Insane

moe

00:01:580 (1,2) - can you make a slight overlap (not full), i think, it would be better, really.
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00:13:253 (8) - according to sound nc maybe?
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00:19:367 (1,2) -
00:27:796 (3,4) -
00:28:260 (5,6) -
same as

00:01:580 (1,2) - can you make a slight overlap (not full), i think, it would be better, really.

But you can keep it if you want, if map were mine, i would do like that^
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00:23:257 (2,3,4,5) - to be honest, i don't like some overlaps here, but, i think, that's personal.
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I'm sorry for a short mod, i'm not so good at modding <5*, but i tried my best!
Hope you'll get your map ranked! <3

I really like your mapping style, especially F.K.S. map, VERY uncommon mapping, you did great job!
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I know, we both wanna rank our maps, so, i'd be very appreciated if you mod my map :3

stickAcc wrote:

Insane

moe

00:01:580 (1,2) - can you make a slight overlap (not full), i think, it would be better, really. I did full overlaps of that kind throughout the map (after sliders that is, with exception to NCd circles), i believe it looks better this way.
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00:13:253 (8) - according to sound nc maybe? NCing mainly follows the vocal verses in this map, it'd be unfitting here.
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00:19:367 (1,2) - As explained above.
00:27:796 (3,4) - ^
00:28:260 (5,6) - ^
same as

00:01:580 (1,2) - can you make a slight overlap (not full), i think, it would be better, really.

But you can keep it if you want, if map were mine, i would do like that^
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00:23:257 (2,3,4,5) - to be honest, i don't like some overlaps here, but, i think, that's personal. Yup.
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I'm sorry for a short mod, i'm not so good at modding <5*, but i tried my best!
Hope you'll get your map ranked! <3

I really like your mapping style, especially F.K.S. map, VERY uncommon mapping, you did great job!
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I know, we both wanna rank our maps, so, i'd be very appreciated if you mod my map :3 Thanks for the compliment I don't mod anymore with exception to a few cases, but feel free to ask about my opinion on maps in-game.

Thanks for the mod stickAcc, although I didn't fix anything from it Appreciate the effort though, thanks!

@davidminh0111: Didn't apply the NCs since they go against the logic of my patterning in both difficulties. Thanks for putting some time into modding the set though.

I know, we both wanna rank our maps, so, i'd be very appreciated if you mod my map :3 Thanks for the compliment I don't mod anymore with exception to a few cases, but feel free to ask about my opinion on maps in-game.

I'm sorry, i'm adding this line in literally every mod, because a need a lot of help on my map c:

my first mod please don't eat me u lewd
Just pointing out random stuff and pretend that I'm good at modding :'x

[General]
Regarding metadata. Chorogonzu consists of 4 members, and they all cast the female dragons in the series. Might want to include to them to tags. Source : http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/person/700768467 . Adding respectively voice actresses is a pain you can decide if you want to do that on your own =A=/
Elma エルマ Tooru トール Quetzalcoatl ケツァルコアトル Lucoa Kanna Kamui カンナカムイ

AI mod being retarded weird.
btw, Shironi is a she, please correct that to show your respect. I know you have had awful experiences with genders before good times good times. But trust me on this owo!

[I think calling this diff ''Moe'' instead of Insane will distinguish your map from other set and legitimate concept on your sliders]
I think that AR is pretty low for such SV which can cause uncomfortable feelings while playing, maybe increase it to 8.5? I don't think it hurts the spread that much.
00:00:839 (2,3) - why are these unstacked and these 00:01:580 (1,2) - are stacked? They share the similar sound to me
00:00:839 (2,3,4) - And consider the visual distance they look like they have the same time distance, players would think 00:01:117 (3,4) - this as a jump. Luckily we are still in scorev1 era, but when scorev2 gets applied, this could be an unfair 100 for many (like me ecks deee).
00:03:341 (3) - I think this should be ctrl+g and adjust the pattern here somewhat because, it has normal-hitnormal on its head and the vocal goes higher on (3) then gets calmer on (4).
00:04:360 (4,5) - Is this stack simply for aesthetics? Because I feel like it has different concept than this stack 00:02:507 (4,1) - which is more obvious and reasonable. It should be unstacked like these 00:02:136 (3,4) - *2nazi4u*
00:20:293 (5,1) - oh I learned something here, thx
00:21:868 - I think it's played better if this is clickable
00:23:813 (5,6) - wut! why is this unstacked and this 00:19:367 (1,2) - isn't?
00:31:131 (6,7) - bee-el-ay-en-kay-ee-tee
00:35:022 (4,5) - can these curve less to slightly improve aesthetics?
00:37:801 (5,1) -

