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Avishay

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-10-05T21:23:33+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Add the video to Avishay's diff too. o-o

Otherwise...

Could it be that the video gets removed whenever I post the map because I download it without the video?

Eitherway, whenever Kyle readds it, I'll just re download the whole map.

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-10-06T11:28:35+00:00

Added the video to Avishay's diff

Then...

→

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Raiden

osu! Alumni

2,419 posts

Joined January 2013

Raiden 2015-10-06T11:31:56+00:00

HappyRocket88 wrote:
I can m4m the map if you want babe _:3_>_

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-10-13T03:45:07+00:00

Avishay wrote:
HappyRocket88 wrote:
Add the video to Avishay's diff too. o-o

Otherwise...

Could it be that the video gets removed whenever I post the map because I download it without the video?

Eitherway, whenever Kyle readds it, I'll just re download the whole map.

Yeah, if u didnt download the video, it will get remove everytime u post the code for the mapper to update,
It happens in a gd in my map.. the gd'er didnt download the video..so i have to re-add it every single time

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2015-10-23T19:32:08+00:00

i still remember about the request for M4M stuff~~~ and yes, just a quick check only

[General]

AiMod

[Easy]

00:02:838 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/kUXnj/45564ef2a9.jpg
00:04:838 (4,1) - neat this blanket
00:54:838 (2,3) - almost neat enough
01:27:238 (1,2) - remove those finish. and for 01:27:238 (1) - head finish

[Rocket's Normal]

Hitsounds are not even done yet :/
OK, looks like that this diff needs to remap. The reason why is that there are many parts that might be hard for newbies and those DS are not even correct yet to set it :/
00:00:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - symmetry stuff? move them to 200|296
00:03:038 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - here's how i even gonna make it correctly and easier http://puu.sh/kUW9B/f1a7a84099.jpg (sample only)
00:15:238 (1,2) - neat this blanket
00:20:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'd prefer this, because when you're trying to follow the piano note only, that might be confusing for the other newbies tbh
00:24:638 (4) - it might be fit if you remove this note
00:28:638 (2,3) - not a neat blanket
00:31:238 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty a bad idea set. use this http://puu.sh/kUWJ5/f44677dd3c.jpg (it's a sample)
00:33:438 (2,3,4) - 1) neat the blanket for (2) and (3). 2) bad flow for (3) and (4). 3) DS please on (4)
00:37:638 (1,1) - blanket please
00:45:638 (1) - i kinda feel bad about this, cuz you skipped them and idk if you're pretty lazy to map this ._.

end from here. GL!

Vovan

547 posts

Joined March 2014

Vovan 2015-10-28T00:56:08+00:00

Quick mod for Easy

Easy

00:05:638 (1) - Question : Why the end of the slider don't go to the next white tick ?
00:14:438 (2,3) - Slider with 1 reverse + circle ?
01:04:038 (5) - I don't know, the slider need to have the end to the red tick ? I prefer the white tick, but you do all that you want :3

Wingmann

49 posts

Joined November 2014

Wingmann 2015-10-29T04:13:09+00:00

You said you wanted a mod for normal? well, 1/4 of a mod
Everything looks fine to me.
Easy:
Overall: Might need to use fewer sliders from 00:23:238 (1) to 00:48:038 (4) -
00:49:238 (2,3) - are overlapping, kinda ruins all the nice blankets you have!
Otherwise, Easy is perfect.
Hard:
00:16:842 (1,2) - are overlapping, not sure if intentional
00:20:042 (1,2) - ^
Looks good aswell.
Good luck with ranking!
sorry for useless mod

