Melanie Martinez - Dollhouse · forum

BoatKrab

740 posts

Joined September 2012

BoatKrab 2016-11-23T12:59:47+00:00

Hey!
As you req me to mod this

[General]

Don't you add preview point?

[Mk's EZ GG]

00:33:987 (1,3,5) - Triangle on them is not correct, Move 00:35:371 (5) - to x:397 y:264 to solve this
00:59:833 (1,2) - Blanket..
01:12:756 (3) - Looks weird at the end of the slider and it's touching HP bar
01:25:679 (1,2) - Flow is weird, try to move 01:25:679 (1) - to a bit right and move 01:26:602 (2) - up
01:44:602 (2,3) - Blanket
02:09:064 (4) - Why you don't CTRL+J on this? ;-;
02:12:756 (5) - I'm not sure about NC on this, it should be 02:14:602 (1) -
02:14:602 (1,3) - Blanket again :v
02:26:602 (3,1) - Blanket ;-; (move an end point to x:452 y:152)
02:30:294 (3) - ... Why you decide to doing this? = ="
02:39:525 (1,2) - Same as 01:25:679 (1,2)
02:58:449 (2,3) - Same as 01:44:602 (2,3) -

[Signum's Normal]

CS isn't too small? 4.2 is really hard for a newbie player
00:52:448 (1) - If I were you, I would reverse this instead place a circle on 00:52:910 -
01:06:295 (5,1) - Blanket
01:15:525 (2) - The second curved is not correct
01:23:833 (3,4) - I think DS of the slider like this is too close (maybe DS error), you'll see 01:23:833 (3,4,1) - . it's difference. Change 01:24:756 (4) - to the horizontal for the best. Give a look on your diff there're a lot of this kind
As you copy the first half pattern and paste them on the second half on this song, you must find the same point at 01:58:910 - 02:27:064 - and fix them

[Hard]

03:06:986 (2) - 03:07:678 (4) - Object is not snapped
00:42:756 (6) - Move this to x:362 y:107 for the correct straight line
01:07:218 (1,2,3) - Triangle is not correct, move 01:08:141 (3) - to x:354 y:271 for the best
01:44:141 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I <3 them
02:27:525 (5,1) - Why the spacing of them is not like 01:13:679 (1,1) - ?

[]
Great mapset. I hope this will be get rank soon
GL on this

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

riffy 2016-11-23T13:58:54+00:00

We'll keep the CS on Normal and 00:52:448 (1) that thing as well, as I believe Normal is sort of asking for harsh patterns accoring to the difficulty context given. Oh, and I bleieve that 02:09:064 (4) - this one on Easy is just a part of MkGuh's style and 02:30:294 (3) - goes with the vocals.

Everything else was applied, including more minor polishing, thanks a lot!

Mekki

1,794 posts

Joined November 2014

Mekki 2016-11-23T14:44:00+00:00

minor fixes by myself

osu file format v14

[General]
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Title:Dollhouse
TitleUnicode:Dollhouse
Artist:Melanie Martinez
ArtistUnicode:Melanie Martinez
Creator:Bakari
Version:Mk's Easy
Source:
Tags:cry baby alternative indie Signum MkGuh
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riffy

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riffy 2016-11-23T16:38:09+00:00

Updated

Signum

Signum 2016-11-24T18:19:46+00:00

Fixed some things.

