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The Flashbulb - Passage D

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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
这种曲子是蛋疼啊QAQ
那些地方实际根本听不出是几分之一，放慢都听不出，所以嗡嗡嗡声音很密的时候我会用一些1/6来体现和1/4的不同。如果用1/8的话主要是担心在Hyper会不会太难……如果不算难的话那我直接改1/8

同时我也在问飞球

谢谢船爷啦
Lyric
293 posts
Joined September 2013
Lyric

smallboat wrote:

[General]
[Lyric's Advanced]
00:45:339 (3) - Combo too long, suggest NC here >>>好
UPDATE
http://puu.sh/qeTTW/94763d5c27.7z
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
换了mp3之后，offset应该是5415！

以下时间都是你原来用的时间，但如果要听snap可能需要改了才能听清

主难度（insane可能也有类似，我看的主难度）
00:27:939 (8) -00:30:606 (8) - 这些是1/8不是1/6，比较清楚。后面没仔细翻，可能还有。这曲子说不定没什么明显1/6，要用1/8的话，那些听不清的地方就也都1/8喽？也包括00:35:939 (8) - 之类，挺多的

然后00:13:773 (2) - 这里节奏可能有问题，看下我的难度这里应该是对的

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我自己的
ok都用1/8了，谢谢船爷~
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Tags:moonlightleaf Mikagura Seisa Lyric pata-mon
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IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
看了看 感覺也可以不同的結束點 畢竟insane的難度要是取最後的嚓音實在不合適

話說我覺得Another跟Insane的難度名應該交換 Insane比Another容易的感覺？就像Hyper比Hard難
Izzz
265 posts
Joined July 2015
Izzz
The timing on pata-mon's hyper is different from the other difficulties.
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Bubbled

Timing is fine to me, so nothing imo.
Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
船业❤
Izzz
265 posts
Joined July 2015
Izzz
I like this song+beatmap so much that I thought I'd give a short mod.

I'd suggest adding IDM, Breakcore, Benn Jordan, and Kirlian Selections as some tags. First two because thats the genre, third because thats the actual name of 'The Flashbulb', and last because thats the album.

Normal
00:06:248 (3) - Wouldn't it make more sense to have a circle at 00:06:414 - instead of this slider, since there's a much louder noise there+the offbeat 1/1 slider is sort of odd for a normal difficulty? Besides that I think its a good diff.

Advanced
00:38:748 (4,5,1) - I think it would make more sense if these were spaced out a little bit like you did at 00:18:748 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stacked together.

00:42:081 - Why not add note here, since it follows piano you map before and after?

01:14:081 (4) - I think its odd to have note here since the other three notes in the combo were on the distinct piano which doesn't play here, maybe remove it?

Hyper
I really love this difficulty. When I first downloaded the map this was the difficulty I played, and since I've already listened to the song a lot, even though the song is sort of weird, the tapping came easy to me. That is, up until 01:51:664 (4) - which I always screwed up. I assume its because of how distinct the sounds before and after were if I had to give a reason. I'm not saying remove it, I just thought I'd bring it up.

Insane
00:46:748 (1) - I think its odd to have a note here since 00:42:748 (1,1,1) - are all mapped to way more distinct piano notes than it is and the noise there isn't really big enough to suggest a clickable note, maybe remove it and maybe extend the spinner to there instead?

01:35:331 (3) - I can barely hear a noise here even when I set my volume from 25% where I normally play up to 100%, so I think it'd make sense to delete this circle.

D
This diff looks really cool and I can't really say anything about it.
Lyric
293 posts
Joined September 2013
Lyric

Joezapy wrote:

Advanced
00:38:748 (4,5,1) - I think it would make more sense if these were spaced out a little bit like you did at 00:18:748 (1,2,3,4) - instead of stacked together.
>>>The sound faded away and i just using stack to express my opinion. It is differ from 00:18:748 .
00:42:081 - Why not add note here, since it follows piano you map before and after?
>>>Add notes at downbeats instead of here. It is a stand-by time.
01:14:081 (4) - I think its odd to have note here since the other three notes in the combo were on the distinct piano which doesn't play here, maybe remove it?
>>>I use this circle to link up melodies, remove this circle would cause confuse in a sort of way.
thank you

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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
二妹
00:08:748 (3) - 尾clap
00:14:748 (4) -
00:30:082 (2) -
總覺得漏了不少clap 後面如是
24clap還是加齊較好
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
@Joezapy , i perfer now

