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Good luck! :v
Topic Starter
Voxnola

Side wrote:

<3

Good luck! :v
ty for heart
Xilver15
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Pho
oooooo
Yohanes
a wonderful time :)
Secretpipe
dnb touhou aaa
Okoratu
may i check this or do you have someone else for that already lol

[Lunatic]
dude
- HP 5.5 is waaaaay too forgiving for this i'd suggest at least 6.5
according to current meta your od is kinda low but uh i guess that depends on style or something
- 01:30:619 (2,1) - 01:30:777 (3,2) - are you just a messy person because uh 01:29:987 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - on their own are a pretty clean pattern and then you just semi-overlap circles and that doesn't look thaat nice imo lol
- 01:46:961 (4) - 01:57:066 (4) - uhh this one seems wrong considering how you did 01:47:356 (7,8) - 01:47:987 (10,11) - i guess you know what i mean lol
- 02:03:777 (1) - increasing volume in increments on this one like on the spinner in the beginning could be cool since... it's about the same thing
- idk for things like 02:20:040 (6,7,8) - i was asking myself why exactly you chose to do that for the rest of the kiai but it's like nothing i would force people to change im just interested why you decided to change the way you stack some of the triplets and not how other work
- 02:12:461 (7,8) - idk this felt waay too linear coming after 02:11:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - so i'd suggest something like http://puu.sh/m1DQa/b71f0f38b0.jpg
and lastly tbh i don't think your 2 combospam flower patterns are necessary to combospam
it just distorts the way hp works for just that pattern a lot and since you only have 4 colors you even get repetitions within the stream, which i think doesn't look that nice either...

[harder]
01:19:566 (1) - tbh having this so far up and a spinner becoming visible can be really troubling when you don't know how long that spinner is , an arrangement that would allow taking a shortcut towards the middle of the screen would probably be appeciated by those
02:02:356 (1) - i don't understand this rhythm choice, like it plays alright and stuff but wouldn't mapping the downbeat with that drum and piano make more sense or ...?
some ppl might complain that AR is 8 but tbh i like that about this diff a lot and i don't think you're likely to increase it anyways

[hard]
00:35:987 (2,1) - lol you don't do any 1/4 stuff in this diff but then force an 1/3 doublet on the player when mapping the rest of these with sliderends??

[normal]
01:49:882 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 02:00:619 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - can you uhhh split those up somehow, these are really really long 1/2 sequences and somehow managing an 1/1 break somewhere in this it'd be pretty balanced with the other patterns in this
Topic Starter
Voxnola
Oko mod

Okoratu wrote:

may i check this or do you have someone else for that already lol

[Lunatic]
dude
HP 5.5 is waaaaay too forgiving for this i'd suggest at least 6.5 well ok, I went for 6, I'd rather have players forget that hp exists
according to current meta your od is kinda low but uh i guess that depends on style or something I keep od
01:30:619 (2,1) - 01:30:777 (3,2) - are you just a messy person because uh 01:29:987 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - on their own are a pretty clean pattern and then you just semi-overlap circles and that doesn't look thaat nice imo lol They were meant to be an "extension" of the previous circles. I'll just make them closer so it looks meta.
01:46:961 (4) - 01:57:066 (4) - uhh this one seems wrong considering how you did 01:47:356 (7,8) - 01:47:987 (10,11) - i guess you know what i mean lol They are snapped correctly, but there's red ticks where appropriate. The piano snaps to blue, and then purple because the song is drunk. Please listen at 25% because I do want your thoughts on the snapping here.
02:03:777 (1) - increasing volume in increments on this one like on the spinner in the beginning could be cool since... it's about the same thing okie
idk for things like 02:20:040 (6,7,8) - i was asking myself why exactly you chose to do that for the rest of the kiai but it's like nothing i would force people to change im just interested why you decided to change the way you stack some of the triplets and not how other work This is a good point though. I originally just did it for variation from the similar part before, though I wasn't consistent with it. More stacks are removed
02:12:461 (7,8) - idk this felt waay too linear coming after 02:11:671 (2,3,4,5,6) - so i'd suggest something like http://puu.sh/m1DQa/b71f0f38b0.jpg I really want to keep the transition from slider to slider smooth (having no sharp turns) The reason why the others work is because they're so close to the next slider. These transitions require a bit more momentum so they're spaced a bit more
and lastly tbh i don't think your 2 combospam flower patterns are necessary to combospam
it just distorts the way hp works for just that pattern a lot and since you only have 4 colors you even get repetitions within the stream, which i think doesn't look that nice either... It's a really cool effect when your hp bar shoots up behind the gradually increasing cymbal sounds. It is like "starting anew" after the midpoint of the sections. Also, this pattern is kind of a signature >w>

