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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, 7 August 2019 at 4:06:09 PM

Artist: TWICE
Title: KNOCK KNOCK
Tags: charmcaster funnya error- -keitaro jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 female korean vocals nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon 나연 정연 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 채영 쯔위
BPM: 130
Filesize: 22958kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.5 stars, 153 notes)
  2. Hard (3.06 stars, 447 notes)
  3. Keitaro's Insane (4.32 stars, 607 notes)
  4. Normal (2.04 stars, 271 notes)
Download: TWICE - KNOCK KNOCK
Download: TWICE - KNOCK KNOCK (no video)
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Video/MP3 fixes by dingo424

Difficulties:


Easy
Normal
Hard
Keitaro's Insane
Hitsounds by FunnyA
Adventure
hello
i can gd advanced diff?
thanks
cosmic
I like the Knock difficulty so far but if you're gonna scrap it, it's ok.
Topic Starter
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cosmiccc wrote:

I like the Knock difficulty so far but if you're gonna scrap it, it's ok.
Thx for your feedback :) <3
Cluecy
https://gyazo.com/7170c56224bc9ffedec77cfdbe18a378
not bad for first try on the new difficulty! Great Map! I cant wait to spam play it for the SS :) :P
Topic Starter
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Cluecy wrote:

https://gyazo.com/7170c56224bc9ffedec77cfdbe18a378
not bad for first try on the new difficulty! Great Map! I cant wait to spam play it for the SS :) :P
ehehe thanks!
subby3094
great
cosmic
Is this ready for modding yet? I'm not a super experienced moddder but I still wanna be helpful so this map get can get star priority and possibly get ranked :)
Topic Starter
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cosmiccc wrote:

Is this ready for modding yet? I'm not a super experienced moddder but I still wanna be helpful so this map get can get star priority and possibly get ranked :)
All of the mods are ready for modding except Insane (because no hitsounds yet). Been asking for mods from #modreqs but no one answered :/
cosmic
Hi :D My Mod

Easy
00:42:328 - Change to slider? the one circle for Sana's "Knn Knock" feels awkward
01:58:712 - Move first slider anchor point to 01:59:289 instead to match the lyrical change better
01:45:789 - ^ but to 01:46:020
A few Ai mod errors but I don't think they matter
Good map :D
Normal
01:07:481 - Make slider repeat and remove the following slider for better flow
01:54:097 (3) - Not sure if the random third point on slider was meant to be there
01:55:020 (1) - Extend spinner to this point and remove the single circle, it's awkard
02:27:328 - Add circle here because the one circle at 02:27:789 has a weird flow when it's alone
Hard
01:02:174 - Add Circle here, and move second slider to play at 01:02:404 to 01:02:635 for better flow
  1. 02:02:404 - Do same thing here
  2. 02:46:712 - and here
01:40:481 - Replace with 3 beat long slider, then add circle at 01:40:943, and another 3 beat slider at 01:41:174 for better flow imo
03:12:328 (1) - Slider here feels unnecessary

Ok that's my mod for your diffs :) ~ This mapset is great :D
Good Luck and I hope you found this helpful
Topic Starter
Fragmented
thx for le mod!

Legend:
Green = Fixed
Blue = Fixed + Comments?
Red = Nope.

cosmiccc wrote:

Hi :D My Mod

Easy
00:42:328 - Change to slider? the one circle for Sana's "Knn Knock" feels awkward good point, though if i change it to a short slider, players will get confused so i will just get rid of the circle then :)
01:58:712 - Move first slider anchor point to 01:59:289 instead to match the lyrical change better wdym :O
01:45:789 - ^ but to 01:46:020 wdym >.<
A few Ai mod errors but I don't think they matter
Good map :D
Normal
01:07:481 - Make slider repeat and remove the following slider for better flow fixed!
01:54:097 (3) - Not sure if the random third point on slider was meant to be there oops, didnt notice that
01:55:020 (1) - Extend spinner to this point and remove the single circle, it's awkard alright, though if i extend the spinner, there will be less reaction time for the players to see the incoming slider, so i just deleted the circle instead :)
02:27:328 - Add circle here because the one circle at 02:27:789 has a weird flow when it's alone fixed!
Hard
01:02:174 - Add Circle here, and move second slider to play at 01:02:404 to 01:02:635 for better flow fixed!
  1. 02:02:404 - Do same thing here fixed!
  2. 02:46:712 - and here fixed
01:40:481 - Replace with 3 beat long slider, then add circle at 01:40:943, and another 3 beat slider at 01:41:174 for better flow imo nah i think its fine
03:12:328 (1) - Slider here feels unnecessary if you listen carefully, theres a fast 3 sound beat here, so it isnt unnescessary

Ok that's my mod for your diffs :) ~ This mapset is great :D
Good Luck and I hope you found this helpful
-Keitaro
I have no idea why i still download the video even I press no vid
peppy plz fix
anyway good map :3
Topic Starter
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Error- wrote:

I have no idea why i still download the video even I press no vid
peppy plz fix
anyway good map :3
yay :3
Lilyanna
from q nm

General

disable widescreen support
set custom combo colors
check aimod something with audio

easy

00:35:635 (1) -00:44:866 (1) - avoid such complex looking slider in easy keep it simple
00:44:866 (1) - remove nc
01:01:481 (5) - add nc
01:04:251 (1) - remove nc xd
01:07:020 (1) - ^
01:29:174 (1,2,3) - its getting kinda dull u keep spamming same pattern for example here 01:29:174 (1) - u can try 1/1 repeat or 1/1 + hitcircle here 01:30:097 - this drum 01:29:635 pretty stong :v
01:31:020 (3,1) - overlaps like this can be avoided the new players can missread the tail as the head
01:37:020 - same earlier the song is not short so try variate the whole kiai is totally copy past zz >w<
so i guess the stuuff mentioned applies on rest of map

