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Takamiya Nasuno (CV:Narumi Kyoko) - MeniMeni ManiMani (TV Ve

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Underforest
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 17 de octubre de 2016 at 6:53:48 p.m.

Artist: Takamiya Nasuno (CV:Narumi Kyoko)
Title: MeniMeni ManiMani (TV Version)
Source: てーきゅう
Tags: teekyuu 2 opening tv size pop'n music ラピストリア lapistoria
BPM: 154
Filesize: 1422kb
Play Time: 00:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.3 stars, 35 notes)
  2. Hard (3.02 stars, 89 notes)
  3. Insane (4.15 stars, 130 notes)
  4. Normal (1.89 stars, 57 notes)
Download: Takamiya Nasuno (CV:Narumi Kyoko) - MeniMeni ManiMani (TV Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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WARNING
Insane difficulty contains some 1/4 patterns due to the vocal.
Underforest

BNs:
Topic Starter
Underforest
Metadata confirmation

p/5516651

Why is a 2.5/1 slider on end instead of circle?
If you have a good audio system, you will notice that the song start to fade out there and fade finishes when slider ends. Basically isn't for intentional drain time expand
btw total drain time is 00:30:001 on editor so don't trust on the website calculation
CookieBite
random mod

[Hard & Insane]
00:21:508 (1,2) - make it to a slider with arrow because It get confuse when you changed it to the blue tick.

free kudosu confirm
Topic Starter
Underforest

CookieBite wrote:

random mod

[Hard & Insane]
00:21:508 (1,2) - make it to a slider with arrow because It get confuse when you changed it to the blue tick.

free kudosu confirm
converted in hard but insane
allein
hello from nub modarr xd

party

00:02:514 - y u mis dat beat in whole song ;w; ples map
00:03:585 - cirkel dere ples
00:06:702 - ^
00:05:533 (4) - y slidar der lul D:
00:07:286 - u mis beat ther
00:07:773 - ^
00:12:449 - i sink tripl der xd
00:13:715 (1) - teht will luk beter xd https://puu.sh/r459n/c4f29ff4eb.png
00:23:650 - same, cirkel there
00:30:079 (3) - pls make it cirkel cuz song ends on 00:30:273 - lol nvm i read
Topic Starter
Underforest
fixed some
Hazu-
lul Insane testplay
Solo puse los hitsounds en la Insane, como los copiaste si es que arreglas alguno de los que puse aplícalo a todas las diffs.
:idea: General
  1. ¿Es realmente necesario el primer bpm? xD
  2. Quizá sería mejor agregar "2" en los tags, ya que es el opening de su 2da temporada.
Party
  1. 00:02:416 (3) - No es mas que un capricho, pero muevelo un poco hacia la izquierda, para que siga una linea de acuerdo al slider anterior.
  2. 00:10:209 (3) - Lo mismo para este (pero hacia la derecha ahora), si lo haces mueve también 00:09:429 (3) - por que creo que es blanket.
  3. 00:12:935 (1) - ¿Por que el finish? yo no escucho nada como para poner un finish. xd
  4. 00:08:260 (1) - y 00:09:819 (1) - ¿Finish? Suena bastante parecido a donde pusiste finish. (00:07:481 (1) - y 00:09:040 (1) - )
  5. 00:04:754 (2) - y 00:17:222 (3) - Creo que aquí quedaría bien un finish de acuerdo a que en la canción suena algo diferente (supongo que sabes a que me refiero, no se como explicarlo).
  6. 00:18:390 (1) - Aquí suena claramente un platillo xD ¿Finish?
Hard
  1. 00:23:066 (1,2,3,4) - Te recomendaría usar los objetos parecidos a los que usaste en Insane, fue la única parte que se me hizo incómoda al jugar.
Normal
  1. No tengo inconvenientes con esta diff, a excepción de los ticks azules, no creo que sea lo correcto, pero no se escucha mal, igual pregúntale a algún BN sobre esto.
Easy
  1. adsadsadsadassa Holi c:
Good Luck~
Net0
Fun song xD . As we discussed, m4m on this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648
[General]
  1. All ok :D


