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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-12T10:17:35+00:00

oh ya the set could use an easy since I need 6 icons for Expert clickbait, go ahead since you're better at those than me

@modders feel free to mod anyway since 99% of things to point out will be on the other diffs anyway

Chewin

osu! Alumni

4,082 posts

Joined December 2010

Chewin 2017-08-14T10:31:52+00:00

General Stuff

This is very nazi but set the BG at 1366x768, it's 1365x768 now XD
Easy diff is not submitted I guess? LOL

Akitoshi's Normal

00:14:206 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm comes in so suddenly (first time you use the 1/2 with a short 1/1 slider). Well, it's nice anyways, but removing the circles and extending the sliders by 1/2 can be an option too. Not a big issue, tho. Just a valid option to consider.
Very good map, nothing to say

Advanced

00:12:217 (1,2,3,4) - Can you try to move the whole pattern, or just last two elements, a bit down? Not a big issue, but the circle is actually covered by HP bar's shadow
00:25:148 (2) - Add Clap like you did for 00:29:126 (2) and to emphasize the sound in the music
Good

Hard

00:10:891 (3) - This slider is unrankable: The tail is actually going out of the screen
00:19:842 (5,1) - I do not understand this spacing reduce tbh, this should be emphasize a bit instead
00:42:058 (3) - Why did you place this circle there? XD It's not consistent with the previous sliders placements. I would just move it on the right part of the editor's grid.

Insane

00:03:596 (2,3) - Reduce the spacing, it looks a 1/2 with this one. I got confused here
00:22:661 (1) - Since this is the second one with the same rhythm, why don't you increase the spacing here moving this circle stacked with 00:23:490 (4)'s tail instead ? It is pretty nice IMO: http:// osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840827

Ascenster's Insane

00:01:938 (3) - This straight slider placed there and with tail on the left just breaks the flow you created. I would just make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840837 it works better imo
00:23:490 (3,4) - I would increase the spacing here, instead of decreasing it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840844 More fun to play
00:39:074 (5) - New combo for consistency?

I didn't find that much, mapset is good.

Call me back for recheck! Jk I am not BN anymore.

Good luck!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-14T12:59:56+00:00

boxed bc it's kinda big with format

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Chewin wrote:
General Stuff
This is very nazi but set the BG at 1366x768, it's 1365x768 now XD I'll reupload with a 1080p version since it was uploaded before rule change (aaa so many rule changes for you to follow xD)
Easy diff is not submitted I guess? LOL unrankable pls fix

Advanced
00:12:217 (1,2,3,4) - Can you try to move the whole pattern, or just last two elements, a bit down? Not a big issue, but the circle is actually covered by HP bar's shadow why not i guess
00:25:148 (2) - Add Clap like you did for 00:29:126 (2) and to emphasize the sound in the music woops forgot hs
Good remapping better > improving an ok diff

Hard
00:10:891 (3) - This slider is unrankable: The tail is actually going out of the screen how did i do that lol
00:19:842 (5,1) - I do not understand this spacing reduce tbh, this should be emphasize a bit instead
00:42:058 (3) - Why did you place this circle there? XD It's not consistent with the previous sliders placements. I would just move it on the right part of the editor's grid. kk lol

Insane
00:03:596 (2,3) - Reduce the spacing, it looks a 1/2 with this one. I got confused here I put it here because testplaying I often hit it too early because i guessed it would be 1/4 gap, moved closer anyway
00:22:661 (1) - Since this is the second one with the same rhythm, why don't you increase the spacing here moving this circle stacked with 00:23:490 (4)'s tail instead ? It is pretty nice IMO: http:// osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840827 Too much of a diff spike + no reason to change spacing because the sound is the same as the one before

I didn't find that much, mapset is good.

Call me back for recheck! Jk I am not BN anymore. :'(

Good luck! many thanks

Jonis221

288 posts

Joined October 2013

Jonis221 2017-08-14T15:51:59+00:00

Hello, just mod.

