Yuki Hayashi - You Say Run · forum

Zare

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Zare 2016-07-28T03:44:17+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 2. Mai 2017 at 20:35:16

Artist: Yuki Hayashi
Title: You Say Run
Source: 僕のヒーローアカデミア
Tags: BNHA MHA Boku No Hero Academia My Academy Anime OST Official Soundtrack Instrumental Orchestral Symphonic Rock Akitoshi
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6580kb
Play Time: 03:42
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Insane (4,63 stars, 808 notes)
Easy (1,48 stars, 180 notes)
Hard (3,57 stars, 656 notes)
Normal (2,1 stars, 403 notes)
Plus Ultra (5,64 stars, 1034 notes)

Download: Yuki Hayashi - You Say Run
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hey Villain, have you ever heard these words?
Go Beyond!
PLUS ULTRA

Insane by Akitoshi
.mp3 provided by Kocari

Last edited by Zare 2017-05-02T18:55:20+00:00, edited 105 times in total.

jaje

48 posts

Joined February 2012

jaje 2017-03-16T15:21:28+00:00

Correct offset is 454 and 23768

cool af song ok_hand

Shiirn

2,896 posts

Joined August 2010

Shiirn 2017-03-21T14:21:31+00:00

gay

07:07 Shiirn: WOOT
07:07 Zare: what
07:07 Shiirn: free kd
07:07 Shiirn: before march is over
07:07 Zare: im not saying it might not get removed whenever BNs or QATs or whoever check the thread
07:07 Shiirn: i mean
07:07 Shiirn: ill say shit
07:07 Zare: but i really dont give a fuck about kd
07:07 Shiirn: so its not cheating
07:08 Shiirn: 00:24:950 (6) - 00:27:692 (6) - you could totally new combo these
07:09 Zare: yeah i guess so
07:09 Shiirn: if anything it makes more sense than the already-there new combos musically
07:09 Shiirn: 00:30:435 (7) - etc etc
07:10 Shiirn: the overmapped triples are actually pretty okay
07:10 Shiirn: they're in good points rhythmically but
07:10 Shiirn: 00:33:692 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - the fjuck
07:10 Shiirn: 00:34:207 - the drumroll begins here
07:10 Shiirn: and fits way better starting from there anyway imo
07:11 Zare: nah if u listen closely it's there
07:11 Zare: i def hear it
07:11 Shiirn: this is one of those
07:11 Zare: but i see what you mean
07:11 Shiirn: "i don't care if you can hear it if you turn up the volume to 500% and use a silent room it would probably work better this alternative way"
07:11 Shiirn: things
07:11 Zare: it prob makes more sense your way
07:12 Shiirn: you're already overmapping and im okay with most of it
07:12 Zare: oh if you say that here youll love some other parts
07:12 Shiirn: but it's jarring and overwhelming to have a uninteruppted stream that long in this part
07:12 Zare: it isn't really ovemapped
07:12 Shiirn: and having it shorter and start offbeat would work better
07:12 Zare: the triples are all on drum beats
07:13 Shiirn: it's overmapping by modern standards
07:13 Zare: yeah you're right regarding the stream
07:13 Zare: ill change that
07:13 Shiirn: but you are doing it right
07:13 Shiirn: nao was doing it poorly and thats fine
07:14 Shiirn: 00:48:264 (5,1) - not using 1/1 slider this time? hm
07:14 Shiirn: or at least off-beat focus
07:14 Zare: 00:48:778 (2) - because of this one
07:14 Shiirn: 00:53:750 (1,2) - does cool
07:15 Shiirn: hm
07:15 Shiirn: still think at least offbeat 1/2 starting on redtick would work better like 00:53:750 (1,2) -
07:15 Zare: im following that melodything there
07:15 Zare: idk instruments lmao
07:15 Shiirn: its ok i dont either
07:16 Shiirn: 01:13:807 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - yeah see beat aside this actually fits better as you're now clearly in a buildup section
07:16 Zare: wow 00:53:750 (1,2) - this seems wrong now
07:16 Shiirn: so longer streams are expected
07:17 Shiirn: why would it? it's following the same pattern as 00:24:950 (6,6) - all of these
07:17 Zare: 01:13:892 (6) - delete this???
07:17 Shiirn: nah im saying
07:17 Shiirn: that works fine
07:17 Shiirn: u can if u want but im saying the longer stream is alright because you're in a buildup section
07:18 Shiirn: 01:16:549 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - i can see what you're trying to emphasize here but i think there's gotta be a better way to do it

GoldenWolf

2,983 posts

Joined May 2012

GoldenWolf 2017-04-04T18:18:20+00:00

I'm a kd whore

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-04-05T10:37:25+00:00

Fixed from unsnapped issues due to the bpm changes :3

upd

osu file format v14

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Title:You Say Run
TitleUnicode:You Say Run
Artist:Hayashi Yuki
ArtistUnicode:林ゆうき
Creator:Zare
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア
Tags:BNHA MHA Boku No Hero Academia My Hero Academy Anime Animu Weeb OST Official Soundtrack All Might Deku Midoriya Bakugo He ate a fucking hair I dont even Akitoshi
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Aurele

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Aurele 2017-04-06T22:15:10+00:00

hi!!

Easy

00:05:598 (2) - This circle would be more interesting to catch if it was moved to x:241 y:164 instead. You'll have to move your next object to keep your consistency tho
00:16:570 (3) - A 2,10x jump with the previous object? I don't think so. Keep this object's spacing consistent with your other objects, so that would be 1,50x.
00:45:713 (1,2) - If you listen closer, the slider (1) has more drum sounds than the slider (2), which makes an effect of transition between two measures.
You should consider adding a new combo to the slider (2) and delete the new combo to the next object. After that, try to keep your new combo consistency,
which was once every two measures. Come back to me after you're done with it.
00:59:427 (4,5) - I would change these two circles for a slider as it introduces the next slider and it's beat on the reverse arrow.
01:36:456 (2) - As your two previous objects are 2 4/1 sliders and they have a new combo to each, you should add a new combo to this slider as well. After doing this, delete the new combo to 01:37:827 (1) - and add a new combo to 01:39:198 (2) -
03:33:026 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. Keep it to 1,20x

Normal
you might wanna double-check the combos here as well.

