TERRASPEX - AMAZING BREAK (TV-size) · forum

kakuru

Joined January 2013

kakuru 2015-03-28T17:24:55+00:00

No kudosuで～

[Hard]
00:09:528 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:09:942 (4) - ^
この流れのほうが自分は好き

[Extra]
01:03:665 (4,5) - remove
01:04:058 (2,4) - ^
http://puu.sh/gT8Zc/b361bcec04.jpg
前の↑のほうがよかった

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2015-03-30T07:49:19+00:00

kakuru wrote:
No kudosuで～何故ゆえ？了解

[Hard]
00:09:528 (3) - Ctrl+G ok.せやね、こっちの方が良さげ
00:09:942 (4) - ^
この流れのほうが自分は好き

[Extra]
01:03:665 (4,5) - remove 01:03:665 (4) - を消すと流れが途絶えるので無理ぽい。(5)は削除。
01:04:058 (2,4) - ^
http://puu.sh/gT8Zc/b361bcec04.jpg
前の↑のほうがよかったまたなつい譜面をｗいんさねとの関係でここは敢えて単発にしたぽい。他にも要望出たら戻すかも

ありがとねー

DeletedUser_7013148

DeletedUser_7013148 2015-08-30T07:06:16+00:00

nice job this is the song that I find myself having the most fun with

kunka

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kunka 2015-08-30T12:28:33+00:00

OldBeast wrote:
nice job this is the song that I find myself having the most fun with

I'm glad you enjoyed the this song.

elliott954

6 posts

Joined August 2013

elliott954 2015-09-10T12:36:24+00:00

If I asked to make the insane just a tiny bit more forgiving would it be mean? Overall fucking amazing, thanks for doing this guys.

kunka

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kunka 2015-09-10T13:00:16+00:00

elliott954 wrote:
If I asked to make the insane just a tiny bit more forgiving would it be mean? Overall fucking amazing, thanks for doing this guys.

hm,,I'm sorry, but I don't understand you.

Does it mean that I want you to revise "Insane diff"?
As for this maps , there is no plan to revise now.

Thank you for playing!

kunka

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kunka 2016-02-16T01:10:09+00:00

Revival from graveyard.

I made big modifications.

Remap～ Extra and the Insane diff are completed. Other diff is under construction.
Correction of the metadata.
I adopted BG of the high quality.
I adopted .avi of the high quality.

SwayyZee

1 post

Joined February 2016

SwayyZee 2016-02-25T16:07:20+00:00

ive been looking for this song. i finally found it. i love you

kunka

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kunka 2016-02-25T17:35:28+00:00

SwayyZee wrote:
ive been looking for this song. i finally found it. i love you

I hope you like it.

Kalibe

2,060 posts

Joined October 2013

Kalibe 2016-02-25T19:45:01+00:00

Hah, i know that song! It's awesome and fasty lol.

General*

- Video on all diffs - okay, no problems on Aibot and Aibat, all used hitsounds, 192kbps mp3, right BG, metadata okay // i think there's nothing to say here wop

Easy*

*I would change OD, because of consistency with spread ( { 3, 4, 6 } ) it's not okay huh, better to use 2, 4, 6 -> so decrease it to 2
*00:32:489 (1) - Add finish on first head. I hear a crash sound on that beat and if you check it - finish sounds really good here, tho.
*00:13:666 - Completly useless greenline, it affects nothing, because red line have the same sampleset and volume.
*01:08:567 (6,1) - Switch NC, there's inconsistency with your NC putting~
*About placements, flow and aesthetic i have nothing to say, it's fine.

Normal*

*You can raise AR to 5, cause according to 7,5( actually i'd mention decrease it to 7 lol ) Hard it's inconsistent a little bit.
*00:13:666 - As in Easy diff, unnessesary greenline that affects nothing.
*00:32:489 (1) - As in Easy diff~ // i think it's in all diffs lul
*01:00:136 (3,4) - I would change this rhythm a bit, because for me, it's better to follow vocal moar than beats here ;w; // Have my rhythm changes and consider those.
*Rest seems k to me.

Hard*

* Yeah, i mention that on Normal diff about AR xd
* 01:04:254 (1,1,1) - Why? why? Why? For what reason those NC? Plz, remove these xd
* 01:07:391 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda dislike how that goes, really.. I think.. change (4,5) to normal 1/2 slider, will be the best option.
* 01:17:195 (1,1) - Again.. but why, it's easier to read that, when there's no NC thing.
* 01:28:862 (1) - Add finish?

Maruk's Insane*

*00:52:195 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why spacing between (4,5) and (5,6) is diffirent? I don't think it's a good option // better to have consistent spacing with stream, but it's just me.
*00:55:920 (9,1) - Make it more cooler, flowy // 00:56:018 (1) - move it around 144|200 for better play!
* Really cool diff!

Well, i'm not expirenced with Extra diff and Insane seems good. Welp, good luck with this and hope i helped! :3/

kunka

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kunka 2016-02-25T22:00:34+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Kalibe wrote:
Hah, i know that song! It's awesome and fasty lol. lol Surely fast!

General*

- Video on all diffs - okay, no problems on Aibot and Aibat, all used hitsounds, 192kbps mp3, right BG, metadata okay // i think there's nothing to say here wop Yes!
Easy*

*I would change OD, because of consistency with spread ( { 3, 4, 6 } ) it's not okay huh, better to use 2, 4, 6 -> so decrease it to 2 okay. I change the OD to 2.
*00:32:489 (1) - Add finish on first head. I hear a crash sound on that beat and if you check it - finish sounds really good here, tho. fixed. (All diff)
*00:13:666 - Completly useless greenline, it affects nothing, because red line have the same sampleset and volume. Oops! I forgot to remove it. The normal diff performed the same correspondence, too.
*01:08:567 (6,1) - Switch NC, there's inconsistency with your NC putting~ fixed.
*About placements, flow and aesthetic i have nothing to say, it's fine. Thank you

Normal*

*You can raise AR to 5, cause according to 7,5( actually i'd mention decrease it to 7 lol ) Hard it's inconsistent a little bit. fixed.
*00:13:666 - As in Easy diff, unnessesary greenline that affects nothing. I performed correspondence same as the above.
*00:32:489 (1) - As in Easy diff~ // i think it's in all diffs lul ^ same lol
*01:00:136 (3,4) - I would change this rhythm a bit, because for me, it's better to follow vocal moar than beats here ;w; // Have my rhythm changes and consider those. okay. Because there was some similar rhythm, I changed all it.
*Rest seems k to me. Thank you

Hard*

* Yeah, i mention that on Normal diff about AR xd hmm,,I will defer about the hard diff. Because, this song is sensorily fast. It was 8 at first lol
* 01:04:254 (1,1,1) - Why? why? Why? For what reason those NC? Plz, remove these xd This makes handling same as insane and ex diff. The reason is a visual effect of the excited phrase. I keep it now.
* 01:07:391 (3,4,5,6) - Kinda dislike how that goes, really.. I think.. change (4,5) to normal 1/2 slider, will be the best option. fixed.
* 01:17:195 (1,1) - Again.. but why, it's easier to read that, when there's no NC thing. This is a reason same to the above. I keep it now.
* 01:28:862 (1) - Add finish? I will hold it. Because, There is no sound of cymbals here. When there are many opinions, I add it.

