1. Let's start with Beginner, this is like the only solid diff
2. Easy, it's just full 3/1. Not even 2/1, but 3/1, which is much harder to play, since you only have a 1/1 gap instead of a 2/1 gap. Having some gaps are nice. Currently, it plays like a full 1/1 map, yet 1/1 circles here are seen as ridiculous diffspikes. I'd say remove all 1/1, and make some 3/1 into 2/1, and call this diff beginner. That way it justifies its name. And then the 3 circles at the end are just plain shit. I can't say anything else about it. Having a 3/2 in a normal
   is already really hard, let alone in an easy.
3. Normal, completely unbalanced. You use mostly 3/1, which is already quite bad for a normal, and then suddenly a few 1/2 spams. Not just one 1/2 slider, multiple circle+sliders, some of them are even offbeat which'll make it really weird for newbies to play. And at one point you have a full 1/1 circle spam, which requires an insane amount of aim, compared to the rest of the difficulty
4. Advanced, it moreso feels like a Hard with parts from Easy. NC inconsistency, 1/4 usage and similar make it feel really weird. Then the 3/4 part comes, and I'm like, "What is this". The polarity is bad, the looks are rather wonky, but the spread compared to the previous diff is absolute horrible. 3/1 to full 3/4 is not acceptable in any case. I really wonder how this diff is only 2.16*, the spikes should push it to much over 2.5. FYI, I do like the kiais, so that's nice for you, I guess
5. Hard, one word for you: Spread. This diff is a decent diff as hard, but not compared to Advanced, since the gap is too high. Besides, it has many small overlaps which'll only make me want to forget this map faster
6. Insane, I really find you spacing interesting. High spacing on soft notes, while the strong sounds get little to no attention. That's cool right? (Feel the sarcasm)

1. While this is obvious and you at the time I am modding this haven't seen this mod yet, fix the things Bara- has suggested. Your map has really unfitting difficulty spikes and the spread is really uneven

Worminator wrote:

1. Badly structured, random object placement Jumps...
2. Random spacing changes ^
3. Hitsound abuse imo Custom Hitsounding
4. Wrong rythm, totally ignoring triplets, small streams that can be found very often in the song Remember that every mapper maps what he want's, for example if there's a part that can possibly make an streamer i can evade that part with a spinner, all is about mapping styles.
5. Random jump spam abuse to increase star rating Khe heh heh~ i don't really see the problem of this, cause mostly of the maps haves jumps for make it harder the map so... here's an example Check the diff "it"

1. I have to say these are really valid points and your replies aren't exactly excuses to it. While you may have fixed this in the previous mods (cause I haven't looked at all of the mods):
2. 1st point: Jumps are not excuses for random object placement and are not there for making the map unnecessary harder. Heck, you can even see that Fort does not only use random jumps, but in fact also jumps that represent the music judging on consistency, spacing emphasis etc. Here, although the placement of the jumps was rather fine, it just looked like you placed jumps in the higher difficulties to make the map harder than it needs to be, it is 195 BPM for god sake even one of the slower t+pazolite songs.
3. 2nd point: Same as above
4. 3rd point: While this isn't exactly a bad thing, this is some extremely overused hitsounding that in some cases does not even have to do with the music. Even if the song sounds memey, that is not a reason to pull out so many hitsounds like that, like, what does "ONII-CHAAN" have to do with censored?
5. 4th point: While ofc the map depends on the mappers interpretation and on how he wants to map it, the mapper still has to follow the song, if you think that a jump should go somewhere just because you think you like it, even though a stream fits better at that point, means that you should go with the songs rhythm and place the stream and not the jump so tl;dr: You have to follow the songs rhythm instead of doing something that is of your preference but is extremely unfitting
6. 5th point: Same as above and also, your higher diffs focus mainly on jumps although there are so many places that suggest 1/2. rather than 1/4, heck, if you want the map to be harder, use streams... Strike this, wasn't meant to be
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7. Um, what are those tags? Tags are there for helping to find the map easier, the fact that you might have used hitsounds from those maps or that these maps might have been inspirations to you making this map, it is completely irrelevant to the actual context of the song... Like, what do these tags have to do with the actual song?: Tags: Reol Highscore Monster Freeze DanganRonpa Ooi O2i3 GameOver
   
8. I am just saying, technically, Another is harder than Extra, because Another has a higher object density than Extra (Another: 3.36; Extra: 3.31).
   Although this might seem irrelevant to you, the fact Another has a higher object density than Extra means, that in Another you have more objects per second than in Extra, and Extra just has bigger jumps that seemingly even out the spread. That is one of the things that make the spread uneven. PM me about this if you have any other questions, cause I know this might have been confusing

1. 00:17:795 (2) - With sliders like this, you could at least put the red anchor point a bit more closer to the start so that it represents the song more, kinda like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5874933 where as once the sliderball turns around the edge, there actually is a sound there when it turns, maybe you intended the current one, but that makes the map look more clean imo
2. Same goes for 00:17:795 (2) - A little bit on 00:38:718 (1) - 01:11:949 (2) - 01:43:949 (1) - 01:48:872 (1) -
3. Otherwise, good diff

