wajinshu wrote:

жиза давай м4м

Diphoptoziga wrote:

Заебись мапа

Lama Poluna wrote:

SPOILER

21:48 Lama Poluna: 00:39:901 (5) -
21:48 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/944048 Major Look - Never Hold Us Back [Insane]]
21:48 vanucik5656: ирк?
21:48 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSCyi.jpg
21:48 Lama Poluna: Вот так
21:48 Lama Poluna: Да
21:48 Lama Poluna: 00:40:758 -
21:48 Lama Poluna: Мисс бит?
21:49 Lama Poluna: 00:46:072 -
21:49 vanucik5656: я там под вокал мапал
21:49 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSCB9.jpg
21:49 vanucik5656: он мощнее
21:49 Lama Poluna: Почему не просто откружность?
21:49 Lama Poluna: А какой то очень странный
21:49 Lama Poluna: Бесформенный
21:49 vanucik5656: лул
21:49 Lama Poluna: Стрим
21:49 vanucik5656: у меня все стримы такие
21:49 vanucik5656: не он с формой
21:49 Lama Poluna: ремап
21:49 Lama Poluna: ну не ремап
21:49 Lama Poluna: но мне нравится
21:50 Lama Poluna: 00:58:758 (4) -
21:50 vanucik5656: не бланкет не надо
21:50 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSCEM.jpg
21:50 vanucik5656: а то голова закружится
21:50 Lama Poluna: Причем тут это?
21:50 vanucik5656: я твои мысли пытался предугадать
21:51 Lama Poluna: 01:09:558 (5) -
21:51 Lama Poluna: Не ровно по сравнению с нотмами по бокам
21:52 vanucik5656: дай координаты
21:52 vanucik5656: по ровной
21:52 vanucik5656: для меня ровно
21:52 vanucik5656: мб я слепой
21:52 Lama Poluna: 01:41:444 (6) -
21:52 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSCN7.jpg
21:52 Lama Poluna: 01:46:415 (4) -
21:53 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSCOq.jpg
21:53 vanucik5656: слишком большой спейс будет
21:53 Lama Poluna: И что блядь
21:53 Lama Poluna: Это хардик?
21:53 Lama Poluna: ОЙ ИЗВИНИТЕ
21:53 vanucik5656: не токсикуй
21:55 Lama Poluna: Все же по дистац00:14:530 (3,4,5,6) -
21:55 Lama Poluna: 00:14:530 (3,4,5,6) -
21:55 Lama Poluna: Бесформенный спам нот
21:55 Lama Poluna: хотяб звездочку попробуй из них сделай
21:55 vanucik5656: 4 под бланкет
21:55 vanucik5656: 5 6 7 триангл
21:56 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/947050 Major Look - Never Hold Us Back [Hyper]]
21:57 Lama Poluna: 00:25:501 (3,4) -
21:57 Lama Poluna: Серьезно?
21:58 vanucik5656: ?
21:58 Lama Poluna: Поставь ее на конец слайдера
21:58 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSD53.jpg
21:58 vanucik5656: зачем
21:58 vanucik5656: она и так играется норм
21:58 vanucik5656: её же видно
21:58 vanucik5656: прекрасно
21:58 Lama Poluna: Фу
21:58 vanucik5656: за этим слайдером
21:59 vanucik5656: ну не надо
21:59 vanucik5656: не бей только
21:59 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSD8k.jpg
21:59 Lama Poluna: 00:30:644 (3) -
22:00 vanucik5656: тебе прямые слайдеры не нравятся?
22:00 vanucik5656: ужс
22:00 Lama Poluna: с чего ты взял?
22:00 Lama Poluna: Я указал на его местоположение
22:00 Lama Poluna: А не его форму
22:01 Lama Poluna: 01:41:272 (4) -
22:01 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSDeq.jpg
22:01 Lama Poluna: 01:47:444 (2,3) -
22:01 vanucik5656: не оч
22:01 Lama Poluna: http://puu.sh/qSDgh.jpg
22:02 vanucik5656: там по спейсу
22:02 Lama Poluna: А ты его везде соблюдаешь?
22:03 *Lama Poluna is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/950263 Major Look - Never Hold Us Back [Hard]]
22:03 Lama Poluna: 01:07:844 (2) -
22:03 Lama Poluna: Просто лишнее
22:03 vanucik5656: почти везде
22:03 vanucik5656: кроме сильных битов и нк
22:03 Lama Poluna: Нигде
22:03 Lama Poluna: Он у тебя рандомный
22:03 Lama Poluna: Не пизди
22:04 vanucik5656: ПРУФЫ
22:04 Lama Poluna: 00:14:187 (2) -
22:05 Lama Poluna: Там не сильный бит
22:05 vanucik5656: ну чуток поменял
22:05 vanucik5656: ну это не так страшно
22:05 Lama Poluna: 00:21:730 (4) -
22:05 Lama Poluna: 00:26:015 (4) -
22:05 Lama Poluna: Не сильнй бит
22:06 vanucik5656: ты моддить собираешься
22:06 Lama Poluna: Уже
22:06 vanucik5656: там нк
22:06 Lama Poluna: 4 - не 1
22:06 vanucik5656: ну так модь
22:06 Lama Poluna: какой нк?
22:06 Lama Poluna: Я уже замодил
22:06 Lama Poluna: С меня хватит