Well, i'm not expirenced with Extra diff and Insane seems good. Welp, good luck with this and hope i helped! :3/ Thank you for modding! It was helpful

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-02-26T10:58:43+00:00

Kalibe wrote:
Maruk's Insane*

*00:52:195 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why spacing between (4,5) and (5,6) is diffirent? I don't think it's a good option // better to have consistent spacing with stream, but it's just me. fix it~
*00:55:920 (9,1) - Make it more cooler, flowy // 00:56:018 (1) - move it around 144|200 for better play! ok
* Really cool diff!

Thanks~

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Lefia

674 posts

Joined August 2014

Lefia 2016-02-26T16:34:15+00:00

hey, the ofset of BPM 153 must be 13655

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-02-28T07:17:14+00:00

MadaoX wrote:
hey, the ofset of BPM 153 must be 13655

okay. I change the 13666 to the 13655. I removed the red line which I put to 13655"BPM145.6". (all diff) Thank you

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-02-28T10:20:39+00:00

暇だったので軽く見ました～

[Easy]
00:15:223 (1) - これの必要性を感じないので、無しにしてBreak timeにするのはどうですか？
00:21:498 (2,3) - (2)を00:22:282 ここまで伸ばして00:22:674 add Circle
00:27:772 (2,3) - ^
01:10:125 (1,2) - 1/1 revers 01:11:302 add Circle

[Hard]
00:06:425 (3,4) - 1/6にして00:06:493 と 00:06:562 にCircle
00:10:459 (1) - これも1/6にして00:10:425 ここからSpin end 00:13:459
00:20:909 (6) - 00:21:007 Rhythm的にここに置きたい感
00:24:047 (6) - ＾
00:27:282 (6) - ＾
00:30:321 (6) - ＾
00:21:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音取りの提案

いｍｇ

00:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ＾
00:35:027 - Circle欲しいです
00:36:596 - ^
00:40:125 - ^
00:41:302 - ^
00:42:870 - ^
00:48:949 (3) - これを消して00:49:047 (4) - を1/1に
01:01:792 (8,9) - 逆にするのがbettar
01:09:635 (6,7) - ^
01:22:674 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -この辺と同じ方が良いと思いま

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-02-29T01:46:04+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

-Maruk- wrote:
暇だったので軽く見ました～あざーす

[Easy]
00:15:223 (1) - これの必要性を感じないので、無しにしてBreak timeにするのはどうですか？悩みましたが修正しました。個人的にはハイハットを取りたいんですが１個だけなら無くてもいいかなと。
00:21:498 (2,3) - (2)を00:22:282 ここまで伸ばして00:22:674 add Circle 00:24:635 (2,3) - と違う感じになるので変更しました。snareも叩けるので良いと思います。
00:27:772 (2,3) - ^ 道場
01:10:125 (1,2) - 1/1 revers 01:11:302 add Circle 他のdiff見てもらったらわかるのですが折り返し地点で音取ってません。不自然な音取りになるので2beat sliderにしました。音に合わせて曲げてます。

[Hard]
00:06:425 (3,4) - 1/6にして00:06:493 と 00:06:562 にCircle 検討しましたがやめておきます。stackさせようかと思いましたが全体的に1/4のstackが多いので1/6stackを混ぜるのはいかがなものかと。かといってバラしての配置は論外。リバースも考えましたが結構難しい。Hardという事を考慮すると変更出来ません。また、正確には(4)には音がないので削除しました。
00:10:459 (1) - これも1/6にして00:10:425 ここからSpin end 00:13:459 このspinnerは全diff４拍子で揃えているのでkeepします。特に問題ないと思ってます。
00:20:909 (6) - 00:21:007 Rhythm的にここに置きたい感ここ悩んでたｗなんか流れ的には今のままがいいかなって思ってるんですが、提案の方はホイッスル拾えるので変更します。Insaneも取ってないので修正しました。
00:24:047 (6) - ＾同乗
00:27:282 (6) - ＾同
00:30:321 (6) - ＾ d
00:21:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音取りの提案これもホイッスル２つ拾えるので変更します。Insaneも変更。( ´ー`)。о（段々、難しくなってきたなぁ..)
いｍｇ
00:27:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ＾^
00:35:027 - Circle欲しいですそこにcircle入れると1/4ダブル→1/2ダブルと続くのでHardではやりたくないです。その前のsliderを1/4伸ばしてcircle置きました。
00:36:596 - ^ ^
00:40:125 - ^ added
00:41:302 - ^ 上と同じ修正
00:42:870 - ^ ^
00:48:949 (3) - これを消して00:49:047 (4) - を1/1にこのパートでは(4)の位置の音は、はっきりした音なので拾います。keepです。
01:01:792 (8,9) - 逆にするのがbettar 01:01:890 - を拾う必要がないのと01:01:988 - の音を拾いたいのでkeepです。また(9)の位置はfinish付けてるので出来る限りsliderの終点にはしたくないです。
01:09:635 (6,7) - ^ same
01:22:674 (1,2,3,4) - 01:21:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -この辺と同じ方が良いと思いま fixed

ありがとね

ecdonald

336 posts

Joined January 2012

ecdonald 2016-03-02T04:37:53+00:00

Hello~, from my queue 余り改善点見つけられなくてすみません>< ほぼ完成されている譜面だと思いますXD

[Easy]
Fine for me XD

[Normal]
01:05:811 (2) - 良い形ですが普通にまっすぐな感じのボーカルだけの所で、00:50:517 (2) - 01:17:968 (1,2,3,4) - 01:23:458 (7) - のｷﾞｭｨﾝという感じのベース?の音ではないので普通に曲げた方がいいかも

[Hard]
完璧だと思います! ただ一つ、(Normalとの差が大きくなってしまいますが、)個人的には☆3.44ではAR8寄りの方が好きかも Normalもスペーシング広い方なので5.5とか合うと思います(始めてそこまで経たない友人をスペクトしていると低ARだとよく先走ってミスになったりするのを見たりするので lol)