[Easy]
    1. 00:00:662 (1) - This slider here it starts with the whistle sound and ends before the whistle stops. I know that you need the 1/1 gap, but using a 1/2 slider here is dangerous. For me it works fine, but some ppl might not agree using 1/2 measure stuff on easy.
    2. SMALL blanket fix 00:09:819 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/r4wWk.jpg
    3. ^ 00:18:390 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/r4x1V.jpg
    4. ^ 00:27:546 (1,2,3) - , really nazi to ask you to fix this blankets with DS, so this one works fine, you don't have to fix if you don't want to.http://puu.sh/r4xaB.jpg, but the 2,3 one I really recommendhttp://puu.sh/r4xcY.jpg

[Normal]
  1. This combo here looks really odd in this diff. The entire first part you've kept combos inside the 1/1, but here 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have choose to go beyond. I'd recommend nc 00:12:157 (4) - .
  2. Unsnapped sliders 00:06:312 (2) - ;00:10:598 (1) - ; 00:11:183 (2) - ; 00:18:780 (2) - ; 00:21:508 (1) - ; 00:29:494 (4) - . So I've checked each of them, and mostly you were ending on the beats which means you're using slider polarity. However the gap here 00:21:508 (1,2,3) - made this really hard. The player will have a 3/4gap to go back to white polarity and that will be a hitcircle. Consider reworking this combo. You can see that this one is more natural 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4) - because the following object is a slider. About the repeat sliders, you could probably add a hitsound on the whiteticks, to make it work better here:00:06:702 - and 00:19:170 - .
  3. Blanket 00:17:612 (3,1) - :D

[Hard]
  1. 0,08x of spacing increase here 00:09:429 (2) - . It's odd because everything is quite the same spacing, and this here is bigger. I don't quite see a reason, so maybe a fix?
  2. ^ but in this case really smaller spacing 00:14:495 (3,4) - , it goes from 1,30x to 1,22x.
  3. ^00:25:209 (3) - goes up to 1,36x. In this case I'd let it pass since it's the main chorus part, but again, I think it wasn't your original intention to leave it bigger, specially upbeat.
  4. Blanket 00:02:416 (6,1) - , really small this one http://puu.sh/r4yvJ.jpg
  5. Is this 00:02:222 (4,5,6) - vocal 1/4 triple? Because I can't hear the beats xD , if it's than totally fine o/
  6. 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make 1 a slider that leads into the blue polarity. Something like this to improve both suggestions


[Party]
  1. Blanket 00:17:027 (2,5) -
  2. Woudl you blanket this 00:19:754 (4,1,1) - ? Not needed, just personal taste xD
  3. Not much to say, this diff is really polished, good job o/

Cool song man, hopefully you can find more mods to this
Topic Starter
Underforest

Hazu- wrote:

lul Insane testplay
Solo puse los hitsounds en la Insane, como los copiaste si es que arreglas alguno de los que puse aplícalo a todas las diffs.
:idea: General
  1. ¿Es realmente necesario el primer bpm? xD si, ya que un offset negativo solo desincronizara el metronomo y hara conflicto con el modo Nightcore, hay casos en el que es rankeable pero para mi es mejor una linea roja en su lugar uwu
  2. Quizá sería mejor agregar "2" en los tags, ya que es el opening de su 2da temporada. komo lo zupo
Party
  1. 00:02:416 (3) - No es mas que un capricho, pero muevelo un poco hacia la izquierda, para que siga una linea de acuerdo al slider anterior.
  2. 00:10:209 (3) - Lo mismo para este (pero hacia la derecha ahora), si lo haces mueve también 00:09:429 (3) - por que creo que es blanket.
  3. 00:12:935 (1) - ¿Por que el finish? yo no escucho nada como para poner un finish. xd escucha nuevamente, hay uno que no se escucha mucho pero esta mas al fondo de la musica y esto es para enfatizarlo
  4. 00:08:260 (1) - y 00:09:819 (1) - ¿Finish? Suena bastante parecido a donde pusiste finish. (00:07:481 (1) - y 00:09:040 (1) - ) no son necesarios
  5. 00:04:754 (2) - y 00:17:222 (3) - Creo que aquí quedaría bien un finish de acuerdo a que en la canción suena algo diferente (supongo que sabes a que me refiero, no se como explicarlo). los finish tampoco me parecen necesarios aqui
  6. 00:18:390 (1) - Aquí suena claramente un platillo xD ¿Finish?
Hard
  1. 00:23:066 (1,2,3,4) - Te recomendaría usar los objetos parecidos a los que usaste en Insane, fue la única parte que se me hizo incómoda al jugar. El BPM es 154 y el gap lo encuentro bien, no quiero hacer una diff demasiado dificil de lo que ya es
Normal
  1. No tengo inconvenientes con esta diff, a excepción de los ticks azules, no creo que sea lo correcto, pero no se escucha mal, igual pregúntale a algún BN sobre esto. no creo que haya problemas con eso
Easy
  1. adsadsadsadassa Holi c:
Good Luck~

