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Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>

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Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Kroytz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 8, 2018 at 5:29:50 AM

Artist: Kaneko Chiharu
Title: Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
Source: SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags: SDVX Grace The 5th KAC Original Song Contest KONAMI BEMANI Battle Ametrin Fizz Ponoyoshi Alheak toybot Smoothie World
BPM: 236
Filesize: 10255kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alheak's INFINITE (6.41 stars, 663 notes)
  2. Ametrin's NOVICE (2.43 stars, 232 notes)
  3. Battle's BASIC (1.93 stars, 166 notes)
  4. EXHAUST (5.49 stars, 512 notes)
  5. Fizz's ADVANCED (3.56 stars, 355 notes)
  6. Pono's HYPER (4.55 stars, 452 notes)
  7. <REQUIEM> (8.04 stars, 1030 notes)
  8. Smoothie World's MAXIMUM (7.16 stars, 864 notes)
  9. toybot's GRAVITY (6.64 stars, 806 notes)
Download: Kaneko Chiharu - Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
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Last edited by Kroytz , edited 48 times in total.
Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Anxient
jsesu
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
2,248 posts
Joined March 2016
Izzywing
Those streams are so good.
Last edited by Izzywing , edited 2 times in total.
mithew
393 posts
Joined April 2013
mithew
helo i know i said there wasn't anything weird i noticed while playing but after playing it a few more times heres what i have to say!


00:10:339 (9,10) - so these feel kinda weird since the piano basically does the same thing here 00:11:101 (1,3) - yet its just one continuous stream instead of also kick sliders. either add kick sliders there too or remove the current ones. yay longer streams..!
00:21:270 (4,5,6,7,1) - no idea if its just me but these are hard to hit being this linear, making it a little more curvy would help!
00:22:287 (4,5,6,7,1) - unsnapped guitar idk if thats a fixable issue tho
00:52:541 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i guess there's very quiet drums in the background to call for the flow change here but it feels out of place still...
00:55:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - why is this the same spacing as the rest its so quiett D:
01:26:607 (1,2,3) - ok this is a strong moment but not THAT strong
01:29:403 (5,6,5,6) - these are.. very weird. i only noticed that they were mapped to the piano in the editor. feels like its mapped to nothing while im playing, since the spacing on the streams are reduced indicating that its mapped to the drums, not piano. i think it would be better as one whole stream instead of having the kick sliders there. removing just the first two would probably work best
01:34:996 (7) - i feel like the sliders starting here would work best since the piano/guitar starts the circle slider pattern ( 01:35:420 (2,3) - ) on (7)

ok good luck with map!!! i really love it :)
[Nemesis]
[Nemesis]
hi there, doing a M4M
Requiem

00:22:287 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't really like this. Doesn't fit with the song imo.
00:31:694 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - move the notes a bit closer please? it's really unpleasant to play.
01:02:202 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - SAME
01:51:585 - just a quick suggestion, I'd put a long slider here :3
01:54:954 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - holy that's uncomfortable af too ;_;

Overall, I gotta say, there is not much to fix there. Really well done, besides the spacing of those streams (huge pain in the ass, sorry)
Good luck with your map <3
Jonarwhal
1,216 posts
Joined November 2013
Jonarwhal
M4M with Hobbes2
[Requiem]
  1. 00:01:949 (2) - Lower this a bit. It overlaps some skinned hp bars, and comes very close to overlapping the default hp bar.
  2. 00:05:826 - Because the pitch lowers here, the rhythm can be this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:254 (3,1) - Fix blanket.
  4. 00:33:919 (1) - Fix stack.
  5. 00:43:007 (2,2) - Fix blanket.
  6. 01:28:132 (1) - This should blanket with (4) not (1).
Have some stars. Good Luck~!!
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak
wew
aesu
136 posts
Joined April 2013
aesu
Uh, MASTER isn't a difficulty name on SDVX, if this is the theme you guys wanted.

sik map tho
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2016
Izzywing
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle
diff progression still be fine imo
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 20254
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 45105,90653,95187,98238
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
TitleUnicode:Lachryma《Re:Queen'M》
Artist:Kaneko Chiharu
ArtistUnicode:かねこちはる
Creator:Kroytz
Version:BATTLE'S NOVICE
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:SDVX Grace The 5th KAC original song contest KONAMI BEMANI smoothie world toybot
BeatmapID:0
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.1
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7ambda
2,560 posts
Joined January 2015
7ambda
Oh shit, it's back.
Roxas
osu! Alumni
1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
First of all, amazing map.

