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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 November 2017 at 08:46:15

Artist: Diao ye zong
Title: Toono Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)
Source: 東方Project
Tags: tōhō touhou youyoumu perfect cherry blossom
BPM: 200.9
Filesize: 2948kb
Play Time: 01:52
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Download: Diao ye zong - Toono Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)
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Inner Oni

00:04:016 (8) - Pitch decreases from note 7, could make this a don
00:06:555 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think you're missing some critical sounds, I think changing it to something like this would emphasize the ones you skipped over Image
00:29:327 (176) - This note is higher in pitch than 175 and 177
00:35:226 - I think in order to emphasize the piano entrance here you can use a pattern such as Image
00:36:047 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Image This formation sounds much better to emphasize the high and low notes :3
00:39:706 - More emphasis on the piano! Image
01:13:454 (314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - I think just kdk kdk D sounds better :3
01:23:608 - 01:28:386 - Try to break out the 1/4 triplets here, they're prominent and don't have any reason to be ignored.
01:29:133 - Kat here plz, there's a sound that got skipped >.<

That's it :3 this is a cool song, I think you should really push this for rank :D
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Inner Oni

00:04:016 (8) - Pitch decreases from note 7, could make this a don dont think it really matters but sure lol
00:06:555 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43) - I think you're missing some critical sounds, I think changing it to something like this would emphasize the ones you skipped over Image o that sounds nice, changed
00:29:327 (176) - This note is higher in pitch than 175 and 177 I hear it, but i feel like it'd throw people off in a bad way, so I'd like to keep the ddd if possible.
00:35:226 - I think in order to emphasize the piano entrance here you can use a pattern such as Image Doesn't really fit if you ask me, I could compromise by making a simpler pattern though. Also the piano only starts on the red tick?
00:36:047 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - Image This formation sounds much better to emphasize the high and low notes :3 agreed, changed it even though I think it's boring to play :^)
00:39:706 - More emphasis on the piano! Image did the same thing I did for the other one
01:13:454 (314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - I think just kdk kdk D sounds better :3 I don't :^) (I prefer mapping it to only the "piano", kdk kdk feels like it hinders the flow imo
01:23:608 - 01:28:386 - Try to break out the 1/4 triplets here, they're prominent and don't have any reason to be ignored. I agree that this section is kind of undermapped but to stay consistent with all the other diffs I wont change anything. I'd like to have some kind of dropoff after the kiai before going back into the crazy parts and I feel like this is one of the only ways to map it like that
01:29:133 - Kat here plz, there's a sound that got skipped >.< same as last point

That's it :3 this is a cool song, I think you should really push this for rank :D
thanks a TON for the mod and good luck on the next BN test :D
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Image



Image General

- The Slider Velocity should be 1.40. This is unrankable issue. refer Ranking Criteria
- Turn off Widescreen support and Disable countdown


Image Kantan

Kantan Should be under 2 SR. also Fix OD to 3

u used much 1/2 triples and even 1/2 streams on Kantan (cause BPM is high, 1/1 streams being like 1/2 streams.)

i made some example for Kantan : http://puu.sh/waxGP/7ce11d15ef.osu


Image Futsuu

while you rework Kantan,

Current Kantan change to Futsuu, and delete Current Futsuu.

Current Futsuu can skip with new Kantan (if it under 2 SR)

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Sorry, might it's not help at all but i think it helps u a lot.
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Diva Days wrote:
Image



Image General

- The Slider Velocity should be 1.40. This is unrankable issue. refer Ranking Criteria stupid AImod bugs :o
- Turn off Widescreen support and Disable countdown this really doesn't matter but whatever


Image Kantan

Kantan Should be under 2 SR. also Fix OD to 3 changed to OD3 since the song is very rhythmically challenging

u used much 1/2 triples and even 1/2 streams on Kantan (cause BPM is high, 1/1 streams being like 1/2 streams.) I'm pretty sure it's not because of the BPM but because of the rhythm complexity, I'll do my best to lower the star rating.

i made some example for Kantan : http://puu.sh/waxGP/7ce11d15ef.osu


Image Futsuu

while you rework Kantan,

Current Kantan change to Futsuu, and delete Current Futsuu.