00:41:692 (1) - Since this switches to follow instrument because vocal ended a tick before, maybe make it straight slider?
00:49:751 (2,3) - This transition is pretty anoyying, players would swing whatever they use to play following this flow 00:48:361 (1,1,1,2) - but this spacing is small for this section. I think increasing a bit will make more sense
00:51:326 (4,5) - can you move these abit to the left so 00:51:418 (5,6) - spacing here get increased? Feel like this 00:51:696 - needs emphasis so bigger spacing! I think
01:01:608 (1,2) - this blanket needs serious fix, please
01:04:202 (2,3) - spacing feels like can be increased abit more here
01:06:703 (1,2) - Good job!
01:08:649 (2,1) - stack ):
01:10:223 (4,5) - can bring these to around x:383 y:307. Because ya, idk how to say, something about emphasizing stuff :v
01:12:817 - forgot your hitsound here?
and similar stuff I mentioned on the top, I think you are gonna deny them but in case you didn't apply the same on the last section

[Hard]
I hate this kind of maps when I was a noob at this game, so uncomfortable to read. But I guess it's fine (lazy excuse)

[Normal]
01:05:036 (1,2) - spacing?




100th kudosu !!!!! bad mod, sad life ;(

Asaiga wrote:

my first mod please don't eat me u lewd what
Just pointing out random stuff and pretend that I'm good at modding :'x

[General]
Regarding metadata. Chorogonzu consists of 4 members, and they all cast the female dragons in the series. Might want to include to them to tags. Source : http://www.cdjapan.co.jp/person/700768467 . Adding respectively voice actresses is a pain you can decide if you want to do that on your own =A=/
Elma エルマ Tooru トール Quetzalcoatl ケツァルコアトル Lucoa Kanna Kamui カンナカムイ

AI mod being retarded weird.
btw, Shironi is a she, please correct that to show your respect. I know you have had awful experiences with genders before good times good times. But trust me on this owo! :c

[I think calling this diff ''Moe'' instead of Insane will distinguish your map from other set and legitimate concept on your sliders]
Sorry but I want to retain my dignity
I think that AR is pretty low for such SV which can cause uncomfortable feelings while playing, maybe increase it to 8.5? I don't think it hurts the spread that much. I believe the current AR is fine as it is, no need to change it.
00:00:839 (2,3) - why are these unstacked and these 00:01:580 (1,2) - are stacked? They share the similar sound to me They represent different sounds in the music, listen closer.
00:00:839 (2,3,4) - And consider the visual distance they look like they have the same time distance, players would think 00:01:117 (3,4) - this as a jump. Luckily we are still in scorev1 era, but when scorev2 gets applied, this could be an unfair 100 for many (like me ecks deee). I can't see much of an issue at this point. They might be visually close to each other, but the spacing between the object starts is pretty clear.
00:03:341 (3) - I think this should be ctrl+g and adjust the pattern here somewhat because, it has normal-hitnormal on its head and the vocal goes higher on (3) then gets calmer on (4). Did increase the spacing to this object, but ctrl+g feels too much for the beginning to me.
00:04:360 (4,5) - Is this stack simply for aesthetics? Because I feel like it has different concept than this stack 00:02:507 (4,1) - which is more obvious and reasonable. It should be unstacked like these 00:02:136 (3,4) - *2nazi4u* Stacked for vocal pitches since they're notorious and making them stack while other similar rhythms do not is one way to highlight it. And I did the same at the end as well.
00:20:293 (5,1) - oh I learned something here, thx
00:21:868 - I think it's played better if this is clickable it'd be too choppy to play, sliders are smoother and since the focus of this map are vocals anyway, this is the better choice.
00:23:813 (5,6) - wut! why is this unstacked and this 00:19:367 (1,2) - isn't?
00:31:131 (6,7) - bee-el-ay-en-kay-ee-tee not intended here, i made it clearer
00:35:022 (4,5) - can these curve less to slightly improve aesthetics? no
00:37:801 (5,1) - weeb

00:41:692 (1) - Since this switches to follow instrument because vocal ended a tick before, maybe make it straight slider? I can't see any significant gain from that tbh.
00:49:751 (2,3) - This transition is pretty anoyying, players would swing whatever they use to play following this flow 00:48:361 (1,1,1,2) - but this spacing is small for this section. I think increasing a bit will make more sense I testplayed this section more than a dozen times, current spacing is enough to catch the momentum from the previous dropoff flow.
00:51:326 (4,5) - can you move these abit to the left so 00:51:418 (5,6) - spacing here get increased? Feel like this 00:51:696 - needs emphasis so bigger spacing! I think
01:01:608 (1,2) - this blanket needs serious fix, please
01:04:202 (2,3) - spacing feels like can be increased abit more here current one is good as it is.
01:06:703 (1,2) - Good job! rude
01:08:649 (2,1) - stack ): There's no gain from it, objects are far awaz from each other in the timeline.
01:10:223 (4,5) - can bring these to around x:383 y:307. Because ya, idk how to say, something about emphasizing stuff :v Looks awful to me tbh. The emphasis in here mainly comes from the sharp angles, so not sure what's wrong with it.
01:12:817 - forgot your hitsound here?
and similar stuff I mentioned on the top, I think you are gonna deny them but in case you didn't apply the same on the last section

[Hard]
I hate this kind of maps when I was a noob at this game, so uncomfortable to read. But I guess it's fine (lazy excuse)

[Normal]
01:05:036 (1,2) - spacing?