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-07T16:24:25+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
[Rocket's Normal]
Hitsounds are not even done yet :/ PUN PIN CLAP CLAP TUM. Voilá! Hitsounds done! \o.o/
OK, looks like that this diff needs to remap. The reason why is that there are many parts that might be hard for newbies and those DS are not even correct yet to set it :/ R E M A P P E D as suggested. ;w;
00:00:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - symmetry stuff? move them to 200|296 Sure! Nice suggestions! _:3_<_
00:03:038 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - here's how i even gonna make it correctly and easier http://puu.sh/kUW9B/f1a7a84099.jpg (sample only) HUH!? You're a magician! Gimme your pawers!
00:15:238 (1,2) - neat this blanket NAZI MOD BABE! fixed :3
00:20:038 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'd prefer this, because when you're trying to follow the piano note only, that might be confusing for the other newbies tbh I tried this pattern and it has a weird flow. I think newbies aren't that bad to click while the piano notes sound. ;w;
00:24:638 (4) - it might be fit if you remove this note TOTALLY agree! so fancy!
00:28:638 (2,3) - not a neat blanket My head is neat. =w=
00:31:238 (1,2,3,4) - this is pretty a bad idea set. use this http://puu.sh/kUWJ5/f44677dd3c.jpg (it's a sample) YUP! Nice suggestion! omg
00:33:438 (2,3,4) - 1) neat the blanket for (2) and (3). 2) bad flow for (3) and (4). 3) DS please on (4) ALERT! this pattern was remapped. If you want to know further information, contact peppy. 666 777 69 69
00:37:638 (1,1) - blanket please Do you wear any special glasses? D:
00:45:638 (1) - i kinda feel bad about this, cuz you skipped them and idk if you're pretty lazy to map this ._. I wasn't lazy, my mum doesn't let me to map this part because she said a spinner woulf fit better. ;w;

Thanks for modding babe! <3

I AM A NORMAL DIFF WHICH IS BADLY HITSOUNDED

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"charlotte.png",0,0
Video,0,"Charlotte op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-11-08T17:35:20+00:00

Is this even alive

No response or update from Kyle.

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-08T17:38:45+00:00

Avishay wrote:
Is this even alive No response or update from Kyle.

PLZZZ

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-11-09T11:23:47+00:00

I don't know, do you want to revive it?

Raiden

osu! Alumni

2,419 posts

Joined January 2013

Raiden 2015-11-09T12:15:00+00:00

Immortals is banned soooo...

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-11-09T20:19:35+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
I don't know, do you want to revive it?

Like.. why not? If you don't want to push it forward I guess don't..

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-11-10T04:29:17+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
I don't know, do you want to revive it?

Why not?

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-11-10T11:35:15+00:00

If I need to revive it, do I need to find another mapper map Oni?

Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-11-10T14:02:09+00:00

Kyle Y wrote:
If I need to revive it, do I need to find another mapper map Oni?

I guess so. The current is banned

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2015-11-27T03:45:36+00:00

~~mod in progress~~

Hello o/ From kiwi queue

General

I've noticed that in the mp3, there is a little bit of static at the beginning. consider either finding a new mp3 or edit this static out (if you find a new mp3, try finda 192kbps one; your current on is 128kbps)
background file type .png -> .jpg
Also your video still has the audio track (need to remove to reduce file size)
rip IMT
Source better to use "Charlotte" then put existing source into tags

Easy

About the NC, I understand that you NC'd 00:02:438 (1) - because of the piano starts there, but this diff is still an easy.. I would consider using constant NC throughout the entire diff. that means remove at 00:02:438 (3) - , 00:04:038 (5) - NC, 00:05:638 (1) - remove NC
00:05:638 (1) - consider extending this slider to 00:06:838 -. This is because the sound at 00:06:838 - is basically the same as the sound at 00:06:638 -. Better to cover both sounds instead of covering only one and neglecting the other
00:13:638 (1,2,3,4) - constant 1/1 slider spam is no fun to play... consider this rhythm
00:24:038 (2,4) - I think it will look more aesthetically pleasing if you curve both of these sliders (it will also slightly help with flow) like this
00:23:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - mmm... 1/1 slider spam for 25 seconds isn't very fun... I recommend adding variation to this part such as 00:24:838 (3,4) - 2/1 slider then a circle. Can also try this at 00:29:638 (1) -
01:04:038 (5) - end slider at 01:04:438 - ? I know you are following the vocals at this part, the note at 01:04:838 - is much stronger than the vocals imo.
01:13:638 (4) - I would extend this to 01:14:438 - to cover the drumming which starts at 01:14:038 - .
01:14:638 (1) - if you apply above, make this slider a 1/1 slider starting at 01:14:838 (1) -
01:16:838 (4,1) - same thing I said before at 01:04:038 (5) - .
01:22:438 (3) - forgot clap at slider tail?