1. The things that Bara- pointed out
2. 00:09:180 (2) - This should be 2/1 imo because the sound there is more obvious, plus your previous sliders were 2/1 (1/1 reverse sliders)
3. 00:04:257 (2) - Same as above
4. 00:03:026 (1) - Hmm, although these kinda sliders represent the song well, there really is no reason to make it so artsy because 1. You seem to do this at random and don't really try to emphasize anything judging by the fact that you do this at random, so if it doesn't emphasize anything, I'd leave it; and 2. You didn't do this in beginner at all, this can cause for some confusion for beginners. So generally, leave it if there isn't something special in the music
5. 00:48:565 (2) - There should be a hitcircle 00:49:795 - imo, not the slider tail, so I'd decrease the slider length to 3/1 or 2/1, even if your intention is to follow the scream, it gives for a fitting diff spine (unlike other diff spikes)
6. 01:50:103 (2,3,4) - Um, this is a really confusing pattern for beginners because you haven't used something like this (a 1/2 hitcircle) in the entire song. Try instead making a repeat slider here

1. 00:03:026 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this so different than 00:00:565 (1,2) - ? It is very inconsistent for a start and it gives for a weird unfitting diff spike
2. 00:10:411 (1) - Same as in easy
3. 00:19:026 (2,3,4) - Although this might represent the song, this is a big diff spike, I think if you'd place a 1/2 slider here 00:19:026 - And then a 1/2 repeat slider here 00:19:334 - it would not be as hard and confusing
4. 00:59:334 (1) - You sure about this? I think a beginner should have more recovery time than three beats, rather 4 beats, I'd remove the hitcircle
5. 01:11:949 (1,2,3) - Again, very different from 01:09:488 (1,2,3) - Which represents the rhythm nicer imo
6. 01:37:795 (2,3,4,5) - Extreme diff spike here, replace it with 2 1/1 sliders should do it

1. Advanced? More like a second normal, advanced is usually there for star ratings like 2.6 - 2.9. Call this diff rather "STANDARD!!"
2. The suggestion above would be recommended because, like Bara- said, this difficulty and Hard are way to far from one another difficulty-wise. So calling this diff "STANDARD!!" and adding another diff called "ADVANCED!!" at SR 2.8 would be more fitting and is highly recommended.
3. Tbh, I think this diff is one of the diffs where you can fix rhythm in this spread. You could easier nerf some stuff that fits the rhythm better and still come out at this SR while maintaining a technically easier diff than what you have right now to even out the spread more
4. 00:05:334 (4,1) - Are you sure about having stacks this early in the song where it is really calm?
5. 00:07:641 (2) - Although I know that you wanted this to turn out as an advanced diff, it is not recommended in Normal diffs to have a slider repeat more than once, and especially not a 1/4 slider
6. 00:19:180 (4) - ^
7. 01:28:103 (4) - ^
8. 00:18:718 (3,4,5) - I think I even saw you say that you shouldn't have many overlaps in normal diffs, well...?
9. 01:20:257 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - This part just looks too dense to me and can get confusing for newer players

Bara- wrote:

My Part from M4M
Next time, please contact me before modding... And I'll only do up to Insane

[General]
2 Custom Diffnames are not allowed!
Prohibited needs to be called something else, as it doesn't indicate difficulty (Maybe something as Master/Terror etc.)

Some diffs have a timing point at 00:00:565 which conflicts the red point in sampleset! This must be fixed ASAP, since it can be really buggy, and is unrankable

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms:
combobreak.wav
normal-hitfinish69.wav

Well i copy those hitsounds from ranked maps like Highscore and Get the fuck out

Hitsounds are inaudible at the start!!!

[Beginner]
00:05:488 (1,2) - Why not make them have the same shape, just as you did with the 2 previous sliders? No thanks
01:21:795 (1,1) - While I do understand the reason for the NCs, having combos of 1 in an easy is not recommended. At least remove NC from 01:21:795 (1) - (since 01:26:718 (2) - also doesn;t have NC)

[Easy]
01:11:949 (1,2,3) - This is a rather calm part, so why does this have full 1/1? The rest is almost only 3/1
01:14:411 (1,2) - Blanket the head of (1) with the tail of 2? No blanket suggestions
01:50:103 (2,3,4) - Just no. The map is almost only 3/1, with an occasional 1/1. Suddenly you have 3/2 notes? Make these into a 3/2 reverse slider since the polarity is really weird for a low diff
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Diffspikes, these all require massive rework, this is not acceptable:
00:43:641 (2,3) -
01:02:103 (1,2) -
01:09:488 (1,2) -
01:11:950 (1,2,3) -
01:37:795 (2,3) -
01:50:103 (2,3,4) -


[Normal]
00:19:026 (2,3,4) - Easy is only 3/1. Here you have a 1/2 spam. The gap here is completely broken. If you want to keep it, at least make the sliders start athe white ticks, and not at the red ticks (something like 00:43:641 (2,3,4) - )
00:43:641 (2,3,4) - ^^
01:37:795 (2,3,4,5) - This is completely unacceptable. This part is such a ridiculous diffspike


