My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/472890
I'm not that good in modding screamo stream/jump maps, trying anyway xd. I'm sorry if i sound rude.
From AiMod
These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 06:27:419
Unsnapped kiais
03:10:277 -
03:37:706 -
05:46:277 -
06:30:849 -
07:25:706 -
Unsnapped kiais
03:10:277 -
03:37:706 -
05:46:277 -
06:30:849 -
07:25:706 -
Mapping
The song is mostly mistimed, try to get someone to help you with that
01:15:420 (1) - The second "bump" isn't looking that good, try something like this http://puu.sh/qB6Su/a37e9c643e.jpg
01:16:277 (1) - Same here but now it's the first bump
01:17:992 (5) - NC here, looks better
01:21:992 (8) - Try x184|y376 for better flow
01:22:563 (2,3,4) - It feels bit awkward to have small jumps like this after stuff like this 01:19:992 (2,3,4,5) -
01:38:327 (6) - Copy and mirror this 01:38:042 (5) - to there instead of the current slider
01:45:041 (2,3) - Really weird flow imo
01:51:469 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use somewhat fixed DS for stuff like this as you really cant rely on AR. The spacing is pretty much the same between 1|2 and 3|4 but timeline wise 3|4 is twice as close as 1|2
02:00:898 (4) - You can break the combo here as you start to use different kind of sliders (this and 2 after it) so it's technically a new pattern
02:18:276 (5) - NC
02:35:419 (2) - Ctrl G and move downwards
02:37:991 (3) - Ctrl J for better flow
02:44:562 (1) - As mentioned before, awkward "bump"
02:41:134 - to 02:51:419 - . Listen in 25% speed and you will notice that you have missed a ton of notes
02:53:134 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
02:54:848 (2) - ^
02:56:562 (2) - ^
02:58:276 (3) - ^
02:59:991 (3) - ^
03:01:705 (2) - ^
03:03:419 (2) - ^
03:05:134 (3) - ^
03:06:848 (2) - ^
03:14:134 (2,3) - Awkward flow
For patterns like this 03:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can NC these 03:15:991 (3,5) - (2 notes/sliders and then NC)
03:22:562 (5) - x432|y164
03:29:991 (4) - Ctrl G
03:30:562 (6) - ^
03:36:419 (4,7) - NC
03:43:705 (1) - Mirror this to here 03:43:991 -
03:49:705 (1,2,3,4) - Enhance this stream
03:49:991 (5) - Mirror to 03:50:276 -
03:50:848 (2) - NC
03:58:276 (1) - Ctrl J
NC 04:03:634 (4) - instead of 04:03:705 (1) -
04:08:181 (6,7,8) - This is weird as anyone playing would think that the roundish shape continues but they are slapped with a sharp turn
04:20:276 (1) - NC not needed
04:28:562 (1,2) - Really unfair DS as youy havent used anything like this earlier in the map
04:40:848 (5) - NC
Try to get the flow to work in these 1/3 streams, 04:43:134 (4,5,6,1) - this isn't good flow imo
05:05:134 - Way too high SV for a slow part like this, the sliders should be something like this 05:08:562 (1) - (speed)
05:18:848 (1,2) - Keep these in a line
Same as before from 06:01:705 - to 06:11:991 - you seem to be missing quite alot of notes
06:03:419 (1) - Too long slider
06:05:134 (1) - Awkward shape
06:13:705 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
06:14:848 (5) - ^
06:15:991 (3) - ^
06:17:134 (2) - ^
06:19:419 (4) - ^
06:20:562 (3) - ^
06:21:705 (5) - ^
06:22:848 (4) - ^
06:23:991 (2) - ^
06:26:276 (4) - ^
06:34:705 (2,3) - Weird flow
06:36:562 (3,5) - NC
06:42:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Enhance the flow
06:50:562 (4) - Ctrl G
07:03:991 (3,5) - NC
07:17:705 (3,5) - ^
01:15:420 (1) - The second "bump" isn't looking that good, try something like this http://puu.sh/qB6Su/a37e9c643e.jpg
01:16:277 (1) - Same here but now it's the first bump
01:17:992 (5) - NC here, looks better
01:21:992 (8) - Try x184|y376 for better flow
01:22:563 (2,3,4) - It feels bit awkward to have small jumps like this after stuff like this 01:19:992 (2,3,4,5) -
01:38:327 (6) - Copy and mirror this 01:38:042 (5) - to there instead of the current slider
01:45:041 (2,3) - Really weird flow imo
01:51:469 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use somewhat fixed DS for stuff like this as you really cant rely on AR. The spacing is pretty much the same between 1|2 and 3|4 but timeline wise 3|4 is twice as close as 1|2
02:00:898 (4) - You can break the combo here as you start to use different kind of sliders (this and 2 after it) so it's technically a new pattern
02:18:276 (5) - NC
02:35:419 (2) - Ctrl G and move downwards
02:37:991 (3) - Ctrl J for better flow
02:44:562 (1) - As mentioned before, awkward "bump"
02:41:134 - to 02:51:419 - . Listen in 25% speed and you will notice that you have missed a ton of notes
02:53:134 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
02:54:848 (2) - ^
02:56:562 (2) - ^
02:58:276 (3) - ^
02:59:991 (3) - ^
03:01:705 (2) - ^
03:03:419 (2) - ^
03:05:134 (3) - ^
03:06:848 (2) - ^
03:14:134 (2,3) - Awkward flow
For patterns like this 03:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can NC these 03:15:991 (3,5) - (2 notes/sliders and then NC)
03:22:562 (5) - x432|y164
03:29:991 (4) - Ctrl G
03:30:562 (6) - ^
03:36:419 (4,7) - NC
03:43:705 (1) - Mirror this to here 03:43:991 -
03:49:705 (1,2,3,4) - Enhance this stream
03:49:991 (5) - Mirror to 03:50:276 -
03:50:848 (2) - NC
03:58:276 (1) - Ctrl J
NC 04:03:634 (4) - instead of 04:03:705 (1) -
04:08:181 (6,7,8) - This is weird as anyone playing would think that the roundish shape continues but they are slapped with a sharp turn
04:20:276 (1) - NC not needed
04:28:562 (1,2) - Really unfair DS as youy havent used anything like this earlier in the map
04:40:848 (5) - NC
Try to get the flow to work in these 1/3 streams, 04:43:134 (4,5,6,1) - this isn't good flow imo
05:05:134 - Way too high SV for a slow part like this, the sliders should be something like this 05:08:562 (1) - (speed)
05:18:848 (1,2) - Keep these in a line
Same as before from 06:01:705 - to 06:11:991 - you seem to be missing quite alot of notes
06:03:419 (1) - Too long slider
06:05:134 (1) - Awkward shape
06:13:705 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
06:14:848 (5) - ^
06:15:991 (3) - ^
06:17:134 (2) - ^
06:19:419 (4) - ^
06:20:562 (3) - ^
06:21:705 (5) - ^
06:22:848 (4) - ^
06:23:991 (2) - ^
06:26:276 (4) - ^
06:34:705 (2,3) - Weird flow
06:36:562 (3,5) - NC
06:42:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Enhance the flow
06:50:562 (4) - Ctrl G
07:03:991 (3,5) - NC
07:17:705 (3,5) - ^
Good Luck!