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Kuki
i'll gd insane.
Topic Starter
Nelliel

Kuki wrote:

i'll gd insane.
K, Thanks <3
Kuki
Kuki's Yuki
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Axon
Easy
Very well made, nothing to mod here :)
Normal
00:10:377 (3,4) - change that into a slider
00:15:616 (1) - I feel like you should put something other than a spinner here
00:19:901 (1) - that slider gives it kind of a weird flow
00:24:901 (1) - that should just be a hitcircle
00:28:711 (3) - same thing
Forest's Hard
should be spinner from 00:02:044 - 00:01:720
00:03:711 (4) - too many reverses
00:08:473 (2) - again too many reverses
00:18:949 (5) - and more reverses
Kuki's Yuki
I feel like you should make CS 1 size bigger

That's all, great map :D
Topic Starter
Nelliel

8Bit wrote:

Easy
Very well made, nothing to mod here :)
Normal
00:10:377 (3,4) - change that into a slider Fixed
00:15:616 (1) - I feel like you should put something other than a spinner here I Like Spinner Here <:
00:19:901 (1) - that slider gives it kind of a weird flow Fixed
00:24:901 (1) - that should just be a hitcircle Fixed
00:28:711 (3) - same thing Fixed

That's all, great map :D
Thanks For The Mod
Underforest
should be spinner from 00:02:044 - 00:01:720
00:03:711 (4) - too many reverses
00:08:473 (2) - again too many reverses
00:18:949 (5) - and more reverses
Don't fixed nothing, the reverses are allowed with the rhythm in this case
Thanks anyway
Kuki

8Bit wrote:

I feel like you should make CS 1 size bigger
i thought about it but i don't think it'd fit well with the difficulty behind it.
A r M i N
M4M
I know u didnt mod my map but i wanted to get this done :D Dont forget to mod mine tho please

Easy

00:07:997 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:10:854 (1) - http://puu.sh/nzosz/f5ac9c8f0c.jpg This just looks better imo
00:15:616 (1,1) - Not enough time between Note and Spinner, you should delete that spinner and add some more notes imo
00:17:997 (1) - same as with the 2 sliders b4
00:25:139 (1,2) - fix blanket

Normal

00:00:378 (1,1) - not enough space between slider and spinner, this is more for Extra :DD
00:15:616 (1,1) - ^
00:19:425 (5,2,3) - overlap
00:20:854 (3,1) - DS

Hard

00:03:711 (4) - remove one reverse
00:05:377 (5,6,7,8) - swich circle and triplet so triplet is first
00:08:473 (2) - remove 2 reverse and add a circle at 00:08:949 -
00:11:806 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/nzoRT/5fc0d558b4.jpg
00:12:639 (3,4) - move them closer to 2
00:13:711 (1) - closer to 2

Yuki

Dude this is only a 3,6 star get AR on 8 OD on 6/7 and HP on 5/6 lol

00:27:997 (5,6,7) - stack with 1
00:30:139 (4) - blanket



I hope it helped
dont forget to mod my map :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/413183
Topic Starter
Nelliel

A r M i N wrote:

M4M
I know u didnt mod my map but i wanted to get this done :D Dont forget to mod mine tho please

Easy

00:07:997 (1,2) - Fix blanket Fixed
00:10:854 (1) - http://puu.sh/nzosz/f5ac9c8f0c.jpg This just looks better imo Fixed
00:15:616 (1,1) - Not enough time between Note and Spinner, you should delete that spinner and add some more notes imo Fixed
00:17:997 (1) - same as with the 2 sliders b4 Fixed
00:25:139 (1,2) - fix blanket I'ma keep it like that

Normal

00:00:378 (1,1) - not enough space between slider and spinner, this is more for Extra :DD Fixed
00:15:616 (1,1) - ^ Fixed
00:19:425 (5,2,3) - overlap Wot?
00:20:854 (3,1) - DS Fixed

I hope it helped
dont forget to mod my map :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/413183
Thanks For The Mod
Kuki
A r M i N

A r M i N wrote:

M4M
Yuki

Dude this is only a 3,6 star get AR on 8 OD on 6/7 and HP on 5/6 lol it's short, just because the sr is low doesn't mean the difficulty is.