@Rizia , all notes add 13 Whistle & 24 Clap

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176,164,104081,6,0,B|132:164|132:164|81:187,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,264,105081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,359,105414,2,0,P|120:336|96:293,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,196,106081,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,100,106414,2,0,L|50:52,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,52,106748,6,0,B|128:64|128:64|196:49,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,107414,2,0,L|272:184,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,36,108081,2,0,L|350:36,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,36,108414,2,0,B|396:80|396:80|406:134,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,232,109081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,323,109414,6,0,P|345:340|296:331,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,284,110081,2,0,L|201:333,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,183,110748,2,0,P|132:211|103:278,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,320,111414,2,0,L|43:173,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,124,112081,5,2,0:0:0:0:
108,56,113414,6,0,B|156:60|156:60|224:52,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,114081,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,84,114414,2,0,L|389:133,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,114748,6,0,B|341:199|341:199|295:229,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,284,115414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,204,115748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
235,149,116081,1,4,2:1:0:0:
Rizia
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Pata-Mon
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Mismagius
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Mismagius
no breakcore in tags?
also add benn jordan

the last diff seems to have a really weird rhythm btw, feels like you're not following most of the 1/4s lol
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-Atri-
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finally a purposely messy map qulified
MoodyRPG
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MoodyRPG
Another Flashbulb map, nice :)

Congratulations !
IamKwaN
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an s missing in normal?
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z1085684963 didn't even repond to my mod :(
Hula
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So many issues with the D power diff, and i'm only going to bring up a couple of major broad ranging issues with the map.

For instance there are a lot of unnecessary rhythms which areover complicated and don't emphasise anything (the point of a beatmap), such as 00:15:414 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - which is visually symmetrical and rhythmically symmetrical, but in the song it changes from 1/2 beats to 1/4. This makes it hard to play since you appear to be mapping the hi hats which are not something you should be focusing on over other sounds. Another example 00:21:830 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - You map the 1/4 drums the same as you do the 1/4 hi hats, but once again, it makes it so it's not clear what you mapped, the pattern repeats on itself which would suggest that the song rhythm repeats itself. It does not, therefore the pattern at the very least shouldn't be uniform.

Also, on the topic of rhythms, you constantly miss out 1/6 and 1/8 randomly, it's all a bit confusing.

Your spacing needs work, for instance, take this pattern for example, 01:06:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can you explain why you gave 3-4 a jump but then 4,5,6,7 are 1.0 ds, despite those ones being more dominant? The whole map actually suffers from a lack of respect of spacing. You need to use spacing to emphasise sounds, not just to make things look pretty, cos the map does look pretty, but as a result, you have completely neglected playability.

This map is not the best it could be, best of luck fixing the issues.


Edit: Just opened Insane and saw this, 00:42:748 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this is just awkward and unnecessary, making it annoying for mouse players and any players tbh.
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Winnie
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Hah this map is a good one I'm surprised I'm still alive 8-)
Mismagius
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Mismagius
before this gets ignored into ranking like always...

i like the idea behind this map, and i love the song, which is why it'd be sad to see it ranked ignoring some really interesting rhythms the song has to offer.