[Advanced]
The gap from this diff compared to Normal is absolutely insane. Normal uses mostly 3/1, while this spams 3/4 polarities, has 1/3 and 1/4 mixed, and many 1/2. Even though SR doesn't show it, there MUST be a diff between Normal-Advanced. The only reason Normal is hard is because of the diffspikes. I just removed these 3 patterns, and the SR got to 1,3. That is not good
00:07:641 (2) - This is a joke right? 1/4, while the Normal uses 3/1... At least make it a 1/2 slider
00:10:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - What on earth happened here? The Normal uses 3/1 sliders, this uses full 3/4, with 3/4 gaps which are really awkward to play. Please change them all into 3/2 reverse sliders, it's way too hard in it's current state
00:19:180 (4) - 1/4 kicksliders in a 2* diff at 190 BPM... This doesn't sound like a good idea does it? Newbies can't handles sliders like these yet, so don''t use them
First Kiai - This part is really good! The rhythm is calm and easy to follow, why not make the rest like that too?
00:44:872 (1,2) - They are both visible at the same time, so they require normal DS (1.00) (or, at least 0.7 since 1.00 doesn't fit on the screen...)
01:08:257 (1,1) - Recovery time is too low'
01:10:718 (3) - Don't use kicksliders in lower diffs!
01:19:334 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Refer to above. Also, the NCing here is different (every 3 notes instead of 6) so make it consistent
01:27:641 (3) - Make it 1/2, the sound at the red tick is much stronger
01:37:795 (3) - Kicksliders are hard to predict, don't use them in low diffs
01:47:641 (3) - ^^
01:48:872 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Refer to above

^ I erased this diff, cuz i change a single point of the single map and it became crazy and as i see this is like a hard (cuz was mapped like a hard diff in first place xDD), anyway erased it

[Hard]
I hope you're still planning to make more diffs, right? RIGHT? Nope
00:01:795 (3,4,1) - The jump should be between (4,1) and not between (3,4) since (1) has much more emphasis in the song
00:03:334 (2,1) - This plays rather bad due to the kickslider. Why not make it 2 seperate slider?
00:06:718 (1) - What does this slidershape represent?
00:08:872 (4) - There is no sound at the first blue tick, so this shouldn't be 1/4
00:13:334 (2,5) - Naughty overlap
00:19:180 (2,3,4) - No
00:20:257 (6) - NC for kiai start
00:40:565 (2,4) - Bad overlap I like it
01:03:334 (1,1) - ^^
01:02:103 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - The advanced only uses 1/1. You use full 1/2 with many triplets
01:07:872 (3) - Who ever told you this is a good idea?...
01:17:334 (5,6) - Drumroll start at the white tick, not at the red tick
01:28:103 (2,3,4) - No
01:50:103 (1) - In the other patterns, you don't have an NC here, make it consistent

[Insane]
00:28:872 (1,2,3) - Quite a harsh flow imo
00:44:257 (3) - Make it either a 1/1 sldier of a 3/2 slider. The slidertick makes a 5/4 sldier feel bad in 100% of the cases
01:09:795 (1,2,3) - Why do you use such a high spacing?
01:33:488 (4,5,1) - Look at the spacing. the jump is between (4,5), not between (5,1), while the latter one is stronger in terms of music
01:43:334 (3,4,1) - ^^
01:44:565 (5,6,1) - ^^ i like that part

I can expect a huge shitstorm falling over me Meh you are my friend, and actually you modded my map really good, like with the Genryuu/MTC drama, but I honestly don't care Relax~
This map is not good. The diffs itself all are nice, if spikes are nice, but those are not

1. Let's start with Beginner, this is like the only solid diff
2. Easy, it's just full 3/1. Not even 2/1, but 3/1, which is much harder to play, since you only have a 1/1 gap instead of a 2/1 gap. Having some gaps are nice. Currently, it plays like a full 1/1 map, yet 1/1 circles here are seen as ridiculous diffspikes. I'd say remove all 1/1, and make some 3/1 into 2/1, and call this diff beginner. That way it justifies its name. And then the 3 circles at the end are just plain shit. I can't say anything else about it. Having a 3/2 in a normal
   is already really hard, let alone in an easy.
3. Normal, completely unbalanced. You use mostly 3/1, which is already quite bad for a normal, and then suddenly a few 1/2 spams. Not just one 1/2 slider, multiple circle+sliders, some of them are even offbeat which'll make it really weird for newbies to play. And at one point you have a full 1/1 circle spam, which requires an insane amount of aim, compared to the rest of the difficulty
4. Advanced, it moreso feels like a Hard with parts from Easy. NC inconsistency, 1/4 usage and similar make it feel really weird. Then the 3/4 part comes, and I'm like, "What is this". The polarity is bad, the looks are rather wonky, but the spread compared to the previous diff is absolute horrible. 3/1 to full 3/4 is not acceptable in any case. I really wonder how this diff is only 2.16*, the spikes should push it to much over 2.5. FYI, I do like the kiais, so that's nice for you, I guess
5. Hard, one word for you: Spread. This diff is a decent diff as hard, but not compared to Advanced (Erased), since the gap is too high. Besides, it has many small overlaps which'll only make me want to forget this map faster
6. Insane, I really find you spacing interesting. High spacing on soft notes, while the strong sounds get little to no attention. That's cool right? (Feel the sarcasm)

Uhh, at least I like the BG Thanks ;w;

Whirl wrote:

hmm, Easy is mapped in 1.1 unrnakable, easies MUST be mapped in 1.0

1. Beat placement should follow the time-distance equality rule.
   
   ~osu-wiki on GitHub

What i'm saying is that is equal, is fine, isn't unrankable, but if other person mentions it i will change it

Beginner diff is weird as each note is seperated by three white ticks, meaning your missing a lot of notes, you can map more beats EVEN without spacing your notes so much

Good point but i'm not ignoring the Strong beats so isn't really a problem

Normal is mapped in 1.0 although easy is mapped in 1.1? Good catch!