Second, you might want to check the correct timing snap from 00:20:508 - to (mostly) 00:24:575 - , the guitar is not properly precise to the rhythm but it's a bit earlier for me.
Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Kroytz
Thank you Roxas~! :)

The timing is taken from Fresh Chicken's ranked version so I don't believe it can be wrong since he usually does these sort of SDVX maps quite often and well. Parts of instruments seem to linger a bit off throughout the song so if they occur, that can't be helped ^^;
Battle
2,862 posts
Joined February 2014
Battle


I'm so triggered
Kroytz
703 posts
Joined February 2013
Topic Starter
Kroytz
there's only so many difficulty names to use Battle... ;_;
Izzywing
osu! Alumni
2,248 posts
Joined March 2016
Izzywing
Modding this stuff is hard because i cant play it lul

[General]

unused hitsounds

normal-hitclap3.wav
soft-hitclap3.wav
soft-hitfinish2.wav
soft-hitwhistle2.wav

[Battle's BASIC]

00:03:728 (1,3) - blanket here would actually look pretty cool
00:05:254 (3) - looks like you had a decent curve here and then ctrl+g'd it or smth cos this looks pretty ugly. the slider right after looks fine.
00:07:542 (3) - starting here there's a lot of sliders in a row, and for the easiest diff its best to avoid long slider only sections. would either have a pause or a circle somewhere to make it easier
00:20:508 - two timing lines with inconsistent kiai settings
00:40:846 (3) - the wave portion of this slidershape can be improved, looks a bit messed up right after the second red node
00:54:321 (3) - mm this bpm is pretty fast so im not a big fan of 1/2 sliders for the easiest diff. for this part of the music you can do a red tick rhythm like this - http://imgur.com/a/wMD3m
01:09:319 (3) - combing should reset here since its beginning of a new phrase
01:32:200 (1,2) - this might cause some reading confusion, while the DS is proper, the circle is still kinda close to 01:32:200 (1) - itself, so a player might misinterpret this as 1/1

p gud n stuf

btw ill finish my hard for you soon lol

[Ametrin's NOVICE]

00:24:448 (5,1) - would not use 1/2 stacks in this map. Earlier you were using 1/1 stacks, using both in the same map in a pretty similar area of the map can be very confusing.
00:28:643 (1) - this combo has too much 1/2 in a row for a normal, would tone it down, you could change a 1/2 slider to a circle or find another away to make it less dense
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - way way wayyy too much 1/2 in a row for a normal. another problem here is that you only have a 1/1 gap after the spinner when for a normal it's required to have at least 2. And since the BPM is so high, you may even want more. I would scrap this pattern altogether to be honest.
00:40:974 (1,1) - again, you need at least 2 beats of recovery (possibly more) for a normal. same for 01:02:202 (1,1) and 01:50:505 (1,1) -
00:46:948 (4) - increased spacing intentional?
01:33:217 (3,4) - dont like this, the gap is 3/4 but its impossible for the player to read that from the current layout. at best the player might read this as a 1/1 gap and because of slider leneniency might not break combo, but i recommend making 01:33:217 (3) - a reverse
01:37:285 (1,2,3) - ^ maybe it would be better if these weren't overlapping.
01:45:929 (5,6,7) - similar to earlier, not advisable to use 1/2 stacks right after using 1/1 stacks
01:52:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again, way too much 1/2 in a row. simplify this.

