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DM DOKURO - COMMON CORE

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emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
no change, cuz i see no point and there have been repeats in the diff itself
Nelka714
412 posts
Joined October 2014
Nelka714
mod4mod from your queue

SPOILER
[General]
so much UNDERTALE but next to none Cave Story i cri
  1. I see that there are 2 timing points, and one of them is at 00:42:914 , but I didn't see the needs of it (no BPM change and no metronome change). Maybe you can explain it, or delete it instead?
[CORE]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you NC on slider 3 (which is downbeat) then un-NC circle 1 (which is not downbeat).
  2. 00:36:597 (4) - I think the rhythm would be better if like this: http://puu.sh/oKolb/56fae4bc9a.jpg
  3. 01:10:071 (3,1) - The blanket looks imperfect, for me. Try to improve it.
  4. 01:20:177 (3,4) - Make slider 3 curves like this? http://puu.sh/oKoPs/f52a9963df.jpg I know that you're trying to keep the 0,7x DS, but the curve on slider 4 gives a potential to blanket slider 3.
  5. 01:41:019 (1) - If this was my diff, I would use this pattern to vary normal diff that has spinner: http://puu.sh/oKpB8/f7f9622473.jpg but it just my preference, though.
  6. 01:48:598 (1,2) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement, except if slider 2 was actually to looks like 01:50:492 (3).
[STANDARD]
  1. 00:01:229 (1,2) - CTRL+J slider 1?
  2. 00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC slider 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
  3. 00:52:703 (1,2) - Same as above.
  4. 01:10:071 (3,1) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement. and teach me how to sliderart pls
[estellia-'s BEGINNER]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC circle 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
  2. 00:32:492 (1,2) - Same reason as above.
  3. 00:42:281 (1) - un-NC?
  4. 00:51:756 (3) - I'm not sure if 1/3 beat slider is okay for easy diff. Just my preference, though.
  5. 00:52:703 (1,2) - NC suggestion...I think you can guess which one and why.
  6. 00:56:808 (3) - 2/1 beat feels better, in my opinion. http://puu.sh/oKwJM/6931cb1d9a.jpg
  7. 01:38:335 (1) - The spinner is 1/2 beat too early. Forward it 1/2 a beat, then shorten it 1/2 a beat.

i hope this helps
PlasticMemor
204 posts
Joined June 2015
PlasticMemor
hey from modding queue

[CORE]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2) - this should be 1 slider
  2. 00:08:807 (1) - this shouldn't be off the grid
  3. 00:24:281 (4) - this should be going up not down
  4. 00:26:492 (4) - this should be shortened to 5 ticks and a circle added
  5. 00:27:281 (5) - move this to the left 1 tick
  6. 00:36:597 (4) - this should be 5 ticks and a circle added on the next red tick like this
  7. 00:39:439 (5,6) - these should be claps
  8. 00:42:597 (6,7,8) - instead of triples do what you previously did with 00:42:281 (5)
  9. 00:43:387 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be
  10. 00:44:335 (6) - ^
  11. 00:45:914 (2) - ^
  12. 00:46:861 (5) - ^
  13. 00:51:756 (1,2) - shorten these to 5 ticks and add a circle where the slider end used to be
  14. 00:53:492 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be
  15. 00:54:440 (6) - ^
  16. 00:56:019 (2) - ^
  17. 00:56:966 (4) - ^
  18. 01:02:966 (5) - you don't need this circle, delete it
  19. 01:12:598 (3) - shouldn't be off map

that's my mod, gl with your beatmap!
Yoshimaro
539 posts
Joined January 2014
Yoshimaro
M4M
before i begin, this song is FUJKGCVING FIYREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Bestellia's welcome to top 50
00:07:544 (4,1) - blanket
00:15:123 (2,1) - close enough C:
00:47:966 (1) - ooh that was nice
00:51:756 (3) - is that actually 1/3? sound better on 1/4 but idk i've also listened to this song way less than you so ill trust your judgement (just pointing it out
00:56:177 (2,3) - maybe angle slightly better to comfort slider end? (was this a blanket?)
01:03:124 (1,2) - close enough C:
01:47:966 (2,1) - omggg yesssssssssssssss

probably best easy diff i've ever looked at

sTAndrARD
00:22:702 (1,3) - close enough C:
00:34:071 (3,4) - close enough C:
00:36:597 (3,4) - close enough C:
00:41:650 (3) - this goes pretty low, no?
01:18:282 (1,2) - niceeeeeeeeeeee
01:55:861 (4,1) - close enough C:

no mod for CORE because I couldn't find any issues (other than you had 1 tripple in the entire map, the rest were repeat sliders (possibru inconsistency? idk just listing it here))

also would it be okay if i took this maps template and made like... a 7* challenge map and give credits? GL btw i saw nothing wrong with any of these aside from slightly off blankets (is that even worth kds lol). best lower level difficulty maps i've looked at (although i dont look at many, these were pretty ;) )

o sry i forgot... enjoy meme C:
Complimentary meme that comes with all of my mods
Click the...
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia

Nelka714 wrote:

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC circle 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff.
  2. 00:32:492 (1,2) - Same reason as above.
  3. 00:42:281 (1) - un-NC?
  4. 00:51:756 (3) - I'm not sure if 1/3 beat slider is okay for easy diff. Just my preference, though. Its not exactly preference to me, I just hear it on 1/3 and I prefer it being mapped that way. This might change if BN/QATs mention it
  5. 00:52:703 (1,2) - NC suggestion...I think you can guess which one and why.
  6. 00:56:808 (3) - 2/1 beat feels better, in my opinion. http://puu.sh/oKwJM/6931cb1d9a.jpg All previous bars have similar rhythm to this, no change
  7. 01:38:335 (1) - The spinner is 1/2 beat too early. Forward it 1/2 a beat, then shorten it 1/2 a beat. There is no sound to the beginning of a spinner, there is no point changing this imo
No changes on NCing, because the sliders all cut into the next bar and I feel like its better this way

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

[Bestellia's welcome to top 50]

00:07:544 (4,1) - blanket
00:15:123 (2,1) - close enough C:
00:47:966 (1) - ooh that was nice Thank you :D
00:51:756 (3) - is that actually 1/3? sound better on 1/4 but idk i've also listened to this song way less than you so ill trust your judgement (just pointing it out Pretty sure this is a 1/3, but I'll wait for more opinions
00:56:177 (2,3) - maybe angle slightly better to comfort slider end? (was this a blanket?) Not a blanket, and not quite sure what you mean (sorry)
01:03:124 (1,2) - close enough C:
01:47:966 (2,1) - omggg yesssssssssssssss

probably best easy diff i've ever looked at Thanks for the well wishes and the compliment :D

All blankets fixed
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osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DM DOKURO - UNDERTALE- The Underground Radio - 12 COMMON CORE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11347,42925,93441
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:estellia-'s BEGINNER
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium estellia-
BeatmapID:968418
BeatmapSetID:433843

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"COREENTRANCE.png",0,0
//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Xinying
559 posts
Joined July 2013
Xinying
Hi , came from Del's Queue

estellia-'s BEGINNER

  1. 00:15:123 (2,2) - Small one but not stacked properly.
  2. 00:42:281 (1) - Remove NC , nothing significant to set a new combo here.
  3. 00:51:756 (3) - Just stick to 1/4 snapping here. It's easy after all and there's a consistent 1/4 beat to follow.

STANDARD

  1. 00:41:650 (3) - I feel that curving this more would look more appealing. Right now it is nothing better than a linear slider.

CORE

  1. Overall my impression of this map is the spacing you use is arbitrary.
  2. 01:03:124 (1) - From here it feels really weird to read it as compared to 00:42:914 (1) . I know it's insane style map but this kind of spacing usage makes it really awkward to play imo.
  3. 01:02:887 (5,7) - Two beats here which is really significant and feels really weird to not map to it.
  4. 01:41:019 (1) - Why spinner? Breaks the momentum imo.
  5. 01:43:229 (1) - This is snapped wrongly. It should be snapped to 1/6.
  6. Your rhythm style in this diff feels like a normal difficulty to me...

Overall

  1. Nothing much I would say. Rhythm wise and pattern could be further improved , that's all. :D
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia

Chocox wrote:

estellia-'s BEGINNER

  1. 00:15:123 (2,2) - Small one but not stacked properly. impossible to stack properly
  2. 00:42:281 (1) - Remove NC , nothing significant to set a new combo here. intensity of the drums
  3. 00:51:756 (3) - Just stick to 1/4 snapping here. It's easy after all and there's a consistent 1/4 beat to follow. am following strongest track, not derailing for now
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Nelka714 wrote:

mod4mod from your queue

[General]
so much UNDERTALE but next to none Cave Story i cri
  1. I see that there are 2 timing points, and one of them is at 00:42:914 , but I didn't see the needs of it (no BPM change and no metronome change). Maybe you can explain it, or delete it instead? kk fixed
[CORE]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you NC on slider 3 (which is downbeat) then un-NC circle 1 (which is not downbeat). weird, no fix
  2. 00:36:597 (4) - I think the rhythm would be better if like this: http://puu.sh/oKolb/56fae4bc9a.jpg fixed
  3. 01:10:071 (3,1) - The blanket looks imperfect, for me. Try to improve it. fixed
  4. 01:20:177 (3,4) - Make slider 3 curves like this? http://puu.sh/oKoPs/f52a9963df.jpg I know that you're trying to keep the 0,7x DS, but the curve on slider 4 gives a potential to blanket slider 3. cool, fixed
  5. 01:41:019 (1) - If this was my diff, I would use this pattern to vary normal diff that has spinner: http://puu.sh/oKpB8/f7f9622473.jpg but it just my preference, though. no fix cause spinning is fun lol
  6. 01:48:598 (1,2) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement, except if slider 2 was actually to looks like 01:50:492 (3). fixed
[STANDARD]
  1. 00:01:229 (1,2) - CTRL+J slider 1? fixed
  2. 00:05:965 (1,2) - un-NC slider 1, then NC slider 2. Refer my reason on CORE diff. same as before no fix
  3. 00:52:703 (1,2) - Same as above. ^
  4. 01:10:071 (3,1) - Needs a bit more blanket improvement. fixedand teach me how to sliderart pls
i hope this helps
how to slider art
1. magic
2. magic
3. magic

thanks for modding! :)