[general]
  1. as said before, "breakcore" and "benn jordan" are missing from tags. Benn Jordan is The Flashbulb, and this song is also a breakcore mix of a song he has composed before, called Passage D Original Movements.
[D power]
  • don't really care about this since you're free to name your diff whatever you want, but what does the diffname actually mean?
    Not really gonna mention all the times you're just simply ignoring what should be 1/8, what should be 1/16 and so on. Listen to the song on 25% and try to follow this. Kyshiro's Pavor Nocturnus was unranked because of that, so I don't see why this should be around. If you don't understand what I'm saying, 00:30:581 (8) - , for example, isn't following the song.
  1. 00:06:748 (1) - Skipping a pretty intense beat at 00:07:081 that should be clickable.
  2. 00:07:747 (4) - This sliderend is mapped to silence. A hitcircle would be enough.
  3. 00:08:414 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not gonna bother too much about the spacing inconsistencies, really, but this is just completely awkward to play. I understand that the mapping style intends on doing this, but I'd rather have a playable map with an artistic style. Why is (4) closer to (5) than (3)? It doesn't rhythmically make sense and it doesn't make it playable as well.
  4. 00:09:414 (1) - Same as 00:06:748 (1) - , skipping a clickable beat.
  5. 00:09:914 (2,3,4) - Confusing because there's a bzzzt sound at 00:10:081, but I understand if you don't want to map it.
  6. 00:11:747 (6,7) - Barely playable due to they being 1/8 apart. Why not space them closer?
  7. 00:13:248 (8,1,2,3,4) - This entire rhythm is completely ignoring the song beat and feels extremely confusing. Listen to it at 25/50% on editor, it's just wrongly mapped.
  8. 00:14:248 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Why are you ignoring the 1/4s here?
  9. 00:16:331 (2) - This slider doesn't follow anything in the song. There's a constant 1/4 beat with strengthened 1/1s. The fact that this slider starts in a blue tick and ignores the rhythm doesn't make much sense. Also, no idea why (1) is only 1/4 long.
  10. 00:19:414 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing feels a bit confusing, but I can deal with that.
  11. 00:21:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (2) doesn't flow into (3), and the entire stream is a mess to understand how to play, not to mention there's a clear change of rhythm at 00:22:581 (12,13) - so there's no way you should continue the stream here.
  12. 00:22:997 (2) - Why are you skipping the strong beat here with this slider?
  13. 00:23:413 (6,1,2,3,4) - The new combo should be at (6) instead of (1), as the drum changes in the white tick.
  14. 00:26:914 (x) - You're skipping a pretty important beat here.
  15. 00:27:664 (x) - ^. Understandable because you want to make the intensity jump here, but there's no real change in spacing to support that...
  16. 00:29:414 (1) - There's an ignored 1/6 beat after this note. It's understandable that you don't really want to follow it, but feels pretty weird right now and could be solved by turned this note into a slider.
  17. 00:29:998 (x) - Another important beat skipped, same as 27:664
  18. 00:30:331 (x) - ^
  19. 00:30:748 (1) - Because of this slider, the beat at 30:914 is ignored. Doesn't make much sense to do that. Maybe end the slider 1/4 earlier?
  20. 00:31:748 (7) - Same as above, the beat at 31:914 is ignored.
  21. 00:32:081 (1) - The sliderend is wrongly snapped. It should be at the blue tick on 32:331, even though the repeat is right. Turn this into a regular non-repeat slider and place a note at the blue tick.
  22. 00:32:747 (4) - Why isn't this a slider? You're completely ignoring the blue tick beat here.
  23. 00:32:997 (6) - The slider shouldn't be ending on the strong beat, it makes the pattern unpredictable and weird to play. If that is your intention because the song is weird, I can't do much, but please make your map more playable next time..
  24. 00:33:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4s are completely ignored here
  25. 00:34:414 (7) - 1/8s are completely ignored here
  26. 00:34:914 (2) - A 1/16 after this slider is ignored here
  27. 00:35:623 (7) - Sliderstart is wrongly snapped. It should be at 00:35:623, a 1/8 tick.
  28. 00:35:831 (x) - This beat is ignored
  29. 00:36:081 (1,2,3,4) - I understand that you're following the piano. The question is.. why? There's so much going on with the drums, crazy 1/8 stuff you really shouldn't ignore at all.
  30. 00:37:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
  31. 00:38:498 (x) - A beat is ignored here
  32. 00:38:747 (1) - The slider should end at 00:39:081 (or the blue tick before, of course). There's a 1/6 beat going on after this.
  33. 00:40:747 (4,5,1) - 1/4s are ignored here
  34. 00:42:331 (x) - A beat is ignored here
  35. 00:42:414 (8) - 1/16 is ignored here
  36. 00:47:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not gonna ask why the spacing changes during the stream..
  37. 00:49:248 (x) - 1/8 is ignored here
  38. 00:49:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
  39. 00:50:164 (x) - ^
  40. 00:50:747 (1) - ^, during the slider
  41. 00:51:247 (4) - The stronger beat, which is the sliderend currently, should be clicked here
  42. 00:52:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
  43. 00:52:748 (5) - There's a drum change after 00:52:914. Why is this not represented in the map?
  44. 00:53:914 (3) - 1/16 is ignored here
  45. 00:54:414 (6) - there's some weird rhythm ignored here, understandable, but why not try to map it?
  46. 00:55:081 (3) - completely ignored 1/16
  47. 00:55:248 (4) - I said I wasn't gonna mention these but this is too obvious, this is 1/8
  48. 00:55:498 (x) - 1/4 ignored here
  49. 00:55:581 (6,7) - Too big of a jump considering this is 1/16 lol
  50. 00:56:081 (1) - 1/4 ignored here
  51. 00:57:247 (8) - The repeats on this slider are mapped to absolutely nothing
  52. 00:57:413 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
  53. 00:57:998 (x) - There's a slight beat ignored here, might not be too important though
  54. 00:58:580 (9) - There's an ignored rhythm here
  55. 00:59:247 (5) - This sliderend is mapped to nothing
  56. 00:59:747 (8) - ^
  57. 00:59:998 (x) - A beat is ignored here
  58. 01:02:831 (x) - ^
  59. 01:02:914 (2) - This should really become a single note. The slider starts on a non-ideal red tick and ends on a strong beat where a 1/8 slider should be starting.
  60. 01:03:123 (3) - As stated, this should be moved 1/8 earlier. The sliderend is currently mapped to silence.
  61. 01:03:414 (5) - Sliderend is mapped to silence
  62. 01:04:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored
  63. 01:04:831 (x) - 1/4 beat ignored here
  64. 01:06:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire section completely ignores that the drums are a constant 1/4.
  65. 01:07:748 (6) - Sliderend mapped to silence.

