xtrem3x wrote:

Reservado para mi mod -w-

DDMythicalB3ast wrote:

Small mania mod + some irc mod

02:43:077 (163077|1) - note here (Column 2) Ok :3

03:05:665 (185665|3) - note here (Column 4)
03:06:724 (186724|0) - note here (Column 1)
03:07:077 (187077|3) - Remove note here
03:07:165 (187165|3) - Move note here to Column 4
03:08:136 (188136|3) - note here (Column 4)
03:08:489 (188489|2) - note here (Column 3)
03:09:548 (189548|3) - note here (Column 4)
03:09:901 (189901|1) - remove note here
03:10:254 (190254|0) - note here (Column 1) ^ nop
03:10:959 (190959|0) - note here (Column 1) Ok :3
03:11:312 (191312|1) - note here (Column 2)
03:12:724 (192724|0) - remove note here
03:12:812 (192812|0) - move to column 1
03:13:077 (193077|3) - note here (Column 4)
03:15:548 (195548|0) - Remove note here
03:15:901 (195901|2) - note here (Column 3) ^ nop
03:17:312 (197312|1) - note here (Column 2) Ok :3
03:18:371 (198371|1) - remove note here
03:18:724 (198724|0) - Add note here (Column 1) ^ nop
03:19:430 (199430|3) - note here (Column 4) Ok :3
03:19:783 (199783|3) - Note here (Column 4) ^

03:32:754 (212754|3) - shouldn't be a hold ok :3

These changes are to smooth out patterns and make them more fun to play, however I can understand if you do not agree with the way i removed the notes.

There are some strange gaps in notes from 04:34:695 (274695|0) - to here 04:57:107 (297107|3,297107|2,297107|1) -
Fill in these gaps with notes to fit the patterns. oh lol xD thanks for this! fixed

04:16:695 (256695|0,256783|2,256871|3,256871|1,257048|2,257136|0,257224|1,257224|3,257401|0,257489|1,257577|3,257577|2) - Most of the long-note patterns like this do not follow the song correctly, The problem here is that you have used alot of copy/paste strategies, and that has made the problems alot more spread out, Try and re-time all of these. Fixed D: i think xD

k3v227 wrote:

From my mod queue

[Shadow Oni]

General:

- No HP7. HP5 or HP5.5 is good I think.

- Resnap all notes to 1/4.

- Finishers near 1/4 aren't good.

- 03:46:341 (1669) to 03:49:342 is a good example of a smooth SV increase.

- SliderMultiplier:1.40159980373383 -> 1.4




Proposals:

00:03:460 (1) - Finisher?

00:03:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent with 00:06:282 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) and the others like it.

00:11:930 (51) - No Finisher.

00:48:635 (304) - No Finisher.

01:19:430 to 01:22:518 - This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy.

01:22:517 (539) - No Finisher.

01:33:811 (628) - No Finisher.

02:07:694 (896) - No Finisher.

02:37:959 to 02:41:577 - Same as before the 1st kiai: This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy.

02:41:576 (1128) - No Finisher.

03:26:929 (1484) to 03:46:341 (1669) - This section needs x1.0SV; hard to read the stream

03:49:341 (1697) - No Finisher.

04:23:223 (1976) - No Finisher.

04:34:429 (2064) - Delete?

04:34:694 (1) + 04:45:988 (1) + 04:57:283 (1) - Delete all spinners. 30 seconds of spinners is way too much. You should consider mapping 1/2 with some 1/4 (triples and doubles), and have low SV here. SV changes: 04:34:518 and 04:45:812 and 04:57:107

Very fun map and great song

-Kev

[Shadow Oni]

General:

- No HP7. HP5 or HP5.5 is good I think. O

- Resnap all notes to 1/4. O

- Finishers near 1/4 aren't good. I will wait for a comment of a BN, because... i don't see the problem with this Finishers.

- 03:46:341 (1669) to 03:49:342 is a good example of a smooth SV increase.