00:35:427 (2) - This slider is ignoring the sound at 00:35:941 -, which you would normal emphasize it that way 00:24:456 (2,3) - or this way 00:27:541 (3,4,5) - . It would be nice if you could do it here as well?
00:37:484 (1,2) - Not sure what you tried to do here, but it doesn't follow anything. I'm suggesting you to start this slider to 00:38:170 - instead. The end should be alright tho.
00:45:027 (5,6) - This circle after this reversed slider might be too harsh for a normal. You're announcing to the player that they should be ready to catch the next object to the left, because the slider is going back from left-right to right-left, but yet, you might confuse many of them because you are going the opposite way, leaving it to be some kind of a jump. You should consider that. (Same thing for 01:23:427 (2,3) -, 01:24:970 (6,1) - , 02:59:426 (7,1) - , 03:18:626 (4,5) - , 03:32:341 (3,4) - )
00:45:884 (1,2) - Had any intentions on making a better blanket here? :>
03:37:484 (2) - These circles can be easily changed for a reversed slider as the main sounds are coming from 03:37:484 (2,3,6) -

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Zare

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Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-07T13:33:53+00:00

Gabe wrote:
hi!!

Easy
00:05:598 (2) - This circle would be more interesting to catch if it was moved to x:241 y:164 instead. You'll have to move your next object to keep your consistency tho
00:16:570 (3) - A 2,10x jump with the previous object? I don't think so. Keep this object's spacing consistent with your other objects, so that would be 1,50x.
00:45:713 (1,2) - If you listen closer, the slider (1) has more drum sounds than the slider (2), which makes an effect of transition between two measures.
You should consider adding a new combo to the slider (2) and delete the new combo to the next object. After that, try to keep your new combo consistency,
which was once every two measures. Come back to me after you're done with it.
00:59:427 (4,5) - I would change these two circles for a slider as it introduces the next slider and it's beat on the reverse arrow.
01:36:456 (2) - As your two previous objects are 2 4/1 sliders and they have a new combo to each, you should add a new combo to this slider as well. After doing this, delete the new combo to 01:37:827 (1) - and add a new combo to 01:39:198 (2) -
03:33:026 (1) - Inconsistent spacing. Keep it to 1,20x

Yes

Normal
you might wanna double-check the combos here as well.
00:35:427 (2) - This slider is ignoring the sound at 00:35:941 -, which you would normal emphasize it that way 00:24:456 (2,3) - or this way 00:27:541 (3,4,5) - . It would be nice if you could do it here as well? Aye
00:37:484 (1,2) - Not sure what you tried to do here, but it doesn't follow anything. I'm suggesting you to start this slider to 00:38:170 - instead. The end should be alright tho. Silly Gabe I'm following what i assume is some form of wind instrument here, you can hear it pretty clearly. But your version is probably easier to grasp anyway so I'm doing that.
00:45:027 (5,6) - This circle after this reversed slider might be too harsh for a normal. You're announcing to the player that they should be ready to catch the next object to the left, because the slider is going back from left-right to right-left, but yet, you might confuse many of them because you are going the opposite way, leaving it to be some kind of a jump. You should consider that. (Same thing for 01:23:427 (2,3) -, 01:24:970 (6,1) - , 02:59:426 (7,1) - , 03:18:626 (4,5) - , 03:32:341 (3,4) - ) I'm trying to teach players slider leniency while at the same time opening up myself for mor straightforward patterns. This shouldn't be a problem for the player after they've seen it once.
00:45:884 (1,2) - Had any intentions on making a better blanket here? :> Sure
03:37:484 (2) - These circles can be easily changed for a reversed slider as the main sounds are coming from 03:37:484 (2,3,6) - I like the kind of rising pressure from the circles though, as a finisher at the end, will keep this in mind tho

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Rotmas

Rotmas 2017-04-08T20:52:59+00:00

Plus Ultra

00:01:484 (6) - Strong bit on white tick, try do like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773506
00:04:227 (6) - Same
00:06:970 (6) -
00:07:998 (8) -
00:12:113 (3) -
00:12:798 (4) -
00:13:484 (5) -
00:14:170 (1) -
00:14:170 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773583
And many more, I hope you'll find it yourself
00:09:713 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773562 I think this better

New Combo

00:22:570 (2) -
00:23:084 (7) -
01:52:056 (3) -
01:52:398 (6) -
01:54:798 (4) -
01:55:141 (7) -
02:27:370 (2) -
02:27:884 (8) -
02:28:227 (12) -
02:47:084 (8) -
02:47:427 (12) -
02:51:541 (9) -
03:02:341 (6) -

Nice map, gj)

Zare

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Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-08T20:59:58+00:00

~~what~~

Rotmas wrote:
Plus Ultra
00:01:484 (6) - Strong bit on white tick, try do like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773506
00:04:227 (6) - Same
00:06:970 (6) -
00:07:998 (8) -
00:12:113 (3) -
00:12:798 (4) -
00:13:484 (5) -
00:14:170 (1) -
00:14:170 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773583
And many more, I hope you'll find it yourself
00:09:713 (5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7773562 I think this better

Putting anchors on these sliders wouldn't make much sense, the idea you're proposing only really works if there's audible notes in the music the slider can "break" on with an anchor point. The way I mapped it, that isn't the case so forcing anchors on them wouldn't really fit imo

New Combo

00:22:570 (2) -
00:23:084 (7) -
01:52:056 (3) -
01:52:398 (6) -
01:54:798 (4) -
01:55:141 (7) -
02:27:370 (2) -
02:27:884 (8) -
02:28:227 (12) -
02:47:084 (8) -
02:47:427 (12) -
02:51:541 (9) -
03:02:341 (6) -

I'm sticking with my simple "NC on every downbeat" pattern

Nice map, gj)

ztrot

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ztrot 2017-04-08T23:35:42+00:00

hello picked this up in modhelp!

