Hello m4m here
[general]
* imo there's too many parts missing hs which clap would fit really well.
such as 00:08:008 - 00:08:946 - 00:09:883 - 00:10:821 - etc... maybe another custom clap would be really great
* there are some questionable rhythm change altho the music is pretty much same- throughout the whole diffs, but maybe it's the way you express the music, so I'll not mention about that.
for example
01:18:790 (1) - at easy
00:07:539 (1,2,3) - & 00:09:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - at hard
00:34:961 (3,4) - & 00:36:836 (4,5,6) - at farewell
[easy]
* 00:14:102 (5,2) - why not just stack?
* 01:00:977 (3,5) - ^
* 00:33:790 (1,2) - seperate a bit more
cuz of gap difference with 00:32:852 (4,1) - & 00:33:790 (1,2) -
http://puu.sh/sXNq3/6a9f9dc342.jpg* 01:06:133 (4) - minor ds error
[normal]
* 00:16:915 (3) - fix ds
not much to say about this diff
[hard]
* 00:13:633 (2,4) - stack
* 00:27:461 (3) - change direction of this slider, it's much more readable that it's a kickslider.
sth like this :
http://puu.sh/sXOj6/989b983dfd.jpg* 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6) - why sudden irregular spacing here?
00:38:477 (2,3,4,5) - you used consistent ds here but 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6) - much harder pattern although the intensity of the music is quite similar.(to be specific it's even calm than before)
so if you're gonna use irregular pattern at this specific vocal sound,(00:38:477 (2,3,4,5) - 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:45:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:49:727 (3,4,5,6,7) - )
I suggest to nerf spacing 00:42:227 (3,4,5,6,7) - here
and use irregular ds at 00:38:477 (2,3,4,5) - also.
* 01:25:586 (4) - this feels a bit awkward since it starts on red tick and ends on white tick. which should be opposite in most cases.
[nyu's farewell]
* missing some hs at kiai
* I don't think there's any reason to use the "getting harder streams" 01:01:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:07:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:16:915 (5,6,7,8,1) -
the intensity of the music is pretty much same.
* imo 00:13:165 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - starting this "irregular rhythm from before" at 00:15:040 - would fit better
since 00:13:165 - is 4th big white tick.
* 00:29:102 (3,4) - how about 3/4 sliders like you did before? and adding a circle 00:30:040 - here
http://puu.sh/sXPQe/6d67274f7f.jpg* 00:30:274 (5,1) - swap NC or NC 00:30:040 - here if you're gonna add a circle here ^
* 00:31:915 (4) - NC
* 01:24:415 (1,2,3,4) - increase spacing more or use circles like before. it's too easy compared to the intensity of the music.
or simply increase SV alternatively
* 01:16:915 (5,1) - swap NC
* 01:29:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this gets harder than 01:26:290 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - when the music is fading out?
That's all. GL.
Edit - oh and i forgot to say. Merry christmas!