[Maruk's Insane]
00:06:069 (2) - この前やこの後にNormalのサンプルセットが使われている中、ここだけsoftでhitsoundが弱い所が少しだけ気になりました終点にスネア(?)の音が曲で鳴ってるので何か付けてみてはいかかでしょうか? (自分はdrumのwhistleが合うかな?と思います)
00:20:713 (6,7) - ここはﾐﾌｧﾚﾄﾞﾚって鳴っていて、00:23:655 (7,8,9) - の(7)の3つ目と4つ目、(8)、(9)の先頭もﾐﾌｧﾚﾄﾞﾚと鳴っているんですが、この２つクリックする所が違ってて(前者は1つめの「レ」と4つめの「ド」、後者は３つめの「レ」と最後の「レ」)やや気になったので統一した方がいいかも (後者に合わせるなら、後者は最後のﾚｰが伸びてて前者は伸びてないので前者はキックスライダーにしない方がいいかもです)
00:46:596 (1) - 細かい点ですがここでSVが0.8xになってるので、00:46:007 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - での連打間のスペーシングよりもこの(1)と前の連打の(11)がやや狭くなっているので1.25x(ちょうどSV1倍での1.0x距離と同じになります)で置いた方がいいかも

[Insane]
難しめのInsaneなのでOD7.5の方がいいかも? spread的にも7.0-7.5-8で等間隔になっていいと思います
00:54:243 (8,1) - すっごい細かい点なのですがスライダーの方向と的がごくわずかにズレてるので、直線にするか,00:53:262 (3,4) - のようにズレを大きめしした方がいいかも
00:56:792 (1) - これも細かい点なのですが下のスコアメーターとやや被る http://puu.sh/nrHYh/a8a1f986be.jpg ので、ほんの少しだけ上に上げた方がいいかも
00:59:537 (2,3) - 個人的には(3)はスタックさせずにややジャンプめにした方が曲に合うと思いました(3でのボーカルの音程が2から結構あがったり声も強めなので)
01:20:321 (1,2) - ここだけ前の3つのスタックと違うのが少し気になりました全部スタック、もしくは2つスタック、2つ小ジャンプ、のように２つに分けるのはいかかでしょうか

[Extra]
00:01:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - スタックもいいですが,個人的には1/3では0.1-0.2xくらいでスタックさせないで微妙に方向付けて流れ作る方が好
きです (例)http://puu.sh/nrH5k/e00eed7976.jpg (00:03:310 (3,4,5) - , 00:04:551 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - も)
00:21:302 (9) - 00:21:498 (1,3) - と平行なスライダーの方がすっきりする気がします
00:26:204 (1,2,3) - 結構細かい点なのですが(1)(2)間が0.97xで(2)(3)が1.08xなのは結構見た目的にも気になったので、00:25:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - のように1.00xくらいで統一した方がいいかも

really nice map!! good luck

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-02T06:24:09+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

ecdonald wrote:
Hello~, from my queue 余り改善点見つけられなくてすみません>< ほぼ完成されている譜面だと思いますXD 問題ないです。ありがとうございます^^１つ１つ時間かけて丁寧に作りました。特にExは確実に音を拾うためにPlayback Rateを50%でmappingしたのでとても時間かかってます(;ﾟдﾟ)

[Easy]
Fine for me XD ＼(^o^)／

[Normal]
01:05:811 (2) - 良い形ですが普通にまっすぐな感じのボーカルだけの所で、00:50:517 (2) - 01:17:968 (1,2,3,4) - 01:23:458 (7) - のｷﾞｭｨﾝという感じのベース?の音ではないので普通に曲げた方がいいかも fixed.

[Hard]
完璧だと思います! ただ一つ、(Normalとの差が大きくなってしまいますが、)個人的には☆3.44ではAR8寄りの方が好きかも Normalもスペーシング広い方なので5.5とか合うと思います(始めてそこまで経たない友人をスペクトしていると低ARだとよく先走ってミスになったりするのを見たりするので lol) これは上記のkalibeさんにも言った事なのですが体感的に速い曲なので当初は8にしてました。しかし実際、BPMはそこまで速くはないので7.5に落しました。"7が良い"と言う意見まであるので今はkeepしてます。~~DSは5.0以上だとさらにSD上がるので今の所、変更予定はないです。~~SVでカバーしてるので問題ないと思ってます。
「追記」DS5.0ってなんだよ俺('A`)1.5ﾃﾞｽ

[Insane]
難しめのInsaneなのでOD7.5の方がいいかも? spread的にも7.0-7.5-8で等間隔になっていいと思います ok. まるくさんとのバランスを取るためにHPも6.5に変更しました。
00:54:243 (8,1) - すっごい細かい点なのですがスライダーの方向と的がごくわずかにズレてるので、直線にするか,00:53:262 (3,4) - のようにズレを大きめしした方がいいかも直線にしました。
00:56:792 (1) - これも細かい点なのですが下のスコアメーターとやや被る http://puu.sh/nrHYh/a8a1f986be.jpg ので、ほんの少しだけ上に上げた方がいいかも fixed.
00:59:537 (2,3) - 個人的には(3)はスタックさせずにややジャンプめにした方が曲に合うと思いました(3でのボーカルの音程が2から結構あがったり声も強めなので) fixed.
01:20:321 (1,2) - ここだけ前の3つのスタックと違うのが少し気になりました全部スタック、もしくは2つスタック、2つ小ジャンプ、のように２つに分けるのはいかかでしょうか stackに変更しました。

[Extra]
00:01:241 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - スタックもいいですが,個人的には1/3では0.1-0.2xくらいでスタックさせないで微妙に方向付けて流れ作る方が好
きです (例)http://puu.sh/nrH5k/e00eed7976.jpg (00:03:310 (3,4,5) - , 00:04:551 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - も) 0.2で修正。これらを変えるとspinner前の7連打も変えないと都合が悪いので変更。(1)(4)(7)にfinish付けてて、つじつまも合うので良い感じﾃﾞｽ
00:21:302 (9) - 00:21:498 (1,3) - と平行なスライダーの方がすっきりする気がします keepです。それを平行に移動させると次のnoteからかなり移動の修正をしないといけなくなるので、そこまでする必要性は感じませんでした。今の配置は縦の流れも確保できるので問題ないかと。
00:26:204 (1,2,3) - 結構細かい点なのですが(1)(2)間が0.97xで(2)(3)が1.08xなのは結構見た目的にも気になったので、00:25:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - のように1.00xくらいで統一した方がいいかも fixed.

really nice map!! good luck aza-su

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-02T12:41:48+00:00

ecdonald wrote:
Maruk's Insane
00:06:069 (2) - この前やこの後にNormalのサンプルセットが使われている中、ここだけsoftでhitsoundが弱い所が少しだけ気になりました終点にスネア(?)の音が曲で鳴ってるので何か付けてみてはいかかでしょうか? (自分はdrumのwhistleが合うかな?と思います) 追加しました
00:20:713 (6,7) - ここはﾐﾌｧﾚﾄﾞﾚって鳴っていて、00:23:655 (7,8,9) - の(7)の3つ目と4つ目、(8)、(9)の先頭もﾐﾌｧﾚﾄﾞﾚと鳴っているんですが、この２つクリックする所が違ってて(前者は1つめの「レ」と4つめの「ド」、後者は３つめの「レ」と最後の「レ」)やや気になったので統一した方がいいかも (後者に合わせるなら、後者は最後のﾚｰが伸びてて前者は伸びてないので前者はキックスライダーにしない方がいいかもです)　確かにそうですね。前者に合わせました。ついでに他のところも直しました
00:46:596 (1) - 細かい点ですがここでSVが0.8xになってるので、00:46:007 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - での連打間のスペーシングよりもこの(1)と前の連打の(11)がやや狭くなっているので1.25x(ちょうどSV1倍での1.0x距離と同じになります)で置いた方がいいかも　ok

Modありがとうございました

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kunka

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kunka 2016-03-02T13:13:54+00:00

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Feb

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Feb 2016-03-03T17:45:49+00:00

from my queue.