Normal

00:14:866 (2,3) - 00:22:712 (3,4) - 00:25:481 (2,3) - ok i wont list them all but these blanket so off can be polished better
00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) - can be mapped like 00:17:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:42:558 (2,1) - spacing unconsistency from 0.80 to 0.60
00:44:866 (1) - same here 1.00 and previous 0.7 pls check spacing
00:46:712 (1,2) - imo the angle is too big try something like this rotate them http://puu.sh/vP61n/6f4d1b4579.jpg
00:53:635 - 00:46:251 - miss clap on slider tail
00:44:404 - remove the clap here irrelevent
u can hear the soft clap sounds here 00:49:712 - and 00:49:943 - so each time u hear those add the soft clap
00:59:635 (4) - nc
01:07:020 (4) - 01:27:328 (4) - nc
stay consistent to where u add nc either each downbeat or after 2 downbeats
02:27:328 (1,1,1) - u only did this stack once it can be hard or confusing for new players
9 spinners in one diff >w< anyways this spinner 03:08:866 (1) - holds on to nothing spinnable might just map the outro
also check this http://puu.sh/vP6I7/c0b6849629.png in aimod to see any unconsist distance snap do same for easy

arnold's Advanced

cs can be just 4
00:23:635 (3,2) - avoid these overlap
00:25:020 (2,1) - blanket can be much better
00:43:943 (3,1) - this kind of confusing to read also its not advanced quality mapping its harder
01:34:712 (1) - ctrl j and replace would give better flow
01:44:866 (3,1) - can be better paralelle
02:03:789 (4,1) - can blanket with the (1) slider's body
overall maybe avoid the 1/4 spacing and in last kiai the structure can be improved i cant mod structure try avoid overlapped and random shaped sliders

Hard

00:15:789 (2,3) - blanket 00:16:135 - pause here and adjust it this approche circle 00:16:251 (3) -
00:18:558 - 00:20:404 - wish these claps were clickable maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/vP83v/bec1c3498a.jpg
00:42:328 (1) - maybe add a repeat to it
01:56:635 (5) - end slider on 01:57:328 - and add note here 01:57:558 - it goes with these vocals 01:57:789 (1,2) -
02:11:404 (5) - 02:40:943 (5) - same for this

Alfaster's Insane

03:12:328 (1) - remove nc and add 03:12:558 (3) - here for suddent sv change
the map is okay its too fast for me to mod but overall seems fine i guess

well i didnt mod in long time so i hope i helped idk how mod anymore xd anyways if u have questions or need help with map mp or in game.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
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Lilyanna wrote:

from q nm

General

disable widescreen support okie
set custom combo colors okie
check aimod something with audio i'll go check on that soon

easy

00:35:635 (1) -00:44:866 (1) - avoid such complex looking slider in easy keep it simple okie
00:44:866 (1) - remove nc okie
01:01:481 (5) - add nc okie
01:04:251 (1) - remove nc xd okie
01:07:020 (1) - ^ okie
01:29:174 (1,2,3) - its getting kinda dull u keep spamming same pattern for example here 01:29:174 (1) - u can try 1/1 repeat or 1/1 + hitcircle here 01:30:097 - this drum 01:29:635 pretty stong :v fixed
01:31:020 (3,1) - overlaps like this can be avoided the new players can missread the tail as the head fixed
01:37:020 - same earlier the song is not short so try variate the whole kiai is totally copy past zz >w< tho i kinda want it that way >.<
so i guess the stuuff mentioned applies on rest of map

Normal

00:14:866 (2,3) - 00:22:712 (3,4) - 00:25:481 (2,3) - ok i wont list them all but these blanket so off can be polished better idk how to polish them properly teach me ples ;-;
00:31:943 (1,2,3,4) - can be mapped like 00:17:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - okie
00:42:558 (2,1) - spacing unconsistency from 0.80 to 0.60 fixed
00:44:866 (1) - same here 1.00 and previous 0.7 pls check spacing fixed
00:46:712 (1,2) - imo the angle is too big try something like this rotate them http://puu.sh/vP61n/6f4d1b4579.jpg okie
00:53:635 - 00:46:251 - miss clap on slider tail fixed
00:44:404 - remove the clap here irrelevent fixed
u can hear the soft clap sounds here 00:49:712 - and 00:49:943 - so each time u hear those add the soft clap kinda fixed?
00:59:635 (4) - nc fixed
01:07:020 (4) - 01:27:328 (4) - nc fixed
stay consistent to where u add nc either each downbeat or after 2 downbeats i'll try xD
02:27:328 (1,1,1) - u only did this stack once it can be hard or confusing for new players fixed
9 spinners in one diff >w< anyways this spinner 03:08:866 (1) - holds on to nothing spinnable might just map the outro fixed
also check this http://puu.sh/vP6I7/c0b6849629.png in aimod to see any unconsist distance snap do same for easy okie

Hard

00:15:789 (2,3) - blanket 00:16:135 - pause here and adjust it this approche circle 00:16:251 (3) - fixed
00:18:558 - 00:20:404 - wish these claps were clickable maybe try this pattern http://puu.sh/vP83v/bec1c3498a.jpg okie
00:42:328 (1) - maybe add a repeat to it i think its fine like that
01:56:635 (5) - end slider on 01:57:328 - and add note here 01:57:558 - it goes with these vocals 01:57:789 (1,2) - fixed
02:11:404 (5) - 02:40:943 (5) - same for this okie

Alfaster's Insane

03:12:328 (1) - remove nc and add 03:12:558 (3) - here for suddent sv change fixed
the map is okay its too fast for me to mod but overall seems fine i guess yay

well i didnt mod in long time so i hope i helped idk how mod anymore xd anyways if u have questions or need help with map mp or in game. sure i think i will
Good luck!
thanks for your mod!
sakebi
from queue

[general]
don't use hitsound 5% volume unless its only for a slider end or spinner. it's too quiet and doesn't give feedback when the player clicks

[hard]
00:42:328 (1) - hitsounds are too quiet
00:45:558 (3,4) - have claps on the slider end and on (4)
^ the above are issues through the whole map

[insane]
00:25:943 (3) - dont overlap with 00:26:866 (5) - slider end
00:27:328 (1,2) - use circles instead of sliders with silent tails
00:42:328 (1,1) - hitsounds are too quiet to hear
00:46:020 (3,4) - use clap
00:49:251 (2,3) - ^ on circle and slider end
00:53:405 (6,7) - ^
00:57:789 (1) - place somewhere else, doesn't look good
01:00:789 (1,2) - clap
01:01:943 (5) - make slider body cleaner, the bends occur in the same place but mirrored
01:02:635 (1) - new combo here makes no sense
01:03:328 (4) - tail overlaps 01:02:635 (1) -
01:12:558 (1,1,1,1) - hitsounds are too quiet
02:27:097 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
Topic Starter
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lilligantEX wrote:

from queue

[general]
don't use hitsound 5% volume unless its only for a slider end or spinner. it's too quiet and doesn't give feedback when the player clicks okie changed it to 10% instead

