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2015-10-21 22:59 CaffeAmericano: 01:17:307 (1,2) - is not very good imo :3
2015-10-21 22:59 CaffeAmericano: 01:17:907 (3,4) - is better
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: the spacing of it?
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: too far?
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: flow
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: oh
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: I'm bad with flow, but two sliders in opposite direction is always better flow than same direction
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: especially when far apart liek those :3
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: 01:18:507 (5,9) -
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: these two notes has ver similar sounds in music
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: yet, 9 is emphasized with large DS, while 5 is not
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: consider increasing ds at 01:18:207 (4,5) - , or decreasing ds at01:18:957 (8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: i see your ppint
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: point
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: I think this could be better as slider
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because of music
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: like a mini slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: 1/4 slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: 1/2
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because music is very similar to 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: Just consider it. I might be wrong lel
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: There's a very prominent drum beats here
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: I think you shouldn't leave this blank
2015-10-21 23:04 mr tribble: there is, to me, a clear sound in between 01:24:507 (1) - and 01:24:957 (3) - and to me i does not sound like it should be a slider
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: ye
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: it's good if can back it up your deciion xD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I thought you were following keyboard sound, and 01:24:507 - and 01:24:807 - seemed to have similar keyboard sound :3
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: but again, just an opinion XD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I guess that's it for that part :3
2015-10-21 23:07 CaffeAmericano: You asked for jump flow, but I pointed out only 1 flow issue, and other random stuff lol
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: any other part?
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: 02:24:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: yes....
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: ;w;
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: even longer 0_O
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: maybe nc here: 02:25:707 (5) -
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: and nc here:02:28:107 (2) - instead of 02:27:807 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:10 CaffeAmericano: And I'm not sure if it's bad flow or just not my style, but I don't like these: 02:25:707 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: But ignore my suggestion about new combo is you follow your specific logic
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: yeah, i have been thinking of changing that one
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: It's just that I place new combo only on big white tick xD
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: but i ran out of ideas
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: so i left
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: it
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: i see :3
2015-10-21 23:12 CaffeAmericano: there's emphasis on the music here:02:35:907 (8) - but you put large ds in here: 02:36:057 (9) -
2015-10-21 23:12 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:13 mr tribble: i dont know how to fix that ;w;
2015-10-21 23:13 CaffeAmericano: I'd suggest that you don't worry too much about symmetry
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: you noticed that huh xD
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: xD
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i just wanted to make good patterns ;w;
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: and now I realized why you placed this 01:24:507 (1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i was not thinking of flow at the time
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: a circle instead of slider here01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: hear it?
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: It sounds good. I take back what I said about changing 01:24:807 (2) - into slider lel
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: OH YEAH]
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: one more section
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: 04:58:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) -
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: feel free
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: and ill count it as a mod
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: to just put your name down in my maps thread
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: xD
2015-10-21 23:16 CaffeAmericano: oke :3
2015-10-21 23:17 CaffeAmericano: there's drum beat here: 05:03:207 - 05:03:282 -
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: but not here05:03:432 (4) -
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: so shorten slider
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: Maybe you were following the vocal, but I'm sure sure if it's very fitting
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: and put a circle there?
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: at that point i was
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: That could work
2015-10-21 23:19 mr tribble: ill try that
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: and I wasn't sure if I should bring this up, because it's not always bad
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: but I've noticed
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: a lot of sliders have direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: that's same sand jumping direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:03:957 (6,1) -
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:05:157 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:20 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: When doing this kind of sliders, player has to slow down cursor movement, but without changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: it's easier to slow down cursor movement when changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: so it's usually better to have circle-slider jump to look like this:05:08:007 (3,4) -
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: instead of above two
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: so, no reverse arrow?
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: nono
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: i dont understand
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Hj/994639e282.jpg) is generally worse than
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: doing a long slider?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Ii/8df1823bae.jpg)
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: so
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: going in straight lines
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is bad
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is what your are saying
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: in terms of movement
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and i think im going to take out those reverse sliders anyways
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and make them shorter
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: http://puu.sh/kT6Lo/1c65fa89ea.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: this is also bad
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: they annoy me now
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: is is generally better: http://puu.sh/kT6M4/eeea20d32e.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: are those pictures from my map?