с меня хватит

Namki wrote:

Белый цвет не фитает и сливается, ставь другой. ok

Hard
00:01:501 (1,2,3,4) - плохой паттерн в плане ритма, вообще под музыку не подходит. Сделай слайдеры или спиннер. ((
01:14:872 (3,4) - видео пишифата не смотрел? Если паттерн появляет не один раз на диффу — этот паттерн имеет смысл, если паттерн появляется один или два раза — бессмысленный паттерн. Анстак. 02:10:930 (2,1) - тут то же самое. 02:34:244 (2,3) - . ха, тонка, видосы пишифата
02:11:101 (1) - рандомный нк какой-то. ага

Hyper
01:30:987 (2) - нк потому что под музыку. ага
Этим 01:43:330 (2) - портишь весь паттеринг киев. Меняй на серклы. неа, сложно будет

Insane
00:02:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ну а зачем? Прямой стрим сделал бы и нормально, нахуй делать такой паттерн, если остальные паттерны у тебя ровные. Очень не вписывается этот стрим тут из-за формы. лул, это такая форма, нахуй эти прямые стримы, надо что-то оригинальное делать
00:11:444 (4,5) - зачем увеличиваешь тут спейсинг. Сильного ничего нет. 00:12:130 (7,8) - и тут то же самое. так точно господин
00:13:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^^. 00:35:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^^^. 00:46:072 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^^^. Ну и другие такие же. same
01:00:130 (7,8) - зачем только выдумывать. Серкл трипл слайдер. Легче же в разы. И играется лучше в разы. слайдер вокал захватывает, имо лучше будет
01:30:987 (2) - нк. эн ка

Ну хсы вообще никакие, конечно. потом поищу что-нибудь нормальное С такими тебе не ранкнуть мапсет. А вроде, неплохо.
I modded mapset long time age, since then mapper has remapped it, so it's fine if I'll get a kds. ну ты хитрожопый, лови два кдс

1. Add a silent sliderslide, slider sound is a bit annoying at some parts.
2. Do you have an official source for the metadata?
3. The gray combo color often blends with the BG, is better if you remove it