I need to finish this later. Posting this so action is actually taken soon.
Lyric
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sahuang
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sahuang
@Blue Dragon it's z1 power, this map deserves a dq 10000%% :o
IamKwaN
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Joezapy wrote:

z1085684963 didn't even repond to my mod :(
Yes, proper response to every mod is required according to the Code of Conduct so I have to take this map out of the qualified section.

Ermei' Normal
I also believe an s is missing in this difficulty name.

Please also have a thorough look at Hula and Blue Dragon's suggestions.
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sahuang
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sahuang
I didn't even download the map, but seems that he could not properly understand BD's mod so I have to do a translation here. Notice that I did NOT download the map so the translation may have some errors. Please point them out when z_longnumbers responds, blue dragon, if you can.

BlueDragon mod：

general
as said before, "breakcore" and "benn jordan" are missing from tags. Benn Jordan is The Flashbulb, and this song is also a breakcore mix of a song he has composed before, called Passage D Original Movements.

两个引号里面的东西放在tag里面。


D power
don't really care about this since you're free to name your diff whatever you want, but what does the diffname actually mean?

垃圾名字，啥意思？

Not really gonna mention all the times you're just simply ignoring what should be 1/8, what should be 1/16 and so on. Listen to the song on 25% and try to follow this. Kyshiro's Pavor Nocturnus was unranked because of that, so I don't see why this should be around. If you don't understand what I'm saying, 00:30:581 (8) - , for example, isn't following the song.
不想重复提，但是你无视了各种1/8，1/16的音。。比如 00:30:581 (8) - 这个就根本没跟着音乐。
00:06:748 (1) - Skipping a pretty intense beat at 00:07:081 that should be clickable.
在00:07:081有个重音你却无视了，这边应该放滑条头/圈（clickable就是这边最好是能点的，而不是滑条尾之类的）
00:07:747 (4) - This sliderend is mapped to silence. A hitcircle would be enough.
滑条尾现在是静音的，用个圈
00:08:414 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not gonna bother too much about the spacing inconsistencies, really, but this is just completely awkward to play. I understand that the mapping style intends on doing this, but I'd rather have a playable map with an artistic style. Why is (4) closer to (5) than (3)? It doesn't rhythmically make sense and it doesn't make it playable as well.
这边的间距不符合规律，十分不舒服，为什么4比3离5还近？节奏上这根本不科学，也不是很可玩
00:09:414 (1) - Same as 00:06:748 (1) - , skipping a clickable beat.
09这边和06一样跳过了一个可以点击的音
00:09:914 (2,3,4) - Confusing because there's a bzzzt sound at 00:10:081, but I understand if you don't want to map it.
00:10:081有个bzzzt音但是你没map，所以这边节奏就很怪（不过他说如果你不想map也没什么）
00:11:747 (6,7) - Barely playable due to they being 1/8 apart. Why not space them closer?
几乎打不了，1/8然后大间距，为什么不靠得近一点？
00:13:248 (8,1,2,3,4) - This entire rhythm is completely ignoring the song beat and feels extremely confusing. Listen to it at 25/50% on editor, it's just wrongly mapped.
整个节奏完全忽视了歌曲的节拍，极其难把握。。再仔细听一下，map错了（下错节奏
00:14:248 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Why are you ignoring the 1/4s here?
为什么无视了1/4？
00:16:331 (2) - This slider doesn't follow anything in the song. There's a constant 1/4 beat with strengthened 1/1s. The fact that this slider starts in a blue tick and ignores the rhythm doesn't make much sense. Also, no idea why (1) is only 1/4 long.
这个滑条没有跟任何节奏。这边应该是稳定1/4和1/1的音，现在这个滑条起于蓝线然后忽视了节奏，没什么道理。。然后不知道为什么1只有1/4长度。
00:19:414 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing feels a bit confusing, but I can deal with that.
间距有点怪，不过无所谓
00:21:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (2) doesn't flow into (3), and the entire stream is a mess to understand how to play, not to mention there's a clear change of rhythm at 00:22:581 (12,13) - so there's no way you should continue the stream here.
23的flow不行，然后整个连打太乱，读图太难。12，13有个很明显的节奏变化但是你还继续连打，完全不应该。
00:22:997 (2) - Why are you skipping the strong beat here with this slider?
为什么用滑条跳过了一个重音？
00:23:413 (6,1,2,3,4) - The new combo should be at (6) instead of (1), as the drum changes in the white tick.
6这边NC而不是1
00:26:914 (x) - You're skipping a pretty important beat here.
漏音
00:27:664 (x) - ^. Understandable because you want to make the intensity jump here, but there's no real change in spacing to support that...
漏
00:29:414 (1) - There's an ignored 1/6 beat after this note. It's understandable that you don't really want to follow it, but feels pretty weird right now and could be solved by turned this note into a slider.
这个物件之后忽视了一个1/6的音，建议把note变成滑条。
00:29:998 (x) - Another important beat skipped, same as 27:664
漏
00:30:331 (x) - ^ 漏音
00:30:748 (1) - Because of this slider, the beat at 30:914 is ignored. Doesn't make much sense to do that. Maybe end the slider 1/4 earlier?
因为这个滑条，30:914的音被无视。滑条尾提早1/4结束如何？
00:31:748 (7) - Same as above, the beat at 31:914 is ignored.
31914 漏音
00:32:081 (1) - The sliderend is wrongly snapped. It should be at the blue tick on 32:331, even though the repeat is right. Turn this into a regular non-repeat slider and place a note at the blue tick.
滑条尾snap错，应该是蓝线32:331。应该把这个滑条变成不reverse的普通slider然后蓝线那里加个圈
00:32:747 (4) - Why isn't this a slider? You're completely ignoring the blue tick beat here.
为什么不是滑条？你完全无视了蓝线的音。