Happy's Rocket

00:05:638 (1) - cut to 00:06:838 - for recovery time?
00:08:638 (3) - tiny spacing error (not really needed though)
00:10:438 (1) - straighten this out please so it's symmetrical ;(
00:21:038 (2) - spacing orz
00:33:638 (3) - that corner in the slider curve is bothering me zz
00:35:638 (4) - the only stack in the entire diff (i think).. consider something like this
00:36:038 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - tbh, I really dont't like these sliders. Although the repeat end lands on the part where the vocals change, I feel that vocal change on the red tick isn't as strong as the sound at 00:36:438 - (the drum hit) or 00:36:838 - (the vocal change with drum)
00:42:438 (1) - mmm I see the pattern you are making but still... (spacing)
00:45:638 (1) - shorten to 00:48:038 - because recovery time
00:48:838 (1,2,1,2) - this part is pretty calm compared to 00:52:038 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - even though the music is basically the same.. if transitioning music from calm to more intense, maybe make the transition smoother eg. 00:52:838 (2) - after that point, 1/2 rhythm is used. maybe use broken 1/2 rhythm and/or add 1/2 circles before this bit?
00:58:238 (4) - spacing
01:02:038 (2,4) - overlap looks kinda weird
01:04:438 - , 01:04:638 - add something to these times please? the break in rhythm is kinda weird and I feel as though the next section isn't build up well enough
01:12:838 (2,1,2) - maybe linear flow would be better
01:15:838 (5) - spacing orz
01:17:438 - circle please?
01:19:038 (1,3) - make them symmetrical please?
01:24:038 (1) - fix the curve in this slider?

Del's Hard

00:20:642 (2) - I seriously don't like this slider because the slider tail is over the top of a very strong piano note... maybe consider this rhythm?
00:12:842 (3) - move to x:478 y:187?
01:00:442 (2) - kinda looks messy... eg. in here 01:00:042 (1,2,3) - , slider 1 leads off directly to the head of slider 2, but slider 2 leads diagonally to slider 3... a solution could be this but i'm sure you can come up with something better

General Comments

I don't feel comfortable with modding the insanes because the styles are kinda unfamiliar to me... However, I will mod them if you decide to continue on with this mapset

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-11-27T16:37:37+00:00

okay, I just revive it for the last time.

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-11-27T16:47:23+00:00

-Hakurei- wrote:
i still remember about the request for M4M stuff~~~ and yes, just a quick check only

[General]
AiMod
[Easy]
00:02:838 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/kUXnj/45564ef2a9.jpg
00:04:838 (4,1) - neat this blanket
00:54:838 (2,3) - almost neat enough
01:27:238 (1,2) - remove those finish. and for 01:27:238 (1) - head finish
end from here. GL!

Dono027 wrote:
Quick mod for Easy

Easy

00:05:638 (1) - Question : Why the end of the slider don't go to the next white tick ?
00:14:438 (2,3) - Slider with 1 reverse + circle ?
01:04:038 (5) - I don't know, the slider need to have the end to the red tick ? I prefer the white tick, but you do all that you want :3

Wingmann wrote:
You said you wanted a mod for normal? well, 1/4 of a mod
Everything looks fine to me.
Easy:
Overall: Might need to use fewer sliders from 00:23:238 (1) to 00:48:038 (4) -
00:49:238 (2,3) - are overlapping, kinda ruins all the nice blankets you have!
Otherwise, Easy is perfect.

