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Gyuso's Chex Modding!



hi! Thank you for req!


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Mod!
[General]
  1. 1.37 / 2.22 / 2.66 / 3.83 . HD~MX diff gap is far. more up HD diff star rate
[HD]
  1. add one more note:00:01:077 - 00:01:783 - 00:02:489 - 00:03:195 - 00:03:901 - 00:05:313 - . same sound for 00:00:372 - here
  2. 00:07:783 - snare sound. add 2 note
  3. 00:17:489 - Symbal sound. add 1 note
  4. 00:17:754 (17754|1,17842|2) - move to left and 00:17:930 - add to 3
  5. 00:18:724 (18724|3,18724|0) - 00:19:783 - is same sound. 00:19:783 - add to 1
  6. 00:20:136 - ^
  7. 00:20:842 - ^
  8. 00:22:254 - add to 4
  9. 00:22:783 - add to 3
  10. 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23313|0,23313|1) - same sound. 00:23:313 (23313|0,23313|1) - ctrl + h
  11. Putting double notes on the bass sound is recommended such as:00:24:371 -, 00:25:077 -, 00:25:783 etc.
  12. 00:35:666 - add 2 note
  13. 00:40:254 - add to 3
  14. 00:40:430 (40430|2,40519|3) - Ctrl + J
  15. 00:41:577 - add to 2
  16. 00:41:842 - ^
  17. 00:47:224 - add to 3
  18. 00:47:489 - add to 3
  19. 00:48:460 - add 1 note
  20. 00:48:548 (48548|3,48724|3) - double note
  21. 00:48:901 - symbal sound. add 1 note
  22. 00:54:724 - ^
  23. 00:57:019 - ^
  24. 00:57:371 (57371|3) - move to 3 and add to 4 by 00:57:460 - here
  25. 01:00:371 - symbal sound
  26. 01:06:019 - ^
  27. 01:08:842 - ^
  28. 01:11:666 - ^
  29. 01:12:901 - ^
  30. 01:25:783 - ^ add to 4
  31. After, Drum sound Putting double note recommended
[MX]
  1. 00:12:283 (12283|2) - move to 1 and 00:12:371 (12371|0,12371|1) - ctrl + h
  2. 00:12:195 (12195|3) - delete
  3. 00:15:195 - symbal sound. add 1 note
  4. 00:16:960 (16960|0) - delete
  5. 00:26:754 - add to 2
  6. 00:31:519 - ^
  7. 00:34:960 - add 1 note
  8. 00:40:871 (40871|1) - delete
  9. 00:40:342 (40342|1) - ^
  10. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - ^
  11. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - add to 1
  12. 00:48:107 - add to 3
  13. 00:48:901 - add to 2
  14. 00:50:489 - not good snap. remap plz. ex)
  15. 00:57:460 - add to 3 and 00:57:371 (57371|2) - move to 2
  16. 01:06:019 - 3 note
  17. 01:08:401 (68401|2) - delete
  18. 01:13:077 (73077|0) - no sound. delete
  19. 01:25:519 (85519|0) - delete
  20. 01:27:195 - why 3 note? delete 1 note
  21. 01:30:548 - add 1 note
  22. 01:31:254 - add to 2
  23. 01:36:548 - no ... not match sound. remake plz. ex)
  24. 01:39:901 - symbal. 3 note
  25. 01:55:430 - add 1 note
  26. 02:02:489 - symbal sound add 1 note
  27. 02:08:136 - ^
  28. 02:22:430 - and 02:23:489 - here. add LN finish for 02:24:724 - here
ok, i finished.
you I listened again to slowly.this map is more need self modding.

Good luck! XD
Topic Starter
Syadow-

[ Gyuso ] wrote:

Gyuso's Chex Modding!



hi! Thank you for req!


1ㅣ2ㅣ3ㅣ4

Mod!
[General]
  1. 1.37 / 2.22 / 2.66 / 3.83 . HD~MX diff gap is far. more up HD diff star rate
[HD]
  1. add one more note:00:01:077 - 00:01:783 - 00:02:489 - 00:03:195 - 00:03:901 - 00:05:313 - . same sound for 00:00:372 - here
  2. 00:07:783 - snare sound. add 2 note
  3. 00:17:489 - Symbal sound. add 1 note
  4. 00:17:754 (17754|1,17842|2) - move to left and 00:17:930 - add to 3
  5. 00:18:724 (18724|3,18724|0) - 00:19:783 - is same sound. 00:19:783 - add to 1
  6. 00:20:136 - ^
  7. 00:20:842 - ^
  8. 00:22:254 - add to 4
  9. 00:22:783 - add to 3
  10. 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23313|0,23313|1) - same sound. 00:23:313 (23313|0,23313|1) - ctrl + h
  11. Putting double notes on the bass sound is recommended such as:00:24:371 -, 00:25:077 -, 00:25:783 etc.
  12. 00:35:666 - add 2 note
  13. 00:40:254 - add to 3
  14. 00:40:430 (40430|2,40519|3) - Ctrl + J
  15. 00:41:577 - add to 2
  16. 00:41:842 - ^
  17. 00:47:224 - add to 3
  18. 00:47:489 - add to 3
  19. 00:48:460 - add 1 note
  20. 00:48:548 (48548|3,48724|3) - double note
  21. 00:48:901 - symbal sound. add 1 note
  22. 00:54:724 - ^
  23. 00:57:019 - ^
  24. 00:57:371 (57371|3) - move to 3 and add to 4 by 00:57:460 - here
  25. 01:00:371 - symbal sound
  26. 01:06:019 - ^
  27. 01:08:842 - ^
  28. 01:11:666 - ^
  29. 01:12:901 - ^
  30. 01:25:783 - ^ add to 4
  31. After, Drum sound Putting double note recommended
[MX]
  1. 00:12:283 (12283|2) - move to 1 and 00:12:371 (12371|0,12371|1) - ctrl + h
  2. 00:12:195 (12195|3) - delete
  3. 00:15:195 - symbal sound. add 1 note
  4. 00:16:960 (16960|0) - delete
  5. 00:26:754 - add to 2
  6. 00:31:519 - ^
  7. 00:34:960 - add 1 note
  8. 00:40:871 (40871|1) - delete
  9. 00:40:342 (40342|1) - ^
  10. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - ^
  11. 00:43:519 (43519|3) - add to 1
  12. 00:48:107 - add to 3
  13. 00:48:901 - add to 2
  14. 00:50:489 - not good snap. remap plz. ex)
  15. 00:57:460 - add to 3 and 00:57:371 (57371|2) - move to 2
  16. 01:06:019 - 3 note
  17. 01:08:401 (68401|2) - delete
  18. 01:13:077 (73077|0) - no sound. delete
  19. 01:25:519 (85519|0) - delete
  20. 01:27:195 - why 3 note? delete 1 note
  21. 01:30:548 - add 1 note
  22. 01:31:254 - add to 2
  23. 01:36:548 - no ... not match sound. remake plz. ex)
  24. 01:39:901 - symbal. 3 note
  25. 01:55:430 - add 1 note
  26. 02:02:489 - symbal sound add 1 note
  27. 02:08:136 - ^
  28. 02:22:430 - and 02:23:489 - here. add LN finish for 02:24:724 - here
ok, i finished.
you I listened again to slowly.this map is more need self modding.

Good luck! XD
wogh Thanks a lot Gyuso :) i'll take self mod
Please no Mod until my self mod Done thanks >w<

UPDATED YAY >W<
Frim4503

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM

General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : ok
  3. Hitsound : have hs but not palced it yet
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. Timing: ok
  6. AI Mod : ok

MX

  1. 00:12:107 -you can add note in here. Then move 00:12:195 (12195|1) -to 4 and 00:12:371 (12371|3) -to 2
  2. 00:09:548 (9548|2,9548|1) -you can make this triple for cymbal
  3. 00:19:430 (19430|2) -double pls. see before and after this part
  4. 00:49:077 (49077|1) -you can make this double since this have cymbal on it
  5. 01:06:019 (66019|1,66019|0) -triple cymbal.. etc. (I’m not mention it again, pls check it by yourself)
  6. 01:13:783 (73783|1) -move to 1. Different sound
  7. 01:26:048 (86048|1) -double pls. see after this part. You make double
  8. 01:28:430 (88430|1) -move to 1
  9. 01:27:813 (87813|2) -ghost note
  10. 01:29:489 (89489|0) -remove. Ghost note
  11. 01:30:548 -add note in 3
  12. 01:31:960 -^
  13. 01:32:666 -^double note
  14. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -move to 3
  15. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -add note in 1 and 3
Just take a look at MX diff it seem your map is still need more rework. Try to make it consistent, example: double note for whistle, triple note for clap/cymbal. Also try to look at other mania map specific.
Good luck
Mod Done
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Frim4503 wrote:


Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7
NM

General

  1. BG : ok
  2. Mp3 : ok
  3. Hitsound : have hs but not palced it yet
  4. Difficulty : ok
  5. Timing: ok
  6. AI Mod : ok

MX

  1. 00:12:107 -you can add note in here. Then move 00:12:195 (12195|1) -to 4 and 00:12:371 (12371|3) -to 2
  2. 00:09:548 (9548|2,9548|1) -you can make this triple for cymbal
  3. 00:19:430 (19430|2) -double pls. see before and after this part
  4. 00:49:077 (49077|1) -you can make this double since this have cymbal on it
  5. 01:06:019 (66019|1,66019|0) -triple cymbal.. etc. (I’m not mention it again, pls check it by yourself)
  6. 01:13:783 (73783|1) -move to 1. Different sound
  7. 01:26:048 (86048|1) -double pls. see after this part. You make double
  8. 01:28:430 (88430|1) -move to 1
  9. 01:27:813 (87813|2) -ghost note
  10. 01:29:489 (89489|0) -remove. Ghost note
  11. 01:30:548 -add note in 3
  12. 01:31:960 -^
  13. 01:32:666 -^double note
  14. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -move to 3
  15. 01:56:136 (116136|3) -add note in 1 and 3
Just take a look at MX diff it seem your map is still need more rework. Try to make it consistent, example: double note for whistle, triple note for clap/cymbal. Also try to look at other mania map specific.
Good luck
Mod Done

All Applied i'll take self mod again for check
Thanks a lot mas Frim xD
UPDATED
arcwinolivirus
"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime (Syadow-)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K Normal and 4K Hard


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: To have a better background ratio, It should be atleast exact size of one of the following: 800x600 (4:3) / 1024x768 (4:3) / 1366x768 (widescreen)
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]
SPOILER
00:00:372 (372|1) - move to 1? same as sound as 00:01:783 (1783|0) - and 00:03:195 (3195|0) - . It is for consistency so it can get the same feeling as 00:01:783 (1783|0,1960|3,2048|2,2136|0) -

00:04:607 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN0pA/70384e7f86.png for pitch relevancy. The stair pattern fits for the high to low pitch and the alternative for the last stair pattern.

00:09:548 - add note for cymbals since you made cymbals as doubles on 00:11:136 (11136|2,11136|1,11489|3,11489|1,11842|1,11842|2) -

00:15:195 - ^

00:16:254 - add note to 4 like you always did for every end-1/4-snare like 00:13:430 (13430|3,13430|2,14842|0,14842|1) -

00:16:783 (16783|0) - quite awkward on left hand, suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance.

00:23:489 - add note for cymbals same as you did on 00:29:313 (29313|0,29313|3) -

00:40:254 - ^ to 3

00:41:313 (41313|1) - remove since you only made single on the same sound at 00:41:666 (41666|3) -

00:44:136 (44136|2) - ^

00:46:077 - add note to 4 for cymbals.

00:46:607 (46607|1) - change to LN for the drum roll like you did at 00:43:783 (43783|3) -

00:47:666 (47666|0,47842|3) - add note to make them doubles like you did at 00:44:842 (44842|2,44842|1,45019|3,45019|0) -

00:48:548 - add note to 2 it fits for the guitar-like sound + for the percussion as well.

01:04:077 (64077|3) - remove as the HD doesnt even have mini LN here. Also 2-note presses occured here while HD only has single note here.

01:05:489 (65489|0) - Change to single note. Same reason as above about mini LN.

01:06:901 (66901|1) - ^

01:09:724 (69724|1) - ^

01:11:136 (71136|2) - ^

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - move to 3 and 4 respectively for better and comfortable note arrangement.

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - add note for cymbals.

01:27:901 (87901|0) - remove as there is no cymbal here to make it double press.

01:31:430 - add note for cymbals.

01:34:254 - ^

01:37:254 - add note so the starting flow of notes won't break. feels empty here. It is the same as 01:40:077 (100077|2) -

01:42:901 - ^

01:47:489 - must add note as strong sound occured here which is the cymbals.

01:58:254 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN1oL/12031b6483.png which focuses more on cymbals by doubles. With the doubles, it emphasizes the strong sound which is comfortable.

02:05:313 - add note to 2 for cymbals.

02:10:607 - ^ to 3

02:28:077 - add note so the flow won't break just like 02:33:724 (153724|1,154077|3) -

02:28:430 - ^

02:43:430 - add note for cymbals.

02:43:960 - ^

02:45:371 - ^


[HD]
SPOILER
00:01:342 (1342|2,1430|1) - ctrl H so it can be more comfortable and counter part of 00:03:371 (3371|3,3460|2,3548|1,3548|0) -

00:05:577 (5577|2,5666|1) - ^

00:06:371 (6371|3) - move to 2, both hands fits more.

00:12:195 - add note cymbals.

00:23:313 (23313|2,23489|0) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.

00:40:342 (40342|1) - remove, no sound and MX do not have note in this 1/4 blue line.

00:48:636 - add note as there is snare drum here. Add in MX as well.

00:51:195 (51195|1,51195|2) - move to 1 and 4 as it fits more than index fingers.

00:53:577 (53577|1,53666|2,53666|0,53754|1) - I would like to suggest to rearrange this pattern as it gives awkward feeling.