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: I made it as an example lel
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: But I'm speaking generally, they are sometimes alright
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: I'm not sure when though. I'm just repeating what some experience mapper pointed out on my map lel
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: drum beat here: 05:06:282 - not here:05:06:432 (8) -
2015-10-21 23:25 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it for this section
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sorry i didn't point out too may flow issues. I don't think I'm any better than you in making flows :3
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: im going to update it, and can you look at my changes
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sure
2015-10-21 23:27 CaffeAmericano: could you point out the changes :3?
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: uhhhh
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: 01:17:307 (15,16) -
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: used to be 2 sldiers of the same directin
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: i will change the combo
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 01:18:207 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: ds spacing issue, i think fixed
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: I think you might wanna increase ds at 01:18:207 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 02:25:407 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i promise i will think of a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: because 01:18:507 (3,7) - sounds very similar
2015-10-21 23:29 CaffeAmericano: okay lol
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: and ill try
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: 02:35:607 (6,7,8,9,10,11) -
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: still need to figure out a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:30 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:04:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: this was that bad flow slider section
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:06:057 (11,12,13,14,15) - moved the beat to the drum
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: and i think that was it
2015-10-21 23:31 CaffeAmericano: yeah
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: for 05:04:407 -
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: consider making like this: http://puu.sh/kT7dc/272e430882.jpg
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: more ds?
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ah
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: if you slow the music down to 25%,
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: there's drum 05:04:482 -
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: but not 05:04:632 -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: this used to be a slider covering a beat as well 05:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: and ill fix
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: oke xD
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it from me :3
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I'll post irc on your map page
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: best of luck with the map xD
2015-10-21 23:34 mr tribble: thanks :3
2015-10-21 22:59 CaffeAmericano: 01:17:907 (3,4) - is better
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: the spacing of it?
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: too far?
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: flow
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: oh
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: I'm bad with flow, but two sliders in opposite direction is always better flow than same direction
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: especially when far apart liek those :3
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: 01:18:507 (5,9) -
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: these two notes has ver similar sounds in music
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: yet, 9 is emphasized with large DS, while 5 is not
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: consider increasing ds at 01:18:207 (4,5) - , or decreasing ds at01:18:957 (8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: i see your ppint
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: point
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: I think this could be better as slider
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because of music
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: like a mini slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: 1/4 slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: 1/2
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because music is very similar to 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: Just consider it. I might be wrong lel
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: There's a very prominent drum beats here
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: I think you shouldn't leave this blank
2015-10-21 23:04 mr tribble: there is, to me, a clear sound in between 01:24:507 (1) - and 01:24:957 (3) - and to me i does not sound like it should be a slider
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: ye
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: it's good if can back it up your deciion xD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I thought you were following keyboard sound, and 01:24:507 - and 01:24:807 - seemed to have similar keyboard sound :3
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: but again, just an opinion XD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I guess that's it for that part :3
2015-10-21 23:07 CaffeAmericano: You asked for jump flow, but I pointed out only 1 flow issue, and other random stuff lol
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: any other part?
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: 02:24:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: yes....
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: ;w;
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: even longer 0_O
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: maybe nc here: 02:25:707 (5) -
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: and nc here:02:28:107 (2) - instead of 02:27:807 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:10 CaffeAmericano: And I'm not sure if it's bad flow or just not my style, but I don't like these: 02:25:707 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: But ignore my suggestion about new combo is you follow your specific logic
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: yeah, i have been thinking of changing that one
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: It's just that I place new combo only on big white tick xD
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: but i ran out of ideas
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: so i left
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: it
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: i see :3
2015-10-21 23:12 CaffeAmericano: there's emphasis on the music here:02:35:907 (8) - but you put large ds in here: 02:36:057 (9) -
2015-10-21 23:12 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:13 mr tribble: i dont know how to fix that ;w;
2015-10-21 23:13 CaffeAmericano: I'd suggest that you don't worry too much about symmetry
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: you noticed that huh xD
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: xD
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i just wanted to make good patterns ;w;
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: and now I realized why you placed this 01:24:507 (1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i was not thinking of flow at the time
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: a circle instead of slider here01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: hear it?
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: It sounds good. I take back what I said about changing 01:24:807 (2) - into slider lel
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: OH YEAH]
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: one more section
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: 04:58:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) -
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: feel free
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: and ill count it as a mod
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: to just put your name down in my maps thread
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: xD
2015-10-21 23:16 CaffeAmericano: oke :3
2015-10-21 23:17 CaffeAmericano: there's drum beat here: 05:03:207 - 05:03:282 -
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: but not here05:03:432 (4) -
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: so shorten slider
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: Maybe you were following the vocal, but I'm sure sure if it's very fitting
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: and put a circle there?