[Normal]

00:29:127 (2,1) - Sliderbow isn't symmetrical. Sliderbows should look something like this imo http://i.imgur.com/bWSfUfz.png
00:15:201 (3,4) - objects not even in a single line. Pretty sure you can move circle on x:432 y:110
00:16:196 (1,3) - If you move sliders closer you can see that slidertail doesn't even reaching the slider http://i.imgur.com/OkfW4uk.png I can suggest to rotate curved slider -4 degrees.

[Advanced]
00:18:848 (2,3) - It looks a bit odd to see that sliderbody is overlaping next slider a bit.
00:40:068 (1,2) - Parallel isn't pixel perfect.

[Hard]
00:08:901 (3) - I'm pretty sure you can rotate this -2 degrees to create more perfect blanket with this slider 00:08:238 (1) -
00:24:153 (1) - 00:28:132 (1) - Sounds like you can do some 1/2 rhythm here.
00:42:058 (3) - I can suggest to move this circle on x:346 Y:171 to create more perfect triangle pattern with sliders.

[Insane]
00:04:259 (1) - You can press 2 times ctrl+g to make slider points rearranged and then make blanket more pixel perfect.

Some minor things.

Last edited by Jonis221 2017-08-15T07:45:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-08-15T00:46:53+00:00

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
1. soft-sliderslide.wav
Hitsounds with possible delay >5 ms:
1. soft-hitwhistle2.wav << don't have audacity atm but I just copy pasted it from MA anyways

[Akitoshi's Normal]

00:06:249 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is accidentally the same as other measures 00:08:238 - 00:10:227 - 00:12:217 - but the song doesn't do the same, so maybe should differentiate the rhythm here from those other measures a little, either Ctrl+G 00:06:249 (1,2) or make them a repeat slider could work.
00:21:169 (3) - Any reason for not ending this at 00:21:666 like what you did previously?
00:37:084 (2,1,2,3) - aa why are you forcing yourself back to where you came from, now it looks messier than everything else cuz now 00:37:084 (2,3) look almost like an unintentional overlap.

[Advanced]

00:14:704 (2,3) - 00:18:848 (2,3) - 00:25:148 (2,3) - 00:30:784 (2,3,1) - 00:41:063 (2,3) - Can you like be more detailed with your DS
00:22:660 (2) - Unsnapped according to mr aimod

[Hard]

00:10:891 (3) - Slightly off-screen hello
00:32:111 (1,2,3) - Any reason for making these different from 00:34:100 (1,2,3) - 00:36:090 (1,2,3) - 00:38:079 (1,2,3) ?

[Insane]

00:05:254 (1,2,3) - Your aesthetics here gave me an impression like you didn't make this consistent with other interlocking ideas like 00:00:281 (1,2,3) - 00:01:275 (1,2,3) - 00:05:254 (1,2,3) because you're going off-screen or something zz
00:37:084 (1,2,3) - Is this intentional for having different direction changes from 00:33:105 (1,2,3) - 00:35:095 (1,2,3) ?
00:40:067 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The decrease in spacings are ok but aesthetics can be polished by not making them overlapped or something

[Ascenster's Insane]

00:08:901 (4,5,1) - Is too inconsistent/stand out compared to other places with the same/similar rhythm like 00:10:891 (4,1) - 00:12:880 (3,1) - etc cuz you suddenly pulled out a back-and-forth jump which you didn't do that in most of other places zz
00:13:212 (1,2) - Any reason for this being a 1/1 pause? You just did 1/1 sliders on other places most of the time like 00:11:222 (1) - 00:17:190 (1) - etc and 00:13:543 (2) isn't worth making it clickable anyways.

gl gl

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-15T04:44:53+00:00

summoning time owo

EggsGone wrote:
Hello, just mod.

[Advanced]
00:18:848 (2,3) - It looks a bit odd to see that sliderbody is overlaping next slider a bit. modified a little
00:40:068 (1,2) - Parallel isn't pixel perfect. kk bb

[Hard]
00:08:901 (3) - I'm pretty sure you can rotate this -2 degrees to create more perfect blanket with this slider 00:08:238 (1) - I think you meant +2, did that
00:24:153 (1) - 00:28:132 (1) - Sounds like you can do some 1/2 rhythm here. I want to keep the rhythm less dense than the stronger parts of the music
00:42:058 (3) - I can suggest to move this circle on x:346 Y:171 to create more perfect triangle pattern with sliders. k

[Insane]
00:04:259 (1) - You can press 2 times ctrl+g to make slider points rearranged and then make blanket more pixel perfect. thanks, also did ctrl-h four times, pressed q 64 times and mashed ctrl-s for twenty minutes (ok but it doesn't actually change anything)
Some minor things.