[Easy]
overall I think this easy is pretty safe in terms of mapping style and creation, just a few small things you should get taken care of.
02:02:513 (2) - this object is not snapped. I'm aware this might be due to the timing changes set but you should still be able to get it to snap without it showing errors.
[Normal]
00:22:570 (2) - Suggestion. I don't think overlaps like this are very fitting it plays well i suppose but I am sure if you wanted you could create another pattern that isn't as clustered up than what you have here.

00:44:170 (3) - Suggestion. I see what you are going for here and i like it but small spacing changes like that could possibly trip up newbies not to say you can't do it but perhaps ctrl +G that slider and make adjustments that would flow better?

00:45:027 (5) - same for this guy here as well remember it is only a suggestion.

[Hard]
00:28:570 (5) - move this guy back one to the left to fit the condensed stream pattern.
00:34:056 (5) - ^

00:59:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - not a big deal but the combos here get a little strange i see why they do but i can't help but imagine someone is going to point this out sooner or later.

nothing really scream wrong in this diff tho good job.
[Insane guest diff]
00:23:084 (2) - I get this is insane but what does this break jump in the stream really do outside of making it harder to play it. I get there is a small break in the music but because the player is still hitting a 1/4 pattern all this does is make you grumpy from a players view point.

00:34:398 (6) - again there is imo nothing good about these type of break jumps just seems to be adding to difficulty for the sake of it.

01:08:684 (6) - I know these things are easy to fc now but when/if scorev2 happens you might as well kiss your acc good bye think about that.

01:25:141 (7,1) - here is an example you did not use the break jump on this pattern and it plays fine so you even show it can be done without the need for extra spacing @.@

if this was the final diff of the set it wouldn't bother me as much but it is not so I personally think things like this should be reserved for the final map in the set.

other than that this map is pretty decent nothing really that bad!

[Plus Ultra]
I like the diff name :3

00:22:913 (6) - I get this break and we saw it in the insane and just because you are using a slider for the end point does not justify it, granted i expect to see more stuff like this in this diff as it is the end game diff for your set. But there are other ways to do breaks like that think about how bad it plays if that wasn't a slider and how by using a slider you are taking advantage of how sliders are scored and played in a dated scoring system that for all intent is most likely out on its way and patterns like this begin to be a problem. I personally don't mind it here as it works. But food for thought.

whew this one is rough for me mouse needs major setting tweaks i can hardly get 74% on this lots of misses on the jumps on my part nothing really screams error in this one tho. Clean map you can tell a lot of time and thought went into this I hope everything goes well.

Zare

1,512 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-09T09:38:11+00:00

ztrot wrote:
hello picked this up in modhelp!

[Easy]
overall I think this easy is pretty safe in terms of mapping style and creation, just a few small things you should get taken care of.
02:02:513 (2) - this object is not snapped. I'm aware this might be due to the timing changes set but you should still be able to get it to snap without it showing errors. fixed
[Normal]
00:22:570 (2) - Suggestion. I don't think overlaps like this are very fitting it plays well i suppose but I am sure if you wanted you could create another pattern that isn't as clustered up than what you have here. eh, it's kind of a recurring theme but I guess this one's a little heavy, fixed.

00:44:170 (3) - Suggestion. I see what you are going for here and i like it but small spacing changes like that could possibly trip up newbies not to say you can't do it but perhaps ctrl +G that slider and make adjustments that would flow better? Keeping a close eye on this, ssliders this short can easily just be held in place and used as a stepping stone for the next object. If too many people dislike this, I'll change it.

00:45:027 (5) - same for this guy here as well remember it is only a suggestion.

[Hard]
00:28:570 (5) - move this guy back one to the left to fit the condensed stream pattern. excuse me u lost me here i have no idea what u mean, they're properly spaced?
00:34:056 (5) - ^

00:59:427 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - not a big deal but the combos here get a little strange i see why they do but i can't help but imagine someone is going to point this out sooner or later. aside from missing one NC and putting it on the note prior,
which I fixed, I don't think there's a problem tbh

nothing really scream wrong in this diff tho good job.

[Plus Ultra]
I like the diff name :3

00:22:913 (6) - I get this break and we saw it in the insane and just because you are using a slider for the end point does not justify it, granted i expect to see more stuff like this in this diff as it is the end game diff for your set. But there are other ways to do breaks like that think about how bad it plays if that wasn't a slider and how by using a slider you are taking advantage of how sliders are scored and played in a dated scoring system that for all intent is most likely out on its way and patterns like this begin to be a problem. I personally don't mind it here as it works. But food for thought. the point is that 00:22:998 - is VERY quiet compard to the rest of the stream so it wouldn't feel right just mapping a circle with the same intensity as the rest on it,
hence why I put a slider to weaken that one and emphasize the next circle with a small jump, but I already thought the slider might be too short and feel a little awkward to play, so this is definitely on my radar. I might increase the SV on the slider to put it a bit more in the spotlight or just make it a full circle stream with lower spacing for the first 4 notes. We'll see.

whew this one is rough for me mouse needs major setting tweaks i can hardly get 74% on this lots of misses on the jumps on my part nothing really screams error in this one tho. Clean map you can tell a lot of time and thought went into this I hope everything goes well.

thank

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-04-09T10:58:52+00:00

ztrot wrote:
[Insane guest diff]
00:23:084 (2) - I get this is insane but what does this break jump in the stream really do outside of making it harder to play it. I get there is a small break in the music but because the player is still hitting a 1/4 pattern all this does is make you grumpy from a players view point.