00:56:666 (56666|2) - move to 4

01:05:930 (65930|2) - remove, no sound here. MX doesn't have a note in this line.

01:13:607 (73607|3) - move to 2 as following the pitch.

01:27:813 (87813|1) - remove no sound and no note at MX here.

01:30:548 - add note for the beat sound.

01:33:019 (93019|3) - remove, no sound here. No note at MX as well.

01:33:283 (93283|3) - ^

01:34:077 - add note for cymbals.

01:56:136 (116136|3) - move to 3 so it can be a stair pattern for 01:55:430 (115430|0,115783|1,116489|3) - which gives pitch relevancy for the guitar-like sound.

02:09:548 - add note for the beat.

02:09:901 - ^

02:10:254 (130254|3,130342|2,130430|1,130519|0,130607|1,130695|2) - change to single note. MX's notes are non-LN

02:17:489 (137489|2) - move to 1 just like 02:18:548 (138548|0,138636|1,138724|3,138724|2) -

02:30:195 - add note for cymbals.

02:35:842 - ^

02:40:077 - add note for snare emphasis

02:42:107 (162107|1,162283|3) - remove, no sound and no notes for MX here.

02:42:019 - and 02:42:195 - add note, it should be the same double notes as 02:40:783 (160783|0,160783|3,160960|2,160960|1) -

02:43:519 (163519|2,163695|0) - remove. same reason as previous.

02:43:430 (163430|3,163607|1) - add note to make double.

02:44:930 (164930|3,165107|3,165283|1) - remove. same reason as previous.

02:46:254 - add note to 1, strong sound cymbals.

02:44:842 (164842|1,165019|2,165195|0) - add note to make it double.


[Overall]
Great Miku song pick~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334/
Thank you so much for the contract, until next time~
Good luck! Here have a star :)


~ END OF CONTRACT ~
Topic Starter
Syadow-

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime (Syadow-)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 2 - 4K Normal and 4K Hard


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.


[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: To have a better background ratio, It should be atleast exact size of one of the following: 800x600 (4:3) / 1024x768 (4:3) / 1366x768 (widescreen)
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
_ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]
SPOILER
00:00:372 (372|1) - move to 1? same as sound as 00:01:783 (1783|0) - and 00:03:195 (3195|0) - . It is for consistency so it can get the same feeling as 00:01:783 (1783|0,1960|3,2048|2,2136|0) - Oki uwu

00:04:607 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN0pA/70384e7f86.png for pitch relevancy. The stair pattern fits for the high to low pitch and the alternative for the last stair pattern. Nice Applied

00:09:548 - add note for cymbals since you made cymbals as doubles on 00:11:136 (11136|2,11136|1,11489|3,11489|1,11842|1,11842|2) - Oh i missed it thanks

00:15:195 - ^

00:16:254 - add note to 4 like you always did for every end-1/4-snare like 00:13:430 (13430|3,13430|2,14842|0,14842|1) - Oki

00:16:783 (16783|0) - quite awkward on left hand, suggesting to move to 3 for hand balance. oki

00:23:489 - add note for cymbals same as you did on 00:29:313 (29313|0,29313|3) - Oki

00:40:254 - ^ to 3 oki

00:41:313 (41313|1) - remove since you only made single on the same sound at 00:41:666 (41666|3) - Applied

00:44:136 (44136|2) - ^ Applied

00:46:077 - add note to 4 for cymbals. Applied

00:46:607 (46607|1) - change to LN for the drum roll like you did at 00:43:783 (43783|3) - Applied

00:47:666 (47666|0,47842|3) - add note to make them doubles like you did at 00:44:842 (44842|2,44842|1,45019|3,45019|0) - Applied

00:48:548 - add note to 2 it fits for the guitar-like sound + for the percussion as well. Applied

01:04:077 (64077|3) - remove as the HD doesnt even have mini LN here. Also 2-note presses occured here while HD only has single note here. Applied

01:05:489 (65489|0) - Change to single note. Same reason as above about mini LN. Applied

01:06:901 (66901|1) - ^

01:09:724 (69724|1) - ^

01:11:136 (71136|2) - ^

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - move to 3 and 4 respectively for better and comfortable note arrangement. Applied

01:12:901 (72901|0,73077|3) - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:27:901 (87901|0) - remove as there is no cymbal here to make it double press. Applied

01:31:430 - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:34:254 - ^ Applied

01:37:254 - add note so the starting flow of notes won't break. feels empty here. It is the same as 01:40:077 (100077|2) - Applied

01:42:901 - ^

01:47:489 - must add note as strong sound occured here which is the cymbals. Applied

01:58:254 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qN1oL/12031b6483.png which focuses more on cymbals by doubles. With the doubles, it emphasizes the strong sound which is comfortable. Applied

02:05:313 - add note to 2 for cymbals. Applied

02:10:607 - ^ to 3 Applied

02:28:077 - add note so the flow won't break just like 02:33:724 (153724|1,154077|3) - Applied

02:28:430 - ^ Applied

02:43:430 - add note for cymbals. Applied

02:43:960 - ^ Applied

02:45:371 - ^Applied


[HD]
SPOILER
00:01:342 (1342|2,1430|1) - ctrl H so it can be more comfortable and counter part of 00:03:371 (3371|3,3460|2,3548|1,3548|0) - Applied

00:05:577 (5577|2,5666|1) - ^ Applied

00:06:371 (6371|3) - move to 2, both hands fits more. Applied

00:12:195 - add note cymbals. Applied

00:23:313 (23313|2,23489|0) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern. Nice Thanks >w<

00:40:342 (40342|1) - remove, no sound and MX do not have note in this 1/4 blue line. Applied

00:48:636 - add note as there is snare drum here. Add in MX as well. Applied

00:51:195 (51195|1,51195|2) - move to 1 and 4 as it fits more than index fingers. Applied

00:53:577 (53577|1,53666|2,53666|0,53754|1) - I would like to suggest to rearrange this pattern as it gives awkward feeling. Haha xD fixed

00:56:666 (56666|2) - move to 4 Applied

01:05:930 (65930|2) - remove, no sound here. MX doesn't have a note in this line. Applied

01:13:607 (73607|3) - move to 2 as following the pitch. Applied

01:27:813 (87813|1) - remove no sound and no note at MX here. Applied

01:30:548 - add note for the beat sound. Applied

01:33:019 (93019|3) - remove, no sound here. No note at MX as well. Applied

01:33:283 (93283|3) - ^ Applied

01:34:077 - add note for cymbals. Applied

01:56:136 (116136|3) - move to 3 so it can be a stair pattern for 01:55:430 (115430|0,115783|1,116489|3) - which gives pitch relevancy for the guitar-like sound. Wow Thanks uwu

02:09:548 - add note for the beat. Applied

02:09:901 - ^ Applied

02:10:254 (130254|3,130342|2,130430|1,130519|0,130607|1,130695|2) - change to single note. MX's notes are non-LN Cool Pattern 8-) Fixed

02:17:489 (137489|2) - move to 1 just like 02:18:548 (138548|0,138636|1,138724|3,138724|2) - Applied

02:30:195 - add note for cymbals. Applied

02:35:842 - ^ Applied

02:40:077 - add note for snare emphasis Applied

02:42:107 (162107|1,162283|3) - remove, no sound and no notes for MX here. Applied

02:42:019 - and 02:42:195 - add note, it should be the same double notes as 02:40:783 (160783|0,160783|3,160960|2,160960|1) - Applied

02:43:519 (163519|2,163695|0) - remove. same reason as previous. Applied

02:43:430 (163430|3,163607|1) - add note to make double. Applied

02:44:930 (164930|3,165107|3,165283|1) - remove. same reason as previous. Applied

02:46:254 - add note to 1, strong sound cymbals. Applied

02:44:842 (164842|1,165019|2,165195|0) - add note to make it double. Applied


[Overall]
Great Miku song pick~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334/ Done >w<)b
Thank you so much for the contract, until next time~
Good luck! Here have a star :) AAAAAAA


~ END OF CONTRACT ~
All Applied Thanks A lot Arcwin for mod n Star uwu)b
UPDATED
Garalulu
Hi, Syadow! sry for late ㅠㅅㅠ

Team Symphony Mania Modding Queue


[EZ]
00:00:372 - 00:06:019 - let's start from the first part!

00:01:254 (1254|0,1430|2,1607|0,1783|1) - this is same sound with 00:02:666 (2666|1,2842|0,3195|2) . so I think you can add one note at 00:03:019
00:01:783 (1783|1,2136|3,2313|2) - this is same sound with 00:03:195 (3195|2,3371|0,3548|1,3724|3) . and 00:00:372 (372|0,724|3,901|1) . how about delete one note at 00:03:371 (3371|0) ?

00:06:724 - 00:18:019 - this is same melody construction. you should organize it with consistency.
idk what sound do you put on it. melody or drum?

00:06:724 (6724|0,7077|3,7254|2) - the first sound occupied three notes but 00:08:136 - has only one note. 00:09:548 - is same!
and 00:13:783 - has four notes. make them same structure :3

00:10:960 - 00:12:371 - they had high sound so how about add one note at 00:11:313 - , 00:11:666 - 00:12:195 - ?

01:03:195 - 01:13:783 - you can map this part same with 00:06:724 - 00:18:019

[NM]

00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - another part in 00:00:372 - 00:06:019 , they had only two notes with this sound.
00:02:666 (2666|0,2842|3) - 00:04:783 (4783|1,4960|2) - 00:05:489 (5489|2,5666|0) -

00:18:019 - 00:39:901 - too easy and looks similar with EZ. add more notes to increase diff harder.

01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|2,62136|0,62313|2,62313|1) - make consistency with 00:56:136 (56136|0,56136|3,56313|2,56313|1,56489|0,56666|3,56666|2) -

[MX]

00:48:636 - add 1 note for focusing drum

01:19:960 (79960|3,79960|1,80048|0,80048|2,80136|2,80136|1,80136|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5934429

kk i'm done with this

Good Luck!!
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Garalulu wrote:

Hi, Syadow! sry for late ㅠㅅㅠ

Team Symphony Mania Modding Queue


[EZ]
00:00:372 - 00:06:019 - let's start from the first part!

00:01:254 (1254|0,1430|2,1607|0,1783|1) - this is same sound with 00:02:666 (2666|1,2842|0,3195|2) . so I think you can add one note at 00:03:019
00:01:783 (1783|1,2136|3,2313|2) - this is same sound with 00:03:195 (3195|2,3371|0,3548|1,3724|3) . and 00:00:372 (372|0,724|3,901|1) . how about delete one note at 00:03:371 (3371|0) ? Oki Applied

00:06:724 - 00:18:019 - this is same melody construction. you should organize it with consistency.
idk what sound do you put on it. melody or drum? Melody

00:06:724 (6724|0,7077|3,7254|2) - the first sound occupied three notes but 00:08:136 - has only one note. 00:09:548 - is same!
and 00:13:783 - has four notes. make them same structure :3 oh thanks remind me >w<)b

00:10:960 - 00:12:371 - they had high sound so how about add one note at 00:11:313 - , 00:11:666 - 00:12:195 - ? Oki

01:03:195 - 01:13:783 - you can map this part same with 00:06:724 - 00:18:019 Thanks Rearranged

[NM]

00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - another part in 00:00:372 - 00:06:019 , they had only two notes with this sound.
00:02:666 (2666|0,2842|3) - 00:04:783 (4783|1,4960|2) - 00:05:489 (5489|2,5666|0) - For Safe in NM diff

00:18:019 - 00:39:901 - too easy and looks similar with EZ. add more notes to increase diff harder. No! cuz SR increase

01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|2,62136|0,62313|2,62313|1) - make consistency with 00:56:136 (56136|0,56136|3,56313|2,56313|1,56489|0,56666|3,56666|2) - Nice Thanks

[MX]

00:48:636 - add 1 note for focusing drum Oki

01:19:960 (79960|3,79960|1,80048|0,80048|2,80136|2,80136|1,80136|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5934429 Thanks

kk i'm done with this

Good Luck!!
Thanks for mod Garalulu :)
UPDATED
Rivals_7

Mod Request


capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime[OsuMania]



You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it
[General]
Background:Not Fine! Find the BG that has at least 1366 x 768. This has been mentioned several times, why you still not change this?
Metadata: Fine
Mapset:fine
Difficulty Spread:Fine
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Ok
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: No HS
Timing: Fine
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4


EZ



SPOILER
  • tfw its named EZ but still 1'6*

    This diff could be more pitch wise, take a serious look on each note.
  1. suggestion below is to made this diff properly balanced between hands
    00:01:607 (1607|0) - to col 4
    00:05:313 (5313|2) - 4
    00:06:724 (6724|0,6901|2) - 4|1
    02:29:489 (149489|3,149666|2,149842|3) - 3|4|2
    02:36:019 (156019|1) - 3
    02:44:313 (164313|2,164489|1) - 2|4
  2. 00:11:313 (11313|2,11313|1,11666|1,11666|2,12195|2,12195|3) - imo there's no need to doubles, since this is EZ so Single note should be fine. (Except for cymbal, but you dont have to double all the cymbals)
  3. 01:07:430 (67430|3,67430|2,67783|2,67783|1,68136|1,68136|0) - ^
  4. 01:12:371 (72371|1,72371|2,72724|3,72724|2,72901|0,72901|1,73077|3,73254|3) - rearrange, thats all i could say. this is too tricky for EZ
  5. 02:27:901 (147901|1,148254|1) - pitch is not same

NM



SPOILER
  • The consistencies is quite messed up, especially at balancing. some pattern could be improved more
  1. 00:04:166 (4166|3) - delete. you didnt map this kind of noises before - 00:01:342 - so its inconsistent
  2. 00:11:136 (11136|1,11313|0,11489|1,11666|0,11842|1) - alright. since this is NM, you will have to pay attention on making a simple pattern but "challenging". like this one. it is challenging, but its formed a trill. which can confuse player whose still new at this gamemode. I would recommed the pattern that might fit with songs atmosphere as well.