Rizen wrote:
~~mod in progress~~

Hello o/ From kiwi queue

General
I've noticed that in the mp3, there is a little bit of static at the beginning. consider either finding a new mp3 or edit this static out (if you find a new mp3, try finda 192kbps one; your current on is 128kbps)
background file type .png -> .jpg
Also your video still has the audio track (need to remove to reduce file size)
rip IMT
Source better to use "Charlotte" then put existing source into tags

Easy
About the NC, I understand that you NC'd 00:02:438 (1) - because of the piano starts there, but this diff is still an easy.. I would consider using constant NC throughout the entire diff. that means remove at 00:02:438 (3) - , 00:04:038 (5) - NC, 00:05:638 (1) - remove NC
00:05:638 (1) - consider extending this slider to 00:06:838 -. This is because the sound at 00:06:838 - is basically the same as the sound at 00:06:638 -. Better to cover both sounds instead of covering only one and neglecting the other
00:13:638 (1,2,3,4) - constant 1/1 slider spam is no fun to play... consider this rhythm
00:24:038 (2,4) - I think it will look more aesthetically pleasing if you curve both of these sliders (it will also slightly help with flow) like this
00:23:238 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - mmm... 1/1 slider spam for 25 seconds isn't very fun... I recommend adding variation to this part such as 00:24:838 (3,4) - 2/1 slider then a circle. Can also try this at 00:29:638 (1) -
01:04:038 (5) - end slider at 01:04:438 - ? I know you are following the vocals at this part, the note at 01:04:838 - is much stronger than the vocals imo.
01:13:638 (4) - I would extend this to 01:14:438 - to cover the drumming which starts at 01:14:038 - .
01:14:638 (1) - if you apply above, make this slider a 1/1 slider starting at 01:14:838 (1) -
01:16:838 (4,1) - same thing I said before at 01:04:038 (5) - .
01:22:438 (3) - forgot clap at slider tail?
General Comments

I don't feel comfortable with modding the insanes because the styles are kinda unfamiliar to me... However, I will mod them if you decide to continue on with this mapset

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-11-27T18:27:32+00:00

@Rizen: fixed all your symmetric, spacing suggestions. Though I differed from the rhythmical ones since you modded the old diff because Kyle didn't update my diff. Thanks a bunch for your mod!

I AM AN UPDATE

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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Video,0,"Charlotte op.avi"
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Underforest

5,895 posts

Joined July 2015

Underforest 2015-11-28T00:54:16+00:00

Nice to see this back! Love your mapset, I'll put you a star. Modding!

友利奈緒, かわいい~

General

00:00:100 - 00:00:272 - Delete that noise from the MP3
Put custom colours, it's optional but with it looks great
Kiai should be end in 01:27:238
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard tags are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard audio preview time are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard BPM offset are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it
No spinner on Easy, Hard and Insane?
Remove Raiden and [I]MMoRTal[S] from the tags cause these GDs are now removed

Easy
00:05:638 (1) - This slider should be end in 00:06:838
00:48:838 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?

Well beatmapped

Rocket's Normal (spanish)

offtopic

♪ Llegó el lechero, llegó del SAO ♪

Ya era hora de usar mi español ewe

Consejo: Deberías poner 3.5 como tamaño del círculo
00:07:638 (1) - Es opcional, deberías eliminar esto, la ruleta necesita un pequeño espacio para los nuevos jugadores

00:16:838 (2) - Un poco distanciado ¿no crees?
00:21:038 (2,3) - Lo mismo
00:52:838 (2,3) - ¿Ctrl+G?
01:00:038 (1) - Tal vez sería mejor esto

01:04:438 - ¿Podrías poner un hit circle?
01:08:038 (1,2,1,2) - uguuu~ Estos sliders no concuerdan para un Normal como el tuyo
01:20:838 (1,2,1,2) - Lo mismo

Del's Hard
Your hard is unrankable for 3 issues, you should be fix it

00:18:842 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+G to this notes
00:22:942 (5) - Delete?
00:48:442 (4) - I guess this kind of slider is for Insanes
00:54:442 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+G?
01:01:542 (6) - Same as 00:22:942 (5)
01:28:642 (1) - Finish hitsound?

Chocox's Insane
✓ No issues founded. Great job!

A's Bravery
Just put A's Insane or A's Bravely (no "r")

✓ No issues founded. Great job!