[Fizz's ADVANCED]

00:20:508 - two timing lines with inconsistent kiai settings
00:24:194 (2) - eh...dont really like this tbh. I would prefer if 00:24:448 - was a clickable part of the rhythm since its an audible guitar beat. 00:24:194 - could be a 1/2 slider. similar thing for 01:23:683 (2) -
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - from the way this is mapped and from how the music is playing, 00:39:957 - should be clickable. you could either make 00:39:575 (5) - a reverse or use a circle somewhere in here. Very similar concern for 01:53:301 (3,1,2,3) -
00:54:321 (2) - why a random jump to this note? if anything the jump should be to 00:54:448 (3) - but you havent really done 1/2 jumps in this map so its better to keep the spacing consistent. similar concern with 00:56:355 (2), but i can understand the visual element for this one.
00:59:152 (1,2) - and 01:00:677 (1,2) using a 4peat slider and then a 5peat slider is kinda awkward to play, you could shorten the 5peat to a 4peat and then add a circle on 00:59:829 - instead
01:07:794 (1,2) - any reason not to just space this normally? feels out of place for this area
01:43:640 (1) - starting at 01:44:149 - the music switches to 1/3, so the kickslider extending past it is pretty much overmapping

Making hards for this kinda song is pretty tough but you did a really good job

[Poyoshi's HYPER]

00:18:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this isn't immediatly recognizable as a 1/3 stream, you could NC the white ticks (00:19:237 (4) - and 00:19:491 (7) - ) for readability help
00:32:711 (1,2,3) - maybe a bit minor, but keep the gaps between these objects the same (the distance between the straight parts)
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4) - improper rhythm 00:39:194 - needs to be clickable based on how the music is patterned here, similar to how you set it up in the following measure
00:56:863 (8,9,1) - this overlapping looks kinda out of place with the rest of the map's aesthetics
01:44:149 (5) - should be in 1/3

[Alhk's INFINITE]

00:25:592 (6) - NC
00:27:880 (2,3) - if you're gonna separate that sound into two objects, 00:27:880 - would fit better as a 1/4 slider imo. with a silenced tail at least.
01:02:265 (1,1) - its not objectively wrong to do this but this sound is so cool that spinners dont do it justice. player gets a lot of rest with the following 1/2 slider patterns anyway. same for 01:55:144 (1), the song's just asking for something awesome here!
01:19:489 (1) - NC not necessary

[toybot's GRAVITY]

00:05:254 (1,1) - 00:06:016 (1) - tail and 00:05:254 (1) - dont perfectly overlap, feels like that should be fixed for the benefit of the pattenr
00:09:576 (1) - NC not necessary?
00:17:330 - I can't hear a sound here, so I don't think a hitcircle is necessary here. 00:17:203 (3) - can be a slider
01:05:251 (1) - is this supposed to be noticeably out of position? looks like it's higher than it should be
01:10:591 (3) - think 2 circles would fit the music better (matches the melody like 01:12:116 (5,6) - )
01:44:827 (3,1,2) - ..idk about this lol, seems like its too hard to read. im bad so another opinion would probably help

[SW's MASTER]

00:01:313 (1,1) - vs 00:02:839 (1,2) - inconsistent NCing
00:17:711 (2) - vocal kinda has a held thing starting on 00:17:839 - so a better rhythm would probably be a ctrlg of 00:17:711 (2,3) -
00:22:287 (1,2,3,4,1) - idk if ppl at this diff level can just naturally read this as 1/3 but theres not really any way of distinguishing this from a 1/4 stream

I guess my biggest concern is that the 1/3 streams were just so similar to the 1/4 ones. i feel like because they're slower you can do more with them (like have more streamjumps, space out parts, etc)

[Kroytz]

00:15:423 (2,3) - better flow if you switch these two id say
00:51:779 (13) - dont really like how this is getting more emphasis than 00:52:033 (1) - based on stream shape. it is true that you're kinda stuck in this corner, and im no stream expert so idk how to fix this
01:38:047 (5) - NC for readability
01:54:954 (2) - kickslider instead? 01:55:017 - is an audible sound

this diff is nuts

ill mod exhaust after this is qualified
Fizz
275 posts
Joined September 2013
Fizz
nnnnn

