Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. - · forum

Lefia

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-06-06T22:53:51+00:00

Hey from my queue

[Ultra beginner]

nerf it.

[Normal]

00:20:946 (5) move it into x:148 y:312 (to make triangle)
00:28:284 (1) ctrl + h
00:41:665 (1) ctrl + j
00:59:578 (2) how about you use this slider's shape? ( at 01:00:441 )

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:05:299 (3) ctrl + g
00:47:276 (2) ctrl + g
00:49:866 try smth like this

[Miracle]

AR > 9 ( 8 is too slow i think )

GL~

Otau Oto

10 posts

Joined March 2016

Otau Oto 2016-06-06T23:03:30+00:00

Very gewd.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-06-07T07:48:02+00:00

Thanks for the mod. Keeping ar8 Because low BPM and SR. Will nerf ultra Beginner someday.

Will reply to normal as soon as I can get online. Ty

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-06-07T10:23:17+00:00

@MadaoX : no change sorry, I like my flow better ;; thanks anyway
@Lanturn : I increased the spacing on the last section, so it don't felt as cramped as before

i cri

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: CAS.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
BeatmapID:986228
BeatmapSetID:438531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"CAS.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lanturn

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-06-11T14:17:04+00:00

MadaoX wrote:
[Normal]

00:20:946 (5) move it into x:148 y:312 (to make triangle) This ruins the DS of the upcoming notes, and makes it difficult to adjust for. Gonna leave as is, thanks though!
00:28:284 (1) ctrl + h I personally prefer as is.
00:41:665 (1) ctrl + j Changed this, Actually looks good.
00:59:578 (2) how about you use this slider's shape? ( at 01:00:441 ) This whole section (second half of kiai) uses different slider shapes than the upcoming or previous, so they're always alternating.

Thanks MadaoX.

Updated.

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-06-11T19:46:22+00:00

Hello! o/
M4M from your queue!

Beginner

00:43:391 (2) - I think Ctrl + J looks better!
00:46:844 (2) - ^
00:48:571 (1) - Move red point to x:173 y:316 and make bigger curve
00:50:298 (2) - ^ (Red point to x:339 y:299)

Easy

00:17:924 (2) - Move this a bit down, cause it looks old
00:19:219 (3,4) - Blanket this?
00:20:514 (5,6) - ^ and move a bit to left/right (what do you want)
00:25:263 (5) - NC
00:27:853 (8) - ^
00:28:284 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:391 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:45:118 (1,2) - In my opinion 1/2 clicks are too hard to Easy diff
00:58:931 (1,2) - ^

Normal

00:08:299 (6) - Ctrl + J?
00:26:558 (5) - Move to x:37 y:135
00:28:284 (1) - Ctrl + H looks much better
00:38:428 (4) - Overmapped
00:56:125 (2) - Ctrl + J looks better imo
01:01:521 (6,1) - R.I.P Blanket

Hard

00:11:299 (6,7) - Blanket this
00:24:399 (6) - Ctrl + J
00:38:428 (5) - The same as Normal
00:52:024 (1,2,3) - Imo you can blanket it
00:54:614 (6) - NC?
00:56:772 (3,4) - Blanket?
01:03:679 (3,4) - Improve blanket

END!
Nice map, but I saw you have got little blankets

.
GOOD LUCK!

Lanturn

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-06-11T20:27:44+00:00

Thank you, will reply after I'm done modding the other stuff today. Yours is next.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-06-22T18:56:46+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello! o/
M4M from your queue!
Beginner
00:43:391 (2) - I think Ctrl + J looks better! Prefer with current curve.
00:46:844 (2) - ^
00:48:571 (1) - Move red point to x:173 y:316 and make bigger curve I want it to bounce off the vocals.
00:50:298 (2) - ^ (Red point to x:339 y:299) Symmetry off the last one, even if it doesn't follow any vocals.
Easy
00:17:924 (2) - Move this a bit down, cause it looks old I changed this around to match the whistles. not sure what you mean by old though.
00:19:219 (3,4) - Blanket this? Nothing to blanket? X_X
00:20:514 (5,6) - ^ and move a bit to left/right (what do you want) prefer as is.
00:25:263 (5) - NC
00:27:853 (8) - ^
00:28:284 (1) - Remove NC Keeping my NCs as is. thanks though.
00:43:391 (2,3) - Improve blanket Done, and the other one at halfway in the kiai as well.
00:45:118 (1,2) - In my opinion 1/2 clicks are too hard to Easy diff Not at this bpm. Plus there are easier difficulties if it's too hard for some.
00:58:931 (1,2) - ^
Normal
00:08:299 (6) - Ctrl + J? prefer to keep as is.
00:26:558 (5) - Move to x:37 y:135 Breaks DS.
00:28:284 (1) - Ctrl + H looks much better prefer as is.
00:38:428 (4) - Overmapped Mapped to the ru vocals.
00:56:125 (2) - Ctrl + J looks better imo Prefer current way.
01:01:521 (6,1) - R.I.P Blanket Fixed
Hard
00:11:299 (6,7) - Blanket thisDoesn't need to imo.
00:24:399 (6) - Ctrl + J Keeping as is.
00:38:428 (5) - The same as Normal Hits a vocal.
00:52:024 (1,2,3) - Imo you can blanket it Fine as symmetry.
00:54:614 (6) - NC? These combos are all long.
00:56:772 (3,4) - Blanket? No need to.
01:03:679 (3,4) - Improve blanket It's fine as is.