[hard]
00:42:328 (1) - hitsounds are too quiet fixed as mentioned before
00:45:558 (3,4) - have claps on the slider end and on (4) fixed
^ the above are issues through the whole map done

[insane]
00:25:943 (3) - dont overlap with 00:26:866 (5) - slider end okie
00:27:328 (1,2) - use circles instead of sliders with silent tails nah, i like it with sliders at the "someone else!" part
00:42:328 (1,1) - hitsounds are too quiet to hear already fixed
00:46:020 (3,4) - use clap okie
00:49:251 (2,3) - ^ on circle and slider end okie
00:53:405 (6,7) - ^ okie
00:57:789 (1) - place somewhere else, doesn't look good fixed
01:00:789 (1,2) - clap okie
01:01:943 (5) - make slider body cleaner, the bends occur in the same place but mirrored huh? what does that mean
01:02:635 (1) - new combo here makes no sense oops fixed
01:03:328 (4) - tail overlaps 01:02:635 (1) - purposely made it that way
01:12:558 (1,1,1,1) - hitsounds are too quiet already fixed
02:27:097 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^ already fixed
thanks for your mod :)
Adventure

Lilyanna wrote:

arnold's Advanced

cs can be just 4 fixed
00:23:635 (3,2) - avoid these overlap fixed
00:25:020 (2,1) - blanket can be much better fixed
00:43:943 (3,1) - this kind of confusing to read also its not advanced quality mapping its harder fixed
01:34:712 (1) - ctrl j and replace would give better flow Maybe a bit strange, but what can I do? Just like that
01:44:866 (3,1) - can be better paralelle Meaning parallel?
02:03:789 (4,1) - can blanket with the (1) slider's body i can't it's hard, i use DS
overall maybe avoid the 1/4 spacing and in last kiai the structure can be improved i cant mod structure try avoid overlapped and random shaped sliders I will try next time
fixed
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43020
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KNOCK KNOCK
TitleUnicode:KNOCK KNOCK
Artist:TWICE
ArtistUnicode:TWICE (트와이스)
Creator:CharmCaster
Version:arnold's Advanced
Source:
Tags:alfarai arnoldusj jypentertainment 트와이스 kpop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon
BeatmapID:1225775
BeatmapSetID:577837

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4.7
ApproachRate:5.3
SliderMultiplier:1.5
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-Keitaro
maybe giving this a shot

[Easy]
tbh so many sharp angle kek
Check AiMod for DS prob
also needs more rework if compared to Normal

00:42:328 - Unused timing point
01:25:481 (1,2) - Doesnt turns out good in both aesthetic and flow imo

[Normal]
01:07:020 (1) - why change pattern this will make consistency problem or at least just use smth like this around kiai.
01:33:789 (2,3) - seems new, avoid this, except you want to do it later.
02:52:251 (1,2) - follow 02:07:943 (1) - 01:07:020 (1) - plz

[arnold]
00:18:328 (2) - bikin straight slider aja, atau bikin yang kayak 00:20:174 (2) -
00:22:712 (1,3) - bikin mereka sama, atau seengaknya parallel lah. example
00:25:020 (2,1) - fix blanket
00:37:481 (1,2,3) - doesnt turns out good tbh
00:43:943 (3,1) - jangan overlap
00:46:712 (1,2,3) - fix flownya plz
00:49:251 (2,3) - imo, buat circular flow.
00:51:097 (2,3) - fix circular f l o w
00:52:251 (1,2) - ^
00:59:404 (1,2) - imo, ga pas, this is better
01:08:866 (1,2) - jangan overlap
01:10:251 (3,1) - doesnt looks good tbh
01:12:558 (1) - ganti spinner aja
01:42:097 (1,2) - parallel plz
01:44:866 (3,2) - jangan overlap
01:46:712 (3,4) - kenapa ga di blanket 01:46:251 (2,5) - aja?
01:48:328 (2,3) - fix blanket
01:55:020 (1) - agak keluar playfield
02:03:789 (4,1) - blanket lebih baik imo
02:10:712 (2,1) - dont overlap
02:31:943 (1) - buat lebih smooth plz
02:31:943 (1,2) - fix blanket
02:58:712 (2,2) - stack
03:00:097 (2,1) - jangan di overlap :<

[Hard]
the best one, comparing to other diff.

00:17:635 (2) - missing clap
00:19:481 (2) - ^
00:27:789 (2) - ^
00:32:404 (3) - ^
00:34:250 (3) - ^
00:39:328 (1) - ^
not going to mention hitsound again
00:46:712 (1,2) - unperfect parallel :p
01:46:251 (2,3) - fix blanket
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Error- wrote:

maybe giving this a shot

[Easy]
tbh so many sharp angle kek :3
Check AiMod for DS prob fixed!
also needs more rework if compared to Normal okie >.<

00:42:328 - Unused timing point fixed
01:25:481 (1,2) - Doesnt turns out good in both aesthetic and flow imo i think ill keep that way unless someone brings it up again

[Normal]
01:07:020 (1) - why change pattern this will make consistency problem or at least just use smth like this around kiai. fixed
01:33:789 (2,3) - seems new, avoid this, except you want to do it later. fixed
02:52:251 (1,2) - follow 02:07:943 (1) - 01:07:020 (1) - plz ill leave it as that because its the last chorus

[Hard]
the best one, comparing to other diff.