Also cs in normal can be raised Nope

Normal seems a little weird. sv a bit too high 00:09:180 (2,1) - and avoid doing this pattern in normals(big curve slider right above another slider, it just looks messy), overall I don't like this diff, because most of the map is just squigly slider designs Correction: "Alien Sliders", 01:07:026 (1,2) - this can be blanketed, look through your whole map too see places in where you can blanket i don't really like to blanket, if i change something it makes me a really big mess xDD so that's because i don't like to, and the part of the sliders i like them so... meh

Hard difficulty has barely any structure, I would suggest looking at ranked hard difficulties and learn how to map a little bit better The problem here isn't the mapping is the sthetic, let me point out some stuff

00:00:565 (1,2,3,4,1,1) - the spacing here looks inconsistant Remember that in hards you can use just little jumps, only for make it harder or just for follow the song, giving it a bad look AND also pretty hard CUZ IT'S HARD! Just a few joke <- But... i don't see the problem there of the "bad look" and i played it and i don't have any problem while gameplay But i will think about it

00:10:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know you were going for a curve flow, but imo it can be improved it's good at it is :3

00:21:949 (2,3) - this is, quite weird, the flow isn't good, and also doesn't look nice, like said before look at other peoples maps and learn from them You have reason, it plays horrible, but what the heck with the other mappers thing?

00:43:641 (3) - a double reverse is a little bit weird to play, and also at this sv, eh Good catch

00:59:334 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - the notes just go in circles here! Not expressive at all So... the notes haves emotions? A few joke <-, well i think that is good i used that flow on harder difficulties so... it's good!


ok i'm gonna stop there, but final word is that you should learn how to map a little bit better "testplaying" It's not a bad diff, it's just fundemental issues and stuff like that! Yeah i am kinda lazy and i don't test play my own maps xDD

Spagett wrote:

Great maps, great song, I'd be shocked if you didn't get a rank. I won't nitpick, and I won't ask you to take my advice as seriously as everyone elses (Since I haven't modded in awhile, and I'm not quite as good). I'm only gonna mod XXX!!, and if it's a shit mod in your eyes, don't give me kudosu.

XXX!!
00:08:102 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - These jumps feel inconsistent with the flow of the song. I suggest maybe reduce the spacing by 25% Good catch...
00:56:948 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Please, give this sound. It's so hard to stream without sound. Make the audio on the timing point on the red six Drums, and put (finish) on (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) and (clap) on the rest. Again good catch
01:32:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like it's just here to make it a seven star. Like, come on. You can do with this one what you will, but like. I really doesn't understand this but... i added a triplet xDD

Zyl wrote:

01:32:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like it's just here to make it a seven star. Like, come on. You can do with this one what you will, but like. I really doesn't understand this but... i added a triplet xDD

Spagett wrote:

Zyl wrote:

01:32:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This feels like it's just here to make it a seven star. Like, come on. You can do with this one what you will, but like. I really doesn't understand this but... i added a triplet xDD

What I mean is, the jumps aren't really emphasizing the fact is at the "hype" peak, if that makes sense. It just feels like the only reason you put it in the map is because the previous mapping (which is fine how it is) doesn't register as 7*. In fact, by taking them out, you're left with a 6.97*. Instead of mildly increasing the distance spacing in other portions of the song, you've forced the player to make long and large screen jumps. You can do what you want, if you want to maybe increase the following jumps slightly (because whatever jump distance spacing you did there was fine), or by adding streams into the beginning of the song (because not only is it appropriate, it feels weird without it) you can, or you can ignore me. It was just a friendly "hey, maybe you wanna look at this because it doesn't look right to me".

Good point... in that part of the song the music decreases his intensity

Suggestion to make the beginning harder

00:00:563 (1,2) - 7 single notes (square jumps) [small distance for 1st square, .5 bigger for second], then a stream leading into 00:01:794 (3) -
00:03:025 (1,2) - Similar idea, but without the stream

Good suggestions ^
Everything else is ok

_DT3 wrote:

Mind replying to my mod too?
Helps me a lot

Darcsol wrote:

M4M request

[General]

1. Nearly half the map is kiai time. Consider reducing it. Copy+Paste, and if you check on the Github Ranking criteria doesn't say nothing about this, maybe something similar but this, no...
2. There are unnecessary spaces between 11 and Subterranean in tags. Remove them.
3. I agree with some modders about the practicality of some hitsounds. What does combobreak, normal-hitclap31, and normal-hitfinish69 hitsounds have anything to do with the song? Check at Highscore & Ooi ;9
   
4. 00:30:102 - I highly recommend all diffs to map over the break. The break feels unnecessary as the song's loud tone doesn't allow it. Well the break is good cuz' i put emphasis on the change of the music and vocal, so the music allows it
5. 00:50:102 - ^ (Why is XXX!! the only diff that doesn't have this break?) Check EXTREME!! & INSANE!! diff

[BEGINNER!!]

