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Kirisakiii

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-16T13:35:59+00:00

Yahuri wrote:
Kirisakiii wrote:
Normal
00:59:787 (3) - note here 00:59:970 - isnt loud enough for a repeat slider imo hmm more so I'm doing this to follow 00:56:861 (5) so I think I'm gonna keep it this way. edit: would it be okay if I put a whistle there? the purpose of hitsounding is to emphasize what already exists, not to add what doesn't exist (imo) (note: everything i tell you will be based upon this), so remove whistle then I guess we'll have to leave it as it is. removed.
01:23:202 (3) - 01:23:385 - ^ ^ ^ ^
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap A clap at 01:33:080 (6) is a must but not for this imo since it only compliments well with a finish after that. it seems overused to me ^ i still stand by what i said above because the clap sound is pretty clear at 01:35:092fixed
01:33:812 (1) - 01:35:641 (3) - sliders have really weird shapes in comparison to the other sliders, why? bad taste I suppose xd hopefully this one is nicer ;w; these ones are better, though you can clear up the shapes and (probably) the blankets as well by using only 2 anchor points. you can refer to my diff for reference sliders if you'd like (or you can use a similarly structured slider like this from Hard 01:33:812 (1) Two-anchor sliders are harder than it looks if I have to consider other stuffs like making a curve along 01:33:080 (6) or overlapping 01:32:714 (5) but I managed to reduce it to three anchors if thats okay :9

Hard
00:10:314 (3,1) - why stack here? uhh.. because..? well anyways there is only 1 stack through the whole intro, so the stack really sticks out, so if you don't have a good reason for it then you should probably remove it probably personal preference but okay. changed.

Yahuri's Novel
remap kds
wait what modding meme xd
Lonesome Dreams wrote:
From my dreamy timing queue.
As requested I checked the first offset. You were right, the offset was a bit late so I changed it to -1181 and sounds better to me.
I hope this was helpful
Sounds good to me

Hitsounding recheck dont make the change if you think i made a mistake obviously Dx
Also commented down a few that I have changed myself
Easy
00:01:795 - add whistle added
00:14:758 (2) - ^ (the hi-hat sound occurs here, rather than the next note, that's just guitar) oh yea
00:15:129 - remove whistle done
00:42:958 - add whistle ok
00:48:812 - ^ ^
00:50:275 - ^ ^
00:51:739 (1) - remove whistle add clap on all 3 endpoints of slider ^
00:52:836 (2) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish ^
00:56:129 - remove whistle ^
00:59:056 - ^ ^
00:59:422 (2) - add whistle ^
01:01:983 - remove whistle ^
01:04:909 - ^ ^
01:06:373 - add whistle ^
01:07:104 - add clap ^
01:07:653 - add whistle ^
01:07:653 - ^ noticed that too after that
01:08:019 (3) - ^ on both endpoints ^
01:11:129 - add whistle done
01:11:861 - remove whistle ^
01:16:251 (2) - add clap ^
01:16:617 - add finish^
01:17:348 - add clap ^
01:19:544 - remove whistle ^
01:22:470 - ^ ^
01:22:836 (2) - add whistle ^
01:25:397 - remove whistle ^
01:28:324 - ^ ^
01:30:519 - ^ and add clap ^
01:30:885 (2) - remove whistle on head, add whistle on tail ^
01:35:275 - remove whistle ^
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:38:202 (2) - remove whistle ^
01:39:665 - ^ and add clap ^
01:39:848 - ^ and add clap ^
01:42:044 - add finish ^
01:43:324 - remove whistle, add drum-hitfinish ^
01:43:873 - ^ ^
01:44:056 - ^ ^

Normal
00:01:795 - add whistle ok
00:14:758 (2) - ^ ^
00:30:336 - remove whistle ^
00:32:714 (2,3,4,1) - not hitsounding related lol but ctrl+g 3 and 4 for smoother flow out of 2 and into 1 changed
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too) fixed; I like it this way so just gonna keep it >.>[/color]
00:48:446 - remove whistle ^
00:55:946 - add whistle ^
00:56:129 (3) - remove whistle ^
01:08:934 - ^ ^
01:10:397 - ^ ^
01:11:129 - add whistle ^
01:15:153 - add finish ^
01:16:251 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:16:617 (3) - I added a finish here
01:17:531 - add drum-hitfinish ^ and removed whistle
01:17:714 - ^ ^ and removed whistle
01:19:361 - add whistle done
01:19:544 - remove whistle ^
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:38:202 - remove whistle ^
01:38:934 - add whistle ^
01:39:665 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:39:848 - ^ ^
01:42:592 - add finish ^ and removed whistle
01:43:324 (4) - add whistle fixed to drum-hitfinish instead

Hard
00:01:795 - add whistle fixed
00:14:758 - ^ ^
00:20:824 - remove whistle ^
00:26:678 - ^ ^
00:38:568 - ^ ^
00:44:422 - ^ ^
00:48:263 - remove whistle (though this sounds like a ghost note as well, maybe remove repeat too) removed; same thing with Normal
00:48:446 - remove whistle ^
00:52:287 (4) - add clap fixed
00:53:019 (6) - remove clap add drum-hitfinish ^
00:59:422 - add whistle ^
01:01:068 (2,3) - not hitsound related: overlap doesnt look good because 2 is overlapping with the tail of 3, would look better if only overlap with slider body or no overlap at all fixed
01:06:007 (3) - remove whistle^
01:07:470 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:019 - add whistle ^
01:11:861 (6) - remove whistle ^
01:13:324 (3) - ^ ^
01:14:787 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:519 - add whistle ^
01:16:251 - add clap ^
01:16:617 (3) - fixed to whistle and finish
01:16:800 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:16:983 - ^ ^
01:17:165 - add finish ^
01:17:531 - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:17:714 (5) - fixed to drum-hitfinish
01:17:897 - remove whistle ^
01:29:422 (3) - ^ ^
01:30:885 (2) - ^ ^
01:34:544 - remove clap add whistle ^
01:35:092 - remove whistle add clap ^
01:35:275 (3) - remove clap and whistle on both endpoints
01:35:641 - add finish ^
01:39:665 (2,3) - remove whistle add clap ^
01:42:409 - remove whistle ^
01:43:324 (4) - remove whistle add drum-hitfinish ^
01:43:873 (6,7) - ^ ^

Novel
01:17:348 (2) - add clap XD I'll fixed this along with the new offset and just update it
had a small error in preview time as well so I also fixed that
idk about the kiai time difference tho

thanks! still new to hitsounding so I managed to find some of my stupid mistakes as well ;-; it was a great help

Kyouren

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Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2017-01-18T11:02:25+00:00

No Kudosu because this is metadata check!

http://bungo-stray-dogs.jp/goods/?mode=music

22. 名前を呼ぶよ（TV Size）
作詞・作曲：PON　編曲：ラックライフ　歌：ラックライフ

I found that from original soundtrack, so

Title: 名前を呼ぶよ（TV Size）
Romaji Title: Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)

Good luck! :3

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-18T15:24:08+00:00

KittyAdventure wrote:
No Kudosu because this is metadata check!

http://bungo-stray-dogs.jp/goods/?mode=music
22. 名前を呼ぶよ（TV Size）
作詞・作曲：PON　編曲：ラックライフ　歌：ラックライフ
I found that from original soundtrack, so
aa didnt know

Title: 名前を呼ぶよ（TV Size）
Romaji Title: Namae wo Yobu yo (TV Size)

Good luck! :3

thanks!

updated.