00:27:997 (5,6,7) - stack with 1 i had it like that but i wanted the spacing to be even so i changed it, i think this is fine.
00:30:139 (4) - blanket it was just a copy of 00:29:782 (3) - but yeah, i like the idea of this. done.

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N0thingSpecial
Ayy from my q

Easy
  1. 00:00:378 (1) - short spinner is a no no for beginners replace with slider, even that the spinner should last 3 whole beats not 2+2/4 beat
  2. 00:07:997 (1,2) - delete 2, copy 1, paste, ctrl g and DS it so that is symmetrical, just looks a bit better imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4688882
  3. 00:13:711 (1,1) - why these two have NC
  4. 00:17:997 (1,2) - same with point #2
  5. 00:18:949 (2,3) - bad overlap
  6. 00:21:330 (1,2) - move this up to get symmetry
  7. 00:26:092 (2) - literally place it 2 pixels to the left would make it a perfect blanket: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4688919
  8. 00:27:520 (4) - you should almost never place notes on blue tick for easy difficulty
  9. 00:30:854 (1) - spinner too short replace it with slider
Normal
  1. 00:00:378 (1) - same problem no short spinners just use slider for this.
  2. 00:05:854 (1,2) - oh lord, no sliders on red tick, especially when the music doesn't suggest anything of importance on those red ticks
  3. 00:04:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - you're just making your own beat right? you're not actually trying to represent any part of the music right? also why so many NC
  4. 00:17:282 (5) - when you map a song about a yandere expressing her love for her man by screaming his name 300 times, WHY YOU NO MAP TO YUKI? delete slider, replace with note and follow up with a slider on a white tick.
Hard
  1. 00:02:758 (2,4) - when you have a slider with 1 reverse arrow, they would expect the next one would also ONLY have one reverse arrow, putting two reverse arrow would just confuse people, so stick with 1 reverse arrow
  2. 00:11:806 (1,2) - copy paste and rotate 180, I prefer the shape of 1 so copy 1
  3. 00:11:330 (4) - why the 90 degree? When 90% of your map is not even aligned at vertical and horizontal way, here
  4. 00:12:282 (2,3,4) - why are they so far apart it only a hard difficulty, low bpm doesn't mean they can do space streams, try this
  5. 00:13:711 (1,2) - please be consistent with your spacing, you have this, then you make this spaced far apart and then you make this: 00:14:425 (6,7,8,9) - either they touch or they don't touch, pick one, can't both, unless you're doing spaced streams.
  6. 00:25:139 (1,2) - rotate 1 by 9 degree and you get perfect blanket AND triangulation

btw I saw you requesting a GD for extra, are you sure that this song deserve an Extra? Are you sure that an Extra would fit this 126 bpm 30 second song? An Extra for a song that is not very exciting?