• The diff is fine, but I question its practicality. Playing the diff is boring compared to EASY!!. Make it more interesting like slider shapes in later diffs.

So make diff spikes is better for the players? no thanks, i love it how is it :9

[EASY!!]

1. 01:09:487 (3) - New combo? Good catch
2. 01:11:948 (5) - ^

[NORMAL!!]

1. UNRANKABLE 01:50:102 (3) - Part of the slider is more than 50% out of the playing field.

The diff is also fine, but it plays like a faster version of EASY!!. More of the same.

[HARD!!]

• 01:11:640 (4,1) - Spacing

the spacing isn't really important on the Hard diffs so...

[INSANE!!]

1. For an insane diff, a Drain Rate of 6 is too lenient. At least increase it to 7. Did you played it?, it plays horrible
2. 00:00:563 (1,2,3) - Why is the spacing here inconsistent? I dunno das gud!
3. 00:06:102 (5,6,1,2) - The over-reliance of this type of pattern feels lazy and limited. I agree with past modders, this pattern doesn't work all the time. You can do so many interesting patterns in this part. I like it
4. 00:54:794 (1) - I highly consider mapping over the spinner. The spinner feels unnecessary and breaks pacing. It can be hard for players
5. (Optional) 01:18:102 (1) - ^ Why i will map there? there's nothing important to map
6. UNRANKABLE 01:45:794 (5) - Majority of the end slider is more than 50% out of the playing field.

The diff plays fine technically, but it plays like a harder hard diff. Noticing the pattern here?

[ANOTHER!!]

1. Like INSANE!!, a Drain Rate of 6.5 is too lenient. Increase it to 7.5? 7 it's better but good suggestion
2. 00:09:179 (1,2,3) - Continuing from INSANE!!, the over-reliance of this pattern feels lazy and limited. I like it
3. 01:08:256 (1) - Consider mapping over this spinner. Why i will map there? there's nothing important to map
4. 01:15:333 (5,6) - This is ridiculous. Never in the diff is there like this. Reduce their distance. OW! YEAH! i forgot to change dat xDD whoops a little error
5. 01:18:102 (1) - Consider mapping over this spinner. Why i will map there? there's nothing important to map

I'm not modding the rest of the diffs, because the problems mentioned from past modders are still there. I don't like to be redundant. Instead I tried to find other problems the modders might have missed, but I couldn't ignore all the problems. I highly consider looking back at previous modders, specifically _DT3 and Bara- because I would have repeated exactly what you've rejected from what they said. Check again bud i take everything on the -Bara and _DT3 mods

I feel like you've overextended yourself. And the map shows. All the diffs feel unpolished. The harder diffs feel too same-y with strange difficulty spikes. I question the practicality of the very hard diffs. Are they really necessary? Because they all feel very similar with the same problems. Then there's XXX!!, but I won't bother it. yeah they are cuz look at the diffs progression and with this i can make the players enjoy the map as well

I don't like this mod, but it'll do. Good luck, you'll need it. Future nominator confirmed :9

Net0 wrote:

Hey there o/, it seems you're open for m4m, map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648

[General]

1. It seems that you named the difficulty extra lower than expert. EXTRA!! (5,13 stars, 335 notes) EXPERT!! (5,57 stars, 400 notes). The difficulty name for this usually would be the other way, since in most maps, expert usually is a difficulty in-between Insane and Extra. I didn't knew that... Cool tip, fixed!
2. If you don't feel like doing that way, then at least give the sound voltex diff spread name a chance
   
   osu!
   
   1. BASIC
   2. NOVICE
   3. ADVANCED
   4. EXHAUST
   5. INFINITE
      
      Thank you i love you ^
      
      

[Extra]

1. 1. Fix blanket 00:21:486 (1,4) - . I'm not suggesting a blanket here, I'm just saying you should fix a blanket you made yourself. http://puu.sh/rb0xO.jpg
   2. ^ 01:47:486 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/rb0JD.jpg

[Expert]

1. Fix blanket 00:20:256 (1,3) - .

[Extreme]

1. Most of your difficulties didn't try to make perfect stacks Finally someone notice it!, only the 4* I've seen a few of those. But I recommend stacking this 01:28:409 (4,6) - .

[Master]

1. Suggestion as well, stack this 01:17:409 (8,6) -

[XXX!]

1. This looks weird 00:47:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - . http://puu.sh/rb15A.jpg. I have seen the same pattern in a previous difficulty. But there it was more readable as well as looking better. I'm not sure if you should keep it like that. Just, try to fix the stack there or space it a bit more, because right now it looks like a bad stack attempt.

Really small mod, since you're mostly refusing ppl suggestions SOMEONE THAT FINALLY UNDESTANDS WHAT I WANT ;W;, so I just pointed what I think it's mostly important as fix and suggestion <- Fixed all of them. Your map is good ;;;;;;w;;;;;;. Difficulties consistently used linear flow at some parts and jump patterns for emphatic ones <3. Hitsounds are great as well Thanks ;w;. Hopefully you will puush this foward in ranking It will rank babe!. GL o/ GL too!