I hope this can helpful

加油, Ky

Last edited by Underforest 2015-11-28T18:37:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-11-28T11:23:17+00:00

I am making a small word play with the song's title, Bravely means doing something 'with bravery', and Bravery is well, bravery (heroism?)

Although I did some small changes, so please update:

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:A's Bravery
Source:シャーロット
Tags:Charlotte op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Raiden [I]MMoRTal[S] Chocox
BeatmapID:743750
BeatmapSetID:336036

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Del05

482 posts

Joined May 2014

Del05 2015-11-29T06:42:48+00:00

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HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-02T17:42:24+00:00

Reply to AlejandroMedia

AlejandroMedia wrote:
Rocket's Normal (spanish)
♪ Llegó el lechero, llegó del SAO ♪ Ese Kirito es todo un desmadre xd

Ya era hora de usar mi español ewe

Consejo: Deberías poner 3.5 como tamaño del círculo. ¿Por qué? XD Yo creo que 3.2 juega genial para no hacer overlaps considerando el DS que maneja la dificultad.
00:07:638 (1) - Es opcional, deberías eliminar esto, la ruleta necesita un pequeño espacio para los nuevos jugadores DUNE! <3
00:16:838 (2) - Un poco distanciado ¿no crees? Yo re-toqué este objecto y el DS está bien. o-o
00:21:038 (2,3) - Lo mismo ^
00:52:838 (2,3) - ¿Ctrl+G? Ugh. /u\ Lo intenté, pero se ve feu. u.u
01:00:038 (1) - Tal vez sería mejor esto No se ve mal, pero claramente la batería tiene un sonido que el slider esta siguiendo por estar en el sample set Normal.

01:04:438 - ¿Podrías poner un hit circle? S e g u r o
01:08:038 (1,2,1,2) - uguuu~ Estos sliders no concuerdan para un Normal como el tuyo ¿Se te ocurre algo mejor? /u\
01:20:838 (1,2,1,2) - Lo mismo ^

I AM HUNGRY GIMME TOMATOS

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Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-12-05T04:31:21+00:00

AlejandroMedia wrote:
Nice to see this back! Love your mapset, I'll put you a star. Modding!

友利奈緒, かわいい~

General
00:00:100 - 00:00:272 - Delete that noise from the MP3
Put custom colours, it's optional but with it looks great will put later
Kiai should be end in 01:27:238 a little doubt on this.
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard tags are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard audio preview time are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it
UNRANKABLE Del's Hard BPM offset are causing conflict will overall mapset, fix it fixed
No spinner on Easy, Hard and Insane? this song, really not quite suitable to use spinner for me.
Remove Raiden and [I]MMoRTal[S] from the tags cause these GDs are now removed fixed
Easy
00:05:638 (1) - This slider should be end in 00:06:838
00:48:838 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?

Well beatmapped
even if it is well mapped, I still remapped it, since I agree that the modding from Rizen, which mentioned using 25 second 1/1 slider is quite boring.

I hope this can helpful 加油, Ky 感謝:)

Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-12-05T05:02:47+00:00

[HR88's Normal]
00:00:838 (1,2) - I don't like the first two object being blanketed, I just think it is a kind of breaking flowing, as the turning angle is quite large. But

SPOILER

00:01:638 (3,4,1,2) - also, the turning angle here is large also, making the flowing not that good. At last, I think it is not smooth to play.

SPOILER

00:07:238 - As you hear the sound here, I think it is better not to skip it. I know it is following the recovery time of the spinner 00:05:638 (1) - , but I still think this sound should be mapped by changing spinner to slider.

00:15:238 (1,2) - could you mind to blanket each other, just like

SPOILER

seems better look.

00:24:638 (4) - suggested to delete this, just like 00:27:838 - , do not content the both for emphasising 00:24:838 - .
00:34:438 (1,1) - um...overlapping.

SPOILER

00:42:438 (1) - curving is quite weird... better to use 3-dot slider instead?