1. First to all your comboing is really inconsistent, mainly because of the variations like: 00:12:815 (3,1) - , I think you should recomboing the full diff using a every one stanza NC (Big white tick), that would make your comboing consistent.
2. The second thing that bother me in this difficulty is that you are using 3/4 slider often, for example 00:04:930 (7) - 00:06:301 (4) - etc, don't worry those sliders fit the vocals really nice and I love them, but my problem is the sound at the slider tails, can you use soft sampleset for the tail of the 3/4 sliders and maybe reduce the volume of them a bit?
3. 00:13:158 (1) - As I said before, you don't need to NC this, is unnecessary.
4. 00:15:558 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - this is probably the pattern that I dislike in this map, first to all the connection between 8 and 9 is poor, it doesn't play that nicely, also if you are trying to make a polygon pattern which is the case here, make it perfectly there is a tool in the editor that would help u to make them with little effort and why 12 and 1 have suck low spacing being 1 a really strong beat?
5. 00:18:644 (9) - this looks a bit off place, I mean if you look at the pattern 00:16:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 9 is really alone and have no connection with the rest, I'd make it parallel with the rest, like:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:615 (2,3,4) - nice pattern! but 00:24:130 (5) - isn't part of it which make me sad, this is similar to the above case
7. 00:32:187 - this beat have a really prominent sound, that's why your 3/4 slider sounds bad, I guess is better if you make a 1/2 slider instead.
8. 00:36:130 (2,3,4,5,6) - your rhythm choice doesn't feels that nice, this section is mostly based in vocals with background music, in fact most of your objects are following the vocals with this exceptions, I'd suggest to:
   
9. 01:07:844 (1) - 01:30:644 (1) - yeah here you have an example of the slider sound being annoying, btw can you use a soft sampleset at the slider tail and also reduce the volume a bit
10. 01:11:101 (6) - why a slider grrrr, use two circles instead, if you notice the music is exactly the same as 01:10:415 (2,3,4,5) - basically your slider make the rhythm inconsistent.
11. 01:47:101 (1,2,3) - the slowdown at your hyper diff is so nice, you totally should have one at this diff too.
12. 01:46:072 (2,3) - if you listen to the music closely this 01:46:072 (2,3) - should be a slider and this 01:46:415 (4) - should be 2 circles
13. 01:51:301 (1) - reduce a bit the volume of this spinner
14. 01:56:701 (5,6) - is fine, but I think this would sound better as:
    
15. 02:02:015 (6,1) - reduce this spacig between them a bit, is visually confusing atm, since the spacing is basically the same as 02:02:187 (1,2) - visually talking
16. 02:07:501 (4) - x:288 y:176
17. 02:08:358 (7,1) - this overlap is visible in game and doesn't looks good, you should avoid it.
18. 02:26:701 (4,5) - this jump really don't fit the song at all.

1. Combos are also inconsistent here, just do what I said at Insane. Also same as the 3/4 slider thing
2. 00:00:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you at least try to have a different rhythm, this is basically the same as the insane diff
3. 00:03:215 (2,3) - looks like the belong to a different pattern, since the connection between them is bad, I'd recommend reworking 3 to look more visually connected to 2.
4. 00:08:015 (1) - this should be a single circle like you did with 00:05:272 (8) -, also it shouldn't be NC, your NC should be at 00:08:358 (2) -
5. 00:17:615 (5) - Use a 1/2 slider instead, since this is not an Insane diff, I don't see the reason to have a complicate rhythm at some places.
6. 00:26:187 (1,2,3) - fix the spacing.
7. 00:36:472 (3,4) - rhythm sounds really broken here, use two 1/2 sliders instead, that would fit the vocals and instruments better.
8. 00:57:044 - is the delayed break on purpose? I don't think so, since you didn't at the other difficulties.
9. 01:07:844 (1) - same as insane.
10. 01:30:644 (1) - same as above
11. 01:33:044 (6,2) - can you avoid this overlap, it doesn't looks good.
12. 01:59:787 (2,3,4) - use the same spacing between them.
13. 02:31:672 (3,4) - blanket can be improved a bit.