Electoz wrote:
[General]

oops fixed
Unused hitsounds:
soft-sliderslide.wav
Hitsounds with possible delay >5 ms:
soft-hitwhistle2.wav << don't have audacity atm but I just copy pasted it from MA anyways

[Advanced]

00:14:704 (2,3) - 00:18:848 (2,3) - 00:25:148 (2,3) - 00:30:784 (2,3,1) - 00:41:063 (2,3) - Can you like be more detailed with your DS fix all
00:22:660 (2) - Unsnapped according to mr aimod the head was unsnapped so mr aimod can go suck a banana
[Hard]

00:10:891 (3) - Slightly off-screen hello I THOUGHT I FIXED THAT FROM THE LAST MOD
00:32:111 (1,2,3) - Any reason for making these different from 00:34:100 (1,2,3) - 00:36:090 (1,2,3) - 00:38:079 (1,2,3) ? cuz i didn't know what pattern i was going to use yet xP
I did a temporary fix but i might need to change that
[Insane]

00:05:254 (1,2,3) - Your aesthetics here gave me an impression like you didn't make this consistent with other interlocking ideas like 00:00:281 (1,2,3) - 00:01:275 (1,2,3) - 00:05:254 (1,2,3) because you're going off-screen or something zz Made pattern 00:00:281 (1,2,3) - identical to 00:04:259 (1,2,3) -. Should be fine to remove just the obvious outlier
Side note, to explain why I take flow offscreen, it makes the player know "the next object is 100% not going to be where it would be". It makes unorthodox flow easier to manage. I usually do this in ctb too
00:37:084 (1,2,3) - Is this intentional for having different direction changes from 00:33:105 (1,2,3) - 00:35:095 (1,2,3) ? Yup, the 3x 1/2 sliders map guitar sounds, guitar descended pitch last two times but goes up here.
00:40:067 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The decrease in spacings are ok but aesthetics can be polished by not making them overlapped or something spaced and polished
gl gl ty ty

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-15T05:14:54+00:00

Reply boxxx

Doormat wrote:
[Aki]
00:15:035 - if you're following drums you shouldn't ignore this drum note on the red tick here picking this rhythm ruins my general placement (which is i don't use circle > slider pattern at all) and also 3/2 rhythm gaps were for piano w
00:16:030 - i'd consider putting a circle here to help with polarity ^
00:22:164 (1) - honestly i don't think a 2/1 slider is the best choice for rhythm here seeing as how you skipped over the drum at 00:22:330 - . i'd try a circle + 3/2 slider violin's held sound
SPOILER
00:23:158 (7,8) - this would be more effective if it were three circles. the musical sounds aren't being held so a slider doesn't feel appropriate yes
00:40:068 (1,2) - both sliders should have the same design, like 00:32:111 (1,2) - 00:34:100 (1,2) - or 00:38:079 (1,3) - . i recommend giving 00:41:063 (2) - the same curve as 00:40:068 (1) - yes

Error- wrote:
[Akitoshi]
00:15:201 (3,4) - they seems not a straight line, not like you do before and after tried

MasterHerobrine wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]
00:05:254 (3) - move the end shape from X258 Y333 to X256 Y336 and then move a circle to make a "line" from X217 Y322 to X216 Y328 not that exact but i tried
00:06:249 (1,2,3) - maybe better to make a round. 1 k
00:15:201 (3,4) - maybe move it down? nah
00:17:853 (4) - move to X390 Y195 to X392 Y196 ruins ds but fixed in other placement
00:42:141 (1) - maybe do here a spinner to 00:44:379 ? no

Chewin wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal
00:14:206 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm comes in so suddenly (first time you use the 1/2 with a short 1/1 slider). Well, it's nice anyways, but removing the circles and extending the sliders by 1/2 can be an option too. Not a big issue, tho. Just a valid option to consider. oh yeah, fixed
Very good map, nothing to say