PlasticMemor wrote:

hey from modding queue

[CORE]
  1. 00:05:965 (1,2) - this should be 1 slider players can handle this
  2. 00:08:807 (1) - this shouldn't be off the grid fixed
  3. 00:24:281 (4) - this should be going up not down try to make 00:24:281 (4,5) - become an angle together, no fix
  4. 00:26:492 (4) - this should be shortened to 5 ticks and a circle added fixed in another way
  5. 00:27:281 (5) - move this to the left 1 tick why? no beat here, no fix
  6. 00:36:597 (4) - this should be 5 ticks and a circle added on the next red tick like this i did it already
  7. 00:39:439 (5,6) - these should be claps fixed
  8. 00:42:597 (6,7,8) - instead of triples do what you previously did with 00:42:281 (5) fixed
  9. 00:43:387 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be I want to follow the main beat
  10. 00:44:335 (6) - ^ ^
  11. 00:45:914 (2) - ^ ^
  12. 00:46:861 (5) - ^ ^
  13. 00:51:756 (1,2) - shorten these to 5 ticks and add a circle where the slider end used to be ^
  14. 00:53:492 (3) - shorten this to 3 ticks and add 1 circle on where the slider end used to be ^
  15. 00:54:440 (6) - ^ ^
  16. 00:56:019 (2) - ^ ^
  17. 00:56:966 (4) - ^ ^
  18. 01:02:966 (5) - you don't need this circle, delete it beat is in here
  19. 01:12:598 (3) - shouldn't be off map I tested it, nothing here.

that's my mod, gl with your beatmap!
thanks for modding!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

- Yoshimaro - wrote:

M4M
before i begin, this song is FUJKGCVING FIYREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE OMG BRARARAAAURHAPOIRUORUAUYO*$&^()$*@^$^$&*

sTAndrARD
00:22:702 (1,3) - close enough C:
00:34:071 (3,4) - close enough C: doesn't matter lol
00:36:597 (3,4) - close enough C: ^
00:41:650 (3) - this goes pretty low, no? wow you've notice it lol sanic
01:18:282 (1,2) - niceeeeeeeeeeee oh thanks
01:55:861 (4,1) - close enough C: doesn't matter lol

no mod for CORE because I couldn't find any issues (other than you had 1 tripple in the entire map, the rest were repeat sliders (possibru inconsistency? idk just listing it here))

also would it be okay if i took this maps template and made like... a 7* challenge map and give credits? GL btw i saw nothing wrong with any of these aside from slightly off blankets (is that even worth kds lol). best lower level difficulty maps i've looked at (although i dont look at many, these were pretty ;) ) ok sure i wanna see how can this become a 7* map lol

o sry i forgot... enjoy meme C:
Complimentary meme that comes with all of my mods
Click the...
thanks for modding :)

Chocox wrote:

Hi , came from Del's Queue Hi

STANDARD

  1. 00:41:650 (3) - I feel that curving this more would look more appealing. Right now it is nothing better than a linear slider. changed

CORE

  1. Overall my impression of this map is the spacing you use is arbitrary.
  2. 01:03:124 (1) - From here it feels really weird to read it as compared to 00:42:914 (1) . I know it's insane style map but this kind of spacing usage makes it really awkward to play imo. hmm sorry lol
  3. 01:02:887 (5,7) - Two beats here which is really significant and feels really weird to not map to it. ?
  4. 01:41:019 (1) - Why spinner? Breaks the momentum imo. spin spin spin is fun lol
  5. 01:43:229 (1) - This is snapped wrongly. It should be snapped to 1/6. fixed
  6. Your rhythm style in this diff feels like a normal difficulty to me...

Overall

  1. Nothing much I would say. Rhythm wise and pattern could be further improved , that's all. :D
thanks for modding :)
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CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite
wow gg that's a lot of work lol
[Crz]Makii
450 posts
Joined November 2014
[Crz]Makii
NM from my queue
[CORE]
  1. hp5 is better,4 7 6 6 is so rare in beatmaps ;w;
  2. 01:02:650 (4) - should continue curving until 01:03:045 - ,listen carefully.
  3. well,I'm not good at modding hard diff with ds,so maybe it isn't helpful ;w;
NO KDS if it isn't helpful xD
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

[Crz]Sword wrote:

NM from my queue
[CORE]
  1. hp5 is better,4 7 6 6 is so rare in beatmaps ;w; no fix cause this is fine
  2. 01:02:650 (4) - should continue curving until 01:03:045 - ,listen carefully. weird, hard to hear the beat. no fix
  3. well,I'm not good at modding hard diff with ds,so maybe it isn't helpful ;w; kk not helpful lol
NO KDS if it isn't helpful xD
kk no kds sry
thanks for modding looking! lol
Hokichi
825 posts
Joined June 2015
Hokichi
Okay. M4M from your queue. Let's begin.

[estellia-'s Beginner]
00:05:966 (1,2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5133750
00:32:493 (1) - Same
01:00:598 (1) - Move to (328,196) to avoid flow break.

