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[Serendipity]
[Nwolf's Inner Oni]
[Serendipity]
- 00:06:042 (2) - This is inaudible without the addition of whistle or changing the level of the hitsound volume, and since this is the head, I suggest to make it more audible. You can also do what your difficulty Extra has done.
- 00:41:899 (1,2) - You could expand the spacing here instead of 00:42:042 (2,3) - as it's pretty much the same as 00:41:327 (3,4) -.
- 00:54:470 (10) - Somehow I feel this slider should be moved to 00:54:613 - instead. Both noise on 00:54:042 - and 00:54:613 - are practically the same, so I was thinking a slider should follow the same beat. It just felt right too to be honest.
- 01:05:899 (4,5) - I highly recommend you remove the circle out of the slider's end stack. Because the slider here is short, the circle covers most of it, rendering the slider's readability difficult.
- 01:19:470 (9,9) - After hearing the section 01:14:327 until 01:16:613 -, the whistle on the objects mentioned doesn't sound very fitting, as both sections of streams have a very similar melody, or maybe they are indifferent, so they felt out of blue.
- 01:21:184 (1,2,3,4) - The beats on these objects are going pitched up (if I'm not deaf), so it kind of looks weird to see the kicksliders going down. The same is true to 01:21:756 (1,2,3,4) -, where the beats sound as if they are pitched down. Basically here, the first set of kicksliders should go up, and the second set should go down. This visually look logic with the music in my opinion.
- 02:02:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe reduce the spacing of this stream to make the next section 02:03:470 - stand out a bit more, since you can hear the crash? Nothing pretty much is changed during the whole stream.
- 01:13:184 (1) - lol this is almost repeated as in Serendipity.
- 01:19:470 (9,5) - Same thing about the hitsound in the section above.
- 01:21:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Instead of repeating the same pattern twice, why not make a pattern different from the other? Both sections (01:21:184 (1,2,3,4) - and 01:21:756 (1,2,3,4) - ) do not sound the same. The first is played in a high key, and seemly to continue the scale up. The second is played lower than the first section, while it sounds that the scale is going down here. Repeating the same pattern for two different consecutive sections doesn't fit the logic to the music. As for a suggestion you can change the second pattern and keep the first pattern, and do something like this:
- 01:52:327 (5) - 01:52:899 (5) - I was thinking of keeping the repeat slider pattern 01:50:327 (9,10) - and 01:51:470 (9,10) -. Having two kicksliders doesn't seem quite well in this section. I would keep the kicksliders in the section 01:53:184 -, where they really emphasize the cymbal beats as they hit much close later on. Whereas 01:52:327 (5,6) - 01:52:899 (5,6) -, the sliders (6) are not doing much to the music in my opinion.
- 01:55:470 (1,2,3,4,5) - The jumps are big here, compared to the other similar rhythm, and it's the only pattern with this kind of rhythm that has a spacing 5.10x in-between the jumps. It's also a little less easy to play with this kind of jumps. So, I suggest you reduce the jumps at somewhere around 3.0x ~ 3.5x, based on your other patterns.
- 02:14:899 until 02:18:899 - Streaming a full 4 seconds of full circle in 210 BPM is pretty intense for Extra I think. Maybe you could break the stream by adding repeat sliders, as you did in the difficulty Another.
- 00:50:327 (1,2,3,4,5) - You're going a bit too far with this pattern. Since this is a 1/3 rhythm for this pattern, the spacing can be a surprise, and it looks too much for 1/3 rhythms, unlike your two other hardest difficulties where the path is pretty clear. It's also hard to play from my experience. I recommend you lower the spacing.
- 00:54:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing as above, but I feel you're going overboard for this pattern, as you have jumps that goes over 3.50x.
- 01:21:184 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as in Extra above.
- 01:41:756 (1) - This is not an obligation, but the slider's end is touching the HP bar :^).
- 01:16:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - and many more - I have doubts for this kind of patterns, as you put a jump for sliders with 1/4 rhythm, which was uncommon for me. Especially 01:25:756 (1,2,3,4,5) -. So I decided to search for opinions, and here's one.
- 00:20:613 (1,2,3,4) - This is also going over the top. I don't really see them as 1/4, and the flow is not that great due to the space in-between the sliders, so it was pretty hard to pass those sliders, and I think they are too hard for Insane. I guess what you can do is to bring more close, like this:
- 01:56:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:57:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like in Extra, but they may be too hard for Insane?
- 00:08:042 (1,2) - Instead of recreating the same flow like 00:05:756 (1,2) -, I was thinking if you could make something else, as both section in the music have different melodies.
- 00:16:613 (4,5) - Maybe make the distance more big because the scale of the key of 00:17:184 (5) - is higher than 00:16:613 (4) -.
- 00:26:042 (3,1) - Not much of a big deal, but the tail is touching the HP bar, so you can lower their position a bit.
- 01:20:042 (1,2) - I can't tell if it's a 1/2 rhythm here due to the inconsistency with the spacing 01:18:899 (1,2,3,4,1) -, so I suggest you bring the distance consistent.
[Nwolf's Inner Oni]
- 00:19:827 (5) - There no piano or any kind of beat for this note, so I think don would suit better.
- 00:19:970 (7) - Since the piano has a higher key than 00:19:899 (6) -, how about a kat instead of don?
- 01:04:042 (12,13,14) - This triplet sounds really weird. I'm not sure if you intended this.