아뇨
00:29 Kawawa: 안받아
00:29 R e m u r i n g: 제가 필요합니다 sp가
00:29 R e m u r i n g: 아니 제가 필요합니다
00:29 R e m u r i n g: ㅡㅡ
00:30 Kawawa: 필요없어
00:30 R e m u r i n g: 이대로 가도 무난한가요
00:30 R e m u r i n g: 아니 안댑니다
00:30 Kawawa: 예.
00:30 R e m u r i n g: 내.

DDMythical wrote:

1 / 2 / 3 / 4

Normal

00:09:213 (9213|1) - Move this to 3 for jack consistency?
00:28:120 (28120|3,28120|0) - This is a cymbal crash, wouldnt it be better as a hand here?
00:32:182 (32182|2) - There should probably be atleast some sort of gentle hold note here because of the bass. Otherwise it's a major spike up difficulties.
00:46:713 (46713|2,46713|0) - This is a cymbal crash, wouldnt it be better as a hand here?
01:03:120 (63120|2) - Move to 2 to make coming off the LN less annoying oki fixed xd
01:03:432 (63432|1) - Move to 3 if you do the above. oki fixed

Hard

00:18:432 - 00:19:370 (19370|3) - There are quite alot of inconsistencies with the jacks/jumptrills here, While the song is the exact same sound throughout, you map some notes to jumptrills and some to jacks. Either make all of these jacks (recommend) or one slow jumptrill (pls no)
00:27:963 (27963|3,28120|3) - This is a bit random? moved 4col notes to 3col
00:42:026 (42026|0,42963|3) - Same inconsistency here
00:53:120 (53120|3,53120|0) - The sound here is really really light to have a double, in my opinion it would have much more emphasis as a single to lead into the chorus. I will think about it
00:58:120 (58120|2,58120|1,58120|0) - Why is this a hand when the rest are jumps? I will think about it but I will leave it as it is
01:09:057 (69057|2,69057|3,69135|1,69213|2,69213|0,69213|3) - That difficulty spike hurtss
01:29:213 (89213|0,89213|3) - This should probably be a hand as its the last note in the song and the guitar kind of calls for it. Personal gripe tho. Move notes in 4col to 2col

Dellvangel wrote:

SPOILER

12:03 *Dellvangel is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272249 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out [Hard]]
12:03 R e m u r i n g: oki gogo
12:04 Dellvangel: 00:01:401 (1401|0) - kinda weird to map this on col 1 since the pitch is higher than 00:01:245 (1245|2) - 
12:06 R e m u r i n g: umm
12:07 Dellvangel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8331925 miht looks better
12:07 Dellvangel: *might
12:07 Dellvangel: prety optional though
12:07 Dellvangel: *pretty
12:08 R e m u r i n g: oki changed it as you recommended it
12:08 Dellvangel: 00:03:901 (3901|0) - then 00:03:901 (3901|0) - too
12:08 Dellvangel: 00:03:901 (3901|0) - i mean, rip double copy
12:09 Dellvangel: 00:05:932 - https://dell.s-ul.eu/5DqokTHM like this
12:10 R e m u r i n g: oki It's a really good pattern 'w'
12:11 Dellvangel: 00:19:056 - mapped this on different columns with 00:18:900 - since the drum sound is different
12:11 Dellvangel: *map
12:13 R e m u r i n g: 00:19:056 (19056|1) - If so, I'll move the note to 1col
12:14 Dellvangel: 00:19:056 (19056|1,19213|0) - swap the col then
12:14 Dellvangel: 1 to 2 , 2 to 1
12:15 R e m u r i n g: oki 1 to 2
12:15 Dellvangel: 00:32:025 - missed a LN here since this part sure have the sme bass sound like 00:32:181 (32181|0,32338|3,32494|2) - 
12:15 Dellvangel: *same
12:16 Dellvangel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8331948 something like this might looks good
12:16 Dellvangel: *look
12:17 R e m u r i n g: oh I thought of the same way lol
12:17 Dellvangel: xd
12:17 R e m u r i n g: oki fixed
12:18 Dellvangel: 00:42:025 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8331954 better to follow the drum sound since 00:42:494 - already has a different feeling
12:20 R e m u r i n g: i got it If so, I will reflect the pattern
12:22 Dellvangel: 00:50:619 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8331966 for pattern variation with 00:43:431 - 
12:23 Dellvangel: and actually 00:51:478 - still has a drum sound
12:24 R e m u r i n g: oh I can hear the drums there lol
12:24 Dellvangel: :3
12:25 Dellvangel: 01:05:619 - missing a note here, there is a drum sound here
12:25 Dellvangel: or it is intentional?
12:26 Dellvangel: seems yea
12:27 R e m u r i n g: hmm. yea
12:27 R e m u r i n g: It is intended, but I will do if I have to add
12:27 Dellvangel: no ts fine without a note, just realized it after i pointed it
12:28 R e m u r i n g: oki xd
12:30 Dellvangel: 01:22:025 (82025|1,82025|2) - one of them should be a LN, consistency with 01:19:525 - 
12:32 R e m u r i n g: 01:22:025 (82025|2) - I changed the note to LN
12:32 Dellvangel: 01:24:525 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8331990 lokks better for pitch relevacy
12:33 Dellvangel: 01:27:650 (87650|1) - move to column 1 for pitch relevancy
12:33 R e m u r i n g: oki wait
12:33 Dellvangel: tell me after u done~
12:36 R e m u r i n g: oki done 'w'
12:36 *Dellvangel is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272251 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out [Normal]]
12:37 *R e m u r i n g is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1272251 Suzuki Konomi - Blow out [Normal]]
12:37 R e m u r i n g: 'w'
12:38 Dellvangel: 00:03:745 (3745|3,3901|2) - swap this for pitch relevacy?
12:40 R e m u r i n g: If so, can I change it just like HD?
12:40 Dellvangel: 00:15:150 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8332012 looks better to emphasize the high pitched guitar sound
12:40 Dellvangel: its up to you xd
12:42 R e m u r i n g: oki fixed
12:44 Dellvangel: 00:19:838 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8332023 better flow with the srum sound
12:44 Dellvangel: sorry was afk lol
12:45 R e m u r i n g: no, it's okay , I answered late lol
12:45 Dellvangel: 00:23:431 (23431|1,23744|3) - move to 4 and 3 for hand balance and vocal PR
12:45 R e m u r i n g: oki fixed xd
12:49 Dellvangel: 00:47:025 (47025|1,47181|3) - swap this, variation with 00:47:806 (47806|1,47963|3) - 
12:51 Dellvangel: ohh sorry, i have to afk, maybe around 30 mins, rip me ;w;
12:51 R e m u r i n g: so how do you change it? I have not mastered English yet xd
12:51 Dellvangel: 4 to 2, 2 to 4
12:52 Dellvangel: are you still online later?
12:52 R e m u r i n g: oki done
12:52 Dellvangel: i will chat u after i come back
12:53 R e m u r i n g: oki
12:53 R e m u r i n g: 'w'
13:13 Dellvangel: ok im back 'w'
13:15 R e m u r i n g: oki hai
13:15 R e m u r i n g: 'w'w'w'w'
13:15 Dellvangel: 01:02:806 (62806|0,63119|1) - swap this, 1 to 2 , 2 to 1 for variation since you mapped 01:04:213 (64213|0) - on column 1
13:16 R e m u r i n g: oki changed
13:16 Dellvangel: 01:09:056 (69056|0) - move to col 2, then 01:09:213 (69213|2) - to col 1 for variation with 01:09:525 (69525|0,69681|2,69681|3) - 
13:18 Dellvangel: 01:20:775 (80775|1) - move to col 1, mirror pattern with 01:23:275 (83275|3,83431|1,83431|0,83588|3) - 
13:19 R e m u r i n g: oki all fixed 'w'
13:19 Dellvangel: 01:25:931 (85931|0,86244|1) - map this on the same col each other for consistency
13:20 Dellvangel: thats all i think
13:20 R e m u r i n g: thx dell xd
13:21 R e m u r i n g: It was a lot of help
13:21 Dellvangel: oki, want me to post this chat to the thread?
13:21 Dellvangel: 'w'
13:22 R e m u r i n g: yea

good luck! 'w'

Virtue- wrote:

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : OK!
- Files : OK!

1|2|3|4

[Chicken Neko's Insane]

1. 00:35:931 (35931|1,35931|2,35931|3,35931|0) - why this is quad? better change it to triple - Nice catch
2. 00:38:119 (38119|3,38119|2) - triple pls - Don't want to make jack on trills
3. for the first kiai
   - i think there are no hi hat in that part
   - 00:56:869 (56869|0,56869|1,56869|2,56869|3,57025|1,57181|0,57181|3,57181|2,57338|1,57338|3,57494|0,57494|2,57650|3,57650|1,57806|0,57806|3,57806|2,57963|2,57963|1,58119|1,58119|2,58119|0,58119|3,58275|3,58275|0,58431|1,58431|3,58431|2,58588|0,58588|2,58744|1,58744|3) - the double is for kick, vocal, and guitar right? just wanna confirm this - Yes
   - 00:59:369 (59369|3,59369|2) - triple pls
4. 01:03:119 (63119|0,63119|3) - triple
5. 01:03:431 (63431|0,63431|3) - triple - Rejected, reason is same as 00:38:119 (38119|3,38119|2) -this
6. 01:04:213 (64213|2,64213|3,64213|1,64213|0,64681|3,64681|1,64681|0,64681|2,64994|0,64994|3) - those SVs are really really way to fast, maybe u wanna slow it down a bit - Kinda nurf'd a bit

that's all i guess, Good luck!