  3. 00:16:960 (16960|3) - i'd say to better delete this. let the cymbal have the doubles
  4. 00:34:960 (34960|1) - no need for doubles. see - 00:23:666 (23666|3) -
  5. 00:47:489 (47489|1,47666|1,48371|1,48548|1) - I recommend to avoid jack as possible in eaasier difficulties. except on special cases. like, same pitch
  6. 01:29:136 (89136|0,89313|0) - wh.. no pls. change pls
  7. 01:30:724 (90724|1,90989|1,91254|1) - uhh...
  8. 01:34:077 (94077|0,94254|0) - hue
  9. 01:35:666 (95666|1,95842|1) - not a same pitch, even the vocal pitch is different. so why same col?
  10. 01:39:548 (99548|2,99548|0) - this clap doubled but - 01:40:254 (100254|1) - 01:40:960 (100960|3) - isn't. inconsistent. (there's probably more. im lazy :u)
  11. 01:57:195 (117195|3,117371|3,117548|2,117724|2,117901|1,118077|1) - i did not recommend this for NM tbh
  12. 02:10:254 (130254|1,130254|3,130342|2,130430|0,130519|1) - Nope, this is just too tricky for NM. pls change

HD



SPOILER
  • Some stream is quite uncomfy, plus some ghost note
  1. 00:10:960 (10960|1) - move to 3. avoid shielding - 00:10:960 (10960|1,11136|1) -
  2. 00:24:371 (24371|0,24460|1,24548|0,24636|1) - one handed trill is fine tho, but this is like... the only one on the entire diff lel. so maybe move - 00:24:548 (24548|0,24636|1) - to 4|1
  3. 00:28:430 (28430|1,28607|0,28783|1) - 3|2|1 respectively. better handling
  4. 00:41:489 (41489|3) - ghost
  5. 00:42:548 (42548|0) - ^
  6. 00:43:254 (43254|1,43254|2,43430|2,43430|1) - well actually it'll be more better if its moved to left one step
  7. 00:43:607 (43607|3) - i feel that this should be doubled too. technically still a part of the 2-noter crash noise before (- 00:43:254 (43254|2,43254|1,43430|1,43430|2) - ) so I see no reason why is this one note
  8. 00:44:313 (44313|3) - ghost.
    I'll stop about ghost now, heard the map with 0% fx noises to easily spot 'em
  9. 00:44:754 -
  10. 00:45:371 (45371|1,66548|1) - not really convenient imo so just move this to 3
  11. 01:23:313 (83313|2) - move to 2 for more lenient gameplay
  12. 01:25:607 (85607|0,85783|3) - 4|3
  13. 01:27:548 (87548|2,87724|2) - different pitch, so idk why is this in the same column
  14. 01:28:607 - where is the SN like you do before? - 01:25:783 -
  15. 01:30:371 (90371|1) - pretty sure this should be doubled
  16. 01:50:724 (110724|3,110901|3) - different pitch. why same column?
  17. 02:35:666 (155666|0) - more lenient if its moved to 4
  18. 02:40:430 (160430|2) - should be doubled?
  19. 02:49:033 (169033|2) - some of the notes, like this one, are quite earlier than it should be. try using 1/12 (Should applied to all diff)

MX


SPOILER
  • Still many ghost notes occured, unecessary jacks and inconsistencies. this diff still needs a lot of work
  1. 00:16:607 (16607|3,16607|0,16783|1,16783|2) - these doubles are literally louder than - 00:16:960 (16960|3,16960|0,16960|1) - so in the end it'll be like [img]puu.sh/qPXiu/43b086ab49.jpg[/img]
  2. 00:17:489 (17489|0) - delete. even tho its cymbal but its not enough emphasize for triple
  3. 00:20:048 (20048|0) - delete. no synth. Considering you use most of these Short Notes for synth
  4. 00:31:783 (31783|2) - i dont think i see this before. take a look at - 00:26:136 (26136|1) - . its a same phase but no LN are present. So this is inconsistent
  5. 00:32:754 (32754|1) - no synth here. but - 00:32:930 - has synth. so add note there
  6. 00:36:283 (36283|0) - 00:36:989 (36989|1) - 00:37:695 (37695|1) - No synth
  7. 00:38:754 (38754|0,38842|2) - ctrl+g. your left lane is quite heavy - 00:38:136 (38136|0,38136|1,38313|0,38401|1,38577|0,38666|1,38754|0,38842|1) -
  8. 00:41:489 (41489|0) - Ghost note
  9. 00:41:842 (41842|0,41842|3) - i reckon this should be triple-ed as well. loud crash
  10. 00:42:548 (42548|1) - I think this is a ghost
  11. 00:43:607 - try sounds more balanced
  12. 00:44:313 (44313|3,44313|1) - no beat. this should be empty
  13. 00:47:666 (47666|3,47666|0,47842|2,47842|1) - not triple-ed?
  14. 00:50:842 (50842|2,50842|1,51019|3,51019|2) - ctrl+g. to avoid triple stacking - 00:50:489 (50489|1,50666|1,50842|1) -
  15. 00:53:489 (53489|2,53666|2,53842|2,54019|2) - i dunno how should i made this to be more comfy. If i do, i might remap the entire stream part lel. Try to repattern.
  16. 00:57:371 (57371|0,57548|0,57724|0,57901|0,58077|0,58254|0) - #1 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  17. 00:58:607 (58607|1,58783|1,58960|1,59136|1) - #2 why so many jacks occured in the same hand in a row :<
  18. 00:59:489 (59489|1,59666|1,59842|1,60019|1) - #3 :u
  19. 01:00:636 - no note for vocal? just like - 00:54:813 (54813|3) -
  20. 01:00:813 (60813|2) - no vocal
  21. 01:00:989 - vocal
  22. 01:02:136 (62136|1,62313|0) - swap place. avoid - 01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|1,62136|1) -
  23. 01:26:666 (86666|2) - should be on the blue line above (1/4). the synth is there not here
  24. 01:27:195 (87195|0,87195|2,87195|3,87195|3) - Triple? arent - 01:26:842 (86842|0,86842|3) - should be triple instead. according to the sound you mapped. also STACKEEDD NOTES!!!
  25. 01:29:666 (89666|1,89666|0) - triple for crash
  26. 01:31:077 (91077|2,91077|0,91077|3) - delete one of these. cymbal is actually at - 01:30:989 (90989|1,90989|0) -
  27. 01:31:960 (91960|2) - to 1 pls
  28. 01:36:901 -
  29. 01:38:136 (98136|0) - delete. see at - 01:38:842 (98842|0,98842|3) - . They're same right so whats the purpose to make it different?
  30. 01:46:254 (106254|0,106430|0,106607|0,106783|1,106960|1,107136|1) - aaaaaaaaaaa
  31. 01:48:195 (108195|3,108195|2,108195|3) - STACKEEDD NOTES!!!(2)
  32. 01:50:901 (110901|2) - shift it to blue line above (1/4)
  33. 01:58:519 - missing note(s) ?
  34. 01:59:577 - ^
  35. 02:04:960 (124960|1) - pls delete,. the transition is really uncomfortable to hit
  36. 02:09:724 (129724|0,130077|3) - i guess this should be double?
  37. 02:16:077 (136077|1,136166|2,136254|3) - ctrl+h for more better handling
  38. 02:30:548 (150548|1,150636|1) - uhhh.... this isnt fit. just remove - 02:30:548 (150548|1) - for more convenient gameplay
  39. 02:33:195 (153195|1,153371|1,153548|1,153724|1) - :u
  40. 02:36:283 (156283|1) - ghost
  41. 02:36:636 - missing note and - 02:36:813 (156813|2) - is a ghost
  42. just.... the area after the third kiai is really randomly placed. pls check again carefully
  43. 02:52:607 - ohh no. not random SV. this is not even fit with the song :<

alrite, Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Syadow-
Still applied 20% from rival's mod cuz i busy with my homework
Maybe tomorrow all fix
Thanks a lot rival for mod >w<)b
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Rivals_7 wrote:


Mod Request


capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime[OsuMania]



You are not forced to applied all, if there's any suggestion that doesn't fit your mapping style, you can freely reject it
[General]
Background:Not Fine! Find the BG that has at least 1366 x 768. This has been mentioned several times, why you still not change this? Fixed My BG to 1366 x 768 Thanks >w<
Metadata: Fine
Mapset:fine
Difficulty Spread:Fine
AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A): Ok
MP3: Fine
Hitsound: No HS Oh god i Cant HS right now
Timing: Fine
Other Stuff: None

Column:
1|2|3|4


EZ



SPOILER
  • tfw its named EZ but still 1'6*

    This diff could be more pitch wise, take a serious look on each note.
  1. suggestion below is to made this diff properly balanced between hands All Applied
    00:01:607 (1607|0) - to col 4
    00:05:313 (5313|2) - 4
    00:06:724 (6724|0,6901|2) - 4|1
    02:29:489 (149489|3,149666|2,149842|3) - 3|4|2
    02:36:019 (156019|1) - 3
    02:44:313 (164313|2,164489|1) - 2|4
  2. 00:11:313 (11313|2,11313|1,11666|1,11666|2,12195|2,12195|3) - imo there's no need to doubles, since this is EZ so Single note should be fine. (Except for cymbal, but you dont have to double all the cymbals) Oki
  3. 01:07:430 (67430|3,67430|2,67783|2,67783|1,68136|1,68136|0) - ^ Oki
  4. 01:12:371 (72371|1,72371|2,72724|3,72724|2,72901|0,72901|1,73077|3,73254|3) - rearrange, thats all i could say. this is too tricky for EZ fixed
  5. 02:27:901 (147901|1,148254|1) - pitch is not same Oki

NM



SPOILER
  • The consistencies is quite messed up, especially at balancing. some pattern could be improved more
  1. 00:04:166 (4166|3) - delete. you didnt map this kind of noises before - 00:01:342 - so its inconsistent Oki
  2. 00:11:136 (11136|1,11313|0,11489|1,11666|0,11842|1) - alright. since this is NM, you will have to pay attention on making a simple pattern but "challenging". like this one. it is challenging, but its formed a trill. which can confuse player whose still new at this gamemode. I would recommed the pattern that might fit with songs atmosphere as well.
    Thanks for Suggestion >w<
  3. 00:16:960 (16960|3) - i'd say to better delete this. let the cymbal have the doubles oki
  4. 00:34:960 (34960|1) - no need for doubles. see - 00:23:666 (23666|3) - oki
  5. 00:47:489 (47489|1,47666|1,48371|1,48548|1) - I recommend to avoid jack as possible in eaasier difficulties. except on special cases. like, same pitch oki fixed
  6. 01:29:136 (89136|0,89313|0) - wh.. no pls. change pls fixed
  7. 01:30:724 (90724|1,90989|1,91254|1) - uhh... ;w;
  8. 01:34:077 (94077|0,94254|0) - hue ;w;
  9. 01:35:666 (95666|1,95842|1) - not a same pitch, even the vocal pitch is different. so why same col? fixed thats my old pattern :'v
  10. 01:39:548 (99548|2,99548|0) - this clap doubled but - 01:40:254 (100254|1) - 01:40:960 (100960|3) - isn't. inconsistent. (there's probably more. im lazy :u) fixed
  11. 01:57:195 (117195|3,117371|3,117548|2,117724|2,117901|1,118077|1) - i did not recommend this for NM tbh oki
  12. 02:10:254 (130254|1,130254|3,130342|2,130430|0,130519|1) - Nope, this is just too tricky for NM. pls change oki

HD



SPOILER
  • Some stream is quite uncomfy, plus some ghost note
  1. 00:10:960 (10960|1) - move to 3. avoid shielding - 00:10:960 (10960|1,11136|1) - Oki
  2. 00:24:371 (24371|0,24460|1,24548|0,24636|1) - one handed trill is fine tho, but this is like... the only one on the entire diff lel. so maybe move - 00:24:548 (24548|0,24636|1) - to 4|1 Oki
  3. 00:28:430 (28430|1,28607|0,28783|1) - 3|2|1 respectively. better handling Oki
  4. 00:41:489 (41489|3) - ghost oki
  5. 00:42:548 (42548|0) - ^ Oki
  6. 00:43:254 (43254|1,43254|2,43430|2,43430|1) - well actually it'll be more better if its moved to left one step fixed
  7. 00:43:607 (43607|3) - i feel that this should be doubled too. technically still a part of the 2-noter crash noise before (- 00:43:254 (43254|2,43254|1,43430|1,43430|2) - ) so I see no reason why is this one note fixed
  8. 00:44:313 (44313|3) - ghost. Oki
    I'll stop about ghost now, heard the map with 0% fx noises to easily spot 'em Thanks for suggestion
  9. 00:44:754 - Oki
  10. 00:45:371 (45371|1,66548|1) - not really convenient imo so just move this to 3 Oki
  11. 01:23:313 (83313|2) - move to 2 for more lenient gameplay Oki
  12. 01:25:607 (85607|0,85783|3) - 4|3 Oki
  13. 01:27:548 (87548|2,87724|2) - different pitch, so idk why is this in the same column oh :v thanks
  14. 01:28:607 - where is the SN like you do before? - 01:25:783 - ??
  15. 01:30:371 (90371|1) - pretty sure this should be doubled Oki
  16. 01:50:724 (110724|3,110901|3) - different pitch. why same column? aaaa again
  17. 02:35:666 (155666|0) - more lenient if its moved to 4 Oki
  18. 02:40:430 (160430|2) - should be doubled? yeah
  19. 02:49:033 (169033|2) - some of the notes, like this one, are quite earlier than it should be. try using 1/12 (Should applied to all diff)Fixed to All diff