00:17:635 (2) - missing clap fixed
00:19:481 (2) - ^ fixed
00:27:789 (2) - ^ fixed
00:32:404 (3) - ^ it wont have any effect though because of the custom whistle sound
00:34:250 (3) - ^ ^
00:39:328 (1) - ^ ^
not going to mention hitsound again hehehe sorry xD
00:46:712 (1,2) - unperfect parallel :p fixed
01:46:251 (2,3) - fix blanket fixed!
thx for your mod :)
Adventure

Error- wrote:

[arnold]
00:18:328 (2) - bikin straight slider aja, atau bikin yang kayak 00:20:174 (2) - fixed
00:22:712 (1,3) - bikin mereka sama, atau seengaknya parallel lah. example fixed
00:25:020 (2,1) - fix blanket fixed
00:37:481 (1,2,3) - doesnt turns out good tbh apanya gk bagus?
00:43:943 (3,1) - jangan overlap fixed
00:46:712 (1,2,3) - fix flownya plz flow maksudnya seperti apa?
00:49:251 (2,3) - imo, buat circular flow.
00:51:097 (2,3) - fix circular f l o w
00:52:251 (1,2) - ^ tanda ini maksudnya apa?
00:59:404 (1,2) - imo, ga pas, this is better pas aja kok
01:08:866 (1,2) - jangan overlap fixed
01:10:251 (3,1) - doesnt looks good tbh fixed
01:12:558 (1) - ganti spinner aja gk perlu, saya ingin suatu yg beda
01:42:097 (1,2) - parallel plz tidak perlu
01:44:866 (3,2) - jangan overlap fixed
01:46:712 (3,4) - kenapa ga di blanket 01:46:251 (2,5) - aja? saya menggunakan DS jadi sulit nantinya kalo blanked
01:48:328 (2,3) - fix blanket fixed
01:55:020 (1) - agak keluar playfield fixed
02:03:789 (4,1) - blanket lebih baik imo fixed
02:10:712 (2,1) - dont overlap fixed
02:31:943 (1) - buat lebih smooth plz fixed
02:31:943 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
02:58:712 (2,2) - stack fixed
03:00:097 (2,1) - jangan di overlap :< fixed
fixed
osu file format v14

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288,176,183097,6,0,B|192:176|192:176|136:104,1,187.5,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,32,183789,2,0,B|216:72|280:96|280:96|264:56|288:8,1,187.5,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,184712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,160,185174,6,0,B|328:160|328:160|272:200|272:200|192:200,2,187.5,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
488,296,186558,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,296,186789,6,0,B|416:288|416:288|360:280|304:320,2,187.5,0|0|8,1:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,216,187943,2,0,P|416:200|344:200,1,93.75,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,152,188404,2,0,P|256:168|216:168,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,188866,6,0,P|88:208|112:288,2,140.625,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,88,189789,2,0,L|280:80,1,93.75,8|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,190251,2,0,L|456:184,1,140.625,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,136,190712,6,0,P|432:104|472:32,2,140.625,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,208,191635,2,0,P|496:272|456:304,1,93.75,8|8,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
400,312,192097,2,0,P|336:296|288:296,1,93.75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192558,12,0,194404,0:0:0:0:
-Keitaro
CharmCaster, no kds, also dont forget to put me on tags xd

arnoldusj wrote:

Error- wrote:

[arnold]
00:37:481 (1,2,3) - doesnt turns out good tbh apanya gk bagus?

00:46:712 (1,2,3) - fix flownya plz flow maksudnya seperti apa?

00:52:251 (1,2) - ^ tanda ini maksudnya apa?
00:59:404 (1,2) - imo, ga pas, this is better pas aja kok

01:12:558 (1) - ganti spinner aja gk perlu, saya ingin suatu yg beda

01:46:712 (3,4) - kenapa ga di blanket 01:46:251 (2,5) - aja? saya menggunakan DS jadi sulit nantinya kalo blanked
ok, seems like you dont know more about the basics, see pishi's channel, you'll get better soon.

untuk yang pertama, 00:37:481 (1,2,3) - flownya ga pas, serta tidak aesthitic.
tanda ^ artinya, sama dengan yang atas.
00:59:404 (1,2) - disaat yang lain nte rata rata map bagian liriknya, disini malah beda sendiri, makanya kurang pas.
01:12:558 (1) - tidak konsisten dengan diff lainnya.
menggunakan DS juga tidak menghalangi untuk blanket, serta..
image

kok ane bsa blanket itu ya? hmm

rip fc

fuk u sliderbreak
Haganenno
Really liking that Error's Insane. Gonna drop two stars on this, please try and rank it, p fun stuff.
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Haganenno wrote:

Really liking that Error's Insane. Gonna drop two stars on this, please try and rank it, p fun stuff.
thanks for your kds!!
-Keitaro

Haganenno wrote:

Really liking that Error's Insane. Gonna drop two stars on this, please try and rank it, p fun stuff.
Thx OwO
-Aerith-
# Request From my Modding Queue #

As i said this is a Short Mod so..... here it is :


Easy

-00:16:712 This slider should end in here -00:14:866
-00:15:528
-00:17:174

Do the rest like that for the first half please .. i think it fits the song more
Normal

-00:27:789 add clap for hitsound
-01:52:251 it would be better if u start it from here -01:52:135 and end it in here -01:52:712

Arnold's Advanced


-02:31:943 fix this blanket please

Hard


-01:01:251 add circle
-01:04:943 ^
-01:06:789 remove circle
-02:07:712 remove circle
-02:27:588 CTRL + G
-02:28:020 remove circle
-02:35:404 add circle

Wow Nice Song u got there :D
Done!!! Thats all from me , Good Luck with your map !! i hope its Ranked :) :)
Topic Starter
Fragmented

-Aerith- wrote:

# Request From my Modding Queue #

As i said this is a Short Mod so..... here it is :
every feedback counts :)

Easy

-00:16:712 This slider should end in here -00:14:866 i don't understand what you're trying to say ._.
-00:15:528
-00:17:174

Do the rest like that for the first half please .. i think it fits the song more
Normal

-00:27:789 add clap for hitsound fixed
-01:52:251 it would be better if u start it from here -01:52:135 and end it in here -01:52:712 that'll be too sudden for new players? owo

Hard


-01:01:251 add circle fixed!
-01:04:943 ^ emphasizing on them claps
-01:06:789 remove circle fixed!
-02:07:712 remove circle fixed!
-02:27:588 CTRL + G i did ctrl + g on 02:27:097 (1) - instead
-02:28:020 remove circle im following the vocals
-02:35:404 add circle emphasizing on claps


Wow Nice Song u got there :D
Done!!! Thats all from me , Good Luck with your map !! i hope its Ranked :) :)
thanks!
elena2705
Hi~
From my queue M4M