Didn't really check my translation so maybe quite a lot errors idk
翻的速度比较快，差不多就这意思，有些单词你应该知道吧。。unsnap beat tick什么的。。。
sahuang
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sahuang
Double post cuz too long

00:32:997 (6) - The slider shouldn't be ending on the strong beat, it makes the pattern unpredictable and weird to play. If that is your intention because the song is weird, I can't do much, but please make your map more playable next time..
滑条不该在重音结束，打起来很奇怪，他说你图太诡异，可玩性实在是不高。
00:33:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4s are completely ignored here
1/4全部被无视
00:34:414 (7) - 1/8s are completely ignored here
1/8全部被无视
00:34:914 (2) - A 1/16 after this slider is ignored here
1/16在滑条之后被无视
00:35:623 (7) - Sliderstart is wrongly snapped. It should be at 00:35:623, a 1/8 tick.
滑条头snap错误，是35:623，1/8上
00:35:831 (x) - This beat is ignored
漏音
00:36:081 (1,2,3,4) - I understand that you're following the piano. The question is.. why? There's so much going on with the drums, crazy 1/8 stuff you really shouldn't ignore at all.
可以理解你在跟钢琴，但是为什么要这样呢，鼓声那么多，1/8的那些音根本不该忽视。
00:37:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
1/4被无视
00:38:498 (x) - A beat is ignored here
漏音
00:38:747 (1) - The slider should end at 00:39:081 (or the blue tick before, of course). There's a 1/6 beat going on after this.
滑条结束39081 ，有个1/6的音在这之后。
00:40:747 (4,5,1) - 1/4s are ignored here
1/4漏
00:42:331 (x) - A beat is ignored here 漏
00:42:414 (8) - 1/16 is ignored here 1/16漏
00:47:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not gonna ask why the spacing changes during the stream..
连打边间距？
00:49:248 (x) - 1/8 is ignored here 1/8漏
00:49:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here 1/4漏
00:50:164 (x) - ^ 一样
00:50:747 (1) - ^, during the slider 一样，滑条中
00:51:247 (4) - The stronger beat, which is the sliderend currently, should be clicked here 这边重音应该点击
00:52:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here 1/4漏