1. 00:01:501 (5) - NC
2. 00:14:530 (3,4) - try to make a blanket here? it would looks nice!
3. 00:30:301 (4) - missing NC
4. 00:36:472 (2,3) - as I said in hyper this rhythm is really bad, use two 1/2 sliders instead, that fit better the vocals
5. 00:59:101 (4) - missing NC
6. 01:01:844 (4) - Same as above
7. 01:07:844 (2) - same as Insane diff
8. 01:26:530 (5) - missing NC
9. 01:29:272 (4) - Same
10. 01:58:072 (1,2) - use a slider instead, I think a slider will represent better the song
11. OD 6 AR 7 are better diff settings~

1. AR5 fit this diff better.
2. 00:24:472 (5,1) - spacing
3. 01:53:958 (4,5,6) - same
4. 01:55:330 (1,2) - same
5. 01:01:844 (3,4) - blanket can be improved a bit.
6. 01:25:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the 1/2 chain is a bit annoying to play tbh, try this instead:
   
7. 01:29:958 (5,6) - remove 6 and add a repeat in 5, that would be more friendly for a normal diff.

1. AR 3
2. 01:55:330 (1,2) - Spacing

Natsu wrote:

Hi!

General:
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1. Add a silent sliderslide, slider sound is a bit annoying at some parts.
2. Do you have an official source for the metadata? bakari's mod
3. The gray combo color often blends with the BG, is better if you remove it

Insane:
[]

1. First to all your comboing is really inconsistent, mainly because of the variations like: 00:12:815 (3,1) - , I think you should recomboing the full diff using a every one stanza NC (Big white tick), that would make your comboing consistent.
2. The second thing that bother me in this difficulty is that you are using 3/4 slider often, for example 00:04:930 (7) - 00:06:301 (4) - etc, don't worry those sliders fit the vocals really nice and I love them, but my problem is the sound at the slider tails, can you use soft sampleset for the tail of the 3/4 sliders and maybe reduce the volume of them a bit?
3. 00:13:158 (1) - As I said before, you don't need to NC this, is unnecessary.
4. 00:15:558 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - this is probably the pattern that I dislike in this map, first to all the connection between 8 and 9 is poor, it doesn't play that nicely, also if you are trying to make a polygon pattern which is the case here, make it perfectly there is a tool in the editor that would help u to make them with little effort and why 12 and 1 have suck low spacing being 1 a really strong beat?
5. 00:18:644 (9) - this looks a bit off place, I mean if you look at the pattern 00:16:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 9 is really alone and have no connection with the rest, I'd make it parallel with the rest, like: I do not understand why you think that, for me it is normal slider
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:23:615 (2,3,4) - nice pattern! but 00:24:130 (5) - isn't part of it which make me sad, this is similar to the above case strong beat in 00:24:130 -
7. 00:32:187 - this beat have a really prominent sound, that's why your 3/4 slider sounds bad, I guess is better if you make a 1/2 slider instead.
8. 00:36:130 (2,3,4,5,6) - your rhythm choice doesn't feels that nice, this section is mostly based in vocals with background music, in fact most of your objects are following the vocals with this exceptions, I'd suggest to:
   
9. 01:07:844 (1) - 01:30:644 (1) - yeah here you have an example of the slider sound being annoying, btw can you use a soft sampleset at the slider tail and also reduce the volume a bit
10. 01:11:101 (6) - why a slider grrrr, use two circles instead, if you notice the music is exactly the same as 01:10:415 (2,3,4,5) - basically your slider make the rhythm inconsistent. slider is needed to ensure that the player used to the situation
11. 01:47:101 (1,2,3) - the slowdown at your hyper diff is so nice, you totally should have one at this diff too.
12. 01:46:072 (2,3) - if you listen to the music closely this 01:46:072 (2,3) - should be a slider and this 01:46:415 (4) - should be 2 circles I think it is better to stay the slider, because it forces the player to keep this sound
13. 01:51:301 (1) - reduce a bit the volume of this spinner what's wrong with volume?
14. 01:56:701 (5,6) - is fine, but I think this would sound better as:
    