Easy


This diff is really good enough! But you missed many very strong sounds like 00:16:712 - 00:20:404 - 00:24:097 - 00:35:174 - 00:38:866 - . I don't know maybe it's your idea, but these should be added. Also in second couplet
02:44:866 (1) - earlier at the place like this, it hasn't NC, so why here?
02:49:481 (1) - Also, It seems too strange
02:24:558 - spinner fits here, but you do slider in the form of the heart, it will be so cool!!!! Because in the video girl (sorry, don't know she's name...) repeats the heart shape, and here pink combo)

Normal


02:24:558 - heart as in easy diff
00:43:943 (3) - add sound of clap, like in the second kiai
Everything is cool!

arnold's Advanced


This diff is bad.... and require changes.
00:23:635 (3) - copy slider like previous one
00:25:020 (2,1) - strange flow, direct tail of the slider in other side
00:26:404 (1,2) - in one line
00:37:481 (1,2,3) - really ugly :|
00:43:943 (3,1) - why these two slider not the same?
00:43:943 (3,1,2) - overlap, take it off
00:44:635 - circle, 00:44:866 - 00:45:328 - slider, 00:45:558 - 00:45:789 - slider. So that it matches the rhythm
00:57:328 (3,1) - this overlap not so pretty
00:59:404 - circle, 00:59:635 - 00:59:866 - slider. also fits better
01:24:097 (1,2) - ctrl g
01:44:866 (3) - do privios one like this
01:45:789 (1,2,3) - do it like in first kiai
01:49:020 (3) - direct tail in other side
01:49:481 (1,2) - do these two the same
01:51:789 (3,4) - also ctrl g
01:53:635 (3,4) - ^
01:55:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part is cool!
02:00:558 - here strong sound, but you don't use it... here should be head of the slider
02:28:251 (1,3) - if you want to do it beautiful, do it, but now it's ugly
02:29:174 (3,1) -
02:31:943 (1,2) - also it's bad, 02:33:789 (1,2) - it is good!
03:00:097 (2,1) - overlap
03:10:251 (3,1) - is situated really strange
I advise you to use only one spacing, 0.9 - fits good
Some things repeat, so check it

Hard


00:15:789 (2,3) - do blanket
00:22:943 - triple will be good here, because of words in vocal
00:45:328 (2,3) - blaket!! fix it please
00:47:981 - kick slider fits better
01:02:404 (3,6) - overlap, looks bad
01:06:328 (6) - do this slider straight
01:05:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy all this, 01:07:020 - paste it here, so that it will be like repeat, do not reflect vertically or smth like this, just only paste (it's 3*, so jump here is ok)
01:12:558 - delete break, because it 3*, it will be better
01:16:020 - triple here, not 01:16:251 - here
Part of rap is complicated for mapping(( :( So think more about this part
01:46:251 (2,3) - blanket..... After repeat of chorus, so i don't repeat all i say about it
02:59:404 (1,2) - do the same, so that it will be similar
03:11:058 - circle, 03:11:174 - 03:11:404 - slider

Check Aimod, because there are many warnings. You can reduce to 192 kbps online, in internet, so please do it. Video not so good even now, but you must reduce memory 21 Mb is a lot. I can advise you Xvid, i think it's easy to understand this program, you can choose what quality you want, what size of memory you want and etc. 15 Mb will be good. Some people can't play with video, just because video slows down the computer very much. But if it will bre 15 Mb, everything will be ok)Another artists in some diffs incorrect, so fixed it.
Since 38 second picture is losing. Try to play without video and you will notice that screen is black. And you must fix this problem because many players usually plays without video (it interrupts and distracts from the game)

I really tired of mod it :o :o :o :o
I looked at Alfaster's Insane, it's not so good, but i like how and when you change SV, 00:46:712 (1,2) - here changing SV also will be great))) And 00:56:635 (1,2,3) - these three have different distanse from each other, 01:03:328 (1,3) - here if do it visible, i mean a bit move it right
And i also looked at Error's Insane, this diff is very very good, i like it. It's easy to play, but check all blankets, it's not ideal and 01:47:981 (2,3) - here stack is better
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Ok, so FIGHTING!!! :) :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Fragmented

elena2705 wrote:

Hi~
From my queue M4M

Easy


This diff is really good enough! But you missed many very strong sounds like 00:16:712 - 00:20:404 - 00:24:097 - 00:35:174 - 00:38:866 - . I don't know maybe it's your idea, but these should be added. Also in second couplet i left those as it will be similar to normal, so i decided to not put any notes there since its an easy diff
02:44:866 (1) - earlier at the place like this, it hasn't NC, so why here? oooh didnt see that
02:49:481 (1) - Also, It seems too strange okie changed it with a slider
02:24:558 - spinner fits here, but you do slider in the form of the heart, it will be so cool!!!! Because in the video girl (sorry, don't know she's name...) repeats the heart shape, and here pink combo) nice idea, okie i replace a heart shape with the spinner!

Normal


02:24:558 - heart as in easy diff replaced!
00:43:943 (3) - add sound of clap, like in the second kiai okie
Everything is cool!

Hard


00:15:789 (2,3) - do blanket fixed
00:22:943 - triple will be good here, because of words in vocal okie
00:45:328 (2,3) - blaket!! fix it please fixed
00:47:981 - kick slider fits better i think its fine that way
01:02:404 (3,6) - overlap, looks bad fixed
01:06:328 (6) - do this slider straight okie
01:05:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - copy all this, 01:07:020 - paste it here, so that it will be like repeat, do not reflect vertically or smth like this, just only paste (it's 3*, so jump here is ok) fixed
01:12:558 - delete break, because it 3*, it will be better fixed
01:16:020 - triple here, not 01:16:251 - here
Part of rap is complicated for mapping(( :( So think more about this part i think its fine because it still follows her vocals. if anyone else brings it up ill do smth abt it
01:46:251 (2,3) - blanket..... After repeat of chorus, so i don't repeat all i say about it fixed!
02:59:404 (1,2) - do the same, so that it will be similar huh?
03:11:058 - circle, 03:11:174 - 03:11:404 - slider i think its fine that way

Check Aimod, because there are many warnings. You can reduce to 192 kbps online, in internet, so please do it. Video not so good even now, but you must reduce memory 21 Mb is a lot. I can advise you Xvid, i think it's easy to understand this program, you can choose what quality you want, what size of memory you want and etc. 15 Mb will be good. Some people can't play with video, just because video slows down the computer very much. But if it will bre 15 Mb, everything will be ok)Another artists in some diffs incorrect, so fixed it.
Since 38 second picture is losing. Try to play without video and you will notice that screen is black. And you must fix this problem because many players usually plays without video (it interrupts and distracts from the game) hmmm ill resolve that issue soon