Hobbes2 wrote:

[Fizz's ADVANCED]

00:20:508 - two timing lines with inconsistent kiai settings fixed
00:24:194 (2) - eh...dont really like this tbh. I would prefer if 00:24:448 - was a clickable part of the rhythm since its an audible guitar beat. 00:24:194 - could be a 1/2 slider. similar thing for 01:23:683 (2) - did somethin a lil' spicy here
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - from the way this is mapped and from how the music is playing, 00:39:957 - should be clickable. you could either make 00:39:575 (5) - a reverse or use a circle somewhere in here. Very similar concern for 01:53:301 (3,1,2,3) - hmm, i can see what you mean but have to disagree; i don't want to put a reverse bounce on a downbeat and the way the melody is broken up into objects is fine. (first part being 3|3|2 and second being 2|2|2|2)
00:54:321 (2) - why a random jump to this note? if anything the jump should be to 00:54:448 (3) - but you havent really done 1/2 jumps in this map so its better to keep the spacing consistent. similar concern with 00:56:355 (2), but i can understand the visual element for this one. actually this is how it was originally before i tried to bump up the SR, changed to this
00:59:152 (1,2) - and 01:00:677 (1,2) using a 4peat slider and then a 5peat slider is kinda awkward to play, you could shorten the 5peat to a 4peat and then add a circle on 00:59:829 - instead yah i like this, suits the vocals better too
01:07:794 (1,2) - any reason not to just space this normally? feels out of place for this area oops fixed
01:43:640 (1) - starting at 01:44:149 - the music switches to 1/3, so the kickslider extending past it is pretty much overmapping i did it to make it more streamlined but fixed

Making hards for this kinda song is pretty tough but you did a really good job many thanks sir =w=b

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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 20254
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 6779,14279
DistanceSpacing: 1.42
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Lachryma<Re:Queen'M>
TitleUnicode:Lachryma《Re:Queen'M》
Artist:Kaneko Chiharu
ArtistUnicode:かねこちはる
Creator:Kroytz
Version:Fizz's ADVANCED
Source:SOUND VOLTEX III GRAVITY WARS
Tags:SDVX Grace The 5th KAC Original Song Contest KONAMI BEMANI Battle Ametrin Fizz Ponoyoshi Alheak toybot Smoothie World
BeatmapID:1236683
BeatmapSetID:475629

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Roxas
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2011
Roxas

Kroytz wrote:

Thank you Roxas~! :)

The timing is taken from Fresh Chicken's ranked version so I don't believe it can be wrong since he usually does these sort of SDVX maps quite often and well. Parts of instruments seem to linger a bit off throughout the song so if they occur, that can't be helped ^^;
I actually didn't check the Fresh Chicken version cause I suck so hard at mania even if I'm good at SDVX lmao
I will take a look in these days and maybe mod the map but it's been so long since I modded a map

Good luck!

Edit: take some stars
PoNo
504 posts
Joined July 2014
PoNo

Hobbes2 wrote:

Modding this stuff is hard because i cant play it lul
[Poyoshi's HYPER]

00:18:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this isn't immediatly recognizable as a 1/3 stream, you could NC the white ticks (00:19:237 (4) - and 00:19:491 (7) - ) for readability help Fixed
00:32:711 (1,2,3) - maybe a bit minor, but keep the gaps between these objects the same (the distance between the straight parts) Fixed
00:38:813 (1,2,3,4) - improper rhythm 00:39:194 - needs to be clickable based on how the music is patterned here, similar to how you set it up in the following measure Mhmmm i'm not totally agreed with that, the rythm looks good to play and not hard to hit, also for the moment I will not change it, if too many ppl tell me to change i'll do it
00:56:863 (8,9,1) - this overlapping looks kinda out of place with the rest of the map's aesthetics Fixed
01:44:149 (5) - should be in 1/3 Oops mb
Alheak
910 posts
Joined November 2013
Alheak

Hobbes2 wrote:

Modding this stuff is hard because i cant play it lul

[Alhk's INFINITE]

00:25:592 (6) - NC yes
00:27:880 (2,3) - if you're gonna separate that sound into two objects, 00:27:880 - would fit better as a 1/4 slider imo. with a silenced tail at least. i like the idea, changed
01:02:265 (1,1) - its not objectively wrong to do this but this sound is so cool that spinners dont do it justice. player gets a lot of rest with the following 1/2 slider patterns anyway. same for 01:55:144 (1), the song's just asking for something awesome here! i guess so yes, changed
01:19:489 (1) - NC not necessary indeed
thank you!