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2017-01-18T15:55:18+00:00

Oh yeah I'm late sorry for that, kill me.

[General]

Video offset is inconsistent in Yahuri's Novel.
Recheck AiMod pls your metadata conflicts in Easy.

[Easy]

A combo colour in Easy are inconsistent with other diffs so yeah try rechecking that again, the purple one with 102,102,255.
00:16:596 (1,1) - The recovery is not really sufficient for Easy, would be sufficient if the spinner ended at 00:18:078 but it's kinda lame spot to put a spinner there so yeah might as well use a long slider instead.
00:27:592 (3,1) - DS
01:07:470 (2,3) - 01:30:885 (2,3) - Probably a no-go lol, using this kind of rhythm in Easy is already edgy to begin with, plus the intensity on these places isn't really different from the rest of kiai so using denser rhythms doesn't really fit here.

[Normal]

00:38:568 (3,4) - 01:24:665 (2,3) - DS on these places can be polished a bit.
01:11:861 (5,1) - The stack looks pretty random tho, I mean you barely did this anywhere else so better unstack it (unless you have a reason behind this ofc).
01:42:044 (2,3) - Using the same rhythm as Hard plays much better imo cuz you wanna prioritize 01:42:592 than 01:42:958 since the sound is clearly stronger and there's nothing on 01:42:958 so that one shouldn't be even clickable lol

[Hard]

00:27:592 (6,1) - 01:09:665 (7,1) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - 01:43:690 (5,6,7) - Recheck your spacings pls
Actually around this part 00:42:226 your DS kinda swings between 1.4-1.5 I don't know which one you're going for but try polish them a bit more.
00:44:056 - Add whistle.
00:52:653 - You mapped this in Normal but not in Hard? There's a drum roll here so rhythm should be denser than just a 1/2 slider anyways.
01:01:068 (2,3) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - Overlaps which you didn't do anywhere else so it kinda breaks consistency from what you're usually do.
1. The main idea of this is like, if you usually don't do overlaps and then you suddenly do it, then you should have reasonings for doing an overlap, "Does this overlap express anything from the song?", "Are these overlaps making some parts on my map stand out for no reason?", something along that line and this doesn't apply only to overlaps but also whatever you do when you're mapping as well.
01:04:726 (4,5) - Should be mapped differently, a pattern like this only works well if they're mapped on the same thing, clearly there's another sound occured at 01:05:092 (5) so 2 circles instead of this could do the job. If you apply this then you could use the same rhythm at 01:28:141 (5,6) for consistency.
01:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't compliment the rhythm very well imo, there's nothing at 01:13:141 - 01:12:958 and you let a strong sound ended on a slider end which could've been better, something like this could work. If you apply this then the same thing goes to 01:13:690 (1,2,3,4) as well.
01:19:361 (4,5) - A random 1/4 stack out of nowhere which is pretty much the same thing as overlap thingy I mentioned earlier.
01:21:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what you're trying to follow here but it's kinda like you're pushing it cuz the rhythm is suddenly denser despite having the same intensity as other parts in kiai, I was expecting a 1/2 slider instead of 01:21:739 (3,4) .
01:41:495 (1,2,3) - Could easily create a pattern or sth since they're musically related, feels kinda wasted with the way you mapped them currently as these sliders aren’t visually related in any way whatsoever.

Can be improved more imo but you're getting close.
Good luck~

Watch My Skill

52 posts

Joined June 2014

Watch My Skill 2017-01-19T11:38:03+00:00

Yahuri's Novel
00:51:007 (3,4) - Just consider flipping these sliders to help the section flow. like this

Sorry bout the image size =.=
01:14:422 (3) - I think this is a weird shape, you should keep it consistant with these 01:12:958 (3) -

No comments for any others really, this is a beautiful mapset! nice work man

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-19T11:45:44+00:00

Watch My Skill wrote:
Yahuri's Novel
00:51:007 (3,4) - Just consider flipping these sliders to help the section flow. like this Sorry bout the image size =.= i wanted the flow to be less flowy, since this section is buildup into the kiai.
01:14:422 (3) - I think this is a weird shape, you should keep it consistant with these 01:12:958 (3) - i changed this from an earlier mod, but if i get more complaints i guess ill change it back LOL

No comments for any others really, this is a beautiful mapset! nice work man

Thanks!

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-01-20T05:49:30+00:00

Q

[Easy]
00:03:633 (3,1) - check DS
00:09:930 (3,2) - avoid overlap
00:16:596 (1) - Delete spinner, In Easy diff, you have to make rest time in 4 ticks after spinner
01:07:470 (2,3) - hard to play in Easy diff?

[Normal]
01:12:226 (1) - start at 01:12:044 -
01:33:812 (1,2) - blanket

GL

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-20T16:51:46+00:00

Electroz wrote:
Oh yeah I'm late sorry for that, kill me. //stab
~~sry for the late reply xd~~

[General]

Video offset is inconsistent in Yahuri's Novel. hmm I was sure I fixed it that day thanks!
Recheck AiMod pls your metadata conflicts in Easy. an extra space in the title loll where did that come from

[Easy]

A combo colour in Easy are inconsistent with other diffs so yeah try rechecking that again, the purple one with 102,102,255. wow didnt notice that
00:16:596 (1,1) - The recovery is not really sufficient for Easy, would be sufficient if the spinner ended at 00:18:078 but it's kinda lame spot to put a spinner there so yeah might as well use a long slider instead. fixed
00:27:592 (3,1) - DS ^

01:07:470 (2,3) - 01:30:885 (2,3) - Probably a no-go lol, using this kind of rhythm in Easy is already edgy to begin with, plus the intensity on these places isn't really different from the rest of kiai so using denser rhythms doesn't really fit here. fixed! started experimenting a few ideas and I finally found one hopefully this one is better lol
[Normal]