1. Kiai spam is seriously overkill and doesn't fit the song very well, expecially in low diffs (Beginner, Basic and Novice mainly). Remove them since they can confuse newbies
2. SV in you 'Basic' diff seems really too fast to be almost a Easy diff

1. 00:22:717 (2) - fix this slider, since you haven't use that shape in that diff
2. 00:39:948 - remove kiai part
3. 01:19:333 - ^
4. 01:21:794 - ^
5. 01:24:256 - ^

1. 00:09:179 (2) - this can also be replaced by a slider that ends 00:09:794 - here and a circle 00:10:102 - here, which sounds really better imo

1. 00:09:486 (2) - why not a CTRL+G here?
2. 00:28:871 (4) - a NC here seems good
3. 01:16:871 (4) - ^

1. 00:08:871 (4) - If I were you I would change this pattern, since the music change from here, and it may also be boring
2. 00:39:948 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern are mainly different even when the music is exactly the same, I suggest to change 00:39:948 (1,2,3,4) - this...you used it too much, try to change it man
3. 01:07:871 - missing beat here
4. 01:16:871 (5) - NC here
5. 01:43:640 (4) - why this one is rotated? .-.

1. 00:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - really? For whole this time a player have to spin around the screen following the same pattern? That's the most boring thing ever, change that please >.<
2. 00:44:256 (4) - NC because of SV change
3. 00:58:409 (1,2,3,4) - in the other diffs you used to start the combo from here 00:58:717 - and the spinner end here 00:58:409 - ,why here is different?

-Bumblebee- wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

[General]

1. Kiai spam is seriously overkill and doesn't fit the song very well, expecially in low diffs (Beginner, Basic and Novice mainly). Remove them since they can confuse newbies Actually no, if you listen to the song i only added the kiais on the parts that the music "elevates" its level, so it's gud
2. SV in you 'Basic' diff seems really too fast to be almost a Easy diff it's 80 of SV, i always map like this and there's no problem with it so... no thanks

[Beginner]
Nothing much to say here

1. 00:22:717 (2) - fix this slider, since you haven't use that shape in that diff

[Basic]
Nothing to say here too, just remove kiai parts mentioned before

[Novice]

1. 00:09:179 (2) - this can also be replaced by a slider that ends 00:09:794 - here and a circle 00:10:102 - here, which sounds really better imo It's will be a really badass Difficulty peak, sound better but it can affect the diff difficulty (<-i dunno if this is gud)

[Advanced]

1. 00:09:486 (2) - why not a CTRL+G here? Meh
2. 00:28:871 (4) - a NC here seems good No thanks
3. 01:16:871 (4) - ^No thanks

[Another]

1. 00:08:871 (4) - If I were you I would change this pattern, since the music change from here, and it may also be boring For me it's good
2. 00:39:948 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this pattern are mainly different even when the music is exactly the same, I suggest to change 00:39:948 (1,2,3,4) - this...you used it too much, try to change it man The point of this map is not being original, it's being repetitive, and i like how is it so no thanks
3. 01:07:871 - missing beat here
4. 01:16:871 (5) - NC here Whoops, fixed
5. 01:43:640 (4) - why this one is rotated? .-.

[Exhaust]

1. 00:10:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - really? For whole this time a player have to spin around the screen following the same pattern? That's the most boring thing ever, change that please >.< yep, and no thanks
2. 00:44:256 (4) - NC because of SV change I will think about it
3. 00:58:409 (1,2,3,4) - in the other diffs you used to start the combo from here 00:58:717 - and the spinner end here 00:58:409 - ,why here is different? I need to end the spinner in some place so...

That is all, sorry for the short mod but I'm not good as well to mod the highest diffs yet, cya~

Whirl wrote:

how is this not ranked yet, honestly I love it!

Whirl wrote:

I thought I should a proper mod

also no kudosu because i've been here before

[XXX!]

00:04:179 - add a note here because you added a note 00:01:717 - here, and it's the same sound Doesn't goes with the song at all!
00:19:179 (2,3,4) - although this is the hardest diff, the INFINITE difficulty 00:19:179 (2,3,4,5) - this is harder to hit, also the INFINITE difficulty has 00:19:640 (5,6) - two hitcircles here (two clickable beats) while in the XXX diff it has a slider there (one clickable beat) making infinite harder in this area!
00:25:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you have two star jumps right after eachother, causing the player into having to do the same shape twice in a row, also with the intense spacing (which i personally like) it really is akward to hit and looks like a jump training difficulty in a sense, so I would suggest make the stars rotate so the player doesn't have to do the same jump twice in a row
00:29:794 (5) - remove this circle, and start a slider here 00:30:025 - and then end the slider at this blue tick, but keep your note 00:30:102 - here (also add the 'beep' hitsound to the head of the slider)
00:49:794 - the rythym your following starts here not 00:50:102 (1) - here, I would suggest just to shorten the spinner and start placing notes 00:49:794 - here as thats when the new instrument starts (It's weird to end a spinner on a new instruement) i follow vocals, and i end the spinner of the correct place so, pass
00:52:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is the slow part of the song, I don't understand why you have this much spacing In that part the music increases it's level so, pass
01:04:409 - your missing a pretty strong beat here
01:08:256 (1) - this is also like what I said before, the spinner ends on a different instrument then the instrument is was originally following Meh
01:28:102 (1,2,3,4) - this is a 7*, this is nearing the ending of the song, I would put more spacing on here, IF YOU WAN'T THIS TO BE A FUCKING HELL DIFFICULTY WHY THIS SHITTY BABY SPACING THAT FUCKING NOOBS CAN HIT!!! THINK LIKE A BEAST FROM HELL THIS ISN'T KINDERGARTEN
01:29:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole space feels underhitsounded, at least raise volume

those are godly hitosunds, nice flowing difficulty N~♥

[INFINITE!]