00:45:638 (1) - I don't know about the purpose of having spinner here. rhythm here just like the previous. Why spinner here but not the other, and why not slider here also? Also, the ending of the spinner is quite weird 00:48:038 - , there is no strong sound, it seems that you just end here becasue of the recovery time.

01:00:038 (1) - seldom do I see 1/1 reverse twice, just feel weird on this. I think it is not a big deal. Just point out for convention. If you want to change it, I suggestion two 1/1 slider instead.

I think you can have a great improve in pattern

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-06T13:40:15+00:00

Thank you so much for the mod, tried to apply all your suggestions. I still disagree with removing the second spinner because it's following a slight sound because I was lazy to make a slider art. Hope it looks better to your eyes.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:Charlotte
Tags:シャーロット op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Charlotte op.avi"
0,0,"charlotte.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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61638,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
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Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2015-12-11T12:25:45+00:00

ok here's part 2 (no kds)

this will be a quickie because the diffs are already well modded

Chocococks

00:52:438 (3) - maybe a 1/2 slider?
01:03:038 (5,1) - will this play better? this
01:10:438 (3) - maybe ctrl+g this?
this is just a mini thing but 01:19:838 (2,3) - compared to 00:03:038 (4,5) - looks the same but the rhythm spacing is different (one is 1/4 and the other is 1/2). Altering one slightly would be great, but you could use "the time distance between the usage of patterns is large" to justify this

A's Bravelry

00:49:038 (2) - the slider is stacked on top of the end of a stream, which could be deceiving to players as being 1/4 spaced from the stream when it is actually 1/2. I would consider changing the rhythm to something like this to fix this. The circles would also be placed where the two piano sounds are 00:49:237 (2,3) - , which helps out rhythmically
01:17:438 (3) - is the normal whistle intentional?

no kds

Last edited by Rizen 2015-12-11T22:12:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-12-11T21:28:34+00:00

Rizen wrote:
A's Bravelry

00:49:038 (2) - the slider is stacked on top of the end of a stream, which could be deceiving to players as being 1/4 spaced from the stream when it is actually 1/2. I would consider changing the rhythm to something like this to fix this. The circles would also be placed where the two piano sounds are 00:49:237 (2,3) - , which helps out rhythmically Yeah it is a bit misleading, but the hold is on purpose, the music holds with it and a slider feels kinda wrong, the current one is just fine.
01:17:438 (3) - is the normal whistle intentional? Yes.

no kds

Thanks, regardless, I made a small change to the pattern here 01:17:038 (8) -

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Xinying

559 posts

Joined July 2013

Xinying 2015-12-12T16:04:07+00:00

Rizen

Rizen wrote:
ok here's part 2 (no kds)

this will be a quickie because the diffs are already well modded

Chocococks

00:52:438 (3) - maybe a 1/2 slider? okay
01:03:038 (5,1) - will this play better? this tbh I don't like how both ways are played , my pattern has flow issue , and I don't like how your pattern is designed , sorry but no change for now , will change when I find something better.
01:10:438 (3) - maybe ctrl+g this? Just wondering if it affects the flow to 01:11:238 (1) ? No change for now , I like how it is symmetrical.
this is just a mini thing but 01:19:838 (2,3) - compared to 00:03:038 (4,5) - looks the same but the rhythm spacing is different (one is 1/4 and the other is 1/2). Altering one slightly would be great, but you could use "the time distance between the usage of patterns is large" to justify this Fixed this , noticed the vocal at 01:20:238 (3) required some emphasis , now the slider is changed to blanket 01:19:038 (5)'s tail and flow (perfectly?) to 01:20:838 (1).

thanks for mod \:D/

update , tell me if I screw up the file or anything

Alpe

328 posts

Joined December 2014

Alpe 2015-12-20T14:07:05+00:00

Hello from my modding queue

[Easy]
00:04:038 (1,2) - Do this more like this.
00:28:438 (4,5) - This is really confusing for beginner because they click earlier.
00:41:238 (4,5) - ^
01:03:438 (3,1) - There is a beat between those slider. Maybe but one circle between the slider's?
01:15:238 (2,3) - ^
01:17:238 (4) - Increase slider length.