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: at that point i was
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: That could work
2015-10-21 23:19 mr tribble: ill try that
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: and I wasn't sure if I should bring this up, because it's not always bad
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: but I've noticed
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: a lot of sliders have direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: that's same sand jumping direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:03:957 (6,1) -
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:05:157 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:20 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: When doing this kind of sliders, player has to slow down cursor movement, but without changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: it's easier to slow down cursor movement when changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: so it's usually better to have circle-slider jump to look like this:05:08:007 (3,4) -
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: instead of above two
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: so, no reverse arrow?
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: nono
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: i dont understand
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Hj/994639e282.jpg) is generally worse than
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: doing a long slider?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Ii/8df1823bae.jpg)
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: so
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: going in straight lines
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is bad
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is what your are saying
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: in terms of movement
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and i think im going to take out those reverse sliders anyways
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and make them shorter
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: http://puu.sh/kT6Lo/1c65fa89ea.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: this is also bad
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: they annoy me now
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: is is generally better: http://puu.sh/kT6M4/eeea20d32e.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: are those pictures from my map?
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: I made it as an example lel
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: But I'm speaking generally, they are sometimes alright
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: I'm not sure when though. I'm just repeating what some experience mapper pointed out on my map lel
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: drum beat here: 05:06:282 - not here:05:06:432 (8) -
2015-10-21 23:25 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it for this section
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sorry i didn't point out too may flow issues. I don't think I'm any better than you in making flows :3
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: im going to update it, and can you look at my changes
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sure
2015-10-21 23:27 CaffeAmericano: could you point out the changes :3?
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: uhhhh
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: 01:17:307 (15,16) -
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: used to be 2 sldiers of the same directin
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: i will change the combo
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 01:18:207 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: ds spacing issue, i think fixed
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: I think you might wanna increase ds at 01:18:207 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 02:25:407 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i promise i will think of a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: because 01:18:507 (3,7) - sounds very similar
2015-10-21 23:29 CaffeAmericano: okay lol
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: and ill try
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: 02:35:607 (6,7,8,9,10,11) -
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: still need to figure out a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:30 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:04:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: this was that bad flow slider section
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:06:057 (11,12,13,14,15) - moved the beat to the drum
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: and i think that was it
2015-10-21 23:31 CaffeAmericano: yeah
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: for 05:04:407 -
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: consider making like this: http://puu.sh/kT7dc/272e430882.jpg
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: more ds?
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ah
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: if you slow the music down to 25%,
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: there's drum 05:04:482 -
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: but not 05:04:632 -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: this used to be a slider covering a beat as well 05:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: and ill fix
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: oke xD
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it from me :3
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I'll post irc on your map page
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: best of luck with the map xD
2015-10-21 23:34 mr tribble: thanks :3
Good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks Caffe for the mod, i will definitely try to work on the flow of the map more :3CaffeAmericano wrote:
From irc :32015-10-21 22:59 CaffeAmericano: 01:17:307 (1,2) - is not very good imo :3
2015-10-21 22:59 CaffeAmericano: 01:17:907 (3,4) - is better
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: the spacing of it?
2015-10-21 22:59 mr tribble: too far?
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: flow
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: oh
2015-10-21 23:00 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: I'm bad with flow, but two sliders in opposite direction is always better flow than same direction
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: especially when far apart liek those :3
2015-10-21 23:00 CaffeAmericano: 01:18:507 (5,9) -
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: these two notes has ver similar sounds in music
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: yet, 9 is emphasized with large DS, while 5 is not
2015-10-21 23:01 CaffeAmericano: consider increasing ds at 01:18:207 (4,5) - , or decreasing ds at01:18:957 (8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: i see your ppint
2015-10-21 23:02 mr tribble: point
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:02 CaffeAmericano: I think this could be better as slider
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because of music
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: like a mini slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 mr tribble: 1/4 slider?