[CORE]
00:30:281 (1,2) - Flow break.
00:37:388 (6,1) - Same

There we go, I've tried my best tho. Goood luck.
(Don't ask why I don't mod STANDARD. It's nice already. Love it :) )
Pentori
1,157 posts
Joined November 2015
Pentori
heeyaa. nm from my queue

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]
change to hp 2 for better spread. (2, 4, 6)
00:07:545 (4,1) - hitsound sampleset changes randomly
00:51:756 (3) - not snapped

[STANDARD]
did you change offset without snapping notes xd

fix dat
00:42:914 (1,2) - here i assume you're following the techno but then this 00:44:177 (3,4) - follows the beat. this kinda gives off the impression that beats are missed so you should stick to one or the other when you choose a rhythm
01:14:492 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm the 01:14:808 - should be clickable as it belongs to a different tune
01:43:230 - beginner used this beat yet standard doesn't. should add note here thats muted
01:51:124 (1,2) - fix blanket

[CORE]
resnap all notes pls
01:38:492 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider placing 01:40:071 (3,4) - in the same spot as where 01:39:124 (4,5) - are in the measure. this helps with consistency and since note density suddenly rises it makes it more straight forward for the player to play the same rhythm



cool map, really neat and polished with some cute slider art c:
gl with rank, hope this helped
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Hokichi wrote:

Okay. M4M from your queue. Let's begin. Hi

[CORE]
00:30:281 (1,2) - Flow break. fixed
00:37:388 (6,1) - Same why here I break the flow?

There we go, I've tried my best tho. Goood luck.
(Don't ask why I don't mod STANDARD. It's nice already. Love it :) ) thank you :)
thanks for modding :)

Pentori wrote:

heeyaa. nm from my queue

[STANDARD]
did you change offset without snapping notes xd oh lol havn't notice that, fixed (really lol)

fix dat
00:42:914 (1,2) - here i assume you're following the techno but then this 00:44:177 (3,4) - follows the beat. this kinda gives off the impression that beats are missed so you should stick to one or the other when you choose a rhythm ok fixed
01:14:492 (2,3) - ctrl g rhythm the 01:14:808 - should be clickable as it belongs to a different tune idk it's feel weird
01:43:230 - beginner used this beat yet standard doesn't. should add note here thats muted fixed
01:51:124 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed

[CORE]
resnap all notes pls fixed
01:38:492 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - consider placing 01:40:071 (3,4) - in the same spot as where 01:39:124 (4,5) - are in the measure. this helps with consistency and since note density suddenly rises it makes it more straight forward for the player to play the same rhythm fixed



cool map, really neat and polished with some cute slider art c:
gl with rank, hope this helped
thanks for modding :)
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emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia
didn't change the "not snapped" note because its snapped to 1/3, and i only hear the music happening on 1/3, rest changed
didn't change anything from Hokichi's mod, because 1st 2 are too hard for Easy diff and 3rd is not DS'd properly

diff
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DM DOKURO - UNDERTALE- The Underground Radio - 12 COMMON CORE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 22700
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11347,42925,93441
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:COMMON CORE
TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
Version:estellia-'s BEGINNER
Source:UNDERTALE
Tags:The Underground Radio toby fox hotland soul mettaton remix another medium estellia-
BeatmapID:968418
BeatmapSetID:433843

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2.7
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"COREENTRANCE.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,83535,92000
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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102281,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0
103545,-100,4,1,1,60,0,1
123756,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


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Adventure
411 posts
Joined February 2015
Adventure
hello i from NM queue

honestly I like the song, but could make that more difficult, I take the example 00:13:072 (4) - This seems unreasonable, you try to set it again 00:15:124 (3) -
This is also the same like before. This might just
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

  1. 00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here?
  2. 01:23:335 - Missing Finish.
[STANDARD]

  1. Resnap your stuff pls.
  2. 00:55:229 (6,1) - 00:57:756 (5,1) - Recheck your DS pls.
  3. 00:05:018 (3,1) - Could have used the same rhythm from 00:02:492 (3,4) and then add a circle on 00:06:124 so you won't miss the beat on 00:05:335 .
  4. 00:10:071 (3,4) - Similar to above but doesn't need to add a circle on 00:11:177 .
  5. 00:50:492 (3) - NC cuz you did so on every 2 downbeats.
  6. 00:52:703 (1,2) - Swap NC because the same reason as above.
  7. 01:14:808 - Should be clickable because it's the same sound as 01:15:124 (3,4) . Or you could try making a 1/1 repeat slider starting from 01:14:808 as well. Same applies to 01:54:914 (2,3,4) .
  8. You shouldn't do stack with different spacings in this diff, you did 1/1 stacks on 00:45:124 (4,1) - 01:43:230 (1,1) and then a 1/2 stack on 01:01:861 (1,2) which can be confusing for players, if you're doing a stack then do it with only 1 beat spacing only throughout the song considering that this is supposed to be a Normal.
[CORE]

  1. 00:05:966 (1,2,3) - Prefer 0.7 DS here so they will become more noticable for players that these are 1/2 not 1/1 circles.
  2. 00:37:072 (5,6) - Spacing too big which is kinda uncomfortable in gameplay imo, just use 0.9 DS here like what you did on 00:26:966 (5,6) - 00:31:545 (3,4) .
  3. 00:41:966 (4,6) - Stacking this makes this really hard to play, at least either unstack this or make 00:42:282 (5,6) triplets. The problem I'm having right now is I don't know how long I have to hold on 00:42:282 (5) as it's really hard to see an approach circle on 00:42:598 (6) .
  4. 00:56:808 - Should be clickable imo, also because it's a downbeat.
  5. 01:22:072 (1) - Missing Finish.
  6. 01:40:703 (5,6) - Right now that 1.35 DS is somehow noticable in gameplay so maybe adjust this a bit for 1.4 DS.
  7. 01:58:703 (4) - NC
This mapset is really neat, good luck~
Left
2,156 posts
Joined October 2014
Left
M4M from your queue.