00:34:398 (6) - again there is imo nothing good about these type of break jumps just seems to be adding to difficulty for the sake of it.

01:08:684 (6) - I know these things are easy to fc now but when/if scorev2 happens you might as well kiss your acc good bye think about that.

01:25:141 (7,1) - here is an example you did not use the break jump on this pattern and it plays fine so you even show it can be done without the need for extra spacing @.@

if this was the final diff of the set it wouldn't bother me as much but it is not so I personally think things like this should be reserved for the final map in the set.

other than that this map is pretty decent nothing really that bad!

applied all, thank you!
tfw sudden blackouts happened while i'm doing self hitsounding so i re-copied the hs of highest diff instead for now aaa yes my place is always having some non scheduled blackouts

upd

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diraimur

547 posts

Joined December 2013

diraimur 2017-04-09T12:41:33+00:00

plus ultra
- 00:19:656 (4) - not a huge deal but i think this should be nc'd since you nc every other downbeat up until this point
- 00:42:970 - finish?
- 00:57:198 (4) - i feel like this note is not emphasised enough for such a strong sound. compare this spacing 00:50:684 (6,7,1) - to that one
- 01:04:913 - i think there should be finish here
- 01:18:456 (5) - i think you forgot a nc here
- 02:03:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - im actually not sure if this is a good idea since there is bpm change and stuff, and imo this part of the song is kinda calm so this spacing is kinda high, i would probably like repeat sliders more there, but if you dont want that, consider decreasing spacing a little bit so that at least followpoints are not visible.
- 02:07:998 (1) - mov this one osu!pixel left so it blankets better
- 02:09:198 (3,1) - fix ur blanket /me runs
- 02:20:341 (1,2) - same
- 03:22:055 - 03:27:541 - 03:33:026 - maybe additions soft on those parts? sounds better i think but idk

Zare

1,512 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-09T12:55:21+00:00

Applied everything aside from the 1/3 part, I will ask a few playtesters and then deceide regarding that

Voli

811 posts

Joined April 2013

Voli 2017-04-09T17:55:12+00:00

[Hard]

00:00:449 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like a rhtyhm such as this would fit better here, mainly so you don't skip the sound here for no reason 00:01:134 - https://voli.s-ul.eu/amGjZh1M.png -- just as you did here 00:05:934 (1,2,3) -

00:03:191 (1) - but you kinda just skip all the sounds here that you mapped to previously

00:03:191 (1,2) - mm if you keep this rhythm wouldnt you just make the sliders the same

00:07:134 - why don't you map these sounds 00:06:449 (2,3) - here aswell? they just repeat themselves so it's kinda weird if you follow one of them but not the other

00:17:934 (2,3) - I'd personally either place this note so it follows (2)'s curve or blanket it with (2) but thats just me, the placement looks kinda random atm

00:42:277 (4,5) - wouldn't it be cool if these angles were a bit sharper and a bit more spaced like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/1x2K11cA.png the sounds get a lot more intense there so that'd make sense

00:45:877 (2) - perhaps just stack it on the slider, having them loose at both ends makes it kinda weird to read imo

00:46:563 (7) - mmmm dis shape is kinda lame for this gliding sound, why not sth like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/5DlwoVXT.png

01:18:963 (2) - move it so that it follows the curve of 1? makes for a better pattern and transition i tihnk

01:33:020 (4) - triple here?

02:54:107 (4) - ctrl+h maybe

02:54:621 (1) - increase spacing here, big emphasis

looks good

[Akitoshi's Insane]

00:37:820 (2) - why does this end on the blue tick? you didn't do that anywhere before with these patterns

00:40:563 (4) - here aswell, wouldn't it be better to end it on the red tick cuz theres a sound aswell as opposed to blue

00:48:277 (1) - note>slider better here? there are sounds on both the red tick and downbeat

01:15:191 (3) - 1/4 slider instead of a note to capture the percussion sound on the redtick?

01:18:963 (2,3,4) - man this feels so underwhelming for a transition to this exciting part and kinda bland aswell, can't you do something with escalating spacing and notes? and at least map the triple here 01:19:220 -

looks clean aswell

[Plus Ultra]

00:06:456 (2) - maybe move this note to around x376 y32 so that the jump to the triple isnt unnecessarily huge and matches more with 00:03:713 (2,3) -

00:16:906 (1,2) - decrease spacing between these cuz theres barely anything warranting a jump to (2), so 00:19:306 (3) - gets more power

00:28:220 (2,3,4,5) - i kinda dislike when maps do this, ik its personal taste but why does the angle have to be so weird? https://voli.s-ul.eu/2LxGjqzk.png xd cant we just ctrlg or sth

00:31:820 (8) - decrease spacing a bit cuz less powerful than 00:31:306 (5,6) -

00:40:563 (3) - i feel these sharp noises would be portrayed better if you used 2 circles instead like you did here 00:43:306 (2,3) -

00:45:363 (8,9) - feels overdone spacing compared to 00:44:677 (3,4) -

00:54:534 (4,5) - this would play better imo https://voli.s-ul.eu/dz7cqhVR.png

01:02:849 (5) - sliderend isnt snapped prperly

01:19:991 - hmm woudl be hard to change that now but i think it'd be way more exciting if you used some SV changes for parts like this because the guitar or whatever is so much more intense lol

02:03:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try putting drum clap additions on the first 4 notes and drum addition finishes on the last two, it matches perfectly

02:25:821 (1,2,3) - wats with the finish spam wouldnt whistles work better here?