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: 1/2
2015-10-21 23:03 CaffeAmericano: just because music is very similar to 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: Just consider it. I might be wrong lel
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: 01:24:507 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: There's a very prominent drum beats here
2015-10-21 23:04 CaffeAmericano: I think you shouldn't leave this blank
2015-10-21 23:04 mr tribble: there is, to me, a clear sound in between 01:24:507 (1) - and 01:24:957 (3) - and to me i does not sound like it should be a slider
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: ye
2015-10-21 23:05 CaffeAmericano: it's good if can back it up your deciion xD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I thought you were following keyboard sound, and 01:24:507 - and 01:24:807 - seemed to have similar keyboard sound :3
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: but again, just an opinion XD
2015-10-21 23:06 CaffeAmericano: I guess that's it for that part :3
2015-10-21 23:07 CaffeAmericano: You asked for jump flow, but I pointed out only 1 flow issue, and other random stuff lol
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: any other part?
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: 02:24:507 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: yes....
2015-10-21 23:08 mr tribble: ;w;
2015-10-21 23:08 CaffeAmericano: even longer 0_O
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: maybe nc here: 02:25:707 (5) -
2015-10-21 23:09 CaffeAmericano: and nc here:02:28:107 (2) - instead of 02:27:807 (1) -
2015-10-21 23:10 CaffeAmericano: And I'm not sure if it's bad flow or just not my style, but I don't like these: 02:25:707 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: But ignore my suggestion about new combo is you follow your specific logic
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: yeah, i have been thinking of changing that one
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: It's just that I place new combo only on big white tick xD
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: but i ran out of ideas
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: so i left
2015-10-21 23:11 mr tribble: it
2015-10-21 23:11 CaffeAmericano: i see :3
2015-10-21 23:12 CaffeAmericano: there's emphasis on the music here:02:35:907 (8) - but you put large ds in here: 02:36:057 (9) -
2015-10-21 23:12 mr tribble: hmmm
2015-10-21 23:13 mr tribble: i dont know how to fix that ;w;
2015-10-21 23:13 CaffeAmericano: I'd suggest that you don't worry too much about symmetry
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: you noticed that huh xD
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: xD
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i just wanted to make good patterns ;w;
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: and now I realized why you placed this 01:24:507 (1,2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: i was not thinking of flow at the time
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: a circle instead of slider here01:24:807 (2) -
2015-10-21 23:14 mr tribble: hear it?
2015-10-21 23:14 CaffeAmericano: It sounds good. I take back what I said about changing 01:24:807 (2) - into slider lel
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: OH YEAH]
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: one more section
2015-10-21 23:15 mr tribble: 04:58:107 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) -
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: feel free
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: and ill count it as a mod
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: to just put your name down in my maps thread
2015-10-21 23:16 mr tribble: xD
2015-10-21 23:16 CaffeAmericano: oke :3
2015-10-21 23:17 CaffeAmericano: there's drum beat here: 05:03:207 - 05:03:282 -
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: but not here05:03:432 (4) -
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: so shorten slider
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: Maybe you were following the vocal, but I'm sure sure if it's very fitting
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: and put a circle there?
2015-10-21 23:18 mr tribble: at that point i was
2015-10-21 23:18 CaffeAmericano: That could work
2015-10-21 23:19 mr tribble: ill try that
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: and I wasn't sure if I should bring this up, because it's not always bad
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: but I've noticed
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: a lot of sliders have direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: that's same sand jumping direction
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:03:957 (6,1) -
2015-10-21 23:19 CaffeAmericano: 05:05:157 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:20 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: When doing this kind of sliders, player has to slow down cursor movement, but without changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: it's easier to slow down cursor movement when changing direction
2015-10-21 23:20 CaffeAmericano: so it's usually better to have circle-slider jump to look like this:05:08:007 (3,4) -
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: instead of above two
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: so, no reverse arrow?
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: nono
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: i dont understand
2015-10-21 23:21 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Hj/994639e282.jpg) is generally worse than
2015-10-21 23:21 mr tribble: doing a long slider?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: this(http://puu.sh/kT6Ii/8df1823bae.jpg)
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: so
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: going in straight lines
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is bad
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: is what your are saying
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:22 CaffeAmericano: in terms of movement
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:22 mr tribble: i can fix
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and i think im going to take out those reverse sliders anyways
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: and make them shorter
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: http://puu.sh/kT6Lo/1c65fa89ea.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: this is also bad
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: they annoy me now
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: is is generally better: http://puu.sh/kT6M4/eeea20d32e.jpg
2015-10-21 23:23 mr tribble: are those pictures from my map?