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Anxient
1,568 posts
Joined June 2014
Anxient
panic button = hit

Requiem

00:00:678 (1,2) - i think the way (2) is positioned is kinda random? like idk why its facing backwards when facing forwards is a more smoother option. i think that doing this would benefit the map better http://puu.sh/uGVIR/37520eb92f.jpg

00:04:364 (3,1) - why dont you stack them like the others? if its for signalling the end of a section i dont think its necessary. plus the sudden jerk movement makes it kinda iffy to play which is unlike the section. if youre still want to keep the not-stacked pattern then at least position it so that it doesnt feel so awkward to play?

00:05:254 (1,2,1) - for the first slider, the choir ends 00:05:762 - yet the slider ends 00:05:889 - here. moreover, 00:05:953 (2) - is an overmap, but im sure you figured that out already. maybe try something like this? http://puu.sh/uGVZw/a70a09a2ad.jpg its not good, but it makes more sense than what you have currently.

00:09:576 (1,2,3,4) - i feel like this is kinda lackluster for a stream part with 2 distinct drum kicks. kicksliders might work? i mean, you kinda did it with 00:10:339 (9,10) - and they have less noticeable beats than the one i mentioned earlier.

00:17:584 (2,3,1) - might be just be me nitpicking tbh, but this 00:17:203 (3,1) - compared to 00:17:711 (1,2) - , the 1st pattern is alot more closer together right? well this isnt really an issue but id appreciate if you made the distance a bit wider so they dont look too close. an aesthetic thing really. 00:17:203 (3) - moving this to x365 y24 fixes the issue.

00:24:766 (1) - i think its a good idea to release the NC on this coz these 00:24:575 (1,1) - two go hand in hand. the same pattern, if i were to say it on my own words. http://puu.sh/uGWdY/2dca7a802c.jpg

00:25:529 (6,1,1,1) - the nod to consistency is a plus but the rhythm in here is different from the one in here 00:24:575 (1,2,1) - . maybe remap so that you can get these parts to be clickable? 00:25:592 - 00:25:719 - 00:25:846 - 00:25:974 - maybe a star pattern would work, or a repeat slider?

00:27:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - i think you should switch the direction of the stream. with the way 00:26:863 (2) - this slider is facing, itll play very awkwardly, same goes for trying to follow. what i came up with is a cheap fix but maybe you can do something like this to this part? its alot better than what we have currently. http://puu.sh/uGWsF/9a2c0d97f9.jpg, nerf'd AR version for better visibility http://puu.sh/uGWxi/e7749bcf4b.jpg

00:32:902 (1) - same as the mod above, NC?

00:33:919 (1) - ^ maybe i should stop mentioning these? xd

00:36:143 (5) - NC coz the guitar changed part.

00:38:304 (1,2) - i seriously think that ctrl g'ing this would make the part play more naturally.

00:50:317 (2) - dont ask me how i pinpointed this note, but i think the way it changes direction is kinda odd, i mean the song doesnt change that much so i dont think a direction shift that would break "flow" isnt the best line of action here. take this screenshot for reference, coordinates are: x441 y154.http://puu.sh/uGWKo/8e19a25eb3.jpg

00:56:482 (1) - here you could either place a flowbreak of this intensity, 00:55:719 (3,4,1) - (meaning pls nerf dis) or make the flowbreak in here 00:55:719 (3,4,1) - as intense as 00:56:228 (2,3,1) - . or reverse the intensity, making this 00:55:974 (1) - break more intense than 00:56:482 (1) - coz 00:55:974 (1) - is clearly more defined than 00:56:482 (1) - . did that make sense?