[Rocket's Normal]
00:15:238 (1,2) - Do this more like this.
00:42:438 (1,2) - Do this more perfectly.
00:54:438 (3,4) - Optimize this to this.

[Del's Hard]
Wow everything is awesome!
01:15:838 (1,3) - Probably this may be a bad overlap (you can let it).

[Chocox's Insane]
00:12:438 (2,3,4,5,6) - Probably more curvy.
00:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:06:238 (4) - Strg + G

[A's Bravery]
00:09:638 (3,4) - I have a problem with that DS

00:36:038 (1) - Strg + G
00:36:838 (3) - Do this more like this.
01:11:038 (7,8,9,1) - 1/6 ?
01:14:038 (5,6,7,8,1) - Probably more curvy.
01:19:138 (2,3,4) - This sounds weird (Soft sample = Normal)

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-20T15:52:33+00:00

Azulae: I tried to improve the blanket of the last two objects. I hope it looks better to your eyes. I strongly believe the blanket among these 00:15:238 (1,2) - isn't that bad. Thanks for modding!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Charlotte Op - Bravely You.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 61438
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:Bravely You (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Bravely You (TV size)
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Kyle Y
Version:Rocket's Normal
Source:Charlotte
Tags:シャーロット op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Chocox
BeatmapID:743753
BeatmapSetID:336036

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3.2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Charlotte op.avi"
0,0,"charlotte.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Avishay

1,250 posts

Joined April 2013

Avishay 2015-12-21T15:12:31+00:00

Azulae wrote:
Hello from my modding queue

[A's Bravery]
00:09:638 (3,4) - I have a problem with that DS okay?
00:36:038 (1) - Strg + G why?
00:36:838 (3) - Do this more like this. should just said a blanket, slightly improved.
01:11:038 (7,8,9,1) - 1/6 ? yeah
01:14:038 (5,6,7,8,1) - Probably more curvy. change pattern
01:19:138 (2,3,4) - This sounds weird (Soft sample = Normal) egh? not realy sure what you try to say here

Changed some minor stuff as well, thanks.

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Creator:Kyle Y
Version:A's Bravery
Source:Charlotte
Tags:シャーロット op Del05 HappyRocket88 Avishay Chocox
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Kyle Y

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Kyle Y 2015-12-24T03:02:34+00:00

Azulae wrote:
Hello from my modding queue

[Easy]
00:04:038 (1,2) - Do this more like this. fixed
00:28:438 (4,5) - This is really confusing for beginner because they click earlier. I think it is okay to do so, it is not that high in bpm
00:41:238 (4,5) - ^^
01:03:438 (3,1) - There is a beat between those slider. Maybe but one circle between the slider's? the vocal sound seems more loud that the beat sound
01:15:238 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:17:238 (4) - Increase slider length. could you explain why?

Speed of Snail

548 posts

Joined March 2014

Speed of Snail 2015-12-26T06:38:12+00:00

Hey, srry I'm late, here from my queue.

ROCKET'S NORMAL

00:00:838 - (1) I know this is likely a lot of work for you, but I feel like this could be completed by pulling 1 up so the left side of it blankets circle 2, which would also involve shifting slider 4 left and up to avoid overlap, but it would make a cool and aesthetically beautiful block pattern.

00:07:638 - (1) This overlap is just ugly, maybe do it like this?

00:07:838 - (2) This blanket is off, re-align it.

00:11:038 - (9) Would this blanketing 8 be too much to ask?

00:20:038 - (4,1) These two notes look strangely close to each other, try spacing them out just a little more.

00:26:438 - (1,2) Broken blanket again.

00:30:238 - (2) again weird spacing on this note, looks like it's being squished, try re-organizing note placement.

meh, I had nothing to say about the later parts, the map is pretty good, and largely already finished, although it has a distinct lack of polish early on, just try to clean it up a little and it'll be finished. nice job overall.