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: no
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: I made it as an example lel
2015-10-21 23:23 CaffeAmericano: But I'm speaking generally, they are sometimes alright
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: I'm not sure when though. I'm just repeating what some experience mapper pointed out on my map lel
2015-10-21 23:24 CaffeAmericano: drum beat here: 05:06:282 - not here:05:06:432 (8) -
2015-10-21 23:25 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it for this section
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sorry i didn't point out too may flow issues. I don't think I'm any better than you in making flows :3
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ok
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: im going to update it, and can you look at my changes
2015-10-21 23:26 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:26 CaffeAmericano: sure
2015-10-21 23:27 CaffeAmericano: could you point out the changes :3?
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: uhhhh
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: 01:17:307 (15,16) -
2015-10-21 23:27 mr tribble: used to be 2 sldiers of the same directin
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: i will change the combo
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 01:18:207 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: ds spacing issue, i think fixed
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: hmm
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: I think you might wanna increase ds at 01:18:207 (2,3) -
2015-10-21 23:28 mr tribble: 02:25:407 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i promise i will think of a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:28 CaffeAmericano: because 01:18:507 (3,7) - sounds very similar
2015-10-21 23:29 CaffeAmericano: okay lol
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: and ill try
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: 02:35:607 (6,7,8,9,10,11) -
2015-10-21 23:30 mr tribble: still need to figure out a new pattern for this
2015-10-21 23:30 CaffeAmericano: oke
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:04:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: this was that bad flow slider section
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: 05:06:057 (11,12,13,14,15) - moved the beat to the drum
2015-10-21 23:31 mr tribble: and i think that was it
2015-10-21 23:31 CaffeAmericano: yeah
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: for 05:04:407 -
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ?
2015-10-21 23:32 CaffeAmericano: consider making like this: http://puu.sh/kT7dc/272e430882.jpg
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: more ds?
2015-10-21 23:32 mr tribble: ah
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: if you slow the music down to 25%,
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: there's drum 05:04:482 -
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: but not 05:04:632 -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: this used to be a slider covering a beat as well 05:02:907 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-21 23:33 mr tribble: and ill fix
2015-10-21 23:33 CaffeAmericano: oke xD
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I think that's it from me :3
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: I'll post irc on your map page
2015-10-21 23:34 CaffeAmericano: best of luck with the map xD
2015-10-21 23:34 mr tribble: thanks :3
Good luck
Enjoy the new MP3 
Edit: Be sure to put in the map description to redownload if downloaded before 10/24/2015
Edit: Be sure to put in the map description to redownload if downloaded before 10/24/2015
oh hello. how are you. from your m4m queue if it's still open. if you're still working on this then cool. if not then update your m4m queue
we need more dragonforce
we need more dragonforce
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00:01:516 (1) - Slider should end on blue tick
00:07:216 (1) - Remove NC
00:08:716 (1,2) - Repeat one more time
00:09:841 - Should be a circle here
00:13:816 (2,3,4,5) - You mapped drums before this, stick with it, meaning more streams
00:15:841 - Should be a circle here
00:21:916 (1,2,3) - Distance spacing should be constant
00:22:816 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:041 (5) - Convert to stream
00:33:091 (4,5) - Spacing issue, these two should be closer
00:39:616 (5) - Move slider to red tick
00:58:141 - Move kiai time to 00:57:916
01:06:016 (13) - Move slider to red tick
01:11:116 (7) - NC
01:15:616 (13) - Move slider to red tick
01:12:691 (3) - ^
01:15:616 (13) - ^
01:24:316 (1,2,3) - You mapped guitars before this, stick with it
01:25:516 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:766 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:216 (1) - ^
01:39:241 (6) - Convert to stream
01:44:716 (6) - NC
01:47:116 (6) - ^
01:48:316 (11) - ^
01:57:016 (1) - Remove NC
01:57:916 (4) - NC
02:05:341 - Move kiai time to 02:05:116
02:05:116 (1) - Finish hitsound
02:09:691 - Should be a circle here
02:13:216 (13) - Move slider to red tick - there are multiple examples of this throughout the map, fix them
02:14:191 (3,4) - Spacing issue, stream should not "jump"
02:19:891 (3) - Move slider to red tick
02:31:516 (1,2,3) - You mapped guitars before this, stick with it
02:32:716 (1,2,3) - ^
02:41:116 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:316 (1,2,3) - ^
02:43:516 (1) - Make the loop cleaner
02:48:316 (1) - Have the corner blanket 02:47:116 (1)
02:51:241 (3) - Should be a circle here, move slider by one 1/4 tick
02:55:516 (1) - Should end at white tick
02:56:191 (2) - Should start at red tick and end at blue tick
02:56:791 (1) - Move this to 02:56:716
02:57:916 to 03:02:716 - Map this part please, this shouldn't be a break
03:14:416 - Add some notes here
03:15:166 (3) - Should be farther apart
03:23:641 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Make this part similar to 03:22:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 03:21:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
03:28:516 (1) - Remove NC
03:32:341 (2) - Unreadable?