Good luck non the less
Cryptic
hihi from PM request

[General]
  1. Add UnderForest and Kuki to tags
[Easy]
  1. Set hitsound volume a bit lower, 100% is ear-blasting :c
  2. For this easy I'm honestly going to suggest a remap. I'm not great at modding these but this definitely looks like it could be significantly better in quite a few areas - just a few things I've noticed:
    1. 00:07:997 (1,2) - Really bad blanket
    2. 00:07:997 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - missed chance at symmetry.
    3. 00:17:997 (1,2) - Bad blanket
    4. 00:18:949 (2,3) - Bad overlap
  3. And much much more. IMO its just better to look through a lot of Easys andd then focus on blanketing, good structural shapes, and more symmetry. Remapping a 30 second map is stupidly easy anyway.
[Normal]
  1. Volume again.
  2. 00:00:378 (1) - End this on the red tick, because it makes more sense for the spinner to be following the synth in the background rather than the voice.
  3. Probably going to suggest another remap here, just because I feel like it could be so much better. I'll give it the same treatment as the last:
    1. 00:05:854 (1) - Strong beats on slider end
    2. 00:09:663 (1) - ^ (You can say you're following the vocal, but the stronger vocal is actually on the white tick here...)
    3. 00:17:758 - Missing strong important beat
  4. And theres definitely more, same suggestion I gave you for the easy tbh, just study a bit
[Forest]
  1. 00:00:378 (1) - Curve this a bit so that the slider end is pointing a bit more towards the 2.
  2. I don't know, there doesn't seem to be much wrong with this map play wise, and I'm not great at modding Hards. Aesthetics could use some work though.
  3. 00:02:758 (2) - Like, this could be not directly horizontal because not only does it look better, but it flows really oddly from the previous slider and it flows even worse into the next slider.
  4. 00:11:330 (4) - A right angle is my worst nightmare in sliders... Please make it prettier? Please??? ;;
  5. 00:11:806 (1,2) - Missed opportunity for symmetry in sliders.
  6. Theres probably more that I missed, like I said I'm bad w/ Hards
[Kuki]
  1. AR 8.5 m8, 126 BPM and AR 8.8 don't mix IMO.
  2. OD 7.5 or OD 8, but 8.2 is 2 edgy.
  3. 00:04:187 (1,2,3) - You could have done something more interesting here, like an anti-flow slider triangle or something.
  4. idk, I didn't see much wrong with this tbh, I feel like theres something wrong because my acc was trash but I couldn't find it.
sorry, this mod was bad and I apologize ;;
Haskorion
You asked me for a mod, but I'm in the learning process of mapping so I don't know if the quality of this mod will be sufficient.

I just mod Hard since Insane seems clean, Easy is very basic and addressed in other mods, and Normal is needing a remap on some parts like at 00:04:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - being to much of a spike (4 circles in a row) or sliders ending on strong beats like 00:05:854 (1,2) - also suggested in other mods.

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:378 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm sounds completely off since there are sounds at 00:01:058 and 00:01:806 that are not mapped while 00:01:687 (4) - is mapped to something non exisiting
    I would suggest using the following rhythm:
  2. 00:04:187 (1,2) - make (2) the same shape as (1), same can be applied to 00:11:806 (1,2)
  3. 00:20:377 (6) - make this slider symmetrical, same can be applied to 00:27:996 (5)
  4. 00:21:330 (1) - I feel like the bend in this curve is a bit too much, so reduce it a bit, same can be applied to 00:28:949 (1)
  5. 00:30:854 (1) - make this a spinner from this point onward since the mp3 ends rather abruptly here
In short some aesthetical stuff and one wrong rhythm.
Underforest
I'll ignore mods cause I'm remapping my diff for some fixes in the rhythm
Sorry guys
Moa
Hi from my modding Queue
[easy]
Pls check ds 0.9
00:05:139 (1) - Cancel NC
00:06:092 (2) - NC
00:07:997 (1) - Cancel NC
00:09:901 (3) - NC
00:10:854 (1) - Cancel Nc
00:14:663 (1) - ^
00:17:044 (4) - NC
00:17:997 (1) - Cancel NC
00:17:520 - this is strong beat so it's click timing 00:16:568 (3,4) - -> http://puu.sh/nENBL/5291e757b0.jpg
00:21:330 (1,2) - make both slope http://puu.sh/nENIy/69f0a09446.jpg
00:25:139 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:27:520 (4) - not good rhythm make 1/1 reverse slider http://puu.sh/nENFw/2ba3361aa7.jpg
[normal]
00:04:901 (1,2,3,4) - so hard
00:17:282 (5) - http://puu.sh/nENPB/a02877e55d.jpg
[hard]
00:00:378 (1,2,3,4) - not good rhythm if u want use this rhythm http://puu.sh/nENVR/0f8fcd8dbb.jpg
00:13:711 (1,2) - so distant in hard diff
00:25:139 (1,2) - blanket?
00:30:854 (1,1,2,3) - not good rhythm if u want use this rhythm http://puu.sh/nENVR/0f8fcd8dbb.jpg
[insane]
00:01:211 (3,4) - make stack is nice
00:02:282 (1,2,3) - so distant 00:16:092 (2,3,4) - this is good distant
00:29:782 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:30:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you use both rhythm with 00:00:378 (1,2,3,4) - this


sorry for baka modding ^^
Moa

Underforest wrote:

I'll ignore mods cause I'm remapping my diff for some fixes in the rhythm
Sorry guys
oh sorry i don't see your write
Kuki
CrypticMech

CrypticMech wrote:

[Kuki]
  1. AR 8.5 m8, 126 BPM and AR 8.8 don't mix IMO. yeah this was fucked, 8.4.
  2. OD 7.5 or OD 8, but 8.2 is 2 edgy. agreed, 7.4
  3. 00:04:187 (1,2,3) - You could have done something more interesting here, like an anti-flow slider triangle or something.i like how this flows but idk, i may remake
  4. idk, I didn't see much wrong with this tbh, I feel like theres something wrong because my acc was trash but I couldn't find it. it's not the best but it's semi-clean at least l m a o

Moa

Moa wrote:

[insane]
00:01:211 (3,4) - make stack is nice nah this is good
00:02:282 (1,2,3) - so distant 00:16:092 (2,3,4) - this is good distant fixed that
00:29:782 (3,4) - fix blanket i did that in a previous mod but my diff hadn't been updated
00:30:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you use both rhythm with 00:00:378 (1,2,3,4) - this i didn't see that, thanks! fixed!

update
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Underforest
Ranking criteria just removed me some good PP :(
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Source: 未来日記 (replace this with that text)
Tags: Mirai Nikki Future Diary Nico Nico Douga Yuno Gasai 我妻 由乃 MAD Parody Underforest Kuki - add this tags and also me and Kuki :(

<References>
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm17521132 (official source as far)

No kudosu because isn't a mod, just a correction. Give me that will cause the deny of it.
Topic Starter
Nelliel

Underforest wrote:

Ranking criteria just removed me some good PP :(
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Romanised Artist: Yuki❤Yuki Yuki-teru❤Yuki Yuki❤Yuki
Source: 未来日記 (replace this with that text)
Tags: Mirai Nikki Future Diary Nico Nico Douga Yuno Gasai 我妻 由乃 MAD Parody Underforest Kuki - add this tags and also me and Kuki :(

<References>
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm17521132 (official source as far)

No kudosu because isn't a mod, just a correction. Give me that will cause the deny of it.
i love you underforest
Underforest
<3
Annadine

Hello! NM from modding queue!
yukiyuikiyuikiyuikiyuiykiykyiyuky

Kuki's Yuki[]
how2fc
And no hs...?
  1. 00:01:568 (4) - I think that's a confusing place to put it
  2. 00:05:973 (8,1) - this is a weird angle too. What about a curve on 00:05:973 (8) -
  3. 00:06:806 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think this is too spaced but idk =~=
  4. 00:08:473 (4,5) - hard aim but oh well ==
  5. Inconsistent spacing: 00:08:711 (5,6) - 's spacing is different than 00:09:187 (7,8) -. I guess move 00:09:425 (8) - to the right to make 00:09:187 (7,8) - a proper blanket as well.
  6. 00:14:901 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - same as 00:06:806
  7. 00:15:616 (1) - e.e too curved to the wrong direction. probably make it less curved, or at least make it facing 00:16:092 (2) - more.
  8. 00:16:568 (4) - add curve
  9. 00:32:044 (4) - same as 00:01:568
Forest's Hard[]
No hs wtf ;w;
  1. 00:03:354 (4) - I think this is reversing too much. What about making that slider reverse once then put a note on 00:03:711
  2. 00:04:306 (2,3,4) - weird tapping pattern..? =~= :idea: Try this: make 00:04:425 (3) - the one with a reverse slider. Then move (4) to 00:04:782 and ctrl+g.
  3. 00:05:616 (7,8,1) - weird angle I think. Try to make the start of 00:06:092 (1) - facing 00:05:854 (8) - more.
  4. Let's see... What about moving 00:12:520 (3) - to 00:11:806 and move (1,2) to 00:11:925 then make it like this:
    image
    more readable I suppose
  5. 00:16:092 (2) - move down a little bit
  6. 00:22:282 (4,5,6) - rip spacing consistency. Move 00:22:758 (5) - to the right
Normal[]
  1. I thinnkk 00:03:235 (4) - needs to be moved down a little bit ((5,6) follows), to make 00:02:282 (2,3,4) - a better curve.
  2. Then what about making 00:05:139 (7,8) - a zigzag(?) triangle pattern to make it looks less like a randomly placed notes.
[]
I think that's all from me.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
Nelliel

