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ArThasCD
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年12月7日 at 下午 01:28:40

Artist: keekihime * Yuumi & JUMA
Title: Eiya no Parade
Source: 東方永夜抄 ~ Imperishable Night.
Tags: c81 Yagokoro Eirin Houraisan Kaguya night five colours Arte Refact DreaM117er touhou 東方Project 千年幻想郷 ~ history of the moon 竹取飛翔 ~ lunatic princess
BPM: 129
Filesize: 6204kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. 117's Normal (1.7 stars, 222 notes)
  2. Hard (2.52 stars, 259 notes)
  3. Insane (3.1 stars, 290 notes)
  4. Lunatic (3.9 stars, 414 notes)
  5. Normal (1.69 stars, 174 notes)
Download: keekihime * Yuumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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for CTB players
The difficulties by me were designed for CTB mode.
As a CTB player, I was looking forward a CTB map qualified by myself someday. But I didn't really know how to do it. One day, some CTB players and me were talking about something fun maps from DNA made and we were missing him so much. I found that it's easily to see how the map works with his style. So I decided to map this. Here is the map. I hope you enjoy it.
But sorry no next time anymore. In fact, making this map gave me a hard time because I had to consider much of transformation stuff. I'm pretty tired of doing it again.
給CTB玩家的話
我做的這些難度都有為CTB設計過。
作為一個CTB玩家,我期望哪天能夠有一副自己的CTB圖qualified,但我真的不清楚怎麼做。某天我和一群CTB玩家聊到一些DNA做的有趣譜,我們都很想他。我發現我可以清楚了解到他的圖是怎麼在CTB模式中運作的,於是我開始著手製作這張譜面,這就是這張譜的由來,希望你們能從其中獲得樂趣
遺憾的是我不會再這麼做了,事實上做這張譜的時候讓我蠻為難的,我要去想很多STD轉換成CTB要去考慮的各種問題,做起來很累,不想再做了
Thanks modders who modded this map
Nightinga1e
Seto Kousuke
JeirYagtama
davidminh0111
Lanturn
Rose Melody
_Yiiiii
zev
Wikozo
Nedsing
Jennglebells
- Frontier -
iYiyo
Emilia
squirrelpascals
Electoz
CircleFairy
Ellyu
cjn1508
-Aerith-
July - San
Shanipika
hi-mei
- Squishi
xJ1
Delis
Garden

Especially thank to Delis, iYiyo and Lanturn for excellent mods !
Catt
Mod from Queue

Insane
Consider making the sliders at the start prettier
01:31:005 (1,2) - Missed strong sounds in between 1/1 jumps
01:31:470 (2,1) - Same^
01:31:936 (1,2,3,4) - 7 Notes on 1/4th rhythm. Starts on the red tick
01:32:401 (4,1) - Strong noise on blue tick inbetween
01:34:261 (5) - 1/4 rhythm all the way onto the next beat
01:34:726 (1) - Strong sound on red tick missed
01:35:424 (2,3,4) - Miss sound on blue tick
01:35:889 (5,6,7) - Might be just me, but it seems like an unjustified sudden change of spacing
01:36:587 (1,2) - Miss red tick
01:41:005 (3,4,5) - No sound on blue tick to support a note
01:41:703 (7) - 1/4 rhythm all the way to the next beat
01:42:168 (1,2,3) - Listen to rhythm and remap
01:49:145 (5,1) - 5 note 1/4
01:50:075 (2,3,4,5) - Same^
01:51:470 (1,2) - Missed red tick
02:01:354 (1,1,2,3) - After spinner, there are a lot of strong red tick sounds that aren't mapped
02:04:029 (4,1) - Red tick to white needs a triple
02:04:494 (1,2,3) - Strong red tick
02:06:354 (1,2) - - Same^
02:08:215 (1,2,3) - Same^

Most of the ending has a lot of strong red tick sounds that are unmapped

I also feel like the spacing changes too much and isn't supported by the rhythm throughout



Hard
Change CS to 4 or 5
I would redo some of sliders at the start, they look kinda clunky
Try to keep spacing consistent
Use 1/2 sliders to cover most of the 1/2 rhythms, this map has tons.
Repeating 1/4 sliders can properly represent the rhythm of the map but still keep it simple for newer players

I like the song, it's pretty funky. The map is good too, just needs a look over :)
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

HM02CauseImFly wrote:

Mod from Queue

Insane
Consider making the sliders at the start prettier
01:31:005 (1,2) - Missed strong sounds in between 1/1 jumps
01:31:470 (2,1) - Same^
01:31:936 (1,2,3,4) - 7 Notes on 1/4th rhythm. Starts on the red tick
01:32:401 (4,1) - Strong noise on blue tick inbetween
01:34:261 (5) - 1/4 rhythm all the way onto the next beat
01:34:726 (1) - Strong sound on red tick missed
01:35:424 (2,3,4) - Miss sound on blue tick
01:35:889 (5,6,7) - Might be just me, but it seems like an unjustified sudden change of spacing they follow claps. I added nc to emphasize them.
01:36:587 (1,2) - Miss red tick
01:41:005 (3,4,5) - No sound on blue tick to support a note
01:41:703 (7) - 1/4 rhythm all the way to the next beat
01:42:168 (1,2,3) - Listen to rhythm and remap
01:49:145 (5,1) - 5 note 1/4
01:50:075 (2,3,4,5) - Same^
01:51:470 (1,2) - Missed red tick
02:01:354 (1,1,2,3) - After spinner, there are a lot of strong red tick sounds that aren't mapped
02:04:029 (4,1) - Red tick to white needs a triple
02:04:494 (1,2,3) - Strong red tick
02:06:354 (1,2) - - Same^
02:08:215 (1,2,3) - Same^

Most of the ending has a lot of strong red tick sounds that are unmapped

I also feel like the spacing changes too much and isn't supported by the rhythm throughout

red ticks sounds are not strong sounds, claps and white ticks usually stronger than red ones. Don't try to follow everything if there are full of beats on 1/2 or 1/4, or the map would play and look boring bcz no rhythm changing.



Hard
Change CS to 4 or 5 it's not fit, and break the difficulty spread.
I would redo some of sliders at the start, they look kinda clunky
Try to keep spacing consistent Idk if I can't make jump usage for Hards, let me keep them for a while.
Use 1/2 sliders to cover most of the 1/2 rhythms, this map has tons. same as I said on Insane.
Repeating 1/4 sliders can properly represent the rhythm of the map but still keep it simple for newer players

I like the song, it's pretty funky. The map is good too, just needs a look over :)
thank you for mod ! :)
Nightinga1e
Hi. My mod for "Normal":
SPOILER
00:21:470 (5) - Change this slider to two notes
00:25:191 (5) - ^
00:28:912 (5) - ^
00:32:633 and 00:32:866 - Lost rhythm. Use two notes like i already said.
00:47:517 - ^
01:03:563 (2) - strange, that you use this note 01:03:098 (1) and then start slider on nothing. Move slider to 01:03:098.
01:10:540 - ^
01:12:168 - 01:12:633. I think better to place here slider, because voice is loud here
01:50:773 (5) - Like at begining.
02:04:959 - Lost note.
02:06:819 - ^

Good luck. Hope, that my mod will be useful
Misure
orz原来是这首歌 超喜欢啊 想起来刚入坑时候打的这首 四年多了有点感慨
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/42640

超赞 加油啊 :)
Seto Kousuke
yo, from my Modding Queue without a self esteem

Mod
[General]
Combo Colours: The current Yellow you're using is way too strong and looks weird in middle of all the cold colors and the background you have, I suggest you either choose a different color or use a different shade of yellow, for example I suggest these settings


[Normal]
Mapping: The DS you're using for 1/2 intervals is not good, they're too big and leaves a ''weird'' little overlap that gives your map a look of inexperience. I Highly recommend you change that for something like 0,75. Yes, you are allowed to have different DS from what the Distance Snap tells you to do as long as you make it consistent during entire map and reasonable.

Structure: Your structure and flow on this map needs improvement, you don't to make something 100% blanketed and ''omg perfect visuals'', but you at some points the map really looks ugly and inexperienced, for example: 00:18:447 (1,2) - which looks really weird for a lowest diff and might even confuse new players due to the unnatural flow with these 2 sliders and here 00:49:843 (2,3) - where you could actually make a good flow but tried this unnatural movement. Low diffs must be really easy to read, simple and have intuitive flow/structure.

Rythm: You have a lot of inconsistencies with your rythm on this diff...low diffs must be really intuitive and easy, specially the lowest one, in your case you keep changing the rythm many times and it's never clear when you're following the vocals, the instruments or whatever you keep changing, you must make something intuitive. For example 00:48:215 (1,2,3) - here you start following the keyboard sound that also matches the vocals a bit, making the player understand you're following instruments and then, 00:51:936 (1,2) - you make this telling the player you're following the 1/1 drum rythm and for no reason you suddenly stop, without warning and then comes back 00:53:796 (3,4) - with the drum, the big issue here is that this pause don't exist, the drum keeps bumping the 1/1 rythm. and even if you try to explain the 3 click rythm you wanted to make (which have a kind of ''reason'' at some degree), you suddenly change again without no change or clue on the song here 00:59:377 (1,2) -.