03:33:916 (9) - NC
03:35:266 (3) - Slider should be at 03:35:116 (1)
03:36:016 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:316 (2) - NC
03:36:616 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:916 (1) - ^
03:37:216 (1) - ^
03:37:516 (5) - NC
03:38:566 (1) - Slider should be on white tick
03:39:916 (8) - NC
03:41:416 (1) - Remove NC
03:41:716 (1) - ^
03:42:316 (9) - NC
03:48:091 (3) - Slider should be on white tick
03:49:966 (4) - Slider should be farther apart from 03:50:116 (5)
03:51:916 (9) - NC
03:52:141 (1) - Remove NC
03:52:816 (2) - ^
03:53:116 (6) - NC
03:53:341 (1) - Remove NC
03:54:316 (4) - NC
03:54:541 (1) - Remove NC
03:54:916 (6) - NC
03:55:141 (1) - Remove NC
03:55:516 (2) - NC
03:55:741 (1) - Remove NC
03:56:716 (8) - NC
03:56:941 (1) - Remove NC
03:57:916 (6) - NC
03:58:741 (1) - Remove NC
03:59:116 (6) - NC
03:59:341 (1) - Remove NC
03:59:941 (1) - ^
04:00:316 (2) - NC
04:00:541 (1) - Remove NC
04:01:141 (1) - ^
04:01:516 (6) - NC
04:01:741 (7) - Convert to stream
04:08:566 (1) - Continue stream until 04:08:716, repeat until 04:08:941
04:09:766 (1,2) - Have this be part of stack, note 1 remove NC
04:09:916 (3) - NC
04:11:716 (9) - ^
04:14:116 (5) - ^
04:17:116 (1) - Clean up this slider
04:24:541, 04:24:839 - Remove kiai time
04:27:916 (14) - NC
04:28:366 (1) - Remove NC
04:29:116 (4) - NC
04:29:416 (1) - Remove NC
04:30:016 (1) - ^
04:30:316 (2) - NC
04:30:916 (1) - Remove NC
04:30:916 (1) - Repeat one more time
04:31:141 (2) - Move slider to white tick
04:31:516 (4) - NC
04:31:816 (1) - Remove NC
04:32:416 (1) - ^
04:32:716 (2) - NC
04:36:316 (3) - ^
04:37:516 (2) - Convert to stream ending at 04:38:716
04:38:716 - Add kiai time
04:42:166 (1) - Move to white tick
04:47:716 (9) - Continue stream
04:48:616 (3) - Move slider by one white tick
04:54:316 (7) - NC
04:54:616 (1) - Remove NC
05:00:316 (1) - Make sure repeating arrows are visible
05:06:316 (7) - NC
05:13:516 (9) - ^
05:19:516 (15) - Clean up this slider
00:07:216 (1) - Remove NC
00:08:716 (1,2) - Repeat one more time
00:09:841 - Should be a circle here
00:13:816 (2,3,4,5) - You mapped drums before this, stick with it, meaning more streams
00:15:841 - Should be a circle here
00:21:916 (1,2,3) - Distance spacing should be constant
00:22:816 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:041 (5) - Convert to stream
00:33:091 (4,5) - Spacing issue, these two should be closer
00:39:616 (5) - Move slider to red tick
00:58:141 - Move kiai time to 00:57:916
01:06:016 (13) - Move slider to red tick
01:11:116 (7) - NC
01:15:616 (13) - Move slider to red tick
01:12:691 (3) - ^
01:15:616 (13) - ^
01:24:316 (1,2,3) - You mapped guitars before this, stick with it
01:25:516 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:766 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:216 (1) - ^
01:39:241 (6) - Convert to stream
01:44:716 (6) - NC
01:47:116 (6) - ^
01:48:316 (11) - ^
01:57:016 (1) - Remove NC
01:57:916 (4) - NC
02:05:341 - Move kiai time to 02:05:116
02:05:116 (1) - Finish hitsound
02:09:691 - Should be a circle here
02:13:216 (13) - Move slider to red tick - there are multiple examples of this throughout the map, fix them
02:14:191 (3,4) - Spacing issue, stream should not "jump"
02:19:891 (3) - Move slider to red tick
02:31:516 (1,2,3) - You mapped guitars before this, stick with it
02:32:716 (1,2,3) - ^
02:41:116 (1,2,3) - ^
02:42:316 (1,2,3) - ^
02:43:516 (1) - Make the loop cleaner
02:48:316 (1) - Have the corner blanket 02:47:116 (1)
02:51:241 (3) - Should be a circle here, move slider by one 1/4 tick
02:55:516 (1) - Should end at white tick
02:56:191 (2) - Should start at red tick and end at blue tick
02:56:791 (1) - Move this to 02:56:716
02:57:916 to 03:02:716 - Map this part please, this shouldn't be a break
03:14:416 - Add some notes here
03:15:166 (3) - Should be farther apart
03:23:641 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Make this part similar to 03:22:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 03:21:916 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
03:28:516 (1) - Remove NC
03:32:341 (2) - Unreadable?