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-27T18:53:59+00:00

TheOnlyLeon
00:00:838 (1) - I tried to understand what you meant here but I honestly got confuse because there's no overlap in this segment. Would you mind rephrasing this issue?
00:07:238 (2,2) - Rearranged the overlap to not being noticeable in this pattern, however didn't do exactly the same you pointed out.
Tried my best to improve the blankets among the objects you listed. Hope it looks nicer to your eyes.

Thanks for modding!

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Kyle Y

1,204 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Kyle Y 2015-12-28T13:22:05+00:00

Normal Again

00:05:438 - the strong sound start at here, but weak at 00:05:638 - , then why not start a slider at 00:05:438 - ?

00:07:838 - same case,

00:10:638 - missing vocal sound.
00:13:238 (7) - suggested to change to 2 circle, becasue most of the beats are stronger than before.

00:15:238 (1,2) - please blanket this 2

SPOILER

00:19:638 (3) - same, change to 2 circles
00:20:438 - missing beat sound.
00:23:038 - This is a part of stream right?

00:28:038 - 00:40:838 - In fact, the part consist of 2 rhythm, one is just like what you map, the second, music part is like this:

Therefore, if you feel boring to use same rhythm all the time, maybe you can try to use this rhythm, for example:

00:36:038 - same rhythm like before, why so different from before? I cannot understand...
00:42:438 (1) - I think please avoid to use many dots to draw a slider, becasue the shape is not natural and quite weird in looking
00:44:038 - 00:34:438 - consist of rhythm also, but different from before:

(but still a beat sound between 3 and 4)
00:48:838 - I think this part is okay? but just see if you want to change a little or not after I tell you the music part of this part is full of 1/2
01:00:038 (1) - as I mentioned last time, seldom do we use reverse twice or more for 1/2 or even longer slider. I think it is better to chop into 2

01:03:838 - I think better to connect with circle 5 to have a slider, between it looks like a continue vocal sound not, otherwise the circle 5 is quite weird to click, just base on the beat, but seems this song is vocal sound>beat sound
01:04:638 - missing vocal
01:05:238 (2) - change to 2 circle, same as above
01:05:638 (3,4) - combine,
01:07:438 - vocal end at here, please start with a circle at 01:07:638 -
(from 01:01:638 - )

01:08:038 (1,2,1,2) - rhyme is okay of course, just simple 3/1 and 3/2 reverse. but the slider drawing is not that good. I think it is better to have a red dot such that the slider looks like not that long, and you can make slider patterns also.
01:14:838 (3) - 2 circles
01:17:238 - missing beat sound
01:16:038 - you empty this mean you want to follow vocal sound here right? then why not 01:17:638 - this beat also?

For the ncs, it is better to use 8 beats one nc instead of 4, as the combo chain seems too short.

I will check for slider pattern later after this rhythm mod.

HappyRocket88

4,321 posts

Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-12-31T01:34:02+00:00

Kyle
00:05:438 changed as suggested.
00:07:838 yeah.
00:10:638 Here I started to follow drums, so no need to follow vocals anymore due the complex rhythm it might imply.
00:13:238 (7) If I do that, it will give complex 1/2 rhythm for this simple normal. I want to keep the playability in a relaxing with the 1/2 slider because it's easier to click it in that way. This apply to all the suggestions on changing 1/2 sliders to circles though.
00:20:438 added with a downbeat.
from here 00:28:038 to 00:40:838 I wanted to give variety. It's boring to map the same 1/1 slider and a note as I did here 00:23:238 (1,2,3) , so better changed the structure and used 3/2 sliders with reverses. It doesn't flow that bad imo.
00:42:438 (1) In the editor looks weird, but I don't see any problem while playing over this slider though.
01:03:838 changed as suggested with a 1/2 slider.
01:04:638 ^
01:07:438 indeed, the vocal ends here 01:07:838 but I didn't want to emphasize it with a 5/2 slider though.
01:14:838 (3) yep 2 circles are now here. \:D/

Thanks for modding, if you see any problem with it don't hesitate to remove it.

Happy New Year!

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【Notice】
Because of the coming public exam, I am going to stop the process on this mapset.
And I think I 99% will not continue this mapset.
Sorry about it.

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