03:36:107 (3,4,5,6,7) - vs 03:37:650 (4,5,6,7,8) - , i think the first pattern should be spaced more than the second one because the music is way more aggressive there unless you did this cuz of the background choir thing

looks pretty solid, gl

AllieBork

83 posts

Joined August 2010

AllieBork 2017-04-09T18:02:36+00:00

Hi

Easy

New Combos are a bit messy at the first 24 seconds, after that mostly flawless. Put them on the large white ticks, and staying consistent (the rest of the map seems to prove you know this, but still worth stating)
00:03:191 (3,1) - switch NC here
00:11:420 (3,1) - ^
00:05:934 (3) - Nc here
00:14:163 (2) - NC here to match with 00:08:677 (1)
00:19:649 (3,1,2) - IMO best to literally flip the NC for all of them
00:23:763 (4,1) - New combo
01:03:534 (3) - ^
01:06:277 (3,1) - switch NC
03:39:707 (1) - I don't think a new combo fits here (but it's a nitpick, can ignore)

Odd issues here and there:
01:03:877 (4,1) - no reason to have this break here, should add a hitcircle. Music doesn't stop, neither should the map.
01:22:734 (1) - The slider goes off the grid (possibly offscreen in 4:3)
01:30:963 (1) - Same but less certain that it goes offscreen (it's slightly different in gameplay than in editor as far as I can tell)
01:41:934 (1) - Sliders like this don't belong in Easy difficulties (ranking guidelines) Make it a more intuitive shape to follow
02:31:307 (1,2,3) - Maybe remap this to make it like this image?
It's really awkward with the song as it is now. Although it is easy I think that timing pattern would be acceptable, as I don't really see another way to map it.
03:30:279 (1) - this could be blanketed a bit better
02:47:764 (1,1) - not entirely sure, but AIMod is eggy about the Kiai here. Since there's no hitcircles, I don't know whether it's appropriate which way.

Overall: a fun and well designed Easy difficulty, I like the return sliders a lot. Great job, just the odd.

Normal

00:08:677 (1) - this could be blanketed slightly better (nitpick)
00:31:991 (1,2,3) - the slider starts on the downbeat but ends on the upbeat. Plays unintuitively. Change it either to circle-circle-slider (ccs), which preserves the pattern from earlier, two sliders with a 1/4 gap, or slider-circle-circle (scc), if you want to keep the 1/4 with circle.
00:43:649 (2) - this pattern comes up later as well. I like the idea but I don't think it's appropriate for normal, because it combines a break in distance spacing, and makes an overlap with the next note. I think it's appropriate to either just ctrl + G it, or to place it sideways. Might have to rework the section slightly to fit distance spacing. But [url=https://i.gyazo.com/be8e7132563209da9d2cd260d4b357ec.png]this plays a lot better than what's currently there,
in my opinion, already.[/url]
01:04:391 (2) - consider what I said above to apply here as well.
01:23:420 (2) - ^
01:24:963 (6) - ^
02:59:421 (7) - ^

00:45:020 (5,6) - the hitcircle on the red tick is unintuitive, you could just extend the repeat slider instead.
03:18:621 (4,5) - ^
03:32:336 (7,8) - ^

01:10:220 (3) - this overlaps with the slider before it, which makes it feel crammed. Would be better something like this IMO
01:21:191 (2) - could blanket this
01:35:763 (5) - consider new combo here? It's not necessary, but it's a new phrase in the music, seems appropriate.
02:38:850 (5) - ^
02:01:134 (1) - could make this curve the opposite direction of the slider after it, having the same shape since it's the same sound.
02:29:936 (4) - NC
02:58:736 (5) - NC here so you don't need it
03:11:079 (1) - could blanket better
03:39:707 (1) - Same thing with the NC as in Easy, I don't think it fits. Nitpick though.

Overall: Just like Easy, it's made well and enjoyable, follows the music well, just mostly some small issues that could change to make it better for newer players.

Zare

1,512 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-09T23:56:41+00:00

[box=[quote="AllieBork":1337:1337]Hi

Easy

New Combos are a bit messy at the first 24 seconds, after that mostly flawless. Put them on the large white ticks, and staying consistent (the rest of the map seems to prove you know this, but still worth stating)
00:03:191 (3,1) - switch NC here
00:11:420 (3,1) - ^
00:05:934 (3) - Nc here
00:14:163 (2) - NC here to match with 00:08:677 (1)
00:19:649 (3,1,2) - IMO best to literally flip the NC for all of them
00:23:763 (4,1) - New combo
01:03:534 (3) - ^
01:06:277 (3,1) - switch NC
03:39:707 (1) - I don't think a new combo fits here (but it's a nitpick, can ignore)

Odd issues here and there:
01:03:877 (4,1) - no reason to have this break here, should add a hitcircle. Music doesn't stop, neither should the map.
01:22:734 (1) - The slider goes off the grid (possibly offscreen in 4:3)
01:30:963 (1) - Same but less certain that it goes offscreen (it's slightly different in gameplay than in editor as far as I can tell)
01:41:934 (1) - Sliders like this don't belong in Easy difficulties (ranking guidelines) Make it a more intuitive shape to follow
02:31:307 (1,2,3) - Maybe remap this to make it like this image?
It's really awkward with the song as it is now. Although it is easy I think that timing pattern would be acceptable, as I don't really see another way to map it.
03:30:279 (1) - this could be blanketed a bit better
02:47:764 (1,1) - not entirely sure, but AIMod is eggy about the Kiai here. Since there's no hitcircles, I don't know whether it's appropriate which way.

Overall: a fun and well designed Easy difficulty, I like the return sliders a lot. Great job, just the odd.