看到ignore就是漏音不写了

00:52:748 (5) - There's a drum change after 00:52:914. Why is this not represented in the map?
52914后面有鼓的转变，为什么无视了
00:53:914 (3) - 1/16 is ignored here
00:54:414 (6) - there's some weird rhythm ignored here, understandable, but why not try to map it?
00:55:081 (3) - completely ignored 1/16
00:55:248 (4) - I said I wasn't gonna mention these but this is too obvious, this is 1/8 是1/8
00:55:498 (x) - 1/4 ignored here
00:55:581 (6,7) - Too big of a jump considering this is 1/16 lol 1/16但是跳太大
00:56:081 (1) - 1/4 ignored here
00:57:247 (8) - The repeats on this slider are mapped to absolutely nothing 折返没东西
00:57:413 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
00:57:998 (x) - There's a slight beat ignored here, might not be too important though
00:58:580 (9) - There's an ignored rhythm here
00:59:247 (5) - This sliderend is mapped to nothing
00:59:747 (8) - ^ 这两个滑条尾没东西
00:59:998 (x) - A beat is ignored here
01:02:831 (x) - ^
01:02:914 (2) - This should really become a single note. The slider starts on a non-ideal red tick and ends on a strong beat where a 1/8 slider should be starting. 变成一个圈
01:03:123 (3) - As stated, this should be moved 1/8 earlier. The sliderend is currently mapped to silence. 往前移1/8，现在snap不对
01:03:414 (5) - Sliderend is mapped to silence 滑条尾没东西
01:04:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored
01:04:831 (x) - 1/4 beat ignored here
01:06:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire section completely ignores that the drums are a constant 1/4.
这个部分全部无视了1/4的持续的鼓声
01:07:748 (6) - Sliderend mapped to silence. 滑条尾没东西


I need to finish this later. Posting this so action is actually taken soon.
还没结束。。后面还有一些

The shorter you mod the shorter I will need to translate lol
Yuzeyun
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Yuzeyun
stupid tag addition suggestion:

benn jordan cuz he da flashbulb
fartownik
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fartownik
rip map
z1085684963
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sahuang wrote:

I didn't even download the map, but seems that he could not properly understand BD's mod so I have to do a translation here. Notice that I did NOT download the map so the translation may have some errors. Please point them out when z_longnumbers responds, blue dragon, if you can.

BlueDragon mod：

general
as said before, "breakcore" and "benn jordan" are missing from tags. Benn Jordan is The Flashbulb, and this song is also a breakcore mix of a song he has composed before, called Passage D Original Movements.

两个引号里面的东西放在tag里面。


D power
don't really care about this since you're free to name your diff whatever you want, but what does the diffname actually mean?