- SliderMultiplier:1.40159980373383 -> 1.4 O




Proposals:

00:03:460 (1) - Finisher? X

00:03:460 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent with 00:06:282 (15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) and the others like it. O

00:11:930 (51) - No Finisher. X

00:48:635 (304) - No Finisher. X

01:19:430 to 01:22:518 - This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X

01:22:517 (539) - No Finisher. X

01:33:811 (628) - No Finisher. X

02:07:694 (896) - No Finisher. X

02:37:959 to 02:41:577 - Same as before the 1st kiai: This SV change needs to be smoother/more linear; some SV increases here are too high and they look messy. X

02:41:576 (1128) - No Finisher. X

03:26:929 (1484) to 03:46:341 (1669) - This section needs x1.0SV; hard to read the stream O Thanks, Fixed.

03:49:341 (1697) - No Finisher. X

04:23:223 (1976) - No Finisher. X

04:34:429 (2064) - Delete? O

04:34:694 (1) + 04:45:988 (1) + 04:57:283 (1) - Delete all spinners. 30 seconds of spinners is way too much. You should consider mapping 1/2 with some 1/4 (triples and doubles), and have low SV here. SV changes: 04:34:518 and 04:45:812 and 04:57:107 O O I'll just leave the final spin.

1|2|3|4

xtrem3x wrote:

Aceptado: O
Rechazado: X

Shadow Oni

• 
  00:11:930 - Este finish es claro que no va ni tantito acorde a esto y es RULE ... borralo para dejarlo igual como 00:09:107- (aunque tambien estoy viendo que quieres enfatizar los golpes de platillo, asi que en Creo que aca haré lo mismo que me pediste abajo, ya que se oye el platillo y así sigue una consistencia, digo.
  
  00:09:107- agregale finish y borras la siguiente nota, ya en el 00:11:930- deja la nota grande y borras la siguiente) O
  
  00:24:636 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - toda esa seccion que sea pura nota roja excepto la ultima, esa incluso podría ser grande pero dejemosla en azul normal. X
  
  00:47:224 (290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303) - lo mismo que arriba excepto que en las 5 notas sea kkkkD Aca te acepto lo que me pediste en el último patrón, del resto neeei. uwu
  
  01:04:518 (414,415,416,417) - que esta parte sea kk kd por que el 2do doble suena igual que el 3ro. O
  
  01:09:636 - Cambia esta nota a k para hacerla mas consistente con el punto que menciono abajo... X
  
  01:09:812 (450,451,452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463) - lo mismo que en 00:24:636- y 00:47:224- ... solo que acá las 5 notasl del final en ddddK X Lo rechazo porque el sonido va descendiendo, no creo que suene bien un finisher uwu
  
  01:20:930 (523,524) - cambia estas notas a k para hacerlo consistente con el punto de abajo.... X
  
  01:21:107 (525,526,527,528,529,530,531,532,533,534,535,536,537,538) - lo mismo .. al final con kkkkD Te acepto el último patrón
  01:32:401 (614,615,616,617,618,619,620,621,622,623,624,625,626,627) - Lo mismo ^ X Aca no, pa' variar. uwu
  
  01:53:577 (785,786,787,788) - invierte los colores en estas ... O
  
  02:04:871 (873,874) - un ctrl+g en estas notas... O
  02:18:459 (966,967) - otra mas acá ... X
  02:21:018 (983,984) - igual acá ... X
  
  02:26:577 (1021,1022,1023,1024,1025,1026,1027) - esta parte estaría bien con d k d d k d k .... para enfocarlo en los sonidos altos en las 3 ultimas notas de esta mencion. X Están siguiendo una consistencia uwu
  
  02:30:195 - cambia esta nota a k para no dejarla tan monótona y enfatizar mas los sonidos de golpe. X
  