EggsGone wrote:
[Normal]
00:29:127 (2,1) - Sliderbow isn't symmetrical. Sliderbows should look something like this imo http://i.imgur.com/bWSfUfz.png its symmetrical already tho, who notices on 1px off in play anyway lu
00:15:201 (3,4) - 00:15:201 (3,4) - objects not even in a single line. Pretty sure you can move circle on x:432 y:110 no more prob here cuz i extended
00:16:196 (1,3) - If you move sliders closer you can see that slidertail doesn't even reaching the slider http://i.imgur.com/OkfW4uk.png I can suggest to rotate curved slider -4 degrees. it flows fineeeeeee

Electoz wrote:
[Akitoshi's Normal]

00:06:249 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm here is accidentally the same as other measures 00:08:238 - 00:10:227 - 00:12:217 - but the song doesn't do the same, so maybe should differentiate the rhythm here from those other measures a little, either Ctrl+G 00:06:249 (1,2) or make them a repeat slider could work. did reverse
00:21:169 (3) - Any reason for not ending this at 00:21:666 like what you did previously? violin's rhythm
00:37:084 (2,1,2,3) - aa why are you forcing yourself back to where you came from, now it looks messier than everything else cuz now 00:37:084 (2,3) look almost like an unintentional overlap. remap w

thank you bois

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osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
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TitleUnicode:Granat
Artist:Drop
ArtistUnicode:Drop
Creator:Sinnoh
Version:Akitoshi's Normal
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Tags:Akitoshi Corinn Ascendance ktgster 竜と炎の物語 清風明月 c85 seifuu meigetsu  ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame
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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-15T21:37:31+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Ascenster's Insane
00:01:938 (3) - This straight slider placed there and with tail on the left just breaks the flow you created. I would just make something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840837 it works better imo Agreed
00:23:490 (3,4) - I would increase the spacing here, instead of decreasing it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840844 More fun to play Sure thing!
00:39:074 (5) - New combo for consistency? Did it!

Good luck!

Electoz wrote:
[Ascenster's Insane]

00:08:901 (4,5,1) - Is too inconsistent/stand out compared to other places with the same/similar rhythm like 00:10:891 (4,1) - 00:12:880 (3,1) - etc cuz you suddenly pulled out a back-and-forth jump which you didn't do that in most of other places zz decreased the spacing of the jump but kept it overall
00:13:212 (1,2) - Any reason for this being a 1/1 pause? You just did 1/1 sliders on other places most of the time like 00:11:222 (1) - 00:17:190 (1) - etc and 00:13:543 (2) isn't worth making it clickable anyways. There's other places where it's done (i.e. 00:17:853 (3,1) - ) but it's mostly because variety in such a repetitive song lol
gl gl

Thanks for modding!

Easy

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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-16T05:05:54+00:00

quickmod

easy
rc suggested spacing to be between 0.8 and 1.2x and you have 1.5x. But your sv is really low and would look ugly if they were that close, so seems to be the better choice to use here.
00:19:180 (5,1) - these slider bodies are kinda close, either move 00:17:854 (3,4,5) - upwards or 00:20:174 (1) - and stuff after downwards
00:20:174 (1,4,5) - these overlaps are really ugly. Can avoid with something like this? https://puu.sh/xbgdp/2a218f192f.png
00:40:068 (1,2) - wat is this rhythm the slider end is on downbeat and doesn't really work. use this idea since you're cramped in the corner https://puu.sh/xbgh1/5b05d924d4.png

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-16T05:17:03+00:00

fixed all except the last one, i think it's fine. also yea fuck the rc, 1.5x seems okay to me to use tbhhh

thank

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2017-08-18T05:03:47+00:00

m4m return, delay cause school return sucks

[general]
some diff has no hitsounds at all lol
combo colors are really similar to ones on my country flag, such a coincidence

[ez]
ok

[n]
ok

[a]
00:15:698 (4) - this causes inconsistency with rhythm from 00:14:206 (1,2,3) - you can copy rhythm from there instead of a 1/3 slider

[h]
00:15:201 (3,4) - blanket if intended can be improved
00:36:420 (2) - end is unsnapped by 2ms
00:37:746 (6) - ^