MX


SPOILER
  • Still many ghost notes occured, unecessary jacks and inconsistencies. this diff still needs a lot of work
  1. 00:16:607 (16607|3,16607|0,16783|1,16783|2) - these doubles are literally louder than - 00:16:960 (16960|3,16960|0,16960|1) - so in the end it'll be like [img]puu.sh/qPXiu/43b086ab49.jpg[/img] oki Applied
  2. 00:17:489 (17489|0) - delete. even tho its cymbal but its not enough emphasize for triple Applied
  3. 00:20:048 (20048|0) - delete. no synth. Considering you use most of these Short Notes for synth wow thanks
  4. 00:31:783 (31783|2) - i dont think i see this before. take a look at - 00:26:136 (26136|1) - . its a same phase but no LN are present. So this is inconsistent I forget to remove that Ln, thanks
  5. 00:32:754 (32754|1) - no synth here. but - 00:32:930 - has synth. so add note there Oki Applied
  6. 00:36:283 (36283|0) - 00:36:989 (36989|1) - 00:37:695 (37695|1) - No synth ^
  7. 00:38:754 (38754|0,38842|2) - ctrl+g. your left lane is quite heavy - 00:38:136 (38136|0,38136|1,38313|0,38401|1,38577|0,38666|1,38754|0,38842|1) - Fixed
  8. 00:41:489 (41489|0) - Ghost note oki
  9. 00:41:842 (41842|0,41842|3) - i reckon this should be triple-ed as well. loud crash Oki
  10. 00:42:548 (42548|1) - I think this is a ghost Oki
  11. 00:43:607 - try sounds more balanced Fixed Thanks
  12. 00:44:313 (44313|3,44313|1) - no beat. this should be empty Oki
  13. 00:47:666 (47666|3,47666|0,47842|2,47842|1) - not triple-ed? triple hehe
  14. 00:50:842 (50842|2,50842|1,51019|3,51019|2) - ctrl+g. to avoid triple stacking - 00:50:489 (50489|1,50666|1,50842|1) - Oki
  15. 00:53:489 (53489|2,53666|2,53842|2,54019|2) - i dunno how should i made this to be more comfy. If i do, i might remap the entire stream part lel. Try to repattern. Fixed
  16. 00:57:371 (57371|0,57548|0,57724|0,57901|0,58077|0,58254|0) - #1 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa thanks
  17. 00:58:607 (58607|1,58783|1,58960|1,59136|1) - #2 why so many jacks occured in the same hand in a row :< aaaaaaa thanks
  18. 00:59:489 (59489|1,59666|1,59842|1,60019|1) - #3 :u masih ada aja yg jack ;w;
  19. 01:00:636 - no note for vocal? just like - 00:54:813 (54813|3) - Haha xD oki
  20. 01:00:813 (60813|2) - no vocal i'm not follow vocal there a sound
  21. 01:00:989 - vocal Keep mine
  22. 01:02:136 (62136|1,62313|0) - swap place. avoid - 01:01:783 (61783|1,61960|1,62136|1) - Nice >w< thanks
  23. 01:26:666 (86666|2) - should be on the blue line above (1/4). the synth is there not here Thanks remind me
  24. 01:27:195 (87195|0,87195|2,87195|3,87195|3) - Triple? arent - 01:26:842 (86842|0,86842|3) - should be triple instead. according to the sound you mapped. also STACKEEDD NOTES!!! Fixed
  25. 01:29:666 (89666|1,89666|0) - triple for crash oki
  26. 01:31:077 (91077|2,91077|0,91077|3) - delete one of these. cymbal is actually at - 01:30:989 (90989|1,90989|0) - wow thanks
  27. 01:31:960 (91960|2) - to 1 pls Oki
  28. 01:36:901 - ??
  29. 01:38:136 (98136|0) - delete. see at - 01:38:842 (98842|0,98842|3) - . They're same right so whats the purpose to make it different? Oki
  30. 01:46:254 (106254|0,106430|0,106607|0,106783|1,106960|1,107136|1) - aaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaa fixed
  31. 01:48:195 (108195|3,108195|2,108195|3) - STACKEEDD NOTES!!!(2) Fixed
  32. 01:50:901 (110901|2) - shift it to blue line above (1/4) wew Thanks
  33. 01:58:519 - missing note(s) ? Nice Thanks >w<
  34. 01:59:577 - ^
  35. 02:04:960 (124960|1) - pls delete,. the transition is really uncomfortable to hit Oki
  36. 02:09:724 (129724|0,130077|3) - i guess this should be double? yeah
  37. 02:16:077 (136077|1,136166|2,136254|3) - ctrl+h for more better handling oki
  38. 02:30:548 (150548|1,150636|1) - uhhh.... this isnt fit. just remove - 02:30:548 (150548|1) - for more convenient gameplay Oki
  39. 02:33:195 (153195|1,153371|1,153548|1,153724|1) - :u aaaaaaa again ;w;
  40. 02:36:283 (156283|1) - ghost oki
  41. 02:36:636 - missing note and - 02:36:813 (156813|2) - is a ghost Oki
  42. just.... the area after the third kiai is really randomly placed. pls check again carefully Done
  43. 02:52:607 - ohh no. not random SV. this is not even fit with the song :< aaaaaaa oki

alrite, Good Luck ;)
Thanks a lot Rivals for mod n Suggestion very useful >w<)b
UPDATED + NEW BG
Etsu
Hello!

Mania 4k NM from my Queue (Long time...sorry)

Note: You can reject my suggestion if something does not like for you. ;)

Columns: 0|1|2|3


General
  1. None.
EZ
0. 00:01:430 (1430|2) - delete? it is very early to press this key... (something confused for the new players) imo
1. 00:01:960 - missing note?
2. 00:03:371 - ^
3. 00:05:666 (5666|1,5842|0) - control + g? the sound changes
4. 00:23:666 - add a note for cymbal? considering in 01:20:136 (80136|1,80136|2) -
5. 01:35:666 - add LN for voice... it feels empty
6. 01:47:842 (107842|3) - move column 0? maybe for variation imo
7. 01:50:077 - missing note?
8. 01:52:607 - add LN for effect?
9. 02:36:371 - add a note for cymbal?
NM
0. 00:06:901 - missing note? (00:06:901 - to 00:10:783 - it is better adding notes like as 01:03:371 (63371|2) - to 01:08:666 (68666|1) - (as EZ) it is for this rest that comes later in 00:18:019 - to 00:39:901 - so it is better for this diff imo
1. 00:18:548 - add a note? ... same in 00:19:960 - is better for voice and 00:21:371 - and section similar... same for not repeating in 00:29:666 - that gives well like break imo
2. 00:33:724 - add note and 00:34:077 - same? better for voice this part... you have to see when it is the rhythm it can type since feels I eat a little boring (this diff makes seem as ez) imo
3. 01:04:960 - add a note for double?
4. 01:25:783 - add note for cymbal?
5. 01:46:960 - add note for jump... considering in 02:34:960 (154960|3,154960|1) -
6. 01:51:195 - i like add LN here... ends in 01:52:430 - imo
HD
0. 00:01:342 (1342|1) - delete? I don't understand that rhythm continuing you but it is better to continue with a single rhythm (essential) feels confuse (considering this 00:07:695 - ) imo
1. 00:02:754 (2754|1) - ^
2. 00:04:166 (4166|1) - ^
3. 00:06:724 - add a note for triple? is for the cymbal
4. 00:09:548 - ^
5. 00:28:783 (28783|2,28783|1,28960|1) - control + g? feels strange following this LN... (it is also better for the change of the sound) imo
6. 00:46:430 - add a note for double? same sound as 00:46:254 (46254|0,46254|3) - imo
7. 01:13:960 (73960|1,74136|1,74313|1) - move column 3? maybe for variation
8. 01:51:195 - add LN? xD
9. 02:36:371 - add a note for triple?
10. 02:37:783 - ^
11. 02:39:195 - ^
12. 02:46:254 - add a note for double?
MX
0. 01:25:254 (85254|1,85342|2,85342|0,85430|1,85430|3,85519|2,85607|3) - it feels strange this part...
1. 02:31:077 - add a note for triple? for the rhythm...
2. 02:31:783 - ^
3. 02:32:489 - ^... and sounds similar... (considering in 00:07:783 (7783|1,7783|0,7783|2) - , 00:09:195 (9195|0,9195|1,9195|3) - ...)

That is everything of my... GL :)
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

Mania 4k NM from my Queue (Long time...sorry)

Note: You can reject my suggestion if something does not like for you. ;)

Columns: 0|1|2|3


General
  1. None.
EZ
0. 00:01:430 (1430|2) - delete? it is very early to press this key... (something confused for the new players) imo I keep this cuz i make that pattern same with 00:06:724 -
1. 00:01:960 - missing note? Thanks >w<
2. 00:03:371 - ^ Thanks
3. 00:05:666 (5666|1,5842|0) - control + g? the sound changes oki
4. 00:23:666 - add a note for cymbal? considering in 01:20:136 (80136|1,80136|2) - nice thanks
5. 01:35:666 - add LN for voice... it feels empty oki
6. 01:47:842 (107842|3) - move column 0? maybe for variation imo oki
7. 01:50:077 - missing note? i confused with this part i think add note for now
8. 01:52:607 - add LN for effect? oki
9. 02:36:371 - add a note for cymbal? oki
NM
0. 00:06:901 - missing note? (00:06:901 - to 00:10:783 - it is better adding notes like as 01:03:371 (63371|2) - to 01:08:666 (68666|1) - (as EZ) it is for this rest that comes later in 00:18:019 - to 00:39:901 - so it is better for this diff imo Re arranged that part thanks xD
1. 00:18:548 - add a note? ... same in 00:19:960 - is better for voice and 00:21:371 - and section similar... same for not repeating in 00:29:666 - that gives well like break imo i keep it cuz will be inconsistence
2. 00:33:724 - add note and 00:34:077 - same? better for voice this part... you have to see when it is the rhythm it can type since feels I eat a little boring (this diff makes seem as ez) imo ^
3. 01:04:960 - add a note for double? I keep mine
4. 01:25:783 - add note for cymbal? oki
5. 01:46:960 - add note for jump... considering in 02:34:960 (154960|3,154960|1) - I keep too
6. 01:51:195 - i like add LN here... ends in 01:52:430 - imo No sound there
HD
0. 00:01:342 (1342|1) - delete? I don't understand that rhythm continuing you but it is better to continue with a single rhythm (essential) feels confuse (considering this 00:07:695 - ) imo i follow tiruring sound (idk the name :u
1. 00:02:754 (2754|1) - ^ ^
2. 00:04:166 (4166|1) - ^^
3. 00:06:724 - add a note for triple? is for the cymbal for HD i use 2 notes for cymbal
4. 00:09:548 - ^ ^
5. 00:28:783 (28783|2,28783|1,28960|1) - control + g? feels strange following this LN... (it is also better for the change of the sound) oki
6. 00:46:430 - add a note for double? same sound as 00:46:254 (46254|0,46254|3) - imo oki
7. 01:13:960 (73960|1,74136|1,74313|1) - move column 3? maybe for variation no over jack
8. 01:51:195 - add LN? xD no sound maybe for player's break xD
9. 02:36:371 - add a note for triple? i used 2 notes for cymbal
10. 02:37:783 - ^ ^
11. 02:39:195 - ^ ^
12. 02:46:254 - add a note for double? ^
MX
0. 01:25:254 (85254|1,85342|2,85342|0,85430|1,85430|3,85519|2,85607|3) - it feels strange this part... Fixed
1. 02:31:077 - add a note for triple? for the rhythm... Oki
2. 02:31:783 - ^ ^
3. 02:32:489 - ^... and sounds similar... (considering in 00:07:783 (7783|1,7783|0,7783|2) - , 00:09:195 (9195|0,9195|1,9195|3) - ...)Oki Thanks all fixed

That is everything of my... GL :)
Thanks for mod etsu :)
UPDATED
ExNeko
Here's Your mod :D

HD
00:01:783 (1783|2,1783|3) - Move to the left a line
00:32:666 (32666|3,32754|0,32842|2,32842|1) - Flip
01:07:430 (67430|1,67430|3,67607|0,67607|2,67783|1,67783|3,67960|2,67960|0,68136|3,68136|1,68313|2,68313|0) - Recommended left and right beating 、Beause this design is not easy to pass well in 1pc
01:12:371 (72371|3) - What is this?、You should add some LNs between these notes 01:12:371 (72371|0,73077|3) -
02:33:548 (153548|0,153548|3,153636|1,153724|2) - Flip
MX
00:12:371 (12371|3,12371|2) - Removal Hitsound、If you need to be able to turn up the volume in the Inherited Points
There are many places you use three sounds、I am not one by one example
00:36:901 (36901|2,37077|0,37077|3,37166|1,37254|2,37342|1,37430|2,37430|0,37430|3,37607|1,37783|3,37783|2) - Flip
00:42:636 (42636|1,42636|0,42724|2,42724|3) - Flip
01:07:430 (67430|3,67430|2,67607|2,67607|0,67607|1,67783|3,67783|0,67960|2,67960|1,67960|3,68136|2,68136|0,68313|3,68313|0,68313|1,68489|2,68489|1,68577|3,68666|0,68754|2,68842|0,68842|3,68842|1) - Add some LNs
01:30:901 (90901|3,90901|2,90989|3,90989|0,90989|1,91077|1,91077|2) - Remake
01:53:313 (113313|0,113489|3,113666|2,113842|0,114019|2,114019|1,114019|3) - Add some LNs between these notes
01:58:077 (118077|2,118077|1,118077|0) - Flip
This is a completion of a good map、Songs is also very good、But there are some uncomfortable details。Good Luck :P
Look forward to your mod :)
Topic Starter
Syadow-

ExNeri wrote:

Here's Your mod :D

HD
00:01:783 (1783|2,1783|3) - Move to the left a line
00:32:666 (32666|3,32754|0,32842|2,32842|1) - Flip
01:07:430 (67430|1,67430|3,67607|0,67607|2,67783|1,67783|3,67960|2,67960|0,68136|3,68136|1,68313|2,68313|0) - Recommended left and right beating 、Beause this design is not easy to pass well in 1pc
01:12:371 (72371|3) - What is this?、You should add some LNs between these notes 01:12:371 (72371|0,73077|3) -
02:33:548 (153548|0,153548|3,153636|1,153724|2) - Flip
MX
00:12:371 (12371|3,12371|2) - Removal Hitsound、If you need to be able to turn up the volume in the Inherited Points
There are many places you use three sounds、I am not one by one example
00:36:901 (36901|2,37077|0,37077|3,37166|1,37254|2,37342|1,37430|2,37430|0,37430|3,37607|1,37783|3,37783|2) - Flip
00:42:636 (42636|1,42636|0,42724|2,42724|3) - Flip
01:07:430 (67430|3,67430|2,67607|2,67607|0,67607|1,67783|3,67783|0,67960|2,67960|1,67960|3,68136|2,68136|0,68313|3,68313|0,68313|1,68489|2,68489|1,68577|3,68666|0,68754|2,68842|0,68842|3,68842|1) - Add some LNs i keep mine
01:30:901 (90901|3,90901|2,90989|3,90989|0,90989|1,91077|1,91077|2) - Remake
01:53:313 (113313|0,113489|3,113666|2,113842|0,114019|2,114019|1,114019|3) - Add some LNs between these notes For what ?
01:58:077 (118077|2,118077|1,118077|0) - Flip
This is a completion of a good map、Songs is also very good、But there are some uncomfortable details。Good Luck :P
Look forward to your mod :)
No comment mean Applied
Thanks for mod ExNeri >w< i'll mod u're map asap
UPDATED
ExNeko
01:53:313 (113313|0,113489|3,113666|2,113842|0,114019|2,114019|1,114019|3) -
LNs added over a period of low density in the notes may not be so boring, and there can also happen to have with the sound, if you do not want to add that's all right, just a detail :P
Topic Starter
Syadow-

ExNeri wrote:

01:53:313 (113313|0,113489|3,113666|2,113842|0,114019|2,114019|1,114019|3) -
LNs added over a period of low density in the notes may not be so boring, and there can also happen to have with the sound, if you do not want to add that's all right, just a detail :P
oh I see Thanks xD
UPDATED
Aras
bahasa Indonesia aja ya owo
gua rasa HS nya kurang cocok, umm here have some better sample
sebelum dimulai harap dengerin dulu sample yang aku kasih ya, trus ntar copy semua file samplenya ke folder lagu kamu
Note : untuk soft-hitnormal, itu bisa kamu ganti dengan suara lain, yg penting less noisy, yang 2 sample awalan "LR" nanti akan kita gunakan, jadi di copy juga

W = Whistle
C = Clap
F = Finish
N = Normal

gua akan mod diff paling susah, kemudian sisanya kamu tinggal contek HS nya ke diff lain owo

CLICK ME SENPAI!!!
- karena sample kita ganti, aku bakal reset semua HS nya =w=
- Don't do this please =-= cukup 1 aja untuk suara HS yang sama
- 00:00:372 (372|0,636|1,724|0,901|2,1077|3,1342|2,1430|1,1607|0,1783|1,2048|1,2136|2,2313|3,2489|2,2754|0,2842|2,3019|1,3195|2,3460|1,3548|2,3724|3,3901|1,4166|0,4254|3,4430|2,4607|1,4871|2,4960|1,5136|3,5313|2,5577|2,5666|0,5842|1) - kan notenya ke select tuh, tekan "ctrl + shit + I" , nanti muncul box sample import, pilih "LR J Hit.wav" klik "apply" kalau udah nanti muncul tulisan done, trus pas note yang dikasi HS tadi di select akan ada tulisan seperti di kanan atas SS gua Note : Volumenya bisa di atur dari box yang tadi ya ( untuk HS yg ditambah dengan ctrl + shift + I)

- 00:06:371 (6371|2) - tambahkan "LR Drum J Hit Med Bass.wav" dengan cara yang saya ajarkan tadi

- 00:06:724 (6724|1,6724|0) - satu di isi W satu lagi diisi F (jangan di note yang sama kecuali notenya cuman satu)

- 00:07:077 (7077|0,7783|0,8489|1,9195|0,9901|0,10607|0,11136|0,11489|0,11842|1,12019|0,12724|0,13430|0,14136|0,14842|0,15548|0,16254|1,16607|1,16783|1,17136|1,17666|0,17754|2,19077|3,20489|3,21901|2,23313|2,23489|2,24724|2,26136|1,27548|1,30371|2,31783|2,33195|2,34607|2,34783|2,36019|2,37430|3,38842|3,40430|3,40519|1,40607|3) - dan juga 00:40:783 (40783|0,41842|1,42019|2,42195|1,43254|1,43430|1,43607|2,44666|3,44842|3,45019|1,46077|1,46254|2,46430|1,47489|2,47666|1,47842|1,48548|3,48636|0,48901|0,49430|3) - dan juga 00:50:136 (50136|0,50489|1,51195|1,52254|1,52960|0,53666|1,54371|0,55077|2,55783|1,56136|1,56313|1,56666|1,57019|2,57371|2,57460|1,57901|0,58607|0,59313|0,60019|2,60724|1,61430|1,61783|1,61960|1,62313|1) - dan juga 01:02:842 (62842|1,63019|1,63107|3,63548|1,64254|1,64960|1,65666|1,66371|2,67077|2,67607|1,67960|2,68313|1,68489|2,68577|1,69195|1,69901|1,70607|0,71313|1,72019|1,72724|2,72901|1) - tambahain C

- 01:13:960 (73960|1,74136|1,74313|1) - LR J Hit
- 01:15:019 (75019|2,75195|1) - ^
- 01:15:548 (75548|2) - C
- 01:16:430 (76430|2,76607|3) - LR J Hit
- 01:16:960 (76960|1) - C
- 01:17:842 (77842|1,78019|1) - LR J Hit
- 01:18:371 (78371|2) - C
- 01:19:254 (79254|3,79430|3,79607|0) - LR J Hit
- 01:19:783 (79783|2) - C
- 01:21:195 (81195|2) - C
- 01:22:077 (82077|2,82254|1) - LRJH
- 01:22:607 (82607|1) - C
- 01:23:489 (83489|3,83666|3) - LRJH
- 01:24:019 (84019|0) - C
- 01:24:901 (84901|1,85077|2) - LRJH
- 01:25:342 (85342|2,85430|1) - C or W, pick
- 01:26:136 (86136|3,86842|3,87548|3,88254|3,88960|3,89666|3,90371|3,91254|1,91783|1,92489|1,93195|0,93901|1,94607|1,95313|1,95666|1,96371|1,96724|1,96901|0,96989|1,97430|0,98136|0,98842|0,99548|0,100960|0,101313|0,101489|0,101842|0,102195|0,102548|0,102636|1,103077|0,103783|0,104489|0,105195|0,105901|0,106607|0,106960|0,107136|0,107489|0,108019|2,108107|1) - C

- 01:57:195 (117195|2,117371|1,117548|0,117724|3,117901|2,118077|2) - C
- 01:58:430 (118430|1,118519|0,118783|2,119136|3,119313|2,119489|1,119577|2,120019|2,120724|1,121430|2,122136|1,122842|2,123548|1,124254|1,124960|2,125666|2,126371|2,127077|1,127783|1,128489|1,129195|2,129901|2,130607|1,130960|1,131136|2,132371|2,132548|2,133783|1,133960|1,135195|1,135371|1,136430|2,136960|2,137048|3,137136|2,137313|3,137577|3,137666|2,138371|1,138724|0,138989|0,139077|1,139783|1,140489|1,140842|2,141548|2) - C
- ughhhh =-= I'm doing this at 3 AM, Ganbare ARAS!!!!
- 02:25:077 (145077|0,145077|3,145342|1,145342|0,145430|2,145430|3,145607|0,145607|2,145783|0,145783|3,146048|3,146048|2,146136|0,146136|1,146313|2,146313|3,146489|2,146489|0,146666|1,146666|3,146754|2,146842|1,146842|3,147019|2,147019|0) - LRHJ INGAT!! Don't do this please =-= cukup 1 aja untuk suara HS yang sama

- 02:28:254 (148254|0,148960|0,149313|0,149489|0,149842|1,150195|0,150548|2,150636|1,151077|1,151783|1,152489|1,153195|2,153901|2,154607|2,154960|2,155136|2,155489|2,155842|2,156019|1,156107|3,156371|2,156724|1,157077|2,157430|2,157783|1,158136|2,158489|2,158842|1,159195|1,159548|2,159901|1,160077|1,160254|2,160783|2,160960|1,162195|2,162371|1,163254|2,163607|2,163783|0,164313|2,164401|1,165019|2,165195|1) - C

- 00:09:548 (9548|0,11136|0,11489|0,11842|3,12019|3,15195|2,17136|1,17489|1,17666|0,23489|2,29313|1,34783|1,40254|1,43254|1,44666|1,46077|1,47489|1,48901|0,49077|1,51195|1,54724|1,57019|1,60371|0,62313|1,66019|1,67607|1,68313|1,68489|2,71666|1,72901|1,74489|0,80136|0,85783|1,88607|1,91077|2,91430|2,94077|2,94254|1,96371|1,99901|1,102195|1,105548|1,107489|1) - F

- 00:07:077 (7077|0,114019|2,116842|2,118254|0,118607|1,118960|1,119666|1,122489|1,125313|2,128136|2,136607|2,137666|2,138019|1,139430|1,141548|2,147901|1,150195|0,150724|0,153548|0,155489|0,155842|2,157783|1,159195|1,159901|1,160077|1,160607|2,162019|2,162548|2,163607|2,163783|3,165371|1,166254|1,167313|1,168195|1,168901|1,169489|2,170048|2,170930|1,171901|2) - F

- 00:07:430 (7430|2) - suara yang begini kasih W =w=)b selfmod able lah ya?
- 02:27:901 (147901|1) - kan udah ada F, tapi ada suaran W nya juga, jadi bisa lah di add, and it is also self mod able =w=)b

PHEW =3=
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Aras25 wrote:

bahasa Indonesia aja ya owo
gua rasa HS nya kurang cocok, umm here have some better sample
sebelum dimulai harap dengerin dulu sample yang aku kasih ya, trus ntar copy semua file samplenya ke folder lagu kamu
Note : untuk soft-hitnormal, itu bisa kamu ganti dengan suara lain, yg penting less noisy, yang 2 sample awalan "LR" nanti akan kita gunakan, jadi di copy juga

W = Whistle
C = Clap
F = Finish
N = Normal

gua akan mod diff paling susah, kemudian sisanya kamu tinggal contek HS nya ke diff lain owo

CLICK ME SENPAI!!!
- karena sample kita ganti, aku bakal reset semua HS nya =w=
- Don't do this please =-= cukup 1 aja untuk suara HS yang sama
- 00:00:372 (372|0,636|1,724|0,901|2,1077|3,1342|2,1430|1,1607|0,1783|1,2048|1,2136|2,2313|3,2489|2,2754|0,2842|2,3019|1,3195|2,3460|1,3548|2,3724|3,3901|1,4166|0,4254|3,4430|2,4607|1,4871|2,4960|1,5136|3,5313|2,5577|2,5666|0,5842|1) - kan notenya ke select tuh, tekan "ctrl + shit + I" , nanti muncul box sample import, pilih "LR J Hit.wav" klik "apply" kalau udah nanti muncul tulisan done, trus pas note yang dikasi HS tadi di select akan ada tulisan seperti di kanan atas SS gua Note : Volumenya bisa di atur dari box yang tadi ya ( untuk HS yg ditambah dengan ctrl + shift + I)

- 00:06:371 (6371|2) - tambahkan "LR Drum J Hit Med Bass.wav" dengan cara yang saya ajarkan tadi

- 00:06:724 (6724|1,6724|0) - satu di isi W satu lagi diisi F (jangan di note yang sama kecuali notenya cuman satu)

- 00:07:077 (7077|0,7783|0,8489|1,9195|0,9901|0,10607|0,11136|0,11489|0,11842|1,12019|0,12724|0,13430|0,14136|0,14842|0,15548|0,16254|1,16607|1,16783|1,17136|1,17666|0,17754|2,19077|3,20489|3,21901|2,23313|2,23489|2,24724|2,26136|1,27548|1,30371|2,31783|2,33195|2,34607|2,34783|2,36019|2,37430|3,38842|3,40430|3,40519|1,40607|3) - dan juga 00:40:783 (40783|0,41842|1,42019|2,42195|1,43254|1,43430|1,43607|2,44666|3,44842|3,45019|1,46077|1,46254|2,46430|1,47489|2,47666|1,47842|1,48548|3,48636|0,48901|0,49430|3) - dan juga 00:50:136 (50136|0,50489|1,51195|1,52254|1,52960|0,53666|1,54371|0,55077|2,55783|1,56136|1,56313|1,56666|1,57019|2,57371|2,57460|1,57901|0,58607|0,59313|0,60019|2,60724|1,61430|1,61783|1,61960|1,62313|1) - dan juga 01:02:842 (62842|1,63019|1,63107|3,63548|1,64254|1,64960|1,65666|1,66371|2,67077|2,67607|1,67960|2,68313|1,68489|2,68577|1,69195|1,69901|1,70607|0,71313|1,72019|1,72724|2,72901|1) - tambahain C

- 01:13:960 (73960|1,74136|1,74313|1) - LR J Hit
- 01:15:019 (75019|2,75195|1) - ^
- 01:15:548 (75548|2) - C
- 01:16:430 (76430|2,76607|3) - LR J Hit
- 01:16:960 (76960|1) - C
- 01:17:842 (77842|1,78019|1) - LR J Hit
- 01:18:371 (78371|2) - C
- 01:19:254 (79254|3,79430|3,79607|0) - LR J Hit
- 01:19:783 (79783|2) - C
- 01:21:195 (81195|2) - C
- 01:22:077 (82077|2,82254|1) - LRJH
- 01:22:607 (82607|1) - C
- 01:23:489 (83489|3,83666|3) - LRJH
- 01:24:019 (84019|0) - C
- 01:24:901 (84901|1,85077|2) - LRJH
- 01:25:342 (85342|2,85430|1) - C or W, pick
- 01:26:136 (86136|3,86842|3,87548|3,88254|3,88960|3,89666|3,90371|3,91254|1,91783|1,92489|1,93195|0,93901|1,94607|1,95313|1,95666|1,96371|1,96724|1,96901|0,96989|1,97430|0,98136|0,98842|0,99548|0,100960|0,101313|0,101489|0,101842|0,102195|0,102548|0,102636|1,103077|0,103783|0,104489|0,105195|0,105901|0,106607|0,106960|0,107136|0,107489|0,108019|2,108107|1) - C