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osu file format v14

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Tags:cry baby alternative indie Signum MkGuh
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291,129,129064,2,0,P|276:185|289:231,1,102.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,307,129987,5,2,0:0:0:0:
433,217,130448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,130,130910,2,0,L|257:105,1,102.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,153,131833,2,0,P|163:177|162:212,1,51.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,231,132294,2,0,P|108:255|109:290,1,51.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,318,132756,2,0,L|257:327,1,102.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,326,134602,5,0,0:0:0:0:
287,218,135064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,163,135525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
89,217,135987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
149,313,136448,2,0,P|195:327|251:316,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,238,137371,6,0,P|317:189|331:140,1,102.5,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,94,138294,2,0,P|443:144|429:193,1,102.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,295,139217,2,0,P|349:290|326:292,1,51.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,319,139679,2,0,P|253:321|228:316,1,51.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,283,140141,2,2,L|174:229,2,51.25,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,211,141064,6,0,P|120:169|199:158,1,102.5,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,188,141987,2,0,P|314:198|334:195,1,51.25,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,181,142448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
457,102,142910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
365,37,143371,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,75,143833,2,0,P|219:57|155:54,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,131,144756,6,0,P|110:225|44:321,1,205,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,356,146141,1,2,0:0:0:0:
241,275,146602,2,0,L|337:242,1,102.5,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,241,148448,6,2,P|359:178|305:111,1,153.75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,91,149371,2,2,B|188:114|188:114|88:82,1,153.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,126,150294,2,0,P|81:170|62:229,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,311,151217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,299,151679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
349,239,152141,6,2,P|401:246|457:235,2,102.5,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,161,153525,2,0,P|256:138|236:120,1,51.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,109,153987,2,2,P|118:120|74:106,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,212,154910,2,0,P|142:276|128:320,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,295,155833,6,2,L|352:322,2,102.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,209,157217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,124,157679,2,0,P|259:96|259:19,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,78,158602,2,0,P|346:106|346:183,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,247,159525,6,2,P|446:219|446:142,2,102.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,318,160910,1,2,0:0:0:0:
229,304,161371,2,0,P|200:295|119:302,1,102.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,203,162294,2,0,P|216:212|297:205,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,163217,6,2,L|419:73,1,102.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,109,164141,2,0,L|285:216,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,266,165064,2,0,P|132:251|82:267,1,102.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,366,165987,1,8,0:0:0:0:
241,326,166448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,166910,6,2,P|388:276|444:260,2,102.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,196,168294,2,0,P|232:168|232:136,1,51.25,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,100,168756,2,0,L|376:96,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,188,169679,2,2,L|324:192,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,232,170602,6,0,P|216:287|239:338,2,102.5,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,144,171987,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,65,172448,2,0,P|294:76|352:57,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,146,173371,2,2,P|405:203|424:261,1,102.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,304,174294,6,2,P|259:291|204:302,1,102.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,338,175217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
50,244,175679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
114,152,176141,2,2,P|133:95|117:38,2,102.5,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,244,177525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
258,324,177987,5,4,0:0:0:0:
337,245,178448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
257,166,178910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,246,179371,2,0,L|117:236,1,51.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,210,179833,6,0,P|90:144|75:95,1,102.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,36,180756,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,106,181217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,46,181679,6,0,P|368:96|362:151,1,102.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,205,182602,2,0,P|250:155|256:100,1,102.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,53,183525,2,0,L|100:68,2,51.25,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,106,184448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,27,184910,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,107,185371,5,4,3:0:0:0:
333,187,185833,1,2,2:0:0:0:
253,108,186294,1,10,2:0:0:0:
147,150,186756,2,0,P|124:160|92:164,1,51.25,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
46,141,187217,6,0,L|33:266,1,102.5,0|0,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
115,323,188141,2,0,L|173:344,2,51.25,10|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,217,189064,6,0,P|208:236|356:210,1,205,2|10,3:0|0:0,2:2:0:0:
419,127,190448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
326,62,190910,2,0,P|268:80|216:78,1,102.5,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
128,135,191833,2,0,P|146:193|144:245,1,102.5,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
81,327,192756,5,2,0:0:0:0:

riffy

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riffy 2016-11-25T06:14:27+00:00

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TheMefisto

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TheMefisto 2016-12-02T07:26:29+00:00

Как-то я долго добирался до мода, а в итоге получилось всего пара предложений ;w;
Hello everyone~

[Global]

Я не уверен, легально ли делать такие анснапнутые зеленые линии, поэтому на всякий случай скажу, что они есть (01:25:683 - , 02:28:454 - и т.д.)
Еще модинг асистанс ругается на soft-hitnormal2.wav и говорит, что он слишком короткий (~28 мс вместо 100 мс). Тут я тоже не уверен, просто уточню

[Mk's Easy]

01:21:987 (1,2,3) - I guess you can map this more friendly-oriented, like this
SPOILER
Same here 01:36:756 (1,2,3) -
And same in second kiai
02:01:218 - I don't think that skip this beat is a good idea. How about change this note 02:00:756 (3) - to slider? For example, pretty same moment 02:08:602 -

[Signum's Normal]