Net0 wrote:

Fun song xD . As we discussed, m4m on this: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/502648
[General]
  1. All ok :D


[Easy]
    1. 00:00:662 (1) - This slider here it starts with the whistle sound and ends before the whistle stops. I know that you need the 1/1 gap, but using a 1/2 slider here is dangerous. For me it works fine, but some ppl might not agree using 1/2 measure stuff on easy. I won't, neither can't fix this because converting this into a circle will decrease the drain time and this map would be unrankable. Also 1/2 sliders are rankable on Easy if you use it only on determinated cases
    2. SMALL blanket fix 00:09:819 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/r4wWk.jpg
    3. ^ 00:18:390 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/r4x1V.jpg
    4. ^ 00:27:546 (1,2,3) - , really nazi to ask you to fix this blankets with DS, so this one works fine, you don't have to fix if you don't want to.http://puu.sh/r4xaB.jpg, but the 2,3 one I really recommendhttp://puu.sh/r4xcY.jpg http://puu.sh/r4x1V.jpg

[Normal]
  1. This combo here looks really odd in this diff. The entire first part you've kept combos inside the 1/1, but here 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you have choose to go beyond. I'd recommend nc 00:12:157 (4) -
  2. Unsnapped sliders 00:06:312 (2) - ;00:10:598 (1) - ; 00:11:183 (2) - ; 00:18:780 (2) - ; 00:21:508 (1) - ; 00:29:494 (4) - . So I've checked each of them, and mostly you were ending on the beats which means you're using slider polarity. However the gap here 00:21:508 (1,2,3) - made this really hard. The player will have a 3/4gap to go back to white polarity and that will be a hitcircle. Consider reworking this combo. You can see that this one is more natural 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4) - because the following object is a slider. About the repeat sliders, you could probably add a hitsound on the whiteticks, to make it work better here:00:06:702 - and 00:19:170 - . snapped some of them
  3. Blanket 00:17:612 (3,1) - :D those aren't intended for blanket

[Hard]
  1. 0,08x of spacing increase here 00:09:429 (2) - . It's odd because everything is quite the same spacing, and this here is bigger. I don't quite see a reason, so maybe a fix?
  2. ^ but in this case really smaller spacing 00:14:495 (3,4) - , it goes from 1,30x to 1,22x. No fix, reason is that without circle stacking DS for this slider is fine: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6047507 so this is caused by stacking circles and not cause the distance
  3. ^00:25:209 (3) - goes up to 1,36x. In this case I'd let it pass since it's the main chorus part, but again, I think it wasn't your original intention to leave it bigger, specially upbeat.
  4. Blanket 00:02:416 (6,1) - , really small this one http://puu.sh/r4yvJ.jpg
  5. Is this 00:02:222 (4,5,6) - vocal 1/4 triple? Because I can't hear the beats xD , if it's than totally fine o/ no fix then
  6. 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make 1 a slider that leads into the blue polarity. Something like this to improve both suggestions


[Party]
  1. Blanket 00:17:027 (2,5) -
  2. Woudl you blanket this 00:19:754 (4,1,1) - ? Not needed, just personal taste xD no fix then
  3. Not much to say, this diff is really polished, good job o/

Cool song man, hopefully you can find more mods to this
thanks both ♥
intiaz
ok

Easy:
00:00:662 - maybe remove this slider?