On this diff, I won't point out specific patterns because it will be useless until you fix the things I mentioned, the issues above explain what happens over and over again during entire difficulty, for this to receive proper and usefull mods (and one day, be ranked) you must fix all those issues, make a consistent and instinctive rythm, while also having a proper DS on notes, and do not forget to make the flow easy and simple, it's the lowest diff, you're not meant to challenge players(this is the job for the other difficulties), this one is meant for people who just started playing and must learn the basics, so you always will sacrifice a lot just to make it easy to read/follow/play.


[Hard]

  • Mapping: You have maaaany issues with DS here, it's only a 2* difficulty, which is the transition from the nearly-new players to something a bit more advanced, so you usually want to use more 1/2 rythms here with a higher speed, to make a good transition of difficulty for them, but you have many unrankable things for a 2* here, for example this huge jumps and non-structured DS as you can see on these 1/2 sections 00:21:005 (2,3,1,2) - 00:24:959 (3,1,2) - 00:28:680 (3,1,2) - and so on during entire map. These things are not allowed into a 2*, you must also make something simple and intuitive on a 2* diff, similar to what was mentioned on the Normal.

    Structure: Same as normal.

    Rythm:Similar to what I said on normal. It's basically the same thing, but on this difficutly it is mixed with a higher inconsistent DS.
[final notes]


I decided to not mod the other difficulties because I would be repeating myself over and over again, i noticed the same things happened on the 2 insane diffs you made, so I highly suggest you reand and understand what I stated on the first 2 diffs and adjust the other 2 also. You can always call me in chat to talk about mapping if you need :p

Peace. :roll:
JierYagtama
Yo
Light Insane(Help I've become a blanket nazi)
00:31:936 (2,3) - blanket this?
00:41:238 (2,3) - blanket this properly
00:43:098 (2,3) - ^
00:55:657 (1,2) - ^
Insane
00:14:494 (3) - curve this a bit horizontally
00:23:796 (1) - curve this a bit more
00:42:633 (1,2) - ^
00:44:494 (1) - ^
02:04:029 (4) - ^
02:07:750 (3) - ^
Cant really find that mistakes and btw I love how you did the aesthetics of the map <3 Goodluck!
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
I'll check the mods on Saturday since I can only use my computer at home on the weekend.

Misure wrote:

orz原来是这首歌 超喜欢啊 想起来刚入坑时候打的这首 四年多了有点感慨
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/42640

超赞 加油啊 :)
四年了呢..(感嘆 如今變化有多大!謝謝你的星星和支持!! :)
DreaM117er
1.7*應該可行

我覺得已經很難了...
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77982
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Eiya no Parade
TitleUnicode:永夜のパレード
Artist:Cake Hime * Masaruumi & JUMA
ArtistUnicode:ケーキ姫☆優海
Creator:assassincread
Version:117's Normal
Source:Touhou
Tags:c81 Yagokoro Eirin Houraisan Kaguya night five colours Arte Refact
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
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Edit: 上code代碼
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

DreaM117er wrote:

1.7*應該可行

我覺得已經很難了...
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ArThasCD

Nightinga1e wrote:

Hi. My mod for "Normal":
SPOILER
00:21:470 (5) - Change this slider to two notes I'm avoiding to use two notes to keep the difficulty easy.
00:25:191 (5) - ^
00:28:912 (5) - ^
00:32:633 and 00:32:866 - Lost rhythm. Use two notes like i already said. intentionally did.
00:47:517 - ^
01:03:563 (2) - strange, that you use this note 01:03:098 (1) and then start slider on nothing. Move slider to 01:03:098.
01:10:540 - ^
01:12:168 - 01:12:633. I think better to place here slider, because voice is loud here X
01:50:773 (5) - Like at begining.
02:04:959 - Lost note.
02:06:819 - ^

Good luck. Hope, that my mod will be useful

JeirYagtama wrote:

Yo
Light Insane(Help I've become a blanket nazi)
00:31:936 (2,3) - blanket this? ok
00:41:238 (2,3) - blanket this properly no, need to follow DS here
00:43:098 (2,3) - ^ same
00:55:657 (1,2) - ^ same
Insane
00:14:494 (3) - curve this a bit horizontally ok
00:23:796 (1) - curve this a bit more ok
00:42:633 (1,2) - ^ X
00:44:494 (1) - ^ X
02:04:029 (4) - ^ ok
02:07:750 (3) - ^ ok
Cant really find that mistakes and btw I love how you did the aesthetics of the map <3 Goodluck!

Seto Kousuke wrote:

yo, from my Modding Queue without a self esteem

Mod
[General]
Combo Colours: The current Yellow you're using is way too strong and looks weird in middle of all the cold colors and the background you have, I suggest you either choose a different color or use a different shade of yellow, for example I suggest these settings I think it looks fine


[Normal]
Mapping: The DS you're using for 1/2 intervals is not good, they're too big and leaves a ''weird'' little overlap that gives your map a look of inexperience. I Highly recommend you change that for something like 0,75. Yes, you are allowed to have different DS from what the Distance Snap tells you to do as long as you make it consistent during entire map and reasonable. disagree this

Structure: Your structure and flow on this map needs improvement, you don't to make something 100% blanketed and ''omg perfect visuals'', but you at some points the map really looks ugly and inexperienced, for example: 00:18:447 (1,2) - which looks really weird for a lowest diff and might even confuse new players due to the unnatural flow with these 2 sliders and here 00:49:843 (2,3) - where you could actually make a good flow but tried this unnatural movement. Low diffs must be really easy to read, simple and have intuitive flow/structure. I'll keep it for a while, I don't think it's really hard to read.

Rythm: You have a lot of inconsistencies with your rythm on this diff...low diffs must be really intuitive and easy, specially the lowest one, in your case you keep changing the rythm many times and it's never clear when you're following the vocals, the instruments or whatever you keep changing, you must make something intuitive. For example 00:48:215 (1,2,3) - here you start following the keyboard sound that also matches the vocals a bit, making the player understand you're following instruments and then, 00:51:936 (1,2) - you make this telling the player you're following the 1/1 drum rythm and for no reason you suddenly stop, without warning and then comes back 00:53:796 (3,4) - with the drum, the big issue here is that this pause don't exist, the drum keeps bumping the 1/1 rythm. and even if you try to explain the 3 click rythm you wanted to make (which have a kind of ''reason'' at some degree), you suddenly change again without no change or clue on the song here 00:59:377 (1,2) -.

you don't really know why I didn't follow all of white beats right ? It is because this song have soft part and stronger part. Rhythm changing is the best way to show what the soft part is, what stronger one is IN LOW difficulties. How to judge that the rhythm is becoming softer when a newbie player playing ? The answer is distance. They need to learn to read distance to judge the timing they should click. I don't afraid of using 2/1, since it makes a map more enjoyable. Also, different slider make a low difficulty more different than other difficulty which is just straight and curve. About the lowest difficulty, 2*↓ is okay, an experience mapper told me.

On this diff, I won't point out specific patterns because it will be useless until you fix the things I mentioned, the issues above explain what happens over and over again during entire difficulty, for this to receive proper and usefull mods (and one day, be ranked) you must fix all those issues, make a consistent and instinctive rythm, while also having a proper DS on notes, and do not forget to make the flow easy and simple, it's the lowest diff, you're not meant to challenge players(this is the job for the other difficulties), this one is meant for people who just started playing and must learn the basics, so you always will sacrifice a lot just to make it easy to read/follow/play.


[Hard]

  • Mapping: You have maaaany issues with DS here, it's only a 2* difficulty, which is the transition from the nearly-new players to something a bit more advanced, so you usually want to use more 1/2 rythms here with a higher speed, to make a good transition of difficulty for them, but you have many unrankable things for a 2* here, for example this huge jumps and non-structured DS as you can see on these 1/2 sections 00:21:005 (2,3,1,2) - 00:24:959 (3,1,2) - 00:28:680 (3,1,2) - and so on during entire map. These things are not allowed into a 2*, you must also make something simple and intuitive on a 2* diff, similar to what was mentioned on the Normal.

    I use the jump for reason, is Hard difficulty for newbies ? I don't think so. The reason why this difficulty shows 2.76* because I don't want to use 1/2 beats all the time. I want to make this difficulty funner by rhythm changing and a few jumps (distance changing). btw 2.0* is very different from 2.76*, Which you mean that these jumps are unrankable for, a 2.0* or a 2.76*?I reduced some jumps to make the jump usage clearly looking.

    Structure: Same as normal.

    Rythm:Similar to what I said on normal. It's basically the same thing, but on this difficutly it is mixed with a higher inconsistent DS.