- 01:57:195 (117195|2,117371|1,117548|0,117724|3,117901|2,118077|2) - C
- 01:58:430 (118430|1,118519|0,118783|2,119136|3,119313|2,119489|1,119577|2,120019|2,120724|1,121430|2,122136|1,122842|2,123548|1,124254|1,124960|2,125666|2,126371|2,127077|1,127783|1,128489|1,129195|2,129901|2,130607|1,130960|1,131136|2,132371|2,132548|2,133783|1,133960|1,135195|1,135371|1,136430|2,136960|2,137048|3,137136|2,137313|3,137577|3,137666|2,138371|1,138724|0,138989|0,139077|1,139783|1,140489|1,140842|2,141548|2) - C
- ughhhh =-= I'm doing this at 3 AM, Ganbare ARAS!!!! Leeeeehhhh jgn dipaksa mas w merasa bersalah ;w;
- 02:25:077 (145077|0,145077|3,145342|1,145342|0,145430|2,145430|3,145607|0,145607|2,145783|0,145783|3,146048|3,146048|2,146136|0,146136|1,146313|2,146313|3,146489|2,146489|0,146666|1,146666|3,146754|2,146842|1,146842|3,147019|2,147019|0) - LRHJ INGAT!! Don't do this please =-= cukup 1 aja untuk suara HS yang sama

- 02:28:254 (148254|0,148960|0,149313|0,149489|0,149842|1,150195|0,150548|2,150636|1,151077|1,151783|1,152489|1,153195|2,153901|2,154607|2,154960|2,155136|2,155489|2,155842|2,156019|1,156107|3,156371|2,156724|1,157077|2,157430|2,157783|1,158136|2,158489|2,158842|1,159195|1,159548|2,159901|1,160077|1,160254|2,160783|2,160960|1,162195|2,162371|1,163254|2,163607|2,163783|0,164313|2,164401|1,165019|2,165195|1) - C

- 00:09:548 (9548|0,11136|0,11489|0,11842|3,12019|3,15195|2,17136|1,17489|1,17666|0,23489|2,29313|1,34783|1,40254|1,43254|1,44666|1,46077|1,47489|1,48901|0,49077|1,51195|1,54724|1,57019|1,60371|0,62313|1,66019|1,67607|1,68313|1,68489|2,71666|1,72901|1,74489|0,80136|0,85783|1,88607|1,91077|2,91430|2,94077|2,94254|1,96371|1,99901|1,102195|1,105548|1,107489|1) - F

- 00:07:077 (7077|0,114019|2,116842|2,118254|0,118607|1,118960|1,119666|1,122489|1,125313|2,128136|2,136607|2,137666|2,138019|1,139430|1,141548|2,147901|1,150195|0,150724|0,153548|0,155489|0,155842|2,157783|1,159195|1,159901|1,160077|1,160607|2,162019|2,162548|2,163607|2,163783|3,165371|1,166254|1,167313|1,168195|1,168901|1,169489|2,170048|2,170930|1,171901|2) - F

- 00:07:430 (7430|2) - suara yang begini kasih W =w=)b selfmod able lah ya?
- 02:27:901 (147901|1) - kan udah ada F, tapi ada suaran W nya juga, jadi bisa lah di add, and it is also self mod able =w=)b

PHEW =3=
Oiya Ku lupa pakai Ctrl shift I :u
Thanks a lot aras >w<)b will apply the mod asapApplied 2 mod terakhir msh on going
UPDATED
Topic Starter
Syadow-
UPDATED AY AY XD
Aste-
well... idk if this mod really help or not

i'm an inexperience modder so i'm sorry if i make any mistake

MOD

1-2-3-4

[EZ]

the note arn't too dense to get HP 6 tbh.. rise it to 7

01:50:313 - i believe there's still a sound here somewhere... 2 sound if i'm not wrong, not gonna map it? it's not make it any harder thou, 2 sound to be exact

[NM]

nothing found

[HD]

00:18:724 (18724|0,18813|1,18901|0) - this trill doesn't really suit with the music and look too hard. i suggest you to move it around to avoid this.. maybe something like this

00:37:077 (37077|2,37166|1) - hmm... maybe. ctrl H this to make a nice flow from here 00:36:548 (36548|3,36724|1,36724|0) - and transition for 00:37:342 (37342|0,37430|1,37430|2) - ?


[MX]

nothing found

okay done~
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Aste- wrote:

well... idk if this mod really help or not

i'm an inexperience modder so i'm sorry if i make any mistake

MOD

1-2-3-4

[EZ]

the note arn't too dense to get HP 6 tbh.. rise it to 7 Done

01:50:313 - i believe there's still a sound here somewhere... 2 sound if i'm not wrong, not gonna map it? it's not make it any harder thou, 2 sound to be exact Oki

[NM]

nothing found

[HD]

00:18:724 (18724|0,18813|1,18901|0) - this trill doesn't really suit with the music and look too hard. i suggest you to move it around to avoid this.. maybe something like this Nice

00:37:077 (37077|2,37166|1) - hmm... maybe. ctrl H this to make a nice flow from here 00:36:548 (36548|3,36724|1,36724|0) - and transition for 00:37:342 (37342|0,37430|1,37430|2) - ? wow oki >w<


[MX]

nothing found

okay done~
Thanks for mod aste- >w<
UPDATED
Tsukahara
hello~~ mod by my modding queue... :)

MX

00:06:371 - remove one..?

01:02:136 - add one?

01:30:901 (90901|2) - move to 1... its pretty hard...

01:48:107 (108107|1,108107|0,108195|1,108283|0,108371|1,108371|0) - this pattern is technically hard to play...

02:22:430 (142430|1) - vocal start at02:22:342 - here...:3

its all...sorry for start mod... ;__;
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Bolgom wrote:

hello~~ mod by my modding queue... :)

MX

00:06:371 - remove one..? cuz Loud sound there sorry i keep mine

01:02:136 - add one? like with 01:03:019 (63019|1,63019|2) -

01:30:901 (90901|2) - move to 1... its pretty hard... oki

01:48:107 (108107|1,108107|0,108195|1,108283|0,108371|1,108371|0) - this pattern is technically hard to play... fixed thanks

02:22:430 (142430|1) - vocal start at02:22:342 - here...:3 oki

its all...sorry for start mod... ;__;
Thanks for mod >w<
UPDATED
Hotaru-
go go go semangattt >w<)9
Topic Starter
Syadow-

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

go go go semangattt >w<)9
Ay ay mas jack >w<)9
Kruzon
hii

my key column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4



SPOILER
Hard


00:16:960 (16960|0,16960|2) - delete 1 note, not that loud
00:17:666 (17666|2) - actually, this is louder than 00:17:489 (17489|0,17489|1) - so shift density

suddenly you give this 1 note 00:19:430 (19430|3) - when you use double notes on instance 00:18:724 (18724|3,18724|0) - 00:19:783 (19783|1,19783|3) -

00:34:254 (34254|2,34254|1,34430|0,34430|3,34607|2,34607|1,34783|2,34783|3) - why not mirror this instead for consistency? 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23136|1,23136|2,23313|3,23313|0,23489|2,23489|3) -

00:37:607 (37607|3,37783|3) - is there a reason behind this jack? if there is then shouldn't 00:38:842 (38842|0,39019|1) - be made as jack as well since they share identical sound. so tldr, 00:39:019 (39019|1) - move to 1

00:39:195 (39195|0) - move to 2 and 00:39:195 (39195|3) - move to 3 i don't know why you repetitively use 1 4 wide spread even on this occasion

00:39:371 (39371|2,39460|3) - press ctrl + J

00:39:901 (39901|0,39901|3,39989|1,40077|2,40077|3,40166|0,40254|1,40254|2,40430|0,40430|3) - something felt wrong here.. i think it would be nice if you follow pitch here, perhaps rearrange

and.. there's drum roll here 00:40:960 (40960|2,40960|3,41048|0,41136|3,41224|1,41313|0,41313|2) - and current notes placement are rather bland and felt out of places.. at this point you can try repetitive notes, example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6163973

00:43:254 (43254|1,43254|0,43430|0,43430|1) - misplaced? i think it should be with 00:43:430 (43430|0,43430|1,43607|1) - instead, you're trying to follow this kind of sound right 00:42:019 (42019|2,42019|3,42195|2,42195|3) -

in between 00:46:783 (46783|2,47313|0) - , would be nice to follow the string synth use 1 note only, will accent nicely. so delete 00:46:960 (46960|2,47313|0) -

00:50:489 (50489|2,50489|3,50666|1,50666|0,50842|1,50842|0,51019|3,51019|2) - meaningless and out of sync, i suggest follow vocal pitch here as a benchmark, so try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164015 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164020

00:56:136 (56136|1,56136|0,56313|1,56313|2,56489|2,56489|3,56666|0,56666|3) - noo should've pattern them follow strong drum instead.. and no it's improper to map vocal here so.. rearrange

ok im stopping here, the other half of the map,, well try to fix them according to my advice on first half of the map. don't plot random pattern, make sure they are consistent. that's why it's important to follow pitch so you can identify and shape the pattern accordingly.

good luck with your map c:

ps: if there's any question regarding my mod, feel free to pm me
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Kruzon wrote:

hii

my key column format is as following: 1 l 2 l 3 l 4



SPOILER
Hard


00:16:960 (16960|0,16960|2) - delete 1 note, not that loud oki
00:17:666 (17666|2) - actually, this is louder than 00:17:489 (17489|0,17489|1) - so shift density nice

suddenly you give this 1 note 00:19:430 (19430|3) - when you use double notes on instance 00:18:724 (18724|3,18724|0) - 00:19:783 (19783|1,19783|3) - oh i forgot it thanks

00:34:254 (34254|2,34254|1,34430|0,34430|3,34607|2,34607|1,34783|2,34783|3) - why not mirror this instead for consistency? 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23136|1,23136|2,23313|3,23313|0,23489|2,23489|3) - oki

00:37:607 (37607|3,37783|3) - is there a reason behind this jack? if there is then shouldn't 00:38:842 (38842|0,39019|1) - be made as jack as well since they share identical sound. so tldr, 00:39:019 (39019|1) - move to 1 I make no jack here, so Re-arraged

00:39:195 (39195|0) - move to 2 and 00:39:195 (39195|3) - move to 3 i don't know why you repetitively use 1 4 wide spread even on this occasion Haha oki applied

00:39:371 (39371|2,39460|3) - press ctrl + J oki

00:39:901 (39901|0,39901|3,39989|1,40077|2,40077|3,40166|0,40254|1,40254|2,40430|0,40430|3) - something felt wrong here.. i think it would be nice if you follow pitch here, perhaps rearrange Re-arranged

and.. there's drum roll here 00:40:960 (40960|2,40960|3,41048|0,41136|3,41224|1,41313|0,41313|2) - and current notes placement are rather bland and felt out of places.. at this point you can try repetitive notes, example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6163973 Nice

00:43:254 (43254|1,43254|0,43430|0,43430|1) - misplaced? i think it should be with 00:43:430 (43430|0,43430|1,43607|1) - instead, you're trying to follow this kind of sound right 00:42:019 (42019|2,42019|3,42195|2,42195|3) - wow thanks

in between 00:46:783 (46783|2,47313|0) - , would be nice to follow the string synth use 1 note only, will accent nicely. so delete 00:46:960 (46960|2,47313|0) - oki

00:50:489 (50489|2,50489|3,50666|1,50666|0,50842|1,50842|0,51019|3,51019|2) - meaningless and out of sync, i suggest follow vocal pitch here as a benchmark, so try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164015 or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164020 i'll use 2nd

00:56:136 (56136|1,56136|0,56313|1,56313|2,56489|2,56489|3,56666|0,56666|3) - noo should've pattern them follow strong drum instead.. and no it's improper to map vocal here so.. rearrange

ok im stopping here, the other half of the map,, well try to fix them according to my advice on first half of the map. don't plot random pattern, make sure they are consistent. that's why it's important to follow pitch so you can identify and shape the pattern accordingly.

good luck with your map c:

ps: if there's any question regarding my mod, feel free to pm me
Thanks for mod n suggestion Kruzon >w<
UPDATED
Agis-
Aku nyumbang 1 kudos star yakk
ga nyangka SP nya gede bangett
good luck, Ki :D
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Agis- wrote:

Aku nyumbang 1 kudos star yakk
ga nyangka SP nya gede bangett
good luck, Ki :D
Aaaaaaa thanks gis >w<
I Miss u qwq
Cokii-
Hey your mod form our queue first of I could only fin stuff that bothered me in you normal diff

NM
00:04:607 (4607|0,4783|1,4960|2,5136|3) - Ctrl + H because it starts with an high sound an ends with an deep sound