15. 02:02:015 (6,1) - reduce this spacig between them a bit, is visually confusing atm, since the spacing is basically the same as 02:02:187 (1,2) - visually talking
16. 02:07:501 (4) - x:288 y:176 jump from (4) to (1)
17. 02:08:358 (7,1) - this overlap is visible in game and doesn't looks good, you should avoid it.
18. 02:26:701 (4,5) - this jump really don't fit the song at all. (1) - strong beat

Hyper
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1. Combos are also inconsistent here, just do what I said at Insane. Also same as the 3/4 slider thing
2. 00:00:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - can you at least try to have a different rhythm, this is basically the same as the insane diff This is bad start?
3. 00:03:215 (2,3) - looks like the belong to a different pattern, since the connection between them is bad, I'd recommend reworking 3 to look more visually connected to 2. same in insane
4. 00:08:015 (1) - this should be a single circle like you did with 00:05:272 (8) -, also it shouldn't be NC, your NC should be at 00:08:358 (2) -
5. 00:17:615 (5) - Use a 1/2 slider instead, since this is not an Insane diff, I don't see the reason to have a complicate rhythm at some places.
6. 00:26:187 (1,2,3) - fix the spacing.
7. 00:36:472 (3,4) - rhythm sounds really broken here, use two 1/2 sliders instead, that would fit the vocals and instruments better. I did not hear any instrument here for 1\2 rhythm
8. 00:57:044 - is the delayed break on purpose? I don't think so, since you didn't at the other difficulties.
9. 01:07:844 (1) - same as insane.
10. 01:30:644 (1) - same as above
11. 01:33:044 (6,2) - can you avoid this overlap, it doesn't looks good.
12. 01:59:787 (2,3,4) - use the same spacing between them. strong beat
13. 02:31:672 (3,4) - blanket can be improved a bit.

Hard
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1. 00:01:501 (5) - NC
2. 00:14:530 (3,4) - try to make a blanket here? it would looks nice!
3. 00:30:301 (4) - missing NC
4. 00:36:472 (2,3) - as I said in hyper this rhythm is really bad, use two 1/2 sliders instead, that fit better the vocals same in hyper
5. 00:59:101 (4) - missing NC
6. 01:01:844 (4) - Same as above
7. 01:07:844 (2) - same as Insane diff
8. 01:26:530 (5) - missing NC
9. 01:29:272 (4) - Same
10. 01:58:072 (1,2) - use a slider instead, I think a slider will represent better the song
11. OD 6 AR 7 are better diff settings~

Normal
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1. AR5 fit this diff better.
2. 00:24:472 (5,1) - spacing
3. 01:53:958 (4,5,6) - same
4. 01:55:330 (1,2) - same
5. 01:01:844 (3,4) - blanket can be improved a bit.
6. 01:25:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the 1/2 chain is a bit annoying to play tbh, try this instead:
   
7. 01:29:958 (5,6) - remove 6 and add a repeat in 5, that would be more friendly for a normal diff. and miss strong beat in reverse slider

Easy
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1. AR 3
2. 01:55:330 (1,2) - Spacing

The map is nice, but need more consistent, reply to my mod and let me know, I'll decide what to do with this

1. only two combo color red and pink are from the same colour scheme, quite tired for eyes, i'd rather recommend you to change pink to another color.
2. 02:14:530 - this shouldnt be kiai imo, they are totally diffenert with the former two

1. 00:27:558 (4) - nc
2. 00:36:472 - the hitsound volume can be a bit down to 50%, until 00:43:930 -
3. 01:07:844 - i cant understand the useless green line here, maybe reduce some volume?
4. 01:25:158 (4) - nc is needed
5. 01:27:901 (7) - ^
6. 02:25:501 - 70% is also a little high imo, the hitsounds sound annoying, 50% should be better.