垃圾名字，啥意思？

Not really gonna mention all the times you're just simply ignoring what should be 1/8, what should be 1/16 and so on. Listen to the song on 25% and try to follow this. Kyshiro's Pavor Nocturnus was unranked because of that, so I don't see why this should be around. If you don't understand what I'm saying, 00:30:581 (8) - , for example, isn't following the song.
不想重复提，但是你无视了各种1/8，1/16的音。。比如 00:30:581 (8) - 这个就根本没跟着音乐。是的，我已经尽可能的跟了所有的节奏，剩下没跟的都是因为跟了会变得难以游玩
00:06:748 (1) - Skipping a pretty intense beat at 00:07:081 that should be clickable.
在00:07:081有个重音你却无视了，这边应该放滑条头/圈（clickable就是这边最好是能点的，而不是滑条尾之类的）不是点击也没有问题，不是么
00:07:747 (4) - This sliderend is mapped to silence. A hitcircle would be enough.
滑条尾现在是静音的，用个圈现在这个节奏也很合理
00:08:414 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not gonna bother too much about the spacing inconsistencies, really, but this is just completely awkward to play. I understand that the mapping style intends on doing this, but I'd rather have a playable map with an artistic style. Why is (4) closer to (5) than (3)? It doesn't rhythmically make sense and it doesn't make it playable as well.
这边的间距不符合规律，十分不舒服，为什么4比3离5还近？节奏上这根本不科学，也不是很可玩梗，然后这个可玩也不难
00:09:414 (1) - Same as 00:06:748 (1) - , skipping a clickable beat.
09这边和06一样跳过了一个可以点击的音同上
00:09:914 (2,3,4) - Confusing because there's a bzzzt sound at 00:10:081, but I understand if you don't want to map it.
00:10:081有个bzzzt音但是你没map，所以这边节奏就很怪（不过他说如果你不想map也没什么）
00:11:747 (6,7) - Barely playable due to they being 1/8 apart. Why not space them closer?
几乎打不了，1/8然后大间距，为什么不靠得近一点？仔细看，视觉间距都是一样的
00:13:248 (8,1,2,3,4) - This entire rhythm is completely ignoring the song beat and feels extremely confusing. Listen to it at 25/50% on editor, it's just wrongly mapped.
整个节奏完全忽视了歌曲的节拍，极其难把握。。再仔细听一下，map错了（下错节奏这样好打，而且无意义的死跟节奏只会难打
00:14:248 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Why are you ignoring the 1/4s here?
为什么无视了1/4？这里我选择跟钢琴
00:16:331 (2) - This slider doesn't follow anything in the song. There's a constant 1/4 beat with strengthened 1/1s. The fact that this slider starts in a blue tick and ignores the rhythm doesn't make much sense. Also, no idea why (1) is only 1/4 long.
这个滑条没有跟任何节奏。这边应该是稳定1/4和1/1的音，现在这个滑条起于蓝线然后忽视了节奏，没什么道理。。然后不知道为什么1只有1/4长度。这里没啥理由，只是单纯觉得这样好，而且并无问题
00:19:414 (5,6,7,8) - Spacing feels a bit confusing, but I can deal with that.
间距有点怪，不过无所谓
00:21:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (2) doesn't flow into (3), and the entire stream is a mess to understand how to play, not to mention there's a clear change of rhythm at 00:22:581 (12,13) - so there's no way you should continue the stream here.
23的flow不行，然后整个连打太乱，读图太难。12，13有个很明显的节奏变化但是你还继续连打，完全不应该。然而这是可玩的，有人已经fc了
00:22:997 (2) - Why are you skipping the strong beat here with this slider?
为什么用滑条跳过了一个重音？这有什么问题吗
00:23:413 (6,1,2,3,4) - The new combo should be at (6) instead of (1), as the drum changes in the white tick.
6这边NC而不是1yes is good
00:26:914 (x) - You're skipping a pretty important beat here.
漏音我这段的节奏就是不跟这个音的
00:27:664 (x) - ^. Understandable because you want to make the intensity jump here, but there's no real change in spacing to support that...
漏同上
00:29:414 (1) - There's an ignored 1/6 beat after this note. It's understandable that you don't really want to follow it, but feels pretty weird right now and could be solved by turned this note into a slider.
这个物件之后忽视了一个1/6的音，建议把note变成滑条。同上
00:29:998 (x) - Another important beat skipped, same as 27:664
漏同上
00:30:331 (x) - ^ 漏音同上
00:30:748 (1) - Because of this slider, the beat at 30:914 is ignored. Doesn't make much sense to do that. Maybe end the slider 1/4 earlier?
因为这个滑条，30:914的音被无视。滑条尾提早1/4结束如何？我并没有觉得这有什么问题，上面也是这样的节奏
00:31:748 (7) - Same as above, the beat at 31:914 is ignored.
31914 漏音不用跟
00:32:081 (1) - The sliderend is wrongly snapped. It should be at the blue tick on 32:331, even though the repeat is right. Turn this into a regular non-repeat slider and place a note at the blue tick.
滑条尾snap错，应该是蓝线32:331。应该把这个滑条变成不reverse的普通slider然后蓝线那里加个圈你输得对
00:32:747 (4) - Why isn't this a slider? You're completely ignoring the blue tick beat here.
为什么不是滑条？你完全无视了蓝线的音。为什么要是滑条，停顿一下会变得容易