Annadine wrote:


Hello! NM from modding queue!
yukiyuikiyuikiyuikiyuiykiykyiyuky
Normal[]
  1. I thinnkk 00:03:235 (4) - needs to be moved down a little bit ((5,6) follows), to make 00:02:282 (2,3,4) - a better curve. Fixed
  2. Then what about making 00:05:139 (7,8) - a zigzag(?) triangle pattern to make it looks less like a randomly placed notes. Fixed
I think that's all from me.
Good luck!
Underforest

Annadine wrote:

Forest's Hard
No hs wtf ;w; I will applied later cause I'm lazy to find one correct
  1. 00:04:306 (2,3,4) - weird tapping pattern..? =~= :idea: Try this: make 00:04:425 (3) - the one with a reverse slider. Then move (4) to 00:04:782 and ctrl+g. It's fine
  2. 00:05:616 (7,8,1) - weird angle I think. Try to make the start of 00:06:092 (1) - facing 00:05:854 (8) - more. same
  3. 00:16:092 (2) - move down a little bit no
  4. 00:22:282 (4,5,6) - rip spacing consistency. This is not easy
no mention = fixed
ty

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284,71,27044,6,0,P|332:102|360:167,1,100
208,187,27520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,187,27758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,296,27997,2,0,P|182:329|123:301,2,100
147,322,28711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,332,28949,6,0,L|27:209,1,100
73,167,29306,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,167,29425,2,0,L|71:36,1,100
192,67,29901,2,0,B|225:73|246:42|246:42|312:42,1,100
387,104,30377,2,0,B|368:156|368:156|374:194|374:194|352:255,1,150
256,192,30854,12,0,32282,0:0:0:0:
Electoz
[General]