Normal

00:08:677 (1) - this could be blanketed slightly better (nitpick)
00:31:991 (1,2,3) - the slider starts on the downbeat but ends on the upbeat. Plays unintuitively. Change it either to circle-circle-slider (ccs), which preserves the pattern from earlier, two sliders with a 1/4 gap, or slider-circle-circle (scc), if you want to keep the 1/4 with circle.
00:43:649 (2) - this pattern comes up later as well. I like the idea but I don't think it's appropriate for normal, because it combines a break in distance spacing, and makes an overlap with the next note. I think it's appropriate to either just ctrl + G it, or to place it sideways. Might have to rework the section slightly to fit distance spacing. But [url=https://i.gyazo.com/be8e7132563209da9d2cd260d4b357ec.png]this plays a lot better than what's currently there,
in my opinion, already.[/url]
01:04:391 (2) - consider what I said above to apply here as well.
01:23:420 (2) - ^
01:24:963 (6) - ^
02:59:421 (7) - ^

00:45:020 (5,6) - the hitcircle on the red tick is unintuitive, you could just extend the repeat slider instead.
03:18:621 (4,5) - ^
03:32:336 (7,8) - ^

01:10:220 (3) - this overlaps with the slider before it, which makes it feel crammed. Would be better something like this IMO
01:21:191 (2) - could blanket this
01:35:763 (5) - consider new combo here? It's not necessary, but it's a new phrase in the music, seems appropriate.
02:38:850 (5) - ^
02:01:134 (1) - could make this curve the opposite direction of the slider after it, having the same shape since it's the same sound.
02:29:936 (4) - NC
02:58:736 (5) - NC here so you don't need it
03:11:079 (1) - could blanket better
03:39:707 (1) - Same thing with the NC as in Easy, I don't think it fits. Nitpick though.

Overall: Just like Easy, it's made well and enjoyable, follows the music well, just mostly some small issues that could change to make it better for newer players.]

Voli wrote:
[Hard]

00:00:449 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like a rhtyhm such as this would fit better here, mainly so you don't skip the sound here for no reason 00:01:134 - https://voli.s-ul.eu/amGjZh1M.png -- just as you did here 00:05:934 (1,2,3) - done

00:03:191 (1) - but you kinda just skip all the sounds here that you mapped to previously idk, variation rules. i dont think it feels bad at all

00:03:191 (1,2) - mm if you keep this rhythm wouldnt you just make the sliders the samei... guess?

00:07:134 - why don't you map these sounds 00:06:449 (2,3) - here aswell? they just repeat themselves so it's kinda weird if you follow one of them but not the other what

00:17:934 (2,3) - I'd personally either place this note so it follows (2)'s curve or blanket it with (2) but thats just me, the placement looks kinda random atm idea is a symmetrical pattern with the next circle

00:42:277 (4,5) - wouldn't it be cool if these angles were a bit sharper and a bit more spaced like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/1x2K11cA.png the sounds get a lot more intense there so that'd make sense I'll look at doing some jump stuffs in this diff, will prob do this as well then

00:45:877 (2) - perhaps just stack it on the slider, having them loose at both ends makes it kinda weird to read imo but automatic stacks suck

00:46:563 (7) - mmmm dis shape is kinda lame for this gliding sound, why not sth like this? https://voli.s-ul.eu/5DlwoVXT.png sure

01:18:963 (2) - move it so that it follows the curve of 1? makes for a better pattern and transition i tihnkhmmm, i don't really agree

01:33:020 (4) - triple here? yes

02:54:107 (4) - ctrl+h maybe yes

02:54:621 (1) - increase spacing here, big emphasis

looks good

[Plus Ultra]

00:06:456 (2) - maybe move this note to around x376 y32 so that the jump to the triple isnt unnecessarily huge and matches more with 00:03:713 (2,3) - yes

00:16:906 (1,2) - decrease spacing between these cuz theres barely anything warranting a jump to (2), so 00:19:306 (3) - gets more power yes

00:28:220 (2,3,4,5) - i kinda dislike when maps do this, ik its personal taste but why does the angle have to be so weird? https://voli.s-ul.eu/2LxGjqzk.png xd cant we just ctrlg or sth ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

00:31:820 (8) - decrease spacing a bit cuz less powerful than 00:31:306 (5,6) - yes

00:40:563 (3) - i feel these sharp noises would be portrayed better if you used 2 circles instead like you did here 00:43:306 (2,3) - problem is my map would turn into a 1/2 circle fest with no emphasis if I did this so I suck with some sliders

00:45:363 (8,9) - feels overdone spacing compared to 00:44:677 (3,4) - it's fine, big note on that 9

00:54:534 (4,5) - this would play better imo https://voli.s-ul.eu/dz7cqhVR.png ehh... naaah.

01:02:849 (5) - sliderend isnt snapped prperly Oh whoops thanks

01:19:991 - hmm woudl be hard to change that now but i think it'd be way more exciting if you used some SV changes for parts like this because the guitar or whatever is so much more intense lol yeah well that would require some heavy restructuring, don't think it's worth it

02:03:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try putting drum clap additions on the first 4 notes and drum addition finishes on the last two, it matches perfectly yes

02:25:821 (1,2,3) - wats with the finish spam wouldnt whistles work better here? big buildup leading up to kiai, i think this is fine

03:36:107 (3,4,5,6,7) - vs 03:37:650 (4,5,6,7,8) - , i think the first pattern should be spaced more than the second one because the music is way more aggressive there unless you did this cuz of the background choir thing overall feeling gets more intense though

looks pretty solid, gl

AllieBork

AllieBork wrote:
Hi

Easy

New Combos are a bit messy at the first 24 seconds, after that mostly flawless. Put them on the large white ticks, and staying consistent (the rest of the map seems to prove you know this, but still worth stating) Noo idea what happened here, should be better now
00:03:191 (3,1) - switch NC here
00:11:420 (3,1) - ^
00:05:934 (3) - Nc here
00:14:163 (2) - NC here to match with 00:08:677 (1)
00:19:649 (3,1,2) - IMO best to literally flip the NC for all of them
00:23:763 (4,1) - New combo
01:03:534 (3) - ^
01:06:277 (3,1) - switch NC
03:39:707 (1) - I don't think a new combo fits here (but it's a nitpick, can ignore)