00:38:568 (3,4) - 01:24:665 (2,3) - DS on these places can be polished a bit. fixed
01:11:861 (5,1) - The stack looks pretty random tho, I mean you barely did this anywhere else so better unstack it (unless you have a reason behind this ofc). I like to think of it as an emphasis for (1)
01:42:044 (2,3) - Using the same rhythm as Hard plays much better imo cuz you wanna prioritize 01:42:592 than 01:42:958 since the sound is clearly stronger and there's nothing on 01:42:958 so that one shouldn't be even clickable lol fixed
[Hard]

00:27:592 (6,1) - 01:09:665 (7,1) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - 01:43:690 (5,6,7) - Recheck your spacings pls fixed
Actually around this part 00:42:226 your DS kinda swings between 1.4-1.5 I don't know which one you're going for but try polish them a bit more. lol i wonder how did that happen :^)
00:44:056 - Add whistle. fixed
00:52:653 - You mapped this in Normal but not in Hard? There's a drum roll here so rhythm should be denser than just a 1/2 slider anyways. fixed
01:01:068 (2,3) - 01:18:629 (2,3) - Overlaps which you didn't do anywhere else so it kinda breaks consistency from what you're usually do. got it
The main idea of this is like, if you usually don't do overlaps and then you suddenly do it, then you should have reasonings for doing an overlap, "Does this overlap express anything from the song?", "Are these overlaps making some parts on my map stand out for no reason?", something along that line and this doesn't apply only to overlaps but also whatever you do when you're mapping as well. thanks I'll keep that in mind!
01:04:726 (4,5) - Should be mapped differently, a pattern like this only works well if they're mapped on the same thing, clearly there's another sound occured at 01:05:092 (5) so 2 circles instead of this could do the job. If you apply this then you could use the same rhythm at 01:28:141 (5,6) for consistency. fixed
01:12:226 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't compliment the rhythm very well imo, there's nothing at 01:13:141 - 01:12:958 and you let a strong sound ended on a slider end which could've been better, something like this could work. If you apply this then the same thing goes to 01:13:690 (1,2,3,4) as well. okie ;-; changed
01:19:361 (4,5) - A random 1/4 stack out of nowhere which is pretty much the same thing as overlap thingy I mentioned earlier. fixed
01:21:556 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Idk what you're trying to follow here but it's kinda like you're pushing it cuz the rhythm is suddenly denser despite having the same intensity as other parts in kiai, I was expecting a 1/2 slider instead of 01:21:739 (3,4) . agree >< fixed
01:41:495 (1,2,3) - Could easily create a pattern or sth since they're musically related, feels kinda wasted with the way you mapped them currently as these sliders aren’t visually related in any way whatsoever. followed a similar pattern to 00:19:544 (1,2,3), hope this is better :p
Can be improved more imo but you're getting close. i hope xd
Good luck~

thanks for the mod~

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-20T17:05:31+00:00

Neoskylove wrote:
Q

[Easy]
00:03:633 (3,1) - check DS fixed //i think lol
00:09:930 (3,2) - avoid overlap noticed that too :p fixed
00:16:596 (1) - Delete spinner, In Easy diff, you have to make rest time in 4 ticks after spinner fixed from last mod
01:07:470 (2,3) - hard to play in Easy diff? lol agree; also fixed from last mod

[Normal]
01:12:226 (1) - start at 01:12:044 - Not gonna follow the vocal (just like the rest of the diffs) c: there's a significant sound at 01:12:226 (1) anyway
01:33:812 (1,2) - blanket tried. best i could already anymore and I'm gonna ruin it lol ;w;

GL

thanks for the mod!

terratropic

69 posts

Joined November 2015

terratropic 2017-01-23T00:45:16+00:00

hi, from mod queue

General
1. increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest)
Normal
00:16:596 (1) - better to make this clickable, so move spinner 1/2 beat ahead and add circle here

Hard
00:16:596 (1) - see above
00:42:226 (6) - add NC to emphasize the drums
00:48:263 (4) - i dont think you need this note, it's not in the music
00:53:019 (7,1,2,3) - very confusing stacks because 00:53:019 (7,1) and 00:53:568 (2,3) are different, a reverse slider would work if you place it at 00:53:202
01:12:226 - kiai is longer in other difficulties, why end here?
01:16:617 (5) - add Nc here
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - i think larger spacing would complement the snares better, move 01:33:080 (1) to x:36 y:312
01:39:300 (1) - i would move NC over to 01:38:568 (9)
01:43:690 (5) - add NC

Yahuri's Novel
00:16:596 (1) - i know ai mod doesnt list this, but isnt this offscreen?
00:42:226 (5) - add NC here for the drums
01:04:544 (5) - i feel this should be closer to the previous object than to 01:04:909 (1), maybe switch 01:04:544 (4,5) around?
01:06:922 - the gap here feels kind of awkward imo, place a note here
01:09:300 (1) - see above
01:30:336 - ^
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - spacing is too big compared to same part in first kiai 01:05:641 (1,2,3)
good luck, i hope this helps

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-01-23T01:01:31+00:00

terratropic wrote:
hi, from mod queue

General
increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest) i dont think thats necessary, but thats up to kirisakiii

Yahuri's Novel
00:16:596 (1) - i know ai mod doesnt list this, but isnt this offscreen? nope, it shows up just fine while playing
00:42:226 (5) - add NC here for the drums inconsistent, and not really necessary imo
01:04:544 (5) - i feel this should be closer to the previous object than to 01:04:909 (1), maybe switch 01:04:544 (4,5) around? star patterns in the first kiai follow instruments, so vocals dont get jumps
01:06:922 - the gap here feels kind of awkward imo, place a note here theres no note here to justify that
01:09:300 (1) - see above ^
01:30:336 - ^ ^
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - spacing is too big compared to same part in first kiai 01:05:641 (1,2,3) i made the spacing bigger to emphasize the final "NAMAE" (also, the way i emphasized in the star patterns changed as well, i included vocals for jumps) though if i get more complaints ill change it
good luck, i hope this helps

Thanks!

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-23T18:45:50+00:00

Sorry for the late reply!

terratropic wrote:
hi, from mod queue

General
[*]increase slider tick rate to 2 (at least for hard and above, idk about the rest) I don't think its necessary so no sorry

Normal
00:16:596 (1) - better to make this clickable, so move spinner 1/2 beat ahead and add circle here If that's the case, the slider would be shorter and the slider cannot be shorter than that anymore, otherwise its considered unranked

Hard
00:16:596 (1) - see above same thing, just gonna keep it this way
00:42:226 (6) - add NC to emphasize the drums it wouldn't be necessary since I'm following based on the nc pattern I'm using so far
00:48:263 (4) - i dont think you need this note, it's not in the music true, but following the same rhythm pattern as 00:42:226 (6,7,8,9) so I'm gonna keep it ^^
00:53:019 (7,1,2,3) - very confusing stacks because 00:53:019 (7,1) and 00:53:568 (2,3) are different, a reverse slider would work if you place it at 00:53:202 still trying to figure out these stacks here as well LOL anyways got an idea from you so thanks! //a reversed slider would be good, but I'm looking for something more intense around that area ^^
01:12:226 - kiai is longer in other difficulties, why end here? wow, can't believe I didn't notice that. thanks!
01:16:617 (5) - add Nc here I guess in this case drums needs more emphasis so I'll take it
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - i think larger spacing would complement the snares better, move 01:33:080 (1) to x:36 y:312 sounds great to me but, idk. I've been using the same ds pattern the entire song so keeping it would also keep consistency. I'll keep that in mind!
01:39:300 (1) - i would move NC over to 01:38:568 (9) fixedd
01:43:690 (5) - add NC ok

good luck, i hope this helps

thanks for the mod!