Normal:
nothing wrong with this! very nice job :D

Hard:
nothing wrong with this either! awesome!

Insane (or party WHATEVER):
00:12:936 - space this stream a little less

and nice! Very few issues, pretty awesome map! 8-)
Topic Starter
Underforest

Nyantiaz wrote:

ok

Easy:
00:00:662 - maybe remove this slider? explained reasons above

Normal:
nothing wrong with this! very nice job :D

Hard:
nothing wrong with this either! awesome!

Insane (or party WHATEVER):
00:12:936 - space this stream a little less ok

and nice! Very few issues, pretty awesome map! 8-) liar
thanks ♥
Ashton
hi underforest

omg 'party' nm mod for follower on instagram DO IT


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?

well nm because so short why not


not gonna shoot star though, I'm saving up my stars instead of shooting (look at my sassou toujou!Neko-san map please, spammed 53 kudosu on it already)


--Easy--

00:05:923 (3,4) - this angel change is quite intense for an easy or you could just move (4) up idk but do something please

00:07:481 (1,2) - curve these two for nazi aesthetical flow reasons
00:19:949 (1,2) - ^
00:25:403 (4,1) - I know there's quite a bit of spacing between these notes but still don't stack maybe idk
00:27:546 (1) - starting on a red tick in easy HMMM IRREGULAR RYTHYM WHY DON'T YOU CHECK PISHIFATS CHANNEL YOU NOOB
00:27:546 (1,2) - holy shet more irregular rythym
00:27:546 (1) - start this slider on 00:27:351 - here please

--Normal--

00:00:662 (1) - maybe I wouldn't suggest mapping the whistle in the beginning, if you are just make it one circle please
00:02:806 (1) - omg, curve this for flow and aesthetics more nazi suggestions
00:05:144 (3,1) - this flow and look why so many nazi suggestions
00:17:612 (3,1) - MORE NAZI SUGGESTIONS THIS FLOW IS HARD
00:21:508 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 3 the same shape



--Hard--

00:00:662 (1,2) - again I just don't like the idea of mapping this whistle, and if your gonna map it make it one circle 00:00:662 - here and make 00:00:857 (2) - that a 1/2 slider please
00:06:605 (3,4) - more spacing?
00:08:260 (3,4) - curve this please PLEASE PLEASE
00:11:183 (2) - put the middle anchor in the middle of the slider and MORE IRREGULAR RYTHYM YOU NOOB
00:19:073 (3,4) - again curve these please
00:23:845 (3,4) - again curve these it plays so WEIRD
00:25:403 (4,5) - more sv on this maybe?


--Party--

I honestly don't think 'party' is a good name but maybe 'loli' or 'kawaii' would fir better because of the bg and song idk

00:07:092 (2,1) - I think blanket here would be too hard
00:25:793 (6) - would play better if middle anchor was taken out




Good Luck
Topic Starter
Underforest

Whirl wrote:

hi underforest

omg 'party'


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?
yes, this is actually... going for rank
Ashton
okay

you got a star from me


because your a great kind person




and also I rich with stars asf
Topic Starter
Underforest

Whirl wrote:

(you fricking killed me in pm)

yeah i did

will be on your mod soon
Topic Starter
Underforest

Whirl wrote:

hi underforest

omg 'party' nm mod for follower on instagram DO IT


this is a nice mapset I like it, no GDs, it would be your first ranked map with no GDs if you get this ranked, right?

well nm because so short why not


--Easy--

00:05:923 (3,4) - this angel change is quite intense for an easy is not very very hard xd or you could just move (4) up idk but do something please