01:21:776 (4,5,6,7,1) - ok so heres a risk i would take. theres nothing wrong with this. but consider doing this, or something to thay effect. before you disregard this, pls try it out. maybe itll work better? idk man, it feels alot better to me: http://puu.sh/uGX3q/cb6efc8ebc.jpg

01:24:255 (1) - 01:25:272 (1) - didnt i tell myself that id stop linking this?

01:38:047 (5) - NC for notifier than this is a 1/2.

01:43:386 (5,6,1) - idk about this tbh. i think youre better off stacking 6 with 1.

01:52:920 (1,2) - ctrl+g, since it plays more smoothly.

Beverage's (Smoothie World's) MASTER

NC rules apply with the <REQUIEM> diff, so pls look at it as well.

00:01:313 (1) - now i know that you did this for like the entire section but i feel like placing this here is kinda weird, since its kinda hidden. consider stacking? or at least moving it to a place where it wouldnt be so hard to find.

00:07:288 (1,2,3) - mmm, as it is it looks like a deformed circle. try to make it more perfect? ;/ it worked well with this. 00:08:813 (1,2,3) -

00:19:745 (1) - if i were you id place this on a similar fashion as i did with the pattern. something like this? http://puu.sh/uGXyS/2a6cea0c6b.jpg

00:20:254 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:270 (1,2,3,4) - i think i would prefer them as curved streams because the song part isnt really rigid if that made sense, heres a few examples. http://puu.sh/uGXIs/42e2cd4dcf.jpg, http://puu.sh/uGXJd/c6d8ea80df.jpg. small changes, but i think it carries more life than what we have currently.

00:24:957 (1) - try ctrl g-ing this. i think itll give (1) more impact and help relieve that unecessarily huge DS 00:25:211 (2) -

00:27:626 (9) - not gonna NC this?

00:30:423 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think you could make this stream more neater.

00:34:745 (1,1,1,1) - this is kinda out of place and plays weird as well. id appreciate an explanation as to why this is the way it is lmao. but i still strongly urge you to remap this into something that blends in with the map better.

00:36:651 (7,1) - ouch.

00:44:406 (1,1,1,1) - NC spam? why tho? i think regular combos give it better continuity? i dont think im using the term correctly.

00:47:965 (1) -i suggest a rhythm change. try working with this rhythm http://puu.sh/uGY59/47ac02742b.jpg, i think itll play better and give more life rather than having 2 big 1/4 sliders. also gives me a reason to get rid of this 00:48:919 (3) -

01:02:202 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - compared to 00:59:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i find it weird that the contrast in movement speed of the cursor is so wide lol. like, with the streams its super chill and builduppy, but with the 1/4, suddenly you have to move the cursor at really hihg speeds just to keep up. i think this is an issue. try to find a way to make the part more chill? ofc, what we currently have is fine, its just that its so sudden ya'know?

01:31:183 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - now the movement is too low! compared to the part, this is really slow! http://puu.sh/uGYn5/b194ef97d4.jpg try doing this instead, it fits the mood better. ctrl g ever slider.

01:53:682 (1,2,3) - i think you should at least have this move xd

toybot's GRAVITY

00:02:966 (1,2,3) - wh-why? just have them follow the order that they are positioned in? http://puu.sh/uGYxN/683f662e8d.jpg

00:04:745 (2) - might just be a pet peeve but in accordance to what i said earlier, ctrl g this so we have consistency with this part.

00:08:050 (9) - not gonna NC this?

00:12:627 (9) - and this?

00:25:338 (2,3) - ctrl g this? so that 00:25:592 (1) - gets more impact.

00:48:474 (1,2,1,2) - try ctrl g'ing this part as such http://puu.sh/uGYNI/8653160008.jpg reasoning: 00:48:474 (1,2) - lack of emphasis = same direction. 00:48:728 (1,2) - both have kicks = alternating directions.