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-24T01:33:22+00:00

#achievementunlockedd

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2017-01-27T14:36:13+00:00

m4m return
sorry for the lateness

Easy

Easy:

00:10:670 (1) - this simply count as miss emphasis, just add curve or angle on it
00:31:251 (1,2,3,1) - this flow feel awkward you know, try smth like this https://gyazo.com/8ea626bf347697407c9efef9e980ae03
00:37:104 (1) - make the transtition of angle equal
00:40:031 (1) - add down angle 1/3 after slider head to emphasis the upbeat
00:45:153 (4) - upcurve here, or even you can make this as down curve and make next (1) as left curve slider to give more movement
00:53:202 (3) - light left curve
01:04:909 (3) - up curve to repeat the flow from (1)
01:47:348 - add a new timing points with 10% volume to reduce the hs of spinner end

Normal

Normal:

00:04:744 (1,2) - *cry in mirror slider* https://gyazo.com/f748d8696c88331998f70994e143dcd8
00:07:707 (1) - right curve to make the transtition to (2) softer
00:10:670 (1) - down curve for this one
00:29:787 (4) - 00:34:178 (1) - 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) - 01:18:080 (1) - again
00:36:373 (4) - to reduce that mayor beat it reccomend to apply curve slider yk
00:51:739 (1) - left curve
01:04:178 (2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you meant to make this https://gyazo.com/cd8a6f0b96b8e86cd56177a4f431ac34
01:20:275 (5) - light down curve is ok
01:26:861 (1) - the vocal is not straight here, just simply add left curve to emphais it
01:41:495 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern as a blanket maybe? that mean each (1,2,3) blanketing (4) perfectly

Hard

Hard:

00:15:115 (1) - ctrl+j and replacing, that flow is more familliar for hard diff these days. if you do move (3) higer so you get v movement for (1,2,3)
00:30:519 (7) - not the right time to absorb the jump, keep sparate this like you do in earlier pattern
00:38:568 (6) - 00:53:202 (1) - 01:28:141 (5) - 01:36:373 (3) - 01:37:836 (7) - 01:38:568 (1) - again
00:36:373 (5) - here as well, dont stack it
00:42:226 (6) - from this poit this hold is ok, just add nc when you do it for easier reading
00:56:861 (6) - this represent 3 point vocal, and here 00:55:397 (2) - only two. it ok to not repeating the slider way pervectly instead of miss emphaising the vocal
00:57:592 (1) - re-create the angle
00:59:422 (6) - flow lead to down instead to up, ctrl+g imo
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - that ds on purpose?
01:09:665 (7) - 01:28:690 (6) - 01:39:300 (2) - 01:43:324 (4) - no downbeat, dont stack, as simple as that
01:21:739 (3) - miss emph, simply add an angle on the middle of it, here as well 01:23:202 (7) -
01:33:812 (1) - you can make the stack overlapped a bit to give the hold effect https://gyazo.com/7bd5c3d3f3e05eb98f4b9f28d62dc0b4
01:43:690 (1,2,3) - v pattern more reccomended

Insane

Insane:

00:16:596 (1) - add the angle at the mayor beat, that mean the tick of slider. that will simply make gameplay more smooth because it emph the instrument better
00:50:275 (1) - this flow breaker just too. . try to ctrl+g and ctrl+h (2) then change potition of slider (3,4)
00:59:239 (2,3) - this meant to be straight line?
01:06:373 (1) - curve slider absorb better
01:08:202 (3) - ctrl+g this to make the pattern section more clear
01:12:226 (1) - i stand against this slider at the diff
01:21:007 (1) - recheck this

well good luck

Yahuri

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Yahuri 2017-01-27T15:01:33+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
Insane
Insane:
00:16:596 (1) - add the angle at the mayor beat, that mean the tick of slider. that will simply make gameplay more smooth because it emph the instrument better there arent any instruments at the ticks. the angles indicate guitar.
00:50:275 (1) - this flow breaker just too. . try to ctrl+g and ctrl+h (2) then change potition of slider (3,4) ctrl+h the rest of symmetry pattern
00:59:239 (2,3) - this meant to be straight line? nope, all straight sliders should be 15 degrees off from horizontal/vertical in kiai
01:06:373 (1) - curve slider absorb better i wanted the slider after "NAMAE" to be more emphasized, so thats why it has the sharp angle. also, if it was a normal curve it would look weird because no other slider would have the same curvature (harder to tell if intentional or not)
01:08:202 (3) - ctrl+g this to make the pattern section more clear keep same to show that the guitar pattern is same as 01:07:653 (1)
01:12:226 (1) - i stand against this slider at the diff why?
01:21:007 (1) - recheck this recheck for what?

well good luck

Thanks~

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Osu Tatakae Ouendan

osu! Alumni

333 posts

Joined December 2010

Osu Tatakae Ouendan 2017-01-28T09:11:09+00:00

From World's Largest M4M Queue
Hi Yahurip. Unfortunately for you, you ain't the one getting mods this time ( OvO)

Sorry for wall QuQ. I just wanna help and try to explain this well.

Ok so this is a weird case for me.
I love the map ~~except Yahurip's diff~~i'm kidding bout hating Yahurip's diff lol. Really I do. Personally, I find the Easy diff lovely in terms of difficulty level, and same with the Normal. I have a problem with the Hard, which starts introducing very spaced 1/4s which are not found on the Easy and Normal, but I do not want it nerfed because it is pretty good too.
To be honest however, I'm not sure what to do yet.
Just think over it first. If you think the Hard is pretty good already, then go ahead and keep everything as is.

The other thing is the NC's. The NC colors seem to be out of order so I believe this is intentional. I won't touch them for the most part because I don't know what exactly the pattern you choose for colors, but I think these two colors: http://puu.sh/tDDOm/71cb78d0de.jpg should never go together as it gets difficult to tell them apart being so similar and for me is straining on the yes.