    I don't mad at you that you give me the feeling that you tell me my map is not worth to rank at all, but I hope you will understand what mappers are thinking when you do a mod in the future. Also thank you to be patience to type so many things here even you think the map is quite bad to you. I appreciate it, really. :)
[final notes]


I decided to not mod the other difficulties because I would be repeating myself over and over again, i noticed the same things happened on the 2 insane diffs you made, so I highly suggest you reand and understand what I stated on the first 2 diffs and adjust the other 2 also. You can always call me in chat to talk about mapping if you need :p

Peace. :roll:

Thank you for mods ! :)
davidminh0111
hello from my modding queue:
Light Insane:
00:35:657(2, 1): Overlap
00:53:098: Add something here
01:00:540: ^
02:07:068:^
02:14:494:^
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

davidminh0111 wrote:

hello from my modding queue:
Light Insane:
00:35:657(2, 1): Overlap ?
00:53:098: Add something here
01:00:540: ^
02:07:068:^
02:14:494:^
no change but still thank you to take a look at my map ^^
Lanturn
Responding on the M4M (You'll have to go back and look at my response to your thread as I need that mod posted on the V2 page, and not the regular one)

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:563 (1) - I would personally move the head of this slider to the left (around x96 y80) so the head/tail doesn't overlap as it currently does.
  2. 00:08:912 (3) - end this 1/2 earlier to match vocals like you've been following in this section? It's better to be consistent and on point with them, especially if your main focus is vocals.
  3. 00:18:447 (1) - These could be structured together better as the angle is a bit too sharp. Try moving the (1) to the right some, so the head makes a triangle with 00:17:517 (1,2) - x181 y246 is a perfect triangle. Note you'll have to adjust the notes up ahead as well. Try adding in a left curve on 00:18:447 (1) - to help flow into the upcoming notes maybe? Maybe something like this: http://puu.sh/vcIjh.jpg
  4. 01:11:005 (2,4) - Can you make these somewhat similar like you did with 01:03:563 (2,4) - ? The two sliders are basically the same in the rhythm and similar slider shapes would fit much better here.
  5. 01:31:005 (4) - x56 y68, and maybe adjust 01:31:936 (5) - if you want, though it shouldn't be needed with a 2/1 gap.
  6. 02:01:354 (1) - Slider is a bit short for Normal tbh. Maybe use a long slider here instead for the vocals?
  7. 02:13:796 (1) - Same as the first mod. Separate the head and tail some so they don't overlap.
[117]
  1. 02:02:401 (6) - Don't really see the need for this tbh. It plays better without it.
[Hard]
  1. 00:23:563 (3,1) - Not a good note to jump with. It's too unexpected since you've been following the beat this whole time. Another thing that will throw people off is that the distance from (2,3) and (3,1) look the same so it's only natural to assume there's a 1/1 gap here. If you want to keep the jump, then you might want to map 00:23:331 - as it basically forces you to expect a jump from (3,1).
  2. 00:31:005 (3,1) - same idea here, but it's a lot more noticable as the (1) is closer to the (3) than the previous (2)
  3. 00:38:447 (3,1) - and 00:45:889 (3,1) - as well
  4. 01:00:075 (2) - move this 1/2 forward for the vocals, and if you want, add a new circle at 01:00:075 - You want to be clicking strong vocals like 01:00:308 - instead of using them for slider ends.
  5. 01:35:424 - I don't think you should omit this spot. It's a powerful vocal. Add a circle here?
  6. 01:38:680 - same as above
  7. 01:42:866 - 01:50:308 - 01:53:563 - same as above. These all make good candidates to start jumps on as well.
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:14:494 (3) - two circles would suit this better to capture the vocals better.
  2. 00:30:075 (2) - send the tail end of this down here so it flows into the (3) better
  3. 00:41:936 (3) - x332 y316?
  4. 00:43:098 (2,3) - Blanket these some? As with the previous, the circle and slider don't really mix well together.
  5. 00:51:238 (5) - Try removing a repeat and then start this slider at 00:51:470 - instead. Otherwise this feels a bit forced imo.
Gonna stop here since I want to get other stuff done. Anyways. Best of luck!
DreaM117er
幫我刪掉那個note
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

Lanturn wrote:

Responding on the M4M (You'll have to go back and look at my response to your thread as I need that mod posted on the V2 page, and not the regular one) oh no, I must leave my computer now. maybe tomorrow sorry ><

[Hard]
  1. 00:23:563 (3,1) - Not a good note to jump with. It's too unexpected since you've been following the beat this whole time. Another thing that will throw people off is that the distance from (2,3) and (3,1) look the same so it's only natural to assume there's a 1/1 gap here. If you want to keep the jump, then you might want to map 00:23:331 - as it basically forces you to expect a jump from (3,1).
    I still think the jumps fit this part, but yes you are right. I reduced the spacing to make the jumps more noticable. they are now making more sense.
  2. 00:31:005 (3,1) - same idea here, but it's a lot more noticable as the (1) is closer to the (3) than the previous (2) ^
  3. 00:38:447 (3,1) - and 00:45:889 (3,1) - as well ^
  4. 01:35:424 - I don't think you should omit this spot. It's a powerful vocal. Add a circle here? I'll keep simple ryhthm here, adding notes to where you said is somewhat affect the ryhthm for entire difficulty. But I'll keep your suggstion my mind, still considering.
  5. 01:38:680 - same as above ^
  6. 01:42:866 - 01:50:308 - 01:53:563 - same as above. These all make good candidates to start jumps on as well. ^
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:41:936 (3) - x332 y316? not gonna make a jump here so I can't do anything to it.
Gonna stop here since I want to get other stuff done. Anyways. Best of luck!
the rest I don't mention have been fixed. quite helpful mod. love you xD
DeletedUser_2179411
Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

General :

  1. This map needs a ot of work .. like in Easy and Hard diff .. cause the Hard diff looks like insane ( Too jumpy ) .. but you got good idea .. just need a lot of effort
Normal :

  • * this diff need alot of work .. but i think with mods you will get it ..
  1. 00:03:563 (1) - It touch the the head of the ( http://i.imgur.com/IXZIRX4.png ) .. How about is you move the tail of this slider a bit to the right .. And i think you can add a clap at the end of this slider ..
  2. 00:07:284 (1,2,3,4,1) - Here i remapped it .. i followed the music behind not the voices .. ( http://i.imgur.com/6dBUwd3.png ) .. like the sliders on the white tick .. and i added the circle at this point 00:12:401 - .. for this slider number one which is this one 00:07:284 (1) - I added finish on the head of the slider ..
  3. 00:17:517 (1,2,1) - Here ( http://i.imgur.com/IwTh092.png ) Its kindda confusing .. like since this diff is the lowest diff .. i think you have to make it clear for the beginning .. like they will miss-reading it .. like it could they hit the slider number 1 before the circle number 2 .. so maybe if you make the circle number one here x:120 and y:40 ?its up to you .. but you have to make it separate from the slider ..
  4. 00:20:308 (3) - NC here .. the beat change here ..
  5. 00:23:796 (3) - here i think its the best to me this slider for the rest of the map on circle on the head .. to follow the strong beat ..
  6. 00:31:238 (3) - Same ^
  7. 00:31:238 (3) - ^
  8. 00:38:680 (3) - ^
  9. 00:48:215 (1) - here .. These sliders looks like old style .. how about to change them to something creative .. like maybe this ( http://i.imgur.com/XEectkK.png ) Like you can get idea from here if you want to -> t/37194 .. and maybe if you look at the ranked map .. and see how can you creative some ..
  10. 00:53:331 - Add circle here .. i hear really strong beat .. and add clap on it ..
  11. 00:55:657 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here how about if you do something like this ( http://i.imgur.com/kq7IGkd.png ).. I think like that it will make it easier to play ..
  12. 01:10:540 (1,2,3,4) - here i ctrl+G slider number 2 with circle number 1 .. to follow the voice (ohhh) .. and then i added ( http://i.imgur.com/gPkRKU5.png ) .. and slider number 4 made it end here 01:13:331 - the same reason ..
  13. 01:13:796 - Add circle here .. strong beat ..
  14. 01:14:261 - this part .. you can do something easier like this ( http://i.imgur.com/Erp5NAJ.png ) ..
  15. 01:21:703 - this part .. what do you think if you make it like this ? ( http://i.imgur.com/5YpTnCp.png ) ..
  16. 01:24:959 (4,5) - here i think its hard .. cause it kindda hard on clicking it .. remove the circle and let the next slider (no.5) here .. and make it reverse ..
  17. 01:28:680 (5,6) - ^ Same ..
  18. 02:01:354 (1) - the spinner too short .. make it slider ..
  19. 02:13:796 (1) - I think putting the same slider of the beginning its not good idea .. how about this ( http://i.imgur.com/JdHZrTt.png ) ?