[normal]
01:49:882 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 02:00:619 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - can you uhhh split those up somehow, these are really really long 1/2 sequences and somehow managing an 1/1 break somewhere in this it'd be pretty balanced with the other patterns in this Added 1/1 break to the first one, The second has an extra 1/1 sliider before it, so I think it's more appropriate. I'm not sure if turning a 1/2 slider into a circle will do much except for remove a hitsound.

Thank you Oko for mod ^^


UPDATED 3/4
TicClick
Okoratu

Okoratu wrote:

[harder]
01:19:566 (1) - tbh having this so far up and a spinner becoming visible can be really troubling when you don't know how long that spinner is , an arrangement that would allow taking a shortcut towards the middle of the screen would probably be appeciated by those -- should be better now
02:02:356 (1) - i don't understand this rhythm choice, like it plays alright and stuff but wouldn't mapping the downbeat with that drum and piano make more sense or ...? -- well, since I have 01:44:671 (1,2,3) and 01:54:777 (1,3)...
some ppl might complain that AR is 8 but tbh i like that about this diff a lot and i don't think you're likely to increase it anyways -- that's right

http://puu.sh/m42jw/6a078af40e.zip
Kinshara
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TicClick
сахар масло
-kevincela-
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360,207,165777,2,0,P|343:237|336:272,1,70,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,208,166092,2,0,L|197:116,2,105,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,166724,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Okoratu
about the piano pattern im really unsure about what it does for me it doesn't snap to 1/4 at all so i'd prefer you doing a pattern similar to 01:47:987 (10,11) - for these to be honest

edit and HP could still be higher tbh, I don't want ppl to die and stuff but right now it just doesn't require that much skill to pass everything that's supposed to be a bit tricky
Topic Starter
Voxnola

Okoratu wrote:

about the piano pattern im really unsure about what it does for me it doesn't snap to 1/4 at all so i'd prefer you doing a pattern similar to 01:47:987 (10,11) - for these to be honest
oh yeah, you are correct mb >>
Okoratu
flangefemale.wav
Topic Starter
Voxnola

Okoratu wrote:

flangefemale.wav
hue
Natteke desu

TicClick wrote:

сахар масло
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLJGQtdG4Ys

nicely done


make these collab parts for demetori song oko too plz
Topic Starter
Voxnola
dw Elvis, I gotchu
LigerZero
Congrats your map Ranked...... :D
Yohanes
Congratz~ <3
Tari
Hi Naitoshi.

Just a few things to note. The bolded ones are things you should consider changing.

[General]

  1. spinnerspin.wav has a delay of over 5ms. Hitsounds need a delay under 5ms
  2. Please consider cutting the mp3, some difficulties use less than the minimal 80% required.
[Easy]
  1. 01:00:619 (1,1,1,1) - Colorhax doesn't seem to make sense. People usually use it to make slider velocity changes more readable or to highlight a particular note or pattern. Any reason behind using it here?
  2. 01:20:829 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^
  3. 02:23:987 (1,1,1) - ^ Nice usages would be what you did at 02:25:882 (1) -
  4. 02:44:198 (1) - ^ Not going to mention all of them but you get what I mean.
  5. 02:01:250 (1) - The shape of this slightly bothers me. Could you make it overhead the previous slider?
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:198 (2,3) - Rhythms like this are strange as they don't follow the piano well, maybe rework to follow the piano sound? You could try this rhythm : http://puu.sh/mcO9F.jpg
  2. 00:57:303 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:17:040 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 01:00:619 (1,1,1) - Again with Colorhax.
  5. 01:23:356 (1) - Inconsistent comboing with other difficulties. This part has one but the same part in easy 01:23:356 (2) - doesn't.
  6. 02:46:724 (1) - ^
  7. 01:52:882 (2) - Move this note upward to be safe. It looks partially off-screen.
[Lunatic]