[i]
00:02:601 (2) - ctrl+j?
00:11:884 (3) - end is unsnapped by 2ms
00:13:542 (2) - ^
00:38:246 (2,3) - this kind of flow is a bad idea because the confusion can be done with HD mod

[ascenter's i]
00:15:699 (2) - converting this into circles would give emphasis imo
00:38:079 (1,2,3) - any reason for this jump?

sorry for short mod, map looks well polished in my point of view
gl

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-18T07:09:36+00:00

i fixed the bg finally

Underforest wrote:
m4m return, delay cause school return sucks me soon D:

[general]
some diff has no hitsounds at all lol ffs ascendance did not update

[a]
00:15:698 (4) - this causes inconsistency with rhythm from 00:14:206 (1,2,3) - you can copy rhythm from there instead of a 1/3 slider following percussion change, i'll assume typo as 1/2 slider but same thing

[h]
00:15:201 (3,4) - blanket if intended can be improved i was just randomly placing objects here so ya
00:36:420 (2) - end is unsnapped by 2ms how does this shit even appear
00:37:746 (6) - ^ where is triangle man

[i]
00:02:601 (2) - ctrl+j? Fine as is
00:11:884 (3) - end is unsnapped by 2ms phuk this gay earth
00:13:542 (2) - ^
00:38:246 (2,3) - this kind of flow is a bad idea because the confusion can be done with HD mod it's not meant to be easy flow + mods don't matter

[ascenter's i]
hey look i'm doing an ascendance
00:15:699 (2) - converting this into circles would give emphasis imo kinda breaks the pattern so no need to change
00:38:079 (1,2,3) - any reason for this jump? piano changes pitch by large amount so this pattern needs to be different

sorry for short mod, map looks well polished in my point of view many thanks, you pointed out quite a few unrankable issues so ty for that
gl

-Mo-

Nomination Assessment Team

953 posts

Joined December 2012

-Mo- 2017-08-25T10:19:43+00:00

General
- Widescreen storyboard is inconsistent, turn them either all on or all off.
- soft-hitwhistle2.wav has a ~4.5ms delay at the start. While barely acceptable, you might as well remove it. I fixed it here, or you could do it yourself.
- Advanced and Insane have different ending times because the final note is unsnapped by 1ms /shrug

Akitoshi's Normal
- 00:21:169 (3) - Would you consider making this 2/1? I feel like there's not really a need to keep 00:21:832 (4) as an active beat given the music.

Hard
- 00:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - This combo doesn't have consistent spacing, so it could be neater if you fixed that (or make 3-4 larger).
- 00:27:137 (4) - Placing this at around (385, 282) would make this pattern neater so that 3-2-4 are evenly spaced.
- 00:28:132 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to the first point.
- 00:29:790 (5,1) - 00:30:619 (2,3) - The circles are two similar sounds using different spacings, which I would rather keep consistent.

Insane
- 00:03:928 (3,4) - I think reducing this spacing so that there's more contrast between this and 4-1 would be better.
- 00:38:742 (4) - Still not really happy about how this combo looks. My quick fix would be to put this slider at (69, 147) so that visually, 4-2-3 have the same gap between them, andideally the spacing between each note should be reducing to match with the scale in the music.
- 00:40:067 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't really see the NC spam being necessary in my opinion.

Ascenster's Insane
- 00:09:730 (2,3) - This jump isn't really supported by anything apart from a hitsound, so I would find some way to reduce it.
- 00:12:714 (2,3,1) - 00:16:693 (2,3,1) - 00:18:682 (2,3,1) etc - So I feel like there's too much emphasis being placed on these slider 3s where you have larger spacing and sharper angles, where in the music there isn't much to support them. Comparatively, the start of the next combo has a stronger beat, but uses equal or smaller emphasis to these sliders. I didn't list all of them, but personally I'd like to see something changed with most of these.
- 00:21:832 (3,4,1) - This is a more extreme case of what I just said.

I'll can recheck this.