00:00:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the XXX difficulty mapped A LOT more beats than what i'm seeing here, yes I understand that this is supposed to be easier than the HELL difficulty, but honestly I think you should map more beats Meh
00:50:102 - so your gonna map this is master difficulty but not here? Whoops


can't find any thing in your other difficulties, good luck with rank
Thanks ;w;

• 
  [master]

1. 00:26:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i dont understand why the rhythm here is different from 00:21:486 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:42:102 (7,8) - make these a slider like you did in the previous measure? 00:40:871 (7) -
3. 00:46:871 - you could've mapped 1/4s here like you did at 00:47:640 (2,3,4,5,6) -
4. 01:06:256 (3) - this feels really weird, rhythm would fit better like this
5. 01:10:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the sounds here are pretty strong, maybe try a different pattern from 01:09:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - or increase spacing more for emphasis
6. 01:46:409 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you could increase these jumps a lot more for emphasis, and especially considering its the end of your map
   
   [infinite]
7. 00:27:640 (1) - change this into two circles?
8. 00:40:871 (4) - why isn't this a slider like 00:42:102 (4) - ? its basically the same sound
9. 00:52:256 (1) - forgot NC?
10. 00:57:794 (1,2,3) - the turn here feels a little late, maybe change the corner to 00:57:794 (1) -
11. 01:13:179 (1,2,3,4) - not really sure what the rhythm here is, maybe try something like this?
12. 01:14:256 (5,6,1) - this could be confusing with a 1/2 because of the spacing, maybe extend 01:13:794 (4) -
13. 01:46:409 (1,2,3,4) - this is really underwhelming in comparison to the build up in the song, and especially since its at the end, you could slowly make the jumps larger and slowly build up or something
    
    [xxx]
14. 00:10:409 - this part seems really undermapped to me, since even though its the highest difficulty, you still use the same rhythm as all the other difficulties. maybe consider adding a note where the sliderends are, especially when there's stronger sounds starting from 00:15:333 - i guess this goes for similar sections
15. 00:37:486 - try a spinner here?
16. 00:43:333 (7,8) - did you mean to make this a 1/4 jump? that's way too extreme lol
17. 00:49:794 - a spinnerend seems like a really weak way to map this sound, maybe begin with a circle from here
18. 00:57:794 (1,2,3) - maybe sharp corner on 1 instead? stronger sound there
19. 01:02:102 (1,1,1,1) - shouldn't you start each of these measures with a 1/1 slider like with 01:00:871 (1) - ?
20. 01:03:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the pitch goes way lower here, smaller jumps here could reflect that nicely\
21. 01:13:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i'd understand if these jumps were smaller, but this feels overmapped considering the main melody is 1/1s here
22. 01:15:025 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - sounds like stream ended too early, there's still another sound at 01:15:563 -
23. 01:51:333 (1) - there are a lot of strong sounds here that i feel like should be mapped with more than a spinner, considering its a 7* map
    
    ok that's all i have, lol, i have no idea how to mod lower difficulties, so i wouldn't be helping anyone by doing that
    GL!

JellyAddiction wrote:

Are non-mod things even allowed here? I have no idea how this mapping stuff works.

Anyways, just here to share my most likely shit opinion.

When I first heard the song, I was expecting a super shitstorm of notes and sliders. Decided to play on XXX diff because I wanted the full experience.

To put it bluntly, I found it really boring. As I said earlier, I was expecting crazy garbage so that's probably the reason I feel this way. XXX diff ( the only diff I've bothered to play so far) was just so uninteresting. It was just a few easy sliders, a kinda spaced stream, and a bunch of jumps. Nothing to note here. Nothing to remember for. It feels like you could do so much with this tune, this beat. But all I got were a bunch of 7* jumps. The easy kind, too.

Take a look at t+pazolite - Electric "Sister" Bitch https://osu.ppy.sh/s/441459. It's got (intense? most likely a me thing again) streams, jumps, slider spam, the whole nine yards. It feels fun to play, while the XXX diff of this map is just (to me ofc) dull.

Again, this is most likely just my really shit opinion. It's probably best not to take anything I say to heart. I'm no expert, just a bored 4k looking for something crazy to play I guess.

Zyl wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 4 de octubre de 2016 at 17:02:39

Artist: t+pazolite
Title: CENSORED!!
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: Reol Highscore Monster Freeze DanganRonpa Ooi O2i3 Touhou Trent83 Tatsh GameOver alice's emotion Koishi Komeiji sdvx sound voltex iii graviry wars museca ZUN Team Shanghai Alice Blossom Extra stage boss Touhou 11 Subterranean Animism Hartmann's youkai girl reitaisai 13
BPM: 195
Filesize: 8684kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

1. ADVANCED!! (2,92 stars, 228 notes)
2. ANOTHER!! (4,02 stars, 302 notes)
3. BASIC!! (1,11 stars, 77 notes)
4. BEGINNER!! (0,73 stars, 42 notes)
5. EXHAUST!! (4,5 stars, 347 notes)
6. EXPERT!! (5,56 stars, 405 notes)
7. EXTREME!! (5,13 stars, 335 notes)
8. INFINITE!! (6,51 stars, 415 notes)
9. MASTER!! (6,22 stars, 425 notes)
10. NOVICE!! (1,54 stars, 90 notes)
11. XXX!! (7,13 stars, 482 notes)

Download: t+pazolite - CENSORED!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
¡Support the artist on his official pages!
Soundcloud | Twitter | ITunes
¡Prepare yourself for the fun!
Are you sure that you can beat this one?