  1. Could you increase the volume of the finishes? they are barely audible.
  2. 00:53:356 (2,3,4) - The symmetry looks really bad here, you should probably center these notes.
  3. 01:02:514 (1,1,1,1,1) - Colorhaxing here actually makes sense :D
  4. 01:08:829 (4,5,1) - Triplet usage here seems a bit overmapped. If you were to use it anywhere it would be mostly like at 01:10:250 (2) - where the piano allows for such sound. Maybe remove some notes?
  5. 01:18:935 (3,4,5) - ^
  6. 01:20:198 (3,4,5) - It would be better to convert 5 to a triplet because of the strong piano sound.
  7. 02:33:461 (3,4,5) - ^
Other difficulties are fine for me.

Please fix the general things up. Mapset is mostly good but it wouldn't hurt to get more mods.

Good Luck!
Okoratu
what? all difficulties are mapped until 84.1% of the song, the criteria is there to prevent unnecessarily big, unmapped parts at the end of the mp3.
spinnerspin is actually weakly fading in the whole time, you will hear a sound if you highlight the first 5ms and play them on their own so i didn't consider it as "unacceptably delayed".
And it's not even a hitsound, because a spinning sound isn't supposed to have an impact.

my 2 cents to what tari stated above
Topic Starter
Voxnola
rip wait huh? I'm sorry?
Topic Starter
Voxnola
For your general

Tari wrote:

Hi Naitoshi.

Just a few things to note. The bolded ones are things you should consider changing.

[General]

Are these your grounds for dqing? Or something else?
  1. spinnerspin.wav has a delay of over 5ms. Hitsounds need a delay under 5ms Check again
  2. Please consider cutting the mp3, some difficulties use less than the minimal 80% required. I'm sorry? I've never heard of something getting dq'd for a break and outro time. Many maps should've been dq'd for it. There are zero things said about how break time adds to outro time. There are no conditions for breaks in that rule. There are only conditions for intro and conditions for outro. Technically, I'm using that 5% of the audio file for a break (key word "using"; that part of the audio is being USED as a break). I refuse to cut an mp3 for something as petty and irrelevant to quality as outro time all for a rank. That's like an "F YOU" to the artist and song regardless of if I took the time to map this or not.

Edit: [took out opinions that nobody needs to read]

Thank you for modding ^^
Tari
The hitsound delay suggestion (rule) is taken from from the ranking criteria. If you want to open a discussion of the rule, please create a thread in the ranking criteria subforum. Generally the rule was put in place for hitsounds to provide proper feedback for players. Spinner sounds do give feedback to the player that they are actually spinning something. Unless you have a special reason for keeping it, you need to change it (which I don't see you providing yet).
I will link the criteria and image of the rule for you :
RC Link : https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
Image : http://puu.sh/mduem.png

Also the delay can be seen here : http://puu.sh/mdutU.png
Look at the Selection Start time.

About the mp3 usage I mentioned, its not something you must change. But why not change it? Reducing the map size will hurt your mapset? I don't think so. I can even help you reduce the mp3 file if you want.

Hope that clarifies everything.
Topic Starter
Voxnola
almost. It should be reworded as "a delay is seen here" though.
A delay in a hitsound could be defined as the beginning of the hitsound having absolutely 0 sound for a period of time. I don't believe there is a delay because at no point in time does the hitsound not have sound in the beginning.
I do not want to open up a discussion for this rule because the hitsound isn't delayed at all
There happens to be sound at 0ms (loudened gradual sound) but this is no delay. I'm simply keeping a crescendo within a hitsound.
Now there WAS a significant delay with the original wav and modders caught this. And I cut it to a point after the first part where I HEARD sound, not when I first saw it in an editor (zoomed later). This is why the cut is like this.
This is how the file looks close up

Tari wrote:

Generally the rule was put in place for hitsounds to provide proper feedback for players. Spinner sounds do give feedback to the player that they are actually spinning something.
And I'm sure there's tons of ranked maps with silenced spinners.
Tari
Thank you for providing good reasoning on the hitsound.