I really tired of mod it :o :o :o :o
I looked at Alfaster's Insane, it's not so good, >w< but i like how and when you change SV, 00:46:712 (1,2) - here changing SV also will be great))) And 00:56:635 (1,2,3) - these three have different distanse from each other, 01:03:328 (1,3) - here if do it visible, i mean a bit move it right fixed!
....................................................................................................................................................................................
Ok, so FIGHTING!!! :) :) :) :) :)
thanks so much! ill mod your map tmr :)
Somi
Add "나연" , "정연" , "모모" , "사나" , "지효" , "미나" , "다현" , "채영" and "쯔위" to tags
~Don't give me kudos since this is barely even a mod xd
cosmic
woaw so much has changed
Firetruck
henlo there!


General



  • Remove the ''(Twice)'' from the artist since it's a romanization for 트와이스 and keep the twice a the romanized artist

    Offset seems just a biit late to me, try 13 476

    Sliders like these could be done in a much better way that'll make them look alot neater, here's 1 2 examples of how you could do them instead :^) (this goes for all your diffs)

    Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut

    Feel free to use the tags below if you to~ (Added korean names and k-pop)
    worstpolackeu error- alfarai arnoldusj jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon 나연 정연 모모 사나 지효 미나 다현 채영 쯔위

Easy


  • 00:15:328 (3) - Splitting this up to 2 1/1 sliders instead would play much better and fit the vocals
    00:17:174 (1) - You should do this a 1/1 repeat slider to emphisize the kno kno kno kno knock on ma door better (and put a circle afterwards so it doesnt feel empty) oh and this goes for every knock knock during the map, make it consistent! :3
    00:20:866 (1) - Same here about splitting up to 1/1 sliders, you should really look over the map and do little changes like these to make the rhythm better :3, i see you randomly just skip mapping these 00:24:097 - beats after a long slider, try not to do that because it feels very awkward ; just put a circle there!
    00:24:558 (1,2) - Try doing this instead! to emphisize more vocals
    00:50:404 (1,2) - And for this part in the kiai, you can do this! for more variation instead of just 1/1 repeat sliders everytime they say knock knock xD

    Basically go through the whole diff and try to make more variations in the rhythm (and don't be scared to do more 1/1 sliders! just don't spam them pls)

Normal


  • 00:13:481 (1,2,3,4) - Remember how i said in Easy to use some 1/1 sliders but not to spam them too much? Yeah, that's because in Normal you usually just go for 1/1 sliders instead of these long ones and do some 1/2 sliders (Since Hard uses 1/2 sliders, magic right) Try doing alot more 1/1 sliders in normal and don't be afraid to put stuff on the red tick, it's good for spread! (Just don't do it too much) Here's an example of how you could do the rhythm here instead!
    00:17:174 (1,2,3) - Ooh i really like this, try doing more of these throughout the diff!
    00:43:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, try this!
    00:54:097 (1) - You should totally map this part instead of having a slider! Same goes for easy (I forgot to mention it in easy, sorry xD)
    00:57:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - :thinking:
    01:03:097 - Jihyo actually starts singing here, so you should move 01:03:328 (3) - there instead :^) and end it on 01:04:251 -
    01:04:712 (4) - If you apply the suggestion above^ put a circle here
    01:08:866 (1) - Yeah you should map this too!
    Honestly you should map the rap part, it would be cool! Do some 1/2 sliders and shits and it will be funn (And the break doesnt really fit there imo)
    01:21:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this instead? That long slider felt really awkward and didn't really follow anything
    Since the second kiai is copied, just replace it with the first kiai after you applied the stuff i said there and paste it here again xD (if you applied the stuff ofc)
    02:24:558 (1) - Aw so cute! seems hard to read tho, get a testplay or two and see if they can actually read it (from newer players who play normal) just to be sure :3 I really like it
    Just check the previous stuff i modded on the kiai and apply it on the last one so i don't have to repeat myself xD (If you want to apply it ofc)
    The break after the kiai seems kinda random, you should map it instead!
    03:05:174 (1,2,3) - :thinking:
    03:08:866 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do these knock knocks like you did them earlier? Make them consistenttt :3

Hard


  • 00:14:289 - She actually starts singing here, so putting the slider on the white tick feels pretty awkward
    00:16:135 - ^
    00:19:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe less curve on the sliders?
    00:20:866 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm follows vocals much better imo, try it!
    00:30:443 (2,3) - I recommend stacking the circle with the slider to improve aestethics and make it a bit easier :3 (If you do this, do it on all objects that are like this)
    00:42:328 (1) - 2 circles to emphisize the KNCOK KNCOKkdfdsf instead?
    00:47:751 - You should end the slider here instead and put a circle 00:47:866 - here! also stack them if you want to, plays better imo
    00:52:020 - Add circle?
    00:54:097 (1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, do this owo
    01:28:712 (3) - End slider at 01:29:058 - pls, and add an circle or slider after :3
    01:40:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really get what you're following here with this rhythm uwu, try this
    01:43:020 (3,4) - Maybe a long slider instead? To emphisize the HaaaaAaaand :P And try to do a cool slider art! You can use this shitty one i did if you want to xD
    Same as normal with the kiai copying xD (And the last kiai, just check the mods on the kiai part before and apply it on the last one as well)
    02:24:558 (1) - Do a cute slider here pls like u did in normal
    02:54:097 (1) - You mapped this in the previous kiais, why not here?
    03:04:020 - Add circle pls, feels empty

Won't mod the higher diffs since i'm not that experiened with diffs over hard yet :3 But nice map and gl!
dingo424

Firetruck wrote:

Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut
Looks like this https://puu.sh/wf77r/5846da1284.png in widescreen, I think it's because the Widescreen Support is off except the 2 highest diffs. (It goes normal when you turn it on) So.. maybe you should turn it on or find a other way
Sylas
hii m4m from your queue :)
Error's Insane