Hard :

  1. 00:03:680 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so it will fix the blanket .. like x:132 , Y: 272 ..
  2. 00:06:819 (2) - Add clap here ..
  3. 00:10:075 (3) - Make the finish at the head of this slider .. and remove it from the tail .. i think it will suit the map ..
  4. 00:12:866 (1) - Remove NC .. and add it to the next circle .. the beat change on the next circle ..
  5. 00:20:308 (1,2) - How about if you blanket this slider with the circle number 2 .. Like this ( http://i.imgur.com/GWSqq4Z.png ) it will looks more beautiful ..
  6. 00:23:796 (1) - Here remove the reverse on this slider .. and make it end here 00:24:261 -
  7. 00:26:354 (2,3,4) - Make this slider number 2 blanket with the circle 4 .. like this ( http://i.imgur.com/kHTENbO.png )
  8. 00:31:238 (1) - Remove the revers on this slider and make it 1/2 slider that end at the next red line ..
  9. 00:41:238 (2) - Make it like the previous slider .. by copy it and Ctrl + J + H .. it will be a nice pattern ..
  10. 00:42:633 (1,2) - Fix this DS between these slider .. dont make it touch each other .. its really not good pattern ..
  11. 01:15:889 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I remapped this part .. its kindda off .. how about this ( http://i.imgur.com/6EozYsf.png ) at circle number 5 i started the slider and end it to the next red line .. and added a circle on the next white line with clap on it ( No NC here ) .. and i put the 3 circles start from here 01:17:052 - to follow the music ..
  12. 01:39:377 (2,3) - How about this ( http://i.imgur.com/DhKtf4n.png ) .. it will make it good imo ..
  13. 01:50:540 (2,3) - ^ Same .. add circle on the first white line and a slider to the red line ending on the next red line .. ( good imo ) ..
* I will stop here cause you need to make th DS between the note same or maybe a bit diff cause its Hard diff by the diff of the beat .. if its too strong you can make it jumpy otherwise the other should be the same on Hard diff for my opinion.. it looks like insane ..
so just don't make it too jumpy .. and its looks like the DS not the same at all .. maybe you just put the notes randomly ..
keep that in mind .. you should look on hard diff that ranked and you will understand my point ..


Good Luck on Rank this map ! :D
_Yiiiii
General
---这种1/4比较少的曲子slider tick rate用1就可以了。

Insane
--00:04:494 (3,4,1,2) - 感觉这里有点overdone,间距太大了,毕竟是比较安静的部分,照着ds来摆就差不多了,至少把note放地集中一点。举个例子,把00:04:959 (4) - 转135°之后放在256|271 这种位置什么的,否则感觉不太好。
--00:07:750 (2,3) - 做一下blanket吧,否则就会觉得这些note排列得很松散,没有什么关系。
--00:14:261 - 这里有重音,但是你用的是滑条尾,之后轻一点的音确是滑条头,轻重音关系乱了。推荐在这个时候用1/2滑条,把00:13:796 (2) - 缩短1/4拍,之后00:14:726 - 用圈。
--00:14:843 (1) - 你放这个转盘是因为vocal对吧?然而vocal在00:16:122 - 就停了,所以我推荐把转盘停在这个时刻,现在停转盘的时刻放圈。
--00:18:447 (1,2,3,4) - 由于只有最后一个滑条那里有个掌声,所以只有第四个是特殊的,推荐把前三个做的有些关联性,比如用旋转120°的排列什么的,然后把第四个弄特殊一点,否则有clap但没有排列上的变化会很诡异。后面的相同节奏也一样。
--00:21:238 (5,6) - 这里的话可以试试换成圈 圈 1/2条,然后把第二个圈和条头叠上。
--00:25:191 (1,2,1) - 这种几乎同间距但是不同间隔的排列必须得有个很硬的理由才能放。一般在这种节奏都会放overlap,就是把这俩00:25:424 (2,1) - 叠在一起,但是要错开一点,这样不会造成读图困扰,而且也避免了跨屏的跳。
--00:41:238 (3,4,5) - 慎用钝角跳。顺便这个DS变得也不合理。
--00:51:122 - 00:51:819 - 挺明显能听见这两个地方有音,推荐把前一个note换成1/4滑条。
--讲道理,这一段我有点没搞懂你到底在跟哪个音。初步感觉是vocal,但是又有没跟的vocal,你的节奏是复制粘贴的。00:53:563 - 比如这个vocal重音提前,推荐就直接跟vocal吧,直接用1/1滑条。后面也是要注意一下明确自己在跟哪个。这种地方推荐有vocal就跟vocal,没有就鼓点,如果vocal音特别长就用1/1滑条然后跟鼓点。
--01:17:982 - 这一段...你的思想很危险啊...推荐这种曲子不要circle spam因为铺满1/2的那个音实在太弱,这种地方会被喷成overdone的。而且看样子你的这些跳也安排得不是很好...推荐删了然后跟vocal做一遍...这块的问题的确很大。
--kiai很好
--02:02:401 - vocal到这里,所以转盘停在这里,后面加圈。
--02:11:936 (1,2,3) - 和之前一样用1/1滑条吧,突然冒出来三个圈很奇怪。

Light Insane
--开头感觉和Insane差不多,推荐滑条尾该加圈的还是加上比较好,比如这个00:10:075 (3) - 减短1/4然后加圈,或者直接不要滑条,然后头一个圈,尾一个圈。这种地方00:07:750 (2,3) - 很孤零零的两个圈,打着不太爽,这里和Insane一样下节奏就好了。转盘同Insane
--00:26:354 (2,3) - 为了把一个clap和两个clap的地方区分地再明显一点,这里推荐把圈叠在滑条尾上。
--01:01:238 (1,2,1) - 注意ds,推荐把条圈之间改成overlap
--插入一句,这个diff作为Light Insane再有这种01:25:424 (1,2) - 大间距好像就不太合适了,推荐把所有1/2比较多的section的1/1的排列都用overlap
--01:29:610 (2,3,) - 01:32:052 (4,5) - 丑,老老实实用三个点的弯就可以了。顺便这个01:32:052 (4,5) - 间距要小一点,否则看不出是1/4
--01:34:029 - 01:48:912 - 这里加个圈好像更好。你如果不想把节奏弄得太密的话,可以抄这里的节奏01:55:191 (1,2,3) -
--02:01:354 (1) - 这个转盘同Insane
--02:06:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的节奏不好,没压好重音的原因。

Hard
--开头那段的NC好乱,四拍一NC就行了。
--00:34:261 (3,4) - 00:36:354 (1,2) - 新人杀手。打Hard的玩家可搞不懂这NC的作用,推荐把隔一拍的那种用stack
--01:13:796 (3,1) - 间距太大了。