00:52:448 (1,2) - 1/4 slider here not really good imo, so suggestion: just put circle instead of slider, or make 1/2 slider here (you use 1/4 sliders later, but it feels fine, because of vocal)
01:23:833 (3) - This slider feels strange, because it started with weak sound and finish on strong, so suggest here
SPOILER
Same for other moments ^
01:45:525 (4,1) - , 01:52:910 (4,1) - Suggest for better rhythm (same for part after last kiai)
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:52:448 (1,2,3) - Не стакай много нот, скучно же D:
02:20:141 (7) - Репит бы добавить, чтобы красный тик задеть, под вокал лучше подходит
01:13:679 (1) - , 02:27:525 (5) - Я бы предложил замедлить их, чтобы фоновый звук лучше подчернкуть (х0.6, что-нибудь такое)
02:56:141 (4) - Неестественно кликается тут, дропну предложение
SPOILER
03:04:679 (10) - Предлагаю передвинуть этот слайдер сюда 03:04:910 - , а тут 03:04:679 - воткнуть ноту, слайдер под вокал хорошо ляжет, да и звук не пропустишь на синем тике

Как-то так
Good luck! \w/

riffy

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riffy 2016-12-02T11:41:12+00:00

К харду применил все, кроме замедлений. Считаю, что свисток и спейсинг это замедление там делают ощутим, а если выделять сильнее, то будет не так играться, как-то слишком притянуто, что ли. I'll also keep the 1/4 on Normal, evertyithn else is applied as far as Normal is concerned.

Спасибо!

ez is up to MkGuh

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Alien Cat 2016-12-03T12:27:34+00:00

I love your maps Bakari *---* You have the best taste. XOXO

riffy

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riffy 2016-12-03T12:33:10+00:00

Thank you, happy to hear that!

Namki

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Namki 2016-12-11T18:46:22+00:00

General

Не слышно ХСов там, где они должны быть слышны. Лучше увеличить те поинты, где 61% до 80%.
00:40:679 - почему тут нет зеленой линии, уменьшающей звук до 5%? И тут 00:41:602 - .
02:06:295 (1) - стоит выделять даунбит чем-нибудь типа, как ты делал, драм-хитнормалом.
Стоит пройтись немного и проставить драм-хитвистлы на 02:04:910 (6) - / 02:08:602 - / 02:12:295 - / 02:15:987 - / 02:19:679 - и так далее
Либо же убрать 02:01:218 - драм самплесет и поставить вистлы тут 02:04:910 - и 02:08:602 - , и 02:12:295 -
Проверь, МА ругается на анснапнутые зеленые линии.
Еще говорит, что soft-hitnormal2.wav меньше, чем 100мс. А как мы знаем.

Easy

02:28:448 - two green lines at one tick.

Normal

01:13:679 - better don't skip this sound there. Maybe place a circle or do a reverse.
01:01:218 (2,3) - wow, low stack laniency in Normal, I'm not really sure with it, if it's even rankable nowadays...
02:03:987 - strange skipping as well.
02:27:525 - the same as above.

Decent map, nothing to say.

riffy

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riffy 2016-12-12T14:31:28+00:00

Пофиксил все, кроме анснапа. Там так и надо, они глушат слайдеры, но не головы слайдеров.

Спасибо!

А, ну, еще не стал глушить 00:40:679 (6) - там серкл же.

edit: вру, еще хс оставил на 61%, не хочу очень громкими делать их!

Sieg

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Sieg 2016-12-17T19:42:00+00:00

[General]

[Mk's Easy]

01:23:602 (2) - Since this is Easy I think you should follow more simple rhythm here.
01:38:371 (2) - ^ 02:37:448 (2) - 02:52:217 (2) -
Also for g lines - reference on Normal.

[Signum's Normal]

Check if green lines copied from Hard is on intended spots here. For example on 01:25:679 (1) - this slider, 02:28:448 (1,2) - etc

[Hard]

01:06:295 (9) - Почему так? мне кажется что-то на подобии http://i.imgur.com/eC8De22.png вписалось бы лучше.
02:12:987 (8) - ^
01:29:371 (1) - Драм сета не должно быть на конце? Как-то они странно появились во второй части киая тбх, ну и звучат имо жестковато.
01:32:141 (6) - // 01:35:833 (7) // 01:37:218 (2) // 01:40:448 (1) // и дальше
01:56:833 (5,6) - странно это звучит на концах слайдеров, там нет упора на что-либо в музыке, зачем их выделать такими сильными хсами?
03:10:679 (5,6) - ^
02:51:987 (3,4,5) - Первый раз вижу такие оверлапы на дифке, не очень аккуратно выглядит.
03:08:371 (6) - Сюда можно круг.
03:09:987 (3,4,5,6) - Ну и опять эти драм хиты.

riffy

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riffy 2016-12-18T04:51:11+00:00

02:12:987 (8) - оставил только вот эту штучку, уж больно она милая на мой вкус. Остальное применил!