This song reminds me so much of the style of [/URL=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aziPdaZAbs]this as an example[/URL]
anyways,

general
add "tv size" to tags.
your easy is a normal and your normal is an advanced diff, so you should rename it to these.

easy
00:03:724 (1,2) - blanket could be nicer. (i hate pointing those out, but i just did)
01:28:360 (2,3) - this doesn't feel alright, how about deleting those notes and 01:27:380 (1) - map this as an reverse, and a note at 01:28:851 - sounds more appropriate to me. In case you don't know what i meant !!The last note is snapped wrongly on my screen it should be on the blue tick ofc. The song ends on a blue tick btw.

rest seems fine.

normal
00:24:635 (1) - [URL=http://puu.sh/ntqK4/dffa7cfe7e.jpg]If you choose this rhythm u actually have something to click on the last white tick, currently you don't and this sounds better as well.
00:30:909 (1) - ^applies here too.
01:00:909 - add a note? it feels rather empty
01:01:105 (3) - honestly I would just go with what you did before and use 00:59:537 (2) - a reverse like this to represent the vocal better.
01:22:674 (1) - you forgot to nc here

hard
you have some spots in this diff which are visual not the same distance as before, because of sv changes, which could be irritating for this level of play.
01:26:596 (3,4,5) -
01:10:909 (1,2) -
01:23:066 (4,5,6) -
01:26:596 (3,4,5) -
I would advise you to make them at least visual equal.

00:17:086 (2) - why are you starting this on a blue tick? well i kinda get it, but its just wrong lol. move it to the white tick and shorten it to 1/2 and 00:16:792 (1) - make it reverse 2 times and not 1 and it should be fine. this is just at this one spot tbh.
00:56:792 (1) - you get inconsistent with ncing here. you should remove this one
01:04:243 (1,1,1) - these ncs are not necessary you don't change the SV again.
01:03:066 (1) - inconsistency with ncing as before.
01:16:400 (1) - i would just ignore the drumroll here and map the vocal with a long slider, like this here

maruk
00:18:360 (1,2,3) - there are no 1/8 at all o.O
01:05:027 (2) - you don't need to nc them since circles are not affected by sv changes. LOL! no srs, the nc is not neseccary
01:10:125 (1,2,3) - aw sad you didn't do any sv changes here as well, as its a strong part in the song.
01:11:105 (4) - you need to move the note to the blue tick 01:11:007 (4) - here, because you cannot suddenly change the way you emphasize the song. I should explain this a bit more i guess lol. You mapped vocals from 01:10:125 - here to 01:10:713 (3) - here, and now you suddenly decide to map the drums instead, but you could actually do the drums here if you move the note to the blue tick and continue to map the stream this thing here. the blue tick thing is a must, but the stream is secondary.
01:28:556 (2) - no sv change no nc. You don't need to nc stuff you can easily read (stuff like this) or didn't change the SV upon.

insane
00:17:968 (5,6) - that movement doesn't fit at all considering the streaming here indicates you move upwards. If you'd place 6 more on the top right corner it made much more sense, the downbeat slider can stay like it is. The current flow is kinda edgy and doesn't fit the stream.
00:52:478 (1) - nc is not needed.
00:55:419 (6,8) - these are hitting each other if you enable "stacking", so move 6 a bit away for cleaniness.
01:04:243 (1,1) - the ncs are not needed since you don't change sv again, actually like in hard diff if i remember correctly
01:05:027 (1) - ^same as in hard diff.
01:17:576 (1) - nc makes no sense whatsoever

extra
00:24:635 (1,4) - you are not allowed to stack those on top of each other. The player has to be able to see the slider after. How it should look like
00:32:674 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - feels alot overdone, considering the sounds you hear are not even followed with the drum or anything other than the piano, which you don't even follow ..

- Map the piano out, and don't do this overdone spacing here, i prolly won't be the only one pointing this thing out.
01:04:047 (2,2,2) - there's literally no sounds on these, why don't you do a 3/4 slider like in insane? :/ it fits the vocal so much.
01:28:556 (1) - considering how you mapped before the flow is more circulare so back and forth flow in the last pattern is really annyoing for the player. How about this. It makes much more sense, as I explained that the movement of the hand before is more circular so this flow would be more fitting.

The diff is a bit overdone, but thats alright - I didn't like that part where you used huge spacing even though there was only a quite piano in the back

.

GL kunka!

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-04T00:15:56+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Feb wrote:
from my queue.

This song reminds me so much of the style of [/URL=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aziPdaZAbs]this as an example[/URL]
anyways, Garo lol I don't look the garo series. but I like the JAM Project

general
add "tv size" to tags.
your easy is a normal and your normal is an advanced diff, so you should rename it to these. I searched a title of a musical composition again. Because it's kinda wrong, I change it. official site Therefore, I think that the ”TV size” isn't necessary. If there is it in the title, this map can search it. In addition, I think that the change of the diff name isn't necessary. I think it to be map obeying a rule of the normal diff.

easy
00:03:724 (1,2) - blanket could be nicer. (i hate pointing those out, but i just did) lol okay. fixed.
01:28:360 (2,3) - this doesn't feel alright, how about deleting those notes and 01:27:380 (1) - map this as an reverse, and a note at 01:28:851 - sounds more appropriate to me. In case you don't know what i meant !!The last note is snapped wrongly on my screen it should be on the blue tick ofc. The song ends on a blue tick btw. Please see other diff. It's finished in blue tick. Therefore I understand that you say. However, I don't want to use blue tick in "easy diff" as much as possible. Because I want to hear also an opinion of other modder, I keep it now.

rest seems fine. k

normal
00:24:635 (1) - [URL=http://puu.sh/ntqK4/dffa7cfe7e.jpg]If you choose this rhythm u actually have something to click on the last white tick, currently you don't and this sounds better as well. fixed.
00:30:909 (1) - ^applies here too. k
01:00:909 - add a note? it feels rather empty I changed the 01:00:713 (1) - to 1/2slider.
01:01:105 (3) - honestly I would just go with what you did before and use 00:59:537 (2) - a reverse like this to represent the vocal better. hmm,,I changed it like the 01:05:811 (2,3,4) - of the part same as it.
01:22:674 (1) - you forgot to nc here It's with the purposely..okay. fixed.

hard
you have some spots in this diff which are visual not the same distance as before, because of sv changes, which could be irritating for this level of play.
01:26:596 (3,4,5) - o
01:10:909 (1,2) - k
01:23:066 (4,5,6) - a
01:26:596 (3,4,5) - y
I would advise you to make them at least visual equal. I changed all diff.