117's Normal
--喵喵喵喵,喵喵喵,喵?喵喵喵喵喵喵喵喵喵,喵喵,喵喵喵。

Normal
--咕咕咕,咕咕咕咕咕咕,咕咕咕咕。

咳咳,我不太会摸低难度,不过感觉也没啥大问题,就这样吧。
话说你是怎么找到我这种狗不理麻婆的?我挺好奇的233
Good luck!
DreaM117er
IRC log here
18:45 assassincread: hi
18:47 assassincread: IRC嗎?
18:48 DreaM117er: 稍等一˙下喔
18:48 assassincread: 恩]
18:53 DreaM117er: 你是哪張圖來著??
18:53 DreaM117er: www
18:53 assassincread: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/593445
18:54 DreaM117er: 自己居然忘記...哈哈哈
18:54 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257354 Cake Hime * Masaruumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade [Normal]]
18:55 assassincread: 233
18:55 DreaM117er: 我先簡單說一下,我覺得你會被很多modder說哪裡不好怎樣的
18:56 DreaM117er: 現在很少有人把Normal裡的滑條拉得很詭異
18:56 DreaM117er: 開始這裡就是如此http://puu.sh/vepjm/7d7b586465.jpg
18:56 DreaM117er: 可能是很多人沒辦法接受吧
18:57 assassincread: 好吧 只要月亮不要叫我改 這個我改OK
18:57 DreaM117er: 我自己覺得你那個月亮
18:57 DreaM117er: 可以改成半弦月
18:57 DreaM117er: 真的就一半
18:58 assassincread: 我覺得新月比較好
18:58 DreaM117er: 我懂你的意思
18:59 DreaM117er: 現在在低難度裡擺成那樣,會造成很多反感
19:00 assassincread: 我覺得這種形狀不會很誇張啊 這個我覺得並沒有什麼錯
19:01 DreaM117er: 我是怕nazi的問題
19:01 DreaM117er: 我有因為nazi被DQ過
19:02 DreaM117er: http://puu.sh/vepuv/96c72b7330.jpg 我最怕的就是這裡被BN或QAT提出
19:02 assassincread: 沒關係 看其他地方吧
19:02 DreaM117er: 要或者,你看看能不能再修好看一點
19:03 DreaM117er: 我覺得這個比較有幫助
19:03 DreaM117er: www
19:03 DreaM117er: 結尾那個看你要不要用程對稱的樣子
19:03 DreaM117er: 這樣也不用重拉
19:05 assassincread: 其實你可以把你調整過的點的位置給我 不過算了 我調整了一下
19:05 DreaM117er: 我現在還有發現一個問題,可能是我造成的
19:06 DreaM117er: 就是你的Normal的DS間距比我的更遠
19:06 DreaM117er: 有點不曉得這個要怎麼解決這樣
19:09 assassincread: 恩 還有其他的嗎?
19:11 DreaM117er: 還有一個,低難度的物件間走向要清晰...最好清晰一些
19:12 DreaM117er: 00:48:215 (1,2) - 比方這裡,尾巴對滑條頭都很清楚
19:12 DreaM117er: 00:49:843 (2,3) - 但這裡尾巴對circle就不是很好,尤其對新人來說
19:14 assassincread: 我調一下
19:14 assassincread: next
19:14 DreaM117er: 02:02:633 - 這裡的話,我給你我個人的建議
19:14 DreaM117er: 後面不用省略太多東西
19:15 DreaM117er: 02:03:098 - 這裡有spinner規定不管它
19:15 DreaM117er: 02:04:959 - 像這裡跟後面類似的地方,都可以把他們塞滿
19:15 DreaM117er: 這跟遊玩的感覺有關
19:16 assassincread: 我這邊為了要強烈區分KAI和softer part所以才放少了點 我權難度都是這樣做
19:16 assassincread: 全
19:16 assassincread: 這有一種步入Ending的感覺
19:17 DreaM117er: 我是覺得你從這裡開始02:10:075 -
19:17 DreaM117er: 在這樣做比較好
19:17 DreaM117er: 漸進式的
19:17 DreaM117er: 把節奏放鬆
19:18 DreaM117er: 嘛...看你怎麼改啦
19:19 DreaM117er: 恩...你可以簡單跟我說你是怎麼跟節奏的嗎??
19:19 assassincread: 其實我時間有點緊 可能要進行快一點
19:19 DreaM117er: 我有點沒辦法分析你的作圖方式,不過kiai那裏卻很清楚
19:19 DreaM117er: 我也是
19:20 DreaM117er: 不過低難度沒搞定下一部也很難走
19:20 assassincread: 最開始那段最弱 最後那斷倒數第二弱
19:20 assassincread: 啊不 那是倒數第3
19:20 assassincread: 00:48:215 - 2是這裡
19:21 assassincread: 我根據強弱放置節奏密集度
19:21 DreaM117er: OK
19:21 assassincread: 我覺得妳先不要看我有沒有改 先提出你覺得有問題的地方吧 這樣比較快
19:21 DreaM117er: 好
19:22 DreaM117er: Normal的話你大致上調整下排列,把物漸走向弄得清晰、清楚
19:22 DreaM117er: 我想基本上是沒什麼問題的
19:22 assassincread: 恩恩 感恩
19:23 DreaM117er: Hard你的CS可以再調高,不過看大CS讓我有點懷念我的師傅
19:24 assassincread: 這難度CS調高間距就太大了說
19:24 assassincread: 這難度原本就是CS3下去擺
19:25 DreaM117er: 00:14:843 (1) - 我是覺得你在這個轉盤前都跟vocal的話,這裡00:12:168 - 的聲音不要漏
19:26 assassincread: 我全難度都在這放轉盤啊 而且轉盤也是跟著人聲的一種方式吧 !
19:26 DreaM117er: 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡我判斷不出你在跟什麼聲音
19:26 assassincread: 欸?等等
19:26 assassincread: 好像轉道錯的時間
19:27 DreaM117er: Hard
19:27 DreaM117er: 抱歉抱歉www
19:27 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257014 Cake Hime * Masaruumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade [Hard]]
19:28 assassincread: OK
19:29 DreaM117er: 其他的部分,節奏就沒事
19:30 DreaM117er: 你要多注意一下關於放跳點的摸,可能他說得比較有說服力
19:30 DreaM117er: 他們*
19:30 DreaM117er: 我自己覺得有一些地方跳點跳得不是很好
19:31 assassincread: 我的跳點其實就兩種 雙claps和白長線 這樣
19:31 assassincread: 啊 話說
19:31 assassincread: 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 紅線
19:32 assassincread: whistle clap whistle wcw
19:32 DreaM117er: 我記得很早以前有這樣的跟法
19:33 assassincread: 01:29:145 - 我忘了這段... 我自己覺得跟人聲跳效果不錯
19:33 DreaM117er: 我沒說那裏不好
19:33 DreaM117er: 哈哈
19:34 assassincread: 恩恩 只是更正一夏我說只有兩種跳的時機
19:34 DreaM117er: 回到那個紅線
19:34 DreaM117er: 就是節奏的感覺會突然斷掉
19:34 DreaM117er: 02:03:563 (2,3,4) - 這裡跟那邊紅線去聽
19:35 DreaM117er: 跟你在那個位置轉成放在白線
19:35 DreaM117er: 你比較看看
19:36 DreaM117er: 因為我也是從過去的mapper身上學習做圖的,我看過你那種節奏的擺法
19:36 assassincread: 我個人是偏好這種節奏 因為01:16:122 - 和01:17:052 - 在這段是沒有音效的
19:37 DreaM117er: Hard大概就這樣,你就多注意給你建議放跳的摸
19:37 assassincread: 好
19:39 assassincread: 我有找到一個跟我同時代的mapper 我跟他做了m4m 他的mod很合我胃口 他都沒有點到我很不想改的東西 我覺得他明白我在幹嘛
19:39 assassincread: 真的挺厲害
19:39 DreaM117er: 跟你同時代的
19:39 DreaM117er: 船船
19:40 assassincread: Lanturn 他一定當過BN之類的
19:40 DreaM117er: 你可以找船船
19:40 DreaM117er: smallboat
19:40 DreaM117er: 跨越N個世代的台灣人
19:40 DreaM117er: wwww
19:40 assassincread: 喔喔
19:41 assassincread: 對我而言你也算比較老的了
19:41 DreaM117er: 我嗎??
19:41 assassincread: 近兩年的這些mapper 狂噴我圖
19:41 DreaM117er: 我是進步神速的類型...
19:41 assassincread: 近一年才對
19:41 DreaM117er: 我對於節奏,有很多種想法
19:42 assassincread: 恩恩
19:42 DreaM117er: Light Insane
19:42 DreaM117er: 一個小建議
19:42 DreaM117er: 01:45:191 - 跟01:46:122 - 還有01:46:587 -
19:42 DreaM117er: 聲音不要漏掉比較好
19:43 DreaM117er: 01:46:587 - 這裡你倒是可以不用理我
19:43 DreaM117er: 前面2個我個人強烈建議你加上circle
19:44 assassincread: 覺得節奏不飽滿對不對
19:44 DreaM117er: 對
19:45 DreaM117er: 你的圖真的會讓我想到我師父呢
19:45 DreaM117er: Insane我覺得不用改
19:45 assassincread: 但是我這邊其實是考量到game play 這種連續折返短滑條後面馬上加上circle 他就有點變成陷阱的感覺
19:45 DreaM117er: 不會
19:45 DreaM117er: 你那點我用我的圖證明過了
19:46 assassincread: 再加上5連因我用音效加強 所以我覺得不放更有突顯的效果這樣
19:46 assassincread: 是嗎? 我個人在打那種pattern時有時候都會被騙呢
19:46 DreaM117er: 那是他耳朵問題
19:46 DreaM117er: 哈哈哈
19:46 assassincread: 我先考慮一夏
19:47 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/823688 Minamotoya feat. Kuroa* - Hana Kagerou [Extreme]]
19:47 DreaM117er: 給你參考看看
19:47 assassincread: 我知道連貫性會更飽滿一點 但是停下有停下的好
19:48 DreaM117er: 看你啦
19:48 assassincread: 我接一下電話
19:48 DreaM117er: 我是覺得在kiai正中間節奏緊一點會比較好
19:48 assassincread: 對了 等等
19:49 assassincread: 你說Insane不用改 這是放棄拯救的意思嗎?
19:49 DreaM117er: 不是
19:49 DreaM117er: 是好的方面
19:49 assassincread: 其實我最不確定的就是I 在現今這個年代到底OK不OK
19:49 assassincread: 是嗎?
19:50 DreaM117er: 可以的
19:50 DreaM117er: 你可以找個時間去詢問船船
19:50 DreaM117er: 他的建議可能比我的更好
19:50 assassincread: 你的話對我影響大的哦 我就信你了
19:50 assassincread: 好的
19:51 assassincread: 對了 我再問你個問題
19:52 DreaM117er: ??
19:52 assassincread: 如果從 最剛開始到泡圖 這樣算是一個100%的流程 你認為我現在進行到多少%了?
19:53 assassincread: 如果我剛剛說要改的都改掉的話
19:53 DreaM117er: 6-70吧
19:53 DreaM117er: 你有找到船船,給他看下圖大概就差不多了
19:53 assassincread: 好 謝謝啦 !
19:53 DreaM117er: 不會
19:54 assassincread: 感謝你撥空幫我看圖
Topic Starter
ArThasCD
I must go now, no time to reply all but thank you for your mods ! I'll reply you next weekend when I'm home. Sorry about that !
zev
  • Insane
  1. .ogg sounds are not rankable by Ranking Criteria unfortunately.
  2. normal-hitclap6.wav is unused
    00:06:354 (2) - extend this slider by 1/2 if this is mapped to the vocals, it's normal to extend sliders to emphasize one track. you can't map everything in STD mode.

    00:14:843 (1) - spinnerend has zero emphasize, a click 00:17:052 (1) - has much emphasize. inconsistent emphasize! tl:dr 00:16:587 - put a circle here

    00:38:912 (9) - There's a really strong beat here though.