I've applied just about everything for guest diffs as well, since McGuh never replied I did the changes for him as well.

Thanks a lot, Sieg!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-01-01T22:11:21+00:00

Здравствуйте ~

[Mk's Easy]

01:26:602 (2) - perhaps move it a bit down cuz kinda touches the life bar on default skin
01:36:295 (4,1) - blanket can improve a bit
02:19:218 (3) - is the whistle on the slider body intentional?

[Hard]

00:34:448 (2) - I find the movement here a bit awkward, Ctrl+G perhaps? and if you do remember to make a jump for the next note
00:52:448 (1,2,3) - this stack doesn't look pretty imo
03:04:910 (11,1,2) - ^
00:55:679 (8,1) - why did u stack these if the mapping continues to be 1/4?
01:46:910 (5) - What about moving this note back to the head of the slider in which is stacked like you did with the previous one, for consistency~
03:08:140 (5) - ^

throw a rock at me when u ready~

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Aurele 2017-01-01T23:43:26+00:00

привет bakari!
Happy New Year!

[General]

As you told me in your mod on my map, you should add "crybaby" in the tags since:
Bakari wrote:
(since the album name is often written this way)
You should also add a warning on the thread that the song contains explicit lyrics!
02:42:295 - You should add a timing point at this place to disable the kiai time. It will do exactly what you've done from 01:28:448 - to 01:29:371 -

[Mk's Easy]
~~Michael Kors' Easy~~

02:41:833 (3) - Delete the clap and add a drum sampletset.

Perfect!

[Sigmun's Normal]

00:32:141 (3) - Add a whistle to this circle to have a better whistle consistency.
00:44:141 (4) - I feel it would be better to replace this slider by a circle instead. The slider seems unnecessary here.
01:21:987 (1) - For this slider, you can maybe add a 36% volume timing point as the slider's seems quite loud with the whistle.
02:41:371 (3) - The end of this slider should have a drum sample set instead. Also delete the clap as it's not necessary. (Just look at this slider for further reference; 01:27:525 (3) - )
03:07:217 (1) - If you want to do like what you've previously done, you should move this slider to 03:07:448 - and make it finish at 03:07:679 -. That would be exactly what you've done at 01:52:910 (4,1,2) - !

Neat!

[Hard]

00:32:141 (4) - You should be adding a whistle at the beginning of this slider to follow the consistency with 00:30:294 (1,2) -
00:53:371 (4) - Looking at the three previous circles that are stacked to a different beat, maybe you could add a new combo here?
02:01:679 (6) - A whistle would be necessary here to emphasize the finger snap sound. (Pretty much what you've done at 02:07:218 (4) - )
02:11:833 (4,5,6) - The notes are not necessary following the flow and the beats from the song. You could take these three circles and do CTRL+G. After doing this, take the circle (5) and stack it with (4) so the beats would be emphasized on (5,6).
02:21:987 (3) - As the bass is quite strong at the end of this slider, maybe you could add a drum sampleset? (Also look at the next suggestion, it's going to sound even better!)
02:23:833 (7) - This is a bit tricky over here. Let me explain. On this note, you can hear a sound that normally you would emphasize it with a whistle. However, you've added a whistle on 02:23:371 (6) - , which is the object right before this one. If you ever add a whistle to the object (7), it would sound weird because there would be two whistles one next to each others.
What I am recommanding you here is to add a clap here. Then, I would like you to look back at 02:01:679 (6) -, where I asked you to add a whistle. If you want to keep this part consistent, you can keep the whistle which I recommanded you, but then, a clap would fit also.
02:27:525 (5) - If you look at the beginning of your first kiai, you added a new combo. I guess you should add one here as well? It has the same sounds and vocals at this point also.
02:41:833 (5) - As there is already a clap on the next object, you should delete the clap here and add a drum sample set. It will sound better.
02:44:141 (2) - Add a whistle at this slider's slide. You've done the same thing at 01:30:295 (2) -
02:47:833 (3) - This slider's whistle is very loud. You should add a volume timing point here to make it softer!
02:49:679 (6) - Add a whistle at this point. You've done the same thing at 01:35:833 (7) -

I really enjoy the flow. It's a different style I see from you that I enjoy!