01:04:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - j-just make this a perfect circle? it looks like a callback from the usatei map that i can never pass :c

01:11:353 (3) - either blanket this with 01:11:226 (2) - or change it so it doesnt look like a blanket.

01:12:116 (5) - NC?

01:44:742 (2,3,1,2,3) - i think its just me but i think you made the curve too early. i think it would be better if you made the curve start from 01:45:166 - instead of 01:44:912 -

01:55:081 - kreygasm.jpg

ALHK's INFNITE (Alheak?)

oh boi cs 3.

00:01:440 (4,4,4) - NC, coz new section?

00:18:983 - i think you should start building up speed from here, coz from 00:20:000 - slow to 00:20:508 - really fast, its really overwhelming. buff the SV, spacing, anything thatll force the player to move faster is a fix.

00:25:592 (6) - forgot to NC?

00:27:880 (2,3) - j-just make one big slider? just make it one big slider, no need with the extra hitcircle

00:34:363 (4) - NC coz new pattern

00:40:846 (1) - i think itll play better if you move it here: x512 y384. the linear movement will make this more defined imo.

01:01:694 (4,7) - NC this maybe? coz stream patterns are a thing ;p makes things neater as well.

01:04:172 - i think you meant to silence this.

01:11:607 (4) - NC dis coz new section.

01:19:235 (1) - with the way the sliders are playing, i really think that its better if you placed this somewhere below. have a bad graph to justify: http://puu.sh/uGZCw/f4036f0732.jpg

01:19:785 (2) - ctrl g this. why is it even like this tho?

01:30:674 (4) - NC coz new pattern.

01:33:598 (3) - ^

EXHAUST

00:01:441 (3,3,3) - NC fam.

00:12:627 (3,4) - NC this, and then ctrl g. itll properly signal the tone shift. http://puu.sh/uH03L/132ced8e83.jpg

00:15:169 (4,4,4) - NC coz the choir changes "lyrics".

00:24:766 (2) - methinks ctrl g works better here. i dont think you need THIS much impact. also keeps movement speed somewhat consistent with 00:25:592 (1,2,3) - .

00:33:346 (4,4) - no NC?

00:52:541 (9) - NC coz new section + pattern

00:52:541 (1,2,3,4) - tbh id suggest this only coz its weird how the kicksliders are facing upwards but youre moving downwards. just feels really weird to me. try to fix?http://puu.sh/uH0eR/d501c814f3.jpg

00:54:830 (4) - 00:56:863 (4) - not gonna NC coz new section?

01:02:202 - 01:06:142 - nice speed buildup.

01:18:218 (1) - ctrl g this and NC 01:18:472 (2) - , coz i feel like 01:18:472 (2,3,4) - is its own pattern. plus ctrl g'ing this 01:18:218 (1) - would make the transition alot more smoother. http://puu.sh/uH0nV/a842b98aa9.jpg

01:34:488 (2) - not gonna NC? it IS a new section.

01:38:047 (5) - same as top diff, NC this so we have a identifier that this is a 1/2.

Poyoshi's HYPER

00:11:355 (4) - forgot to NC?

00:38:813 (1,2,3,4) - for this section, id appreciate it if you remapped this so that 00:38:813 - 00:39:194 - is clickable. it IS part of the main melody after all.

00:53:940 (5) - NC coz new section.

00:54:830 (4) - i suggest a NC. 00:55:338 (1) - this too. the final timeline should look like this http://puu.sh/uH0KY/22d4af41ac.jpg

00:55:974 (4) - same. NC.

00:58:007 (5) - a-and this.

01:15:421 (1,2) - remove overlap or make it overlap more? http://puu.sh/uH0P3/a1092746ba.jpg

01:37:285 (1,2,3) - i think 2 repeat 1/3's + 1 circle is better. consider this? http://puu.sh/uH0Wk/d7c4312d17.jpg

01:50:378 - theres a note here, wanna make use of it?

01:52:920 (3) - whoops no NC?

first big mod after absolute soul orz

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Kroytz
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Kroytz
I didn't even get a chance to update their diffs ;_;
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