    01:15:889 (1) - remove nc
    01:16:122 (3) - add nc, always new combo on downbeats

    would try to get a bit more intuitive with the rhythms so it feels less like jumps spam
    01:19:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

    normal
    01:49:610 (3) - New Combo? There's a downbeat here!
gl !
Wikozo
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00:51:470 (3) - remove
01:20:773 (6) - a little bit down
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117's Normal
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00:07:284 (1) - little bit up
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Hard
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02:16:587 (3) - a little little bit up
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Light Insane
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00:21:470 (1,2) - replace 1 of 2
00:25:191 (1,2) - ^
00:51:238 (5) - remove
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nothing. sorry :(
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Topic Starter
ArThasCD

DreaM117er wrote:

IRC log here
18:45 assassincread: hi
18:47 assassincread: IRC嗎?
18:48 DreaM117er: 稍等一˙下喔
18:48 assassincread: 恩]
18:53 DreaM117er: 你是哪張圖來著??
18:53 DreaM117er: www
18:53 assassincread: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/593445
18:54 DreaM117er: 自己居然忘記...哈哈哈
18:54 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257354 Cake Hime * Masaruumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade [Normal]]
18:55 assassincread: 233
18:55 DreaM117er: 我先簡單說一下,我覺得你會被很多modder說哪裡不好怎樣的
18:56 DreaM117er: 現在很少有人把Normal裡的滑條拉得很詭異
18:56 DreaM117er: 開始這裡就是如此http://puu.sh/vepjm/7d7b586465.jpg
18:56 DreaM117er: 可能是很多人沒辦法接受吧
18:57 assassincread: 好吧 只要月亮不要叫我改 這個我改OK
18:57 DreaM117er: 我自己覺得你那個月亮
18:57 DreaM117er: 可以改成半弦月
18:57 DreaM117er: 真的就一半
18:58 assassincread: 我覺得新月比較好
18:58 DreaM117er: 我懂你的意思
18:59 DreaM117er: 現在在低難度裡擺成那樣,會造成很多反感
19:00 assassincread: 我覺得這種形狀不會很誇張啊 這個我覺得並沒有什麼錯
19:01 DreaM117er: 我是怕nazi的問題
19:01 DreaM117er: 我有因為nazi被DQ過
19:02 DreaM117er: http://puu.sh/vepuv/96c72b7330.jpg 我最怕的就是這裡被BN或QAT提出
19:02 assassincread: 沒關係 看其他地方吧
19:02 DreaM117er: 要或者,你看看能不能再修好看一點
19:03 DreaM117er: 我覺得這個比較有幫助
19:03 DreaM117er: www
19:03 DreaM117er: 結尾那個看你要不要用程對稱的樣子
19:03 DreaM117er: 這樣也不用重拉
19:05 assassincread: 其實你可以把你調整過的點的位置給我 不過算了 我調整了一下
19:05 DreaM117er: 我現在還有發現一個問題,可能是我造成的
19:06 DreaM117er: 就是你的Normal的DS間距比我的更遠
19:06 DreaM117er: 有點不曉得這個要怎麼解決這樣
19:09 assassincread: 恩 還有其他的嗎?
19:11 DreaM117er: 還有一個,低難度的物件間走向要清晰...最好清晰一些
19:12 DreaM117er: 00:48:215 (1,2) - 比方這裡,尾巴對滑條頭都很清楚
19:12 DreaM117er: 00:49:843 (2,3) - 但這裡尾巴對circle就不是很好,尤其對新人來說
19:14 assassincread: 我調一下
19:14 assassincread: next
19:14 DreaM117er: 02:02:633 - 這裡的話,我給你我個人的建議
19:14 DreaM117er: 後面不用省略太多東西
19:15 DreaM117er: 02:03:098 - 這裡有spinner規定不管它
19:15 DreaM117er: 02:04:959 - 像這裡跟後面類似的地方,都可以把他們塞滿
19:15 DreaM117er: 這跟遊玩的感覺有關
19:16 assassincread: 我這邊為了要強烈區分KAI和softer part所以才放少了點 我權難度都是這樣做
19:16 assassincread: 全
19:16 assassincread: 這有一種步入Ending的感覺
19:17 DreaM117er: 我是覺得你從這裡開始02:10:075 -
19:17 DreaM117er: 在這樣做比較好
19:17 DreaM117er: 漸進式的
19:17 DreaM117er: 把節奏放鬆
19:18 DreaM117er: 嘛...看你怎麼改啦
19:19 DreaM117er: 恩...你可以簡單跟我說你是怎麼跟節奏的嗎??
19:19 assassincread: 其實我時間有點緊 可能要進行快一點
19:19 DreaM117er: 我有點沒辦法分析你的作圖方式,不過kiai那裏卻很清楚
19:19 DreaM117er: 我也是
19:20 DreaM117er: 不過低難度沒搞定下一部也很難走
19:20 assassincread: 最開始那段最弱 最後那斷倒數第二弱
19:20 assassincread: 啊不 那是倒數第3
19:20 assassincread: 00:48:215 - 2是這裡
19:21 assassincread: 我根據強弱放置節奏密集度
19:21 DreaM117er: OK
19:21 assassincread: 我覺得妳先不要看我有沒有改 先提出你覺得有問題的地方吧 這樣比較快
19:21 DreaM117er: 好
19:22 DreaM117er: Normal的話你大致上調整下排列,把物漸走向弄得清晰、清楚
19:22 DreaM117er: 我想基本上是沒什麼問題的
19:22 assassincread: 恩恩 感恩
19:23 DreaM117er: Hard你的CS可以再調高,不過看大CS讓我有點懷念我的師傅
19:24 assassincread: 這難度CS調高間距就太大了說
19:24 assassincread: 這難度原本就是CS3下去擺
19:25 DreaM117er: 00:14:843 (1) - 我是覺得你在這個轉盤前都跟vocal的話,這裡00:12:168 - 的聲音不要漏
19:26 assassincread: 我全難度都在這放轉盤啊 而且轉盤也是跟著人聲的一種方式吧 !
19:26 DreaM117er: 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡我判斷不出你在跟什麼聲音
19:26 assassincread: 欸?等等
19:26 assassincread: 好像轉道錯的時間
19:27 DreaM117er: Hard
19:27 DreaM117er: 抱歉抱歉www
19:27 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1257014 Cake Hime * Masaruumi & JUMA - Eiya no Parade [Hard]]
19:28 assassincread: OK
19:29 DreaM117er: 其他的部分,節奏就沒事
19:30 DreaM117er: 你要多注意一下關於放跳點的摸,可能他說得比較有說服力
19:30 DreaM117er: 他們*
19:30 DreaM117er: 我自己覺得有一些地方跳點跳得不是很好
19:31 assassincread: 我的跳點其實就兩種 雙claps和白長線 這樣
19:31 assassincread: 啊 話說
19:31 assassincread: 01:16:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 紅線
19:32 assassincread: whistle clap whistle wcw
19:32 DreaM117er: 我記得很早以前有這樣的跟法
19:33 assassincread: 01:29:145 - 我忘了這段... 我自己覺得跟人聲跳效果不錯
19:33 DreaM117er: 我沒說那裏不好
19:33 DreaM117er: 哈哈
19:34 assassincread: 恩恩 只是更正一夏我說只有兩種跳的時機
19:34 DreaM117er: 回到那個紅線
19:34 DreaM117er: 就是節奏的感覺會突然斷掉
19:34 DreaM117er: 02:03:563 (2,3,4) - 這裡跟那邊紅線去聽
19:35 DreaM117er: 跟你在那個位置轉成放在白線
19:35 DreaM117er: 你比較看看
19:36 DreaM117er: 因為我也是從過去的mapper身上學習做圖的,我看過你那種節奏的擺法
19:36 assassincread: 我個人是偏好這種節奏 因為01:16:122 - 和01:17:052 - 在這段是沒有音效的
19:37 DreaM117er: Hard大概就這樣,你就多注意給你建議放跳的摸
19:37 assassincread: 好
19:39 assassincread: 我有找到一個跟我同時代的mapper 我跟他做了m4m 他的mod很合我胃口 他都沒有點到我很不想改的東西 我覺得他明白我在幹嘛
19:39 assassincread: 真的挺厲害
19:39 DreaM117er: 跟你同時代的
19:39 DreaM117er: 船船
19:40 assassincread: Lanturn 他一定當過BN之類的
19:40 DreaM117er: 你可以找船船
19:40 DreaM117er: smallboat
19:40 DreaM117er: 跨越N個世代的台灣人
19:40 DreaM117er: wwww
19:40 assassincread: 喔喔
19:41 assassincread: 對我而言你也算比較老的了
19:41 DreaM117er: 我嗎??
19:41 assassincread: 近兩年的這些mapper 狂噴我圖
19:41 DreaM117er: 我是進步神速的類型...
19:41 assassincread: 近一年才對
19:41 DreaM117er: 我對於節奏,有很多種想法
19:42 assassincread: 恩恩
19:42 DreaM117er: Light Insane
19:42 DreaM117er: 一個小建議
19:42 DreaM117er: 01:45:191 - 跟01:46:122 - 還有01:46:587 -
19:42 DreaM117er: 聲音不要漏掉比較好
19:43 DreaM117er: 01:46:587 - 這裡你倒是可以不用理我
19:43 DreaM117er: 前面2個我個人強烈建議你加上circle
19:44 assassincread: 覺得節奏不飽滿對不對
19:44 DreaM117er: 對
19:45 DreaM117er: 你的圖真的會讓我想到我師父呢
19:45 DreaM117er: Insane我覺得不用改
19:45 assassincread: 但是我這邊其實是考量到game play 這種連續折返短滑條後面馬上加上circle 他就有點變成陷阱的感覺
19:45 DreaM117er: 不會
19:45 DreaM117er: 你那點我用我的圖證明過了
19:46 assassincread: 再加上5連因我用音效加強 所以我覺得不放更有突顯的效果這樣
19:46 assassincread: 是嗎? 我個人在打那種pattern時有時候都會被騙呢
19:46 DreaM117er: 那是他耳朵問題
19:46 DreaM117er: 哈哈哈
19:46 assassincread: 我先考慮一夏
19:47 *DreaM117er is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/823688 Minamotoya feat. Kuroa* - Hana Kagerou [Extreme]]
19:47 DreaM117er: 給你參考看看
19:47 assassincread: 我知道連貫性會更飽滿一點 但是停下有停下的好
19:48 DreaM117er: 看你啦
19:48 assassincread: 我接一下電話
19:48 DreaM117er: 我是覺得在kiai正中間節奏緊一點會比較好
19:48 assassincread: 對了 等等
19:49 assassincread: 你說Insane不用改 這是放棄拯救的意思嗎?
19:49 DreaM117er: 不是
19:49 DreaM117er: 是好的方面
19:49 assassincread: 其實我最不確定的就是I 在現今這個年代到底OK不OK
19:49 assassincread: 是嗎?
19:50 DreaM117er: 可以的
19:50 DreaM117er: 你可以找個時間去詢問船船
19:50 DreaM117er: 他的建議可能比我的更好
19:50 assassincread: 你的話對我影響大的哦 我就信你了
19:50 assassincread: 好的
19:51 assassincread: 對了 我再問你個問題
19:52 DreaM117er: ??
19:52 assassincread: 如果從 最剛開始到泡圖 這樣算是一個100%的流程 你認為我現在進行到多少%了?
19:53 assassincread: 如果我剛剛說要改的都改掉的話
19:53 DreaM117er: 6-70吧
19:53 DreaM117er: 你有找到船船,給他看下圖大概就差不多了
19:53 assassincread: 好 謝謝啦 !
19:53 DreaM117er: 不會
19:54 assassincread: 感謝你撥空幫我看圖
yiiii