Critical_Star wrote:

neko 'x' nyan .w.

neko

General
http://puu.sh/yyyDk/83fe94af85.png
you should enable custom sound since you are using custom HS (all diff)

i will suggest 30-40% for the volume / I saw it now

Hard
OD 8>7.5
OD 8>7.5
more balanced spread / ok 'x'x'x'


Normal
00:09:213 (9213|1,9525|0) - how about move to left by 1, pretty neat for a descending crash changed
00:20:306 (20306|2) - suggest move to 4 for the same drum sound like 00:19:994 (19994|3) - fixed
00:32:806 (32806|0,32806|1) - make single here? It was my mistake and changed to one note
00:37:025 - you missed a kick note here 'x' oki 'x'
00:39:525 - it won't be hard to have a kick note here ^
00:40:619 (40619|2,40619|0,40931|3,40931|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyyMG/e45cfea498.png changed
00:42:494 (42494|2,42494|3,42806|2,42806|3) - would move to the left to catch the same kick sound with 00:42:181 (42181|2,42181|1) - , seems pretty nice for it, also u can add another note at 4 00:42:963 - nice catchhh 'x' fixed
00:53:900 (53900|3,54213|2) - how about CTRL+G? oki
01:00:619 - double crash like 00:56:869 (56869|2,56869|0) - added

Hard
00:19:994 (19994|0,19994|1,20150|0,20150|2,20306|3,20306|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyyVF/c93c1ca322.png seems cool for the same pitch changed good pattern -w-
00:32:963 - would be cool if you can do this triple note for crash here added
00:32:806 (32806|2) - move to 4? i will not change it because it is the intention
01:07:963 (67963|0,68119|2,68275|1,68431|3,68431|0,68588|2,68744|0,68900|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyz1G/b41fbca01c.png example of highlighted LN u could use for vocal change as suggested
01:10:463 - 01:11:713 - u can use triple here as well added
01:23:900 (83900|3,83900|2,84056|1,84056|0) - like before you can try stack them 2-3 col for same pitch i moved to 2-3col to fit the pitch 'x'
01:29:213 - give the ending a little spice here by adding another note so i added notes to 4col

Critical_Star wrote:

neko 'x'

neko

General
http://puu.sh/yyyDk/83fe94af85.png
you should enable custom sound since you are using custom HS (all diff)

i will suggest 30-40% for the volume

Hard
OD 8>7.5
OD 8>7.5
more balanced spread


Normal
00:09:213 (9213|1,9525|0) - how about move to left by 1, pretty neat for a descending crash
00:20:306 (20306|2) - suggest move to 4 for the same drum sound like 00:19:994 (19994|3) -
00:32:806 (32806|0,32806|1) - make single here?
00:37:025 - you missed a kick note here 'x'
00:39:525 - it won't be hard to have a kick note here
00:40:619 (40619|2,40619|0,40931|3,40931|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyyMG/e45cfea498.png
00:42:494 (42494|2,42494|3,42806|2,42806|3) - would move to the left to catch the same kick sound with 00:42:181 (42181|2,42181|1) - , seems pretty nice for it, also u can add another note at 4 00:42:963 -
00:53:900 (53900|3,54213|2) - how about CTRL+G?
01:00:619 - double crash like 00:56:869 (56869|2,56869|0) -

Hard
00:19:994 (19994|0,19994|1,20150|0,20150|2,20306|3,20306|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyyVF/c93c1ca322.png seems cool for the same pitch
00:32:963 - would be cool if you can do this triple note for crash here
00:32:806 (32806|2) - move to 4?
01:07:963 (67963|0,68119|2,68275|1,68431|3,68431|0,68588|2,68744|0,68900|1) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/yyz1G/b41fbca01c.png example of highlighted LN u could use for vocal
01:10:463 - 01:11:713 - u can use triple here as well
01:23:900 (83900|3,83900|2,84056|1,84056|0) - like before you can try stack them 2-3 col for same pitch
01:29:213 - give the ending a little spice here by adding another note