END!
Nice map, but I saw you have got little blankets .
GOOD LUCK!

Thanks for the mod!

Doyak

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Doyak 2016-06-24T07:47:07+00:00

I'm finally done! Please copy the hitsound from your diff, and rename the diff as you want.

Doyak's Insane

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-06-29T02:34:35+00:00

normal mod from queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
ultra? not light? 0 0

[Normal]
01:17:275 (4) - suggest to change it in another way, because the music has obviously changed.
for example,
http://puu.sh/pJKgA/64c0b51f43.jpg

[Hard]
00:54:075 - what about mapping this drum? because you mapped - 00:54:938 (8) - .

good luck

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-06-29T07:46:32+00:00

Lily Bread wrote:
normal mod from queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
ultra? not light? 0 0 Either or would work. Just going to leave as Ultra for now.

[Normal]
01:17:275 (4) - suggest to change it in another way, because the music has obviously changed. This actually follows the chimes quite nicely and maintains some consistency. I personally prefer it how it is.
for example,
http://puu.sh/pJKgA/64c0b51f43.jpg

[Hard]
00:54:075 - what about mapping this drum? because you mapped - 00:54:938 (8) - . 00:54:938 (8) - is actually a pretty powerful drum if you listen without the note, while the one you suggested isn't that strong. I would have to map a lot more triples in this section if I used this, which in a Hard, I don't want to.

good luck

Thanks for the mod.

ProfessionalBox

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

771 posts

Joined September 2013

ProfessionalBox 2016-07-06T08:26:26+00:00

Hello Lanturn! M4M from my que

Doyak's Insane

00:02:299 (1,2) - This is my personal opinion but I'd make this a curved slider for variety and it would fit here in my opinion
Picture
00:14:299 - 00:16:441 - A spinner here would be really fitting, highly recommend you add one
00:45:765 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved for sure
00:45:765 (3,1) - Stack properly
01:07:995 (1) - Unnecessary NC

Insane

00:03:156 (3) - The blanket here is a bit off
00:05:727 (1) - I think adding more curve on this would make the 00:06:370 (2,3) - placements look better since they get some of that blanket action
00:13:227 (2,4) - Now I don't intend for this to be a blanket mod but I think this would work nicely
Example
00:46:629 (4,5) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo :p
00:46:629 (4,6) - I personally don't like this overlap that much but I could see why it'd be hard to avoid
01:07:132 (3,4,5) - Maybe try this? It would look a bit better
Example
01:17:707 (5) - Perhaps make this a slider that ends at 01:18:030 - ? It would capture the vocals better unless you are going for a small breather for the players here
01:25:691 - This should be a clickable beat imo. You could make the spinner start right after it
01:25:691 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:389 - imo. If you agree then make sure it is changed for all diffs that have this spinner on them, I didn't point them out specifically since you are in charge of this decision imo.

Yohanes' insane

00:05:299 (3,1) - This blanket is off by quite a bit,consider making it look better
00:16:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider!
00:20:514 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved aswell :p
00:40:802 (1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:41:234 (2,3) - and is therefore confusing
00:42:528 (7,2) - These aren't properly stacked
01:02:384 (1,2) - Same here! Make sure these are stacked properly aswell after the fix 01:03:031 (2,2) -

Fuuko's Light Insane

00:08:299 (5,1) - This overlap is a bit confusing for the players of this difficulty to read. I suggest you come up with something else for this
00:18:356 (5,8) - Stack properly
00:45:765 (2,4) - Same here
01:01:952 (4,1) - ^
01:02:168 (5,2,4) - ^
01:04:974 (7,1) - I like the idea of this overlap aswell but it is a bit too confusing for most people to read.
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think you should do these in pairs since now it gets really repeatitive

That's it for the mod, hope it helped. Good luck with the set!

Lanturn

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-06T08:27:41+00:00

Thank you. Going to reply after work tomorrow. night!

Lanturn

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-07T19:47:32+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Hello Lanturn! M4M from my que

Insane
00:03:156 (3) - The blanket here is a bit off fixed.
00:05:727 (1) - I think adding more curve on this would make the 00:06:370 (2,3) - placements look better since they get some of that blanket action I am very terrible at these for some reason. Tried to fix >_>
00:13:227 (2,4) - Now I don't intend for this to be a blanket mod but I think this would work nicely I cut my internet before looking at this picture (stupid me,it doesn't load the picture until you open the spoiler box) but I can guess what it is. Fixed it.. I hope XD
Example
00:46:629 (4,5) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo :p Moved (5) and the stream thing after down a bit.
00:46:629 (4,6) - I personally don't like this overlap that much but I could see why it'd be hard to avoid yeah.... dumb stacked notes, even if I manually stacked them. SHAME ON ME!
01:07:132 (3,4,5) - Maybe try this? It would look a bit better F me and not having internet to load this picture. I'll look at it next time. Actually to be honest, I do remember this one kinda before I replied to this. If I remember correctly I didn't want (4,5) to be too close to each other.
Example
01:17:707 (5) - Perhaps make this a slider that ends at 01:18:030 - ? It would capture the vocals better unless you are going for a small breather for the players here I could go either route, but I decided that they definitely needed this breather. Gonna leave as a circle for now.
01:25:691 - This should be a clickable beat imo. You could make the spinner start right after it This is just me and my preferences. I know it's probably in the minority about now, but I personally don't really like having a circle on a held vocal and have a spinner start immediately after it when it's still part of that same held vocal.
01:25:691 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:389 - imo. If you agree then make sure it is changed for all diffs that have this spinner on them, I didn't point them out specifically since you are in charge of this decision imo. I believe where I currently have it the fade out drops faster here, so it kind of blends in nicely. For now I think I want to keep it here but if my ears are terrible and others point this out, I'll make the change. Thanks!