The other stuff is only consistency and i think adding all of this would make the map too hard
00:41:313 (41313|0) - ,00:41:666 (41666|3) - ,00:42:371 (42371|3) - ,00:42:724 (42724|0) - ,00:43:077 (43077|2) - ,00:44:136 (44136|0) - ,00:44:489 (44489|3) - ,00:45:195 (45195|1) - ,00:45:548 (45548|2) - ,00:45:901 (45901|1) - ,00:46:960 (46960|0) - ,00:47:313 (47313|2) - ,00:48:019 (48019|1) - ,00:48:371 (48371|3) - ,00:48:724 (48724|2) - consider making these LNs for consistency (or did you map the on single jack like sound?)
01:03:548 (63548|1) - add a note at C1
01:04:960 (64960|2) - add a note at C2
01:06:371 (66371|2) - add a note at C2
01:08:489 (68489|2) - add a note at C2
01:08:842 (68842|3) - remove the note at C3
01:09:195 (69195|2) - add a note at C2
01:10:607 (70607|0) - add a note at C0
01:11:666 (71666|1) - add a note at C1
01:12:019 (72019|1) - add a note at C1
01:12:371 (72371|1) - 01:12:548 (72548|2) - move them to C1 and C2
01:12:724 (72724|1) - add a note at C1
01:39:548 (99548|0) - add a note at C0
01:40:254 (100254|0) - add a note at C0
01:40:960 (100960|1) - add a note at C1
01:41:842 (101842|2) - add a note at C2
01:42:195 (102195|2) - add a note at C2
01:42:548 (102548|0) - add a note at C0
01:42:724 (102724|0) - remove the note at C0
01:43:783 (103783|2) - add a note at C2
01:44:489 (104489|0) - add a note at C0
01:45:195 (105195|2) - add a note at C2
01:45:901 (105901|2) - add a note at C2
01:46:607 (106607|1) - add a note at C1
01:46:960 (106960|0) - add a note at C0
01:47:842 (107842|2) - add a note at C2
01:48:019 (108019|0) - add a note at C0
01:48:195 (108195|0) - move to C2 and add a note at C3
01:56:842 (116842|2) - add a note at C2
02:08:842 (128842|2) - add a note at C2
02:16:430 (136430|3) - add a note at C3
02:16:607 (136607|3) - remove the note at C3
02:28:254 (148254|3) - add a note at C3
02:28:960 (148960|3) - add a note at C3
02:30:195 (150195|2) - add a note at C2
02:31:783 (151783|2) - add a note at C2
02:33:195 (153195|0) - add a note at C0
02:34:607 (154607|1) - add a note at C1
02:35:842 (155842|1) - add a note at C1
02:36:019 (156019|0) - add a note at C0
02:40:077 (160077|1) - add a note at C1
02:40:783 (160783|1) - add a note at C1
02:42:019 (162019|2) - remove the note at C2
02:42:195 (162195|1) - add a note at C1


Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Cokiiplay wrote:

Hey your mod form our queue first of I could only fin stuff that bothered me in you normal diff

NM
00:04:607 (4607|0,4783|1,4960|2,5136|3) - Ctrl + H because it starts with an high sound an ends with an deep sound nice

The other stuff is only consistency and i think adding all of this would make the map too hard
00:41:313 (41313|0) - ,00:41:666 (41666|3) - ,00:42:371 (42371|3) - ,00:42:724 (42724|0) - ,00:43:077 (43077|2) - ,00:44:136 (44136|0) - ,00:44:489 (44489|3) - ,00:45:195 (45195|1) - ,00:45:548 (45548|2) - ,00:45:901 (45901|1) - ,00:46:960 (46960|0) - ,00:47:313 (47313|2) - ,00:48:019 (48019|1) - ,00:48:371 (48371|3) - ,00:48:724 (48724|2) - consider making these LNs for consistency (or did you map the on single jack like sound?) I keep mine first
01:03:548 (63548|1) - add a note at C1 oki
01:04:960 (64960|2) - add a note at C2 oki
01:06:371 (66371|2) - add a note at C2 oki
01:08:489 (68489|2) - add a note at C2 oki
01:08:842 (68842|3) - remove the note at C3 Cymbal here maybe double
01:09:195 (69195|2) - add a note at C2
01:10:607 (70607|0) - add a note at C0
01:11:666 (71666|1) - add a note at C1
01:12:019 (72019|1) - add a note at C1
01:12:371 (72371|1) - 01:12:548 (72548|2) - move them to C1 and C2
01:12:724 (72724|1) - add a note at C1
01:39:548 (99548|0) - add a note at C0
01:40:254 (100254|0) - add a note at C0
01:40:960 (100960|1) - add a note at C1
01:41:842 (101842|2) - add a note at C2
01:42:195 (102195|2) - add a note at C2
01:42:548 (102548|0) - add a note at C0
01:42:724 (102724|0) - remove the note at C0
01:43:783 (103783|2) - add a note at C2
01:44:489 (104489|0) - add a note at C0
01:45:195 (105195|2) - add a note at C2
01:45:901 (105901|2) - add a note at C2
01:46:607 (106607|1) - add a note at C1
01:46:960 (106960|0) - add a note at C0
01:47:842 (107842|2) - add a note at C2
01:48:019 (108019|0) - add a note at C0
01:48:195 (108195|0) - move to C2 and add a note at C3
01:56:842 (116842|2) - add a note at C2
02:08:842 (128842|2) - add a note at C2 I keep mine cuz calm flow here n it can make SR up to 2,15
02:16:430 (136430|3) - add a note at C3
02:16:607 (136607|3) - remove the note at C3
02:28:254 (148254|3) - add a note at C3
02:28:960 (148960|3) - add a note at C3
02:30:195 (150195|2) - add a note at C2
02:31:783 (151783|2) - add a note at C2
02:33:195 (153195|0) - add a note at C0
02:34:607 (154607|1) - add a note at C1
02:35:842 (155842|1) - add a note at C1
02:36:019 (156019|0) - add a note at C0
02:40:077 (160077|1) - add a note at C1 Not Loud sound maybe single note enough
02:40:783 (160783|1) - add a note at C1
02:42:019 (162019|2) - remove the note at C2 Loud sound i keep mine
02:42:195 (162195|1) - add a note at C1


Good luck with your map
No Reply mean applied, sorry not reply 1 by 1
Thanks for mod cokii >w<
UPDATED + SELF MOD
Another Lie
kalo udah bubble, notice me yah
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Another Lie wrote:

kalo udah bubble, notice me yah
Wadoo :u oki mas >w<)b
Davin Fortune
Syadow ebat udh bs punya map +43, ak aja +20 gak ada :U

*mod soon come*
Davin Fortune
Fast Mod
1 I 2 I 3 I 4

NM
00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - gak konsisten
00:05:313 (5313|1,5489|2) - ctrl G trus pindah 1 kolom ke arah kanan
00:06:724 - gak usah 2, cek 00:07:783 (7783|2,7783|3) -
00:32:489 (32489|3) - move to 3 dan 00:32:842 (32842|0) - ke 2
01:18:724 (78724|2) - ke 2 biar sambung pattern setelahnya

MX
00:16:960 - jadikan 3 biar seragam
00:40:960 - jadikan 1 biar sama kayak note setelahnya
00:40:960 (40960|1,40960|0,41048|3,41136|2,41224|0) - samakan aja dengan 00:43:695 (43695|2,43783|3,43783|0,43871|1,43960|2,43960|0,44048|3,44048|1) -
00:45:371 - add note biar sama kek 00:43:695 (43695|2,43783|3,43783|0,43871|1,43960|2,43960|0,44048|3,44048|1) -
00:48:724 (48724|1,48724|2) - kenapa 2?
01:02:136 - jadikan 3 biar seragam, yang ini beda dengan 00:56:136 (56136|1,56136|3,56136|2,56313|0,56313|3,56313|1,56489|2,56489|0,56666|2,56666|3,56666|1) -
01:14:136 (74136|1,74313|1) - jadikan 2
01:32:401 - mungkin bs add 1 note karna voicenya sama kayak 01:31:695 (91695|2,91783|3,91783|1) - (Tapi mungkin entar banyak yg jadi gak konsisten :v)
01:42:371 (102371|2) - move ke 01:42:460 -
01:51:077 - http://puu.sh/rrHaB/73e74dd3b4.jpg mungkin kek gini?


Sorry gak bisa banyak mod, pengen finish req lain
Keknya ready to rank :U
Topic Starter
Syadow-

Davin Fortune wrote:

Fast Mod
1 I 2 I 3 I 4

NM
00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - gak konsisten oiya wkwk thanks mas
00:05:313 (5313|1,5489|2) - ctrl G trus pindah 1 kolom ke arah kanan oki
00:06:724 - gak usah 2, cek 00:07:783 (7783|2,7783|3) - Cymbal jd ena dobel >w<)b
00:32:489 (32489|3) - move to 3 dan 00:32:842 (32842|0) - ke 2 oki
01:18:724 (78724|2) - ke 2 biar sambung pattern setelahnya oki

MX
00:16:960 - jadikan 3 biar seragam sama kyk 00:16:430 (16430|0,16430|2) - n agak pelan jd w keep dulu
00:40:960 - jadikan 1 biar sama kayak note setelahnya oki
00:40:960 (40960|1,40960|0,41048|3,41136|2,41224|0) - samakan aja dengan 00:43:695 (43695|2,43783|3,43783|0,43871|1,43960|2,43960|0,44048|3,44048|1) - oki kusamakan sebagian, agak beda feels sih tp gpp uwu
00:45:371 - add note biar sama kek 00:43:695 (43695|2,43783|3,43783|0,43871|1,43960|2,43960|0,44048|3,44048|1) - Beda n di situ ga ada suara jd keep aja
00:48:724 (48724|1,48724|2) - kenapa 2? ngikuti sebelumnya
01:02:136 - jadikan 3 biar seragam, yang ini beda dengan 00:56:136 (56136|1,56136|3,56136|2,56313|0,56313|3,56313|1,56489|2,56489|0,56666|2,56666|3,56666|1) - sama keknya mas keep dlu
01:14:136 (74136|1,74313|1) - jadikan 2 Nice uwu)b
01:32:401 - mungkin bs add 1 note karna voicenya sama kayak 01:31:695 (91695|2,91783|3,91783|1) - (Tapi mungkin entar banyak yg jadi gak konsisten :v) kyknya beda mas :v
01:42:371 (102371|2) - move ke 01:42:460 - ga ada suara ;w; cuma ada sisa suara yg sebelumnya
01:51:077 - http://puu.sh/rrHaB/73e74dd3b4.jpg mungkin kek gini? yg pertama 1/4 beat tp keknya pas patternnya, applied


Sorry gak bisa banyak mod, pengen finish req lain
Keknya ready to rank :U blm, byk yg ga konsisten :'u

Davin Fortune wrote:

Syadow ebat udh bs punya map +43, ak aja +20 gak ada :U

*mod soon come*
Waw Mas dapin >w< thanks modnya mas
UPDATED
-[ AmiShici ]-
NO KUDOSU!!!!!
SPOILER
19:20 Syadow-: hi mas amiET o/
19:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: o/
19:41 Syadow-: mas boleh minta req m4m ? ._.
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: ui
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: sorry abis ngePES
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: gw ga ada map buat di mod :3
21:41 Syadow-: jiah :v wkwkw
21:41 Syadow-: yha ;w;
21:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: gmn?
21:42 Syadow-: hmm gmana yak :'v
21:42 Syadow-: yaudah nunggu map baru aja uwu
21:42 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: jawabannya ga sesuai harapan
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: syukur dah
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:43 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
21:43 Syadow-: lha maunya gmana wkwkw
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: nvm
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: padahal gw ngarep lu req NM
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: tp malah gitu yaudah
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: syukur alhamdulillah
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:45 Syadow-: yha :'v mas ga bilang ;w; huehue
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: salah siapa coba?
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkw
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: :p
21:46 Syadow-: :'u
21:47 Syadow-: bsok aja deh nge re req :v wkwkw
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: dudul
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: map apa emang?
21:47 Syadow-: voocaloid
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: oh map itu
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: mod dah banyak gitu >,>
21:48 Syadow-: msh rada ga konsisten ;w;
21:48 *-[ AmiShici ]- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016104 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime]
21:48 *-[ AmiShici ]- is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016103 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [MX]] <osu!mania> |4K|
21:49 Syadow-: weee :v
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: noob
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga bisa maen
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:50 Syadow-: wkwk et gitu kok
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah bagus
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah konsisten kok
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: apa yg ga konsisten
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: coba?
21:52 Syadow-: orang nya ;w;
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: cuman klo gw yg ngemap beda style aja si
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:54 Syadow-: mas pakai mie -/\-
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: bkn >,>
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: elu ngemapnya piano sering diabaikan
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: lebih milih ngikut hit hat daripada piano
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:55 Syadow-: eh iya ta ._. ?
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: gpp si
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: konsistensi
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: cuman ngasih contoh
21:57 Syadow-: wkwwk w kurang paham yg piano :'v
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:53:224 - misal gw yg gini lebih gw map
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:11:842 (71842|3,71842|0,71930|1,72019|2,72019|3) - yg kek gini gw mending double
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: buat bedain impact mana synth dan mana hithat
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: mapmu dah bagus kok
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: req bub gih
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:59 Syadow-: 00:53:224 - yg ini pas itu msh ada cuman ada yg ngemod terus keknya pas ya w ikutin wkwwk
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lah ya pass
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: kan emang konsisten
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: emang lu ga ngikutin yg bgituan dari awal
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
22:00 Syadow-: 01:11:842 (71842|0,71842|3,71930|1,72019|3,72019|2) - keknya bisa jg :3
22:00 Syadow-: :'v wkwkw
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lu general kyak ga ngikut synth
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: tp ngikut hithat
22:00 Syadow-: eh req bub tp bnnya pada sibuk ;w;
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: gg
22:01 Syadow-: mungkin ._.
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: gw aja ga nnyari BN
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:01 Syadow-: :v dah et mas wkwkw
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: kagak
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: saya lelah di reject BNs
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: makanya mending ga req sekalian biar ga sedih
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: wwkkw
22:02 Syadow-: kwwkwk :'v apakah begitu kejam dunia mapping ;w; hue
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: hmmm bisa dibilang gitu
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: kwkwkw
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: mania mapping aja si
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: std taiko ctb keknya aman
22:05 Syadow-: :v
22:05 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016102 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [HD]]
22:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:20:048 (20048|1) - no sound
22:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:23:489 - ada simbal ga di triple?
22:06 Syadow-: oiya
22:06 Syadow-: simbal tak buat double semua
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:39:901 (39901|3,39901|0,39989|1,40077|3,40077|2,40166|1,40254|0,40254|2) - ini knp gini? ==a
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:28:607 (28607|1,28607|3,28783|0,28783|1) - sedangkan ini ga ada di blue line
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23136|1,23136|0,23313|3,23313|2) - ini jg >,>
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: konsistensi um
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:34:254 (34254|1,34254|2,34430|3,34430|0,34607|1,34607|2) - ^
22:08 Syadow-: oiya :'v too much
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:40:254 - ada simbal
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:40:519 - ga di double?
22:09 Syadow-: sek mas :'v
22:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:43:254 - simbal di diff mx jg
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:43:695 (43695|2) - ini vocal? ==a
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:48:460 (48460|0) - no sound
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: di mx jg
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:48:636 - should be double. MXnya jg
22:11 Syadow-: eh mas simbal di hd dibuat triple ga ?
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:49:077 - simbal
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kalo gw yg ngemap si gitu
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kalo ente ga pengen ya gpp
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: to give impact thought
22:12 Syadow-: takut sr nya naik ;w;
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah abaikan simbal komen
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:50:136 - doublr
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:50:313 - piano
22:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:52:871 (52871|2) - 00:53:577 (53577|0) - 00:53:930 (53930|2) - no sound
22:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:54:283 (54283|1,54636|1) - ^
22:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: entahlah >,>
22:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:54:283 (54283|1,54636|1) - nah harusnya gni
22:15 Syadow-: eh gni gmana ?
22:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:57:548 (57548|2,57548|0,57636|1,57724|0,57901|3,57901|1,57989|2,58077|1,58254|2,58254|0,58342|1,58430|2,58607|3,58607|1,58695|2,58783|3,58960|2,58960|0,59048|1,59136|2) -
22:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: gitu
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:59:224 (59224|3,59577|2) - no sound
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: coba compare sama MX diff
22:16 Syadow-: oalah oki
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: tau kan cara nampilin diff lain?
22:17 Syadow-: reference kan ?
22:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: ie
22:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkw
22:17 Syadow-: wkwk dah
22:18 Syadow-: sek sek tak cek mx
22:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: http://puu.sh/ru7M7/1247583719.jpg
22:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: gitu lho >,>
22:21 Syadow-: sek mas :'v
22:21 -[ AmiShici ]-: turuo ndes
22:21 Syadow-: :v wkwk
22:22 Syadow-: kyk kurang 1 remove note tp dmana ;w;
22:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
22:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: ntah
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:254 (73254|3) - ke 3
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:430 (73430|2) - ke 2
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:607 (73607|1) - ke 4
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: pitch
22:24 Syadow-: eh diff mana ini ?
22:25 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016102 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [HD]]
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:607 (73607|1) - sengaja ga dimap?
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:19:519 (79519|1) - blank
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:19:695 (79695|3) - no soung
22:26 Syadow-: yg ga dimap maksudnya mas :'u
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: wat?
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: nanya apasi?
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
22:27 Syadow-: yg ini 01:13:607 (73607|1) -
22:28 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu pindah ke 4
22:29 Syadow-: oki sudah mas
22:29 -[ AmiShici ]-: udh smw?
22:30 Syadow-: sudah mas
22:30 -[ AmiShici ]-: ujan
22:30 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga kedengeran >,>
22:30 Syadow-: sama disini jg qwq
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah gitu aja deh
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: intinya di reff cuman gini 01:43:783 (103783|3,103783|0,103871|2,103960|1) -
22:32 Syadow-: wee thanks mas >w<
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga full di map kayak ini00:52:607 (52607|2,52607|0,52695|1,52783|3,52871|2,52960|1,52960|0) -
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: yo
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: gudlak
22:33 Syadow-: oki mas makasih byk >w<
Topic Starter
Syadow-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