00:17:086 (2) - why are you starting this on a blue tick? well i kinda get it, but its just wrong lol. move it to the white tick and shorten it to 1/2 and 00:16:792 (1) - make it reverse 2 times and not 1 and it should be fine. this is just at this one spot tbh. mm,,Because I heard the sound similar to the rim shot in blue tick, I put it to take there...okay. fixed.
00:56:792 (1) - you get inconsistent with ncing here. you should remove this one I matched it with insane diff. ok.
01:04:243 (1,1,1) - these ncs are not necessary you don't change the SV again. Because this had pointing out of modding the even before, I change it.
01:03:066 (1) - inconsistency with ncing as before. fixed.
01:16:400 (1) - i would just ignore the drumroll here and map the vocal with a long slider, like this here The vocal follow here has resistance personally. I changed the 01:16:400 (1,2) - to 1/2slider.

insane
00:17:968 (5,6) - that movement doesn't fit at all considering the streaming here indicates you move upwards. If you'd place 6 more on the top right corner it made much more sense, the downbeat slider can stay like it is. The current flow is kinda edgy and doesn't fit the stream. I moved (6) to the top right corner.
00:52:478 (1) - nc is not needed. fixed.
00:55:419 (6,8) - these are hitting each other if you enable "stacking", so move 6 a bit away for cleaniness. I changed the placement.
01:04:243 (1,1) - the ncs are not needed since you don't change sv again, actually like in hard diff if i remember correctly fixed.
01:05:027 (1) - ^same as in hard diff. k
01:17:576 (1) - nc makes no sense whatsoever mm,,k

extra
00:24:635 (1,4) - you are not allowed to stack those on top of each other. The player has to be able to see the slider after. How it should look like fixed.
00:32:674 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - feels alot overdone, considering the sounds you hear are not even followed with the drum or anything other than the piano, which you don't even follow .. - Map the piano out, and don't do this overdone spacing here, i prolly won't be the only one pointing this thing out. I narrowed distance by lowering SV. I want to perform drum follow, but there are none in this part. Because I did not want to make a blank, I used piano follow.
01:04:047 (2,2,2) - there's literally no sounds on these, why don't you do a 3/4 slider like in insane? :/ it fits the vocal so much. This is placement to make Insane diff and differentiation. I keep it now.
01:28:556 (1) - considering how you mapped before the flow is more circulare so back and forth flow in the last pattern is really annyoing for the player. How about this. It makes much more sense, as I explained that the movement of the hand before is more circular so this flow would be more fitting. It's too obedient to place it counterclockwise. Therefore, I don't change the pattern of snap. I rotated these notes.

The diff is a bit overdone, but thats alright - I didn't like that part where you used huge spacing even though there was only a quite piano in the back . okay. The piano part is corrected. Probably I think that they improved lol

GL kunka! Thanks for your helpful advice! Feb-san

-Maruk-

322 posts

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-Maruk- 2016-03-04T12:07:09+00:00

Feb wrote:
maruk
00:18:360 (1,2,3) - there are no 1/8 at all o.O okey. use 1/4
01:05:027 (2) - you don't need to nc them since circles are not affected by sv changes. LOL! no srs, the nc is not neseccary okey. remove NC
01:10:125 (1,2,3) - aw sad you didn't do any sv changes here as well, as its a strong part in the song. Good idea lol
01:11:105 (4) - you need to move the note to the blue tick 01:11:007 (4) - here, because you cannot suddenly change the way you emphasize the song. I should explain this a bit more i guess lol. You mapped vocals from 01:10:125 - here to 01:10:713 (3) - here, and now you suddenly decide to map the drums instead, but you could actually do the drums here if you move the note to the blue tick and continue to map the stream this thing here. the blue tick thing is a must, but the stream is secondary. okey. fix it
01:28:556 (2) - no sv change no nc. You don't need to nc stuff you can easily read (stuff like this) or didn't change the SV upon. ok

Thanks~

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Title:AMAZING BREAK (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:AMAZING BREAK (TVサイズ)
Artist:TERRASPEX
ArtistUnicode:TERRASPEX
Creator:kunkakunkakunkakunka
Version:Maruk's Insane
Source:TERRA FORMARS
Tags:opening -maruk- bugs anex mars
BeatmapID:909112
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-Maruk-

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-Maruk- 2016-03-04T12:07:50+00:00

miss

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-04T12:37:22+00:00

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iyasine

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iyasine 2016-03-09T00:17:55+00:00

こんにちはkunkaさん marukさんリクエストありです o/

[Easy]

00:46:596 ~ 00:51:302 - 3小節 hit soundがありませんので少し寂しいかなと思いました。
ギターのカッティングに合わせてS:C 2のwhistleとかどうでしょう？

[Normal]

00:51:302 (1,2) - 音取りの提案。ギターの音が大きいのでそちらを優先的にフォローしてみませんか？imgをお試しください。
img

[Hard]

looks nice

[Maruk's Insane]

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - light insaneという立ち位置だと思いますので1/8 sliderの連続はあまり好ましくないかもしれません。
BNの方と要相談
とても好きなデザイン(*˘ω˘*)

[Insane]

00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも前後同様1/3リズムで刻んだほうが叩きやすいと思いました。行進曲的なイメージ
01:16:988 (4) - distance 0.8x が好み

[Extra]

00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - insane 同様。
文句なしです！青線をいろいろな場面で踏んでいて踏み方も様々でとても好みなdiffです

QF らいなう～( ˘ω˘ )

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-09T02:09:07+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
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Blue : comment

iyasine wrote:
こんにちはkunkaさん marukさんリクエストありです o/

[Easy]
00:46:596 ~ 00:51:302 - 3小節 hit soundがありませんので少し寂しいかなと思いました。
ギターのカッティングに合わせてS:C 2のwhistleとかどうでしょう？悩みました。そこだけwhistle付くと個人的になんか不自然さを感じました。なので、この静かなパートの全てを2に変更で目立つpianoの音にwhistle付けました。また、前奏からAパート入る所のpianoも2に変更しました。（all diff）
[Normal]
00:51:302 (1,2) - 音取りの提案。ギターの音が大きいのでそちらを優先的にフォローしてみませんか？imgをお試しください。 okです。
img
[Hard]
looks nice thanks
[Insane]
00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ここも前後同様1/3リズムで刻んだほうが叩きやすいと思いました。行進曲的なイメージそういう音が自分には聞こえないんですが面白そうなんで変更ｗ
01:16:988 (4) - distance 0.8x が好み streamのDSはほぼ1.0で統一してるのでそれで修正しました。
[Extra]
00:07:034 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - insane 同様。ok.
文句なしです！青線をいろいろな場面で踏んでいて踏み方も様々でとても好みなdiffですありがとです

QF らいなう～( ˘ω˘ ) すいません。何言ってるかわかりませんｗ　modありがとでした!