[estellia-]
00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket
00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different?
01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before )

[STANDARD]
your standard diff is still unsnapped X(
01:10:703 (1,2) - blanket
01:43:230 (1,1) - no stack would be better to read.. It's a diff for noob

[CORE]
00:16:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's highest diff.. you can make more harder pattern using sliders. It would be really boring.
00:30:282 (1,2) - blanket
00:51:756 (1) - you missed one sound..
01:05:651 (1) - 01:03:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - you followed different sound in these two part with almost same sound..It feels a bit strange so you need some consistence...It's hardest diff so prior would be more suitable.
01:20:808 (4) - NC
01:38:019 (5,1,2) - 1/1 < 1/2 in distance??? It would be not comfortable to read.
01:46:072 (1) - ^
01:58:703 (4) - NC

Good luck!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[STANDARD]

  1. Resnap your stuff pls. kk fixed lol
  2. 00:55:229 (6,1) - 00:57:756 (5,1) - Recheck your DS pls. fixed
  3. 00:05:018 (3,1) - Could have used the same rhythm from 00:02:492 (3,4) and then add a circle on 00:06:124 so you won't miss the beat on 00:05:335 . fixed
  4. 00:10:071 (3,4) - Similar to above but doesn't need to add a circle on 00:11:177 . fixed
  5. 00:50:492 (3) - NC cuz you did so on every 2 downbeats. fixed
  6. 00:52:703 (1,2) - Swap NC because the same reason as above. fixed
  7. 01:14:808 - Should be clickable because it's the same sound as 01:15:124 (3,4) . Or you could try making a 1/1 repeat slider starting from 01:14:808 as well. Same applies to 01:54:914 (2,3,4) . hmm for the newbies , no fix ;)
  8. You shouldn't do stack with different spacings in this diff, you did 1/1 stacks on 00:45:124 (4,1) - 01:43:230 (1,1) and then a 1/2 stack on 01:01:861 (1,2) which can be confusing for players, if you're doing a stack then do it with only 1 beat spacing only throughout the song considering that this is supposed to be a Normal. fixed
[CORE]

  1. 00:05:966 (1,2,3) - Prefer 0.7 DS here so they will become more noticable for players that these are 1/2 not 1/1 circles. fixed
  2. 00:37:072 (5,6) - Spacing too big which is kinda uncomfortable in gameplay imo, just use 0.9 DS here like what you did on 00:26:966 (5,6) - 00:31:545 (3,4) . fixed
  3. 00:41:966 (4,6) - Stacking this makes this really hard to play, at least either unstack this or make 00:42:282 (5,6) triplets. The problem I'm having right now is I don't know how long I have to hold on 00:42:282 (5) as it's really hard to see an approach circle on 00:42:598 (6) . fixed
  4. 00:56:808 - Should be clickable imo, also because it's a downbeat. fixed
  5. 01:22:072 (1) - Missing Finish. fixed
  6. 01:40:703 (5,6) - Right now that 1.35 DS is somehow noticable in gameplay so maybe adjust this a bit for 1.4 DS. fixed
  7. 01:58:703 (4) - NC fixed
This mapset is really neat, good luck~
thanks for modding and the star! ;)
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Len
from q


Beginner:
  1. is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]

Standard:
  1. 00:04:387 (2) - move to 325 308 for distance
  2. 00:06:124 (5) - WAT

CORE:
  1. 01:37:861 -should be emphasized here i think

nice job but long sliders make borin in core and standard
6th
616 posts
Joined December 2014
6th
Hello, M4M.

[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners.
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh)
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners".

[Standard]
00:06:124 (5,1) - stack (same sound)
00:43:387 (2,3) - This is not clear enough, what are you mapping ? 00:44:335 - this should be clickable according to 00:43:387 (2) - imo. Try placing a circle and a slider.
01:04:703 - Having this clickable would have been better. 01:04:230 (3) - Convert it to 2 circles.
01:14:808 - Same, 01:15:124 (3,4) - are clickable so for consistency you need to make this one clickable too.

[Core]
00:03:756 (1) - This is even easier than Beginner diff in term of density
00:11:019 (5) - Because of the very low spacing I think that this is not predictable enough, move it further from previous object.
00:16:072 (4,1) - ^
00:13:387 - No reason to ignore this in hardest difficulty I think.
00:42:282 (5) - It looks like if it was at 00:42:440 -, very hard to read. I missed there.
00:43:861 (4,5) - CTRL+G rhythm.
01:14:808 - Please make it clickable
01:38:493 (1) - Difficulty spike from here to end of spinner. Spacing is suddenly increasing by 2, it's really unpredictable and even harder than kiai times.

Good luck!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Left wrote:

M4M from your queue.