[Easy]
00:27:592 (3) - would be nice if this was a copy of 00:26:861 (2) - flipped. Might have to adjust 2 and 3 to move them closer to 00:28:324 (1) - though after making that change
00:42:226 (3) - I think that for an Easy, we shouldn't have a 3/4 slider, and instead let's end the slider at 00:42:592 - . I don't think such an emphasis is needed for this portion to warrant the slider ending on blue tick
01:07:653 (2) - i think you should stick to mapping to vocals (i.e. starting slider on 01:07:470 - and ending on 01:08:202 - ) as following to drums might not be too noticeable for a newer player, and it's also a sudden change in rhythm choice. Still, you can keep it really i mean this is only 82 bpm.
01:31:068 (2) - similar as above

[Normal]
00:10:670 (1) - move to X 112 Y 296? so we can keep the zig zag movement on 00:09:930 (3,4,1) -
00:37:104 (1) - might wanna move this to the right a bit so it isn't so far to the side of the playfield, where leaderboards would be. Might have to adjust the next part.
00:40:031 (2) - i think this should end on red tick, and then you could add a circle here 00:40:946 -
00:48:080 (3) - tbh, I don't quite hear something to map a 1/4 slider with reverse arrow here. Should probably make this a 1/2 slider.
01:36:739 (1) - NC probably shouldn't be here. NC either
>here: 01:35:641 (3) - and next NC will be on 01:38:568 (4) - . OR
>here: 01:37:104 (2) -

[Hard]
00:48:080 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think there's anything to map here with 1/4s.
00:54:117 (3) - I think the sudden halt in movement from 3 to 1 is weird. I think you should just stack that on 00:53:934 (2) -
01:03:995 (2,3) - personally think you should change the angle of movement on this: move 01:03:995 (2) - to X68 Y32 and 01:04:178 (3) - X116 Y120. gonna have to adjust 01:04:726 (4,5) - after making that change
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - I think these are better off evenly spaced, as it'd look cleaner and it helps emphasize the whole vocal instead of just 3. Move 01:05:824 (2) - X456 Y88
01:17:714 (3,4,1) - personally I think this sudden huge spacing is too much. Might wanna make the spacing smaller, not sure how though.
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - might wanna make spacing even just like earlier
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - same. In this case, it is 1 that should be moved further.
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - same

Hope this helps (/w\)
Love this mapset ('w')

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-01-31T16:43:43+00:00

Time Capsule wrote:
m4m return
sorry for the lateness
sorry for the late reply xd

Easy
Easy:
00:10:670 (1) - this simply count as miss emphasis, just add curve or angle on it uhh don't exactly know what a miss emphasis is
00:31:251 (1,2,3,1) - this flow feel awkward you know, try smth like this https://gyazo.com/8ea626bf347697407c9efef9e980ae03 fixed
00:37:104 (1) - make the transtition of angle equal changed
00:40:031 (1) - add down angle 1/3 after slider head to emphasis the upbeat umm not exactly sure what you mean by that lol
00:45:153 (4) - upcurve here, or even you can make this as down curve and make next (1) as left curve slider to give more movement ok
00:53:202 (3) - light left curve ok
01:04:909 (3) - up curve to repeat the flow from (1) ok
01:47:348 - add a new timing points with 10% volume to reduce the hs of spinner endok i like that idea

Normal
Normal:
00:04:744 (1,2) - *cry in mirror slider* https://gyazo.com/f748d8696c88331998f70994e143dcd8 ~~I feed on people's tears~~ done
00:07:707 (1) - right curve to make the transtition to (2) softer ok
00:10:670 (1) - down curve for this one ^
00:29:787 (4) - 00:34:178 (1) - 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) - 01:18:080 (1) - again some transitions aren't really a problem so I kept some as it is
00:36:373 (4) - to reduce that mayor beat it reccomend to apply curve slider yk ok ~~do u even engrish xd~~
00:51:739 (1) - left curve yep
01:04:178 (2,3,4,1,2) - maybe you meant to make this https://gyazo.com/cd8a6f0b96b8e86cd56177a4f431ac34 nah I just prefer the idea of creating a straight flow with 01:04:178 (2,3,4)
01:20:275 (5) - light down curve is ok okie
01:26:861 (1) - the vocal is not straight here, just simply add left curve to emphais it emphaised
01:41:495 (1,2,3,4) - make this pattern as a blanket maybe? that mean each (1,2,3) blanketing (4) perfectly a bit too abundant imo so I moved (4) according to the flow instead

Hard
Hard:
00:15:115 (1) - ctrl+j and replacing, that flow is more familliar for hard diff these days. if you do move (3) higer so you get v movement for (1,2,3) decided to move (3) according to the music instead
00:30:519 (7) - not the right time to absorb the jump, keep sparate this like you do in earlier pattern gonna keep it as it is since that's where the vocal pauses
00:38:568 (6) - 00:53:202 (1) - 01:28:141 (5) - 01:36:373 (3) - 01:37:836 (7) - 01:38:568 (1) - again I honestly think its fine as it is so I won't be changing it
00:36:373 (5) - here as well, dont stack it I personally like to keep it there ^^
00:42:226 (6) - from this poit this hold is ok, just add nc when you do it for easier reading considered; mentioned twice; changed
00:56:861 (6) - this represent 3 point vocal, and here 00:55:397 (2) - only two. it ok to not repeating the slider way pervectly instead of miss emphaising the vocal uhh I think get what you're trying to say, fixed
00:57:592 (1) - re-create the angle fixed?
00:59:422 (6) - flow lead to down instead to up, ctrl+g imo seems weirder to me imo; made changes myself
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - that ds on purpose? yep
01:09:665 (7) - 01:28:690 (6) - 01:39:300 (2) - 01:43:324 (4) - no downbeat, dont stack, as simple as that I'd like to keep it as a paused flow? to make the next ones more intense
01:21:739 (3) - miss emph, simply add an angle on the middle of it, here as well 01:23:202 (7) - curved it instead; 01:23:202 is unnecessary tho
01:33:812 (1) - you can make the stack overlapped a bit to give the hold effect https://gyazo.com/7bd5c3d3f3e05eb98f4b9f28d62dc0b4 I'd like to keep the stack itself as a hold effect ^^
01:43:690 (1,2,3) - v pattern more reccomended used to have that xd this flow is better imo

well good luck

thanks for the modd~
updated Yahuri's Novel as well

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-02-03T19:19:46+00:00

super late reply ;-;

Osu Tatakae Ouendan wrote:
From World's Largest M4M Queue
Hi Yahurip. Unfortunately for you, you ain't the one getting mods this time ( OvO)

Sorry for wall QuQ. I just wanna help and try to explain this well. gahh I kinda lost most of my comments and now I have to write again. //gonna keep it shorter this time cause its late already ;-;// but yeah, no worries xd