Thanks a bunch for the mod!

Doyak

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2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-07-07T19:57:58+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Doyak's Insane
00:02:299 (1,2) - This is my personal opinion but I'd make this a curved slider for variety and it would fit here in my opinion ok
Picture
00:14:299 - 00:16:441 - A spinner here would be really fitting, highly recommend you add one Where to end it is a problem. It doesn't end on 00:16:441 - either. And I want to start with notes on the next section, and don't want them to be too close to the spinner.
00:45:765 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved for sure yes
00:45:765 (3,1) - Stack properly dem yes
01:07:995 (1) - Unnecessary NC 01:07:995 (1,2) - These two have more obvious drums unlike 01:07:564 (1,2) - , so I'm discriminating them. This is also why they have jumps.

Thanks~

Doyak's Insane

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Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-07-08T01:29:06+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Yohanes' insane
00:05:299 (3,1) - This blanket is off by quite a bit,consider making it look better
00:16:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider!
00:20:514 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved aswell :p
00:40:802 (1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:41:234 (2,3) - and is therefore confusing
00:42:528 (7,2) - These aren't properly stacked It's stacked on the slidertail
01:02:384 (1,2) - Same here! Make sure these are stacked properly aswell after the fix 01:03:031 (2,2) - Uh, it stacked properly already (?)

Other are fixed, thank you ProBox!

hoya

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: CAS.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
BeatmapID:986228
BeatmapSetID:438531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"CAS.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-10T02:20:53+00:00

ProfessionalBox wrote:
Fuuko's Light Insane
00:08:299 (5,1) - This overlap is a bit confusing for the players of this difficulty to read. I suggest you come up with something else for this retry
00:18:356 (5,8) - Stack properly peppy fix ur damn game
00:45:765 (2,4) - Same here me2
01:01:952 (4,1) - ^
01:02:168 (5,2,4) - ^ yehaj
01:04:974 (7,1) - I like the idea of this overlap aswell but it is a bit too confusing for most people to read. same
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think you should do these in pairs since now it gets really repeatitive it isnt repetitive im just being consistent xd

That's it for the mod, hope it helped. Good luck with the set!

thanks

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-10T07:04:54+00:00

requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D:
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick?
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar:

01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd

gl!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-07-10T07:20:18+00:00

Underforest wrote:
requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D: xd
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick? no veo porque no. si me reclaman mas lo cambio xd
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd es culpa de peppy xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar: no quiero hacer nada complicado :p
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd stairway to heaven

gl!

!

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2016-07-10T08:28:13+00:00

pkhg wrote:
!

¿

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-07-10T18:50:57+00:00

M4M from your queue

[Doyak's Insane]

00:06:370 (3,2,2,2) - imo NC on these would be nicer since they got a stronger sound then 00:06:584 (1,1,1) - , same here 00:02:941 - 00:09:799 -
00:44:254 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument
00:46:413 (5,6) - try ctrl + g? flow is better this way
00:45:765 (3,1) - stack perfect lol
00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (6) - 01:01:521 (7) - same
01:25:260 (3,4) - imo you should stack here either for consistent

[Insane]

00:04:870 (8,9,1) - 00:08:299 (9,10,1) - 00:11:727 (9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing lol, and maybe NC on 00:04:870 (8) - 00:08:299 (9) - 00:11:727 (9) - for emphasized
00:17:924 (6,7,8,9) - lol this shape could be improved xd
00:44:254 (6) - 00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (7) - 01:01:521 (6) - 01:08:427 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument
01:19:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:21:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape could be improved

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:26:989 (5) - move to 397 224 so the shape would look nicer since 00:26:989 (5) - is at the middle of 00:26:342 (2,3) -
00:35:622 (3,4,1) - increased the sapcing a bit cuz the vocal
00:48:571 (2) - NC here instead of 00:48:139 (1) - , and 00:49:866 (1) - unnecessary NC
00:52:024 (5) - NC here for vocal
01:08:427 (4) - NC for emphasized the instrument
01:23:965 (2) - inconsistent with your structure here, change to 2 notes

sry this is the best i can do ;w;
GL~
mod this mapu : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476595
thanks >w<

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-11T02:05:27+00:00

Thanks. Will reply later. Just did your mod from me.

Yoges

896 posts

Joined January 2014

Yoges 2016-07-13T20:23:05+00:00

Yo, M4M from your queue.