00:32:997 (6) - The slider shouldn't be ending on the strong beat, it makes the pattern unpredictable and weird to play. If that is your intention because the song is weird, I can't do much, but please make your map more playable next time..
滑条不该在重音结束，打起来很奇怪，他说你图太诡异，可玩性实在是不高。yes
00:33:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/4s are completely ignored here
1/4全部被无视钢琴
00:34:414 (7) - 1/8s are completely ignored here
1/8全部被无视钢琴
00:34:914 (2) - A 1/16 after this slider is ignored here
1/16在滑条之后被无视钢琴
00:35:623 (7) - Sliderstart is wrongly snapped. It should be at 00:35:623, a 1/8 tick.
滑条头snap错误，是35:623，1/8上没有snap错误
00:35:831 (x) - This beat is ignored
漏音不想塞满
00:36:081 (1,2,3,4) - I understand that you're following the piano. The question is.. why? There's so much going on with the drums, crazy 1/8 stuff you really shouldn't ignore at all.
可以理解你在跟钢琴，但是为什么要这样呢，鼓声那么多，1/8的那些音根本不该忽视。如果你真的理解我就不会说你上面发的了
00:37:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here
1/4被无视我在跟钢琴
00:38:498 (x) - A beat is ignored here
漏音跟了会难打
00:38:747 (1) - The slider should end at 00:39:081 (or the blue tick before, of course). There's a 1/6 beat going on after this.
滑条结束39081 ，有个1/6的音在这之后。我现在这样也没有问题
00:40:747 (4,5,1) - 1/4s are ignored here
1/4漏跟了会难打
00:42:331 (x) - A beat is ignored here 漏跟了会难打
00:42:414 (8) - 1/16 is ignored here 1/16漏跟了会难打
00:47:414 (3,4,5,6,7) - Not gonna ask why the spacing changes during the stream..
连打边间距？
00:49:248 (x) - 1/8 is ignored here 1/8漏 跟了会难打
00:49:414 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here 1/4漏我看了下后面全是这种，如果你觉得有问题那也只能是我们的节奏想不到一块
00:50:164 (x) - ^ 一样no
00:50:747 (1) - ^, during the slider 一样，滑条中no
00:51:247 (4) - The stronger beat, which is the sliderend currently, should be clicked here 这边重音应该点击no
00:52:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored here 1/4漏不想放

看到ignore就是漏音不写了

00:52:748 (5) - There's a drum change after 00:52:914. Why is this not represented in the map?
52914后面有鼓的转变，为什么无视了no
00:53:914 (3) - 1/16 is ignored hereno
00:54:414 (6) - there's some weird rhythm ignored here, understandable, but why not try to map it?no
00:55:081 (3) - completely ignored 1/16no
00:55:248 (4) - I said I wasn't gonna mention these but this is too obvious, this is 1/8 是1/8no
00:55:498 (x) - 1/4 ignored hereno
00:55:581 (6,7) - Too big of a jump considering this is 1/16 lol 1/16但是跳太大这是可玩的
00:56:081 (1) - 1/4 ignored hereno
00:57:247 (8) - The repeats on this slider are mapped to absolutely nothing 折返没东西yes
00:57:413 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignored hereno
00:57:998 (x) - There's a slight beat ignored here, might not be too important thoughno
00:58:580 (9) - There's an ignored rhythm hereno
00:59:247 (5) - This sliderend is mapped to nothingno
00:59:747 (8) - ^ 这两个滑条尾没东西这段节奏是overmap
00:59:998 (x) - A beat is ignored hereno
01:02:831 (x) - ^ no
01:02:914 (2) - This should really become a single note. The slider starts on a non-ideal red tick and ends on a strong beat where a 1/8 slider should be starting. 变成一个圈没有必要
01:03:123 (3) - As stated, this should be moved 1/8 earlier. The sliderend is currently mapped to silence. 往前移1/8，现在snap不对对的啊
01:03:414 (5) - Sliderend is mapped to silence 滑条尾没东西没懂
01:04:080 (1,2,3) - 1/4s are ignoredno
01:04:831 (x) - 1/4 beat ignored hereno
01:06:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This entire section completely ignores that the drums are a constant 1/4.
这个部分全部无视了1/4的持续的鼓声我做的不是串图
01:07:748 (6) - Sliderend mapped to silence. 滑条尾没东西no


I need to finish this later. Posting this so action is actually taken soon.
还没结束。。后面还有一些

The shorter you mod the shorter I will need to translate lol
fix nc and sanp @Blue Dragon
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KaedekaShizuru
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你就作死吧 被针对了不会有人来帮你
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@sahuang 这态度别再理他了
sahuang
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sahuang
没得救了
Mismagius
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Mismagius
well apparently not much has been fixed, if you're really intending on leaving the map as it is, there isn't a lot I can do

good luck on getting reranked!
Birdy
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Birdy
a map of one of my all-time favourite songs

there is a god
Rizia
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Rizia
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Birdy
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Birdy

_Gezo_ wrote:

stupid tag addition suggestion:

benn jordan cuz he da flashbulb
resuggesting this because it hasn't been applied and he's also making music as Benn Jordan
Mismagius
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Mismagius
breakcore still not on tags as well

i'm out for real this time
z1085684963
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z1085684963
ok thanks
C00L
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C00L
could you give another a name with a upper case letter i.e. Another pls. Rest of the diffs start with a upper case xd
smallboat
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smallboat
Sorry late for long time.

Looks fine so give Re-qua it.

Btw he says the last diff name keep, because it is not affect overall mapset and playing at his opinion.
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