Chicken Neko's Insane
00:14:838 (14838|1) - suggest to move to 4 to give 2nd col a little break to handle the incoming mini jack (sv) like u did at 01:18:588 - ok
00:35:463 (35463|2) - intended? it supposed to be the same as all the empty place like 00:34:213 - , so it is kinda surprising at first due to SV here - intended, as you can see, there's different SV, cuz overall pattern change in this part so I putted a note
00:40:775 - could give some note here for kick as well - LN instead
00:43:431 (43431|1,43431|0,43509|3,43588|1,43744|1,43822|3,43900|0) - perhaps try double here? - rearranged a bit
01:23:744 (83744|0,83744|3,83744|2,83900|0,83900|2,83900|3,84056|0,84056|2,84056|3,84213|3,84213|2,84213|0,84213|1) - you can give some sv here like u did at 00:19:994 (19994|3,19994|0,19994|2,20150|0,20150|1,20150|3,20306|2,20306|0,20306|1) -

Maxus wrote:

yeah sorry for really long wait, but finally we can push this forward xd

[General]
you don't need additional timeline at 00:07:963 -
refer to this map t/584859/start=45 , bonsai himself already said it doesn't need more red timing, and other blow out map seem to not have red line either
so i believe it needs to be deleted unless there's other source that really need you to use it. / 00: 07: 963 - I deleted the timing point here and moved it to here 00: 00: 463

[chickun kawai neko]
00:05:307 - should add one more LN cause you also use it at 00:02:807 - for additional synth sound there.

00:43:275 - add one more note here? the drum sound is more or less the same with 00:42:650 -

00:43:900 - should be double note here? the drum have the same pressure as 00:43:744 -

01:03:588 - try make SV in this one? i think the music and the place is really fit for another SV.

really flawless, naisu 'w'

[Hard]
00:07:651 (7651|2) - felt like the LN will be more suited if you made this LN into col 1 instead, like https://puu.sh/zccGp/106acbc750.png
changed as you suggest

00:19:994 (19994|0,19994|1,20150|0,20150|1,20306|1,20306|0) - The jack here felt really awkward, i know you probably want to emphasize the drum here, but each drum actually doesn't sound the same, and each pitch differ by a lot, try https://puu.sh/zccA9/e79fa29d34.png instead oh it's a better way/ changed

00:40:150 (40150|2,40306|2,40463|3,40619|3) - instead of focus too much jack on right, especially when combined with 00:38:900 (38900|3,39056|3,39369|2,39525|2) - , try https://puu.sh/zccQT/8cf7d377ce.png (start from 00:39:994 - ) rearranged

00:53:119 - kinda underwhelming with only single note, should be double note. ok

01:05:619 (65619|3,65931|3,66244|3,66556|3,66869|3,67181|3,67494|3,67806|3) - this kinda make me curious tbh, i don't think this is intentional since other section doesn't produce this long jack, think you can break it a bit by making 01:06:869 (66869|3,67025|2,67181|3) - 4-3-4 instead.rearranged

01:10:463 (70463|0) - better move to col 2 here, the triple jack at 01:10:150 (70150|0,70306|0,70463|0) - kinda break the consistency with 01:09:838 (69838|3,69994|3) - ok

01:11:713 (71713|3) - move to col 3 here so there isn't too much of 01:11:088 (71088|3,71244|3,71556|3,71713|3,72025|3,72181|3) - moved according to your suggestion

01:25:619 (85619|2,85931|3,86244|0) - try 4-1-2 here so the pattern would becoming much neater (it would ascending) oki

01:26:556 (86556|1) - move to col 1 so that the jack will mirror the one at 01:29:056 (89056|3,89213|3) - oki

01:28:119 (88119|1,88431|0,88744|3) - use 1-4-3 for same reason as above oki

[Normal]
00:05:463 - Well i'm not sure if people will suddenly question pattern gap if you only map the rising sound here, i think you can consider to map the synth like you did before. oki changed

00:12:025 (12025|0) - should be at col 3 to balancing the hand with 00:12:338 (12338|1,12494|0,12806|0,12963|1) - ok

00:18:431 (18431|1,18588|0) - would be better to make these 1-2 to mirroring with the chord at 00:19:056 (19056|1,19056|3) - ok

00:30:775 - I really recommend you map this into 1/2 pattern, there's couple map that get DQ before because of 1/1 to 1/4 gap, and this one is 4/1 LN to 1/4 pattern gap. oki rearranged

00:32:650 - felt kinda awkward you didn't map this considering this is the start of the big sound here. ok