[Ultra Beginner]

I don't think that anyone would be this inept at osu lol. The diff seems unnecessary to me you could just have the Beginner on it's own and get rid of this. I don't see any need for it other than "why not".

[Beginner]

00:02:299 (1,2,1) - A bit of an anal complaint but you usually don't see sliders with more than 1 repeat on diffs as easy as this. It might throw new players off the first time around because of that.
Maybe increase the DS to like 1.2x so that 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - these kind of notes aren't overlapped the way they are? Large noticeable overlaps or having the notes be spaced apart from each other look good, very slight overlaps and touching notes don't look good imo.
You're also NC spamming a lot. It wouldn't do any harm to let the combo go up to like 4 or 8.

[Easy]

00:21:809 - Add a note here? You were following the vocals with the notes before but the vocals also lined up with the drums so having this be empty is a little unexpected.
00:27:421 - ^
00:29:579 (2) - Doesn't look good against the (1) imo.
01:25:691 - Add a note here before the spinner?

[Normal]

00:38:428 (4) - That's really awkward because you haven't switched polarity. Deleting it would be better.
01:25:691 (1) - Add note before spinner?

[Hard]

01:03:679 (3,4) - Nein! Fiksh de blanket!
01:11:879 (3) - Ctrl+J and move to (172,128)?
01:17:275 (3,1) - The spacing is misleading because (1) is just as close to the (3) as the 1/2 notes.
I've just noticed you've used gridsnap. I'd recommend turning it off and resnapping everything to avoid weird looking spacing inconsistencies like 01:19:217 (1,2,3) -
01:20:296 (1,2,3,1,2) - What is that flow? And in a slow part of the song as well.
01:25:691 (1) - Note before spinner?

[Fuuko]

For a light insane stuff like 00:08:299 (5,1) - and 00:20:946 (3,1) - is a bit cruel.
Yeah definitely increase the stack latency. For less experienced players patterns like 00:29:147 (5,6) - might appear as if they're just one slider.
01:04:974 (7,1) - This one is especially strange and unexpected as the (1) is the exact same length and follows the exact same path as the (7).

I can't seem to find anything in any of the other diffs. Gl.

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-07-31T06:47:12+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Insane]
00:04:870 (8,9,1) - 00:08:299 (9,10,1) - 00:11:727 (9,10,1) - inconsistent spacing lol, and maybe NC on 00:04:870 (8) - 00:08:299 (9) - 00:11:727 (9) - for emphasized Fixed spacing, but leaving NCs out.
00:17:924 (6,7,8,9) - lol this shape could be improved xd It uses similar DS for the jumps and the regular spacing actually.
00:44:254 (6) - 00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (7) - 01:01:521 (6) - 01:08:427 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument I don't think it's necessary.
01:19:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:21:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - shape could be improved I believe they're fine.

Thanks :3

Yoges wrote:
Yo, M4M from your queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
I don't think that anyone would be this inept at osu lol. The diff seems unnecessary to me you could just have the Beginner on it's own and get rid of this. I don't see any need for it other than "why not". yup. I could probably delete beginner as well tbh.

[Beginner]
00:02:299 (1,2,1) - A bit of an anal complaint but you usually don't see sliders with more than 1 repeat on diffs as easy as this. It might throw new players off the first time around because of that. Maybe, maybe not. The player has a full second to react to the extra reverses. I'd like to think they'd be able to play this to be honest. I'll change if others complain about it.
Maybe increase the DS to like 1.2x so that 00:16:630 (1,2,3) - these kind of notes aren't overlapped the way they are? Large noticeable overlaps or having the notes be spaced apart from each other look good, very slight overlaps and touching notes don't look good imo. The major problem with overlaps is if they are at that point where some touch and some don't. In this case, they all overlap over and clearly too, so it doesn't detract as bad as you think from the aesthetics. I could give you examples, but if you look at easy or normal maps in pending, you'll probably notice worse lol.
You're also NC spamming a lot. It wouldn't do any harm to let the combo go up to like 4 or 8. good point. I'll let them go at least 4 measures or something lol.

[Easy]
00:21:809 - Add a note here? You were following the vocals with the notes before but the vocals also lined up with the drums so having this be empty is a little unexpected. it does still follow the vocals with the gap. If anything it would have to be a 1/1 slider since its just held.
00:27:421 - ^
00:29:579 (2) - Doesn't look good against the (1) imo. hmm, it was actually 0.03 off, so I fixed it I guess XD
01:25:691 - Add a note here before the spinner? Not for me really. I prefer it this way.

[Normal]
00:38:428 (4) - That's really awkward because you haven't switched polarity. Deleting it would be better. not at all. This plays perfectly fine.
01:25:691 (1) - Add note before spinner? same as easy.

[Hard]
01:03:679 (3,4) - Nein! Fiksh de blanket! uh.. ok
01:11:879 (3) - Ctrl+J and move to (172,128)? I like how it curves with 01:09:721 (3,3) - tbh.
01:17:275 (3,1) - The spacing is misleading because (1) is just as close to the (3) as the 1/2 notes. nah. The vocals make it pretty clear there's a gap. I don't use jumps once in this part anyways.
I've just noticed you've used gridsnap. I'd recommend turning it off and resnapping everything to avoid weird looking spacing inconsistencies like 01:19:217 (1,2,3) - Fixed a couple of these.
01:20:296 (1,2,3,1,2) - What is that flow? And in a slow part of the song as well. I changed a few things around.
01:25:691 (1) - Note before spinner? same as easy.