Ok so this is a weird case for me.
I love the map ~~except Yahurip's diff~~i'm kidding bout hating Yahurip's diff lol. Really I do. Personally, I find the Easy diff lovely in terms of difficulty level, and same with the Normal. I have a problem with the Hard, which starts introducing very spaced 1/4s which are not found on the Easy and Normal, but I do not want it nerfed because it is pretty good too.
To be honest however, I'm not sure what to do yet.
Just think over it first. If you think the Hard is pretty good already, then go ahead and keep everything as is.
I like the idea of emphasizing those notes that way so yeah gonna keep it as it is

The other thing is the NC's. The NC colors seem to be out of order so I believe this is intentional. I won't touch them for the most part because I don't know what exactly the pattern you choose for colors, but I think these two colors: http://puu.sh/tDDOm/71cb78d0de.jpg should never go together as it gets difficult to tell them apart being so similar and for me is straining on the yes.
NCs are done based on every four beats and some of them are exceptions for emphasis so yeah xd
thanks for bringing that up made sure those both colours wont meet each other for every diff :p

[Easy]
00:27:592 (3) - would be nice if this was a copy of 00:26:861 (2) - flipped. Might have to adjust 2 and 3 to move them closer to 00:28:324 (1) - though after making that change keeping it since most of them are done symmetrical-ish that way. its also cause not going for a overall neat look so I'm just gonna keep this consistent with everything else
00:42:226 (3) - I think that for an Easy, we shouldn't have a 3/4 slider, and instead let's end the slider at 00:42:592 - . I don't think such an emphasis is needed for this portion to warrant the slider ending on blue tick its meant to create that moment slightly more intense into the next section
01:07:653 (2) - i think you should stick to mapping to vocals (i.e. starting slider on 01:07:470 - and ending on 01:08:202 - ) as following to drums might not be too noticeable for a newer player, and it's also a sudden change in rhythm choice. Still, you can keep it really i mean this is only 82 bpm. In this case emphasizing on the drum rather than the vocal is more important tbh and I'm also doing the same drum emphasis on every diff. //I thought of that but it just plays weird for me
01:31:068 (2) - similar as above ^

[Normal]
00:10:670 (1) - move to X 112 Y 296? so we can keep the zig zag movement on 00:09:930 (3,4,1) - its meant to curve along the previous hitcircle and the slider after that. plus, I don't really think its necessary to create a symmetrical zig-zag movement since I'm not going for that kind of aesthetic
00:37:104 (1) - might wanna move this to the right a bit so it isn't so far to the side of the playfield, where leaderboards would be. Might have to adjust the next part. technically its not offscreen so I wouldn't really have to worry about that but I moved it around a bit while keeping the flow c:
00:40:031 (2) - i think this should end on red tick, and then you could add a circle here 00:40:946 - I'm focusing on the drums here rather than the vocal and it would seem inconsistent since I didn't do the same thing to other similar vocals in this diff
00:48:080 (3) - tbh, I don't quite hear something to map a 1/4 slider with reverse arrow here. Should probably make this a 1/2 slider. creates slight intensity and also introduces other 1/4 sliders later on ^^ also, a 1/2 slider would only lose emphasis on 00:48:812
01:36:739 (1) - NC probably shouldn't be here. NC either
>here: 01:35:641 (3) - and next NC will be on 01:38:568 (4) - . OR
>here: 01:37:104 (2) -
^fixedd. didnt notice that

[Hard]
00:48:080 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think there's anything to map here with 1/4s. was mentioned once from another mod as well; changed
00:54:117 (3) - I think the sudden halt in movement from 3 to 1 is weird. I think you should just stack that on 00:53:934 (2) - a halt then on (2) would seem weirder imo xd had to agree with the halt part tho so I stacked it under (3) instead c:
01:03:995 (2,3) - personally think you should change the angle of movement on this: move 01:03:995 (2) - to X68 Y32 and 01:04:178 (3) - X116 Y120. gonna have to adjust 01:04:726 (4,5) - after making that change made similar changes only since I don't want to flow here to be too sharp
01:05:641 (1,2,3) - I think these are better off evenly spaced, as it'd look cleaner and it helps emphasize the whole vocal instead of just 3. Move 01:05:824 (2) - X456 Y88 sorry but I like the idea of an emphasis for (3) since the vocal there is higher
01:17:714 (3,4,1) - personally I think this sudden huge spacing is too much. Might wanna make the spacing smaller, not sure how though. have to agree on that decided to keep (3) and (4) as it is and moved (1) according to spacing. hopefully this works ;-;
01:29:056 (1,2,3) - might wanna make spacing even just like earlier same reason ><
01:33:080 (1,2,3) - same. In this case, it is 1 that should be moved further. ^
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - same ^

Hope this helps (/w\) it did x3
Love this mapset ('w') for Luck Lifee <3

thanks for the modd

DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2017-02-04T18:30:55+00:00

Heyo from my queue.
[General]

soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it.
BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out.

[Easy]

Looks a bit odd why you leave AR4 at the same time on Easy and Normal. Consider to make AR3 for Easy and AR5 for Normal.
00:03:633 (3,1) - this blanket is bit off and need works, specially in right part of 00:03:633 (3) .
00:08:819 (2,3) - fix blanket.
00:19:544 (1) - i think this slider should be in x=274 y=147 for better stack with 00:15:115 (3) => better blanket with nice art
00:47:348 (2,3) - angle between sliders will be better proof. Just copy-paste 2 and make ctrl+g of him. Same with 01:25:397 (3,4) , but here you should make ctrl+h and ctrl+g (both).
01:02:714 (4) - slider should be in y=154 (just off grid snap for it) for better symmetrical with 01:01:983 (3) , otherwise move it like in 00:34:178 (1,2) .

[Normal]

00:10:300 (4,1) - 00:22:470 (1,2) - 01:32:714 (5,1) - 01:36:739 (2,3) - blanket looks a bit off.
00:16:226 (4) - in this pattern you break flow, but this note is almost polished. For fit your pattern fully consider move this circle left. Same with 01:17:348 (4) . For example, 01:37:836 (4,1,2,3) - looks really better.
00:34:178 (1) - as for me upper red sliderpoint should be moved a bit up for smoother elbow, i don't think that you really highlight high beats by sliderpoints. Same with 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) . Alternative version - just copy-paste 00:05:856 (2) and remake it a bit.
00:48:812 (1,1) - you know, symmetrical patterns looks better, right?