00:37:025 (37025|0,37181|2) - better make these into 3-2 so that 00:36:869 (36869|1,37025|0) - won't be the same as 00:36:400 (36400|1,36556|0) -
changed

00:40:619 - cymbal sound, make this double note. added

00:50:775 - 00:51:088 - 00:51:400 - it's much better if you add note here at 3-4-1 for each instances where the roll stop to signify the drum roll so it's more accented, otherwise it really is empty. changed as you suggest xd

01:13:900 - should be double since this is LR-Drum / 00: 10: 150 - It's the same sound as here, so I'll add it here too , with a hitsound

call me back since this is really nicely done thx maxus 'x'

Maxus wrote:

yeah sorry for really long wait, but finally we can push this forward xd

[General]
you don't need additional timeline at 00:07:963 -
refer to this map t/584859/start=45 , bonsai himself already said it doesn't need more red timing, and other blow out map seem to not have red line either
so i believe it needs to be deleted unless there's other source that really need you to use it.

[chickun kawai neko]
00:05:307 - should add one more LN cause you also use it at 00:02:807 - for additional synth sound there.

00:43:275 - add one more note here? the drum sound is more or less the same with 00:42:650 -

00:43:900 - should be double note here? the drum have the same pressure as 00:43:744 - I intended 00:43:588 (43588|0,43666|1,43744|3,43744|2,43822|0,43822|1,43900|3,43978|2,44056|1,44056|0) - this as mirror

01:03:588 - try make SV in this one? i think the music and the place is really fit for another SV.

really flawless, naisu 'w'

[Hard]
00:07:651 (7651|2) - felt like the LN will be more suited if you made this LN into col 1 instead, like https://puu.sh/zccGp/106acbc750.png

00:19:994 (19994|0,19994|1,20150|0,20150|1,20306|1,20306|0) - The jack here felt really awkward, i know you probably want to emphasize the drum here, but each drum actually doesn't sound the same, and each pitch differ by a lot, try https://puu.sh/zccA9/e79fa29d34.png instead

00:40:150 (40150|2,40306|2,40463|3,40619|3) - instead of focus too much jack on right, especially when combined with 00:38:900 (38900|3,39056|3,39369|2,39525|2) - , try https://puu.sh/zccQT/8cf7d377ce.png (start from 00:39:994 - )

00:53:119 - kinda underwhelming with only single note, should be double note.

01:05:619 (65619|3,65931|3,66244|3,66556|3,66869|3,67181|3,67494|3,67806|3) - this kinda make me curious tbh, i don't think this is intentional since other section doesn't produce this long jack, think you can break it a bit by making 01:06:869 (66869|3,67025|2,67181|3) - 4-3-4 instead.

01:10:463 (70463|0) - better move to col 2 here, the triple jack at 01:10:150 (70150|0,70306|0,70463|0) - kinda break the consistency with 01:09:838 (69838|3,69994|3) -

01:11:713 (71713|3) - move to col 3 here so there isn't too much of 01:11:088 (71088|3,71244|3,71556|3,71713|3,72025|3,72181|3) -

01:25:619 (85619|2,85931|3,86244|0) - try 4-1-2 here so the pattern would becoming much neater (it would ascending)

01:26:556 (86556|1) - move to col 1 so that the jack will mirror the one at 01:29:056 (89056|3,89213|3) -

01:28:119 (88119|1,88431|0,88744|3) - use 1-4-3 for same reason as above

[Normal]
00:05:463 - Well i'm not sure if people will suddenly question pattern gap if you only map the rising sound here, i think you can consider to map the synth like you did before.

00:12:025 (12025|0) - should be at col 3 to balancing the hand with 00:12:338 (12338|1,12494|0,12806|0,12963|1) -

00:18:431 (18431|1,18588|0) - would be better to make these 1-2 to mirroring with the chord at 00:19:056 (19056|1,19056|3) -

00:30:775 - I really recommend you map this into 1/2 pattern, there's couple map that get DQ before because of 1/1 to 1/4 gap, and this one is 4/1 LN to 1/4 pattern gap.

00:32:650 - felt kinda awkward you didn't map this considering this is the start of the big sound here.

00:37:025 (37025|0,37181|2) - better make these into 3-2 so that 00:36:869 (36869|1,37025|0) - won't be the same as 00:36:400 (36400|1,36556|0) -

00:40:619 - cymbal sound, make this double note.

00:50:775 - 00:51:088 - 00:51:400 - it's much better if you add note here at 3-4-1 for each instances where the roll stop to signify the drum roll so it's more accented, otherwise it really is empty.

01:13:900 - should be double since this is LR-Drum

call me back since this is really nicely done