  02:39:989 (1112,1113,1114,1115,1116,1117,1118,1119,1120,1121,1122,1123,1124,1125,1126,1127) - volvemos al caso de pura nota roja ... pero acá sería .... kkddd ddd ddd ddkkD X
  
  02:46:871 - cambiala a azul ... para mas o menos coordinarle el vocal ... O
  02:47:489 - cambiala a roja ... lo mismo ^ O
  
  03:09:812 - en esta parte tiene mas sonido de piano que de costumbre, posiblemente debas dejarlo como ddkdk ... X
  03:21:107 - lo mismo acá. pero en este caso dejalo como kkkdk kdddk X
  
  03:25:342 (1471,1472,1473,1474,1475,1476,1477,1478,1479,1480,1481,1482,1483,1484) - lo mismo ... ddd ddd ddd ddddK X
  
  03:26:930 (1485,1486,1487,1488,1489,1490,1491,1492,1493,1494,1495,1496,1497,1498,1499,1500,1501,1502,1503,1504,1505,1506,1507,1508,1509,1510,1511,1512,1513,1514,1515,1516,1517,1518,1519,1520,1521,1522,1523,1524,1525,1526,1527,1528,1529,1530,1531,1532,1533,1534,1535,1536,1537,1538,1539,1540,1541,1542,1543,1544,1545) - entenderás facilmente el por que de esta combinacion con mi sugerencia ... (- d d k d k k d k k d k k d k k d k d k d k d k k d k k d k d k k d d k d k k d k k d k k d k k d k k d k k d k k k d k d k -)
  03:38:224 - tomando en consideracion el punto anterior cambia las notas de acuerdo a lo que propuse. X Mmm... Lo siento pero este pedazo me gusta como suena tal y como está, puedes pedirme cambiar unas pocas notas dentro del patrón (si para mi suena bien) pero por ahora así me gusta.
  
  03:47:577 (1679,1680,1681,1682,1683,1684,1685,1686,1687,1688,1689,1690,1691,1692,1693,1694,1695,1696,1697,1698) - en esta parte tocará combinar los sonidos altos con lo que pongo a cada tiempo (ve el punto 03:25:342- como la referencia mas cercana) .... Esto X Me gusta como está :3
  
  04:32:930 (2051,2052,2053,2054,2055,2056,2057,2058,2059,2060,2061,2062,2063,2064,2065) - otro mas ... kkddd ddd ddd dkd K

X

si lo se, fue bastante tedioso por que tiene bastantes cosas para arreglar, pero por como lo has hecho tiene potencial para free pps en HR o HD. Muchas muchas gracias señor extremo uwu <3

FlamingRok wrote:

I'm sure you've gotten many timing adjustments by now, but it feels almost a full 1/4 note off, which probably isn't the best for ranking circumstances. Try the offset of 3,515. I promise that'll be a better result than what it currently is.

-FlamingRok

1. Como ya hablamos en pm, lo principal sobre los finishers al final de los 1/4, es recomendable que tengas 4 notas del color opuesto antes de usarlo. No los usaste mal pero tene en cuenta eso. Y lo otro, 03:26:809 - , hablamos de que esto debería estar en los kiai en lugar de aquí, que es una parte bastante calma y aquí debería ser como en los kiai.