Odd issues here and there:
01:03:877 (4,1) - no reason to have this break here, should add a hitcircle. Music doesn't stop, neither should the map. yes
01:22:734 (1) - The slider goes off the grid (possibly offscreen in 4:3) yes
01:30:963 (1) - Same but less certain that it goes offscreen (it's slightly different in gameplay than in editor as far as I can tell)shud be fine
01:41:934 (1) - Sliders like this don't belong in Easy difficulties (ranking guidelines) Make it a more intuitive shape to follow yes
02:31:307 (1,2,3) - Maybe remap this to make it like this image?
It's really awkward with the song as it is now. Although it is easy I think that timing pattern would be acceptable, as I don't really see another way to map it. aaahhhhh idk this part kind of sucks for Easy diff, I definitely don't want a 1/2 gap here so I think im sticking with my solution.
03:30:279 (1) - this could be blanketed a bit better yes
02:47:764 (1,1) - not entirely sure, but AIMod is eggy a bout the Kiai here. Since there's no hitcircles, I don't know whether it's appropriate which way. AIMod is tsundere

Overall: a fun and well designed Easy difficulty, I like the return sliders a lot. Great job, just the odd.

Normal

00:08:677 (1) - this could be blanketed slightly better (nitpick) yes
00:31:991 (1,2,3) - the slider starts on the downbeat but ends on the upbeat. Plays unintuitively. Change it either to circle-circle-slider (ccs), which preserves the pattern from earlier, two sliders with a 1/4 gap, or slider-circle-circle (scc), if you want to keep the 1/4 with circle. im following melody tho, it should be fine
00:43:649 (2) - this pattern comes up later as well. I like the idea but I don't think it's appropriate for normal, because it combines a break in distance spacing, and makes an overlap with the next note. I think it's appropriate to either just ctrl + G it, or to place it sideways. Might have to rework the section slightly to fit distance spacing. But [url=https://i.gyazo.com/be8e7132563209da9d2cd260d4b357ec.png]this plays a lot better than what's currently there,
in my opinion, already.[/url] aight u guys don't seem to like it so I'm changing them, still not convinced they're that bad tho
01:04:391 (2) - consider what I said above to apply here as well.
01:23:420 (2) - ^
01:24:963 (6) - ^
02:59:421 (7) - ^

00:45:020 (5,6) - the hitcircle on the red tick is unintuitive, you could just extend the repeat slider instead. how are they unintuitive
03:18:621 (4,5) - ^
03:32:336 (7,8) - ^

01:10:220 (3) - this overlaps with the slider before it, which makes it feel crammed. yesWould be better something like this IMO
01:21:191 (2) - could blanket this naah, moved them tho
01:35:763 (5) - consider new combo here? It's not necessary, but it's a new phrase in the music, seems appropriate. id like to stick with simple NC pattern
02:38:850 (5) - ^
02:01:134 (1) - could make this curve the opposite direction of the slider after it, having the same shape since it's the same sound. yes
02:29:936 (4) - NC nayyyy
02:58:736 (5) - NC here so you don't need it
03:11:079 (1) - could blanket better yes
03:39:707 (1) - Same thing with the NC as in Easy, I don't think it fits. Nitpick though.yes

Overall: Just like Easy, it's made well and enjoyable, follows the music well, just mostly some small issues that could change to make it better for newer players.

Zare

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Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-10T00:03:14+00:00

I can literally not edit that post wtf

AllieBork

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AllieBork 2017-04-10T00:07:03+00:00

Zare wrote:
I can literally not edit that post wtf

Weird

Anyhow, want me to explain why the triplet slider + hitcircle on red tick is unintuitive?
Firstly, the spacing is inconsistent with the surroundings because of the placements. Secondly, it's not a stronger sound than the other sounds. Thirdly, it's a red tick, i.e. on a downbeat for the difficulty. Newer players will have trouble with this.

Zare

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Topic Starter

Zare 2017-04-10T00:23:24+00:00

Mmm, I know what you mean but like 00:45:534 (6) - this is very obviously a more distinct sound, warranting the circle. In some of the other parts, extending the slider by adding another reverse arrow would make more sense musically, as they're mapped on beatpairings of 4 and not 3, but the sad reality is that players don't care much about musical correctness and are more likely to be confused by having two reverses on the same slider, after all, it's much more common to have only singular reverse arrows on any slider that aren't buzz sliders. They play based on what they see, not based on what they can expect from the music, and I think they'd have much more trouble with an added reverse arrow over an added circle.