00:15:789 (5,6) - here you overlapped the 2 sliders while in every other pattern with the same rhythm you spaced them out (like in 00:13:943 (5,6)) so move them apart so they don't overlap for consistency
00:36:097 (3,4) - ^
00:34:712 (5,6,7) - i don't see a reason for this triple being more spaced out than every other triple since the song is the same so i'd make it the same spacing as 00:32:866 (5,6,7)
00:38:289 (4) - it'd look better if u made a blanket with 00:37:943 (3)'s tail and this slider's curve
00:47:174 (3) - the loud vocal is on this slider's tail which is bad emphasis (assuming ur mapping vocals). you should make this pattern the same rhythm as 00:48:558 (1,2,3) which will also help consistency
00:54:097 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - i'm not sure exactly what sounds these sliders are following since they don't fit with either vocals or drums. Imma break it down:
00:54:443 (2) - the white tick the slider passes through has a much stronger sound than the blue tick u started the slider on. theres also a vocal starting on that white tick so itd be much better if that note was clickable. you should turn this slider into a circle and a 1/4 slider starting on 00:54:558, this fits the rhythm way better.
00:55:366 (2) and 00:56:289 (2) - ^ same thing
This rhythm problem repeats twice in every chorus so u gotta change it each time
01:14:404 (1,2) - they overlap, same thing as 00:15:789 (5,6)
02:45:558 (4,1) - i think the spacing between these notes should be much smaller since there isn't a very strong sound on (1) which makes for bad spacing emphasis
Overall the diff is ok, not a huge fan of it but its pretty fun
WORST's IKSDE

Pleaaase use ar 9 or above some of the patterns are quite hard to read and ar 8.5 is too low and makes it even harder to read
00:38:634 (1,2) - I like the way these slider paths merge, but im not sure its rankable since sliders paths have to be clear and visible. I'm not 100% sure so you should probably check with someone more experienced than me lel
00:55:250 (2,3) - these sliders are rly hard to read, even worse than ^. Again, i like the pattern but you should probably change it to avoid readability issues
I won't spend too much time since the diff is only half way done, but its really interesting and i like the aesthetics and concepts
Alfaster's Insane

00:41:174 (1) - this slider is pretty ugly, make it nicer by having the anchor points smthing like this:
00:48:558 (1,2) - would look better if these sliders were the same as 00:46:712 (1,2) as in copy paste and rotate them
01:00:789 (1,2) - stack them to be consistent with 00:46:020 (3,4) since they're the same sounds
02:16:481 (6,7,8) - dont think the consistent spacing in this pattern fits the song well, these notes should stand out more with a higher spacing since theyre stronger notes compared to 02:13:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) but have the same spacing as them which is bad spacing emphasis
Thats all the significant issues I could find, theres probably more but it's pretty solid overall
Hard

00:26:174 (5) - this slider would look better if the red anchor point was at a sharper angle meaning reduce the curves
00:28:251 (1) to 00:40:943 (4) - the note density drastically increases here compared to 00:13:481 (1) to 00:28:251 (1) but there isn't much difference in the song to call for such a difficulty spike. do you have a reason to justify this difficulty increase?
01:28:712 (3) - downbeat with a strong finish sound on a slider tail doesn't really represent the song well, better if its clickable with a slider head or note
02:54:097 (1) - whyd u use a spinner here instead of mapping this part? in every other chorus u mapped it normally so itd be much more consistent to do the same here
Everything else seems fine :)
arnold's Advanced

00:44:635 (1) - dunno why ure ignoring the downbeat since theres a strong sound and vocal on it. use active rhythm instead.
you did this in every chorus so i'd recommend u change it each time
Normal

00:45:789 (3) - since ur following vocals, theres not really any sound where this slider starts so it feels kinda off. The better rhythm for 00:44:866 (1,2,3) would be 1/2 slider note 1/1 slider and then if u want a note after the 1/1 for the loud drums.
if you change it don't forget to change it in every other chorus too
02:24:558 (1) - unrankable slider, especially for a normal its impossible to read which way itll go. tho it looks nice you have to change it
All the spinner at the end of the chorus's dont really fit tbh and they're too long for a normal diff (since noobies cant rly spin). better if u just map it
02:54:097 (1) - you should probably map the part after this spinner too since its quite a strong part of the song
Easy

Same issues as normal w the spinners and unrankable slider
hope my mod was helpful :)
Good luck with this set!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/318047
Topic Starter
Fragmented

Firetruck wrote:

henlo there!


General



  • Remove the ''(Twice)'' from the artist since it's a romanization for ???? and keep the twice a the romanized artist fixed

    Offset seems just a biit late to me, try 13 476 time to spend 5 hours fixing timing points ;w;

    Sliders like these could be done in a much better way that'll make them look alot neater, here's 1 2 examples of how you could do them instead :^) (this goes for all your diffs) okie ill see where i could insert those designs in owo

    Is the video supposed to be that size? it seems so small o.o just saw that the 2 highest diffs have a normal video, wut oops fixed

    Feel free to use the tags below if you to~ (Added korean names and k-pop)
    worstpolackeu error- alfarai arnoldusj jyp entertainment kpop k-pop twicecoaster lane 2 nayeon chaeyoung tzuyu momo sana mina jihyo jisoo dahyun jeongyeon ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
    fixed

Easy


  • 00:15:328 (3) - Splitting this up to 2 1/1 sliders instead would play much better and fit the vocals okie
    00:17:174 (1) - You should do this a 1/1 repeat slider to emphisize the kno kno kno kno knock on ma door better (and put a circle afterwards so it doesnt feel empty) oh and this goes for every knock knock during the map, make it consistent! :3 okie
    00:20:866 (1) - Same here about splitting up to 1/1 sliders, you should really look over the map and do little changes like these to make the rhythm better :3, i see you randomly just skip mapping these 00:24:097 - beats after a long slider, try not to do that because it feels very awkward ; just put a circle there! i guess ill remap easy then lul
    00:24:558 (1,2) - Try doing this instead! to emphisize more vocals
    00:50:404 (1,2) - And for this part in the kiai, you can do this! for more variation instead of just 1/1 repeat sliders everytime they say knock knock xD

    Basically go through the whole diff and try to make more variations in the rhythm (and don't be scared to do more 1/1 sliders! just don't spam them pls)
    okie