1. 00:05:632 - Honestamente opino que kkd suena mejor que kdd. Esto es una opinión personal, además juega mucho mejor que kdd.
2. 00:31:397 - Ese random whistle xD.
3. 00:54:867 - Aquí en lugar de k d podrías hacer kdk para que siga mejor la vocal.
4. 01:05:103 - Un k aquí no estaría mal para la vocal, y agregar un d 01:05:456 - aqui por lo mismo, cambiando 01:05:367 - por k, sería bastante bonito.
5. 01:06:162 - dkd por la vocal diría yo y aquí 01:06:514 - en lugar de dkd d, estaría bien que hicieras ddkdk.
6. 01:22:573 - Como mencioné antes, podrías buffear estos kiais haciendolos como la parte calmada que mapeaste.
7. 01:33:514 - kkkkD, recuerda lo que dije.
8. 01:45:426 - Esto suena bastante raro, prueba hacer kk kddk dk, creo que sigue mejor el ritmo.
9. 02:01:044 - Aquí, en lugar de kdkdk k, prueba kddk dk. Sigue mucho mejor el ritmo en mi opinión.
10. 02:31:573 - Aquí hay sonido claro, un d estaría muy bien.
11. 02:34:397 - ^
12. 02:37:220 - ^
13. 02:41:279 - Lo que te dije de los finishers, kkkkD para que lo puedas dejar. También lo de buffear el kiai.
14. 03:26:809 - Recuerda nerfear esto.
15. 03:49:397 - Y recuerda buffear esto xD.
16. 04:12:514 - kk suena mucho mejor.
17. 04:13:044 - Esto como k vendría muy bien ya que es un sonido más alto que 04:12:867 - y 04:13:220 - .
18. 04:23:809 - Lo mismo de antes, kk suena mejor.
19. 04:57:338 - Ya te lo había comentado también, pero este spinner no es necesario, esta parte es completamente mapeable y puedes hacer algo bonito.

Lost The Lights wrote:

Hola, M4M pedido en mi queue!

Arreglado: O
Rechazado: X

[General]

1. Como ya hablamos en pm, lo principal sobre los finishers al final de los 1/4, es recomendable que tengas 4 notas del color opuesto antes de usarlo. No los usaste mal pero tene en cuenta eso. Y lo otro, 03:26:809 - , hablamos de que esto debería estar en los kiai en lugar de aquí, que es una parte bastante calma y aquí debería ser como en los kiai.

Vale, tomaré en cuenta lo de los finishers. Y en cuanto a ese pedazo... No es que no tengas razón, solo que me gusta como está por ahora, disculpa si no te parece, pero bueno, ya sabe.(?

[Shadow Oni]

1. 00:05:632 - Honestamente opino que kkd suena mejor que kdd. Esto es una opinión personal, además juega mucho mejor que kdd. O Y también hace consistencia con lo que viene, así que está bien.
2. 00:31:397 - Ese random whistle xD. O
3. 00:54:867 - Aquí en lugar de k d podrías hacer kdk para que siga mejor la vocal. X
4. 01:05:103 - Un k aquí no estaría mal para la vocal O, y agregar un d 01:05:456 - aqui por lo mismo, cambiando 01:05:367 - por k, sería bastante bonito. X
5. 01:06:162 - dkd por la vocal diría yo y aquí 01:06:514 - en lugar de dkd d, estaría bien que hicieras ddkdk. O Esta idea me gustó bastante.
6. 01:22:573 - Como mencioné antes, podrías buffear estos kiais haciendolos como la parte calmada que mapeaste. X Por ahora me gusta como va. Sorry uwu
7. 01:33:514 - kkkkD, recuerda lo que dije. O
8. 01:45:426 - Esto suena bastante raro, prueba hacer kk kddk dk, creo que sigue mejor el ritmo. O Me gusta.
9. 02:01:044 - Aquí, en lugar de kdkdk k, prueba kddk dk. Sigue mucho mejor el ritmo en mi opinión. O
10. 02:31:573 - Aquí hay sonido claro, un d estaría muy bien. O
11. 02:34:397 - ^ O
12. 02:37:220 - ^ O
13. 02:41:279 - Lo que te dije de los finishers, kkkkD para que lo puedas dejar O. También lo de buffear el kiai. X Sorry uwu
14. 03:26:809 - Recuerda nerfear esto. X
15. 03:49:397 - Y recuerda buffear esto xD. X
16. 04:12:514 - kk suena mucho mejor. O
17. 04:13:044 - Esto como k vendría muy bien ya que es un sonido más alto que 04:12:867 - y 04:13:220 - . O
18. 04:23:809 - Lo mismo de antes, kk suena mejor. O
19. 04:57:338 - Ya te lo había comentado también, pero este spinner no es necesario, esta parte es completamente mapeable y puedes hacer algo bonito. X Quiero dejar este spinner, ya que el sonido desciende y creo que las notas arruinarían el sonido, no se. :c

Eso es todo, espero que te ayude. Buena suerte!