¡DIE!
Here's another hitsound if you doesn't like the yell sound

- Hitsounding as Random as me -
Keh heh heh~

Dedicated to: Nelson♥

Diff Spread:
-> Such a pussy.
-> Don't be coward.
-> Noob.
-> Here starts the fun! MY FUN
-> huh? OH! you are experienced that much to beat this one! ok go ahead!
-> I be will gentle, just for you!.
-> Wow... you are going too far... please stop...
-> You are just unstoppable! ok GO AHEAD "PRO"
-> YOU ARE PRETTY ANOYING HUH?... HMHM~ GOOD, DIE...
-> KH! BEST FROM ME FOR YOU! A FRIENDLY DEATH!!!!!
-> KEH HEH HEH~ ¡¡TH15 W1LL B3 Y0UR L45T BR34TH DUMB455!!
GAME OVER!!-> %W!HA-T Y=0U 4R3 D01N?G, S=(TO¡!?¡#"?P... ¡Format Complete!...

History (mm/dd/yyyy)

1. 07/31/2016: Beatmap Submission.
2. 08/03/2016: Added a new hitsounds.
3. 08/19/2016: Removed Advanced diff.
4. 17/09/2016: Re-named diffs.

¡Do your job haters!
¡Hate me all you want!
...You are just too weak...

Adams513 wrote:

Zyl wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 4 de octubre de 2016 at 17:02:39

Artist: t+pazolite
Title: CENSORED!!
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: Reol Highscore Monster Freeze DanganRonpa Ooi O2i3 Touhou Trent83 Tatsh GameOver alice's emotion Koishi Komeiji sdvx sound voltex iii graviry wars museca ZUN Team Shanghai Alice Blossom Extra stage boss Touhou 11 Subterranean Animism Hartmann's youkai girl reitaisai 13
BPM: 195
Filesize: 8684kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

1. ADVANCED!! (2,92 stars, 228 notes)
2. ANOTHER!! (4,02 stars, 302 notes)
3. BASIC!! (1,11 stars, 77 notes)
4. BEGINNER!! (0,73 stars, 42 notes)
5. EXHAUST!! (4,5 stars, 347 notes)
6. EXPERT!! (5,56 stars, 405 notes)
7. EXTREME!! (5,13 stars, 335 notes)
8. INFINITE!! (6,51 stars, 415 notes)
9. MASTER!! (6,22 stars, 425 notes)
10. NOVICE!! (1,54 stars, 90 notes)
11. XXX!! (7,13 stars, 482 notes)

Download: t+pazolite - CENSORED!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
¡Support the artist on his official pages!
Soundcloud | Twitter | ITunes
¡Prepare yourself for the fun!
Are you sure that you can beat this one?

¡DIE!
Here's another hitsound if you doesn't like the yell sound

- Hitsounding as Random as me -
Keh heh heh~

Dedicated to: Nelson♥

Diff Spread:
-> Such a pussy.
-> Don't be coward.
-> Noob.
-> Here starts the fun! MY FUN
-> huh? OH! you are experienced that much to beat this one! ok go ahead!
-> I be will gentle, just for you!.
-> Wow... you are going too far... please stop...
-> You are just unstoppable! ok GO AHEAD "PRO"
-> YOU ARE PRETTY ANOYING HUH?... HMHM~ GOOD, DIE...
-> KH! BEST FROM ME FOR YOU! A FRIENDLY DEATH!!!!!
-> KEH HEH HEH~ ¡¡TH15 W1LL B3 Y0UR L45T BR34TH DUMB455!!
GAME OVER!!-> %W!HA-T Y=0U 4R3 D01N?G, S=(TO¡!?¡#"?P... ¡Format Complete!...

History (mm/dd/yyyy)

1. 07/31/2016: Beatmap Submission.
2. 08/03/2016: Added a new hitsounds.
3. 08/19/2016: Removed Advanced diff.
4. 17/09/2016: Re-named diffs.

¡Do your job haters!
¡Hate me all you want!
...You are just too weak...

PLS RANK THIS!!!

Happily to be your first post

Renumi wrote:

mfw you still haven't removed reol and have "graviry" as opposed to gravity in the tags

Tags: Reol Highscore Monster Freeze DanganRonpa Ooi O2i3 Tatsh GameOver
like these don't have anything to do with the map sure the thematic is the same but??

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:

Good luck with your map, and please, don't forget : you are not Fort.

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:

I feel like Zyl tries to be Fort... too much... I don't really know...

Silverboxer wrote:

I'm actually really surprised to see this kind of response. Please bother me some time to mod this when you re-do more of the set, I would like to try and help you out a bit. good luck