_Yiiiii wrote:

General
---这种1/4比较少的曲子slider tick rate用1就可以了。不過充滿了1/2,我覺得還可以,保留會兒

Insane
--00:04:494 (3,4,1,2) - 感觉这里有点overdone,间距太大了,毕竟是比较安静的部分,照着ds来摆就差不多了,至少把note放地集中一点。举个例子,把00:04:959 (4) - 转135°之后放在256|271 这种位置什么的,否则感觉不太好。
--00:07:750 (2,3) - 做一下blanket吧,否则就会觉得这些note排列得很松散,没有什么关系。
--00:14:261 - 这里有重音,但是你用的是滑条尾,之后轻一点的音确是滑条头,轻重音关系乱了。推荐在这个时候用1/2滑条,把00:13:796 (2) - 缩短1/4拍,之后00:14:726 - 用圈。照你那樣擺的話滑條尾沒有任何聲音很怪
--00:14:843 (1) - 你放这个转盘是因为vocal对吧?然而vocal在00:16:122 - 就停了,所以我推荐把转盘停在这个时刻,现在停转盘的时刻放圈。都可以沒錯,但是考量到所有難度統一的話Normal轉盤就太短,所以現在這樣就好
--00:18:447 (1,2,3,4) - 由于只有最后一个滑条那里有个掌声,所以只有第四个是特殊的,推荐把前三个做的有些关联性,比如用旋转120°的排列什么的,然后把第四个弄特殊一点,否则有clap但没有排列上的变化会很诡异。后面的相同节奏也一样。我同意你用這樣的想法做變化會更有意思,我沒想到。但是你不能說除此之外的做法就是詭異,這段音樂本身其實原本就適合放跳
--00:21:238 (5,6) - 这里的话可以试试换成圈 圈 1/2条,然后把第二个圈和条头叠上。不懂意思,如果有圖就好了
--00:25:191 (1,2,1) - 这种几乎同间距但是不同间隔的排列必须得有个很硬的理由才能放。一般在这种节奏都会放overlap,就是把这俩00:25:424 (2,1) - 叠在一起,但是要错开一点,这样不会造成读图困扰,而且也避免了跨屏的跳。 NC強調、音效提醒、音樂本身的作用,其實我還沒看到任何players在這地方出錯。很多圖也有些奇怪的間距但是因為符合音樂所以可行
--00:41:238 (3,4,5) - 慎用钝角跳。顺便这个DS变得也不合理。四個一組的跳同間距會變成一整個段落,這樣會比較好嗎?我想想看
--00:51:122 - 00:51:819 - 挺明显能听见这两个地方有音,推荐把前一个note换成1/4滑条。
--讲道理,这一段我有点没搞懂你到底在跟哪个音。初步感觉是vocal,但是又有没跟的vocal,你的节奏是复制粘贴的。00:53:563 - 比如这个vocal重音提前,推荐就直接跟vocal吧,直接用1/1滑条。后面也是要注意一下明确自己在跟哪个。这种地方推荐有vocal就跟vocal,没有就鼓点,如果vocal音特别长就用1/1滑条然后跟鼓点。我覺得只限定跟一種會把其他可用的變化排除掉。不過我懂你意思
--01:17:982 - 这一段...你的思想很危险啊...推荐这种曲子不要circle spam因为铺满1/2的那个音实在太弱,这种地方会被喷成overdone的。而且看样子你的这些跳也安排得不是很好...推荐删了然后跟vocal做一遍...这块的问题的确很大。可能被音效蓋過的關係,我在這個難度的這個段落主要跟背景那些強音,可以刪物件聽下
--kiai很好
--02:02:401 - vocal到这里,所以转盘停在这里,后面加圈。同之前
--02:11:936 (1,2,3) - 和之前一样用1/1滑条吧,突然冒出来三个圈很奇怪。還好啊

Light Insane
--开头感觉和Insane差不多,推荐滑条尾该加圈的还是加上比较好,比如这个00:10:075 (3) - 减短1/4然后加圈,或者直接不要滑条,然后头一个圈,尾一个圈。这种地方00:07:750 (2,3) - 很孤零零的两个圈,打着不太爽,这里和Insane一样下节奏就好了。转盘同Insane
--00:26:354 (2,3) - 为了把一个clap和两个clap的地方区分地再明显一点,这里推荐把圈叠在滑条尾上。這樣無聊
--01:01:238 (1,2,1) - 注意ds,推荐把条圈之间改成overlap無聊
--插入一句,这个diff作为Light Insane再有这种01:25:424 (1,2) - 大间距好像就不太合适了,推荐把所有1/2比较多的section的1/1的排列都用overlap
--01:29:610 (2,3,) - 01:32:052 (4,5) - 丑,老老实实用三个点的弯就可以了。我覺得這挺好顺便这个01:32:052 (4,5) - 间距要小一点,否则看不出是1/4
--01:34:029 - 01:48:912 - 这里加个圈好像更好。你如果不想把节奏弄得太密的话,可以抄这里的节奏01:55:191 (1,2,3) - 忘記這個什麼了,回去看看抱歉
--02:01:354 (1) - 这个转盘同Insane
--02:06:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的节奏不好,没压好重音的原因。已修

Hard
--开头那段的NC好乱,四拍一NC就行了。
--00:34:261 (3,4) - 00:36:354 (1,2) - 新人杀手。打Hard的玩家可搞不懂这NC的作用,推荐把隔一拍的那种用stack前段節奏有提示了我覺得OK
--01:13:796 (3,1) - 间距太大了。印象中修了

117's Normal
--喵喵喵喵,喵喵喵,喵?喵喵喵喵喵喵喵喵喵,喵喵,喵喵喵。

Normal
--咕咕咕,咕咕咕咕咕咕,咕咕咕咕。

咳咳,我不太会摸低难度,不过感觉也没啥大问题,就这样吧。
话说你是怎么找到我这种狗不理麻婆的?我挺好奇的233多虧你mod過117的圖233
Good luck!
Rose

Rose Melody wrote:

Hi .. Mod from Queue ..