Current Futsuu can skip with new Kantan (if it under 2 SR)

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Sorry, might it's not help at all but i think it helps u a lot.
No change to futsuu but thanks for the Kantan helpers :D
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Remember that these are suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.


Image Futsuu
00:16:709 (44) - Change to d? The pitch is different than 00:16:410, so I don't think you should use two k's here.
00:49:561 (139) - Use a k instead? It reverses the pattern at 00:46:575 (128,129,130,131).
01:07:182 (10) - Maybe you could delete this? The note density could cause trouble for newer players.
01:16:739 (43) - Move to 01:16:888 to match 01:07:331?
01:50:188 (132) - Delete? Note density could be a problem again for newer players.


Image Muzukashii
00:14:320 (15,16,17,18) - Use d k k d instead? It mirrors the pattern at 00:11:930 (1,2,3,4,5).
00:34:628 (92,93) - Use k d instead? The piano drops out after 00:34:479, so I don't think two dons match the music.
00:43:289 (122,123,124,125) - Use k d d k like you did at 00:33:732? You probably wanted variety, but I think the patterns are different enough.
00:51:054 (164) - Use d instead? Ending a pattern with two k's seems a bit odd. (This is personal preference, of course.)


Image Oni
01:09:123 (87) - Delete? This note density is better suited for Inner Oni imo.
01:11:960 - Add a d here? It's a bit strange to continue with 01:12:110 (108) after the break.

01:21:219 (181) - You had a small break at 01:11:662, so you should add something similar here. You probably want to maintain the song's intensity, so you could just reduce note density:
01:21:368 (182,183) - Delete these and it should be fine.

This is a really fun set.
Hopefully it'll make it to ranked! :)
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From my modding queue~
Remember that these are suggestions. Feel free to ignore them.


Image Futsuu
00:16:709 (44) - Change to d? The pitch is different than 00:16:410, so I don't think you should use two k's here. Well it's a d in almost all the others diffs so yeah why not
00:49:561 (139) - Use a k instead? It reverses the pattern at 00:46:575 (128,129,130,131). nice, nice.
01:07:182 (10) - Maybe you could delete this? The note density could cause trouble for newer players. works well with the other suggestion, applied both
01:16:739 (43) - Move to 01:16:888 to match 01:07:331?
01:50:188 (132) - Delete? Note density could be a problem again for newer players. 01:50:935 (135) - deleted this instead for now


Image Muzukashii
00:14:320 (15,16,17,18) - Use d k k d instead? It mirrors the pattern at 00:11:930 (1,2,3,4,5). sounds nice, applied!
00:34:628 (92,93) - Use k d instead? The piano drops out after 00:34:479, so I don't think two dons match the music. oooh i like that, applied.
00:43:289 (122,123,124,125) - Use k d d k like you did at 00:33:732? You probably wanted variety, but I think the patterns are different enough. went with k d k k
00:51:054 (164) - Use d instead? Ending a pattern with two k's seems a bit odd. (This is personal preference, of course.) keeping for now since the sounds there and at 00:51:950 (170,171) - are identical


Image Oni
01:09:123 (87) - Delete? This note density is better suited for Inner Oni imo. applied with some reworking on the section prior
01:11:960 - Add a d here? It's a bit strange to continue with 01:12:110 (108) after the break. applied here and at 01:14:350 (124) -

01:21:219 (181) - You had a small break at 01:11:662, so you should add something similar here. You probably want to maintain the song's intensity, so you could just reduce note density:
01:21:368 (182,183) - Delete these and it should be fine. Went with just deleting a few notes, I think it's best to stay consistent in this case.