[Hard]

Blankets: 00:10:670 (1,2) - 00:11:411 (2,3) - 00:13:633 (1,2) - 00:29:604 (5,6) - 00:40:031 (3,4) - 00:54:665 (1,2)
01:04:726 (4,5) - usually you have stack "slider-end + note" with 1/2 jump, there you have 1/4 slider and with most cases people miss this pattern
01:12:226 (1,1) - second slider should be rotated because it's a bit unreadable and monotonous in my opinion

[Yahuri]

00:54:665 (1,1) - since your following sliders are curved a bit you can curve this too, it's will be better, specially for 2nd case because 01:00:519 (1,2) - are parallel and clearly visible. Same with 01:15:153 (1) - etc
01:35:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - your previous pattern 01:12:044 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) (really love meme patterns) was builded a bit differently, why you leave your style?

Nice polished set, get your kudosustar!
Good luck!
{end of the mod}

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-02-04T21:00:08+00:00

100bit wrote:
Heyo from my queue.
[General]
[Yahuri]
00:54:665 (1,1) - since your following sliders are curved a bit you can curve this too, it's will be better, specially for 2nd case because 01:00:519 (1,2) - are parallel and clearly visible. Same with 01:15:153 (1) - etc fixed all that i could find if you come back to this, please let me know if i missed anything~
01:35:641 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - your previous pattern 01:12:044 (5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) (really love meme patterns) was builded a bit differently, why you leave your style? i wanted a little variation since its the second half of kiai, but fixed

Thanks~

alalalalala

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Abe Nana

1,148 posts

Joined March 2011

Abe Nana 2017-02-05T11:40:54+00:00

Hi. From Usamin's STD modding queue

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Blue : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.
[General]

If you want a better quality video, I can help it

[Easy]

nothing

[Normal]

nothing

[Hard]

00:54:665 (1,2) - make more blanket01:12:226 (1,1) - make it beautifully if you make it anyway

[Yahuri's Novel]

-00:00:100 - this green section is unsnapped01:11:495 (4,1,3,1,3) - It's very boring when I see it.01:22:836 (3) - unrankable issue. out of playground01:44:604 (1) - pull this way silent section. 95% volume is very noisy

overall, it is clean, and simple and concise.

nice work. GL

Last edited by Abe Nana 2017-02-05T11:56:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-02-05T11:49:20+00:00

Abe Nana wrote:
[Yahuri's Novel]
-00:00:100 - this green section is unsnapped fixed
01:11:495 (4,1,3,1,3) - It's very boring when I see it. i did the pattern like that because of the "anata" repeating -> same position
01:22:836 (3) - unrankable issue. out of playground its a little off the grid, but its not offscreen.
01:44:604 (1) - pull this way silent section. 95% volume is very noisy made a gradual decrease starting from 80% instead

Thanks!

NOTE: the current AR spread for this mapset is
Easy:4
Normal: 4
Hard: 7
Novel: 8
there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard, so i would increase the AR on Normal to ~5

noot

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Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-02-06T12:49:31+00:00

Yahuri wrote:

there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard, so i would increase the AR on Normal to ~5

yea was thinking the same when I was skimming through the mods
//that chuya profile pic tho bfjfvkkfv

note for recent modders:
I'll try to reply to your mods as soon as possible cause I'm sick and I have a lot of work to do atm ;-;

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-02-14T07:18:45+00:00

100bit wrote:
Heyo from my queue.
[General]
soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it. tried from different sources a couple of times already and im not exactly sure where can you get ones that are not delayed :/
BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out. lol i checked the bg quality and theyre both the same. this current resolution wouldnt be unrankable anyway?
[Easy]
Looks a bit odd why you leave AR4 at the same time on Easy and Normal. Consider to make AR3 for Easy and AR5 for Normal. fixed differently
00:03:633 (3,1) - this blanket is bit off and need works, specially in right part of 00:03:633 (3) . sorry but i couldnt exactly see where is the problem.. the curve along the next slider seems find imo
00:08:819 (2,3) - fix blanket. fixed i hope xd
00:19:544 (1) - i think this slider should be in x=274 y=147 for better stack with 00:15:115 (3) => better blanket with nice art that one space difference tho. its already meant to be stacked lol. changed.
00:47:348 (2,3) - angle between sliders will be better proof. Just copy-paste 2 and make ctrl+g of him. Same with 01:25:397 (3,4) , but here you should make ctrl+h and ctrl+g (both). all of the same rhythm patterns are meant that way since im not going for a neat aesthetic so this suggestion wont be used except for 00:47:348 (2,3) since I need 00:48:812 (1) to be where it currently is
01:02:714 (4) - slider should be in y=154 (just off grid snap for it) for better symmetrical with 01:01:983 (3) , otherwise move it like in 00:34:178 (1,2) . done
[Normal]
00:10:300 (4,1) - 00:22:470 (1,2) - 01:32:714 (5,1) - 01:36:739 (2,3) - blanket looks a bit off. fixed and did some changes
00:16:226 (4) - in this pattern you break flow, but this note is almost polished. For fit your pattern fully consider move this circle left. Same with 01:17:348 (4) . For example, 01:37:836 (4,1,2,3) - looks really better. fixed
00:34:178 (1) - as for me upper red sliderpoint should be moved a bit up for smoother elbow, i don't think that you really highlight high beats by sliderpoints. Same with 00:37:653 (2) - 00:45:885 (1) . Alternative version - just copy-paste 00:05:856 (2) and remake it a bit. softened elbow
00:48:812 (1,1) - you know, symmetrical patterns looks better, right? lol k
[Hard]
Blankets: 00:10:670 (1,2) - 00:11:411 (2,3) - 00:13:633 (1,2) - 00:29:604 (5,6) - 00:40:031 (3,4) - 00:54:665 (1,2) fixed? xd
01:04:726 (4,5) - usually you have stack "slider-end + note" with 1/2 jump, there you have 1/4 slider and with most cases people miss this pattern at this point I'm already assuming that the players would be able to go with the flow, rather than remembering the pattern
01:12:226 (1,1) - second slider should be rotated because it's a bit unreadable and monotonous in my opinion hmm changed a bit myself
Nice polished set, get your kudosustar! thanks
Good luck!

Thanks for the modd
Will hopefully update them along with Abe Nana's mod tonight :p

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-02-14T07:44:58+00:00

Kirisakiii wrote:
soft-hitfinish2.wav have so big delay, it's unrankable. Try to ask anybody for fix it. tried from different sources a couple of times already and im not exactly sure where can you get ones that are not delayed :/

[*] BG resolution looks unrankable too. Try this out. lol i checked the bg quality and theyre both the same. this current resolution wouldnt be unrankable anyway?

i dont know if i gave you this before but i took it from the same source as whatever else i gave you soft-hitfinish2 i cant check delay though so idk if its ok

Background images must not exceed a width of 1920 pixels and a height of 1200 pixels. Images with lower vertical or horizontal resolutions than that of the player's will be upscaled to fit the entire screen. ranking criteria
the bg size they sent is 1920x1200, the one we have right now is 1091x768, which is still smaller than the old ranking criteria (1366x768)
the one we have isnt unrankable, but we might as well use the maximum size

also update my diff lol (last post)

Kirisakiii

186 posts

Joined February 2015

Topic Starter

Kirisakiii 2017-02-20T13:23:11+00:00

@Yahuri the .wav link you gave was some kind of troll link loll but oh well I may or may not have took another file from a different source idk

I'm just hoping that this time it'll work

Hard was changed a lot, aesthetic-wise :/
Updated all diffs!
BG changed!