Anyways sorry if i was a bit harsh, I just wanted some of the issues to be dealt with and the map to be the best quality it can be before it is ranked. If all my issues are adressed with your free to move this forward.

I wish you luck in requalification.
Kinshara
Tari wtf your ava made me think you were Lust. 😯

Anyway good luck Naitoshi, lmk if I can do anything outside the client... lol
Topic Starter
Voxnola
Tari mod

Tari wrote:

Hi Naitoshi.

[Easy]
  1. 01:00:619 (1,1,1,1) - Colorhax doesn't seem to make sense. People usually use it to make slider velocity changes more readable or to highlight a particular note or pattern. Any reason behind using it here?
  2. 01:20:829 (1,1,1,1,2) - ^
  3. 02:23:987 (1,1,1) - ^ Nice usages would be what you did at 02:25:882 (1) -
  4. 02:44:198 (1) - ^ Not going to mention all of them but you get what I mean. These are like "special moment" kind of things. I guess nobody ever does them because most songs don't build with the use of ambience
  5. 02:01:250 (1) - The shape of this slightly bothers me. Could you make it overhead the previous slider? Nah, this is quite alright
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:198 (2,3) - Rhythms like this are strange as they don't follow the piano well, maybe rework to follow the piano sound? You could try this rhythm : http://puu.sh/mcO9F.jpg
  2. 00:57:303 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:17:040 (1,2,3) - ^ I do this to follow the cymbals in the back emphasized by finish hitsounds
  4. 01:00:619 (1,1,1) - Again with Colorhax.
  5. 01:23:356 (1) - Inconsistent comboing with other difficulties. This part has one but the same part in easy 01:23:356 (2) - doesn't.
  6. 02:46:724 (1) - ^ Just change easy for this
  7. 01:52:882 (2) - Move this note upward to be safe. It looks partially off-screen. ok
[Lunatic]

  1. Could you increase the volume of the finishes? they are barely audible. wat I have finish volume variation for a reason
  2. 00:53:356 (2,3,4) - The symmetry looks really bad here, you should probably center these notes. I hardly doubt anyone would notice that the objects aren't perfectly centered to the middle of the screen
  3. 01:08:829 (4,5,1) - Triplet usage here seems a bit overmapped. If you were to use it anywhere it would be mostly like at 01:10:250 (2) - where the piano allows for such sound. Maybe remove some notes? well not overmapped... just mapped to the infinite 1/4 in the background lol, but this would've been a suggestion I would've considered if the map wasn't mapped to mostly background noises (the dnb itself) or if I interpreted the song differently. The only times I map to the piano (in the "chorus" sections) are when the piano comes together with the background noises in unison.
  4. 01:18:935 (3,4,5) - ^
  5. 01:20:198 (3,4,5) - It would be better to convert 5 to a triplet because of the strong piano sound.
  6. 02:33:461 (3,4,5) - ^

Thank you for modding ^^






UPDATED
Okoratu
Okay.
so the hitsound isn't delayed to begin with
and the song doesn't seem to need the cut on a technical level so it's up to mapper's preference (which i agree with tbh)
and i don't really have anything to add from my last mod here so here's a bubble back
Rue
is it happening?


...
is it happening yet?

...
is it??
Kyubey
да
Topic Starter
Voxnola
\:D/
Natteke desu
да
well, to be honest it's pretty hard to not notice without fullscreen spinner thing when it appears. Thought that hitsound rule should be a bit reconsidered. I may be wrong, but the main complaint people were expressing about delayed hitsounds was "it's too hard to understand if i clicked in the right time or not because sound of the hitsound appears not in the same time i click". But if you add another strong sample at the same spot without any delay it could prevent this, so immo all the things about delayed hitsounds should be considering unrankable case-by-case.

A little bit offtopic, i don't have enough time to rise this concern and argue with people about it in the rc thread, just was spreading some thoughts because of appropriate occasion happened.
in other words my english sucks so i want somebody to rise this for me :^)
Natsu
regratz!
LigerZero
Congrats...!
YumaKuga26
Good!! :D
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