General :

  1. This map needs a ot of work .. like in Easy and Hard diff .. cause the Hard diff looks like insane ( Too jumpy ) .. but you got good idea .. just need a lot of effort
Normal :

  • * this diff need alot of work .. but i think with mods you will get it ..
  1. 00:03:563 (1) - It touch the the head of the ( http://i.imgur.com/IXZIRX4.png ) .. How about is you move the tail of this slider a bit to the right .. And i think you can add a clap at the end of this slider .. fixed slider shape
  2. 00:07:284 (1,2,3,4,1) - Here i remapped it .. i followed the music behind not the voices .. ( http://i.imgur.com/6dBUwd3.png ) .. like the sliders on the white tick .. and i added the circle at this point 00:12:401 - .. for this slider number one which is this one 00:07:284 (1) - I added finish on the head of the slider .. I think it's fine
  3. 00:17:517 (1,2,1) - Here ( http://i.imgur.com/IwTh092.png ) Its kindda confusing .. like since this diff is the lowest diff .. i think you have to make it clear for the beginning .. like they will miss-reading it .. like it could they hit the slider number 1 before the circle number 2 .. so maybe if you make the circle number one here x:120 and y:40 ?its up to you .. but you have to make it separate from the slider .. fixed slider shape
  4. 00:20:308 (3) - NC here .. the beat change here .. X
  5. 00:23:796 (3) - here i think its the best to me this slider for the rest of the map on circle on the head .. to follow the strong beat ..I think it's fine
  6. 00:31:238 (3) - Same ^
  7. 00:31:238 (3) - ^
  8. 00:38:680 (3) - ^
  9. 00:48:215 (1) - here .. These sliders looks like old style .. how about to change them to something creative .. like maybe this ( http://i.imgur.com/XEectkK.png ) Like you can get idea from here if you want to -> t/37194 .. and maybe if you look at the ranked map .. and see how can you creative some .. adjusted it
  10. 00:53:331 - Add circle here .. i hear really strong beat .. and add clap on it ..I think it's fine
  11. 00:55:657 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here how about if you do something like this ( http://i.imgur.com/kq7IGkd.png ).. I think like that it will make it easier to play ..I think it's fine
  12. 01:10:540 (1,2,3,4) - here i ctrl+G slider number 2 with circle number 1 .. to follow the voice (ohhh) .. and then i added ( http://i.imgur.com/gPkRKU5.png ) .. and slider number 4 made it end here 01:13:331 - the same reason ..I think it's fine
  13. 01:13:796 - Add circle here .. strong beat ..
  14. 01:14:261 - this part .. you can do something easier like this ( http://i.imgur.com/Erp5NAJ.png ) .. I think it's fine
  15. 01:21:703 - this part .. what do you think if you make it like this ? ( http://i.imgur.com/5YpTnCp.png ) ..^
  16. 01:24:959 (4,5) - here i think its hard .. cause it kindda hard on clicking it .. remove the circle and let the next slider (no.5) here .. and make it reverse ..
  17. 01:28:680 (5,6) - ^ Same ..^
  18. 02:01:354 (1) - the spinner too short .. make it slider .. made longer one
  19. 02:13:796 (1) - I think putting the same slider of the beginning its not good idea .. how about this ( http://i.imgur.com/JdHZrTt.png ) ?I think it's fine

Hard :

  1. 00:03:680 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so it will fix the blanket .. like x:132 , Y: 272 .. I think it's fine
  2. 00:06:819 (2) - Add clap here ..
  3. 00:10:075 (3) - Make the finish at the head of this slider .. and remove it from the tail .. i think it will suit the map ..^
  4. 00:12:866 (1) - Remove NC .. and add it to the next circle .. the beat change on the next circle ..^
  5. 00:20:308 (1,2) - How about if you blanket this slider with the circle number 2 .. Like this ( http://i.imgur.com/GWSqq4Z.png ) it will looks more beautiful .. no
  6. 00:23:796 (1) - Here remove the reverse on this slider .. and make it end here 00:24:261 - no
  7. 00:26:354 (2,3,4) - Make this slider number 2 blanket with the circle 4 .. like this ( http://i.imgur.com/kHTENbO.png )
  8. 00:31:238 (1) - Remove the revers on this slider and make it 1/2 slider that end at the next red line ..
  9. 00:41:238 (2) - Make it like the previous slider .. by copy it and Ctrl + J + H .. it will be a nice pattern ..
  10. 00:42:633 (1,2) - Fix this DS between these slider .. dont make it touch each other .. its really not good pattern ..
  11. 01:15:889 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I remapped this part .. its kindda off .. how about this ( http://i.imgur.com/6EozYsf.png ) at circle number 5 i started the slider and end it to the next red line .. and added a circle on the next white line with clap on it ( No NC here ) .. and i put the 3 circles start from here 01:17:052 - to follow the music ..
  12. 01:39:377 (2,3) - How about this ( http://i.imgur.com/DhKtf4n.png ) .. it will make it good imo ..
  13. 01:50:540 (2,3) - ^ Same .. add circle on the first white line and a slider to the red line ending on the next red line .. ( good imo ) ..
* I will stop here cause you need to make th DS between the note same or maybe a bit diff cause its Hard diff by the diff of the beat .. if its too strong you can make it jumpy otherwise the other should be the same on Hard diff for my opinion.. it looks like insane .. it's not like Insane at all, just put some easy jump with big circle. I don't really agree what you mentioned.
so just don't make it too jumpy .. and its looks like the DS not the same at all .. maybe you just put the notes randomly .. obviously, you don't really know what I am doing for those DS changes
keep that in mind .. you should look on hard diff that ranked and you will understand my point ..


Good Luck on Rank this map ! :D

Thank you ! :)

Will use the computer next Thursday to check the other mods, sorry for late reply!
Nedsing
NORMAL
00:07:284 (1) - This slider should end on the white tick after, not on a red.
00:14:843 (1) - There have to be more time to recover after the spinner since it's a normal diff
00:52:866 (2,3) - There's a sttrong sound on the white tick between these objects, maybe empisize is with a circle?
00:54:726 (4,1) - ^
00:56:587 (3,4) - ^
00:58:447 (6,1) - ^
00:59:377 (1,2) - ^
01:00:308 (2,3) - ^
01:06:819 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same thing happens at this part
02:00:889 (1) - Same spinner problem
00:03:563 (1) - This slider looks kinda weird, try changing the shape a bit
02:13:796 (1) - Same slider? Same problem
Good job! I really like the map! :)
Jennifer

  • One thing for normal:
  1. 01:06:819 (1,2) - use sliders, i feel like these circles are too "simple," i think sliders would sound better as well

    Hard approach rate should be pushed up .5 more at least, 6 seem more like advanced

    Light Insane
  2. 01:06:819 (1) - i would suggest making the second joint counting from top red, and create a more hook liked shape. it looks better imo
  3. 01:08:912 - filling in this gap
  4. 01:11:936 (4) - i feel like if the slider end was replaced with the start of the slider instead,(maybe shift the slider down) it would emphasis that note more. (to me the red tick 01:12:168 - sounds slightly more "heavy" than the one before, making it a better place to start rather finish)
  5. 01:14:261 (1) - same goes for 1
  6. 01:32:052 (3) - starting on a blue tick doesnt sound right
    02:15:889 - fill please
- Frontier -
q

[General]
  1. I'm feeling OKAY about gaps. xP
  2. Tick out "Widescreen Support" on Normal diffs (including 117's one).
  3. This map needs Easy diff. imo cuz this slow song should have it.
  4. Source is "東方Project". you should put touhou in tags instead (i konw you copied from this xd)
  5. Add "DreaM117er" in tags please because it's GD name. you should give credit to him.

no kd please thanks
gl~
Topic Starter
ArThasCD

- Frontier - wrote:

q

[General]
  1. I'm feeling OKAY about gaps. xP
  2. Tick out "Widescreen Support" on Normal diffs (including 117's one).
  3. This map needs Easy diff. imo cuz this slow song should have it.
  4. Source is "東方Project". you should put touhou in tags instead (i konw you copied from this xd)
  5. Add "DreaM117er" in tags please because it's GD name. you should give credit to him.

no kd please thanks
gl~
will fix all maybe next Thursday since I can't use the computer these days. Thank you for general check!Also I will check all mods I haven't replied. Sorry for late reply guys!
- Frontier -
forum pm xd
[Light Insane]
  1. 00:25:889 (1,2,3,4) - okay. this part, the rhythm is the same as 00:18:447 (1,2,3,4) but you mapped differently. i recommend to make it same.
  2. 00:23:796 (3,5) - you may stack these together. (5) is slightly move so it's not stack perfectly
  3. 00:23:796 (3,4) - maybe blanket these by adjust a (3)'s slider
    if you want clearer explanation
    move the last anchor to x:480 y:72
  4. 00:30:773 - You should add a note here since there's a sound here
  5. 01:06:819 (1) - weird slider here. imo you could make just a curve slider.
  6. Not much mod here because there are not that much notes than Light Insane should.
[Insane]
  1. 01:17:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This is the hardest part compared to the other parts. I mean... you shouldn't make jumps. I'd recommend to do that in kiai.
  2. 01:25:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
idk how to say here. yeah
sorry for being rude but.. please find more mods. your map needs more polishing. When your map is polish enough, BN will come forwards to you. :D
GL

no more kd again thx
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