This is a really fun set.
Hopefully it'll make it to ranked! :)
Thank you so much! I hope I can push it too :D
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  • I'm probably just guessing on the following so please, if you think I may be wrong, don't hesitate to google the stuff and tell me if you think its other way:
    Probably the Romanized Artist should be "Diao ye zong", artist should be "凋叶棕" , the romanized title "Toono Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)" or "Tōno Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)" and title "遠野幻想物語 (landcelita rmx)". This is because when you do a remix of a song made by somebody else, the artist is the original one and then you use the "(... remix)" to mention who actually made the re-arrange, it's just how business work ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ .
  • Considering what I said and the fact this is a Toono Gensou Monogatari remix, you should use its touhou related tags ("touhou", "tōhō","youyoumu", "perfect cherry blossom" , possibly others I may be missing right now.
  • Source should definitely be "東方Project"
  • Background looks much better at -130, right now it just looks dumb lol else just find another background, now that 1920x1080 is the maximum rankeable size
  • Theres a "b.png" file that isn't in use on the mapset, delete it please.
  • wtf windows doesn't show what bitrate the .mp3 has, I dont know how to check it so if it isnt 192kbps try getting an .mp3 with that quality


Inner Oni
  • 00:46:276 (264,265) - based on pitch, these two notes should get CTRL+G'd
  • 00:49:039 (289) - I would delete this note and maaaaaaaaaaaaybe change 00:49:113 (290) - and 00:49:412 (293) - to d. The removal of 00:49:039 (289) - looks pretty necessary and the change of these notes to d does better at denoting the low pitch/intensity/all of the song at this part.
  • 00:51:950 - ~ 00:52:548 - (more of a suggestion than anything else) the song supports it if you wanted to do something to do like 1/6 kk kk kd dd dd but I know that's a bit bold to suggest such a thing
  • 01:06:137 - ~ 01:06:585 - (also suggestion but more fitting than the last) (algo we ARE ENTERING PP ZONE $_$) this part has 2 1/6 on its melody, so maybe do a (kkkd)d(dkkd) pattern on this section
  • 01:15:694 - ~ 01:16:142 - same as before, maybe back when you mapped this 1/6 weren't as popular as now and I think you may want to use them more than you did back then lol
  • 01:34:658 - you may not want a 1/6 here but at least add a k here and change 01:34:807 (8) - to d, as there is actually a drum buzz here


Oni
  • 00:06:256 (25,26) - CTRL+G, as it not only makes a much consistent patterning but 26 is followed by a very little silence, which is better to go into following a d
  • 00:20:965 - I don't think you should do your break here, as it is the right spot at where the drums play a 1/6, making it the most dense part, so tweak the previous pattern to include a note here instead and so on.
  • 00:44:036 (14,15) - delete 15, change 14 to k. reasons are obvious, you're following piano there, 15 isn't necessary and also not following anything relevant
  • 00:49:412 (46,47) - (suggestion) CTRL+G on these as the pitch is higher on the middle note
  • 00:57:326 (15) - (suggestion) I'd like it if this note could be a d instead, please ?


Muzukashii


Not much else :/ lower diffs looks perfectly with the only exception of Kantan being generally a bit harder than it should, as it has too many 1/2 snapped notes but I think it should do at least fine? anyways, good luck with the ranking process ~
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  • I'm probably just guessing on the following so please, if you think I may be wrong, don't hesitate to google the stuff and tell me if you think its other way:
    Probably the Romanized Artist should be "Diao ye zong", artist should be "凋叶棕" , the romanized title "Toono Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)" or "Tōno Gensou Monogatari (landcelita rmx)" and title "遠野幻想物語 (landcelita rmx)". This is because when you do a remix of a song made by somebody else, the artist is the original one and then you use the "(... remix)" to mention who actually made the re-arrange, it's just how business work ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ .
  • Considering what I said and the fact this is a Toono Gensou Monogatarai remix, you should use its touhou related tags ("touhou", "tōhō","youyoumu", "perfect cherry blossom" , possibly others I may be missing right now.
  • Source should definitely be "東方Project" applied all metadata changes
  • Background looks much better at -130, right now it just looks dumb lol else just find another background, now that 1920x1080 is the maximum rankeable size it does look kinda dumb but... muh bottom-row chens ;_;
  • Theres a "b.png" file that isn't in use on the mapset, delete it please. ghost bg :eyes:
  • wtf windows doesn't show what bitrate the .mp3 has, I dont know how to check it so if it isnt 192kbps try getting an .mp3 with that quality wtf you're right, idk how to check either though