Muchas gracias! adoré tu mod.

Nyan wrote:

Fixed: O
Rejected: X

[General]

BG is slightly distorted. Get this or Get original wallpaper to cut yourself. O Thanks!
Don't forget to pull down BG in taiko difficult. I think 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,23 is fine. O Okay


[Shadow Oni]

01:04:132 - add a kat O

My suggestion is...

Switch the identity of part of <1> long stream starts at 03:26:809 O and <2> third kiai starts at 03:49:397
I think part [1] is focused at vocal, and [2] is focused at synth melody Okay

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04:39:514 (2109,2110,2111,2112) - dk kk O
04:42:338 (2131,2132,2133,2134) - kd kd O
04:50:809 (40,41,42,43) - dk kk O
04:53:632 (62,63,64,65) - kd kd O

Very very thanks! i like your mod

juankristal wrote:

te dejo mi placeholder papeh, en un ratin lo termino de moddear

[ M o m o ] wrote:

juankristal wrote:

te dejo mi placeholder papeh, en un ratin lo termino de moddear

Ashantaloh papeh, hasta ahorita voy a revisar los otros mods xD que no tuve tiempo estos dias. Ashantaloh un pelin y los aplico, que el tusho es el que mas me interesa.

1. Add dnb, drum n' bass, drum and bass, electronic in tags for genre, add Yumi Kawamura for singer/vocalist in tags.
2. OD6.5 would work fine instead of OD7 or you could bump up the HP to 5.5 or 6, if you turn down the OD to 6.

Voyage wrote:

For M4M queue.

Fixed:
Rejected: X

[General]

1. Add dnb, drum n' bass, drum and bass, electronic in tags for genre, add Yumi Kawamura for singer/vocalist in tags. O
2. OD6.5 would work fine instead of OD7 or you could bump up the HP to 5.5 or 6, if you turn down the OD to 6.

O

[Shadow Oni]
00:04:662 - Add a d, the clap sound in the song continues from the note at 00:04:573 (6) and the double makes the part more fun and is a repetitive pattern you can use, since you used it at 00:03:779 (2,1) X Sorry, I like it as it is there.
00:06:073 - ^ X Same ^ I'm sorry
00:07:485 - ^ X ^
00:08:897 - ^ X ^
00:10:309 - ^ X ^
00:11:720 - ^ X ^
00:18:426 - Add a k, to emphasize the sound here like what you did with this d,k,d triple pattern at 00:19:750 (101,102,103) X No, because this part It is following this sequence: 00:15:514 (73,74,75) - 00:21:162 (110,111,112) - And What you suggested is already here: 00:19:750 (101,102,103) - and here: 00:23:985 (129,130,131) -
00:21:250 (111) - ^, like the pattern at 00:23:985 (129,130,131) X Same ^
00:25:838 - Change to d, I don't hear anything too impactful to warrant a k here. O Okay, i like this.
00:26:191 - Add a d, the key sound here still continues and it continues the same kind of pattern you used at 00:17:632 (87,88,89,90), if you don't like the d X Nope, i don't like.
there, you can remove the note at 00:26:014 to make this 00:25:750 (142,143,144) a triple and this part 00:26:103 (145,146,147,148) play better and more readable if you choose to add a d and remove the note. X I like the way it is.
00:53:191 - Add a d, for the faint sound and to mirror the pattern at 00:52:750 (331,332,333). X It is an inner oni, so I do not see what wrong with it is difficult. Anyway this piece is simple, so it's fine as it is.
01:02:809 - Add a d if you're gonna emphasize the vocals and it works better than leaving it empty for the double at 01:02:632 (401,402). O
01:05:367 - Change to k, the vocals go higher and would work well as a k,k double pattern after a section like at 01:04:573 (415,416). X No, I do not like the sound.
01:34:662 (637) - Change to k, to emphasize the vocals pronouncing two syllables here, kinda like these k,k notes here at 01:35:191 (642,643). O Okay!
01:40:926 (690) - ^ O
02:12:162 (929) - Change to k, sound here would be better represented by a kat. X No, here follows a sequence. It would be best not to change it.
02:34:750 - Add a d if you're gonna have a d at 02:34:573 (1084) for the same sound. X Don't like sorry.
03:03:338 (1311,1312,1313,1314) - This part sound weird and probably could be better off just singles instead of doubles, but if you're doing doubles then maybe change 03:03:603 (1313) to a d, since there's no sound indicating a kat here. X Nope, i don't like
03:16:309 - Remove the k note here, the triple transitions better than a stream of d,k,k,k,d. It's fine just like that.
03:19:132 - ^ X Same ^