[STANDARD]
your standard diff is still unsnapped X( fixed already ;)
01:10:703 (1,2) - blanket remapped here, can't fix
01:43:230 (1,1) - no stack would be better to read.. It's a diff for noob fixed

[CORE]
00:16:387 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's highest diff.. you can make more harder pattern using sliders. It would be really boring. changed
00:30:282 (1,2) - blanket fixed
00:51:756 (1) - you missed one sound.. wat sound i dun get it
01:05:651 (1) - 01:03:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - you followed different sound in these two part with almost same sound..It feels a bit strange so you need some consistence...It's hardest diff so prior would be more suitable. I'm following the main line
01:20:808 (4) - NC kk fixed
01:38:019 (5,1,2) - 1/1 < 1/2 in distance??? It would be not comfortable to read. fixed
01:46:072 (1) - ^ ? no problem here
01:58:703 (4) - NC this is already NC wat

Good luck!
thanks for modding!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Len wrote:

from q


Standard:
  1. 00:04:387 (2) - move to 325 308 for distance fixed
  2. 00:06:124 (5) - WAT WAT

CORE:
  1. 01:37:861 -should be emphasized here i think hmm no

nice job but long sliders make borin in core and standard #sliderart
thanks for modding!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

6th wrote:

Hello, M4M.

[Standard]
00:06:124 (5,1) - stack (same sound) fixed in other way
00:43:387 (2,3) - This is not clear enough, what are you mapping ? 00:44:335 - this should be clickable according to 00:43:387 (2) - imo. Try placing a circle and a slider. fixed in other way
01:04:703 - Having this clickable would have been better. 01:04:230 (3) - Convert it to 2 circles. no cuz it's fine
01:14:808 - Same, 01:15:124 (3,4) - are clickable so for consistency you need to make this one clickable too. ^

[Core]
00:03:756 (1) - This is even easier than Beginner diff in term of density changed
00:11:019 (5) - Because of the very low spacing I think that this is not predictable enough, move it further from previous object. fixed
00:16:072 (4,1) - ^ fixed
00:13:387 - No reason to ignore this in hardest difficulty I think. fixed
00:42:282 (5) - It looks like if it was at 00:42:440 -, very hard to read. I missed there.
00:43:861 (4,5) - CTRL+G rhythm. fixed
01:14:808 - Please make it clickable fixed
01:38:493 (1) - Difficulty spike from here to end of spinner. Spacing is suddenly increasing by 2, it's really unpredictable and even harder than kiai times. fixed

Good luck!
thanks for modding ;)
emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia

Electoz wrote:

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

  1. 00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here? was for drum emphasis, i could remove though, since so many complained about this
  2. 01:23:335 - Missing Finish. added

    Left wrote:

    [estellia-]
    00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket
    00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different? nice catch
    01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before ) start of spinners have no sound, doesn't matter

    Len wrote:

    Beginner:
  3. is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]
lol no thanks

6th wrote:

[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners. too late to change it now!!!
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh) doesn't matter, its easier to play, and its more obvious to me. besides, the instrument i was following before was even softer
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners". thanks for giving me a good suggestion on how to change it..
ok

diff
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.8

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TitleUnicode:COMMON CORE
Artist:DM DOKURO
ArtistUnicode:DM DOKURO
Creator:CookieBite
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Source:UNDERTALE
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emilia
893 posts
Joined October 2012
emilia

Electoz wrote:

[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

  1. 00:42:282 (1) - Any reason for putting an NC here? was for drum emphasis, i could remove though, since so many complained about this
  2. 01:23:335 - Missing Finish. added

Left wrote:

[estellia-]
00:07:545 (4,1) - Blanket tried my best ..
00:10:072 (3) - same rhythm with 00:05:019 (3) - , why slider is different? nice catch
01:38:335 (1) - I think spinner should start in 01:38:493 (1) - because strong rhythms for spinner starts in there. ( and no sound before ) start of spinners have no sound, doesn't matter

Len wrote:

Beginner:
  1. is really FOR BEGINNERS? i think u should change the diff name to normal :3[/b]
lol no thanks

6th wrote:

[Beginner]
SV looks a bit high for beginners. too late to change it now!!!
00:47:966 (1) - This is a bit sudden and has no reason to be there imo. You weren't following that instrument before (plus, it's not really noticeable tbh) doesn't matter, its easier to play, and its more obvious to me. besides, the instrument i was following before was even softer
00:51:756 (3,4) - Pretty certain this is really confusing for "beginners". thanks for giving me a good suggestion on how to change it..
ok

diff
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AudioLeadIn: 0
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256,192,18756,12,0,21440,0:0:0:0:
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353,57,23335,2,0,P|354:106|367:155,1,100
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71,297,25861,2,0,P|55:232|69:164,1,100
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157,322,28387,2,0,L|268:317,1,100
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194,287,33756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,340,34072,2,0,P|45:353|-1:288,1,150
51,228,34861,2,0,L|58:149,1,50
26,93,35335,6,0,P|83:69|133:78,1,100
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436,372,37545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
505,314,37861,6,0,P|518:265|509:207,1,100
435,169,38493,2,0,P|429:119|442:71,1,100
511,14,39124,2,0,L|319:6,1,150
284,54,39914,2,0,L|205:61,1,50
148,86,40387,6,0,P|125:142|141:202,1,100
196,241,41019,2,0,P|255:232|299:189,1,100
344,139,41651,2,0,L|475:145,1,100
490,221,42282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
458,305,42598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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199,312,43545,2,0,L|89:304,1,100
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103,153,44966,2,0,L|165:165,1,50
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191,239,46387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,172,46703,2,0,P|100:239|166:326,2,150
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349,232,50177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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154,317,51124,2,0,P|144:268|118:225,1,100
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146,43,52387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,51,52703,6,0,L|304:44,2,50
185,126,53335,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,209,53651,2,0,P|265:236|328:233,1,100
391,198,54282,2,0,P|421:134|393:46,2,150
339,272,55545,6,0,L|328:378,1,100
247,332,56177,2,0,L|236:232,1,100
201,149,56808,2,0,B|117:138|127:182|34:156,2,150
259,80,58072,6,0,P|321:80|374:57,1,100
438,31,58703,2,0,L|455:145,1,100
419,214,59335,2,0,P|458:295|391:357,2,150
331,231,60598,6,0,L|206:234,1,100
156,283,61230,2,0,P|100:312|42:308,1,100
13,238,61861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,150,62177,1,0,0:0:0:0:
49,62,62493,2,0,L|31:4,2,50
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393,142,64703,2,0,L|383:41,2,100
439,219,65651,6,0,B|473:274|428:343|428:343|346:315|346:315|299:365|210:379|151:307,1,400
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508,243,70072,2,0,P|508:300|489:353,1,100
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388,229,72598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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196,296,77651,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,80651,12,4,83335,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,121230,12,0,123756,0:0:0:0:

RIP formatting ..
[Nemesis]
[Nemesis]
Hello. Doing a M4M here~
BEGINNER
00:38:493 (2,3) - it doesn't look too good for me, I wouldn't cover those two since there isn't any other cover like this in the ENTIRE diff.
00:51:756 (3) - ?????? looks totally out of place fix please ;_;
01:08:177 (1) - this is kinda hard to read for the new players
01:10:703 (1) - ^, trust me.
01:58:703 (1) - ^ ^, really trust me
STANDARD
00:23:651 (2,3) - slight blanket fix please
00:25:230 (1) - move to x=424
00:25:861 (2) - move to y=356
00:33:440 (2) - move to y=184 (looks WAY better, trust me)
00:36:598 (3,4) - blanketzzzzz
00:39:598 (4,1) - ^
00:47:019 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:43:230 (1) - I'd personally remove that, but you can leave it if you want~~
CORE
00:30:282 (1,2) - you need to fix the blanket a little
01:08:177 (1) - I don't really like this slider, kinda awkward to play
01:18:282 (1) - for me you should add one more red point, looks too soft compared to the rest of the sliders
The whole map is really good :3 keep it up!
-NanoRIPE-
2,018 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
Hi ~ M4M from your modding queue

[Beginner]
00:09:440 (2,3) - blanket
00:36:598 (3) - Ctrl + J
00:51:756 (3) - unsnapped slider
01:34:072 (2,3) - blanket?

[STANDART]
00:05:966 (4) - clap
00:11:335 (1) - finish

[Core]
None
Nice diff ~

GL ~
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

[Nemesis] wrote:

Hello. Doing a M4M here~
STANDARD
00:23:651 (2,3) - slight blanket fix please fixed
00:25:230 (1) - move to x=424 WAT IT'S ALREADY 424 lol
00:25:861 (2) - move to y=356 WAT IS GOING ON IT'S ALREADY 356 wat
00:33:440 (2) - move to y=184 (looks WAY better, trust me) fixed
00:36:598 (3,4) - blanketzzzzz fixed
00:39:598 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:47:019 (4,5) - ^ ^ remapped this part so ignore
01:43:230 (1) - I'd personally remove that, but you can leave it if you want~~ no
CORE
00:30:282 (1,2) - you need to fix the blanket a little fixed
01:08:177 (1) - I don't really like this slider, kinda awkward to play fixed
01:18:282 (1) - for me you should add one more red point, looks too soft compared to the rest of the sliders
The whole map is really good :3 keep it up!
thanks for modding!

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ M4M from your modding queue

[STANDART]
00:05:966 (4) - clap fixed
00:11:335 (1) - finish fixed

[Core]
None
Nice diff ~

GL ~
thanks for modding!
Zyl
520 posts
Joined October 2013
Zyl
From my queue




[estellia-'s BEGINNER]

estellia-'s BEGINNER diff
Nothing to say! :)

[STANDARD]

STANDARD diff
01:01:861 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard for beginners

that's all! :)

[CORE]

CORE diff
00:43:861 (4,5) - sudden change

that's all! :)

Good job! really good map! :)
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Trent83 wrote:

From my queue




[STANDARD]

STANDARD diff
01:01:861 (1,2,3,4,1) - hard for beginners there is a beginner difficulty so this doesn't matter

that's all! :)

[CORE]

CORE diff
00:43:861 (4,5) - sudden change hmm, i think it's fine

that's all! :)

Good job! really good map! :)
thanks for modding and looking!
Chibi Maruko
857 posts
Joined January 2015
Chibi Maruko
Hi. M4M from my queue

STANDARD
  1. 00:06:124 (5) - Add clap cause sound bass
  2. 01:02:019 (2,3,4) - Add clap
  3. Everything looks ok :D

CORE
  1. 00:05:966 (1,2) - Please make spacing because this is hard, not normal
  2. 00:13:072 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:15:124 (3) - Stop slider at 00:15:440 -
  4. 01:01:572 - Add note cause stream here
  5. 01:04:072 (2,3) - Stack will be nice
  6. 01:43:545 (2) - Add NC cause start kiai

Ok, gl with your map
/me runs away
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Chibi Maruko wrote:

Hi. M4M from my queue

STANDARD
  1. 00:06:124 (5) - Add clap cause sound bass fixed
  2. 01:02:019 (2,3,4) - Add clap fixed
  3. Everything looks ok :D

CORE
  1. 00:05:966 (1,2) - Please make spacing because this is hard, not normal fixed
  2. 00:13:072 (2,3) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:15:124 (3) - Stop slider at 00:15:440 - fixed
  4. 01:01:572 - Add note cause stream here i don't think so
  5. 01:04:072 (2,3) - Stack will be nice ^
  6. 01:43:545 (2) - Add NC cause start kiai fixed

Ok, gl with your map
/me runs away
thanks for modding!
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
HELLO! M4M FROM MY QUEUE!