I can't seem to find anything in any of the other diffs. Gl.

Thanks for the mods!

samplefish

1,198 posts

Joined November 2010

samplefish 2016-07-31T10:34:19+00:00

shan ran ran ran

Yohanes

1,283 posts

Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-07-31T16:32:21+00:00

Sorry for the late reply,
Everything is fixed from SnowNiNo_'s mod except for 01:23:965 (2) - because I believe it still fits well to pattern & music
I also made some adjustment here and there

Toki

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
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CircleSize:4.2
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Doyak

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-07-31T17:39:09+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
M4M from your queue

[Doyak's Insane]
00:06:370 (3,2,2,2) - imo NC on these would be nicer since they got a stronger sound then 00:06:584 (1,1,1) - , same here 00:02:941 - 00:09:799 - I forgot to change the hitsounds, but what I emphasize is different. I focused on the low 're' sound to discriminate a set of rhythms, so the NC pattern should follow that too. These jumps kinda emphasize those high pitched sounds before the jump too, yeah.
00:44:254 (6) - NC for emphasized the instrument fixed
00:46:413 (5,6) - try ctrl + g? flow is better this way I prefer the current flow
00:45:765 (3,1) - stack perfect lol Why this alwlays happen
00:47:708 (6) - 00:58:067 (6) - 01:01:521 (7) - same fixed
01:25:260 (3,4) - imo you should stack here either for consistent That's literally the last part of this, so that can be a bit different to emphasize.

Thanks for the mod~

Doyak's Insane

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Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-07-31T17:44:53+00:00

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DeRandom Otaku

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DeRandom Otaku 2016-08-02T09:24:17+00:00

Hello~ M4M from ur queue

General

Tags and countdown and blah blah conflicts with Yohane's Insane

Ultra Beginner

00:16:630 - from here u have NC'd every single note .... there are a few notes u could remove nc from such as 00:22:241 (1) - 00:52:024 (1) - 01:05:837 (1) - 01:18:138 (1) - ... Maybe? NC'ing every single note is not a good idea anyway i guess .-.

Beginner

00:28:284 (1,2) - DS should be 1x not 0.9x

Doyak's Insane

00:19:219 - 00:19:651 - these is kinda loud sounds so making them clickable would be cool i guess ... u could easily put 1/2 slider on the white ticks and it wont hurt at all , like its done in insane and light insane
00:24:831 - and here aswell
01:07:995 (1) - remove nc?
01:08:858 (5) - nc?
01:25:691 (1) - whistle

Thats all ~ nice song and set ~ gl gl

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Lanturn 2016-08-02T09:42:06+00:00

thank you :3

Will reply soon and get your mod done before.

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2016-08-02T09:43:11+00:00

NM from your queue (what do you mean that's not how it works???)

as someone who can't single tap above 170 bpm without being in pain, i love you

[General]

01:25:691 (1) - Maybe lower the sound of this spinner in all diffs? There's practically no sound when it ends.

That ultra beginner diff...lol

Check AI-mod and fix some tags inconsistencies in Yohanes' diff

[Beginner]

00:38:428 (1) - I actually suggest starting this on 00:38:212. Since this is a beginner, doing this would act like a buffer for the player to react to spinning for the intended sound of the "ruuu"

00:48:571 (1,2) - Hm...neaten these curves a bit? They look kinda messy to me.

[Easy]

Just as a general thing, I think the combos are too long. 7 and 8 length combos in an Easy feel out of place to me.

00:40:802 - A slider starting here that ends on 00:41:234 - would be kinda cool.

00:41:665 (1) - Center the bend for neatness?

Overall this is a fantastic Easy. The rhythm varies without being too complex, and it's a perfect blend of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythm. Good stuff!

[Normal]

00:25:263 (2) - Someone's probably pointed this out already, but distance here varies. I think jumps can be done well in Normal diffs but this one doesn't really feel needed to me. I think this pattern just works better if 00:24:831 (1,2,3) - is an equilateral triangle. You can do this and still maintain the symmetry.

00:44:254 (5) - I think this slider flows better, both into and out if it's angled slightly down instead of slightly up.

01:09:290 (1) - Everything after here is a bit intense compared to the rest of the diff, but I think it's probably fine. Fun section, too!

[Hard]

01:25:691 (1) - You could put a note here and start the spinner on the blue or white tick. I think this would feel better to play.

[Fuuko's Light Insane]

00:13:870 (5,6) - Considering these sounds are of equal intensity, it might be need to have the spacing to them be equal. I like the jump from 5 to 6, maybe have 4 to 5 have the same spacing?

00:16:656 (1) - Check the snapping of this note, it should be on the downbeat after the BPM change (at 00:16:630) but you put it on the red tick.

00:24:831 (8,1) - I think these should be closer together. It's not exactly obvious that this is the rhythm you're following (ending 8 on the blue tick) based on spacing, and I think for a light insane it should be a bit more clear.