NO KUDOSU!!!!!
SPOILER
19:20 Syadow-: hi mas amiET o/
19:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: o/
19:41 Syadow-: mas boleh minta req m4m ? ._.
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: ui
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: sorry abis ngePES
21:40 -[ AmiShici ]-: gw ga ada map buat di mod :3
21:41 Syadow-: jiah :v wkwkw
21:41 Syadow-: yha ;w;
21:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:41 -[ AmiShici ]-: gmn?
21:42 Syadow-: hmm gmana yak :'v
21:42 Syadow-: yaudah nunggu map baru aja uwu
21:42 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: jawabannya ga sesuai harapan
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: syukur dah
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:43 Syadow-: :v wkwkw
21:43 Syadow-: lha maunya gmana wkwkw
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: nvm
21:43 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: padahal gw ngarep lu req NM
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: tp malah gitu yaudah
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: syukur alhamdulillah
21:45 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:45 Syadow-: yha :'v mas ga bilang ;w; huehue
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: salah siapa coba?
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkw
21:46 -[ AmiShici ]-: :p
21:46 Syadow-: :'u
21:47 Syadow-: bsok aja deh nge re req :v wkwkw
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: dudul
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: map apa emang?
21:47 Syadow-: voocaloid
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: oh map itu
21:47 -[ AmiShici ]-: mod dah banyak gitu >,>
21:48 Syadow-: msh rada ga konsisten ;w;
21:48 *-[ AmiShici ]- is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016104 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime]
21:48 *-[ AmiShici ]- is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016103 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [MX]] <osu!mania> |4K|
21:49 Syadow-: weee :v
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: noob
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga bisa maen
21:49 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:50 Syadow-: wkwk et gitu kok
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah bagus
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: udah konsisten kok
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: apa yg ga konsisten
21:52 -[ AmiShici ]-: coba?
21:52 Syadow-: orang nya ;w;
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: cuman klo gw yg ngemap beda style aja si
21:53 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:54 Syadow-: mas pakai mie -/\-
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: bkn >,>
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: elu ngemapnya piano sering diabaikan
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: lebih milih ngikut hit hat daripada piano
21:54 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
21:55 Syadow-: eh iya ta ._. ?
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: gpp si
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: konsistensi
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkwk
21:57 -[ AmiShici ]-: cuman ngasih contoh
21:57 Syadow-: wkwwk w kurang paham yg piano :'v
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:53:224 - misal gw yg gini lebih gw map
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:11:842 (71842|3,71842|0,71930|1,72019|2,72019|3) - yg kek gini gw mending double
21:58 -[ AmiShici ]-: buat bedain impact mana synth dan mana hithat
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: mapmu dah bagus kok
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: req bub gih
21:59 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
21:59 Syadow-: 00:53:224 - yg ini pas itu msh ada cuman ada yg ngemod terus keknya pas ya w ikutin wkwwk
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lah ya pass
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: kan emang konsisten
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: emang lu ga ngikutin yg bgituan dari awal
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: >,>
22:00 Syadow-: 01:11:842 (71842|0,71842|3,71930|1,72019|3,72019|2) - keknya bisa jg :3
22:00 Syadow-: :'v wkwkw
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: lu general kyak ga ngikut synth
22:00 -[ AmiShici ]-: tp ngikut hithat
22:00 Syadow-: eh req bub tp bnnya pada sibuk ;w;
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkkw
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: gg
22:01 Syadow-: mungkin ._.
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: gw aja ga nnyari BN
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:01 Syadow-: :v dah et mas wkwkw
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: kagak
22:01 -[ AmiShici ]-: saya lelah di reject BNs
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: makanya mending ga req sekalian biar ga sedih
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: wwkkw
22:02 Syadow-: kwwkwk :'v apakah begitu kejam dunia mapping ;w; hue
22:02 -[ AmiShici ]-: hmmm bisa dibilang gitu
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: kwkwkw
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: mania mapping aja si
22:03 -[ AmiShici ]-: std taiko ctb keknya aman
22:05 Syadow-: :v
22:05 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016102 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [HD]]
22:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:20:048 (20048|1) - no sound
22:05 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:23:489 - ada simbal ga di triple?
22:06 Syadow-: oiya
22:06 Syadow-: simbal tak buat double semua
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:39:901 (39901|3,39901|0,39989|1,40077|3,40077|2,40166|1,40254|0,40254|2) - ini knp gini? ==a
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:28:607 (28607|1,28607|3,28783|0,28783|1) - sedangkan ini ga ada di blue line
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:22:960 (22960|2,22960|3,23136|1,23136|0,23313|3,23313|2) - ini jg >,>
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: konsistensi um
22:07 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:34:254 (34254|1,34254|2,34430|3,34430|0,34607|1,34607|2) - ^
22:08 Syadow-: oiya :'v too much
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:40:254 - ada simbal
22:08 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:40:519 - ga di double?
22:09 Syadow-: sek mas :'v
22:09 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:43:254 - simbal di diff mx jg
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:43:695 (43695|2) - ini vocal? ==a
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:48:460 (48460|0) - no sound
22:10 -[ AmiShici ]-: di mx jg
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:48:636 - should be double. MXnya jg
22:11 Syadow-: eh mas simbal di hd dibuat triple ga ?
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:49:077 - simbal
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kalo gw yg ngemap si gitu
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: kalo ente ga pengen ya gpp
22:11 -[ AmiShici ]-: to give impact thought
22:12 Syadow-: takut sr nya naik ;w;
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah abaikan simbal komen
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:50:136 - doublr
22:12 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:50:313 - piano
22:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:52:871 (52871|2) - 00:53:577 (53577|0) - 00:53:930 (53930|2) - no sound
22:13 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:54:283 (54283|1,54636|1) - ^
22:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: entahlah >,>
22:14 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:54:283 (54283|1,54636|1) - nah harusnya gni
22:15 Syadow-: eh gni gmana ?
22:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:57:548 (57548|2,57548|0,57636|1,57724|0,57901|3,57901|1,57989|2,58077|1,58254|2,58254|0,58342|1,58430|2,58607|3,58607|1,58695|2,58783|3,58960|2,58960|0,59048|1,59136|2) -
22:15 -[ AmiShici ]-: gitu
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: 00:59:224 (59224|3,59577|2) - no sound
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: coba compare sama MX diff
22:16 Syadow-: oalah oki
22:16 -[ AmiShici ]-: tau kan cara nampilin diff lain?
22:17 Syadow-: reference kan ?
22:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: ie
22:17 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwkw
22:17 Syadow-: wkwk dah
22:18 Syadow-: sek sek tak cek mx
22:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: http://puu.sh/ru7M7/1247583719.jpg
22:18 -[ AmiShici ]-: gitu lho >,>
22:21 Syadow-: sek mas :'v
22:21 -[ AmiShici ]-: turuo ndes
22:21 Syadow-: :v wkwk
22:22 Syadow-: kyk kurang 1 remove note tp dmana ;w;
22:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
22:22 -[ AmiShici ]-: ntah
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:254 (73254|3) - ke 3
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:430 (73430|2) - ke 2
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:607 (73607|1) - ke 4
22:24 -[ AmiShici ]-: pitch
22:24 Syadow-: eh diff mana ini ?
22:25 *-[ AmiShici ]- is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1016102 capitaro - Tenshinranman Haikara Hime [HD]]
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:13:607 (73607|1) - sengaja ga dimap?
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:19:519 (79519|1) - blank
22:25 -[ AmiShici ]-: 01:19:695 (79695|3) - no soung
22:26 Syadow-: yg ga dimap maksudnya mas :'u
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: wat?
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: nanya apasi?
22:26 -[ AmiShici ]-: ==a
22:27 Syadow-: yg ini 01:13:607 (73607|1) -
22:28 -[ AmiShici ]-: itu pindah ke 4
22:29 Syadow-: oki sudah mas
22:29 -[ AmiShici ]-: udh smw?
22:30 Syadow-: sudah mas
22:30 -[ AmiShici ]-: ujan
22:30 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga kedengeran >,>
22:30 Syadow-: sama disini jg qwq
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: yaudah gitu aja deh
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:31 -[ AmiShici ]-: intinya di reff cuman gini 01:43:783 (103783|3,103783|0,103871|2,103960|1) -
22:32 Syadow-: wee thanks mas >w<
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: ga full di map kayak ini00:52:607 (52607|2,52607|0,52695|1,52783|3,52871|2,52960|1,52960|0) -
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: wkwk
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: yo
22:32 -[ AmiShici ]-: gudlak
22:33 Syadow-: oki mas makasih byk >w<
Thanks mas amiET >w<)b

Updated
AchsanLovers
M4M
sorry kelamaan bang :v

Column : 1 l 2 l 3 l 4

EZ
General : HP : 6
OD : 7

00:29:313 - tambah note di col 4

00:34:960 - tambah note di col 2

00:40:077 - tambah note di col 2

00:51:195 - kiai nya dipindahin ke 00:51:901 -

00:51:195 - delete col 2

00:54:724 - tambah note di col 3

00:56:136 (56136|2) - delete LN dan buat jadi kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6226737 :3

NM
General
OD : 7.5 (saran, liat AiMod)

00:04:077 (4077|1,4166|3,4254|0) - lah? delete col 4

00:17:930 (17930|3) - delete col 4

00:40:254 (40254|2,40430|1) - kek susah kalo kek gini buat normal player, saran ane hapus 00:40:254 (40254|2) - col 3 dan 00:40:430 - di col 4

00:57:019 - biar lebih enak, kasih LN di col 1 sampai 00:57:548 -

01:19:783 (79783|3) - lah? delete tuh di col 4

HD
00:00:724 (724|0) - del col 1

00:01:430 (1430|3) - del col 4

00:02:136 (2136|2) - del col 3

00:02:842 (2842|0) - del col 1

00:03:548 (3548|3) - del col 4

00:04:254 (4254|1) - del col 2

00:04:960 (4960|3) - del col 4

00:05:666 (5666|2) - del col 3

00:09:548 - kasih note di col 1

00:15:195 - kasih note di col 2

00:19:783 (19783|3) - move to col 1

Note : serius pattern nya keren banget (y) 8-) 8-)

MX
aih capek ane, hs nya dah keren dan pattern nya juga (y)


maap kalo mod terlalu sedikit :3

GL~

Note : segera kasih hs yg di ez,nm sama hd, SP udh lebih 40 ini :v
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