-Maruk-

322 posts

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-Maruk- 2016-03-09T12:17:20+00:00

iyasine wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - light insaneという立ち位置だと思いますので1/8 sliderの連続はあまり好ましくないかもしれません。
BNの方と要相談ここは自分でもやりすぎた感あって直すか迷ってた所でした。　修正しました
とても好きなデザイン(*˘ω˘*) (˘ω˘)

Modありがとうございました！

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kunka

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Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-09T13:24:55+00:00

UPDATED

CrystilonZ

1,557 posts

Joined January 2013

CrystilonZ 2016-03-10T07:27:44+00:00

omg the favs

from my queue

[Easy]
Solid -- gonna be nazi and picky on this one lol
00:08:689 (3) - blanket is really really off
00:18:360 (4,1) - nazi, try making the short straight section there parallel
00:34:047 (1,3) - if you make these v and ^ shape respectively, it should improve the flow
00:40:321 (1,3) - rather than making them like this, try rotating 00:40:321 (1) - by 90 degrees to make 3
00:45:027 (3,1) - idk, making both of them straight or curved gives more sense of symmetry

[Normal]
The DS doesn't have to be same throughout the diff, so it'd fit the song better if you used lower DS in the beginning section-- just saying
really great diff! skipping this lol

[Hard]
00:16:792 (1,4) - you should make the reverses of each slider equal
00:39:341 (4) - why this slider is extended?
00:58:164 (2,3) - finishes maybe? especially on 00:58:360 (3) -
01:05:321 (5) - I think this should be 1.6x apart
01:17:184 (1,2,1) - make the distance between them equal. This might be a little bit hard to do with that changing SV

[Maruk's Insane]
There're lots of weird DS lowering here and there like 00:43:458 (1) - but that's probably your style
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - whole thing here. I prefer them not being stacked. 5 circles stacked aren't really... great.
01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - same here

Gl~

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-10T12:29:11+00:00

CrystilonZ wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
There're lots of weird DS lowering here and there like 00:43:458 (1) - but that's probably your style fix
01:17:968 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - whole thing here. I prefer them not being stacked. 5 circles stacked aren't really... great. keep it. sorry it's my mapping style lol
01:05:027 (2,3,4,5) - same here ^

Thank you~

@くんか君
さっき気付いたけどAudioLeadIn 1500か2000ぐらい入れたほうが良いと思います

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kunka

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kunka 2016-03-10T12:49:09+00:00

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CrystilonZ wrote:
omg the favs

from my queue

[Easy]
Solid -- gonna be nazi and picky on this one lol k lol
00:08:689 (3) - blanket is really really off fixed.
00:18:360 (4,1) - nazi, try making the short straight section there parallel I bend it to the nuance of the sound of the (1). Because it is a point kinda worried, I make modifications in symmetry of the 00:23:066 (1) - .
00:34:047 (1,3) - if you make these v and ^ shape respectively, it should improve the flow I changed a curve point.
00:40:321 (1,3) - rather than making them like this, try rotating 00:40:321 (1) - by 90 degrees to make 3 Because it is not the flow that I think about, I don't change it. I made modifications such as the above.
00:45:027 (3,1) - idk, making both of them straight or curved gives more sense of symmetry The both sides are really different sounds. Rather I have a sense of incongruity in the symmetry.

[Normal]
The DS doesn't have to be same throughout the diff, so it'd fit the song better if you used lower DS in the beginning section-- just saying
really great diff! skipping this lol DS is the foundation which is the most important in mapping-style of me. In addition, it is easy to receive indication by BN when I add a change in easy and normal diff.

[Hard]
00:16:792 (1,4) - you should make the reverses of each slider equal okay.
00:39:341 (4) - why this slider is extended? It is vocal follow. Because it was a point worried a little personally, I made a change.
00:58:164 (2,3) - finishes maybe? especially on 00:58:360 (3) - It is not necessary. The sound of cymbals does not exist here.
01:05:321 (5) - I think this should be 1.6x apart fixed.
01:17:184 (1,2,1) - make the distance between them equal. This might be a little bit hard to do with that changing SV hmm,,I keep it now. Because it is the last point of the climax, I think that it is most suitable personally.
Gl~ Thank you for modding!

-Maruk- wrote:
@くんか君
さっき気付いたけどAudioLeadIn 1500か2000ぐらい入れたほうが良いと思いますあんま必要ないかなって、、ｗ　offsetが414なんで1000だけ入れときます。

Factorial

691 posts

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Factorial 2016-03-11T05:15:05+00:00

Hi, M4M from my modding queue:

Overall

The first beat starts very immediately, so you must set audio lead-in on your map. 1500 to 2000 ms would be fine here.
01:04:243 - Finish should be removed on this point as there is not much beat emphasis here.

Easy

00:19:929 (1) - blanketing here with reverse arrow of 00:18:360 (4)
00:32:478 (1,2) - For Easy, this seems overmapped. This could be reduced to a single slider.

Normal

00:48:164 (1,2) - This could be a 3/4 slider, as it fills the vocal at 00:48:458
01:14:635 - There should be a space on this part, vocal reason.

Hard

00:16:400 (5) - Remove the middle point on this slider? Although the music allows for a wiggle, this is way too short.
00:10:448 (1) - You should allow 1 beat space after spinner on Hard.

Insane

00:06:000 - I hear a beat here, maybe add circle here?
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - with very long streams, this is beyond Insane. o:

Ouch, I can't mod much from the other difficulties
Tbh, this is well-mapped. Take a star anyways.

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-11T14:14:14+00:00

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Neil Leo wrote:
Hi, M4M from my modding queue:

Overall
The first beat starts very immediately, so you must set audio lead-in on your map. 1500 to 2000 ms would be fine here. It's an opinion same as maruk-san lol. okay. I switch from 1000 to 1500.
01:04:243 - Finish should be removed on this point as there is not much beat emphasis here. hmm,,I removed it. However, I felt a sense of incongruity very much. I keep it now.
Easy
00:19:929 (1) - blanketing here with reverse arrow of 00:18:360 (4) hmm..I switched to slightly different form and flow.
00:32:478 (1,2) - For Easy, this seems overmapped. This could be reduced to a single slider. I removed 00:33:655 (2) -
Normal
00:48:164 (1,2) - This could be a 3/4 slider, as it fills the vocal at 00:48:458 The rhythm of the suggestion is the type that added current rhythm. I didn't feel need to change it.
01:14:635 - There should be a space on this part, vocal reason. This part does not take the rhythm of the vocal. I pick it up here because a bass drum is outstanding very much.
Hard
00:16:400 (5) - Remove the middle point on this slider? Although the music allows for a wiggle, this is way too short. I make it to match sound. i keep it now.
00:10:448 (1) - You should allow 1 beat space after spinner on Hard. It doesn't have any problem. This is admitted. Please refer to my map
Insane
00:06:000 - I hear a beat here, maybe add circle here? okay.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:14:831 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - with very long streams, this is beyond Insane. o: It doesn't have any problem. I think with the range of the Insane diff.
Ouch, I can't mod much from the other difficulties
Tbh, this is well-mapped. Take a star anyways. Thank you for modding and kds star!!