01:00:441 (4) - move this so that it doesn't intersect with 01:01:521 (1,2,3) - (or move the triplet, whichever works)

01:25:691 (3) - hm...maybe NC for this consistency? As this entire section has combos of length 2, so making this it's own combo would be neat.

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:41:665 (3) - NC! the kiai starts here.

00:42:959 (1) - move the NC to 00:43:391 (2) -

00:44:902 (1) - move the NC to 00:45:118 (2) -

00:49:866 (1) - this NC feels unnecessary. Also, properly wrap the slider around 00:49:218 (2), right now it's uneven.

01:00:441 (4) - NC for consistency, you usually NC a slider if the downbeat is in the middle of it

01:03:679 (1) - again, feels like an unnecessary NC

The last part was super fun since single tapping 139ish bpm is orgasmic

[Insane]

00:22:241 (1) - Hm...really powerful vocal, I think you could emphasize this with a jump.

01:25:691 - ahhh you have to make the "kuuu" clickable, it would feel so much better. Like, a final jump to to it would be super satisfying.

139 single tapping \o/

Couldn't find anything for Doyak's diff.

Good luck!

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2016-08-02T11:51:28+00:00

oh wow, thanks Hobbes :3

Map should be pretty much ready for BNs after your mod. Gonna respond tomorrow as I'm a bit sleepy to do this tonight. thank you!

Yohanes

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Yohanes 2016-08-03T08:47:00+00:00

Everything about NC is fixed, Thank you Hobbes

wo

osu file format v14

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edit: Lanturn, pls fix the video for me thanks!

Last edited by Yohanes 2016-08-04T11:04:53+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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pkhg 2016-08-04T04:03:38+00:00

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Hobbes2 wrote:
[Fuuko's Light Insane]

00:13:870 (5,6) - Considering these sounds are of equal intensity, it might be need to have the spacing to them be equal. I like the jump from 5 to 6, maybe have 4 to 5 have the same spacing? different pitch

00:16:656 (1) - Check the snapping of this note, it should be on the downbeat after the BPM change (at 00:16:630) but you put it on the red tick. ok[/b]

00:24:831 (8,1) - I think these should be closer together. It's not exactly obvious that this is the rhythm you're following (ending 8 on the blue tick) based on spacing, and I think for a light insane it should be a bit more clear. its clear enough trust me

01:00:441 (4) - move this so that it doesn't intersect with 01:01:521 (1,2,3) - (or move the triplet, whichever works) it isnt visible while playing and i dont wanna increase the spacing

01:25:691 (3) - hm...maybe NC for this consistency? As this entire section has combos of length 2, so making this it's own combo would be neat. 1 note combos makes me cry more than this anime

Good luck!

update

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Lanturn

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3,912 posts

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-08-05T09:23:07+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
NM from your queue (what do you mean that's not how it works???)

as someone who can't single tap above 170 bpm without being in pain, i love you yay :3

[General]

01:25:691 (1) - Maybe lower the sound of this spinner in all diffs? There's practically no sound when it ends. Done.

That ultra beginner diff...lol

Check AI-mod and fix some tags inconsistencies in Yohanes' diff Blame Yohanes XD

[Beginner]

00:38:428 (1) - I actually suggest starting this on 00:38:212. Since this is a beginner, doing this would act like a buffer for the player to react to spinning for the intended sound of the "ruuu" Might as well yeah. Gives more time anyways.

00:48:571 (1,2) - Hm...neaten these curves a bit? They look kinda messy to me. Hard to tidy these up and keep the intended bounce so yikes.

[Easy]

Just as a general thing, I think the combos are too long. 7 and 8 length combos in an Easy feel out of place to me. It's hard to combo that spot, so just having them as a full combo works the best imo.

00:40:802 - A slider starting here that ends on 00:41:234 - would be kinda cool. ahh, no. That's leadin

00:41:665 (1) - Center the bend for neatness? done, and with it's symmetry friend as well.

Overall this is a fantastic Easy. The rhythm varies without being too complex, and it's a perfect blend of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythm. Good stuff!

[Normal]

00:25:263 (2) - Someone's probably pointed this out already, but distance here varies. I think jumps can be done well in Normal diffs but this one doesn't really feel needed to me. I think this pattern just works better if 00:24:831 (1,2,3) - is an equilateral triangle. You can do this and still maintain the symmetry. bleh, I don't need the symmetry. Fixed it though.

00:44:254 (5) - I think this slider flows better, both into and out if it's angled slightly down instead of slightly up. Did something with notes before it.

01:09:290 (1) - Everything after here is a bit intense compared to the rest of the diff, but I think it's probably fine. Fun section, too! yeah, it's more intense on every diff actually lol.

[Hard]

01:25:691 (1) - You could put a note here and start the spinner on the blue or white tick. I think this would feel better to play. No can do I want the vocals to start the spinner.

[Insane]

00:22:241 (1) - Hm...really powerful vocal, I think you could emphasize this with a jump. I agree, but then it ruins the consistency with 00:24:399 (6) - and 00:17:493 (3) - or whatever.