Inner Oni
  • 00:46:276 (264,265) - based on pitch, these two notes should get CTRL+G'd keeping for flow purposes, and because it doesn't have the claps that the next combo has.
  • 00:49:039 (289) - I would delete this note and maaaaaaaaaaaaybe change 00:49:113 (290) - and 00:49:412 (293) - to d. The removal of 00:49:039 (289) - looks pretty necessary and the change of these notes to d does better at denoting the low pitch/intensity/all of the song at this part. also follows the melody better, fully applied.
  • 00:51:950 - ~ 00:52:548 - (more of a suggestion than anything else) the song supports it if you wanted to do something to do like 1/6 kk kk kd dd dd but I know that's a bit bold to suggest such a thing wtf that's satanic (I'd like to keep the 1/6 to a minimum. I'd like the map to serve as a kind of introduction for new players to higher bpm 1/6's)
  • 01:06:137 - ~ 01:06:585 - (also suggestion but more fitting than the last) (algo we ARE ENTERING PP ZONE $_$) this part has 2 1/6 on its melody, so maybe do a (kkkd)d(dkkd) pattern on this section Same as last reply tbh, I know that it's there in the melody but for consistency and simplicity's sake I'd rather keep it to a minimum.
  • 01:15:694 - ~ 01:16:142 - same as before, maybe back when you mapped this 1/6 weren't as popular as now and I think you may want to use them more than you did back then lol ^
  • 01:34:658 - you may not want a 1/6 here but at least add a k here and change 01:34:807 (8) - to d, as there is actually a drum buzz here just added a d, I think the sound kind of mirrors the k d before it.



Oni
  • 00:06:256 (25,26) - CTRL+G, as it not only makes a much consistent patterning but 26 is followed by a very little silence, which is better to go into following a d agree and applied.
  • 00:20:965 - I don't think you should do your break here, as it is the right spot at where the drums play a 1/6, making it the most dense part, so tweak the previous pattern to include a note here instead and so on. suppose you're right, changed it a bit.
  • 00:44:036 (14,15) - delete 15, change 14 to k. reasons are obvious, you're following piano there, 15 isn't necessary and also not following anything relevant RIGHT YOU ARE!
  • 00:49:412 (46,47) - (suggestion) CTRL+G on these as the pitch is higher on the middle note applied
  • 00:57:326 (15) - (suggestion) I'd like it if this note could be a d instead, please ?I can't figure out why but d just doesn't sound right imo :c


Muzukashii
  • 00:34:628 (91) - unnecessary note~I see what you mean but I have a note there on every other diff so idk :S


Not much else :/ lower diffs looks perfectly with the only exception of Kantan being generally a bit harder than it should, as it has too many 1/2 snapped notes but I think it should do at least fine? anyways, good luck with the ranking process ~ Yeah mapping the Kantan was probably the hardest part about this, but its already been nerfed a lot so I hope it's acceptable now.
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00:16:112 - delete, to keep gap with kantan
00:47:471 - delete, for a good flow
01:06:585 - move 01:07:182 - same reason above
01:16:142 - ^
01:38:690 - maybe move white tick forward


Muzukashii
00:19:546 - 00:20:144 - delete, i guess its too complex with triplet there
00:29:103 - 00:33:882 - maybe delete to keep gap with oni
01:03:747 - add don, to cover the stream


Oni
00:04:763 - change don ? to maintain note like 00:02:374 - 00:07:152 - 00:09:541 -
00:10:437 - add note, there has abit sound
00:12:005 - or 00:12:154 - add note, at least give triplet because pitch similiar with 00:14:320 -
00:20:816 - delete ?
00:48:815 - delete
00:48:964 - its abit weird while you stop cover the stream, maybe make similiar patter with 00:47:769 -

that's all from me
good luck
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