Touhou

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Joined January 2014

Touhou 2017-04-10T13:19:07+00:00

[In game disussion regarding spread issue between Normal and Hard]

SPOILER

14:44 Touhou: have you read [http://osuqat.tumblr.com/post/151834390075/the-way-we-do-spreads-is-actually-really-weird this?]
14:45 Zare: reading now
14:48 Zare: cool so
14:48 Zare: spacing is a concept is bullshit
14:48 Zare: interesting
14:50 Zare: interestinggly I do use differing spacing in Normals, specifically I use 0.8 for 1/2 gaps and 1.0 for 1/1 gaps
14:50 Zare: feels more intuitive to me
14:50 Zare: I guess that could be expanded on
14:51 Touhou: I've checked your normal and hard
14:52 Touhou: normal could use 0.1 more snap, that way you may end up 2.25 and have a bit more clarity in the crowded places
14:52 Touhou: 03:33:707 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - such as these
14:53 Zare: u mean 0.9 isntead of 0.8
14:53 Touhou: yeah
14:54 Touhou: 03:39:021 (2,3,4) - parts like these could be 1.1
14:55 Touhou: I mean, it's fine as it is, that's just a way to buff the diff a bit without ruining it
14:55 Zare: i might do that actually
14:55 Zare: yeah
14:56 Touhou: good decision on having your hard diff a bit more spaced
14:57 Touhou: that way the transition between hard and insane isn't huge
14:57 Touhou: I would personally work a bit on object density instead
14:57 Touhou: 00:00:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - the intro for instance could have a few long sliders, the part is really calm as it is anyway
14:58 Touhou: 00:11:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - something like this maybe
14:58 Touhou: I mean, that's not the source of the issue, but it could help a little
14:59 Touhou: it's probably parts like these 03:28:564 (5,1) - that boost the star rating
15:00 Touhou: I would keep it however, as star rating is just a number, easy to manipulate by spacing like in this case
15:02 Touhou: comparing your hard to other (more recent) hard diffs of the same bpm, it appears that your object density is quite high
15:03 *Touhou is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1003885 Pierce The Veil - Texas Is Forever [pkhg's Hard]]
15:03 Touhou: this diff for instance doesn't use any, instead it has repeat sliders
15:03 Zare: well my initial idea was to use density as the main selling point of the diff
15:03 Zare: and then people came along "do more jumps lul"
15:03 Touhou: I know the bpm is different, but that's how they kept the diff rating low
15:04 Touhou: hmm I see
15:04 Touhou: you do have an about equal density spacing on all of your diffs
15:05 Touhou: tbh, the only REAL solution to this would be to make a diff between normal and hard
15:05 Touhou: without any triplets
15:06 Zare: yeah fuck that
15:06 Touhou: then you should consider replacing some triplets by repeats maybe
15:06 Touhou: like, only having 1 triplet instead of 2 in a row
15:06 Touhou: something like that may help
15:07 Touhou: 02:50:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - tbh I think it's good like this though
15:07 Touhou: changing this would be BS
15:08 Touhou: 03:16:050 (4,5,6) - but this one could be changed imo
15:09 Touhou: well, I hope this gave you some ideas on how to approach this issue
15:09 Zare: yeah
15:09 Zare: thanks
15:09 Touhou: you don't have to change it though, it's a solid spread
15:10 Touhou: so just let the QATs decide I guess

15:13 Touhou: ehh do you want the star priority for this "semi" mod?
15:13 Touhou: or can I close it? xd
15:14 Zare: you can post the log
15:14 Zare: if you want
15:14 Zare: this is kd worthy i'd say
15:14 Touhou: I don't need kudosu, but it may help you
15:15 Touhou: as you can show that you've considered this spread issue already
15:15 Touhou: alright, gonna post

Good luck, this song and mapset would make a nice addition to osu!

Milkshake

532 posts

Joined August 2011

Milkshake 2017-04-10T13:48:12+00:00

uguuu~

Easy

• 00:11:420 (1,2) - as an easy player, I'd find this sudden change in rhythm confusing. I'd map the same rhythm as you did in 00:00:449 (1,2) - for instance. or you could keep it that way, but the spacing could be the reason it might be confusing.
• 00:39:534 - would make it clickable for the sake of consistency
• 00:40:220 (1) - sounds a bit weird, to be honest. it's not like it's "wrong" or anything, but I'd map it the same way you did in 00:31:991 (1,2,3) -
• 00:45:706 (1) - I suggest turning this kickslider into a long slider instead, from 00:45:706 - to 00:46:734 - ^_^
• 01:00:106 (5) - more of a suggestion, but the NCing from here is a bit weird. I'd make an NC here, then at 01:03:877 (1) - and at 01:06:277 (5) - - (join 01:06:963 (1) - to it~). I hope you got my idea, because it's a bit hard for me to put in words

Normal

• 00:06:963 (4) - I'd remove (5) and lengthen the slider to 00:07:649 - . might be more comfy to play.
• 00:46:391 (2) - I'd start this slider from 00:46:391 - since it's currently a bit confusing.
• 00:48:449 - maybe NC here?
• 00:56:506 (4) - ^
• 01:47:077 (7,8) - turn these 2 into a slider. would probably play better for normal players ^_^
• 02:01:134 (9) - NC pls
• 02:38:850 - ^
• 02:50:164 (1) - why is there a new combo here?
I actually like this diff quite a bit. it's well made

Hard

• 00:01:820 (6,7) - not so sure why rhythm these two follow. I'd suggest turning it to

• 00:41:249 (4,1,2) - I'd change it to

since there's a pause at 00:41:591 - :3
• 00:45:877 (2,3,4) - it's a bit confusing. I'd turn it into 2 short sliders starting at 00:45:877 - and 00:46:134 - (like doubles)
• 01:40:563 (1) - don't think there's a reason for nc here
• 03:06:793 (5,1) - I'd remove 5 and make 1 start from there. sounds better imo

Akitoshi's Insanel

• 00:33:020 (5,1) - - ruins the flow kinda, I'd make it a bit more like this:

• 01:15:706 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm here sounds a bit off. I think you should make 01:16:649 - clickable, as there's a drum sound here.
• 01:32:677 (2) - end it on the red tick. blue isn't really "wrong" but it just sounds worse.
• 02:15:536 (1) - I get the idea, but I'd remove the NC anyway
• 02:44:679 - I'd remove the note here
• 02:48:793 (5) - it sounds a bit off. I'd remove the slider and just place a circle/whatever at 02:48:964 -

really cool diff!

Plus Ultral

I really like this mapset overall. It's really well made. I hope my mod is useful and good luck ranking it

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