100th kudosu !!!!! bad mod, sad life ;(

Fixed the non-commented stuff, thanks Asa!

Insane

00:12:697 (4,5,6,7) - These doublets felt a bit forced for me. I think its better to map them as sliders or something and only have 00:13:253 (8,9) - be a double because of the vocal. It helps keep your doublet rhythm more distinct.
00:31:131 (6,7) - I think you could emphasize 7 a bit more. Maybe flip it like 180 degrees and use some flow-break pattern here instead?
00:40:858 (2) - 00:41:970 (2,3) - These areas felt a bit uh, simple? In terms of rhythm they don't really express the vocal and really follow a rhythm that is surprisingly standard for the section.
00:45:027 (1,1,1) - haha
00:50:492 (1,2) - How about spacing this out more so it looks like 00:50:029 (3,4) - ? Creates a more consistent visual
01:28:380 (3) - Move the red node up and left just a bit. Looks a bit flat atm;

Hard

00:43:822 (5) - How about adding a circle on 00:43:822 - and beginning the slider on the white tick instead for the vocal?
00:48:825 - Was kinda expecting a circle here too.

Normal

00:36:134 (1,2) - This part felt rather empty, considering the vocals.
01:11:706 (1,2,3,4) - Same here. The rhythm just feels so much sparser than 01:13:929 (1,2,3,4,5) -

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Got metadata somewhere? Good set, you can call me back ^^

if you could make the e less reversing on itself thatd be neat
tickrate 2 doesnt fit this song well esp in low diffs have a lot of ticks there but invisible ingame

i'll reply to the mod as soon as i have access to osu again, thanks for checking it out so quickly already

also hi oko

Insane.
00:16:402 (1,2,3) - The spacings look too similar while the rhythms are different. Giving more space between (2,3) to indicate the 1/3 properly would work better.
00:18:625 (1,1,1,1) - Any special reason for this nc spam? Since the ar being 8, removing the combo every object is really confusing to read this as a square properly.
00:46:138 (1) - The rhythm of this slider feels forced since there is no clear beat at the start. Starting at 00:46:323 with a shorter length would work as your intention while following the song properly.

ko short song bles i try my best

For Insane
i hate this map, such as:
00:17:514 (4) -
00:19:737 (2) -
00:24:184 (6) -
this contraction speed is too fast + is not easy to find the drums(such as↑↑↑)
I wasn't particularly good, maybe I was too weak.(Wry smile )
For map everything else is good(applause!!)XD

对于Insane
我不喜欢这个图的某些地方,比如:
00:1 7:514 (4) -
00:1 9:737 (2) -
00:2 4:184 (6) -
这种缩圈过快的谱面+ 不容易发现的滑条后承接单点(比如上面那三个鼓点为例)
对我这个新手的体验不是特别好,可能是我太弱了吧(苦笑)
地图整体还不错呢(鼓掌!!)XD

@Sonnyc: 00:46:138 (2) - The synth sound in the background has no 100% accurate point for snapping, and I'd rather go with the one that keeps the rhythm stable to play. Also i'd have to do the same for the lower diffs which is kinda unintuitive.


@GRsama: Can't speak chinese, sorry. Not sure what you mean with your points, but they are fairly playable for me.

Thanks everyone for the mods! Fixed the uncommented stuff as always

nice ravioli tags 👀

kick hitnormal seems to blend a bit much on its own, how about using https://puu.sh/wVwLz/85c1fd23ed.wav which is the same but has the default soft-hitnormal added

tickrate 2 on top diff works fine, but on hard+normal it becomes so weird since it adds a tick on sliders like 01:01:608 (3) - which also becomes invisible, it doesn't get rendered cause it overlaps t he tail