00:07:481 (1,2) - curve these two for nazi aesthetical flow reasons is not nazi, i don't found nothing wrong here
00:19:949 (1,2) - ^ same
00:25:403 (4,1) - I know there's quite a bit of spacing between these notes but still don't stack maybe idk stack is allowed for this case
00:27:546 (1) - starting on a red tick in easy HMMM IRREGULAR RYTHYM WHY DON'T YOU CHECK PISHIFATS CHANNEL YOU NOOB i'm following vocal
00:27:546 (1,2) - holy shet more irregular rythym nope
00:27:546 (1) - start this slider on 00:27:351 - here please no need

--Normal--

00:00:662 (1) - maybe I wouldn't suggest mapping the whistle in the beginning, if you are just make it one circle please explained reasons of why I can't do this
00:02:806 (1) - omg, curve this for flow and aesthetics more nazi suggestions fixed
00:05:144 (3,1) - this flow and look why so many nazi suggestions is going rectal so no problem with it
00:17:612 (3,1) - MORE NAZI SUGGESTIONS THIS FLOW IS HARD fixed
00:21:508 (1,2,3) - make 1 and 3 the same shape ok



--Hard--

00:00:662 (1,2) - again I just don't like the idea of mapping this whistle, and if your gonna map it make it one circle 00:00:662 - here and make 00:00:857 (2) - that a 1/2 slider please it doesn't fit for it
00:06:605 (3,4) - more spacing? i'll think about it
00:08:260 (3,4) - curve this please PLEASE PLEASE ok
00:11:183 (2) - put the middle anchor in the middle of the slider and MORE IRREGULAR RYTHYM YOU NOOB o... k
00:19:073 (3,4) - again curve these please no need
00:23:845 (3,4) - again curve these it plays so WEIRD same
00:25:403 (4,5) - more sv on this maybe? i'll think about it


--Party--

I honestly don't think 'party' is a good name but maybe 'loli' or 'kawaii' would fir better because of the bg and song idk resolved via irc

00:07:092 (2,1) - I think blanket here would be too hard why? it haves a really good flow imo
00:25:793 (6) - would play better if middle anchor was taken out intentional




Good Luck
thanks for the mod ♥
Agatsu
just me being a nazi xd

partyparty

00:00:857 - try something like this

LOL that's it.
Topic Starter
Underforest
fixed so that's why gave kudosu
domSaur
meni


[Party]
  1. 00:02:319 (2,3) - ctrl+h/make it face the direction the slider is going. feels weird it went the other way around.
  2. 00:05:825 (5,1) - this one however, tilt it some 20 degrees ccw so it doesn't look wonky.... or prolly that's just me
  3. actually these two^ applies to all the slider+2 1/4 circles you have but i dun wanna tell all of them one-by-one.
  4. 00:21:508 (1,2,1,2,3) - not sure how can i best explain this but this section feels bizarre and it took me a few tries to process it right. this kind of "vacancy" when the entire diff has been mostly dense(esp in 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - where the music is also just as bumpy) feels weird. maybe turn 00:21:508 (1) - into a 1/2 slider, pull the end of 00:21:799 (2) - back to the blue tick before it and then, put a 1/4 slider(or 2 circles?) on 00:22:092 - ....or prolly that's just me as well
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:650 (4) - nothing necessary but maybe move this wee bit up to level it with (3)
  2. 00:11:183 (2,3) - mayb NC this separately as well since they land on similarly strong beats.
  3. and speaking similar beats remove the clap on 00:11:767 (3) -
  4. 00:22:286 (2) - kinda doubt this since there's nothing in the music that suggest for a 1/4 but wtvr
  5. 00:28:131 (3,5) - maybe you could also NC these as well
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Topic Starter
Underforest

domSaur wrote:

meni


[Party]
  1. 00:02:319 (2,3) - ctrl+h/make it face the direction the slider is going. feels weird it went the other way around. intended
  2. 00:05:825 (5,1) - this one however, tilt it some 20 degrees ccw so it doesn't look wonky.... or prolly that's just me ok
  3. actually these two^ applies to all the slider+2 1/4 circles you have but i dun wanna tell all of them one-by-one.
  4. 00:21:508 (1,2,1,2,3) - not sure how can i best explain this but this section feels bizarre and it took me a few tries to process it right. this kind of "vacancy" when the entire diff has been mostly dense(esp in 00:10:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - where the music is also just as bumpy) feels weird. maybe turn 00:21:508 (1) - into a 1/2 slider, pull the end of 00:21:799 (2) - back to the blue tick before it and then, put a 1/4 slider(or 2 circles?) on 00:22:092 - ....or prolly that's just me as well intended too
[Hard]
  1. 00:08:650 (4) - nothing necessary but maybe move this wee bit up to level it with (3) not fix cause rhythm dense
  2. 00:11:183 (2,3) - mayb NC this separately as well since they land on similarly strong beats. it doesn't look nice
  3. and speaking similar beats remove the clap on 00:11:767 (3) - intended too
  4. 00:22:286 (2) - kinda doubt this since there's nothing in the music that suggest for a 1/4 but wtvr listen on 25-50% playback
  5. 00:28:131 (3,5) - maybe you could also NC these as well intended
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
thanks ♥
Ashton
wajinshu
nice bg
-Atri-
Man i didn't expect you did very well on insanes, even you said that you're inexperienced with it
Topic Starter
Underforest

KuranteMelodii wrote:

Man i didn't expect you did very well on insanes, even you said that you're inexperienced with it
lul ty
Iceskulls
[easy]
  1. 00:00:662 (1) - isn't opening with 1/2 slider a bit too surprise for beginner ?
  2. 00:29:494 (2,3) - I think doing something like this work better for beginner
[normal]
  1. 00:09:819 (3) - I think place this right after (2) tail would make flow better , try move to around x188 y56
  2. 00:29:494 (4) - nc cus 2nd downbeat so it consistent with your nc pattern previously ?
[hard]
  1. 00:09:819 (3,4) - why not try this rhythm so it can cover the snare beat there too ?
    looks solid but can add some jumps to make better spread with insane
[insane]
  1. 00:03:195 (2,3,4) - kinda hard to catch with the current structure , try move to around x408 y288 ? i think that would make flow better
  2. 00:05:533 (4,5,1) - the thing you do at the tail is a bit off imo lol , try adjust like this ?
  3. 00:07:871 (2,3) - a bit to much spacing for the low vocal there , i think maybe move 00:08:066 (3) - to around x188 y24 would be better also would make 00:08:066 (3,1) - has higher spacing than 00:07:871 (2,3) - which make more sense with the song here
  4. 00:09:819 (1,2,3) - huh? ctrl+h and readjust so it will flow better ? current feel a bit off imo
  5. 00:10:209 (3,4) - can reduce spacing here a bit so it make 00:10:403 (4,1) - a bit bigger spacing which will make the impact on (1) feel better
currently insane has lots of jumps while hard has none so you can work a bit to improve on spread there by adding some jumps in hard
after you fix that , try poke me back
Topic Starter
Underforest
fixed everything except this

CelsiusLK wrote:

[easy]
  1. 00:00:662 (1) - isn't opening with 1/2 slider a bit too surprise for beginner ? it isn't and actually I can't convert this to a circle or drain time will drop to 29 seconds (unrankable)
Iceskulls
are you sure the title is (TV ver.)

i found the screenshot from the album here

and it shows メニメニマニマニ (TVバージョン) instead

so shouldn't the it be

Title : メニメニマニマニ (TVバージョン)
Romanised Title : MeniMeniManiMani (TVver.)

the "ver." there was obviously a translated of バージョン since there is no official romanised (I guess)

might be not 100% sure lol tho
Topic Starter
Underforest
lol you're right, changed
Iceskulls
yea
Topic Starter
Underforest

CelsiusLK wrote:

yea
thank you :3
wajinshu
Some nazi :d
~Hard~
00:28:910 (4,5) - A little overlap with the accuracy meter (if enabled) :d
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