01:25:691 - ahhh you have to make the "kuuu" clickable, it would feel so much better. Like, a final jump to to it would be super satisfying. same as hard :3

139 single tapping \o/

Couldn't find anything for Doyak's diff.

Good luck!

thank you :3

Also used everything from DRO's mod. thanks.

Yohanes' and pkhg Updated.

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-08-06T20:40:52+00:00

hi hi~
Clannad! <3 T.T I'll look at everything~

Lanturn

Insane:

00:18:572 (9) - feels a little visually unbalanced. maybe move this to (335,255)
00:19:651 (3,4) - flow feels a little awkward since I don't think (4) deserves a flow break. Try stacking (4) on sliderhead of 00:19:219 (2) - instead? Compare to similar part at 00:25:263 (3,4) - where flow break occurs on (3), not (4)
00:25:694 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - it plays well, but I guess I'm not seeing the visual structure here. how about stacking 00:26:126 (5) - on tail of 00:24:831 (2) - and adjust 00:26:773 (8) - so spacing between 00:26:126 (5,6,8) - look visually similar?
00:28:284 (1,2,3) - uneven visual spacing triggered me so hard during playtest. move 00:28:716 (2) - to (364,219). Also copy/pasta to 00:30:874 (1,2,3) - as well
00:44:254 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.18x spacing and 00:47:708 (6,7,8,9,10) - uses 0.2x spacing. not sure if intentional, but I noticed it even in-game and would prefer if they were identical
01:12:527 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - just a personal preference, but the first musical phrase after the kiai section ends at 01:13:606 (1) - but the pattern you use here ends at 01:14:469 (5) - instead :/ Well, idk if you're up for rearranging the sequence of your jump patterns, but I would either start or end this specific pattern at 01:13:606 (1) - instead of your current way
01:20:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - not a fan of this specific pattern, looks like 2007 mapping style lol. how about something like this? http://puu.sh/qs2Jb/30fa2677cb.jpg
I kinda prefer how your GD-ers do the ending by adding a note/sliderend at 01:25:691 - to make it a more active sound and then start the spinner either on the following blue or red tick. Consider apply this to your other diffs as well

Hard:

00:35:838 (6,1,2,3,4) - the flow and visuals feel really forced here, since symmetry is not aligned and flow breaks aren't even. mmm, there's many possibilities for other patterns, but I'll just throw out one quick idea http://puu.sh/qs5bU/c172a9fb5f.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5qX/1c4bad9683.jpg http://puu.sh/qs5s9/9bd0748135.jpg
00:52:672 (3) - this would be even more awesome of it blanketed the other sliders http://puu.sh/qs61i/8cf690b06b.jpg Same thing at 00:56:772 (3) -
01:16:196 (3) - your monstrata triangle is a little off if that's what you're going for
01:17:275 (3,1) - with slider leniency, these play a lot closer than DS suggests, maybe move farther apart or different location?

Normal:

00:24:831 (1,2,3) - rotate this a little bit so 00:23:968 (5,1,3) - forms a straight line for more m a p _ s t r u c t u r e ?
00:26:558 (5) - I think musically, the vocals could be nicer represented by using same shape slider as 00:26:126 (4) -
01:18:138 (1) - nice slidertrain lol

Easy:

nice. your most polished diff of the set imo

Beginner:

why not 1.1 DS? all these slight overlaps could be avoided with just a slight increase in spacing
I do like the multi-repeat slider usage here

Ultra Beginner:

...well, it's fine according to your style, but I just can't fundamentally agree with this diff. The insanely slow SV and low density make this boring to play even for beginners at the lowest level. What level of players are you trying to cater to with this diff? The other issue that arises with this mapping style is that you lose all sense of map aesthetics because the notes are so far apart in time that you only ever see 1 note/slider, maybe 2 at a few points. Longer sliders with a lot of different sliderart would have been visually better for an ultra beginner diff. Mmm...idk, it just feels like this was mapped for memes and detracts from a really nice mapset. I hope my opinion doesn't offend you, but I wish you would reconsider including this in your mapset.

Doyak

00:40:802 (1) - just my preference, but you could try breaking this into two extended sliders at ~0.75 SV and mute the sliderends so both vocals are clickable? Current way feels a little lacking going into kiai section and I think it would be nice to do something more similar like 00:54:614 (5,6) -
reminds me of 2012 mapping style, really nice diff

Yohnnes

00:14:191 (1,1) - transition from spinner to slider felt really abrupt to me. While the spinner does follow that wind-up sound well, consider just removing it and using a break instead like other diffs. I think it fits more for a calm song like this
00:21:809 (5,2) - consider changing to stack leniency 5 so these stack perfectly
00:40:802 (1,2) - mute sliderends pls. also why is 00:40:802 (1,2) - a clean blanket and 00:41:234 (2,1) - has overlap? would prefer both to be blankets instead
00:49:218 (2,3,1,2) - I think aesthetics can be improved by making these all visually same spacing http://puu.sh/qs3tc/33f9080926.jpg
00:54:614 (4,5,6,7) - mmm, sounds similar to me. try using either both repeat sliders or both triplets for consistency?
01:09:290 (1) - all those hexagrid patterns lol
01:19:648 (2,1) - fail blanket?
01:20:727 (2,1) - I guess not, patterns start to look less structured here, not sure if intentional or what
01:23:965 (2,3,4,1) - ctrl+g this for rhythmic consistency. Don't break the pattern on the 2nd to last phrase x.x either do it more often or wait until the last phrase at 01:24:612 -

pkhg

why Fuuko lol. she's barely even mentioned in afterstory :/
00:08:299 (5,1) - idk, for people that don't use transparent skins this is kinda risky
00:25:263 (1) - whistle on sliderhead pls
00:37:349 (3) - probably just me, but 3/2 slider played strange. Could try to shorten this to the drum sound on the white tick or make it an extended slider and mute the sliderend?
01:22:454 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - could you change up the pattern here, gets pretty boring after awhile. Your previous patterns always changed after 4 NCs