  1. Idk why you put a video file in the folder if you're not going to use it in the song.
  2. Video files must be muted if you're serious about ranking this.
  3. Can't you find an mp3 with a better fade-out than this?
Well Imma mod only Easy and Normal, and I'll do it in game, so call me when you're ready for a mod.
MokouSmoke
when you posted in my queue a month ago, half of the diffs were being remapped, so here I am now~
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:282 - Since the drums and extra instruments start here, I would recommend making this beat clickable. Since you need 30 sec length, I think a 3/1 slider + note would work well here (especially since you have spinners elsewhere) http://puu.sh/ojShp/909b5d8034.jpg
  2. 00:13:711 - you could make this downbeat clickable
  3. 00:14:187 (6) - NC
  4. 00:23:711 (1) - 00:27:520 (1) - remove NC, it's a 30 sec song easy diff, so keeping your NC patterning consistent on every other downbeat
  5. Well, objectively there's nothing wrong, but the continuous 1/1 rhythm is boring imo. You should add some 2/1 sliders for some variety. I definitely recommend you add some before the kiai, so that your kiai section feels more dense and important.
  6. Also, I know it's hard to do for easy, but try to use more structure and patterning in your note placement. It will make the diff feel much cleaner to play. Examples:
    1. make 00:04:187 (2,3,4) - a perfect triangle
    2. 00:06:092 (1,2) - move this down so you can stack 00:05:616 (4) - and 00:07:997 (3) -
    3. 00:25:139 (1) - move to [305, 230] so 00:22:282 (2,3,1,1) - makes a diamond pattern, etc...
[Normal]
  1. NCs are a mess, please keep NCs on downbeats like you do in your easy diff, especially since you can't really follow the vocals all that well in a normal diff.
  2. 00:02:282 (2) - recommend you NC this so it's apparent the song starts on a red tick. Otherwise, just delete 00:02:044 (1) -
  3. 00:05:616 (8,1,2) - I think you should try to keep some consistency in your rhythm since 00:02:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is similar to 00:06:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/ojU1X/dd7344ab1b.jpg
  4. 00:07:044 (4,6) - copy and pasting sliders is faster and makes your map look more polished
  5. 00:08:949 (2) - ^
  6. 00:19:425 (5,1,2,3) - you can avoid this overlap http://puu.sh/ojUr4/9577d959fa.jpg
  7. 00:27:997 (2) - why not make this symmetric with 00:27:044 (7) - ?
  8. same general comments as easy. there's nothing glaringly wrong, but diff could be further improved by using more structure or patterns
[Forest's Hard]
  1. 00:01:568 (5) - no reason to slow down this slider. the instrument sound doesn't change here and the slider doesn't the vocal since that starts on a blue tick.
  2. 00:03:235 - add a note here to capture drum sound. even if you follow vocals, you shouldn't ignore too many white tick marks otherwise players lose their sense of rhythm. make take a look at the insane diff and draw some inspiration there, it does a better job at blending vocals with the beat of the song imo
  3. 00:03:949 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion so downbeat is clickable and follow vocals better http://puu.sh/ojVo6/5c081ee89a.jpg
  4. 00:06:092 (1,2,3) - yeah, don't make 1/4 spacing look exactly like 1/2 spacing. Hard diffs should still roughly adhere to DS w/ some exceptions to highlight very important beats (which this isn't)
  5. 00:07:520 - add a note here, both vocals and drums land on here
  6. 00:07:758 (6,1) - this spacing is too large for hard diff
  7. 00:11:806 (1,2,3) - strong vocal sound falls at 00:12:282 - which should be clickable. maybe try something like this http://puu.sh/ojVOD/12bf54b6df.jpg
  8. 00:20:020 - add a note here or something to let players know you're transitioning from following vocals to following instrument. otherwise, 00:19:901 (1,2) - will easily get confused as 1/4
  9. 00:24:187 (7) - why not ctrl+h of 00:23:235 (6) - ? looks cleaner imo
  10. 00:27:877 - add a note here and stack it and 00:27:758 (3) - on top of 00:27:997 (4) - no need to skip random vocals
  11. biggest thing is to follow DS more closely. you don't need to use the same spacing for every note, but it's completely inappropriate for hard diffs to have identical spacing for 1/4 and 1/2 rhythms
[Kuki's Yuki]
  1. lol, you and your high cs
  2. 00:05:020 (5) - I get you're following vocal, but I think it would be better to start this slider at 00:05:139 - It will give 00:04:901 (4) - some much needed emphasis, and 00:05:139 - lands on a strong drum beat as opposed to the vocal sound which isn't even perfectly timed. The rest of the map follows a mixture of instrument and vocal, so no reason not to do that here as well. Also, you can consider making 00:04:901 (4) - into a 1/4 slider instead if you still want to follow start of vocal.
  3. 00:14:544 (4) - move this to 00:14:425 - to capture the bell sound? no point in randomly having it on a blue tick since you're ignoring vocals here
  4. 00:16:568 (4,5,6) - too big of a jump imo, song isn't very intense here, so wait till kiai before doing stuff like this
Good luck
Underforest
i'll take a look later
Underforest
Can you take out my difficulty pls and find another Hard?
I suck a lot ;_; sorry

Also remove me from tags
nvm
Shmiklak
From queue!

General

  1. Set combo colors.
  2. I don't hear any hitsounds :/


[headingKuki's Yuki[/heading]
  1. 00:12:758 (7) - offscreen object. UNRANKABLE.
  2. 00:05:020 (5) - Nazi suggestion. http://puu.sh/omT5H/09211ff04b.jpg
  3. 00:09:425 (8) - What happened with this blanket?
  4. 00:01:211 (3,4) - 00:31:687 (3,4) - Imo they r reading not really comfortable :/


Forest's Hard

  1. Looks clean


Normal

  1. 00:09:901 (2) - Lol, remove excess points.


Easy

  1. 00:00:378 (1) - I'm not sure about rankability of this. Try to ask any QAT or BN
  2. 00:15:616 (1,1) - same
Imo u haven't more unrankable stuffs, but still imo u can improve patterns. Good luck
Underforest
Banned mapper, ay rip
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