Kei

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Kei 2016-03-15T00:37:20+00:00

I won't mod the extra diff because I'm bad at modding these. Hope that's ok with you

[Insane]

00:19:537 (3) - This slider curve kinda breaks the flow so I suggest you to change it like this:
SPOILER
00:48:949 (9) - How about adding a NC here to follow the piano? it'd also help to shorten that 13 notes' combo. I think it's too long.
00:49:047 (10) - You can spread this slider a bit so it doesnt overlap itself so much?
SPOILER
00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can add some hitfinishes here to emphasize this part since the kiai is about to begin. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:302 (3)'s start, 00:56:792 (1) and 00:57:086 (3).
01:08:851 (3) - Spread this slider a little as well?
SPOILER
01:12:184 (6) - Align this circle with the other circles? feels misplaced here.
01:16:400 (1) - Add a hitfinish here?
01:27:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make this pattern a perfect "flower" shape?
SPOILER
01:28:360 (8,1) - This feels weird because you're ignoring a beat at 01:28:458. I think you should add a circle there.

[Maruk's Insane]

I played this difficulty and liked it. I can FC it

But there's something that feels lacking and it's 00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3). It lacks hitfinishes. I think it's an epic part right before the chorus that needs more emphasis. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:007 (1) and 00:57:576 (1). I wouldn't add normal hitfinishes though. You will need to add green lines and change the sample set like you did at 01:03:851 (1).

[Hard]

00:06:517 - I think you could add a note here. Sounds a bit empty like this.
00:10:448 (1) - This spinner is overextended imo. It sounds better if it ends at 00:13:241.
00:32:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many whistles imo. It think it sounds much better if you remove whistle at 00:32:478 (1) and 00:32:870 (2)'s end and also to 00:33:458 (4).
00:53:458 (3) - This slider feels and sounds kinda off tbh. I suggest you to replace it with two 1/2 notes instead, or a triplet with circles.
00:55:419 (5) - I don't think this should be a slider. Circles seem more fitting imo.
00:56:792 (4) - Add a hitfinish here for more emphasis? You can also add a NC here.
01:23:851 (6) - Hmm I don't really see why did you increase the spacing here.
01:28:360 (5,6,1) - This sounds a bit weird because a note is missing at 01:28:458. Adding a circle would make this part too difficult, I know. But I can't think of anything else so I guess you'll have to leave it like this. xD

[Normal]

00:19:929 (1) - Add a hitfinish here?
01:01:694 (3) - I fear that the kiai might be too intense, talking about difficulty increase so I thought that deleting this note would be good.
01:11:694 (1) - Hitfinish?
01:13:262 (1) - And here?
01:14:831 (1) - And also here?
01:16:400 (1) - Hifinish here as well? :p
01:16:400 (1) - And finally another one here?
01:28:556 (3,4) - Hmm this shouldn't end like this. The final guitar sound is clearly at 01:28:851. Better use a slider instead that ends there?
SPOILER

[Easy]

00:10:551 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 00:10:345 (5). Better drag it to 00:11:172 so beginners can see it coming and spin properly.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same hitfinish suggestions as in Normal.
01:28:360 (2,3) - Same problem as seen in normal diff. Why not better replace them with a slider that ends at 01:28:851? I think it doesn't really matter that it's 1/4 because the only thing snapped like that will be the end.
____________

I'm in love with this song so take a star as well. <3

Good luck.

kunka

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kunka 2016-03-15T03:53:57+00:00

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Kei wrote:
I won't mod the extra diff because I'm bad at modding these. Hope that's ok with you It doesn't have any problem. Thank you

[Insane]
00:19:537 (3) - This slider curve kinda breaks the flow so I suggest you to change it like this: fixed.
SPOILER
00:48:949 (9) - How about adding a NC here to follow the piano? it'd also help to shorten that 13 notes' combo. I think it's too long. hm,,okay.
00:49:047 (10) - You can spread this slider a bit so it doesnt overlap itself so much? I don't like right angles. I revised it little a bit gentle.
SPOILER
00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You can add some hitfinishes here to emphasize this part since the kiai is about to begin. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:302 (3)'s start, 00:56:792 (1) and 00:57:086 (3). 00:56:302 (3) - ok 00:56:792 (1) - ok 00:57:086 (3) - keep (all diff)
01:08:851 (3) - Spread this slider a little as well? The flow makes 01:09:635 (3) - and symmetry. I can't change this..
SPOILER
01:12:184 (6) - Align this circle with the other circles? feels misplaced here. lol okay. I moved it a little bit.
01:16:400 (1) - Add a hitfinish here? cool!
01:27:380 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps make this pattern a perfect "flower" shape? Yeah,I got it. In addition, I changed it clockwise to improve the flow.
SPOILER
01:28:360 (8,1) - This feels weird because you're ignoring a beat at 01:28:458. I think you should add a circle there. It becomes the small stream when I do it. I want to place 01:28:556 (1,2,3,4) - and the 01:28:360 (8,9) - in different snap. Therefore, I change the 01:28:360 (8) to the 1/4 slider.
[Hard]
00:06:517 - I think you could add a note here. Sounds a bit empty like this. There was a circle at the time of the making. However, I removed it. There is a sound of the 1/6 rhythm here. The 1/6 placement does not want to it in hard diff. In addition, the 00:06:517 - is 1/4 rhythm. There is no sound there. I keep it now.
00:10:448 (1) - This spinner is overextended imo. It sounds better if it ends at 00:13:241. hmm,,This does not have any problem in a rule. However, I revise it because it is the point that it had also pointed out by Leo-san.
00:32:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many whistles imo. It think it sounds much better if you remove whistle at 00:32:478 (1) and 00:32:870 (2)'s end and also to 00:33:458 (4). I add it to emphasize the sound of the piano.
00:53:458 (3) - This slider feels and sounds kinda off tbh. I suggest you to replace it with two 1/2 notes instead, or a triplet with circles. fmm,,I changed some rhythm.
00:55:419 (5) - I don't think this should be a slider. Circles seem more fitting imo. fixed.
00:56:792 (4) - Add a hitfinish here for more emphasis? You can also add a NC here. okay.
01:23:851 (6) - Hmm I don't really see why did you increase the spacing here. A very strong sound exists here. I enlarge the space to emphasize it.
01:28:360 (5,6,1) - This sounds a bit weird because a note is missing at 01:28:458. Adding a circle would make this part too difficult, I know. But I can't think of anything else so I guess you'll have to leave it like this. xD I changed to it 1/4 slider.......It's very difficult imao. I keep it now.
[Normal]
00:19:929 (1) - Add a hitfinish here? fixed. (all diff)
01:01:694 (3) - I fear that the kiai might be too intense, talking about difficulty increase so I thought that deleting this note would be good. I understand. However, cymbals and the strong sound of the snare exist here. I don't want to remove it as possible. I keep it now.
01:11:694 (1) - Hitfinish? ok
01:13:262 (1) - And here? I think that it is not necessary here
01:14:831 (1) - And also here? ok
01:16:400 (1) - Hifinish here as well? :p I have already added it^^;
01:16:400 (1) - And finally another one here? ↑Time is the same ^^;;
01:28:556 (3,4) - Hmm this shouldn't end like this. The final guitar sound is clearly at 01:28:851. Better use a slider instead that ends there? Nice idea.
SPOILER
[Easy]
00:10:551 (1) - This spinner starts too early after 00:10:345 (5). Better drag it to 00:11:172 so beginners can see it coming and spin properly. fm,,okay.
01:11:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Same hitfinish suggestions as in Normal. k.
01:28:360 (2,3) - Same problem as seen in normal diff. Why not better replace them with a slider that ends at 01:28:851? I think it doesn't really matter that it's 1/4 because the only thing snapped like that will be the end. fm,,I revise it because it is the point that it had also pointed out by Feb-san.
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I'm in love with this song so take a star as well. <3