BEGINNER
00:09:440 (2,3) - Blanket this?
00:36:598 (3) - In my opinion Ctrl + J looks better
00:47:966 (1) - (It's not mod) Nice slider! (Key?)
00:59:335 (3,1) - Blanket
01:08:177 (1) - I think beginners can't read this slider (01:08:808 This moment)
01:35:966 (1,2) - Blanket

STANDARD
NOTHING O.o (LOVE THIS DIFF <3)

CORE
01:13:861 (2) - Move it a bit to right
01:17:651 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:245

Sorry for short mod, but it's very good map and I'll give you star :D
GOOD LUCK!
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Chalwa wrote:

HELLO! M4M FROM MY QUEUE!

STANDARD
NOTHING O.o (LOVE THIS DIFF <3) oh thank you >3

CORE
01:13:861 (2) - Move it a bit to right fixed
01:17:651 (3) - Move it to x:288 y:245 fixed

Sorry for short mod, but it's very good map and I'll give you star :D omg thank you >3
GOOD LUCK!
thanks for modding and the star!
propasy
73 posts
Joined December 2013
propasy
Not alot of problems in this map :)

Standard
00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider
01:03:756 (2,3) – its strange how you instantly change the use of rythmn from one instrument to the other then back. Feels out of place. (in other words, you incorporated the high pitched sound into your map for only two circles and then back into the main instruments. I suggest you continue using this instrument for longer or simply not introduce it)

CORE
00:05:966 (1,2,3) – I don’t think the small triangle jump works well with the song. Perhaps just a normal stream jump.
00:43:861 (4,5,6) – the spacing of circle 5 seems out of place from the other two similar jumps of this section (i.e. 00:42:914 (1,2,3) – and 00:46:387 (3,4,5) -) try and make it seem more similar.
00:47:966 (1) – this would be a good spot to lower the slider velocity to better fit with the music.
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

propasy wrote:

Not alot of problems in this map :)

Standard
00:15:124 (3,4) - I don’t see the point of the circle being so far away from the slider so what do you want to do here? it like 1 and a half beat here so it make sense
01:03:756 (2,3) – its strange how you instantly change the use of rythmn from one instrument to the other then back. Feels out of place. (in other words, you incorporated the high pitched sound into your map for only two circles and then back into the main instruments. I suggest you continue using this instrument for longer or simply not introduce it) for now, it's late to remap all this and it makes the map special, right?

CORE
00:05:966 (1,2,3) – I don’t think the small triangle jump works well with the song. Perhaps just a normal stream jump. fixed
00:43:861 (4,5,6) – the spacing of circle 5 seems out of place from the other two similar jumps of this section (i.e. 00:42:914 (1,2,3) – and 00:46:387 (3,4,5) -) try and make it seem more similar. fixed
00:47:966 (1) – this would be a good spot to lower the slider velocity to better fit with the music. hmm fine here
thanks for modding!
Morgar
37 posts
Joined December 2013
Morgar
I find few to no problems with this map (looking at hard).

Although I noticed something(s) so this is a short mod I guess.

Some parts are way more difficult then others, personally I can't fc this map but I'm not enthusiastic enough to play it again because it has those "lame" parts for me. For someone that can barely make the start of the sing, is the middle part way too hard.
What I'm saying is you should level it IMO by easing into the rapid stuff.

These are the harder parts:
00:41:966 - 00:42:756 (4,5,6) These rapid return sliders fit to the music perfectly but I have not seen them before in the map. The first time you use them and they are very quickly following each other. I suggest putting a hit circle at 00:41:493 so that you easy the player into the new quicker speed

01:01:861 - 01:02:966 (1,2,3,4,5) Feels the same as the first harder part. No suggestions for this one though.



This all could be a fiction of my imagination but I really hope you find this useful. If you do kudosu's are always welcome, if you don't, ignore this.
CookieBite
1,483 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
CookieBite

Morgar wrote:

I find few to no problems with this map (looking at hard).

Although I noticed something(s) so this is a short mod I guess.

Some parts are way more difficult then others, personally I can't fc this map but I'm not enthusiastic enough to play it again because it has those "lame" parts for me. For someone that can barely make the start of the sing, is the middle part way too hard.
What I'm saying is you should level it IMO by easing into the rapid stuff.

These are the harder parts:
00:41:966 - 00:42:756 (4,5,6) These rapid return sliders fit to the music perfectly but I have not seen them before in the map. The first time you use them and they are very quickly following each other. I suggest putting a hit circle at 00:41:493 so that you easy the player into the new quicker speed adding a circle doesn't help this situation, no fix

01:01:861 - 01:02:966 (1,2,3,4,5) Feels the same as the first harder part. No suggestions for this one though. still,I can't really think of how can I fix them, no fix



This all could be a fiction of my imagination but I really hope you find this useful. If you do kudosu's are always welcome, if you don't, ignore this.
thanks for looking ;)
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