Abe Nana wrote:
If you want a better quality video, I can help it

will PM you more about it ^^

neonat

Beatmap Nominator

3,528 posts

Joined April 2012

neonat 2017-02-26T19:08:26+00:00

General

00:47:714 - could implement drum whistle here on all diffs

Easy

00:43:690 (2,3,4) - I think emphasis could be done better without the repeat slider at 00:43:690 (2) - just have a regular slider until 00:44:056 so that you can have another slider start at 00:44:422 where the vocal pitch is increasing. The next major point is then 00:45:153 and 00:45:519 which should be clickable:

SPOILER

01:08:568 (3,4) - why extend over the beat at 01:08:934 though, could be implemented if you change 01:08:568 (3,4) to 2 sliders, 01:09:300 is also a good place to click:

SPOILER

01:31:983 (3) - similarly for this:

SPOILER

Normal

00:45:885 (1) - could bend the 3rd portion of it more to the left, the bend made on the 2nd red node is really small, it contrasts with the 1st one much more sharply
01:10:397 (2,3) - on level axis like 01:07:470 (2,3) - ? having 01:10:946 (3) slightly lower seems odd here
01:42:044 (2) - the finish on the slider end could be removed, it's quite excessive

Hard

00:29:787 (6,7) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:38:568 (6,7) -
00:44:422 (4,5) -
so apparently after the first 2 slider - circle pattern 00:20:824 (3,4) - 00:26:678 (5,6) - the rest stack as seen above ^ but it doesn't really make sense to suddenly change to doing so, it would be better to choose one pattern?
00:53:934 (2,3) - I think it makes a better effect with stacking these, like what you did in Normal.
01:08:934 (6,7) - I don't think stacking these work that well...
01:17:897 (4) - though it may be where the person starts to hold the vocals, the cymbals at 01:18:080 (1) - have more impact, the spacing between 01:17:897 (4,1) should be bigger than the psacing between 01:17:714 (3,4) - so rather, I think the spacing change should swap
01:30:885 (2,3) - is this imperfect stack intentional, it's not seen at 01:07:470 (2,3) - which is similar, you also don't use imperfect stacks other than here either
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - rather than a bigger spacing for one, I think having the, evenly spaced but spaced out more from each compared to previously, works nicely and looks and plays better, so maybe all 2.1x spacing
01:42:043 (2) - finish on slider start? Like Normal and Easy

Novel

00:08:819 (3) - whistle on slider start?
01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - seems more distant from the songs using this pattern here though, while it might be one that can be seen earlier on, it doesn't match as nicely to the music here. Like the vocals starting on 01:25:397 and 01:25:946 - making it better locations for the sliders:

SPOILER

Good Luck!

Yahuri

1,400 posts

Joined July 2014

Yahuri 2017-02-27T00:32:25+00:00

neonat wrote:
General

00:47:714 - could implement drum whistle here on all diffs done

Novel

00:08:819 (3) - whistle on slider start? sure
01:25:397 (1,2,3,4) - seems more distant from the songs using this pattern here though, while it might be one that can be seen earlier on, it doesn't match as nicely to the music here. Like the vocals starting on 01:25:397 and 01:25:946 - making it better locations for the sliders:
SPOILER
while i do agree that this pattern matches vocals better, i cant use it because it means there'll be a clap on a sliderend 01:26:129 (which i never do in this diff). changed 01:23:934 (1) - into a 1/2 slider though

Good Luck!

Thanks!

pls dont delete my spinner next time lol

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Kirisakiii

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Kirisakiii 2017-03-18T17:54:24+00:00

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neonat wrote:
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00:47:714 - could implement drum whistle here on all diffs done

Easy

00:43:690 (2,3,4) - I think emphasis could be done better without the repeat slider at 00:43:690 (2) - just have a regular slider until 00:44:056 so that you can have another slider start at 00:44:422 where the vocal pitch is increasing. The next major point is then 00:45:153 and 00:45:519 which should be clickable: changed
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01:08:568 (3,4) - why extend over the beat at 01:08:934 though, could be implemented if you change 01:08:568 (3,4) to 2 sliders, 01:09:300 is also a good place to click: done
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01:31:983 (3) - similarly for this: done
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Normal

00:45:885 (1) - could bend the 3rd portion of it more to the left, the bend made on the 2nd red node is really small, it contrasts with the 1st one much more sharply done; made it somewhat parallel
01:10:397 (2,3) - on level axis like 01:07:470 (2,3) - ? having 01:10:946 (3) slightly lower seems odd here done
01:42:044 (2) - the finish on the slider end could be removed, it's quite excessive that one was probably an accident lol

Hard

00:29:787 (6,7) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:35:641 (4,5) -
00:38:568 (6,7) -
00:44:422 (4,5) -
so apparently after the first 2 slider - circle pattern 00:20:824 (3,4) - 00:26:678 (5,6) - the rest stack as seen above ^ but it doesn't really make sense to suddenly change to doing so, it would be better to choose one pattern? mentioned more than once, changed
00:53:934 (2,3) - I think it makes a better effect with stacking these, like what you did in Normal. this way it emphasizes on those two beats more imo; the previous notes might overpower it if I put stacks
01:08:934 (6,7) - I don't think stacking these work that well... I'll try working on it; I'm still playing around to find my own style tbh
01:17:897 (4) - though it may be where the person starts to hold the vocals, the cymbals at 01:18:080 (1) - have more impact, the spacing between 01:17:897 (4,1) should be bigger than the psacing between 01:17:714 (3,4) - so rather, I think the spacing change should swap good point there
01:30:885 (2,3) - is this imperfect stack intentional, it's not seen at 01:07:470 (2,3) - which is similar, you also don't use imperfect stacks other than here either will definitely change this area; i just cant seem to find a placement I can be satisfied with
01:39:665 (1,2,3) - rather than a bigger spacing for one, I think having the, evenly spaced but spaced out more from each compared to previously, works nicely and looks and plays better, so maybe all 2.1x spacing
01:42:043 (2) - finish on slider start? Like Normal and Easy sorry, don't really understand the part of "slider start"

Good Luck!

Really need to work more on Hard tbh
I just can't seem to feel satisfied with the overall aesthetics :')
Thanks for the mod neo!

@Yahuri
the slider thing was probably a misclick or something lol sorry
I changed the first whistle btw since I think that its a bit too soft to hear

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