Best endeavors in getting this marathon approved. Veeert Thanks for your mod!

1. Artist: 目黒 将司
   Romanised Artist: Shoji Meguro
   Title: キミの記憶 (Aethral Remix)
   Romanised Title: Kimi no Kioku (Aethral Remix)
   Source: ペルソナ3
   
   Put to tag instead: persona 3 shin megami tensei memories of you
   reference: http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/4000/4000-1171988743.jpg
   
   
2. there is tag conflict with mania diff
3. 01:19:485 - this green line is redundant since it has same volume and speed as previous line, unless you change 01:11:456 - volume to 40%, like at 02:30:514 -
4. 03:38:103 - , 03:43:751 - , 03:46:662 - , 04:32:986 - , 04:33:867 - another unnecessary green lines

1. 00:31:309 - move to 00:31:132 - ? i think it is better place to put triplet like at 00:28:309 -
   >> 00:31:662 - can be removed and 00:31:573 - change to d for smoother and consistent flow afterward
2. 00:36:691 (210,211) - placing finisher here can emphasis the cymbal sound better. maybe arrange it to 00:35:985 (208,209,210,211) - K-D-K-K
3. 00:39:073 - you might want to increase the pace in the second part by adding d here
4. 00:42:603 - move to 00:42:426 - ? same as 1st
   >> 00:42:956 - remove and 00:42:867 - change to d
5. 00:44:720 - add d
   >> 00:45:162 (267,268,269) - and change to dkd to make it more consistent?
6. 00:55:750 - change to d? k-kdk-k is.. a bit uncomfortable. it can emphasis the increase in pitch better imo
7. 01:02:809 - maybe add d? i can hear audible drum
8. 01:11:279 - this section is reallly calm. i think lower note density would reflect it better. try to remove some notes such as 01:12:073 - , 01:13:485 - , 01:14:897 - , 01:16:044 - , 01:17:720 - , 01:19:132 -
   >> the same thing can also be appliied for 02:30:691 ~ 02:37:926 - section
9. 01:43:838 ~ 01:45:162 - i feel weird because this is the only place you didn't follow the drum like the other parts (e.g: 04:33:162 - ). try something like this? (cursor on 01:44:279 - )
   
10. 02:17:897 - remove and 02:17:985 - put finisher to follow the finisher pattern better
    >> 02:18:338 - add finish too
11. 02:28:750 - change to d and 02:28:926 - change to K, same reason as above point
    >> 02:29:279 - add finish too
    >> 02:29:544 - remove and 02:29:632 - add finish
12. 02:25:309 - add d, as you did at 02:14:014 -
13. 02:44:985 - maybe change to k for a bit variation?
14. 03:24:514 (1443,1444,1445,1446,1447) - why is this not dkkkd
15. 03:32:809 - change to k can reflect the high pitched vocal better imo
16. 03:39:956 - change to d can provide better playability and variation than -dkkdkkdkkd-
17. 03:45:162 - change to k for high pitch?
18. 04:34:573 ~ maybe kill some notes to reach calmer ending?
    

