steven1 wrote:

random mod from me because i really liked the map! >W<

Inner Oni

00:11:101 (1) - change this one to D i forgot here DX
01:28:415 (4,5,6,7,8) - change it to ddddk, then 01:35:958 (70,71,72,73,74) - change it to ddddd because the tones is lower than the first one i got little wrong here but its not good k in head and tail this part ...
01:44:187 - change it to this change to kkdkd :3
01:46:930 - change it to this change to dkddd k dkddkdk
03:55:587 (40) - change it to kat, i think dkkkddk is better than ddkkddk, just a suggestion its low sound :3
its better if u say this one 04:01:072 (84) -
04:06:558 (41) - ^ this too :3
04:23:014 (104) - ^ this one ok~

Smallwu wrote:

來騙kud的random mod =___=
[Inner Oni]
00:00:130 - 你這裡各有一條紅線和綠線 可是Volume是50%和75% 讓他們保持一樣 不然一個點上有兩個音量很怪 已修正~

00:49:158 (12,13,14) - kkd/kdd (12)的音和後面的(1)一樣都有種"ㄉ-ㄉ-"的音 所以應該要和它相同才對 (而且你後面的三連打第一顆也是k) 安壓 整個沒注意到的說 一定是受到SM之力影響的

02:11:787 - 02:11:872 - 怎放兩條Kiai開頭@口@ 阿~~~又沒注意到;w; 一定又是SM之力害的;w;

03:55:672 (41) - k 比較好打 而且從Break Time結束到這裡 白線上有Note的全部都是k 沒理由這裡不是吧!!!!!!!!!!!! 呵呵呵呵好吧 後面寫得比較合理 呵呵呵

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沒了 祝早日Rankㄛ>w<

[R] wrote:

yo

[Inner Oni]
00:29:530 - can add note to cover high pitch forward i think...no? DDD; but change some other <3
01:48:387 - change don to give variety with this part 01:47:015 - not good in d add the finish now :3
01:53:358 - change kat, for variety not sure and possible will change back?_? ((cant heard clear ;w;
01:54:730 - ^ V
02:56:530 - can add note here V
03:12:215 - drum sound stop here, move 03:12:301 - drum? change the 215 to k 301 add d
03:39:215 (75,76) - invert, pitch piano has drop in end part change to ddkkddkk >_>


well maybe just that from me
good luck

Devli wrote:

香腸

Devli wrote:

香腸

Smallwu wrote:

Devli wrote:

香腸

美味!

xfraczynho wrote:

Hi fan o/ sorry for late check ;

General

1. Metadata suggestions (tags and design): Hmmm I think 'Indonesia' tag isn't neccesary (if you have a reason for this could be nice). Also where does 'Doujin Music Circle' come from? o: i thought https://osu.ppy.sh/s/347650 this map was a reliable source >.>||||||| ((i change some viable tags
2. Kiai times: 02:32:358 - 02:33:730 - what about a Kiai break cause it goes more calmer than the rest? :p nice?_?nice
3. Volumes:
   
   1. 00:33:044 - the volume here is really similar than 00:22:072 - so 80% on both fits nice
   2. 00:44:015 - 90% on here maybe cause it's just a little higher than last one
   3. 05:12:815 - 80% could fit better here

how could i missed the front volumes!!!!!!D:::::::::::::::::::::: lol thx for note xp
[Inner Oni]

1. I highly suggest to make the 1/6 on 00:21:044 - instead 00:20:701 - cause it fits song perfectly (dddk is nice I think) but i feel so strange if it all d are some other pattern :thinking: can hv some suggest? >.> i make dddd first
2. 00:24:130 - this longstream doesn't make so much sense since there isn't any other longstream in the whole section D:, so you can add one on 00:29:615 - or make it more short change
3. 00:42:644 (1) - finish it on 00:43:672 - like 00:09:730 (1) - i think if make short its better finish here?00:43:501 - and the sound with?
4. 00:44:015 - wow this is hard but nice xD lol
5. 01:05:958 - I think you could make some variations like d d k k instead lot of d k (for example: 01:07:672 (6,7) - ctrl+g) hm... how about the second repeat make with other sound?
6. 01:30:044 (19) 01:36:901 (76) - - kat on them fills nice :p :thingingingingingink:
7. mmm 03:16:844 (10,11,12,13) - k ddd? 1/6 kats seems too spammy D: ahm...... i change to like 03:16:587 - kkdd d kkkdddk d?

Wow you really just made a nice job on here, call me when you have applied my mod

Surono wrote:

zzzzz makes me want to map a song that would be p-

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

Fantazy wrote:

Surono wrote:

typeMARS terima kasih banyak

terima kasih banyak?

Surono wrote:

a circle tofu clicking game or hitting game.... ?w?w?w?

00:20:615 - swap with 00:20:872 - this, more appropriate on flows pattern emphasis hm.........still not find the best pattern ;w;

00:44:015 - " RC: No two uninherited or two inherited timing sections should be placed at the same point." delete one of them oh no!!! that's my fault!!!!!

01:05:958 - ~ 01:16:758 - it plays dull zz, you could make structures like x x xxx x x xxx and so on how do u think of these? ((update

01:16:930 - hello a u t h e n t i c c style :-) ：－）

01:19:501 - 01:22:244 - 01:24:987 - can you make these alteration svs to be neat please like example 02:03:387 - from here? somehow it doesnt look good fixed and 01:05:958 - this part too

01:49:844 - 20% to low, i cant even hear the don sounds. change it to 30% D::::::::::::::::::::::(changed

so well first kiai like this, ehh but Im fine with this style coloring like dk kd or kd kd zz

I will rebubble this if the issues has been fixed



https://osu.ppy.sh/u/typeMARS Ｄ：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：：： is typeMARS!! omgwww

yeah thats why mania ver. has " Indonesia " on tags cuz the artist is from Indo lo :shrugs: i think...keep not tag for avoid controversy?