Normal


  • 00:13:481 (1,2,3,4) - Remember how i said in Easy to use some 1/1 sliders but not to spam them too much? Yeah, that's because in Normal you usually just go for 1/1 sliders instead of these long ones and do some 1/2 sliders (Since Hard uses 1/2 sliders, magic right) Try doing alot more 1/1 sliders in normal and don't be afraid to put stuff on the red tick, it's good for spread! (Just don't do it too much) Here's an example of how you could do the rhythm here instead! sure
    00:17:174 (1,2,3) - Ooh i really like this, try doing more of these throughout the diff! :D
    00:43:020 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, try this! okie cool
    00:54:097 (1) - You should totally map this part instead of having a slider! Same goes for easy (I forgot to mention it in easy, sorry xD) but i like it that way though :<
    00:57:789 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - :thinking:
    01:03:097 - Jihyo actually starts singing here, so you should move 01:03:328 (3) - there instead :^) and end it on 01:04:251 - okie
    01:04:712 (4) - If you apply the suggestion above^ put a circle here okie
    01:08:866 (1) - Yeah you should map this too! ill leave it as a spinner >w<
    Honestly you should map the rap part, it would be cool! Do some 1/2 sliders and shits and it will be funn (And the break doesnt really fit there imo) sure ill map that part then
    01:21:789 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe this instead? That long slider felt really awkward and didn't really follow anything okie fixed
    Since the second kiai is copied, just replace it with the first kiai after you applied the stuff i said there and paste it here again xD (if you applied the stuff ofc lul okie
    02:24:558 (1) - Aw so cute! seems hard to read tho, get a testplay or two and see if they can actually read it (from newer players who play normal) just to be sure :3 I really like it fixed it by not stacking the slidertail and the sliderhead
    Just check the previous stuff i modded on the kiai and apply it on the last one so i don't have to repeat myself xD (If you want to apply it ofc) okie
    The break after the kiai seems kinda random, you should map it instead! mapped it
    03:05:174 (1,2,3) - :thinking: okie
    03:08:866 (1,2,3,4) - Why not do these knock knocks like you did them earlier? Make them consistenttt :3 fixed

Hard


  • 00:14:289 - She actually starts singing here, so putting the slider on the white tick feels pretty awkward i think its fine tho, wasnt really trying to follow her vocals anyway
    00:16:135 - ^ ^
    00:19:020 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe less curve on the sliders? nah, its fine that way :3
    00:20:866 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm follows vocals much better imo, try it! sure, fixed
    00:30:443 (2,3) - I recommend stacking the circle with the slider to improve aestethics and make it a bit easier :3 (If you do this, do it on all objects that are like this) i like it that way tho owo
    00:42:328 (1) - 2 circles to emphisize the KNCOK KNCOKkdfdsf instead? okie
    00:47:751 - You should end the slider here instead and put a circle 00:47:866 - here! also stack them if you want to, plays better imo it will be awkward wouldn't it to alternate 3 times? if anyone else brings it up, i guess ill change that owo
    00:52:020 - Add circle? i wanted to emphasize on the "knock knock on my door" so i left that empty
    00:54:097 (1,2,3) - To follow vocals better, do this owo sure :3
    01:28:712 (3) - End slider at 01:29:058 - pls, and add an circle or slider after :3 okie
    01:40:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really get what you're following here with this rhythm uwu, try this sure
    01:43:020 (3,4) - Maybe a long slider instead? To emphisize the HaaaaAaaand :P And try to do a cool slider art! You can use this shitty one i did if you want to xD lul i did an 'S' shape instead :3
    Same as normal with the kiai copying xD (And the last kiai, just check the mods on the kiai part before and apply it on the last one as well) okie
    02:24:558 (1) - Do a cute slider here pls like u did in normal okie
    02:54:097 (1) - You mapped this in the previous kiais, why not here? its the last chorus, so i made it into a spinner owo ill map it if anyone brings that up again
    03:04:020 - Add circle pls, feels empty emphasizing on chaeyoung's vocals

Won't mod the higher diffs since i'm not that experiened with diffs over hard yet :3 But nice map and gl!

TheKoala wrote:

hii m4m from your queue :)

Alfaster's Insane

00:48:558 (1,2) - would look better if these sliders were the same as 00:46:712 (1,2) as in copy paste and rotate them sure
01:00:789 (1,2) - stack them to be consistent with 00:46:020 (3,4) since they're the same sounds okie
02:16:481 (6,7,8) - dont think the consistent spacing in this pattern fits the song well, these notes should stand out more with a higher spacing since theyre stronger notes compared to 02:13:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) but have the same spacing as them which is bad spacing emphasis it follows the beat of the song though (the guitar i think?)
Thats all the significant issues I could find, theres probably more but it's pretty solid overall
Hard

00:26:174 (5) - this slider would look better if the red anchor point was at a sharper angle meaning reduce the curves okie sure
00:28:251 (1) to 00:40:943 (4) - the note density drastically increases here compared to 00:13:481 (1) to 00:28:251 (1) but there isn't much difference in the song to call for such a difficulty spike. do you have a reason to justify this difficulty increase? thats because i was following the vocals and there was a slight buildup to the song
01:28:712 (3) - downbeat with a strong finish sound on a slider tail doesn't really represent the song well, better if its clickable with a slider head or note changed that from firetruck's mod
02:54:097 (1) - whyd u use a spinner here instead of mapping this part? in every other chorus u mapped it normally so itd be much more consistent to do the same here fixed
Everything else seems fine :)
Normal

00:45:789 (3) - since ur following vocals, theres not really any sound where this slider starts so it feels kinda off. The better rhythm for 00:44:866 (1,2,3) would be 1/2 slider note 1/1 slider and then if u want a note after the 1/1 for the loud drums.
if you change it don't forget to change it in every other chorus too all fixed from firetruck's mod
02:24:558 (1) - unrankable slider, especially for a normal its impossible to read which way itll go. tho it looks nice you have to change it fixed
All the spinner at the end of the chorus's dont really fit tbh and they're too long for a normal diff (since noobies cant rly spin). better if u just map it nah ill keep it that way for now, if anyone else brings it up ill fix it
02:54:097 (1) - you should probably map the part after this spinner too since its quite a strong part of the song wouldn't it be considered as inconsistent since there were sliders in that section previously too? owo
Easy

Same issues as normal w the spinners and unrankable slider okie
hope my mod was helpful :)
Good luck with this set!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/318047
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