03:33:916 (9) - NC
03:35:266 (3) - Slider should be at 03:35:116 (1)
03:36:016 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:316 (2) - NC
03:36:616 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:916 (1) - ^
03:37:216 (1) - ^
03:37:516 (5) - NC
03:38:566 (1) - Slider should be on white tick
03:39:916 (8) - NC
03:41:416 (1) - Remove NC
03:41:716 (1) - ^
03:42:316 (9) - NC
03:48:091 (3) - Slider should be on white tick
03:49:966 (4) - Slider should be farther apart from 03:50:116 (5)
03:51:916 (9) - NC
03:52:141 (1) - Remove NC
03:52:816 (2) - ^
03:53:116 (6) - NC
03:53:341 (1) - Remove NC
03:54:316 (4) - NC
03:54:541 (1) - Remove NC
03:54:916 (6) - NC
03:55:141 (1) - Remove NC
03:55:516 (2) - NC
03:55:741 (1) - Remove NC
03:56:716 (8) - NC
03:56:941 (1) - Remove NC
03:57:916 (6) - NC
03:58:741 (1) - Remove NC
03:59:116 (6) - NC
03:59:341 (1) - Remove NC
03:59:941 (1) - ^
04:00:316 (2) - NC
04:00:541 (1) - Remove NC
04:01:141 (1) - ^
04:01:516 (6) - NC
04:01:741 (7) - Convert to stream
04:08:566 (1) - Continue stream until 04:08:716, repeat until 04:08:941
04:09:766 (1,2) - Have this be part of stack, note 1 remove NC
04:09:916 (3) - NC
04:11:716 (9) - ^
04:14:116 (5) - ^
04:17:116 (1) - Clean up this slider
04:24:541, 04:24:839 - Remove kiai time
04:27:916 (14) - NC
04:28:366 (1) - Remove NC
04:29:116 (4) - NC
04:29:416 (1) - Remove NC
04:30:016 (1) - ^
04:30:316 (2) - NC
04:30:916 (1) - Remove NC
04:30:916 (1) - Repeat one more time
04:31:141 (2) - Move slider to white tick
04:31:516 (4) - NC
04:31:816 (1) - Remove NC
04:32:416 (1) - ^
04:32:716 (2) - NC
04:36:316 (3) - ^
04:37:516 (2) - Convert to stream ending at 04:38:716
04:38:716 - Add kiai time
04:42:166 (1) - Move to white tick
04:47:716 (9) - Continue stream
04:48:616 (3) - Move slider by one white tick
04:54:316 (7) - NC
04:54:616 (1) - Remove NC
05:00:316 (1) - Make sure repeating arrows are visible
05:06:316 (7) - NC
05:13:516 (9) - ^
05:19:516 (15) - Clean up this slider
Other Comments
Hit additions can be used more wisely; finish hit addition can be added at 01:07:516 (1) but unneeded at 01:32:716 (1).
Inappropriate and missing hit additions exist throughout the map. Listen to the song a few times if needed and fix hit additions
Good luck on getting this map approved!
Inappropriate and missing hit additions exist throughout the map. Listen to the song a few times if needed and fix hit additions
Good luck on getting this map approved!