Aside from my issue with the lowest diff, mapset is really good and I look forward to seeing this ranked! Good luck~

Lanturn

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Topic Starter

Lanturn 2016-08-07T02:07:05+00:00

thank you. I'll respond when I get a chance :3

Yohanes

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Joined February 2014

Yohanes 2016-08-07T06:15:50+00:00

MokouSmoke wrote:
hi hi~

Yohnnes
00:14:191 (1,1) - transition from spinner to slider felt really abrupt to me. While the spinner does follow that wind-up sound well, consider just removing it and using a break instead like other diffs. I think it fits more for a calm song like this Uh I personally would like to keep spinner here, and it's not absurd btw I use the start of a spinner in all of my maps lol
00:21:809 (5,2) - consider changing to stack leniency 5 so these stack perfectly Ok
00:40:802 (1,2) - mute sliderends pls. also why is 00:40:802 (1,2) - a clean blanket and 00:41:234 (2,1) - has overlap? would prefer both to be blankets instead Sliderend muted But I like my current looks better lol idk why
00:49:218 (2,3,1,2) - I think aesthetics can be improved by making these all visually same spacing http://puu.sh/qs3tc/33f9080926.jpg I like my looks better tbh
00:54:614 (4,5,6,7) - mmm, sounds similar to me. try using either both repeat sliders or both triplets for consistency? No, because I want more emphasis towards the next 1/1 slider, and by changing it into repeat slider would kinda kills of the emphasis
01:09:290 (1) - all those hexagrid patterns lol
01:19:648 (2,1) - fail blanket? not really, If I blanket it all the way, the slider head would be waay to near to the bottom of the playingfield
01:20:727 (2,1) - I guess not, patterns start to look less structured here, not sure if intentional or what Yeah, thats kinda intended
01:23:965 (2,3,4,1) - ctrl+g this for rhythmic consistency. Don't break the pattern on the 2nd to last phrase x.x either do it more often or wait until the last phrase at 01:24:612 - Woo, I like it! changed

Thank you MokouSmoke!

kizamu

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Doyak

osu! Alumni

2,621 posts

Joined November 2012

Doyak 2016-08-07T08:33:09+00:00

DeRandom Otaku wrote:
Doyak's Insane
00:19:219 - 00:19:651 - these is kinda loud sounds so making them clickable would be cool i guess ... u could easily put 1/2 slider on the white ticks and it wont hurt at all , like its done in insane and light insane There are only very tiny sounds on 1/2 ticks and I don't want to spam 1/2s on this quiet part.
00:24:831 - and here aswell same
01:07:995 (1) - remove nc? 01:07:564 (1,2) - and 01:07:995 (1,2) - have different kind of drums, and the latter one is stronger. That's also why the distance is different.
01:08:858 (5) - nc? On the other hand, these 8 are just same drums, so I think keeping the same color is better.
01:25:691 (1) - whistle okay

MokouSmoke wrote:
Doyak
00:40:802 (1) - just my preference, but you could try breaking this into two extended sliders at ~0.75 SV and mute the sliderends so both vocals are clickable? Current way feels a little lacking going into kiai section and I think it would be nice to do something more similar like 00:54:614 (5,6) - I was hating my pattern too, so fixed now!
reminds me of 2012 mapping style, really nice diff Thanks

Thanks for the mods~

Doyak's Insane

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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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Mazziv

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Mazziv 2016-08-09T16:19:49+00:00

hi from q xd

[Ultra Beginner]
this diff is just a meme please remove it if youre going for ranked

[Beginner]
same here,its unnecessary imo :/ might as welll remove it with the ultra meme beginner

[Easy]
00:38:644 - let the spinner start here?
00:54:614 (3,4,2) - aaaaaaaaaaa?

[Normal]
00:20:083 (3,4,5) - wh is this triangle
00:20:946 (5,6) - blanket pls
01:00:441 (4) - use this slider 00:59:578 (2) - here
01:07:132 (3,4) - blanket

[Hard]
00:41:665 (1,2,3) - why is 3 not the same as 1 and 2

[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:07:441 (2,4) - stack?
00:08:299 (5,1) - dunno if thats rankable
01:04:974 (7,1) - ^ also why do they have an anchor point in it?

[Yohanes' Insane]
00:04:227 (1) - remove nc
00:07:656 (1) - ^
some of your sliders have a red anchor point at the end why aslasdio

[Insane]
looks good to me

[Doyak's Insane]
remove the NC spam in the intro

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