00:35:022 - some kind of additional sample would be nice on this (most likely softw)

insane
00:04:360 (4) - would be great to map a double here to not skip over snare+melody here
00:08:806 (4) - ^ think that would make rhythm much more intuitive
00:23:257 (2,3,4,5) - looks so unfitting with your other visuals in this part, mainly due to using so many different overlap spacings
01:28:380 (3) - would use like 15% volume cause ticks don't fit well

hard
00:04:360 (7,8) - I think these become a bit lol readability wise for this level of difficulty cause of the perfect stacking, might be nice to manually stack these or just overlap like similar 1/6 patterns
01:15:596 (1,2) - removing the normal samples on the tails here would make it much more intuitive to play I, they give so much feedback and the sounds in the song aren't that outstanding anyways

normal
00:37:245 (3) - would at least put a whistle or something on this. I mean rhythm isn't really optimal, the way you did it on higher diffs is nicer, but I can't come up with a good solution for that either
00:41:414 (2) - could just delete this, it's such an insignificant beat and takes way from the more important ones
or actually be consistent in what you follow on 00:40:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
01:04:480 (5) - curving this a bit in either direction would look cute with the other objects here
01:17:264 (3) - would put a whistle here too, hitsounding is kinda empty cause you mapped different things on higher diffs and tail gives more feedback than head right now

should be all

Lasse wrote:

nice ravioli tags 👀 :eyes:

kick hitnormal seems to blend a bit much on its own, how about using https://puu.sh/wVwLz/85c1fd23ed.wav which is the same but has the default soft-hitnormal added

tickrate 2 on top diff works fine, but on hard+normal it becomes so weird since it adds a tick on sliders like 01:01:608 (3) - which also becomes invisible, it doesn't get rendered cause it overlaps t he tail Hmm, didn't feel that wrong to me tbh but i guess i can adjust it for the lower diffs

00:35:022 - some kind of additional sample would be nice on this (most likely softw)

insane
00:04:360 (4) - would be great to map a double here to not skip over snare+melody here doesn't really work out for me at this point since i really want to highlight the vocals here
00:08:806 (4) - ^ think that would make rhythm much more intuitive ^. I'd rather stick to vocals here as well, it's my primary focus.
00:23:257 (2,3,4,5) - looks so unfitting with your other visuals in this part, mainly due to using so many different overlap spacings spaced the double away from the sliders, should be good now
01:28:380 (3) - would use like 15% volume cause ticks don't fit well

hard
00:04:360 (7,8) - I think these become a bit lol readability wise for this level of difficulty cause of the perfect stacking, might be nice to manually stack these or just overlap like similar 1/6 patterns
01:15:596 (1,2) - removing the normal samples on the tails here would make it much more intuitive to play I, they give so much feedback and the sounds in the song aren't that outstanding anyways

normal
00:37:245 (3) - would at least put a whistle or something on this. I mean rhythm isn't really optimal, the way you did it on higher diffs is nicer, but I can't come up with a good solution for that either
00:41:414 (2) - could just delete this, it's such an insignificant beat and takes way from the more important ones
or actually be consistent in what you follow on 00:40:580 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - did the 2nd, although not the most intuitive thing to do lol
01:04:480 (5) - curving this a bit in either direction would look cute with the other objects here
01:17:264 (3) - would put a whistle here too, hitsounding is kinda empty cause you mapped different things on higher diffs and tail gives more feedback than head right now

should be all

Fixed all the non-commented stuff, thanks lasse!

Notes should be 3/16, not 1/6
/me runs

1/6 should be accurate enough already since vocals are the focus of my maps. will discuss it with the BNs though.

Notes should be 1/6

Sry, forgot about this map (as usual). Ephemeral reminded me actually lol...

wheres my kd (((((

agree on 1/6 and the taiko map of this got unranked for using the other snapping so lol
just a few things before I qualify:
insane
00:19:042 (4) - sounds weird cause vocal seems to be on the next 1/3 tick

hard
00:18:903 (2) - similar here, should probably end on the next 1/3 tick

you also mapped it as 1/3 on normal lol

normal
00:37:245 (3) - sliderwhistle is probably not intentional


also this:

which is also what taiko version uses and it has been checked for that apparently

Pho wrote:

1/6 should be accurate enough already since vocals are the focus of my maps. will discuss it with the BNs though.

Actually I was joking. You may snap by 3/16 or 1/6, which you want. I think it's more optional. If you want more opinion about snapping, see Unmei's post.

Fixed the title and the broken hitsound. Left the snappings on Hard/Insane because 1/4 play intuitively to Kanna vocals and suddenly switching to 1/3 right in the pattern isn't very nice

where is monstrata 👀

since bn tiers are not a thing anymore I'm just going to rebubble instead of waiting for him to do that

👀

(^^♪

gratz Phở!

inb4 skylish

chorongos

Hello. I would like to inquire as to why hasn't this map used the spliced 108 BPM timing that the staff provided on the other version...? I mean Ephemeral himself insisted on having that one.



(from p/6212001)

I asked a QAT member to look into this set as I was made aware of the timing issue, the same day it was qualified. But it seems like it either wasn't too critical for a disqualification or they just forgot about it (and me as well tbh until you mentioned it again).

Oh my giddy aunt, I miss Maido Dragon. good beatmap btw