Volta wrote:

Hi, here's the m4m as requested long ago (sorry for late) Haha no problem ^^

Fixed: O
Rejected: X

[General]

1. Artist: 目黒 将司
   Romanised Artist: Shoji Meguro
   Title: キミの記憶 (Aethral Remix)
   Romanised Title: Kimi no Kioku (Aethral Remix)
   Source: ペルソナ3
   
   Put to tag instead: persona 3 shin megami tensei memories of you
   reference: http://media.vgm.io/albums/00/4000/4000-1171988743.jpg O All that.
   
   
2. there is tag conflict with mania diff O
3. 01:19:485 - this green line is redundant since it has same volume and speed as previous line, unless you change 01:11:456 - volume to 40%, like at 02:30:514 -
4. 03:38:103 - , 03:43:751 - , 03:46:662 - , 04:32:986 - , 04:33:867 - another unnecessary green lines O

[Oni]

1. 00:31:309 - move to 00:31:132 - ? i think it is better place to put triplet like at 00:28:309 - O
   >> 00:31:662 - can be removed and 00:31:573 - change to d for smoother and consistent flow afterward O
2. 00:36:691 (210,211) - placing finisher here can emphasis the cymbal sound better. maybe arrange it to 00:35:985 (208,209,210,211) - K-D-K-K O But i like it more K-K-D-K
3. 00:39:073 - you might want to increase the pace in the second part by adding d here O
4. 00:42:603 - move to 00:42:426 - ? same as 1st O
   >> 00:42:956 - remove and 00:42:867 - change to d O
5. 00:44:720 - add d I preferred to put 00:44:456 (262,263,264) - ddd To make it look aesthetically better and be consistent. I think D:
   >> 00:45:162 (267,268,269) - and change to dkd to make it more consistent? O Perfect.
6. 00:55:750 - change to d? k-kdk-k is.. a bit uncomfortable. it can emphasis the increase in pitch better imo O
7. 01:02:809 - maybe add d? i can hear audible drum O
8. 01:11:279 - this section is reallly calm. i think lower note density would reflect it better. try to remove some notes such as 01:12:073 - , 01:13:485 - , 01:14:897 - , 01:16:044 - , 01:17:720 - , 01:19:132 -
   >> the same thing can also be appliied for 02:30:691 ~ 02:37:926 - section O Amazing, beautiful D':
9. 01:43:838 ~ 01:45:162 - i feel weird because this is the only place you didn't follow the drum like the other parts (e.g: 04:33:162 - ). try something like this? (cursor on 01:44:279 - ) O Yeah, sorry. ;w;
   
10. 02:17:897 - remove and 02:17:985 - put finisher to follow the finisher pattern better O
    >> 02:18:338 - add finish too O
11. 02:28:750 - change to d and 02:28:926 - change to K, same reason as above point O
    >> 02:29:279 - add finish too O
    >> 02:29:544 - remove and 02:29:632 - add finish O Ok, I love that. omg I love you(?)
12. 02:25:309 - add d, as you did at 02:14:014 - O
13. 02:44:985 - maybe change to k for a bit variation? O
14. 03:24:514 (1443,1444,1445,1446,1447) - why is this not dkkkd O Sorry uwu
15. 03:32:809 - change to k can reflect the high pitched vocal better imo O
16. 03:39:956 - change to d can provide better playability and variation than -dkkdkkdkkd- O
17. 03:45:162 - change to k for high pitch? O
18. 04:34:573 ~ maybe kill some notes to reach calmer ending? O
    

overall is a nice map, but there is some part that can be improved especially in calm section. might recheck sometimes but better get some more mods first

Really Thanks ;v; You help me so much.