Good luck. It was very helpful. Thank you for modding and kds starrrrr!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-15T11:05:17+00:00

Kei wrote:
[Maruk's Insane]
I played this difficulty and liked it. I can FC it 　Thanks~

But there's something that feels lacking and it's 00:56:007 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3). It lacks hitfinishes. I think it's an epic part right before the chorus that needs more emphasis. You can add hitfinish to 00:56:007 (1) and 00:57:576 (1). I wouldn't add normal hitfinishes though. You will need to add green lines and change the sample set like you did at 01:03:851 (1). okey~ fix it~

Thanks~

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 58753
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
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TitleUnicode:AMAZING BREAK (TVサイズ)
Artist:TERRASPEX
ArtistUnicode:TERRASPEX
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Version:Maruk's Insane
Source:TERRA FORMARS
Tags:opening -maruk- bugs anex mars
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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2016-03-15T11:32:20+00:00

Hi! From my queue's M4M

General

BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓
Hitsound : ✓
Video : ✓ , cool video ^^

Easy

01:27:380 (1,2) - Try this rhythm instead , the current one feels weird to play , and I think 01:28:164 should be clickable , and it's just easy diff , make is short and sweet .

Normal

00:55:027 (2,3) - Slightly off blanket. Sorry I'm nazi. ;_;

Hard

00:51:302 (1,2,3,4) - 4 of these heads seem like good Finish hitsounds. But Finishing all of them would be too loud. Maybe try just Finish 1 and 3 , sounds good to me.
01:28:556 (6,1) - I feel that clicking 1 would be too hard , try using symmetry sliders with this rhythm. Plays better to me imo.

Maruk's Insane

00:07:655 - I feel that you should add a circle here.
00:10:345 (1) - I kind of understand why you made this slider , but it's a bad idea imo. If you insist of keeping it , I'd rather you snap it 1/8 , since most sliders that follow this type of sounds are 1/8. 1/6 is just too wrong.
00:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Messy hitsound. Just hitsound clap every white tick.
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - Seems like a weird flow to stream. Try this flow.
01:28:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this , try a rhythm like this.About how to map it , maybe just continue the stream like this?

Insane

00:03:310 (3) - Instead of mapping this slider , try mapping a 1/6 rebound , since the 1/6 sound is present there.
00:30:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these 'curvy' streams are better as just curve streams like this 00:22:576 (7,8,9,10) .
00:33:066 (4) - Shift this triangle to x:336 , y:203 , it looks neater.
01:12:184 (6) - Is there a reason for an increase in DS for the stream here? Just map it to 1X DS.
01:28:066 (7) - This can be mapped to 1/6 rebound instead. This is the rhythm and this is the example you can use.

Overall

Pretty streamy map imo. I can tell it's a pain to map it haha. Good mapset imo , all diffs are well polished. Good luck!!

kunka

1,566 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

kunka 2016-03-15T14:27:00+00:00

Green : change
Orange : change a little.
Red : no change
Blue : comment

Chocox wrote:
Hi! From my queue's M4M

General
BPM and Offset : ✓
Aimod : ✓
Kiai : ✓
Metadata : ✓
Hitsound : ✓
Video : ✓ , cool video ^^ Yes!

Easy
01:27:380 (1,2) - Try this rhythm instead , the current one feels weird to play , and I think 01:28:164 should be clickable , and it's just easy diff , make is short and sweet . ok.

Normal
00:55:027 (2,3) - Slightly off blanket. Sorry I'm nazi. ;_; lol okay.

Hard
00:51:302 (1,2,3,4) - 4 of these heads seem like good Finish hitsounds. But Finishing all of them would be too loud. Maybe try just Finish 1 and 3 , sounds good to me. fixed. (all maps)
01:28:556 (6,1) - I feel that clicking 1 would be too hard , try using symmetry sliders with this rhythm. Plays better to me imo. okkk

Insane
00:03:310 (3) - Instead of mapping this slider , try mapping a 1/6 rebound , since the 1/6 sound is present there. fixed.
00:30:909 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I feel that these 'curvy' streams are better as just curve streams like this 00:22:576 (7,8,9,10) . This unevenness is intentional. Because I want to make a violent feeling, I keep it now.
00:33:066 (4) - Shift this triangle to x:336 , y:203 , it looks neater. fixed.
01:12:184 (6) - Is there a reason for an increase in DS for the stream here? Just map it to 1X DS. I made modifications in mod of the last kei-san.
01:28:066 (7) - This can be mapped to 1/6 rebound instead. This is the rhythm and this is the example you can use. I confirmed it. I can't agree to it. I don't like it personally because it is high-speed 2 reverse slider. sorry.

Overall
Pretty streamy map imo. I can tell it's a pain to map it haha. Good mapset imo , all diffs are well polished. Good luck!! I love this map very much. And I am tired at the same time lol. Thank you for modding!

-Maruk-

322 posts

Joined December 2012

-Maruk- 2016-03-16T12:25:33+00:00

Chocox wrote:
Maruk's Insane
00:07:655 - I feel that you should add a circle here. umm...keep it
00:10:345 (1) - I kind of understand why you made this slider , but it's a bad idea imo. If you insist of keeping it , I'd rather you snap it 1/8 , since most sliders that follow this type of sounds are 1/8. 1/6 is just too wrong. fix. Change the circle
00:19:929 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Messy hitsound. Just hitsound clap every white tick.
00:32:086 (7,8,9,10,1) - Seems like a weird flow to stream. Try this flow. keep it
01:28:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - For this , try a rhythm like this.About how to map it , maybe just continue the stream like this? fix.

Thanks~

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