Good luck!

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riffy 2017-01-02T05:50:01+00:00

Thank you, ezek! Applied everything except for the stack thingy as I absolutely love those fancy triangles the flow they give. It just resembles the song in a way.
Applied literally everything from Gabe's post, appreciated much! <3

Gosh, you guys made my morning so much better, you have no idea how happy I am now!

ZekeyHache

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ZekeyHache 2017-01-02T07:51:39+00:00

Gabezek modding team approves~
Interesting way to map the Hard diff, I really like it!
For next BN: Unsnapped green lines have a purpose for being unsnapped~

small recheck

2017-01-01 23:15 ezek: is everything ready?
2017-01-01 23:16 Bakari: Thank you, it is ready
2017-01-01 23:16 Bakari: Oh, and is there any other map you'd love to be modded? :D
2017-01-01 23:16 ezek: ask Gabe if he has anything alse to add before we move on :o
2017-01-01 23:18 Bakari: nope, there isn't
2017-01-01 23:19 ezek: oki doki, gonna check in a few minutes ^^
2017-01-01 23:25 ezek: seems u got some unsnapped green lines on the hard diff, check MA http://puu.sh/t8r9P/4dea9d5b12.png
2017-01-01 23:25 Bakari: most of them are 2-5ms late
2017-01-01 23:26 Bakari: and the reason for that is to keep the sliderhead loud
2017-01-01 23:26 Bakari: while cutting the whistle hitsound and making it quiet
2017-01-01 23:26 Bakari: test it and you'll hear those lit faded whistling sounds
2017-01-01 23:26 ezek: oh, so it's a well executed plan of yours :v
2017-01-01 23:29 ezek: A note in case u wanna do something about it 01:38:602 (4) - I got to hit this early because the vocal at 01:38:371 -  is pretty strong 
2017-01-01 23:30 Bakari: will adding an extra circle work?
2017-01-01 23:30 Bakari: http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/NeveXVpZ.jpg
2017-01-01 23:34 ezek: yee, I played it like your example, but there's still something that could cause confusion, and that's the slider being separated at a different time from the two circles, so I wouldn't go for a stack there. I would go for something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6954787
2017-01-01 23:36 Bakari: alrighty, used the pattern you suggested <3
2017-01-01 23:36 ezek: I got nothing else to say~
2017-01-01 23:37 ezek: so, everything ready from your side?
2017-01-01 23:37 Bakari: absolutely!
2017-01-01 23:38 ezek: oh, I tohught you were adding the new note at 01:38:371 - 
2017-01-01 23:38 ezek: thought*
2017-01-01 23:39 ezek: cuz of the strong vocal
2017-01-01 23:39 Bakari: it kinda peaks at the white tick, though
2017-01-01 23:40 Bakari: and then it goes lower on 01:38:833
2017-01-01 23:40 ezek: well, if that's the case, then it would be better to have the three things stacked like you did at first
2017-01-01 23:43 Bakari: brought the stack back
2017-01-01 23:44 ezek: seems cool now
2017-01-01 23:44 ezek: is your body ready?
2017-01-01 23:45 Bakari: sure <3

So...

~Boobie~

Sieg

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Sieg 2017-01-05T11:58:53+00:00

пора

riffy

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riffy 2017-01-05T12:14:19+00:00

This was an unexpected surprise, thak you very much! ♥

Lasse

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Lasse 2017-01-05T13:06:11+00:00

nice idea with the sliderwhistle volume/sampleset thing
though it's not working as intended since the late timing points also apply to the sliderhead making the heads nearly inaudible
you can easily check by comparing how the heads sound now to how they sound if you delete the timing point
iirc timing lines can be late by a few ms and will still apply the volume/sampleset settings to objects, just not sv changes
it works properly if you unsnap them by >5ms, check how 01:35:833 (7) - sounds right now compared to how it sounds when you snap the green line to 01:35:839 - (6ms late)

riffy

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riffy 2017-01-05T13:39:27+00:00

Good God, what have we done.

Getting this fixed and contacting a QAT member soon. I'd love to recieve more feedback on the set as well, while it is still qualified.

Edit: fixed the greenlines, I have the .osu file ready with the changes.

BoatKrab

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BoatKrab 2017-01-05T15:17:51+00:00

WOW
Congraz, baka!

Mao

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Mao 2017-01-05T17:19:54+00:00

Disqualified upon mapper's request. Good luck o/

riffy