1. 00:09:730 (1) - remove nc, as two sections one nc u setted before.
2. 00:35:787 - 01:07:844 - same mentioned in easy
3. 01:51:215 (3) - next to the bottom, rasie it a bit?
4. 02:25:501 - ^^

1. 00:35:787 - 01:07:844 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above

1. 00:35:787 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above
2. 01:09:387 (3,4) - imo a jump here works better, stack cant give me a feel of kiai time
3. 01:12:815 (1) - too near to 01:12:472 (5) - , try ctrl+h and still stack the end at 01:12:301 (4) -
4. 01:19:330 (4) - 2 circles recommended
5. 01:41:272 (4) - ^

1. 00:35:787 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above
2. 00:06:301 (4,5) - why so small space? at least as 00:08:015 (6) - please
3. 01:56:701 (5) - nc

Koiyuki wrote:

from my queueueueue

general

1. only two combo color red and pink are from the same colour scheme, quite tired for eyes, i'd rather recommend you to change pink to another color. hm, i try my best xD
2. 02:14:530 - this shouldnt be kiai imo, they are totally diffenert with the former two yes

easy

1. 00:27:558 (4) - nc +
2. 00:36:472 - the hitsound volume can be a bit down to 50%, until 00:43:930 - +
3. 01:07:844 - i cant understand the useless green line here, maybe reduce some volume? +
4. 01:25:158 (4) - nc is needed ++
5. 01:27:901 (7) - ^
6. 02:25:501 - 70% is also a little high imo, the hitsounds sound annoying, 50% should be better. +

normal

1. 00:09:730 (1) - remove nc, as two sections one nc u setted before. yes
2. 00:35:787 - 01:07:844 - same mentioned in easy +, fixed in other diff's
3. 01:51:215 (3) - next to the bottom, rasie it a bit? ++
4. 02:25:501 - ^^

hard

1. 00:35:787 - 01:07:844 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above

hyper

1. 00:35:787 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above
2. 01:09:387 (3,4) - imo a jump here works better, stack cant give me a feel of kiai time +
3. 01:12:815 (1) - too near to 01:12:472 (5) - , try ctrl+h and still stack the end at 01:12:301 (4) - + , with ctrl+g it works better imo
4. 01:19:330 (4) - 2 circles recommended sound in the end of slider is very quiet, but i changed previous slider
5. 01:41:272 (4) - ^ same

insane

1. 00:35:787 - 02:25:501 - same mentioned above
2. 00:06:301 (4,5) - why so small space? at least as 00:08:015 (6) - please yes
3. 01:56:701 (5) - nc yes

not bad, if u wanna go on with the mapset, call me when you fix the mods.
if u have free time, can i also ask for a mod for my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/617120 ? thanks in adv

1. 00:02:187 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - / 00:13:158 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - / 00:35:101 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - / 00:46:072 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - / 02:02:872 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I'm pretty sure you can make all of them to look much better, you can make them much better aesthetically. Yeah.. I think I catched your idea but if you tweak them a bit more you will do better patterns imo.
2. 00:05:187 / 00:07:930 / 00:10:672 - You don't need to have those slider ends completely silenced, vocals support a little sound. Try using 25 % or something like that.
3. 01:07:844 (1) - A slider here is not the best idea because the instrumental ends at 01:07:844 - , so the best option here is to remove the slider and add a single note there or try following vocals (that it's the only thing acting there) with a lower slider velocity for example.
4. 01:08:701 ~ 01:25:158 - The music has a lot of variety in this section but you decided to map this section with 1/2 only and two 3/4 sliders. Yeah.. the music supports a constant 1/2 but almost all songs with this BPM supports 1/2 mapping, so that doesn't make your map unique and it's not enjoyable at all. Try adding more varieties please, some 1/1 works much better than the constant 1/2 and that won't make your map easier if you know how to use it properly.
5. 01:30:987 ~ 01:46:758 - This one is worse than the previous one because you decided to map this in 1/2 only without those 3/4 that at least add some variety there. The weirdest thing here is that those are the most important sections of the map,that's why you decided to use the kiai section there.