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-28T14:39:16+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
General
- Widescreen storyboard is inconsistent, turn them either all on or all off. no it's my style
- soft-hitwhistle2.wav has a ~4.5ms delay at the start. While barely acceptable, you might as well remove it. I fixed it here, or you could do it yourself. added
- Advanced and Insane have different ending times because the final note is unsnapped by 1ms /shrug why not

Hard
- 00:24:153 (1,2,3,4) - This combo doesn't have consistent spacing, so it could be neater if you fixed that (or make 3-4 larger). spacing emphasis but it looks stupid so applied
- 00:27:137 (4) - Placing this at around (385, 282) would make this pattern neater so that 3-2-4 are evenly spaced. yes this good
- 00:28:132 (1,2,3,4) - Similar to the first point.
- 00:29:790 (5,1) - 00:30:619 (2,3) - The circles are two similar sounds using different spacings, which I would rather keep consistent. ok

Insane
- 00:03:928 (3,4) - I think reducing this spacing so that there's more contrast between this and 4-1 would be better. moved left, should also be arranged a bit neater
- 00:38:742 (4) - Still not really happy about how this combo looks. My quick fix would be to put this slider at (69, 147) so that visually, 4-2-3 have the same gap between them, and ideally the spacing between each note should be reducing to match with the scale in the music. fixed with a blanket
- 00:40:067 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't really see the NC spam being necessary in my opinion. ok

I'll can recheck this. I'll will can call you back

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-08-29T01:09:04+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Akitoshi's Normal
- 00:21:169 (3) - Would you consider making this 2/1? I feel like there's not really a need to keep 00:21:832 (4) as an active beat given the music.

fixed, thank you!

a

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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-08-29T04:07:43+00:00

-Mo- wrote:
Ascenster's Insane
- 00:09:730 (2,3) - This jump isn't really supported by anything apart from a hitsound, so I would find some way to reduce it. Reduced
- 00:12:714 (2,3,1) - 00:16:693 (2,3,1) - 00:18:682 (2,3,1) etc - So I feel like there's too much emphasis being placed on these slider 3s where you have larger spacing and sharper angles, where in the music there isn't much to support them. Comparatively, the start of the next combo has a stronger beat, but uses equal or smaller emphasis to these sliders. I didn't list all of them, but personally I'd like to see something changed with most of these. The important ones I've changed to fully circle-based patterns to give out more emphasis, the others I've left as sliders but adjusted emphasis more appropriately.
- 00:21:832 (3,4,1) - This is a more extreme case of what I just said. This mainly is for backing the piano though and matching it's pitch, so no change here.

I'll can recheck this.

Thanks!

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Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,950 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

Xinnoh 2017-08-29T04:10:10+00:00

enabled widescreen support on all diffs for consistency

Ascendance wrote:
-Mo- wrote:
Ascenster's Insane
- 00:21:832 (3,4,1) - This is a more extreme case of what I just said. This mainly is for backing the piano though and matching it's pitch, so no change here.
Was asked to apply this by mo/ascendance. Flipped 00:21:169 (1) - vertically and move the general pattern upwards to reduce distance.

Updated again, everything from mo's mod is now applied

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-09-04T22:44:40+00:00

Did a pretty small IRC with Mo about the part I declined and we came to an agreement on a new pattern. Also I fixed a stack error.

osu file format v14

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-Mo-

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-Mo- wrote:
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pishifat 2017-12-23T10:14:52+00:00

00:32:111 - 00:36:090 - not sure why volume is lowered for these dings while 00:34:100 - 00:38:079 - these ones are kept the same. if anything it's weird to have the start of new section relatively lower volume

insaen
00:07:243 (1) - would go with straight stuff to match the earlier weird slider 00:03:264 (1) - (and to better point at 00:07:742 (2) - because your hook right now suck s)

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Xinnoh 2017-12-23T12:46:44+00:00

pishifat wrote:
00:32:111 - 00:36:090 - not sure why volume is lowered for these dings while 00:34:100 - 00:38:079 - these ones are kept the same. if anything it's weird to have the start of new section relatively lower volume idk i was just copying lanwings lol

insaen
00:07:243 (1) - would go with straight stuff to match the earlier weird slider 00:03:264 (1) - (and to better point at 00:07:742 (2) - because your hook right now suck s) ya

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